初中英语中考作文指导 ppt

brings
happiness
more ,it can make me to grow not only taller but also
strong. stronger
grow
I love play basketball. I hope be a basketball player
in the future. playing
health. I play basketball with my classmates at school healthy
twice a week. I make a lot of good friends when I play
basketball. And it bring me a lot of happy. What’s
of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study.
the body And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t
next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end 9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word,
• According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
我们应该保护环境。
A We should protect the environment. B It’s our duty to protect the environment.
Writing skills （“写”的技巧）
方法二:活用多种句型
她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。
A She is very young. She can’t carry the heavy box.
me soon.
(the ending)
Mary
basic rules (写作考试规则)
search（审） list（列） add(加: 开头和结尾) connect(连) beautiful(美：谚语/例子)
牛刀小试
审(search)
健康很重要。在学习和 工作的压力日趋增大的 今天，会休息的人才会 有健康的身体。人们是 如何度过假期的呢？国 际健康组织对此作了一 次调查，右图是他们此 次的调查结果。根据你 所得的信息，请为国际 健康组织写一篇完整的 调查报告,并提倡大家 进行假日休闲。
to be/ I will be
Checklist ✓spelling ✓capitalization (A/a) ✓punctuation (.,?!) ✓subject-verb agreement ✓part of speech (n/v/adj/adv…) ✓tense ✓usage of phrases词组固定搭配(惯用 法)
• Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
（t尾he的b句eg子inn应in注g）意简洁、漂亮。
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.
美连((bceoanunteicfty)
• How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.
• According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
B She is too young to carry the heavy box. C She is so young that she can’t carry the … D She is not old enough to carry the…
Writing skills （“写”的技巧）
方法三:妙用关联词
• Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
Writing skills （“写”的技巧）
方法一:善用词汇 甚至善用高级词汇
Which is better?
他们在海滩上听音乐。
A They listened to the music on the beach. B They enjoyed the music on the beach.
generally speaking, in short
Let’s try
• T_h_o_u_g_h_\A__lt_h_o_ug_h_ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.
• He didn’t go to movies, he went to the concert _in_s_t_e_ad_.
（正文） meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do.
Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不 用说)answer the questions about them. But the most
Which is better?
最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。
A His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised. B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.
我认为学英语很有趣。
A I think learning English is interesting. B I find it really fun to learn English .
• Come and enjoy your vacation. People who
relax well work well. （the ending）
连(connect)
• How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.
Which is better?
我希望你能帮助我。
A I wish you can help me. B I’m looking forward to your help.
Which is better?
他们很早就到了。
A They arrived early. B They arrived as early as they could.
初中英语写作指导课 Let’s go for it!
basic structure (基本结构的安排)
Let’s go for it!
Dear Mr. Know，
I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you
some problems we meet in English study. (the beginning)
difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and
sentences.
Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please
give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Write to
on the one hand…on the other hand 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,
that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly),
• A lot of people travel. • Some people stay at home. • Some other people visit friends
or parents. • A few people work. • Enjoy your vacation.
加(add)
• 加首尾，使结构完整。 • Hm•oawd可ed以ao sp采uerovp取eley 总sapned分ndh总etrhe结eiirs构voau，crart开eiopno头?rtW.或e 结
First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think
studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so
difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots
• We like doing kinds of sports __li_ke__ swimming, running and hiking.
• _F_i_rs_t_, he stood up. Then he got out. _N_e_x_t_, he went back. _F_in_a_ll_y_\_A_t_l_a_st_, he smiled.
My favorite sport
I like many sports, such as swim, fish and so on. But of all the sports, basketball is my fasvworimitemsipnogr,tf.ishing
I like basketball best because it can help me keep
关联词(connection words)
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more not only…but also, neither…nor
2.表示选择: or, either…or 3.表示转折: but,however,although\though,after all,anyway 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the sameome
visit friends or parents
work
列(list)
根据以下关键词及图表用 简单的句子列出文章的要点。
• 如何度假 • 调查报告 • 倡议假日休闲
travel stay at home
visit friends or parents
work
列(list)