基础写作-人物介绍

二、人物简介写作常用的词组及句子： 1. Birthday and birth place: ……was/ were born in …on… 她与1867年12月7日出生与波兰。 eg. She was born in Poland on Nov.7,1867.
2. Family background ……was/ were born in/into a poor/ rich family his/her family was so poor that… his/ her father was very strict with him… the son of a poor family when he was a small boy/ young as a child/ as a boy of 15 during his/ her childhood spend his childhood in… live a happy/ hard life
• In my opinion , parents can play a very important role not only in children „s life but also in their education. If the parents are strict, their children will surely take their study more seriously. If a child is often encouraged by his parents, he will certainly be more confident. • Take myself as an example, when I was in Junior 1, I did very badly in an English exam and I felt very sad. I thought I wasn‟t able to learn English well. After my mother learnt about it, she told me to be patient. She said she believed I could do better if I worked harder and was more careful the next time. Her comfort and encouragement was of great help to me and now I do much better at English.
win (won) a gold /silver/ bronze medal
be selected to/ become a member of…
study hard
train hard
go through hardship
overcome many difficulties
have a gift/ talent for language, etc
【实例剖析：】
【写作分析】通过认真审题，根据记叙文对写 人的要求可以确定如下写作要点： 文体：记叙文 人称: 根据内容可确定本文人称为第 人称 要点： 时态：
【实例剖析：】
短语及句型： be born in, Join the Chinese Air Force be sent into space Shenzhou V spacecraft Land safely China‟s national flag United Nations‟ flag
5.Evaluation
one of the best/ most important … set a good example for… a model teacher/worker be respected by everyone speak/ think highly of… be honored as (an excellent athlete) His hard work brought him great success. He is the pride of China. His heroic story spread all over the city.
3. Education background
be admitted to …college graduate from…department of …university when at college, he majored in… receive a doctor’s degree go abroad for further studies
make up one’s mind to do sth.
do sth with great determination and perseverance
be strict in sth.
have a …way of doing sth
try one’s best to do sth. encourage sb to do fight for, give up one’s life for sb/sth win a prize/the first prize in …competition
【实例剖析：】
【写作分析】通过认真审题，根据记叙 文对写人的要求可以确定如下写作要点： 文体：记叙文 人称: 根据内容可确定 本文人称为第一人称 要点：李华的出生年月 及地点；学历；所学主 要课程；特长；获奖情 况；业余爱好。
【实例剖析：】
短语及句型： be born in, after that, bຫໍສະໝຸດ Baidu good at/ do well in, graduate, the main subjects, win first prize, enjoy doing
• 亚伯拉罕.林肯，一个贫穷家庭的孩子， 与1809年2月12日出生与Kentucky。 • eg. Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12,1809. • 查理.狄更斯出生贫穷，只受很少的教育。 • Born of a poor clerk‟s family, Charles Dickens had little schooling.
1). 属于记叙文体裁 2). 基本类型：记人，叙事，写景
3). 常见高考书面表达题：介绍同学，朋友， 老师，父母，名人等等
4). 记叙方法：顺叙，倒叙，插叙
5). 注意事项：选材代表性；精炼，感人， 不拖泥带水；注意5W1H；人称时态。 6). 常见段落结构：主题句－发展句－结论句
•一、人物简介的写作步骤： •1． Birthday and birth place •2． Family background •3． Education background •4． Big events in his or her life • (in order of time) •5． Evaluation
【基础写作实例剖析：】
你是李华，申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英 语写一篇短文（只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容），介绍 自己的基本情况。短文应包括下表所列全部内容。
姓名 李华 出生年月 1977年2月
出生地
学历
辽宁大连 1984——1990 光明小学 1990——1996 大连市第六中学
所学主要课程 语文、数学、英语、物理、化学、电脑 特长 业余爱好 英语、电脑（去年在全校电脑竞赛中获第一 名） 游泳、滑冰、集邮、流行音乐
• 请根据表格中所提供的信息， 写一篇介 绍中国第一位航天英雄杨利伟的短文。
姓名 飞行 情况 杨利 出生 1965 出生 辽宁省 伟 时间 年 地 1. 1987年加入中国空军 2. 经过5年时间的训练，他于2003年10月 15日9时乘坐神州5号飞船进入太空， 环绕地球飞行14圈，在太空中度过了 约21小时，于次日成功返回地面。 3. 在太空中他记录下了他看到的一切， 并向电视机前的观众展示了中国国旗 和联合国的旗帜。
6. 描写人物外貌和性格特征 good-looking funny-looking ugly-looking ordinary-looking white-haired warm-hearted kind-hearted absent-minded bad-tempered near-sighted far-sighted a strong will tall short pretty naughty smart wise bright diligent lazy healthy humorous charming （迷人的） attractive talkative confidence independent patience
4. Big events in one’s life
be interested in… /be fond of… work hard at… serve as… devote his lifetime/himself to…
concentrate himself to…
do research about/ into…
报纸32期基础写作
• Yangliwei , born in Liaoning Province in 1965, became a pilot in the Chinese Air Force in 1987. After 5 years of training , he was sent into space at 9 am on October 15th in 2003 by China‟s Shenzhou V spacecraft , which orbited the earth 14 times. After about 21 hours in space, he landed safely the next day. In space Yang recorded everything he saw. He showed Chinese national flag and the United Nations‟ flag to the people watching on TV at home.
receive/obtain/win the Nobel Prize for…
be good at… do well in… be crazy about… enjoy …
make rapid progress in … set a new world record of … equal the world record
32 期报纸读写任务
• This passage mainly tells us the important role parents plays in their children‟s education. Parents should always encourage their children and help them learn something from failure.
5.Evaluation
make great contributions to… Consistency/Perseverance is the key to success. be famous/known as be regarded as become a world champion at …Championships （锦标赛） remember sb forever A new chapter of history has been turned Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit. an inspiring leader