广东省深圳市某发展有限公司高考英语二轮(原创)复习课件：基础写作--高效解题密招--调查报告
广东省深圳市高考英语二轮(原创版对答案)复习课件：基
However, other students are strongly opposed to students having mobile phones at school, stating that it’s simply a waste of time and energy to play games, watch movies and chat online. Furthermore, it distracts students’ attention, affects their studies and bothers their normal life. Worse still, the radiation from mobile phones is extremely harmful to their physical health.
观点对比
典型例题
Last Saturday our class had a heated discussion about whether middle school students should have mobile phones. Some of my classmates are in favor of students using mobile phones, claiming that it’s convenient for them to contact their parents and friends or consult their teachers when faced with problems. Also, they can have access to learning resources online especially when they have trouble with studies as well as keep up with the latest current affairs whenever and wherever.
广东省深圳市高考英语二轮(原创版对答案)复习课件：基础写作高效解题密招现象分析
课堂练习
When coming across an English new word, an increasing number of middle school students tend to consult an electronic dictionary to find out its meaning and usage. Using an electronic dictionary does provide students with convenience and meanwhile saves time, which helps raise learning efficiency. However, if students become too dependent on the electronic dictionary, they will surely lose the opportunity to guess the meaning of a new word according to the context.
Personally, I think sensibly using an electronic dictionary can make it easier for us students to learn English and arouse our interest in English study. Meanwhile, it is my suggestion that students should avoid the harmful effects of overusing the electronic dictionary and learn to apply what we have learned to guessing the meaning of a new word.
广东省深圳市高考英语二轮(原创版对答案)复习课件：基础写作高效解题密招采访报道
采访报道
典型例题
Last weekend, I had an interview with Kelly Lam, a professor of psychology, talking about the Chinese students’ opinions on sharing feelings. In China, more than 30% of the students are unwilling to share their feelings no matter when they are delighted or worried.
However, such camps are mainly organized to visit tourist attractions, which provides few chances for the students to communicate with foreigners. Consequently, he suggested that parents should pay more attention to the schedules of the summer camps and choose them wisely.
☆课外作业
Last weekend, I had an interview with Professor Li about the issue of overseas summer camps. According to Professor Li, an increasing number of Chinese parents choose to send their children to attend overseas summer camps, aiming to improve their oral English. There is no doubt that such activities will help to broaden children’s horizons.
广东省深圳市高考英语二轮(原创版对答案)复习课件：基础写作高效解题密招讨论发言稿
What’s more, it is also a good way to make more friends with other students, which is definitely beneficial to cultivating our ability to communicate with others. (得出结论) Therefore, in order to develop all-round abilities, I call on all the students to participate in their favorite club activities.
课外作业
Dear boys and girls, I would like to share my ideas with you.
(提出论点) In my opinion, we middle school students should take an active part in various club activities. (进行论证) These activities can expand our knowledge and broaden our horizons. Not only can they enrich our life after class, but they can also reduce our academic pressure and develop our personal interest.
in a small town after graduating from college.
［陈述理由—论证］ First of all, there is less
pollution in a small town, and therefore I can
广东省深圳市高考英语二轮(原创版)复习课件：基础写作
(四)中文字数：高考中情景说明和写 作内容中的汉字，通常是200个左右。
(五)内容要点：自2008年以来，没有 设置开放性要点，内容要点都已完全 给出，考生只需考虑如何将所给信息 点合理组合，用五个英语句子完整连 贯地表达出来即可。
(六) 信息点数：写作内容中的信息点一般是 7~9个。值得注意的是，信息点只为“点”， 通常不用完整的汉语句子来表达。要求考生整 合信息，添加主语等其他必要成分，然后再用 英语将信息点完整准确地表达出来。
2011年
2010年
命题形式
中文信息点
题 材 《虎妈战歌》 政府禁烟
话 题 热点话题 热点话题
文体类型 图书介绍 墙报通讯
总 字 数 198
195
教育意义 中西教育 关注健康
方式
生活
省平均分 6.64分
7.04分
2009年
学生近视 考生健康 采访报道 205 爱护眼睛
7.07分
九条规律
(一)常考话题：与考生的学习和生活密切 相关，为考生所熟悉。 (二)主要文体：通讯报道、介绍类说明文。 但考生备考时，应练习各种文体，强化基 本功。 (三)命题形式：连续八年的写作内容均采 用在一大框中列出中文信息点的形式，且 这些写作内容一般可转换成表格形式，这 种命题形式能使要点条理化，内容要点一 目了然。
高考命题揭秘
考情表解
2014年 2013年ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
2012年
命题形式
中文信息点
题 材 寻找time 移民火星 介绍传奇人物
twins
话 题 时事热点 时事热点 热点话题
文体类型 通讯报道 通讯报道 人物介绍
总 字 数 208
163
179
广东省深圳市高考英语二轮(原创版)复习课件：基础写作
7. lose the opportunity错失良机 8. raise learning efficiency提高学习效率 9. keep in shape保持好的身材 10. attach more importance to 更重视 11. deepen/strengthen their relationship增进感情 12. consult an electronic dictionary查电子词典
2. 当遇到英语生词时，越来越多的中 学生倾向于查电子词典，去弄清其意 义与用法。
When coming across an English new word, an increasing number of middle school students tend to consult an electronic dictionary to find out its meaning and usage.
现象分析
相关短语
晨读背诵
1. go on a diet/be on a diet节食 2. tend to lose weight有减肥的倾向 3. fail to concentrate无法集中精力 4. skip breakfast /supper不吃早/晚餐 5. solve the problems解决问题 6. settle disagreements /differences消除分歧
3. 使用电子词典的确能给学生带来方 便， 同时也节省时间，这有助于提 高学习效率。
Using an electronic dictionary does provide students with convenience and meanwhile saves time, which helps raise learning efficiency.
广东省深圳市某发展有限公司高考英语二轮(原创对答案)复习课件：写作基础--语言手段十种
语言表达手段十种(-)同位语手段1. The Mid-autumn Festival, one of the most important traditional festivals in China, falls on August 15th of the Lunar calendar every year.2・ Zhang Hai, a 22・year・old college student, rushed/dashed/ventured into the burning house three times to rescue a baby.（二）主题的呈现手段4・ The audience think highly of the program, claiming that the program, which has helped many common people realize their dreams, spreads positive energy amongpeople・ In their eyes, it is not only a TVprogram but also a public welfare activity.（四）比例的表达手段U5・ 28% of the interviewees are not willing to shop online, arguing that it is easy for them to buy the products of poor quality, and that their personal information may leak out.（五）排位的表达手段6・ Braveheart, one of the recently broadcast TV series ranks first among all the TV series.7. As an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students, Pm good at English, especially spoken English・8・ It is reported that there are currently seven billion people in the world, with China ranking the top most populated country of theworld and India, the second.（六）建议的表达手段9. It is suggested that a regulation which requires pets to have an identity card should be introduced・ In this case, if an accident happens, the pefs master can't avoid responsibility, and the problem will be relieved to some extent.10. The aim of the program is to help common people realize their dreams, ignite their passion for life, and even change their life・（八）原因的表达手段al reasons accounting for my choice of science. First, scienee graduates are in greater demand than art ones in China. Second, the science major can help me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a scientist. Third, my parents wish me to study science at college because they believe I will have a brighter future as a scienee student・ Last but not the least, my physics teacher is my role model, whose influence on me have a lot to do with mydecision ・（九）对比的表达手段12. Compared with a written diary1 3. Chinese teenagers show an interest in overseas studies, while Japanese teenagers are the least willing to study abroad・或Compared with Chinese teenagers who show an interest in overseas studies, Japanese teenagers are the least willing to study abroad・（十）举例的表达手段\ ----------------------------------------14. Also, in order to improve our English and get more students interested in English, I intend to organize some activities at school like lectures and English parties and inter-school ones such as English debate competitions and speech contests・15- Actually there is a lot I can do to share mother's daily burden. For example, I can help my mother with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least preparebreakfast myself after school.The School League Committee & Volunteer Association organized a donation activity （主题）with the theme of showing love for the poor students in the Central Hall of the first floor of our school from 3 pm to 5 p.m. on September 27th , 2014,（目的）The purpose of the activity was to cultivate the students' sense of love and help the poverty- stricken students from mountainous areas of Daliang SichuanProvince to continue their study.（百分比）80% of the students in our school took an active part in the activity, donating more than 10,000 items,（举例）such as clothes, books, stationery and so on with Class 22, Senior 3 donating the most. An unnamed Senior 3 student spent 4000 yuan of his pocket money on medicine and stationery and donated them to the scene of the donation・ All of these items have been delivered to the Donation Station by the members of the Volunteer Association・3. Aiming to cultivate the good habit of protecting the environment, the Students3 * 5Union held a creative works competition with the theme of making good use of waste materials・。
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技巧点拨
1.注意审题，转换图表。撰写调查报告时，通常需要结合图表，观察、对比调查数 据，并把调查结果和数据转换为文字表达，并按写作内容给出的要点顺序进行写 作。
2. 确定时态，规范全文。引出报告结果或数据时，或发表议论和个人观点时，通常用 一般现在时。若出现具体的时间状语，如last year， next year，recently等时，应 恰当使用相应的时态。
16. put… in the second place把……放在第 二 17. arouse their interest激发了他们的兴趣 18.when it comes to service attitude当谈到 服务态度时
19. rank first place/rank first/be in the first place排在第一位 20. The differences may lie in the fact that…其差异可能在于……
3. 根据调查结果，大约一半的学生有困难的时候会去找他们的同学或朋友。 According to the survey， about half of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble.
4. 关于怎样用零花钱，不同的人有不同的选择。 Different persons may have different choices on how to spend pocket money.
☆课堂练习
Last week, we made a survey on how to spend your summer holiday among all the Senior Two and Senior Three students of our school. According to the survey, 96% of the Senior Two students will study while only 10% of the Senior Three students will study. And up to 78% of the Senior Three students plan to read extracurricular books and 72% of them want to go travelling.
6. account for/take up占(多少比例) 7. update the website更新网站 8. 70% of the girls 百分之七十的女生 9. next in line接下来；位居第二 10. compared with/to同……比起来
11. be in favor of…支持/赞成…… 12. as far as I’m concerned就我来说；据我所 13. have a lot in common有很多共同点 14. get along well with… 与……相处融洽 15. have a better understanding of更好地了解
survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols, while 48% of the boys favour sports stars. As the data shows， “parents” ranks second for the girls, but the fourth for the boys. However, the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. As for myself， Thomas Edison is my idol because his inventions have greatly changed our life.
男生 18% 11% 14% 48% 9%
[写作内容] 根据以上数据, 写一篇短文,内容包括： 1. 调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象； 2. 男、女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异； 3. “父母”在男、女生偶像中的排序差异； 4. 男女生在以“伟人”为偶像方面的异同； 5. 你的偶像及理由。
Last week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on “who is your ido。调查报告中多出现相同内容的描述或分析，为避免重复，建 议使用不同语言和句式表达同类信息。
典型例题
上周, 我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题, 在2600名 学生中进行了一次调查(survey)。以下是调查数 据：
偶像(idol) 伟人 父母 影视明星 体育明星 没有偶像
女生 18% 25% 50% 6% 1%
相关句式
1. 上周我们就“谁是你的偶像”在2，600名学生 中进行了调查。
Last week， we did a survey among 2, 600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”.
2. 最近我们团委进行了一次调查，其结果如下。
Recently our League Committee has carried out a survey，whose results are as follows.
调查报告
相关短语
晨读背诵
1.according to the survey根据这次调查 2.carry out/conduct/ do/make a survey进行调查 3.improve one’s grades提高成绩 4.read extracurricular books阅读课外书 5. as for how to至于怎样
5. 最近一项调查显示，学生在学习方式上是各有差异的。 A recent survey suggests that students are different from each other in learning styles.
6. 正如调查所显示的那样，酒后驾驶会导致严重事故。 As is shown in the survey，drunk driving may result in serious accidents.