2019高考冲刺应用文改错二 口语 书面语
2019高考英语改错2
How to keep mental health As we know, mental health links to our happiness index. However, it’s vital to keep our mental health. Here are some advice on how to do it. Firstly, accept yourself true. Knowing your own potentials and making practical goal instead of setting high expectations can keep yourself away from heavy burden, thus enjoy good mental health. Secondly, be friendly and sociable. Life with friends is miserable. So make friends. It’s their comfort and support which help you go through hardship in life. Lastly, commit yourself to your career. Your efforts bring you a sense of achievement, which will in turn ensure your happiness. In a brief, it pays to focus our attention on our mental health. The more, the best!
Alibaba founder Jack Ma, his company has been valued at morethan $ 221 billion of which Ma owned 6%, is put in the top position amongChina’s wealthiest. But he stays outside the list of the world’s 10 richpeople. Fought against a hard life, young Ma still managed to learn English well enough to gain a degree and became a teacher. Afterwards hestarted a translation agency in which took him to the US, where he introducedto the Internet. His fate was bound to change before he was accidentally appointed to take an American visitor Jerry Yang, a co-founder of Yahoo, in atour of the Great Wall. The meeting obvious proved to be a turning point forall of them, promoting the birth of Alibaba and later cooperation with JerryYang.
高考英语短文改错2(2019年11月)
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高考英语真题 2019年全国卷2 改错与写作(含答案)
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2.文档板式：中文字体是宋体五号；英文是Times New Roman 小四。
页眉有内容提要，页脚有页码。
3. 全国II卷适用地区：甘肃、青海、黑龙江、吉林、辽宁、宁夏、新疆、内蒙古、陕西、重庆2019年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（全国卷II）英语改错作文（含答案）第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do.First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.第二节书面表达（满分25分）假定你是校排球队队长李华。
高考语文应用文改错题大全
高考语文应用文改错题大全应用性是《全国高考评价体系》提出来的新要求，也是近年高考选材和命题的一个显著趋势。
语文学科，对于语言表达的应用，最直接的考查方式就是应用文的改错。
1.招领启事【典例】下面这则应用文有五处表述不当，请找出并作修改。
【答案】①“通知”改为“启事”。
②去掉“各位同学们”中的“各位”或“们”。
③去掉红色。
④“伍拾圆”改为“若干”。
⑤去掉“，本人十分感谢！”。
【解析】①“通知”是通知事项的文书或口信，一般用来发布公文等，此处是个人向公众说明情况的文件，应用“启事”。
②“各位”和“们”不能同时使用。
③招领启事不能具体细致地写出物品的内容，钱夹的颜色不应该写出来。
④人民币的具体数量不应该写出来。
⑤写“招领启事”的人并不是丢失物品的人，所以不应该写“本人十分感谢”。
2.请假条【典例】清明节来到之前，鲁班扬必须随父母回老家祭祖。
下面是鲁班扬写给老师的请假条，其中有五处不当，请找出并作修改。
请假条尊敬的王老师：清明节是我国乃至全世界的传统节日，是祭祖和扫墓的日子。
为继承传统、祭祀先人，令尊决定带家人回乡下老家扫墓。
特向您请假，恳请老师批准。
敬礼！请假人：鲁班扬2019年4月2日【答案】①“尊敬的王老师：”顶格；②删除“乃至全世界”；③“令尊”改为“家父”或“我的父亲”；④添加请假的具体时间；⑤删除“敬礼！”。
【解析】请假条一般分为请病假和请事假两种。
请假条必须包含的内容有请假受理人（或部门）、请假事由、请假具体时间、请假人、请假日期，要求实事求是，不夸张。
①“尊敬的王老师：”格式错误；②“乃至全世界”夸大其词；③“令尊”，敬辞，称对方的父亲，使用错误；④缺少请假的具体时间；⑤请假条一般不需要祝颂语。
3.招聘启事【典例】为庆祝建校80周年，学校“梦笔生花”文学社决定扩版，需招聘文字编辑若干人。
下面是招聘的相关文字，其中在公文格式、文字表达和语体上共有五处不妥当，请指出并改正。
招聘启示“梦笔生花”是我校的文学社团，曾荣获市“十佳文学社团”称号，出于文学社社刊《梦笔生花》扩版的需要，现从全校同学中诚聘5名文字编辑。
2019高考英语改错2带答案
I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term. The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people.From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.【答案】I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term.confidence a The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, Iannuallywas responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. 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I’m written to tell you my opinion about employing a foreign language teacher.They are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the sense of humor is necessary for a teacher, who makes his class interesting and lively. For another, ensure efficiency in teaching and learning, the foreigner’s ability to speak Chinese matters much, so only with the help of Chinese can they communicate with each other smoothly.Various of activities out of class, such as English Evening and English Corner, should be organized by the foreign language teacher, which brings the students more chances to communicate with the teacher and improve his oral English.【答案】Dear Mr. Li,I’m Wang Tao. I’m written to tell you my opinion about employing a foreign language teacher.writing opinionsThey are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the sense of humor is necessary for a teacher,There consideration onewho makes his class interesting and lively. 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Besides, I'd like you to correct the mistakes what are found in the materials and format.I would appreciate it that if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to you reply.Yours,Li Hua Dear Ms Jenkins,I'm Li Hua. I plan to take ∧part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday.I hadahavealready filled in the application form and have my resume ready for it. But I am not sure about the words and format. However, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advices. Would you please spare someTherefore advicetime to read through the materials attaching? Would you mind find out the mistakes in terms for words andattached finding of format? Besides, I'd like you to correct the mistakes what are found in the materials and format.that或whichI would appreciate it that if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to you reply.yourYours,Li Hua The sun was just slowly come up over the mountains today as I took my dogs for its morning walk. I smiled as I watched the clouds gradually turn to white and gold. The air was cool and I wore a big smile in my face. Even though there weren’t leaf on the trees, b ut I could still hear birds singing songs of spring. Even my dogs seemed to notice the different in the air. They were playing instead of just do their morning business in the grass. The particular golden sun seemed to make it a beautiful day. As I headed back, I realize something. The beauty of day didn’t come from the warmth of the sun. It came from the warmth within my own heart and soul.71. come改为coming72. its改为their73. in改为on74. leaf改为leaves75.去掉but 或but改为yet76. different改为difference(s)77. do改为doing78. particular改为particularly79. realize改为realized80. 在day前加theFor 65 years, Mr Li has been walk around our neighborhood twice the day. It’s a part of his daily exercise routine. He is a retiring biology teacher. As Mr Li gets older and older, he has to rest several time along his route. Therefore, he still gets up early and sticks his routine. The neighbors have noticed his stops. We place different chairs along our route and invite him to sit and took a rest. Now, the mile-long route is spotted with chairs. When we see Mr Li to go by, we realize we should also get out but have a walk.For 65 years, Mr Li has been around our neighborhood twice day. It s a part of his daily exercise routine. He is a biology teacher. As Mr Li gets older and older, he has to restseveral along his route. , he still gets up early and sticks his routine. Theneighbors have noticed his stops.We place different chairs along route and invite him to sit anda rest. Now, the mile-long route is spotted with chairs. When we see Mr Li to go by, we realize weshould also get out have a walk.Alibaba founder Jack Ma, his company has been valued at morethan $ 221 billion of which Ma owned 6%, is put in the top position amongChina’s wealthi est. But he stays outside the list of the world’s 10 richpeople.Fought against a hard life, young Ma still managed to learn English well enough to gain a degree and became a teacher. Afterwards hestarted a translation agency in which took him to the US, where he introducedto the Internet. His fate was bound to change before he was accidentally appointed to take an American visitor Jerry Yang, a co-founder of Yahoo, in atour of the Great Wall. The meeting obvious proved to be a turning point forall of them, promoting the birth of Alibaba and later cooperation with JerryYang.71..his→whose；owned→owns；rich→richest；fought→fighting；去掉in；he和introduced 之间加上was；before→when/after；in→ on；obviously→obvious；all→ bothLast week I noticed Jack coughing on our math class. See this, I offered to take him to a clinic. There the doctor asked Jack how he had coughed sometimes for long time. Jack nodded his head immediate. The doctor then wrote a prescription with instruction on how to take the Chinese medicine. When Jack tasted the medicine, he almost brings it up. I comforted him with an old saying “Good medicine for health tastes bitter to the mouth”. Jack managed to swallow them unwillingly. But when he had recovered three days later, he felt amazing at the effect of the Chinese medicine.Last week I noticed Jack coughing on our math class. See this, I offered to take him to a clinic. Therein Seeingthe doctor asked Jack how he had coughed sometimes for long time. Jack nodded his head immediate.if/whether aimmediatelyThe doctor then wrote a prescription with instruction on how to take the Chinese medicine. WhenJackinstructionstasted the medicine, he almost brings it up. I comforted him with an old saying “Good medicine forhealth broughttastes bitter to the mouth”. Jack managed to swallow them unwillingly. But when he had recoveredthreeitdays later, he felt amazing at the effect of the Chinese medicine.amazedIn order to promote participation in outdoors exercise, our school organized an activity to climb Tianlong Mountain on April 10. The majority of my class joined the activity.Early in the morning, having assembled outside the school gate, we head straight to the thickly-forested Tianlong Mountain. We set out for the top in high spirits the moment when we arrived at the foot of the mountain. In a course of the climb, we cooperated with each other to pass the rocky or steep areas. Laughing and cheering, we eventually reached the summit, which we were greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air. Viewing from the top, the city was beautiful. Bathing in the warm sunshine, we entertained us with stories, songs, dances and game.This event was extremely beneficial and we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!短文改错：第一段：第一行：outdoors --- outdoor 第二行：joined后面加in 第二段第一行：head---headed 第三行：去掉when 第三行:In a course of ---In the course of 第五行：which --- where 第六行：Viewing---Viewed第七行：us---ourselves 第七行：game---games第三段第二行are held --- be heldDear Peter,How time flies! It had been almost a year since you left China to Sweden. During your home stay at my home, we had such wonderful time that it seemed as if everything was happened yesterday. I have been long to hear all about you and missing you so much. Fortunate, I wasselected as one of the student representative to pay a visit to your school. The visit will last on July 7th to 20th. And as a super soccer fan, I’d really love to visit our local soccer club.I can’t wait for the day to come where I can see you.1.had--has2. to ----for3. 在such后加a4. 去掉was5. long—longing6. Fortunate---Fortunately7. representative---representatives8. on---from9. our--your 10. where---whenLast week I went to visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Yang. He and I used to living next to each other for many years. About half a year ago, an order came which the old building, along with many other similar ones, were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street. So they had to move apart. Mr. Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park. His apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area. Therefore, Mr. Yang doesn’t seem to worry about the long distance. He says that new subway line will be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.去掉visit后to； living 改为live； which改为that； were改为was；they改为 we； big 改为bigger； took改为takes；Therefore改为However； new前加 a； year改为years。
高考2019高三应用文改错练习教师版
2019届高三二轮复习·应用文改错练习【2018年卷1】下面是某校一则启事初稿的片段，其中有五处不合书面语体的要求，请找出并作修改。
（5分）我校学生宿舍下水道时常堵住。
后勤处认真调查了原因，发现管子陈旧，需要换掉。
学校打算7月15日开始施工。
施工期间正遇上暑假，为安全起见，请全体学生暑假期间不要在校住宿。
望大家配合。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案示例：①“堵住”改为“堵塞”；②“管子”改为“管道”：③“换掉”改为“更换”；④“打算”改为“计划”；⑥“正遇上”改为“正值”。
【2018年卷2】下面是某报社一则启事初稿的片段，其中有五处词语使用不当，请找出并作修改。
要求修改后语意准确，语体风格一致。
如果您是重大事件的参加者，事故现场的目击者，业界内幕的打探者，社会热点的关爱者……请与我报“社会深度”栏目联系，本栏目长期公开征询有价值的新闻线索，等着您的支持。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案①“参加者”改为“亲历者”或者“参与者”；②“打探者”改为“知情者”；③“关爱者”改为“关注者”；④“征询”改为“征集”；⑤“等着”改为“期待”或者“等待”。
2019高考英语二轮复习经典题型16短文改错二 Word版含解析
2019高考英语二轮复习经典题型短文改错（二）1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, the computer technology develops very fast that the Internet has become more and more popular. Some students regarded it as a great helper. Because there has a lot of information on line, so you can surf the Internet for any information you need in a short time without working hard in the library. This is also very convenient to talk with others by using the Internet. Moreover, other students think that there is some information on line which is not good for students. In addition, spend too much time playing games will not only have a bad effect on their studies but also do harm for health. Therefore, we should make properly use of the Internet. It is of great important to separate good plants from wild weeds.2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
(完整word版)2019高考冲刺之应用文改错一
2019年语言得体专题训练一、【概述】所谓“得体”，就是根据内部语境（上下文）和外部语境（语言交际的各种情境条件，如：时间、地点、场合、对象、目的、话题、使用语言流露出的情感色彩等）第—，恰当利用词语的感情色彩。
现代汉语中不少词语的褒贬色彩很浓，利用得好，不但语言得体，还能产生极好的表达效果。
有时还可以故意改变词语的褒贬色彩。
第二，正确使用书面用语和口语。
书面用语比较庄重正规，口语比较平和亲近，它们不分孰优孰劣，只是应当使用在不同的地方。
第三，正确使用敬辞和谦辞。
对上级、长辈等应当使用敬辞，把敬辞用在自己身上就很可笑；谦辞要用在自己身上，把谦辞用在对方身上，就显得不尊重对方。
第四，正确选用传达话语的手段。
要根据不同的表达目的选用不用的传达话语的手段。
第五，根据场合、对象准确遣词造句。
二、综合演练1.（株洲市2019届高三教学质检测）下面是某节目组一则致歉声明的片段，其中有五处词语使用不当，请找出来并作修改。
要求修改后语意准确、语体风格一致。
第二期节目因为剪辑失败，使得其中一个片段引起了观众的曲解，节目组已第一时间作了修正，并发表致歉声明，恳请广大观众的认可，也希望大众不要再对该片段进行散布。
以后我们将不忘初心，严肃剪辑，认真审核，给广大观众带来优秀的节目。
（1）将修改为__________ ；（2）将修改为；（3）将修改为__________ ；（4）将修改为；（5）将修改为__________ ；2.（安徽省皖江名校联盟2019届高三12月联考）下面文字有五处关联词或实词使用不当，请指出并改正，使文段语言表达准确。
（5分）虽然基础教育的任务仅仅是教会学生应对考试以升入高一级学校，那就无所谓“基础”，真正的教育也就没有发生。
学生成了考试机器，没有问题意识，缺乏批判思维，不关心社会，进而不思考自己的明天，这种“教育”，即使有社会风气支撑，教育者也不能认同。
背离常识的教育是“反教育”，目前最令人堪忧的是反常的“教育”变得堂而皇之。
高考语文应用文改错题汇编(共25题,附答案)
高考语文应用文改错题汇编（共25题，附答案）语文匠曰：应用文改错主要错误在于谦辞敬辞、口语书面语转换、应用文格式这3大方面，此外也有部分涉及语病（如搭配不当）。
教师要手把手带领学生各个击破。
1．下面是南山XX中学学生刘林写给《语文报》编辑部的投稿信，其中有五处表达存在不得体的情况，请你找出来并进行修改。
《语文报》编辑部：我是南山XX中学学生刘林，是一位酷爱写作的妹仔。
久闻你刊大名，决定投稿。
现奉上大作《蒙茶飘香》一篇，敬请拜读。
还望务必拨冗回示为谢!此致敬礼!刘林2018年2月11日2．下面一则文稿在表达上有几处不妥当，请任意找出四处并改正。
某中学70周年校庆公告南依历山，东临趵泉，弦歌不辍，薪火相传。
2018年10月18日，山东省实验中学将迎来建校七十周年华诞。
作为齐鲁基础教育的一面旗帜，学校坚持实验性、示范性，在齐鲁文化的深厚滋养中，广育英才，名盛华夏。
为办好此次校庆活动，特面向各届校友，征集在校期间惠存的校徽、校服、奖章、笔记和具有纪念意义的物品。
并藉此向您们发出诚挚邀请：欢迎拨冗光临此次盛会，共商实验发展大计。
特此公告，敬祈传达。
某中学2018年6月1日3．下面是承德中学文学社社长给该校校长写的一封信，其中有五处在表达上不妥当，请找出来并改正。
尊敬的程校长：您好!我是敝校星云文学社的社长，我社想出版一本名为《放飞梦想》的书。
这本书收录了我社同学的102篇大作，是我们文学社成员智慧的结晶。
请您抽出时间拜读，为这本书写一篇序言。
您是著名的教育家，能得到您的鼎力相助，我社一定会蓬荜生辉。
希望您能同意，在此敬谢不敏!祝您工作顺利!承德中学星云文学社2018年5月6日4．下面是一封推荐信，其中有几处语言表达不得体，请找出来并加以修改。
推荐信××大学招生办：兹有我校高三(一)班阳光同学，拟参加你校自主招生考试。
该生学习成绩显著，综合素质优良。
一直荣任我校晨曦文学社社长，热爱文学，爱好写作，曾在全国新概念作文大赛中获得一等奖，并有多篇大作发表在省级以上文学刊物上。
高考语用应用文改错精编版
高考语用应用文改错公司内部编号：（GOOD-TMMT-MMUT-UUPTY-UUYY-DTTI-应用文改错练习1. 刘雪数学成绩不好，数学课代表李兰很着急，想帮帮她。
下面是他们之间的对话，请指出对话中四处不得体的地方并加以改正。
李兰：刘雪同学，这次考试数学题并不难，但你的成绩却不是很理想啊。
刘雪：我数学基础不好，成绩总是提不上去。
李兰：我是数学课代表，以后就指教你吧。
刘雪：那多不好，会耽误你的学习的。
李兰：没关系，从下周开始，有什么不懂的，你都可以来咨询我，我一定会不吝赐教的。
刘雪：那我就先谢谢你了，以后我会不耻下问的。
答案：指教改帮助。
咨询（询问，征求，对象一般为机关单位，企业）改问。
不吝赐教（客套话，用于请教别人时，不能用于自己）改不遗余力不耻下问改经常问你2.下面你是一位父亲给正在上高三的儿子的一封信，其中有三处不得体，请找出并加以修改。
亲爱的儿子：你好！高考在即，只剩下一百天的时间了！此时此刻，爸爸的心情和你一样难以平静。
十二年磨剑，百日见分晓。
你即将走向人生的又一个重要赛场，预祝你冲刺百日，马到成功！在这里，一并奉上你妈妈的祝福。
我们相信，你一定能忝列北大新生的队伍中！希望你好好配合老师，不耻下问。
当你金榜题名时，老师们会翻到非常欣慰的！答案：1.奉上（下对上）改送上 2.忝改为站在（忝列谦辞，表示辱没他人，心中有愧） 3 不耻下问改多多请教3.下面这段文字有5处用词不当，请指出并改正，使文段语言简明、得体。
新年将要莅临。
在这辞旧迎新之际的时候，编辑部格外热闹。
不少读者通过热线电话迎来了感人的祝福，也有读者寄来了贺卡，写下了如火的诗句。
编辑部全体成员感同身受，在此，发自肺腑衷心地感谢各位朋友；同时，还想惠赠各位朋友一份新年礼物，这就是编辑部办好刊物的三条承诺：全方位扫描，零距离贴近，无障碍阅读。
答案：莅临改来临 2.之际的时候保留一个 3.感同身受改为十分感激 4.发自肺腑与衷心保留一个 5 惠赠改回赠4.下面是一则征稿启事，在语言表达上有三处不得体的地方，请指出并加以修改。
2019高考冲刺应用文改错二 口语 书面语
2019年语言得体专题训练口语句式的特点是比较短小，结构也简单，少用关联词语，它的修辞作用主要是活泼、自然；用语大多是通俗的口语词组。
书面句式的特点是多用长句，结构较复杂，关联词语用得较多，有时沿用一些文言句式，它的修辞作用主要是严谨、周密；用语大多是文雅的书面语词组。
一．请找出下面用的不得体的口语词，分析其特点后修改。
1.现在，让我们怀着激动的心情，登上台阶，瞧一瞧长城的风采吧！（导游解说词）2.因业务大了，原有地方狭小，咱们公司自即日起搬迁到凤凰路72号。
新址位于县二中东侧500米处，欢迎新老客户上门。
询问电话：8321560。
（一家快递公司搬迁新址通告初稿的片段）3.拜读您的大作之后，后学就您所论述的“知行”问题深感纳闷，后学见识少，对您文中的许多观点不敢苟同，想和您聊聊。
于是在仔细研读大量原典文献之后，反复寻思，今涂鸦一文和您商量，遥寄给您，恳请您批评指正、不吝赐教。
（一封书信的正文部分）4.义工是一座城市吸睛的名片。
为了不断壮大义工队伍，提高服务水平，拓展服务领域，我们鼓动广大热心公益事业的市民加入义工队伍，在服务社会、服务他人的同时，提高自我，发展自我。
要是你真想传递热心、善心和爱心，要是你有强烈的正义感、使命感和责任感。
那么，你就必须成为义工！（某市义工队招募公告初稿的片段）5.为了更好地服务本社区居民，拔高未就业人员的技能水平，我社区将对本社区内未就业人员进行一共十天的技能培训，培训内容为插花艺术，想参加的人请赶紧来社区咨询、报名，名额有限，报满就停。
（某社区一则公告初稿的片段）6.我们将时不时开展轻松有趣的活动传播国学。
国学茶话会主要面向社员，让大伙儿在品茗谈笑间感受国学魅力；国学知识擂台赛面向全校同学，将邀请几个专家来点评，增进同学们对国学的认识。
活动所需的钱我们自己搞定。
（某社团申请书的片段）7.由我省乡村旅游节组委会牵头操办的乡村旅游节征文大赛正式开场，面向全国征集优秀稿件。
2019高考英语全国II短文改错精细解析
2019高考英语全国II短文改错精细解析黑龙江绥化一中高考英语命题研究名师高云峰2019全国II卷短文改错试题注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need. 【精细解析1】名词处理错误解题逻辑思路：每遇名词必查2件事——单复数、泛特指。
Since I was a kid, I’ve considereddifferent job I would like to do. 句中job受到different修饰，可见其需用复数形式，所以答案是把job改为jobs。
【精细解析2】词性串用错误（形-副串用）解题逻辑思路：短文改错解题时，每遇形容词或副词，需要全覆盖查3件事——1.形副是否串用；2.比较等级（三级——原级、比较级、最高级）是否合理；3. v-ed/v-ing形式是否串用。
2019高考应用文得体改错(最新各地质检题)【范本模板】
应用文改错20例（2019年各地模拟题）1.下面是一位高中毕业生在“教师节"给自己高中老师发的短信的片段，其中有五处词语使用不当，请找出并作修改.要求修改后语意准确,语体风格一致.（5分）虽已毕业一年，但学生仍时不时想恩师。
感谢您曾送了我知识与智慧，也感谢您曾指出我的错误.是您用自己的光芒，照亮了我的前路。
今天是“教师节”，遥寄鲜花一束，丁点心意，请您收下！2。
下面一则通知，其中有五处不妥当，请找出并作修改.（5分）通知各位家长：春光明媚，惠风和畅。
兹定于2018年10月19日在我校学术厅召开高三年级家长会。
我们将传达明年高考改革的形势，通报第二次月考考试情况,与大家磋商高考复习事宜.请务必准时到会。
2018年10月10日×××中学3。
下面是一则关于“名著推介”的广播稿片段，其中有五处表达不得体，请找出并作修改. （5分）《蘑菇圈》（中篇小说）近日荣获第七届鲁迅文学奖。
作者阿来系我国著名作家，尤以小说创作见长。
为提高同学们的鉴赏与写作能力，校广播站将播出访谈节目《大家作品欣赏》，届时由吴明老师为大家解读这部小说，敬请关注！中的五处并修改。
（5 分）《中国天气网》天气新闻征稿启示《中国天气网》内容涵盖丰富，其中《天气新闻》栏目尤其受到各界广泛关注。
天气新闻在报道突发天气事件和提高防灾减灾常识方面起到重要作用。
自本网 2008 年 7 月正式上线以来，每天都需要发布大量全国各地重大天气新闻。
由于网站影响不断扩大,公众对各地天气新闻的时效性和内容的丰富性要求不断提高，而本网编辑人数有限,现特向各省、市、区级气象局征稿，请务必踊跃投稿。
5.下面是某小区针对高空抛物现象给全体业主的倡议书正文。
其中有五处用语不得体，请找出并作修改.（5分）近日来,小区物业多次接到投诉,大伙儿反映小区存在高空抛物的现象，而且这一现象已习以为常。
抛下的垃圾不仅肮脏了小区的环境．同时也威胁着楼下行人的人身安全.我们希望业主能够养成良好的生活习惯,做人要有公德心，不要乱扔垃圾，并警告家人和亲朋不要高空抛物。
2019高考英语 短文改错 (2).ppt
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application of the English knowledge.
综合运用英语知识的能力
考情分析
2012---2016年NMET短文改错题测试点的分布情况：
年份
名 词
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adj.& 代 adv. 词
介词 冠词
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2012年
1
1
1
2
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2013年
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2014年
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2015年
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parent∧s singing and dancing happily.
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Self-assessment
What have you learnt from this lesson?
小结
做短文改错应采取 三步法 四不改 五改动 六句诀
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形容词和副词小结
１．修饰名词做定语，系动词后做表语,以及部 分动词后做宾语补足语要用形容词； ２．修饰动词，形容词，副词，或整个句子用 副词； ３．注意形近词组的辨析
语文应用文改错题25题汇编（含答案）
应用文改错题25题汇编应用文改错主要错误在于谦辞敬辞、口语书面语转换、应用文格式这3大方面，此外也有部分涉及语病（如搭配不当）。
1．下面是南山XX中学学生刘林写给《语文报》编辑部的投稿信，其中有五处表达存在不得体的情况，请你找出来并进行修改。
《语文报》编辑部：我是南山XX中学学生刘林，是一位酷爱写作的妹仔。
久闻你刊大名，决定投稿。
现奉上大作《蒙茶飘香》一篇，敬请拜读。
还望务必拨冗回示为谢!此致敬礼!刘林2018年2月11日2．下面一则文稿在表达上有几处不妥当，请任意找出四处并改正。
某中学70周年校庆公告南依历山，东临趵泉，弦歌不辍，薪火相传。
2018年10月18日，山东省实验中学将迎来建校七十周年华诞。
作为齐鲁基础教育的一面旗帜，学校坚持实验性、示范性，在齐鲁文化的深厚滋养中，广育英才，名盛华夏。
为办好此次校庆活动，特面向各届校友，征集在校期间惠存的校徽、校服、奖章、笔记和具有纪念意义的物品。
并藉此向您们发出诚挚邀请：欢迎拨冗光临此次盛会，共商实验发展大计。
特此公告，敬祈传达。
某中学2018年6月1日3．下面是承德中学文学社社长给该校校长写的一封信，其中有五处在表达上不妥当，请找出来并改正。
尊敬的程校长：您好!我是敝校星云文学社的社长，我社想出版一本名为《放飞梦想》的书。
这本书收录了我社同学的102篇大作，是我们文学社成员智慧的结晶。
请您抽出时间拜读，为这本书写一篇序言。
您是著名的教育家，能得到您的鼎力相助，我社一定会蓬荜生辉。
希望您能同意，在此敬谢不敏!祝您工作顺利!承德中学星云文学社2018年5月6日4．下面是一封推荐信，其中有几处语言表达不得体，请找出来并加以修改。
推荐信××大学招生办：兹有我校高三(一)班阳光同学，拟参加你校自主招生考试。
该生学习成绩显著，综合素质优良。
一直荣任我校晨曦文学社社长，热爱文学，爱好写作，曾在全国新概念作文大赛中获得一等奖，并有多篇大作发表在省级以上文学刊物上。
2019高考英语改错2带问题详解
I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term. The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people.From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.【答案】I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term.confidence a The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, Iannuallywas responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found itinterviewing them was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized thethought andexperience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people.of excitingFrom this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs删除thatimproving.How to keep mental healthAs we know, mental health links to our happiness index. However, it’s vital to keep our mental health. Here are some advice on how to do it.Firstly, accept yourself true. Knowing your own potentials and making practical goal instead of setting high expectations can keep yourself away from heavy burden, thus enjoy good mental health. Secondly, be friendly and sociable. Life with friends is miserable. So make friends. It’s their comfort and support which help you go through hardship in life. Lastly, commit yourself to your career. Your efforts bring you a sense of achievement, which will in turn ensure your happiness.In a brief, it pays to focus our attention on our mental health. The more, the best!【答案】How to keep mental healthAs we know, mental health links to our happiness index. However, it’s vital to keep our mental health.Therefore/ThusHere are some advice on how to do it.isFirstly, accept yourself true. Knowing your own potentials and making practical goal instead oftruly goals setting high expectations can keep yourself away from heavy burden, thus enjoy good mental health.enjoying Secondly, be friendly and sociable. Life with friends is miserable. So make friends. It’s their comfort andwithoutsupport which help you go through hardship in life. Lastly, commit yourself to your career. Your effortsthatbring you a sense of achievement, which will in turn ensure your happiness.willIn a brief, it pays to focus our attention on our mental health. The more, the best!betterDear Mr. Li,I’m Wang Tao. I’m written to tell you my opinion about employing a foreign language teacher.They are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the sense of humor is necessary for a teacher, who makes his class interesting and lively. For another, ensure efficiency in teaching and learning, the foreigner’s ability to speak Chinese matters much, so only with the help of Chinese can they communicate with each other smoothly.Various of activities out of class, such as English Evening and English Corner, should be organized by the foreign language teacher, which brings the students more chances to communicate with the teacher and improve his oral English.【答案】Dear Mr. Li,I’m Wang Tao. I’m written to tell you my opinion about employing a foreign language teacher.writing opinionsThey are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the sense of humor is necessary for a teacher,There consideration onewho makes his class interesting and lively. 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Besides, I'd like you to correct the mistakes what are found in the materials and format.I would appreciate it that if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to you reply.Yours,Li Hua Dear Ms Jenkins,I'm Li Hua. I plan to take ∧part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday.I hadahavealready filled in the application form and have my resume ready for it. But I am not sure about the words and format. However, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advices. Would you please spare someTherefore advicetime to read through the materials attaching? Would you mind find out the mistakes in terms for words andattached finding of format? Besides, I'd like you to correct the mistakes what are found in the materials and format.that或whichI would appreciate it that if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to you reply.yourYours,Li Hua The sun was just slowly come up over the mountains today as I took my dogs for its morning walk. I smiled as I watched the clouds gradually turn to white and gold. The air was cool and I wore a big smile in my face. Even though there weren’t leaf on the trees, b ut I could still hear birds singing songs of spring. Even my dogs seemed to notice the different in the air. They were playing instead of just do their morning business in the grass. The particular golden sun seemed to make it a beautiful day. As I headed back, I realize something. The beauty of day didn’t come from the warmth of the sun. It came from the warmth within my own heart and soul.71. come改为coming72. its改为their73. in改为on74. leaf改为leaves75.去掉but 或but改为yet76. different改为difference(s)77. do改为doing78. particular改为particularly79. realize改为realized80. 在day前加theFor 65 years, Mr Li has been walk around our neighborhood twice the day. It’s a part of his daily exercise routine. He is a retiring biology teacher. As Mr Li gets older and older, he has to rest several time along his route. Therefore, he still gets up early and sticks his routine. The neighbors have noticed his stops. We place different chairs along our route and invite him to sit and took a rest. Now, the mile-long route is spotted with chairs. When we see Mr Li to go by, we realize we should also get out but have a walk.For 65 years, Mr Li has been around our neighborhood twice day. It s a part of hisdaily exercise routine. He is a biology teacher. As Mr Li gets older and older, he has to restseveral along his route. , he still gets up early and sticks his routine. Theneighbors have noticed his stops.We place different chairs along route and invite him to sit anda rest. Now, the mile-long route is spotted with chairs. When we see Mr Li to go by, we realize weshould also get out have a walk.Alibaba founder Jack Ma, his company has been valued at morethan $ 221 billion of which Ma owned 6%, is put in the top position amongChina’s wealthi est. But he stays outside the list of the world’s 10 richpeople.Fought against a hard life, young Ma still managed to learn English well enough to gain a degree and became a teacher. Afterwards hestarted a translation agency in which took him to the US, where he introducedto the Internet. His fate was bound to change before he was accidentally appointed to take an American visitor Jerry Yang, a co-founder of Yahoo, in atour of the Great Wall. The meeting obvious proved to be a turning point forall of them, promoting the birth of Alibaba and later cooperation with JerryYang.71..his→whose；owned→owns；rich→richest；fought→fighting；去掉in；he和introduced 之间加上was；before→when/after；in→ on；obviously→obvious；all→ bothLast week I noticed Jack coughing on our math class. See this, I offered to take him to a clinic. There the doctor asked Jack how he had coughed sometimes for long time. Jack nodded his head immediate. The doctor then wrote a prescription with instruction on how to take the Chinese medicine. When Jack tasted the medicine, he almost brings it up. I comforted him with an old saying “Good medicine for health tastes bitter to the mouth”. Jack managed to swallow them unwillingly. But when he had recovered three days later, he felt amazing at the effect of the Chinese medicine.Last week I noticed Jack coughing on our math class. See this, I offered to take him to a clinic. Therein Seeingthe doctor asked Jack how he had coughed sometimes for long time. Jack nodded his head immediate.if/whether aimmediatelyThe doctor then wrote a prescription with instruction on how to take the Chinese medicine. WhenJackinstructionstasted the medicine, he almost brings it up. I comforted him with an old saying “Good medicine forhealth broughttastes bitter to the mouth”. Jack managed to swallow them unwillingly. But when he had recoveredthreeitdays later, he felt amazing at the effect of the Chinese medicine.amazedIn order to promote participation in outdoors exercise, our school organized an activity to climb Tianlong Mountain on April 10. The majority of my class joined the activity.Early in the morning, having assembled outside the school gate, we head straight to the thickly-forested Tianlong Mountain. We set out for the top in high spirits the moment when we arrived at the foot of the mountain. In a course of the climb, we cooperated with each other to pass the rocky or steep areas. Laughing and cheering, we eventually reached the summit, which we were greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air. Viewing from the top, the city was beautiful. Bathing in the warm sunshine, we entertained us with stories, songs, dances and game.This event was extremely beneficial and we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!短文改错：第一段：第一行：outdoors --- outdoor 第二行：joined后面加in 第二段第一行：head---headed 第三行：去掉when 第三行:In a course of ---In the course of 第五行：which --- where 第六行：Viewing---Viewed第七行：us---ourselves 第七行：game---games第三段第二行are held --- be heldDear Peter,How time flies! It had been almost a year since you left China to Sweden. During your home stay at my home, we had such wonderful time that it seemed as if everything was happened yesterday. I have been long to hear all about you and missing you so much. Fortunate, I wasselected as one of the student representative to pay a visit to your school. The visit will last on July 7th to 20th. And as a super soccer fan, I’d really love to visit our local soccer club.I can’t wait for the day to come where I can see you.1.had--has2. to ----for3. 在such后加a4. 去掉was5. long—longing6. Fortunate---Fortunately7. representative---representatives8. on---from9. our--your 10. where---whenLast week I went to visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Yang. He and I used to living next to each other for many years. About half a year ago, an order came which the old building, along with many other similar ones, were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street. So they had to move apart. Mr. Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park. His apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area. Therefore, Mr. Yang doesn’t seem to worry about the long distance. He says that new subway line will be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.去掉visit后to； living 改为live； which改为that； were改为was；they改为 we； big 改为bigger； took改为takes；Therefore改为However； new前加 a； year改为years。
完整word版2019高考冲刺之应用文改错一
年语言得体专题训练2019修改为__________ ；（5）将届高三年级阶段性检测）下面是某校一次羽毛球邀请赛关于仲裁申诉4.（河南省2019所谓“得体”，就是根据内部语境（上下文）和外部语境（语言交际的各种一、【概述】的规定，其中有五处词语使用不当，请找出并作修改。
要求修改后语意准确，语体风格情境条件，如：时间、地点、场合、对象、目的、话题、使用语言流露出的情感色彩等）分）一致。
（5第—，恰当利用词语的感情色彩。
现代汉语中不少词语的褒贬色彩很浓，利用得好，不但各参赛队在比赛1.仲裁委员会受理各队对比赛过程中各种判罚的申诉。
申诉程序：语言得体，还能产生极好的表达效果。
有时还可以故意改变词语的褒贬色彩。
第二，正确其2.过程中如对裁判的裁决有异议要求申诉的，由参赛队领队赶快向裁判长提出申诉。
使用书面用语和口语。
书面用语比较庄重正规，口语比较平和亲近，它们不分孰优孰劣，他观赛同学在比赛过程中如对裁判的裁决有异议要求申诉的，在比赛结束后一天内写出只是应当使用在不同的地方。
第三，正确使用敬辞和谦辞。
对上级、长辈等应当使用敬辞，书面申诉材料，并放上证明材料，当事双方写上姓名后，拿给仲裁委员会裁决。
把敬辞用在自己身上就很可笑；谦辞要用在自己身上，把谦辞用在对方身上，就显得不尊重对方。
第四，正确选用传达话语的手段。
要根据不同的表达目的选用不用的传达话语的；修改为修改为__________ ；（2）将）将（1手段。
第五，根据场合、对象准确遣词造句。
；修改为 __________ ；（4）将修改为（3）将二、综合演练修改为__________ ；（5）将届高三教学质检测）下面是某节目组一则致歉声明的片段，其中有五处1.（株洲市2019其中有五处不2019届高三月考）下面是某单位一则公告的初稿片段,5.（湖南师大附中词语使用不当，请找出来并作修改。
要求修改后语意准确、语体风格一致。
合书面语体的要求,请找出并作修改。
2019应用文改错题汇总
应用文改错题25题汇编语文匠曰：应用文改错主要错误在于谦辞敬辞、口语书面语转换、应用文格式这3大方面，此外也有部分涉及语病（如搭配不当）。
教师要手把手带领学生各个击破。
1．下面是南山XX中学学生刘林写给《语文报》编辑部的投稿信，其中有五处表达存在不得体的情况，请你找出来并进行修改。
《语文报》编辑部：我是南山XX中学学生刘林，是一位酷爱写作的妹仔。
久闻你刊大名，决定投稿。
现奉上大作《蒙茶飘香》一篇，敬请拜读。
还望务必拨冗回示为谢!此致敬礼!刘林2018年2月11日2．下面一则文稿在表达上有几处不妥当，请任意找出四处并改正。
某中学70周年校庆公告南依历山，东临趵泉，弦歌不辍，薪火相传。
2018年10月18日，山东省实验中学将迎来建校七十周年华诞。
作为齐鲁基础教育的一面旗帜，学校坚持实验性、示范性，在齐鲁文化的深厚滋养中，广育英才，名盛华夏。
为办好此次校庆活动，特面向各届校友，征集在校期间惠存的校徽、校服、奖章、笔记和具有纪念意义的物品。
并藉此向您们发出诚挚邀请：欢迎拨冗光临此次盛会，共商实验发展大计。
特此公告，敬祈传达。
某中学2018年6月1日3．下面是承德中学文学社社长给该校校长写的一封信，其中有五处在表达上不妥当，请找出来并改正。
尊敬的程校长：您好!我是敝校星云文学社的社长，我社想出版一本名为《放飞梦想》的书。
这本书收录了我社同学的102篇大作，是我们文学社成员智慧的结晶。
请您抽出时间拜读，为这本书写一篇序言。
您是著名的教育家，能得到您的鼎力相助，我社一定会蓬荜生辉。
希望您能同意，在此敬谢不敏!祝您工作顺利!承德中学星云文学社2018年5月6日4．下面是一封推荐信，其中有几处语言表达不得体，请找出来并加以修改。
推荐信××大学招生办：兹有我校高三(一)班阳光同学，拟参加你校自主招生考试。
该生学习成绩显著，综合素质优良。
一直荣任我校晨曦文学社社长，热爱文学，爱好写作，曾在全国新概念作文大赛中获得一等奖，并有多篇大作发表在省级以上文学刊物上。
2019高考冲刺之应用文改错一
2019年语言得体专题训练一、【概述】所谓“得体”，就是根据内部语境（上下文）和外部语境（语言交际的各种情境条件，如：时间、地点、场合、对象、目的、话题、使用语言流露出的情感色彩等）第—，恰当利用词语的感情色彩。
现代汉语中不少词语的褒贬色彩很浓，利用得好，不但语言得体，还能产生极好的表达效果。
有时还可以故意改变词语的褒贬色彩。
第二，正确使用书面用语和口语。
书面用语比较庄重正规，口语比较平和亲近，它们不分孰优孰劣，只是应当使用在不同的地方。
第三，正确使用敬辞和谦辞。
对上级、长辈等应当使用敬辞，把敬辞用在自己身上就很可笑；谦辞要用在自己身上，把谦辞用在对方身上，就显得不尊重对方。
第四，正确选用传达话语的手段。
要根据不同的表达目的选用不用的传达话语的手段。
第五，根据场合、对象准确遣词造句。
二、综合演练1.（株洲市2019届高三教学质检测）下面是某节目组一则致歉声明的片段，其中有五处词语使用不当，请找出来并作修改。
要求修改后语意准确、语体风格一致。
第二期节目因为剪辑失败，使得其中一个片段引起了观众的曲解，节目组已第一时间作了修正，并发表致歉声明，恳请广大观众的认可，也希望大众不要再对该片段进行散布。
以后我们将不忘初心，严肃剪辑，认真审核，给广大观众带来优秀的节目。
（1）将修改为__________ ；（2）将修改为；（3）将修改为__________ ；（4）将修改为；（5）将修改为__________ ；2.（安徽省皖江名校联盟2019届高三12月联考）下面文字有五处关联词或实词使用不当，请指出并改正，使文段语言表达准确。
（5分）虽然基础教育的任务仅仅是教会学生应对考试以升入高一级学校，那就无所谓“基础”，真正的教育也就没有发生。
学生成了考试机器，没有问题意识，缺乏批判思维，不关心社会，进而不思考自己的明天，这种“教育”，即使有社会风气支撑，教育者也不能认同。
背离常识的教育是“反教育”，目前最令人堪忧的是反常的“教育”变得堂而皇之。
2019高考英语短文改错练习(二)
短文改错专练（二）李仕才假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
ADear Sarah,I’m writing because I want to apologize to what I did last week. I’m really sorry. I know we said 8:30, and I would’ve gotten here on time if everything hadn’t gone wrongly. I was late because my watch broke and I didn’t know what the time it was. So you see, I would’ve arrived on time if my watch hadn’t broken. Then I have to walk because I’d missed the bus. And then I fell over and my trousers got dirty, so I had to go home and get changing. Then I decided to catch another buses, but it was too late. I would have phoned you and my brother had taken my mobile phone. Anyway, I hope you aren’t too angrier with me. Hope to hear you soon.Yours,JackBToday my classmate and I went to a farm for a trip. I get up at six o’clock and we set off by bus. On the bus, some of us sang, and some of us talked. We all had good time. Two hours late, we arrived at the gate of the farm, that thefarmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome. After we were shown around the big farm, they began to plant trees. It was really a good way to getting close to nature and protect the environment at the same time. Next, we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat on the open air. Finally, we went home at half past four. Although all of us was tired, our trip was really very more unforgettable.CBoth my father and mother has been wanting me to study abroad. They think that it’s n atural to master a foreign language in an English-speaking country and that studying abroad at early age will enable me to be dependent. Moreover, it will be easier to me to gain advanced knowledge of technology, that will prepare me for a brighter future. Moreover, my good friend, Zhang Hua doesn’t agree with them. He thought my English is too limited to communicate with foreigners. Besides, the cost is too much for his family. In my opinions, I should continue to study in China. As long as I study hard at now, I’ll make great achievements in the future.DAdvertising informs consumers about newer products available on the market. It gives us information with everything from shampoo to toothpaste to computers and cars. But there is one serious problems with this. The information are actually very often misinformation. It tells us the products’ benefits but hides its disadvantages. Advertising not only leads us to buying things that we don’t need and can’t afford, but it confuses our sense reality. “Zoom toothpaste prevents bad teeth and gives you the white teeth!” the advertisement tells us. And it doesn’t tell us the complete truth that a health diet and a good toothbrush will have the same effect.EMy grandfather had had enough of his cat. He was tired of her scratching all the furnitures and made a mess. So he gave her to a friend, who lived on theother side of town. He told his friends that he was getting so old to look after her. A week later, in a very cold winter day, my grandfather returned home from shopping and surprised to see the cat on his doorstep. My grandfather was moved by the fact that his pet had found his way back from the other side of town in such a cold weather. He took the cat outside and gave her lots of loving attention. He decided he will never give her away again.FBedouin, the Arab people who live in the desert, living in a traditional society. This means they live on much the same way as their ancestors did. People who live in traditional societies has strong ties to the past. Customs and beliefs have changed very slower. They fear that when changes will make their lives worse rather than better. Values are passing on with little changes from one generation to the next. Yet changes do take place. All cultures change, but they change much quickly at some periods than at other. In very recent years, changes have taken place very quickly everywhere, including deserts of Southwest Asia and North Africa.GMy uncle and aunt come home one evening and discovered huge hole in their roof. They also found that their dog was dead and their furniture were covered in horrible-smelling matter. Upset by which they saw, they phoned the police. After the police looked into the problem, they were told what had happened to. It seemed that the container holding the wastes from the toilets on a passing plane had burst openly. The contents froze in the atmosphere as it fell towards theground. Then the resulting block of ice crashed through the roof and broke into piece, killing the dog after melting in their house.HTaking parts in recreation activities help us keep fit. There are various kinds of activity in our daily life, for example, listening to music,watching TV, playing chess, or going to cinema. But I think we’d better to have more outdoor activities. As students, we usually sit too longer in the classroom, and as a result our eyes and brains getting tired. But it’s a good idea to play basketball, football, table tennis, go swimming, do some runnings, or even go for a picnic. Our brains also need changes to make it smart and active. In a word, exercise is good for the health.答案A1. ... apologize to what ... to → for2. ... gotten here on ... here → there3. ... gone wrongly. wrongly → wrong4. ... what the time ... 去掉the5. ... I have to ... have → had6. ... get changing. changing → changed7. ... another buses ... buses → bus8. ... and my brother ... and → but9. ... too angrier with ... angrier → angry10. Hope to hear you ... you前加fromB1. ... my classmate and ... classmate → classmates2. I get up at ... get → got3. ... had good time ... good前加a4. Two hours late ... late → later5. ... that the farmers ... that → where6. ... they began to plant ... they → we7. ... to getting close to ... getting → get8. ... on the open air. on → in9. ... all of us was ... was → were10. ... more unforgettable. 去掉moreC1. ... mother has ... has → have2. ... at early age ... early前加an3. ... to be dependent. dependent → independent4. ... be easier to me ... to → for5. ... that will prepare ... that → which6. Moreover, my good ... Moreover → However7. He thought my ... thought → thinks8. ... for his family. his → my9. In my opinions ... opinions → opinion10. ... hard at now ... 去掉atD1. ... about newer products ... newer → new2. ... with everything ... with → on / about3. ... serious problems ... problems → problem4. ... are actually very ... are → is5. ... its disadvantages. i ts → their6. ... buying things ... buying → buy7. ... sense reality. reality前加of8. ... the white teeth!”去掉the9. And it doesn’t ... And → But10. ... a health diet and ... health → healt hyE1. ... all the funitures ... furnitures → furniture2. ... made a mess. made → making3. He told his friends ... friends → friend4. ... so old to look ... so → too5. ... in a very cold ... in → on6. ... and surprised to ... surprised前加was7. ... found his way ... his → her8. ... such a cold weather. 去掉a9. ... the cat outside ... outside → inside10. ... he will never ... will → wouldF1. ... living in a ... living → live2. ... live on much ... on → in3. ... has strong ties to ... has → have4. ... changed very slower. slower → slowly5. ... when changes will ... 去掉when6. Values are passing ... passing → passed7. ... with little changes ... little → few8. ... much quickly at ... much → more或quickly前加more9. ... than at other. other → others10. ... including deserts ... deserts前加theG1. ... aunt come home ... come → came2. ... discovered huge ... huge前加a3. ... were covered ... were → was4. ... which they saw ... which → what5. ... had happened to. 去掉to6. ... holding the wastes ... wastes → waste7. ... had burst openly. openly → open8. ... it fell towards ... it → they9. ... broke into piece ... piece → pieces10. ... after melting in ... after → beforeH1. Taking parts in ... parts → part2. ... help us keep ... help → helps3. ... kinds of activity ... activity → activities4. ... going to cinema. cinema前加the5. ... better to have ... 去掉to6. ... sit too longer ... longer → long7. ... brains getting ... getting → get8. But it’s a good ... But → So9. ... some runnings ... runnings → running10. ... make it smart ... it → them。
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2019年语言得体专题训练口语句式的特点是比较短小，结构也简单，少用关联词语，它的修辞作用主要是活泼、自然；用语大多是通俗的口语词组。
书面句式的特点是多用长句，结构较复杂，关联词语用得较多，有时沿用一些文言句式，它的修辞作用主要是严谨、周密；用语大多是文雅的书面语词组。
一．请找出下面用的不得体的口语词，分析其特点后修改。
1.现在，让我们怀着激动的心情，登上台阶，瞧一瞧长城的风采吧！（导游解说词）2.因业务大了，原有地方狭小，咱们公司自即日起搬迁到凤凰路72号。
新址位于县二中东侧500米处，欢迎新老客户上门。
询问电话：8321560。
（一家快递公司搬迁新址通告初稿的片段）3.拜读您的大作之后，后学就您所论述的“知行”问题深感纳闷，后学见识少，对您文中的许多观点不敢苟同，想和您聊聊。
于是在仔细研读大量原典文献之后，反复寻思，今涂鸦一文和您商量，遥寄给您，恳请您批评指正、不吝赐教。
（一封书信的正文部分）4.义工是一座城市吸睛的名片。
为了不断壮大义工队伍，提高服务水平，拓展服务领域，我们鼓动广大热心公益事业的市民加入义工队伍，在服务社会、服务他人的同时，提高自我，发展自我。
要是你真想传递热心、善心和爱心，要是你有强烈的正义感、使命感和责任感。
那么，你就必须成为义工！（某市义工队招募公告初稿的片段）5.为了更好地服务本社区居民，拔高未就业人员的技能水平，我社区将对本社区内未就业人员进行一共十天的技能培训，培训内容为插花艺术，想参加的人请赶紧来社区咨询、报名，名额有限，报满就停。
（某社区一则公告初稿的片段）6.我们将时不时开展轻松有趣的活动传播国学。
国学茶话会主要面向社员，让大伙儿在品茗谈笑间感受国学魅力；国学知识擂台赛面向全校同学，将邀请几个专家来点评，增进同学们对国学的认识。
活动所需的钱我们自己搞定。
（某社团申请书的片段）7.由我省乡村旅游节组委会牵头操办的乡村旅游节征文大赛正式开场，面向全国征集优秀稿件。
参赛作品要求围绕“秀美乡村，织造幸福”的主题，写出我省乡村的自然景观、人文风情，展现我省乡村新时代的田园样子和乡村居民的精神劲头。
（启事的初稿片段）8.省气象台24 日发布寒潮蓝色预警信号。
受强冷空气不断影响，估计今天夜间至26 日，我省将出现大风和很冷天气。
气温将明显下降，过程降温幅度大：内陆地区-8℃左右，沿海地区-6℃左右。
要求全省交警密切关注天气和路况，及时打开应急响应，采取有效措施，消除交通安全风险。
（某省气象台发布的寒潮蓝色预警的部分内容）9.各位同学，因李教授得病，经文学院领导商量并请示学校领导后决定，这个学期的现代文学课暂由张明教授教着。
授课时间与科目学分还是那样。
希望同学们能和张教授愉快相处，预祝大家取得好成绩。
（某高校的一则公告的初稿片段）10.根据学生会的工作打算，定于本周四下午第三节课后，在学校综合楼四楼多功能厅召开学生会工作会议。
希望大家看到通知后相互说一声，不得不来；并请提前向班主任请假，按时惠顾。
学生会到时候会严格考勤，对无故不参加会议者进行通报。
（某校学生会一则通知初稿的片段）11.我乐观开朗，能够很好地搞好人际关系。
（自荐信的片段）12.我们诚挚邀请您参加，共同交流师生情谊。
（写给老师的邀请函）13.“拍客大V兰州行”活动就要开启，现面向全国各地招募拍客伙伴。
入选的人将和网络大V一起走进兰州进行体验式报道，看看兰州市改革开放40年的成就跟变化，全方位、多角度地展示兰州新生态、新风貌，传播兰州好声音。
活动期间需在指定区域拍摄，拍摄方式无所谓。
（某活动招募启事正文的初稿片段）14.本报打算开设《改革开放四十年——科技在我心》特别专栏。
（《中国改革报》为某专栏所写的编者按）15.应征稿件必须是作者原创的，看到了剽窃等问题，将取消参评资格。
作者同意授权主办方汇编作品，如不同意，请作者说清楚。
征文活动设一、二，三等及优秀奖好几个。
组委会聘请名头很响的专家担任评委，面向社会公示后确认。
拟定于6月在春城举办征文颁奖典礼，届时邀请文化学者来现场为获奖者颁奖。
欢迎广大文友不吝赐稿。
（某征文启事的部分内容）16.本人有良好的语言表达能力和人际沟通能力，与同学们玩得非常融洽，深受广大师生的爱戴。
（自荐信正文）（二）请找出下面用的不得体的书面语，分析其特点后修改。
1.欢迎各位莘莘学子莅临我校参加自主招生选拔考试，诸位的到来让我们感到非常高兴。
（广播稿的片段）2.长篇小说《吕梁英雄传》，作者系我国著名作家马烽和西戎。
（广播稿的片段）1.现在，让我们怀着激动的心情，登上台阶，瞧一瞧长城的风采吧！（导游解说词）⑤“瞧一瞧”过于随意，不适合用于较为正式的场合，改为“一睹”。
2.因业务大了，原有地方狭小，咱们公司自即日起搬迁到凤凰路72号。
新址位于县二中东侧500米处，欢迎新老客户上门。
询问电话：8321560。
（一家快递公司搬迁新址通告初稿的片段）①“大了”改为“扩大”。
②“地方”改为“场地”。
③“咱们公司”改为“本公司”。
④“上门”改为“惠顾”。
⑤“询问”改为“垂询”。
（每处1分，只找出未修改正确不给分。
）3.拜读您的大作之后，后学就您所论述的“知行”问题深感纳闷，后学见识少，对您文中的许多观点不敢苟同，想和您聊聊。
于是在仔细研读大量原典文献之后，反复寻思，今涂鸦一文和您商量，遥寄给您，恳请您批评指正、不吝赐教。
（一封书信的正文部分）①纳闷困惑②见识少才疏学浅③聊聊探讨④寻思思考⑤商量商榷（每处一分）（本题考查语体色彩。
文段摘自一封书信，应用书面语而非口语，以显用词庄重典雅。
）4.义工是一座城市吸睛的名片。
为了不断壮大义工队伍，提高服务水平，拓展服务领域，我们鼓动广大热心公益事业的市民加入义工队伍，在服务社会、服务他人的同时，提高自我，发展自我。
要是你真想传递热心、善心和爱心，要是你有强烈的正义感、使命感和责任感。
那么，你就必须成为义工！（某市义工队招募公告初稿的片段）“吸睛”改为“亮丽”；“鼓动”改为“呼吁”；“要是”改为“如果”；“真想”改为“希望”；“必须”改为“可以”。
（一处1分。
只找出，不修改或修改错误不得分）5.为了更好地服务本社区居民，拔高未就业人员的技能水平，我社区将对本社区内未就业人员进行一共十天的技能培训，培训内容为插花艺术，想参加的人请赶紧来社区咨询、报名，名额有限，报满就停。
（某社区一则公告初稿的片段）(1)“拔高”改为“提高”/“提升’(2)“一共”改为“为期”(3)“想参加的人”改为“有意向者”(4)“赶紧”改为“速来”/“迅速”(5)“就停”改为“即止”6.我们将时不时开展轻松有趣的活动传播国学。
国学茶话会主要面向社员，让大伙儿在品茗谈笑间感受国学魅力；国学知识擂台赛面向全校同学，将邀请几个专家来点评，增进同学们对国学的认识。
活动所需的钱我们自己搞定。
（某社团申请书的片段）【答案】示例：①“时不时”改为“经常”；②“大伙儿”改为“大家”；③“几个”改为“几位”；④“钱”改为“经费”；⑤“自己搞定”改为”改为“自筹”。
7.由我省乡村旅游节组委会牵头操办的乡村旅游节征文大赛正式开场，面向全国征集优秀稿件。
参赛作品要求围绕“ 秀美乡村，织造幸福” 的主题，写出我省乡村的自然景观、人文风情，展现我省乡村新时代的田园样子和乡村居民的精神劲头。
（启事的初稿片段）（1）“牵头操办”改为“主办”（2）“开场”改为“启动”（3）“写出”改为“抒写”（4）“样子”改为“风貌”（5）“劲头”改为“风采”8.省气象台 24 日发布寒潮蓝色预警信号。
受强冷空气不断影响，估计今天夜间至 26 日，我省将出现大风和很冷天气。
气温将明显下降，过程降温幅度大：内陆地区-8℃左右，沿海地区-6℃左右。
要求全省交警密切关注天气和路况，及时打开应急响应，采取有效措施，消除交通安全风险。
（某省气象台发布的寒潮蓝色预警的部分内容） (1)“不断”改为“持续”； (2)“估计”改为“预计”； (3)“很冷”改为“降温”或“寒冷”； (4)“要求”改为“希望”或“请”；(5)“打开”改为“启动”。
（每点1分，指出不得体之处并改正才能得分，共5分）9.各位同学，因李教授得病，经文学院领导商量并请示学校领导后决定，这个学期的现代文学课暂由张明教授教着。
授课时间与科目学分还是那样。
希望同学们能和张教授愉快相处，预祝大家取得好成绩。
（某高校的一则公告的初稿片段）20．【解析】①“得病”改为“生病”；②“商量”改为“研究”③“这个”改为“本”④4“教着”改为“执教”⑤“还是那样”改为“保持不变”10.根据学生会的工作打算，定于本周四下午第三节课后，在学校综合楼四楼多功能厅召开学生会工作会议。
希望大家看到通知后相互说一声，不得不来；并请提前向班主任请假，按时惠顾。
学生会到时候会严格考勤，对无故不参加会议者进行通报。
（某校学生会一则通知初稿的片段）20．（5．分）①“打算”改为“计划”或“安排”；②“说一声”改为“转告”；③“不来”改为“缺席”；④“惠顾”改为“参会”（或“参加”“与会”）；⑤“到时候”改为“届时”。
（每处1分）11.我乐观开朗，能够很好地搞好人际关系。
（自荐信的片段）③“搞好”改为“处理”；12.我们诚挚邀请您参加，共同交流师生情谊。
（写给老师的邀请函）④“共同交流”改为“共叙”；13.“拍客大V兰州行”活动就要开启，现面向全国各地招募拍客伙伴。
入选的人将和网络大V 一起走进兰州进行体验式报道，看看兰州市改革开放40年的成就跟变化，全方位、多角度地展示兰州新生态、新风貌，传播兰州好声音。
活动期间需在指定区域拍摄，拍摄方式无所谓。
（某活动招募启事正文的初稿片段）①将“就要”改为“即将”；②将“入选的人”改为“入选者”；③将“看看”改为“感受”；④将“跟”改为“与(和)”；⑤将“无所谓”改为“不限”。
(5分，每处1分)14.本报打算开设《改革开放四十年——科技在我心》特别专栏。
（《中国改革报》为某专栏所写的编者按）（4）打算——拟或计划15.应征稿件必须是作者原创的，看到了剽窃等问题，将取消参评资格。
作者同意授权主办方汇编作品，如不同意，请作者说清楚。
征文活动设一、二，三等及优秀奖好几个。
组委会聘请名头很响的专家担任评委，面向社会公示后确认。
拟定于6月在春城举办征文颁奖典礼，届时邀请文化学者来现场为获奖者颁奖。
欢迎广大文友不吝赐稿。
（某征文启事的部分内容）20．【解析】本题考查语言表达得体的能力。
“看到了”“说清楚”“好几个”“名头很响的”“来”五个词语或字在此段语境中口语色彩很浓，每答对一处给1分，只指出错误，没作修改或修改有误，均不给分。
如有其他答案，只要符合题目要求，言之成理，可酌情给分。
（1）“看到了”改为“发现”；（2）“说清楚”改为“说明”；（3）“好几个”改为“若干”；（4）“名头很响的”改为“著名”或“知名”；（5）“来”改为“莅临”。