高中英语作文专项突破之对立观点式作文(1)

40%
50%
10%
1. 要上课。 1.不要上课。
2. 学习任务重， 2.休息好，提高 要抓紧时间。 学习效率。
1.其中一天学习， 一天休息。
2.学习与休息两 者兼顾。
I personally think/In my personal opinion, health is more important than wealth.
=From my point of view,
=As/So far as I’m concerned,
It is obvious/clear/evident that success favours the diligent.
亮点仿写：
1.最近，我们学校就中学生是否应在周末上课展 开了热烈讨论。
Recently there is a heated debate in our school on whether middle school students should take lessons on their weekends.
3. 我个人认为，我们应该更关注科技的发展。
I personally think we should pay more attention to the advance of science and technology
练练吧 要点3
要点1
要点2
最近，你校组织了一场讨论，主题是：周末双休日要不要上课。 请根据下表提示写一篇短文，客观介绍一下讨论情况，并阐明 你的观点。 字数：120左右。
Ⅰ. 陈述事实/现象
Recently there is a heated/fierce debate/discussion on whether middle school students should take part-time jobs on their weekends.
We cannot ignore the fact that many people still don’t have enough to eat.
No one can deny the fact that the environment is getting polluted seriously.
=There is no denying the fact that
No one could have failed to notice (the fact) that traffic problems are becoming more and more serious.
2. 不可否认的是，戴眼镜的中小学生越来越多。
We cannot ignore the fact that more and more primary and middle school students are wearing glasses.
Ⅱ. 看法与态度
When it comes to failure, people have different attitudes towards it./different people hold different attitudes towards it.
Para4. give your opinion. （我的观点——取/舍）
时态：可选择用一般现在时
话题词汇积累
添加信息：also；besides; in addition; what’s more;
furthermore; Similarly
转折：but; however; although/though; on the contrary; on the other hand
亮点仿写： 1. 谈到这个问题，人们有着不同的看法。
When it comes to this problem, different people have different opinions. 2. 不言而喻，科技的发展对中国是至关重要的。 It is obvious that the advance of science and technology is important to China.
English Writing
写作（1）——对立观点式作文
高考书面表达阅卷老师体会：
体会一：评卷误差小，基本做到了客观、 公正。
体会二：作文中要有亮点、闪光点。 体会三：了解高考英语作文的宗旨。 体会四：有时书写是至关重要的潜在因素。
篇章结构
Para1. state the question. (陈述问题/现象)
Different people have different opinions on this question.
People’s view on it/attitudes towards it vary from person to person.
Some people believe that---,while others argue that---. /Some hold that---.However, others believe that---.
因果：therefore；because；because of; due to;
owing to; thanks to; as a result; as; for; since
总结：all in all; in a word; in conclusion; to sum up; in brief
话题佳句积累
Para2. give the ideas that agree with the question
Leabharlann Baidu
and the reasons.
(有人赞成，为什么）
Para3. give the ideas the disagree with the question and the reasons. （有人反对，为什么）