2021届高考英语一轮复习题型集训之话题写作集训07 个人情感(解析版)

2021年高考英语题型集训之话题写作07

个人情感

1.假如你是高三2班的班长李华，得知新的外教Mr. Walton 将来你班任教English Writing 科目。请你给他写一份电子邮件，内容包括：

1.自我介绍，表示欢迎；

2.简单介绍班级情况；

3.表达对课程的期待。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.不得出现考生个人信息及学校名称。

【答案】

Dear Mr. Walton,

I am Li Hua, monitor of Class 2, Senior 3. I am writing on behalf of my class to extend our warm welcome to you. First, I'd like to introduce some information to you. Our class is made up of 52 students. And it has a harmonious study atmosphere, where students and teachers are friendly and have a good relationship. All of us are expecting to attend your English class. As we have a great interest in western culture, it would be wonderful if you have topics about it in class. Looking forward to you coming.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给即将来班级任教的外教Mr. Walton写一封邮件。

【详解】

第1步：假如你是高三2班的班长李华，得知新的外教Mr. Walton 将来你班任教English Writing 科目。请你给他写一份电子邮件，内容包括：1)自我介绍，表示欢迎；2）简单介绍班级情况；3）表达对课程的期待。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：monitor（班长）; on behalf of（代表）; warm welcome （热烈的欢迎）; be made up of（由……组成）; have a great interest in（在某方面有很大兴趣）; expect to do sth.（期待做某事）;look forward to （期待）

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：And it has a harmonious study atmosphere, where students and teachers are friendly and have a good relationship.中where引导非限制性定语从句；As we have a great interest in western culture, it would be wonderful if you have topics about it in class.中as引导原因状语从句，if引导条件状语从句。

2.刚刚过去的中秋节，恰逢国庆。请写一篇英文日记，记述自己与家人团聚的温情时刻，表达对祖国的美好祝愿。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Thursday, October 1 Fine

【答案】

Thursday, October 1 Fine

Today is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It’s very special, because it coincides with National Day.

My parents and I set out early for my grandparents’. Seeing our arrival, my grandparents were so happy. To my great joy, my uncle, who works outside all year, went back to see my grandparents too. It’s a day for family reunion! We spent time together having a big dinner, chatting and enjoying mooncakes.

We failed to appreciate the moon because of the cloudy weather. What a pity! Fortunately, CCTV Mid-Autumn Festival Gala comforted us greatly later.

I’m very proud of our peaceful and harmonious country. I have a high expectation that we will grow stronger and stronger. Happy birthday to you my homeland!

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一篇日记。

【详解】

第1步：根据提示可知，刚刚过去的中秋节，恰逢国庆。请写一篇英文日记，记述自己与家人团聚的温情时刻，表达对祖国的美好祝愿。