大学英语作文讲解

阐述型结构
• Marking up a book is indispensable to reading. First, it keeps you awake and read with deeper concentration. A great book, rich in ideas, demands much of your effort. You can’t let your eyes glide across the lines of a book and come up with an understanding of what you have read. In the second place, reading, if it is active, is thinking, and thinking tends to express itself in words, spoken or written. The marked book is usually the thought-through the author expressed.
Daydreaming a little
• “Daydreaming again, Barb? You will never amount to anything if you spend your time that way!” Many youngsters have heard words like those from their parents. But now some people are taking a fresh look at daydreaming, and think it may be a very healthy thing to do.
How to write TS
• • • • • • 主题句的构成：文章的主题+作者的观点 写好主题句的方法 1、一个完整的句子；2、内容要清楚； 3、内容要具体；4、不能是描写细节的句子 判断以下能否作主题句 How to read a novel. Anyone can learn how to read a novel. • TV is very important. TV plays an educational role in our daily life.
Bicycle—An Important Means of Transport in China
• 1、为什么自行车在中国这 样普及 • 2、和汽车相比较 • 3、自行车在中国的前途
Outline
• • • 1. People prefer to ride bikes for 2 reasons. A. convenient B. economical 2. There are more advantages in riding bikes than driving cars. • A. no air pollution • B. less parking space • 3. Bikes will remain an important means of transport in China
图表作文
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文章体裁
• 叙述文；描写文；说明 文；议论文；论说文； 应用文
文章结构类型
•1、原因型结构 •2、比较型结构 •3、阐述型结构
原因型结构
A variety of reasons have led the growing number of young people to give up their work and the security it proved. Some people have given up a career because it is demanding too much from them. They find it difficult to stand pressure and the competition it entails. Other people, on the contrary, have quit jobs that are boring or meaningless to them…
研究下面的主题句
• Jefferson was a good and tireless writer. • The way we see things is more complicated than we imagine. • The purpose of this book is to provide you with practice in spelling English. • There are have been a lot of changes in American eating habits in the last ten years. • Your brain interprets the information your eyes give you. • Baby-sitter with my brother is no fun.
比较型结构
It is true that television has some bad effects. For one thing it tends to make people lazy and even morally corrupted. For another it is a distraction, for when the television is on, it is difficult to give one’s mind to anything else. But we should not forget the enormous benefits derived from TV. TV has become the most important source of information and culture…
判断以下能否作主题句
• To improve English proficiency, one needs to acquire some skills. • To improve reading ability, one needs to acquire some reading skills. • He sent his wife a diamond ring on her thirtieth birthday. • Today more and more women are going out to work
CET-4作文的有关规定
• • • • 字数要求；段落要求；作文的硬伤 了解作文评分方法 仔细审题，草拟提纲 , 切题是关键 eg. What Would Happen if There Were No Power • Ever since early this century, electricity has become an essential part of our modern life. ______________________________
2、问题法
• Should doctors ever lie to benefit their patients—to speed recovery or to conceal the approach of death? In medicine as in law, government, and other lines of work, the requirements of honesty often seem dwarfed by greater needs:…
高分作文写作四部曲
1、审题构思 2、列刚定局 3、组织文章 4、修改定稿
作文失分的原因
• • • • • • • 1、不会审题，偏离主题 2、汉语思维，逐字翻译 3、词汇量小，用词搭配不当 4、句子逻辑关系混乱 5、语法错误 6、随意涂改，卷面混乱 7、写作不规范（段落缩进，单词分行，大小 写等）
4、对立法、事实法
• 引言段的结构：from general to specific • Eg.15 • It has been a traditional custom for Chinese grandparents to live with their children and grandchildren. But in the last decade a growing number of people have lived apart in their own houses or even in nursing homes. Old people are now isolated because of the attitude of the young people.
作文形式
（1）中文提示；（2）英文提示；（3）中 英文提示；（5）图表作文
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构筑主体段
• 主体段的功能就是论证和说明文章在引 言段中提出的中心思想。 • 第一步：写好主题句(TS) • 中心思想句是整篇文章的灵魂，主题句 是主题段的灵魂。主题句的位置放在段 首。
Looking Forward to the Twenty-First Century
• It is widely predicted that the coming 21st century will be marked by a burst of new science and technology at the present rate of its development. For many of us the new age represents a change as well as a challenge. • New Age of science and technology will both immensely assist and demand highly of us.