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雅思考试 2021年1月23日雅思机经附范文

雅思考试    2021年1月23日雅思机经附范文

2021年1月23日雅思考试回忆及解析雅思听力部分Part 1 求职场景题型:填空1.act as a leader2.sport: tennisst for 8 weeks with a chance to travel4.start of June5.need training in the first week6.age: above 187.salary: 9858.need to pay his own insurance9.register with the police in the UK10.have a discountPart 2 航海 Lutta 船的历史题型:选择+匹配11-15 选择11.1901 年 Lutta 船有什么变化?A. add sail12. 最终船的航行计划B. around the world (global trip)13. 航行过程中出了什么问题?A. loss of an instrument14. 船开到一个叫做***的地方去做什么?B. let people see it15. 船最终去了哪里?C. Victoria16-20 匹配16.第一艘船:A. help steer the boat17.第二艘船:B. observe marine animals18.第三艘船:C. observe bird life19.第四艘船:E. take vehicles with them20.第五艘船:F. learn about marine historyPart 3 医药课程讨论题型:填空+选择21-24 填空21.teacher asked why they did not choose nursing/clinic. The man said the diploma course is too difficult22.choosing operation need to firstly learn biology23.if they choose health course, they will work together with young people24.one course later on work specializing indisability/disabled people25-30 选择25.What Mr. Fraser suppose them to doB. focusing on one subject26. Millie thinks the professor of the courseB. international/worldwide reputation27. the textbook of the courseA. written by this school28. the university has recently spent money onA. upgrading the buildings for medical school 29. the most important thing is toC. ask it by yourself and know about the tutor30. in the end, they decided toC. remain uncertainPart 4新题/旧题:新题场景:学术场景主题: 人类记忆演变流程题型及数量:10填空31-40) Completion31write32plants33place34sight35religion36speech37science38待回忆39待回忆40journalist考点:同义替换,结构转换,干扰项可参考真题:C10Test1Section4, C13est3Section4本场考试三篇均为新题,从2021年开年开始,新题的占比特别高,无形中增加了考试难度。

2023年1月14日雅思大作文题目示范写作

2023年1月14日雅思大作文题目示范写作

2023年1月14日雅思大作文题目示范写作Some ex-prisoners commit crimes after being released from the prison. What do you think is the cause? How can it be solved? (2022/1/14)范文及解析IntroductionA mushrooming number of criminals, after being released from the jail, will revert to crime , exerting ceaseless baneful influence on the social harmony and stability. Behind such a ticklish problem, from my perspective, are two predominant factors and viable solutions are in urgent need to avert the bleak future.解析2023开年的第二场考试,虽然是很多考生害怕的犯罪类话题,但本题以说明文的形式考出,要求分析犯罪分子被释放出之后继续犯罪的原因及解决方法,是一个复古旧题,整体难度并不大;mushrooming adj.迅速增长的;越来越多的;ceaseless adj.不断的;不停的;baneful adj.不好的;有害的;ticklish adj.难对付的;棘手的;Body 1The chief culprit for re-offending would be the difficulty for the criminals to settle down and reintegrate into the society. Indisputably, one of the root causes for anti-social behaviors is poverty, by which I mean living odds force some people to embark on a path of delinquency to support themselves by engaging in illegal activities such as stealing, larceny and the like. After being freed from the prison, with a criminal record, never would it be easy for the law-breakers who lack livelihood skills to secure a job and become economically independent. Another contributing factor for such a worrying trend has much to do with the psychology condition of the criminals. Suffering from improper treatment, be it physical punishment or verbal aggression, many offenders, when set free from the prison, areinundated with resentment instead of visions of life, for which they are apt to fall back into perpetrating crimes.解析接受过监禁处罚的犯罪分子出来之后又继续去犯罪主要的原因有:(1)物质层面:犯过罪的人出来之后在稳定生活重新融入社会上存在明显困难;(2)精神层面:犯罪分子出狱后会因为在监狱中遭受的一些言语攻击等不合理对待而产生报复心理;culprit n.不好的事情的原因;罪魁祸首;reintegrate into v.重新融入;living odds n.生活窘境;embark on a path of delinquency v.走上犯罪的道路;larceny n.盗窃;verbal aggression n.语言攻击;are inundated with v.充斥着;resentment n. 愤恨;怨恨;are apt to v.倾向于;易于;perpetrate v.犯罪;作恶;Body 2Prickly as the issue is, steps can be taken to address. Primarily,the government should play a leading role by polishing the effectiveness of imprisonment with the aim to help criminals achieving rehabilitation.To specify, job-related training targeted at those released offenders are staunchly suggested ,which enables them to be furnished with some employment abilities ,be it a plumber ,a hairdresser or a driver. In this case, they can be, in large part, encouraged to live a normal life rather than violate the law for survival. Efforts from family members, friends and the society are also indispensable to cure the mental disorders. To elaborate, showing enough respect and helping those ex-prisoners to find a job are great tender solicitude. The general public and the whole society should be made to believe a reformed man deserves a new leaf.解析解决方法:(1)政府层面:进一步改进监禁的教育方式从而达到帮助犯罪分子真正改过自新;比如可以更多地提供一些职业相关的技能培训以更好地帮助犯罪分子保证就业;(2)家庭和社会:更多地尊重,接纳,包容改过自新的罪犯;prickly adj.麻烦的;address v.解决;rehabilitation n.改过自新;staunchly adv.强烈地;be furnished with v.具有;配备有;solicitude n.安慰;关怀reformed adj.改过自新的;ConclusionIn conclusion, the problem for ex-prisoners to resort to offence, notwithstanding its gravity, can be brought under control with both the government and the public shouldering joint responsibility.解析总结前文notwithstanding prep. 虽然;尽管;gravity n.严重性;。

雅思写作题目【通用4篇】-最新

雅思写作题目【通用4篇】-最新

雅思写作题目【通用4篇】在平凡的学习、工作、生活中,大家都经常看到作文的身影吧,写作文可以锻炼我们的独处习惯,让自己的'心静下来,思考自己未来的方向。

怎么写作文才能避免踩雷呢?它山之石可以攻玉,以下内容是为您带来的4篇《雅思写作题目》,如果能帮助到您,将不胜荣幸。

雅思写作题目篇一1、偏远地区考试松。

其实,以前考雅思的人不多的时候,一些偏远考点可能人数少确实会相对松一些。

但现在雅思处于全国爆满的状态,不管什么考场人都不少,所以标准都一样。

2、考官的问题有正确答案。

在雅思口语对话中,你可能会犯语法错误或发错音,但就内容而言,是没有对错的!雅思口语考察大家的交流能力,只要自圆其说即可。

3、语速越快越好。

考官不仅会听考生语言是否流畅,也要听是否连贯。

所以即使考生的语速很快,但如果不断重复,而且还出现很多逻辑错误,同样也得不了高分。

4、像老外一样讲话。

当你在使用第二语言时,很多因素会影响你的表达文化背景、所受教育、母语的语音系统等。

因此你完全没有必要非要像外国人一样讲话。

1、首先按照口语机经将话题整理出来,大约30个不到,整理好之后按照这些topic逐个写提纲,接下来就是要用准确的表达来将这些提纲串成完整的句子。

2、在地道短语和词汇上可以参考十天,注意是参考短语和单词而不是照着背句子。

可以常用过渡词,比如with regard to…。

as far as i’m concerned…。

. 显得你在思考,整个对话有逻辑。

3、拒绝内容空洞,要细节化。

比如说描述一个度假胜地三亚,你可以这样说:那里的气候很好,可以穿漂亮的裙子;那里阳光充足,可以在沙滩上晒日光浴;那里海水很蓝,很多漂亮的鱼,还能冲浪等等……4、每天坚持读英语1小时。

主要训练的是fluency and coherence。

建议在阅读时,每天认准2篇文章,读到烂为止,要读出感觉读出速度。

这就达到目的了。

5、找外教或者口语比自己好的partner练习,可以帮助指导对错6、烤鸭备考的时候一定要用自己身边的素材。

新东方雅思写作之小作文ppt

新东方雅思写作之小作文ppt
• 信息描述的逻辑和顺序
Task 1 Coherence and Cohesion
• 7分:a range of cohesive devices • 6分:use cohesive devices effectively • 5分:inadequate, inaccurate cohesive devices
About me
• 芬兰/荷兰硕士 • 校级国际奖学金获得者 • TKT证书持有者 • 高级教师资格证持有者 • 西安新东方Teaching Pro成员 • 西安新东方国外部成熟教师赛课三等奖 • 雅思听力8.5分,口语7.5,总分7.5分
Unit 1 考试介绍
主讲人:Sophia
目录
• 考试介绍 • 评分标准
3.3饼图 4.7地图 5.5线图 6.2地图
1.13饼图 2.3柱图 3.10柱图 4.14表格 5.12饼图 6.7表格
1.18柱图 2.10线图 3.15柱图 4.21线图 5.19流程图 6.23地图
1.20线图 2.24饼图 3.24线图 4.26表柱混合 5.24表柱混合 6.30柱状图
• 词汇的复杂性
Task 1 Lexical Resources
• 7分: occasional errors • 6分: some errors,do not imped communication • 5分: noticeable errors, cause some difficulty for the reader
•C5T1T2 •Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

雅思新东方范文

雅思新东方范文

雅思新东方范文The Impact of Technology on Modern Society。

In today's modern society, technology plays a crucial role in shaping our lives and the way we interact with the world. From the way we communicate, to the way we work and even the way we entertain ourselves, technology has had a profound impact on every aspect of our lives. In this essay, we will explore the various ways in which technology has influenced modern society and discuss both the positive and negative effects it has had.One of the most significant ways in which technologyhas impacted modern society is in the realm of communication. With the advent of smartphones, social media, and instant messaging, we are now able to connect with people from all over the world in an instant. This has not only made it easier for us to stay in touch with friendsand family, but has also revolutionized the way we do business and collaborate with colleagues. However, the riseof social media has also led to concerns about privacy and the spread of misinformation, highlighting the need for responsible use of these technologies.In addition to communication, technology has also had a major impact on the way we work. The rise of automation and artificial intelligence has led to significant changes in the job market, with many traditional roles being replaced by machines. While this has led to increased efficiency and productivity in many industries, it has also raisedconcerns about job security and the impact on the workforce. As a result, there is a growing need for retraining and upskilling to ensure that workers are able to adapt to the changing demands of the modern workplace.Furthermore, technology has also transformed the way we entertain ourselves. With the rise of streaming servicesand on-demand content, we now have access to a vast arrayof entertainment options at our fingertips. This has not only changed the way we consume media, but has also had a profound impact on the entertainment industry as a whole. However, the rise of digital entertainment has also raisedconcerns about the impact on traditional media and the need to ensure that creators are fairly compensated for their work.While technology has undoubtedly brought about many positive changes in modern society, it has also raised a number of challenges that need to be addressed. From concerns about privacy and misinformation, to the impact on the job market and traditional industries, there are a number of issues that need to be carefully considered as we continue to embrace new technologies. As such, it is important for us to approach these advancements with a critical eye and consider the potential consequences of our actions.In conclusion, technology has had a profound impact on modern society, shaping the way we communicate, work, and entertain ourselves. While this has brought about many positive changes, it has also raised a number of challenges that need to be carefully considered. By approaching these advancements with a critical eye, we can ensure that we areable to harness the benefits of technology while mitigating its potential drawbacks.。

剑桥雅思9真题+解析-Test1写作

剑桥雅思9真题+解析-Test1写作

剑桥雅思9真题+解析-Test1写作task1雅思写作名师点题:地图题以及一些工程图表题是雅思考试中比较“另类”的话题。

考生接触较少,因此会产生一定的恐惧心理。

在总结这类地图和表格题的信息时,考生可遵循以下两个步骤:首先要弄清楚地图的方位顺序,其次要对比必要的信息,此外,考生还需要持别注意时态的应用。

雅思写作高分范文:The two drawings illustrate the changes of the same island before and after the construction ofsome transport and service buildings.It is clear that before development, the horizontal island which is about 260 meters long has a Few trees on both east and west sides. Furthermore, on the west edge, a small beach is located for tourism in the future.The layout changes tremendously after buildings are constructed in almost the whole island. The trees on the east side are kept for the natural view.However, the west trees are surrounded by some accommodation houses, with a footpath linked to the beach where a swimming zone is closely connected, Next to the western accommodation, there is a reception building around which a vehicle track road heading to the south pier for tourist sailing is just paved. Onthe opposite side of the pier, a restaurant stands at the north side near the seashore. The center of, the island is also designed to supply housing for tourists. In sum, comparing the two drawings,tremendous developments have been evident.These developments make the whole island crowded with modern facilities, which may cause damages to the environment.作文结构分析:范文由四段组成:第一段为引言段,主要介绍该图表展示的是什么方面的信息;第二段对改建之前的岛屿进行描述;第三段对改建之后岛屿的设施和交通进行描述:最后一段对两个图表体现出来的总体特点(overview)进行归纳,同时也表达了对岛屿环境的担忧。

雅思词汇下载

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雅思c13t1大作文

雅思c13t1大作文

雅思c13t1大作文Task:Many towns and cities constructed in previous centuries are suitable for life at that time, and cause many problems today. Describe the problems it may cause and give the possible solution.解析:这就是一道report类作文题,不须要学生就某个观点展开讨论,但建议学生描绘一种现象及其产生的问题,然后明确提出解决方案,与通常意义上的报告有些相似,因此我们将这种题型定义为report题型。

如何描写某一现象/事物可能引起的问题?或者说,我们应该从哪些方面去寻找这些问题?现在即将给大家一个示范,看看三层次理论究竟如何具体使用。

本题涉及的问题是:以前的城市都是按照当时的历史条件和生活需求来建造的,现在产生了很多问题,如何解决这些问题?物质层次:衣食住行。

过去不须要大型超市,现在须要;过去不须要宽广的街道,现在须要;过去不须要地铁和机场,现在须要。

这些属物质层次的.范畴。

心理层次:休闲娱乐。

过去不需要高级电影院,现在需要;过去不需要公共图书馆/博物馆,现在需要;过去不需要大型广场,现在需要。

这些属于心理层次的范畴。

社会层次:环境与社会。

过去不须要区分居住区、工业区和商业区,现在须要;过去(也许)不须要城市中心花园,现在须要;过去不须要废品回收站,现在须要。

这些属社会层次的范畴。

大家看看,如果我们有一条明确的思维线索,我们就不会再感觉头脑空空,或者感觉头脑混乱,按照这个思路写下去,既有很多内容,又能确保逻辑性,同时解决无话可说和思绪混乱两大写作难题。

Sample answer:Many cities and towns built a few hundred years ago have become obsolete now, no matter how brilliant they used to be, for they are no longer suitable for life today.In my view, these cities and towns may cause three kinds of problems. At the basic level, they can no longer provide satisfactory conditions for our modern existence. A bit more than 100 years ago, people did not use buses or cars, so the city did not have broad streets; people did not travel by train or airplane, so the city was not equipped with any railway station or airport; most people shopped in the stores near their homes, so the city did not haveto have shopping malls or supermarkets. As more and more people rush into urban areas, the city has expanded with the population, and modern urban people would find themselves unable to survive without the broad streets, the train, the airplane and the supermarket. Meanwhile, cities and towns built centuries ago do not have enough entertainment and sports facilities available to contemporary city dwellers who, relieved of the manual labor by the technological advances, suddenly find they have a great amount of free time. For example, these cities and towns are not likely to have 3-D or IMAX movie theaters for movie fans, or huge stadiums for sports fans. Consequently, people may find their life in such cities and towns are most boring and tedious. Finally, the cities and towns constructed long time ago cannot possibly have anticipated the negative effects of environmental issues brought over by our modern life, so they usually have residence area, industrial area and business area all mixed up without separating them. This is, of course, unbearable to our urban life style today.While the century-aged cities and towns may carry much cultural and historical value, they must be re-constructed in the interest of people living in them today. The city infrastructure must be reshaped and include such facilities as shopping centers, sports stadiums, wide streets and pavements and provide services like metro, train, and airplane. And to minimize the unfavorable effects of modern life on urban populace, the cities and towns should be set the areas apart by their respective functions.。

2023年6月3日雅思大作文示范写作

2023年6月3日雅思大作文示范写作

2023年6月3日雅思大作文示范写作老人缺乏锻炼的原因与解决方法一、2023年6月3日雅思大作文题目Doctors encourage older people to take regular exercise, but few of them take enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what can be done to encourage them to take exercise?二、范文及解析IntroductionTaking regular exercise, as is universally acknowledged, plays midwife to helping old people keep physical fitness, while most of them, in spite of strong recommendation from doctors, still fail to take ample exercises. Behind such a ticklish problem, from my own perspective, are three predominant factors and viable solutions are in desperate need to avert the bleak future.解析本次task 2是新考题,但是整体难度并不大,审题注意限定词older people;play midwife to v.促成;帮助;ticklish adj.不安定的;难对付的;viable adj.可望成功的,切实可行的;avert v.防止,避免;bleak adj.不乐观的;Body 1Primarily, much as many elders are pleased to enjoy their twilight years, it does not look feasible since most youngsters, bread winners in families, are swamped with work under this cut-throat competition, under which circumstance, their parents will voluntarily help them with chores and minister to their grandchildren. Consequently, hardly do they have sufficient time to take sports. Another major contributing factor would have much to do with the transformed lifestyles of the elderly. Unlike the past when people have limited forms of entertainment, the current digital era is saturated with intriguing activities, ranging from surfing the internet to shooting off to see amusing videos, which tightly grip the old's attention. Benefited from its online convenience and diversity, the old will be indisposed to step out for exercises. Undeniable is also the fact that the lack of tailored creational amenities in the vicinity of residence will dampen the old's zeal for taking sports. To illustrate, with a swimming pool being kilometers away, swimming would only be a wild wish.解析Causes:(1)年轻人忙碌,老人需要帮助照顾家庭,带孩子;(2)老人在现代生活中的生活方式也有明显变化;(3)缺乏适合老年人运动锻炼的基础设施;feasible adj.可行的,办得到的;be swamped with v.忙着做;忙的一塌糊涂;cut-throat adj.(竞争)残酷的,激烈的;minister to v.照顾;援助;be saturated with v.使充满,使饱和;intriguing adj.非常有趣的,引人入胜的;grip v.使感兴趣,吸引住(某人)的注意;be indisposed to v.不愿意;tailor v.定做;迎合,使适应;amenity n.便利设施;vicinity n.周围地区,邻近地区,附近;dampen v.减弱,抑制;Body 2In order to address the prickly problem of inadequate physical exercise among elderly, the government should play a leading role by earmarking funds to proffering more age-appropriate sports facilities with either installing handrails or perfecting walking path, which are expected to give the old easier access to recreational areas, opening up more opportunities for them to join in activities like jogging and hiking. Apart from fiscal policy from the government, disseminating information through public service advertising, community centers and senior organizations is also of tangible boons in boosting the awareness concerning the significance of physical health. Besides, young adults, instead of being boomerang children, are supposed to shoulder more family responsibility for the care of older people is firmly within the domain of the family.解析Solutions:(1)政府起主导作用,投资完善运动设施,定制一些适合老年人锻炼的器材;(2)宣传以提升老人锻炼的思想意识;(3)年轻人要学会承担更大的家庭责任;prickly adj.多刺的;棘手的;earmark vt.指定……的用途;划拨(款项);proffer v.递上;提供,提出;disseminate v.散布,传播(信息、知识等);tangible adj.明确的,真实的;boon n.裨益,优势,有用的东西;boomerang children 回归子女;啃老族;ConclusionIn conclusion, barriers for the lack of sufficient exercise among the older individuals are various and the thorny issue should not be downplayed. By tailoring exercise facilities and elevating their awareness, older generations will be more likely to engage in regular physical activities.解析总结前文信息;重申观点。

2023年12月雅思写作考试真题及范文解析

2023年12月雅思写作考试真题及范文解析

2023年12月雅思写作考试真题及范文解析英文回答:The topic for the December 2023 IELTS writing task is as follows: "Discuss the impact of technology on education."Technology has revolutionized the field of education, bringing about significant changes in how students learn and teachers teach. One major impact of technology on education is the accessibility of information. With the internet and various digital platforms, students now have access to a vast amount of knowledge at their fingertips. They can easily research and explore different subjects, enhancing their understanding and critical thinking skills.Additionally, technology has made learning more interactive and engaging. Multimedia tools such as videos, simulations, and virtual reality allow students to visualize complex concepts and make learning more enjoyable. This not only increases student motivation but also improves retention and comprehension.Furthermore, technology has facilitated distance learning and online education. Especially during the COVID-19 pandemic, online classes became the norm, enabling students to continue theireducation remotely. This flexibility in learning has made education more accessible to individuals who may have geographical or physical limitations.However, it is important to acknowledge the potential drawbacks of technology in education. Excessive use of technology can lead to distractions and reduced face-to-face interactions, affecting social skills and emotional development. Moreover, not all students have equal access to technology, creating a digital divide that may exacerbate existing educational inequalities.In conclusion, the impact of technology on education has been profound. It has opened up new possibilities for learning, making information more accessible and engaging. However, it is crucial to strike a balance and ensure that technology is used mindfully to maximize its benefits while addressing its potential drawbacks.中文回答:2023年12月雅思写作任务的主题是:“讨论科技对教育的影响”。

2011雅思考试资料大全

2011雅思考试资料大全

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1月29雅思写作真题回忆及解析

1月29雅思写作真题回忆及解析

1月29雅思写作真题回忆及解析
2015年1月29雅思写作真题回忆及解析
Task 1 diagram
The diagram describes the production of cannedfruit.
分析:本月第三场考试,加试题目为流程图,步骤非常多,但不难理解,描述的是如何去制作罐头水果。

感谢热心网友和同事提供的流程图。

该图画的`也不知道什么鬼,看起来像小苹果,那我们假装它就是apple好了:)
回忆二:
Task1:流程图
关于罐头梨的制作(树上摘下,运到工厂,挑选,入冷库,根据重量分级开始制作,去皮,去核,果肉装罐头加糖水,果汁,密封,整个罐头煮熟,冷却后的成品贴牌打包进超市)
【分析】
被动句的正确使用
有关于制作罐头梨的相关动词积累
Task2:
Scientists and tourists travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. Doyou think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
【分析】
很多同学初看到这道题都觉得很难,其实,静下心,仔细看,会发现这道题中可以借助的要点(同时也是必须踩到的要点)有很多:你的文中必须要同时考虑对scientists和tourists分别有什么好处这道题中的旅游景点有特别之处:
1)remote:可以和自己原来生存的环境进行区别
2)natural environment: 自然环境,比如题目中提到的南极
该道题好处大于坏处(即同意题目的观点)更容易写。

该道题好处大于坏处(即同意题目的观点)更容易写。

新东方版:2014年1月18日雅思写作真题

新东方版:2014年1月18日雅思写作真题

⽆忧考为⼤家整理了新东⽅版:2014年1⽉18⽇雅思写作真题,仅供参考!! Task 1 The line graph shows the average price of tickets at a theatre and he bar charts shows the average percentage of tickets sold in 2010 and 2011. 思路: 两个图各作描述,在恰当时捕捉到相关性,加以说明即可。

图1主要考察两个⽅⾯:1. 趋势的描写。

2. 趋势变化的衔接。

线形图:2010年第⼀季度⾄⼆季度处于持平,之后急剧上升,达到值(reached the highest point), ⽽且以10.5镑的数值保持平稳3个季度(remained stable at the level of 10.5 pounds),经历波动后,在2011年最后⼀季度回复到原来的值(rose back to the peak)。

柱状图:在2010年前三季度保持平稳,在第四季度, 也就是价格的时候,急剧上升,达到值(around 70%)。

之后急剧下降(plunged),虽然在2011年第⼆季度票价是的(although the prices were the highest in Q2 in 2011),但销量下降到最低值,之后在第四季度,回升到值。

推荐连接词:after which(句内),before(句中或句⾸), after(句⾸),After that(两句之间)。

Task 2 Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem? 很容易判断该题属于理由建议类题型。

写作中,原因和解决⽅案⽐重分配⽐例可⾃由分配。

剑桥雅思写作13test1真题解析及范文

剑桥雅思写作13test1真题解析及范文

剑桥雅思写作13test1真题解析及范文为了帮助大家能够多多参考一些有价值的雅思写作备考资料,下面小编给大家带来剑桥雅思写作13test1真题解析及范文,希望你们喜欢。

剑桥雅思写作13test1task1真题解析【题目+解题思路+范文】题目:WRITING TASK 1You should spend abo20 minutes on this task.The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.解题思路:1. 图表类型:地图题2. 主体段时态:一般过去时3. 题目要求:两幅地图分别展示了2007年和2010年去城市医院的通行道路。

选择一些主要的特点来描述并作出一些相关的对比。

4. 描述重点:1)2007年地图中的city hospital的东南风是staff and public car park,而在2010年这个地方变为了staff car park。

2)2007年Hospital Rd 两边的六个bus stops 没有了,在道路西边建造了较大的bus station,并有道路通往北边和南边两个环岛,分别与围绕医院的ring road 和city road相连。

范文:SAMPLE ANSWERThis is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band5.5 score. Here is the examiner’s comment:The candidate has identified all the key features (hospital, ring road, new public car park, staff car park and bus station in 2010) but the descriptions are not always accurate e.g. [two features that still remained. This two features are City Hospital and staff carpark] whereas the staff car park was formerly a car park for both staff and public, while the mention of the bus station is not developed. Organisation is clear, however, with some good use of cohesive devices [According to | Apart from | The further additional features], although there is an error in the use of reference pronouns [This/These two features]. The range of vocabulary is sufficient for the task [two different years | features | remained | additional], though [features] is over-used.A spelling error is noted in the second line [sourrounded] but this does not cause any difficulty for the reader; similarly, the use of [around-turn] can be easily understood as ‘roundabout’. There is a mix of simple and complex sentences, mainly used accurately.Two maps illustrate, the way to get to a city hospital of two different years (2007 and 2010).According to both maps, the main features which is city hospital is sourrounded by Ring Road. In these two maps, there have been two features that still remained. This two features are City Hospital and staff car park. Apart from these two features there are some features that shows on 2010 map but haven’t shown on 2007 map. The additional features that appear on the map of 2010 are public car parte which located on the east-side of the city hospital. The further additional features are two around-turn on the hospital Rd. which can lead to the bus station.Overall, there are two major features that never change on both 2007 and 2010 map. These features are city hospital andstaff car park. However, there are some additional features that appear on the map of 2010 but not on 2007. These features are public car park, bus station and two around-turns.剑桥雅思写作13test1task2真题解析【题目+解题思路+范文】题目:WRITING TASK 2You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.解题思路:1. 话题和题型分类社会文化类单边讨论题型2. 题目分析居住在一个你不得不说外语的国家可能会导致严重的社交问题以及实际问题。

新东方雅思写作讲义

新东方雅思写作讲义

雅思写作完全攻略Total Solution of IELTS Writing俞伟国-2009-雅思考试作文部分题型课时安排:Marking SystemEssay WritingIntroductionBodyConclusionStructureReport Writing近年雅思考试中国大陆考区作文部分得分情况(From Mat Clark)Band4 or below: 15%-20% Band5: 60% Band6: 15%-20% Band7: <5% Band8 or above: RareKey Language Features in Marking SystemTask Response:1. No evidence of digression/irrelevant content2. Adequate Words3. Position + Supporting Ideas + DevelopmentCoherence and Cohesion1.Logical overall structure2.Topic Sentence3.Cohesive devicesLexical Resource1.Accurateness2.Authentic Vocabulary (Less-common Vocabulary)3.VarietyGrammatical Range and Accuracy1.Accuratenessplex Sentence3.Variety欢迎光临俞老师的BLOG: /yuweiguo/Chapter One-Essay Writing第一章. 议论文完全攻略___________________________________________________________________________________________________Part One-Introduction-闪亮开篇--Version 5.7-Structure of Introduction1. Background Information(1). Lead-in Sentence (Introduce the subject of the topic)(2). Public Opinion2. Statement(State your position)1.主体背景(Background Information)(1) In the last century, the firs t man walking on the moon said: “It is a big step for mankind”. However, some people think it made little difference to people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2006.4.8)______________________________, when ________________________________________________________________ for the first time, he _____________________________________________________ that it was a great step for mankind. Nowadays, however, some people believe that it actually _____________________________________________________Language Skill: Paraphrase方法之一-具体化(笼统概念-缩小范围)(2) Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizers and better machinery. However, some people think the methods used to do this may have negative effects on local communities and be dangerous to human health. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2005.2.5)Nowadays people can _______________ food far more _______________ _________________________ more _______________ fertilizers and machinery. Nevertheless, some people hold the methods used may ____________________________________________________________________________________________________Language Skill: Paraphrase 方法之二-单词转换(优先考虑三大词类:)Paraphrase方法之三-句型转换(方法1 )(方法2 )(3) Many people say teachers should only teach students academic subjects;Others say teachers should also take the responsibility of teaching students to judge what is right and wrong. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your own opinion. (2006.3.18)Some people hold the opinion that _______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ While some argue that _________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________Language Skill: 句型转换(方法3 ) (4) Some people believe that air travel should be prohibited as it uses up fuel resources and causes pollution. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? You should use your own experience to support your argument. (2006.2.18) According to some __________, air travel should be _________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________Language Skill: Paraphrase思路顺序:单词转换>句型转换>具体化(5) Some people believe that scientific research should be conducted by the government rather by private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2005.12.10)Some people propose that______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法4 )(6). In modern society, there are more and more old people, do you think its benefits outweigh its disadvantages? (2006.2.12)____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________Language Skill:信息量偏少的Topic Introduction写作对策追根溯源法-Factor(s) [因]-Phenomenon (Subject) [果]2. 总论点(Statement)Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?Average Example:In my opinion, the parents should not be punished.Decent Example:In my opinion, the parents should not be punished except that (unless) they are those who purposefullyteach the child to behave badly.Topic-Some people think that it is beneficial for students to go to private secondary schools. But others feel that it has negative effects on them. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your opinion. (2006.6.24)From my point of view, it is an ideal choice to send children to private middle schools ______________________________Exercise1: Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法5 )Exercise2: Topic-Should college students be encouraged to take up part-time jobs?____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法6 )3. Report-Introduction写作对策Far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out while people have noticed this problem for a long time. Why people do little action about it? Give your suggestions on how to solve this situation. (2005.12.3) Today, the phenomenon that ____________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________has aroused growing concern. In my opinion, a lot of factors contribute to the problem and in this article, I would like to ___________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________*This phenomenon, as far as I am concerned, can be attributed to the following causes, which could be regarded as the apple of discord.Structure of Report Introduction1. Lead-in Sentence (Paraphrase the first sentence in the topic)2. Plan A: Essay StatementPlan B: Linking SentenceExercise1: The development of technologies is causing environmental problems. Some people believe that the solution is for everyone to adopt a simpler way of life while others say that technologies can solve these problems. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your own opinion. (2009.2.12)Exercise2: Topic-Pressure on the school and university students is increasing and students are pushed to study hard when they are young. Do you regard the phenomenon as positive or negative? (2005.4.2)Exercise3: Topic-Today, in many countries, there is insufficient respect to old people. What are the reasons? What problems it might cause? (2006.7.8)欢迎光临俞老师的BLOG: /yuweiguo/Part Two-Body-中流砥柱--Version 6.5-分论点的要求:1.字数要求:One complex sentence preferred. Around 20 words.2. 分论点四项基本原则:(1). 内容原则:分论点应该体现为一种_____________________________并且与总论点为_________________关系。

IELTS雅思考试作文新东方薛鹏之快餐对于家庭和社会带来的良影响

IELTS雅思考试作文新东方薛鹏之快餐对于家庭和社会带来的良影响

IELTS雅思考试作文之快餐对于家庭和社会带来的良影响题目:In many countries traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 快餐的流行,快餐对于家庭和社会带来不良影响是否认同?思路拓展:首段:背景介绍+有待反驳观点+写作目的二段:让步快餐的弊端:家庭影响;不在家里做法和吃饭,使得家庭关系不如过去亲密,使得很多主妇失去了锻炼厨艺的机会。

因为家人没有一起买菜,洗菜,做菜,洗碗的生活的乐趣。

社会影响:垃圾食品,营养价值很低,含有糖分,脂肪,热量,人吃了快餐会危害健康,整个社会的健康字数下降。

三段:快餐的利好:快餐有其流行的理由以及价值;适应了快节奏的生活需求,给人们的生活带来极大的方便,尤其对于学生以及职员。

其实说快餐没有营养价值也是不客观的,KFC 等快餐店不断推出的套餐系类包括了更多水果蔬菜等搭配的营养元素。

快餐店一流的服务,优雅的环境,美味的食品也是很多人享受悠闲时光的好去处。

结尾:观点不是完全正确的。

长春新东方雅思写作小鹏哥原创范文:With the ever-accelerated pace of modern life, international fast foods have invaded almost every individual’s life. Currently, many regular fast food eaters prefer to eat out in KFC rather than eat traditional foods at home. Some people maintain that the popularization of the fast foods exert a detrimental influence on both families and community. To voice my opinion, fast foods have pros and cons.Indeed, the downsides triggered by eating too much fast foods should never be ignored. Seen from the personal angle, the family bonds are not as intimate as it used to be if all the family members are in no mood to enjoy family meals. Although cooking at home might betroublesome and time-consuming, it offers unique happiness our lives need and healthy meals our bodies need. On the part of the society, in terms of nutrition, fast food is far from satisfactory. It usually does not compose a balanced diet and is low in nutritional value. In this sense, those regular fast food eaters are doomed to suffer from the decline of health index, consequently, the basic quality of a nation’s population will also decline.Nevertheless, under no circumstances can we lose sight of the immense value of fast foods. For a start, the majority of the city dwellers would rather choose fast good as their staple diet, as life at fast pace does not leave them much time and energy to prepare a sumptuous meal at home after a day’s work. Furthermore, it is not objective to believe that all the fast foods are low in nutritional value, actually, many set meals include wholesome ingredients such as fruits and vegetables. To make the final point, western food exerts a peculiar fascination on the younger generation. Meanwhile, KFC or Mcdonald restaurants’ well-mannered service and super-cozy environment attract many regular eaters at their leisure time.Overall, my view is that it is rather superficial to say that fasts foods only have negative social or family impacts.(329)。

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1月30日雅思大作文解析—雅思写作培训【郑州新东方】
写作话题
In some cities, the government has tried to reduce traffic. For instance, they imposed a congestion tax during rush hour. Do you think this development is positive or negative? 在一些城市,政府试图缓解交通压力,例如,征收高峰期通行费,你认为有力还是有弊?(2016年1月30日) 【作家立场】我支持司机们应当支付一定的费用,取得“城市高峰通行许可证”,才能在高峰期间上路。

思路拓展
司机付费的利好:①这种做法可以有效地缓解交通拥堵的压力,同时,这可以有效地缓解空气污染和噪音污染。

②这种做法可以节省职场人士上下班的交通时间。

司机付费的弊端:①即使是每天付少量费用,也会增加司机经济的压力,但是,我想反驳的是:等候的时间的油料消耗可能比支付的交通通行费更高。

范文赏析
【首段】背景介绍+ 作家立场
Going through the rush hours is a tiresome business. The prevalence of various public transport has led to severe traffic
congestion,especially during the rush hours. Being stuck in the long queues of vehicles seems to be a big headache for many city dwellers. Personally speaking, it is about time governments adopted effective measures, drivers should be charged when they need to drive out in a heavy traffic, which will exert a really positive impact on reducing the serious traffic conditions.
【二段】第一次支持作家立场
For a start, paying some permission fees could decrease the incidence of going through the busy traffic. To be more specific, some drivers would be unwilling to drive their cars in order to save money when they have no urgent things. Hence,this will mitigate the pressure of heavy traffic congestion. Further, the decreasing number of cars will also purify the air and reduce the noise. As a result, the living quality of the whole city will be greatly optimized, citizens will enjoy a cleaner environment.
【三段】第二次支持作家立场
This debate reminds me of my own city. Our city government has fewer policies in terms of tackling the pressure of traffic congestion, which negatively influences people’s normal work. The large amount of release of exhaust gas has deteriorated the environment. Even worse, long time wait will ruin the drivers’moods. Consequently, some people
might fail to happily perform their working tasks when they arrive at the workplace. By contrast, the fee from drivers increases the governmental income so that more financial budget could be allocated to perfecting the traffic conditions. Specifically, the government could build more over-bridges to reduce the pressure of traffic jam.
【四段】让步向司机收费的弊端+ 加以反驳
Granted, I have to concede that this policy might impose much pressure upon the drivers economically. If they pay even limited amount of money every day, then there will be large sums of money as a whole. What I want to rebut, however, is that in time of a traffic jam, the oil consumption is much more than that of driving a slowly moving car. The cost of gasoline may be even expensive than the counterpart people pay for driving permission.
【尾段】再次亮明观点
In closing, I re-affirm my conviction that it is worthwhile to ask for driving permission fees when the traffic is busy.
经典语料
1. is a tiresome business 是一件很让人心烦的事情
2. the prevalence of various public transport 各种公共交通工具的普及
3. serious traffic congestion = severe traffic jam = a heavy traffic 严重的交通拥堵
4. driving permission 交通通行费
5. should be charged 应该被收费
6. the rush hours 上下班的高峰期
7. drive through 乘车穿过
8. impose much pressure upon the drivers economically 增加了司机的经济压力
9. exert a really positive impact on 对于……施加利好的影响
10. decrease the incidence of 减少……发生的机率
11. mitigate the pressure of heavy traffic congestion 缓解交通拥堵的压力
12. release of exhaust gas 废气的释放
13. ruin the drivers’moods 使司机的心情变坏
14. Charging traffic jam fees will definitely help ease the pressure of heavy traffic. 收取交通阻碍费一定可以帮助缓解交通的压力。

15. During the busy traffic time,it is a wise attempt to encourage drivers to pay a certain amount of fees to perfect current traffic conditions. 为改善当前的交通状况,在交通高峰时段,向司机收取一定的费用是明智的尝试。

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