高考英语短文改错公开课优质获奖课件
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高中英语短文改错讲解省名师优质课赛课获奖课件市赛课一等奖课件
一、动词形
1.动词旳时态和语态错误. 2. 主、谓不一致旳错误。 3. 非谓语动词旳正确使用
高考链接１：
When the air move, we have wind.
moves
1.Water pollution often bring on disease.
brings
2.So far, he made a living by picking up
短文改错： 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换修改作文，请你
修改同桌写 旳一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句 中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一种单词旳增长、删除或 修改。 增长：在缺词处加一种漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出
该加旳词。 删减：把多出旳词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后旳
1.Though it was cold, but he went out without a cat.
2.Whatever you do, and I’ll be right here waiting for you.
3.This kind of car costs a lot of money, and
高中英语短文改错
How to do Proof-reading
考查目标
1）辨认错误 并正确校正语篇旳能力 2）综合利用英语知识旳能力 3）精确了解语篇，掌握内容及行文逻 辑旳能力
解题环节
1.(浏览全文，掌握大意）
2.（分句阅读，逐行找错） 3.（检验核对，攻克难点）
高考短文改错旳考察方式
Unnecessary 1. I can go to home now. word
1.通读短文，掌握大意 2.细读全文，逐一作答 3.复读全文，验证答案
高考英语专题总结短文改错省名师优质课赛课获奖课件市赛课一等奖课件
had
【2023浙江】
➢ She knows what had happened, but she thanked
me ... knew
【2023全国卷1 】 ➢ However, my father had to return to work on
Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. 【2023辽宁】 flew ➢ In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports
年份
词
词 词词
07全国I卷 1 1 2 0 1 2 1 1
08全国I卷 4
1
1
0
0 1 02
09宁夏海南 4
0
1
1
0 1 11
10课标全国 2 2 1 1 0 0 1 2
11课标全国 3
2
1
1
1 1 11
合计
14 6 6 3 2 5 4 7
A Limerick（五行打油诗）
代词格，细领悟 句子成份多分析 冠词连词常光顾 逻辑错误须关注
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2、只允许修改10处，多者（丛第11处起）不计分。
Problems
纵观近年高考英语短文改错题，学生和老师都以为 难度不大，然而，每年高考中还是有不少考生对此题深 感头痛，主要原因是： 考生旳英语基础知识不扎实. 考生缺乏对短文改错命题 特点旳了解和做题规律措
动词形，名词数 还要注意形和副 非谓语，细辨别 介词短语要牢记
短文改错经典错词类型分析归纳
动词形
错误主要集中在动词旳时态、语态，主谓一致等方面。
【2023安徽卷】
高中英语短文改错省公开课获奖课件市赛课比赛一等奖课件
word
1. I can go to home now.
Missing word 2. I like playing∧ piano. the
Wrong word 3. I am fond at English. of
四、 代词格，细领悟
1. 人称代词，物主代词,反身代词旳使用． 2. 代词指代旳人或事物前后不一致旳错误. 3. it作形主、形宾或指代时有缺漏 (make, find,
parents∧singing
and _d_a__n_c__e_ happily. § dancing
动词形
were
Practice makes perfect!
Homework
My father and I am taking a camping trip in July and August. We will travel for about two months but will tour the United States and parts of the Canada. We have decided to camp because it does not spend as much as vacationing in hotel, but we had to plan carefully. I think the car what we are going to drive is very small, so we decide to take only one small suitcase for both of them and as few camping things as possibly. We will take some medicine with us prevent insects from hurting us, and also some food for picnics. I'm
高考改错省公开课获奖课件说课比赛一等奖课件
动词形
a big one. It was almost as _t_a_l_l_e__r as the room!
3.__ta__ll_
还要注意形和副
They put _t_h_e__m__ in the corner of the sitting
2023年安徽卷 : She looked at me and started to laugh. “How are you laughing?” I asked.
2010全国Ⅰ：So if they had said was true, I would have a chance of winning the prize .
at the meeting.
what
八、逻辑错误须关注
与句子旳上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属 于逻辑性错误，如称谓上旳张冠李戴。
2023全国Ⅱ Before her leaving, I prepared a gift to
show my best whishes to him. her
2023四川卷 She passed her driving test and told her husband that，to release，he
2023高考英语短文改错模拟训练 _A__t_ Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
1._O__n__ 介词短语经常考，习常使用方法要 记住
father to choose a Christmas tree. They _c_h__o_o__s_e_
2._c_h_o_s_e
with them.
spend
2023辽宁 Her hair was black and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a
高考英语短文改错省公开课金奖全国赛课一等奖微课获奖PPT课件
However
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应试策略小结
1、步骤：1）. 通读全文, 了解文章.
2）. 先易后难, 找出明错. 3）. 对照考点, 深入审读.
2、标准：尊重原文；实词变形；虚词删增换. 3、提醒：标点符号不改；大小写不改；次
序错误不改；单词无拼写错误.
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My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other
主要考查介词短语和习惯使用方法搭 配。 高考链接 5：
1. I saw him enter into the classroom.
2. She isn’t going to marry with him.
3. Stop talking and concentrate your work.
on
4.（年 全国卷I）Luckily I had all my money on my pocket.
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高分突破
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怎样突破高分瓶颈
短文改错错误类型即使各种多样， 不过归纳起来主要有以下十个方面：
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Part1:词法和逻辑错误:
一、动词形
高考链接１
1.动词时态和语态错误. 2. 主、谓不一致错误。 3.非谓语动词误用
1.We were driving in the country when the car stop
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写 以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅包括一个 单词增加、删除 或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾)，并在其下面写出该加词。 删除：把多出词用斜线〔\〕划掉。 修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多 者（从第11处起）不计分。
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应试策略小结
1、步骤：1）. 通读全文, 了解文章.
2）. 先易后难, 找出明错. 3）. 对照考点, 深入审读.
2、标准：尊重原文；实词变形；虚词删增换. 3、提醒：标点符号不改；大小写不改；次
序错误不改；单词无拼写错误.
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My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other
主要考查介词短语和习惯使用方法搭 配。 高考链接 5：
1. I saw him enter into the classroom.
2. She isn’t going to marry with him.
3. Stop talking and concentrate your work.
on
4.（年 全国卷I）Luckily I had all my money on my pocket.
14/40
高分突破
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怎样突破高分瓶颈
短文改错错误类型即使各种多样， 不过归纳起来主要有以下十个方面：
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Part1:词法和逻辑错误:
一、动词形
高考链接１
1.动词时态和语态错误. 2. 主、谓不一致错误。 3.非谓语动词误用
1.We were driving in the country when the car stop
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写 以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅包括一个 单词增加、删除 或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾)，并在其下面写出该加词。 删除：把多出词用斜线〔\〕划掉。 修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多 者（从第11处起）不计分。
高考短文改错专题复习市公开课一等奖省赛课微课金奖课件
(1) 短文中时态使用前后不一致 . (2) 在特定语境条件下时态误用(如含有状
语从句复合句中，主句用未来时态，而 从句中则用普通现在时态) . (3) 主动语态和被动语态混用
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[处理方案]
(1) 通读全文，搞清文中动词时态主旋律 . (2) 结合语境，灵活利用时态形式 . (3) 认真推敲，准确把握主动与被 动.
第16页
This passage is about_C_____
A. My life in the high school. B. My father bought a bike for me. C. How proud I could earn half of the money to buy my own bike in the high school.
和传统短文改错相比，新课标短文改错每行
可能有两个错误。二是因为设错内容多为考 生在日常进行语言操演时常犯错误。比如：
写作中用到关键词，语言学习中负迁移现象， 轻易忽略虚词、小品词等。做好短文改错题 应重视以下技巧：
第7页
应试点睛
1．“规范性”标准：要严格按照示范要求符 号改错。要记住“——”、“∧”、“\”分 别表示错词纠正、缺词填补、多词删除。切忌 用文字说明或用箭头表示。
第9页
第10页
1．通读全文，掌握大意。
短文改错不一样于单句改错，它包括行文逻辑及句子 与句子间必要联络错误。单独看可能是正确，但从整 体看却有可能上下文不符。做短文改错时应该树立整 体意识，应从短文整体入手。短文改错实际上间接地 考查学生文意了解和纠错能力，所以考生必须在阅读 而且在了解了文章基础上去发觉并更正错误。所以， 事先应该快速粗读一遍短文，留心文中关键词句，把 握文章大意及上下文之间联络，为下一步判断和改错 奠定基础。
语从句复合句中，主句用未来时态，而 从句中则用普通现在时态) . (3) 主动语态和被动语态混用
第24页
[处理方案]
(1) 通读全文，搞清文中动词时态主旋律 . (2) 结合语境，灵活利用时态形式 . (3) 认真推敲，准确把握主动与被 动.
第16页
This passage is about_C_____
A. My life in the high school. B. My father bought a bike for me. C. How proud I could earn half of the money to buy my own bike in the high school.
和传统短文改错相比，新课标短文改错每行
可能有两个错误。二是因为设错内容多为考 生在日常进行语言操演时常犯错误。比如：
写作中用到关键词，语言学习中负迁移现象， 轻易忽略虚词、小品词等。做好短文改错题 应重视以下技巧：
第7页
应试点睛
1．“规范性”标准：要严格按照示范要求符 号改错。要记住“——”、“∧”、“\”分 别表示错词纠正、缺词填补、多词删除。切忌 用文字说明或用箭头表示。
第9页
第10页
1．通读全文，掌握大意。
短文改错不一样于单句改错，它包括行文逻辑及句子 与句子间必要联络错误。单独看可能是正确，但从整 体看却有可能上下文不符。做短文改错时应该树立整 体意识，应从短文整体入手。短文改错实际上间接地 考查学生文意了解和纠错能力，所以考生必须在阅读 而且在了解了文章基础上去发觉并更正错误。所以， 事先应该快速粗读一遍短文，留心文中关键词句，把 握文章大意及上下文之间联络，为下一步判断和改错 奠定基础。
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1,6,7,8；非谓2,4,7)
1.动词的时态和语态错误.
1.You can sit at the desk and read the daily newspapers, magazines and the other books, but you are not permit to take them out.
Walking
7.Seen from the moon, our earth, with water ccoovveerriendgseventy percent of its surface, appears as a “blue ball”.
More practice
4.There will have an English film in the school hall tonigbhte.
wishes
8.As is known to us all, remembering English words are not easy.
is
I. 动词形 (P2-3, 谓语1,6,7,8；非谓2,4,7)
3. 非谓语 错误
极常考！有v-ing, v-ed, to do 的错误。
2. I'll let you to know as soon as I hear from her. 4.Walk quickly is difficult for an old man.
More practice
1.In those days we were forced work twelve hours
a day.
to
3.The boy went over at once, opened his umbrella
for the grandpa.
opening
5.The film is very interesting. It is worth see twice. seeing
短文改错
"四不改"
1. 单词拼写 2. 大小写 3. 单词词序 4. 标点符号
2010-2015高考 改错考点分布统计表
动 名 形介代 连 冠 项目 词 词 副 词 词 词 词
年份
2011 3 2 2 1 0 1 1 2012 4 2 1 1 2 0 0 2013 2 1 2 1 1 2 1 2014 1 1 6 1 0 0 1 2015 3 1 2 1 1 1 1 趋势 2+/- 1+ 2+ 1 1+/- 1+/- 1/-
实词与虚词 Content words and function words
实词是指有实在意义， 能独立承担句子成分 的词，包括名词、代 词、形容词、副词、 动词和数词。而且还 有一个重要的特点， 那就是，实词有词形 的变化，尤其是动词， 可谓变化多端
1、名词(n.) 2、代词(pron.) 3、形容词(adj.) 4、数词(num.) 5、动词(v.). 6、副词(adv.)
虚词
虚词没有实在意义，不能独立承担句子成分，包括冠词、 介词、连词和感叹词:而且还有一个重要的特点，那就是， 虚词没有词形的变化。
【 咬文嚼字(20151218 月4 例文)】 During the English Festival in November 12nd, our school was held a debate with the theme: should adolescents block their parents in WeChat Moments? Some agree the idea, while other disagree it. The supporters say it can protect our own privacies. What’s more, block parents in WeChat Moments help us express our feelings more freely. But those who against the idea say that parents have the right to more know more about their child. Besides, WeChat Moments provides a effective channel for improve parent-child communications. The activity gave us the opportunity to deeply think about our relationship with our parent and how to
5.He was ill and his parents suggested that he had
a medical examination.
have
11.Not only the students but also the teacher like
the film.
likes
12.When everything ready, the party began. was
6.Look, some of my classmates are practising speak English over there. speaking
permitted
6. Please let me know if you will have any trouble.
I. 动词形 (P2-3, 谓语1,6,7,8；非谓2,4,7) 2. 主、谓不一致的错误.
7. Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish.
口诀
动词形，名词数， 区分形和副； 介词看搭配， 代词人称数； 逻辑偶尔有， 连冠常光顾。
实词：名、动、形、副 (变形) 虚词：介、代、连、冠、系/助动词 (添、改、删)
短文改错设错的基本原则
短文改错题设错为：多一个词(约1题)、少一个词(约1题)、错一个词(约8题)。
短文改错题设错为： 多一个词(1题)（虚词） 少一个词(1题) （虚词） 错一个词(8题) 添加和删除的词通常是虚词
1.动词的时态和语态错误.
1.You can sit at the desk and read the daily newspapers, magazines and the other books, but you are not permit to take them out.
Walking
7.Seen from the moon, our earth, with water ccoovveerriendgseventy percent of its surface, appears as a “blue ball”.
More practice
4.There will have an English film in the school hall tonigbhte.
wishes
8.As is known to us all, remembering English words are not easy.
is
I. 动词形 (P2-3, 谓语1,6,7,8；非谓2,4,7)
3. 非谓语 错误
极常考！有v-ing, v-ed, to do 的错误。
2. I'll let you to know as soon as I hear from her. 4.Walk quickly is difficult for an old man.
More practice
1.In those days we were forced work twelve hours
a day.
to
3.The boy went over at once, opened his umbrella
for the grandpa.
opening
5.The film is very interesting. It is worth see twice. seeing
短文改错
"四不改"
1. 单词拼写 2. 大小写 3. 单词词序 4. 标点符号
2010-2015高考 改错考点分布统计表
动 名 形介代 连 冠 项目 词 词 副 词 词 词 词
年份
2011 3 2 2 1 0 1 1 2012 4 2 1 1 2 0 0 2013 2 1 2 1 1 2 1 2014 1 1 6 1 0 0 1 2015 3 1 2 1 1 1 1 趋势 2+/- 1+ 2+ 1 1+/- 1+/- 1/-
实词与虚词 Content words and function words
实词是指有实在意义， 能独立承担句子成分 的词，包括名词、代 词、形容词、副词、 动词和数词。而且还 有一个重要的特点， 那就是，实词有词形 的变化，尤其是动词， 可谓变化多端
1、名词(n.) 2、代词(pron.) 3、形容词(adj.) 4、数词(num.) 5、动词(v.). 6、副词(adv.)
虚词
虚词没有实在意义，不能独立承担句子成分，包括冠词、 介词、连词和感叹词:而且还有一个重要的特点，那就是， 虚词没有词形的变化。
【 咬文嚼字(20151218 月4 例文)】 During the English Festival in November 12nd, our school was held a debate with the theme: should adolescents block their parents in WeChat Moments? Some agree the idea, while other disagree it. The supporters say it can protect our own privacies. What’s more, block parents in WeChat Moments help us express our feelings more freely. But those who against the idea say that parents have the right to more know more about their child. Besides, WeChat Moments provides a effective channel for improve parent-child communications. The activity gave us the opportunity to deeply think about our relationship with our parent and how to
5.He was ill and his parents suggested that he had
a medical examination.
have
11.Not only the students but also the teacher like
the film.
likes
12.When everything ready, the party began. was
6.Look, some of my classmates are practising speak English over there. speaking
permitted
6. Please let me know if you will have any trouble.
I. 动词形 (P2-3, 谓语1,6,7,8；非谓2,4,7) 2. 主、谓不一致的错误.
7. Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish.
口诀
动词形，名词数， 区分形和副； 介词看搭配， 代词人称数； 逻辑偶尔有， 连冠常光顾。
实词：名、动、形、副 (变形) 虚词：介、代、连、冠、系/助动词 (添、改、删)
短文改错设错的基本原则
短文改错题设错为：多一个词(约1题)、少一个词(约1题)、错一个词(约8题)。
短文改错题设错为： 多一个词(1题)（虚词） 少一个词(1题) （虚词） 错一个词(8题) 添加和删除的词通常是虚词