1月30日雅思大作文解析—雅思写作培训【郑州新东方】

1月30日雅思大作文解析—雅思写作培训【郑州新东方】

写作话题

In some cities, the government has tried to reduce traffic. For instance, they imposed a congestion tax during rush hour. Do you think this development is positive or negative? 在一些城市，政府试图缓解交通压力，例如，征收高峰期通行费，你认为有力还是有弊?(2016年1月30日) 【作家立场】我支持司机们应当支付一定的费用，取得“城市高峰通行许可证”，才能在高峰期间上路。

思路拓展

司机付费的利好：①这种做法可以有效地缓解交通拥堵的压力，同时，这可以有效地缓解空气污染和噪音污染。②这种做法可以节省职场人士上下班的交通时间。

司机付费的弊端：①即使是每天付少量费用，也会增加司机经济的压力，但是，我想反驳的是：等候的时间的油料消耗可能比支付的交通通行费更高。范文赏析

【首段】背景介绍+ 作家立场

Going through the rush hours is a tiresome business. The prevalence of various public transport has led to severe traffic

congestion，especially during the rush hours. Being stuck in the long queues of vehicles seems to be a big headache for many city dwellers. Personally speaking, it is about time governments adopted effective measures, drivers should be charged when they need to drive out in a heavy traffic, which will exert a really positive impact on reducing the serious traffic conditions.

【二段】第一次支持作家立场

For a start, paying some permission fees could decrease the incidence of going through the busy traffic. To be more specific, some drivers would be unwilling to drive their cars in order to save money when they have no urgent things. Hence，this will mitigate the pressure of heavy traffic congestion. Further, the decreasing number of cars will also purify the air and reduce the noise. As a result, the living quality of the whole city will be greatly optimized, citizens will enjoy a cleaner environment.

【三段】第二次支持作家立场

This debate reminds me of my own city. Our city government has fewer policies in terms of tackling the pressure of traffic congestion, which negatively influences people’s normal work. The large amount of release of exhaust gas has deteriorated the environment. Even worse, long time wait will ruin the drivers’moods. Consequently, some people

might fail to happily perform their working tasks when they arrive at the workplace. By contrast, the fee from drivers increases the governmental income so that more financial budget could be allocated to perfecting the traffic conditions. Specifically, the government could build more over-bridges to reduce the pressure of traffic jam.

【四段】让步向司机收费的弊端+ 加以反驳

Granted, I have to concede that this policy might impose much pressure upon the drivers economically. If they pay even limited amount of money every day, then there will be large sums of money as a whole. What I want to rebut, however, is that in time of a traffic jam, the oil consumption is much more than that of driving a slowly moving car. The cost of gasoline may be even expensive than the counterpart people pay for driving permission.

【尾段】再次亮明观点

In closing, I re-affirm my conviction that it is worthwhile to ask for driving permission fees when the traffic is busy.

经典语料

1. is a tiresome business 是一件很让人心烦的事情

2. the prevalence of various public transport 各种公共交通工具的普及

3. serious traffic congestion = severe traffic jam = a heavy traffic 严重的交通拥堵