2018年高考英语真题分类汇编专题16：短文改错

2018年高考英语真题分类汇编专题16：短文改错一、改错题（共3题；共15分）1.（2018?卷Ⅰ）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词注：⒈每处错误及其修改仅限一词；⒉只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for everytwo years, but he agreed.【答案】①I went to countryside的to后面加the;②I find a big change there的find改为found;③and another animals的another改为other;④I went here again的here改为there；⑤dozens of chicken的chicken改为chickens;⑥They also had a small pond which they raised fish.的which前面加in或者将which改为where;⑦by sell the fish的sell改为selling;⑧I felt happily的happily改为happy;⑨I planned to return for every two years的for去掉；⑩but he agreed的but改为and.【考点】短文改错【解析】【分析】本文记叙了作者和父亲去乡下爷爷奶奶家所看到的家乡的变化。

①考查冠词，固定搭配go to the countryside，故答案为在to和countryside之间加the。

②考查时态，上文有时间状语last winter holiday，可知用过去时态，故答案为find改为found 。

③考查不定代词，another 指三者以上的另一个，other 意为其他的，表泛指，这里指其他的动物。

故答案为another改为other。

④考查副词，这里指去乡下，指那里。

故答案为here改为there⑤考查名词的单复数，这里指小鸡，可数名词，dozens of后接可数名词复数，故答案为chicken改为chickens。

⑥考查定语从句，先行词为地点名词，从句中差状语，故答案为which改为where /in which。

⑦考查非谓语动词，介词by后接动词ing形式，故答案为sell改为selling。

⑧考查形容词，feeI是系动词后接形容词作表语feel happy感到高兴，故答案为happily改为happy。

⑨考查介词，every two years 每两年，固定短语，for 是多余的，故答案为去掉for。

⑩考查连词，联系上下文，两句是顺承关系而不是转折关系，故答案为but改为and。

【点评】短文改错题以语篇为情境，主要考查考生的词、句、篇和语法的综合水平，特别是考生运用自己所学的语法知识，发现、判断、纠正文章中错误的能力。

考点分布广泛，涉及到词法（介词、并列连词、冠词、名词单复数、非谓语、形容词/副词等）、句法（时态、从句）和逻辑等。

2.（2018?卷Ⅱ）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删改或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及修改均仅限一词；⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I was little, Friday's night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sortin the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watchingthem, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn't realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.【答案】①Friday's night的Friday's改为Friday;②of all sort的sort改为sorts;③As the kid的the 改为a;④asked to watching them的watching改为watch;⑤my parents would not to let me的to去掉；⑥They would say to us的us改为me;⑦Still I unwilling to play the games的unwilling前加was;⑧play the games for them的for改为with;⑨I didn't realize how right my parents are的are改为were;⑩where I was a child的where改为when.【考点】短文改错【解析】【分析】本文讲述作者小时候想看动画片，但是却被父母逼着做游戏，长大后才知道父母的良苦用心。

①考查名词所有格。

在表达某一天的上午下午晚上时用普通格不用所有格，故答案为Friday's 改为Friday。

②考查名词的数。

sort种类，是可数名词，同kind。

all sorts of各种各样的。

故答案为sort改为sorts。

③考查冠词的用法。

句意：作为一个小孩，我喜欢看动画片。

此处表示泛指，as a kid，故答案为the改为a。

④考查动词不定式。

句意：但是不管有多少次我请求看（动画片），我的父母都不让我看。

ask to do sth 请求做某事。

故答案为watching改为watch。

⑤考查过去将来时的结构。

would是情态动词，后跟动词原形，故答案为去掉to。

⑥考查代词和句意。

根据上下文可知是父母对“我”说，故答案为us改为me。

⑦考查动词的句法结构。

此处unwilling是形容词，需要加上be动词才能构成谓语部分，根据上下文的时态可知此处是一般过去时，be动词用was，故答案为unwilling前加was。

⑧考查介词的用法。

短语play sth with sb和某人玩……，故答案为for改为with。

⑨考查动词的时态。

由本句中entered的时态可知用一般过去时，故答案为are改为were。

⑩考查连词辨析。

句意：我小时候父母教给我的结果在后来的生活中是非常有用的。

where表示地点，而本句指作者“小时候”，故答案为where改为when。

【点评】本题考查对语法的综合运用能力，需要在充分理解短文的基础上对文章的逻辑关系、词法、句法，上下文等方面进行综合的判断，发现并改正错误。

要具备完善的语法基础知识才能正确的改正错误。

3.（2018?卷Ⅲ）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework but I was shy. I was afraid that to speakin front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.【答案】It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just . Everyone was silent, to see who would be called upon to read his her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done homework but I was shy. I was afraid to speak in front of a group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that leaning from textbooks, and as well.", I raised my hand.【考点】短文改错【解析】【分析】本文讲述作者上一节写作课的过程。