中考英语作文写作指导课件

And also
For example
There are many things we can do. we can plan our time
carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between
our study and hobbies. Wecan set up and join different
范文展示
Hello, everybody! It's time again for our English Broadcasting Program. Today's topic is “ How to Make Better Use of Our Spare Time”.
Nowadays, we students have much more free time than before. But quite a number of students don't know how to use the time properly. They spend so much time on their hobbies that they can't finish their homework on time. Also some of them watch too much TV, What's worse, some students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games. We don't think it's good for their study and health.
Mike is crazy about football!
Main body
He loves watching football matches. Of course, he loves playing football too. He often spends about one hour playing football with his classmates after school. His parents don't like this and have asked him to go home before 5.30. He thinks it is important for him to spend some time on his hobbies.
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Besides these,
抓住要点，列关键词
Write an outline
Introduction problems
Main body opinions
1. 花太多时间在兴趣爱好上 2. 迷恋网吧，打电脑游戏 3. -----------
suggestions Conclusion
1. 合理安排时间 2. 参加兴趣小组 3. ------
Opinions
not good for our health and study (7A2) focus on (9A3)
Pay more attention to (9A1)
Suggestions
plan time carefully (9A3) achieve a balance between study and bobbies (9A3) take part in different after school activities (7A2) join interest groups (8A2) do some sports (7A4) do some housework(7B5)
Let's make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!
Summary
The structure of the article Introduction
Problems
Main body
opinions
Conclusion
第三步：抓住要点，列关键词
1. List some keywords about problems. Phrases: _S_p_e_n_d__--_-_o_n_, _h_o_b_b_i_e_s_, _b_e_c_r_a_z_y_a_b_o__u_t,_-_-_-_ ____________________________________
Problems
be crazy about (7B4) play computer games (7A1) watch too much TV (8A1) spend too much time on their hobbies (9A3) refuse to do homework (9A3) spend --- on (7A2)
第四步：连词成句
1. Make sentences with the keywords about problems. Sentences: _S_o_m_e_s_t_u_d_en_t_s_s_p_e_n_d_t_o_o_m_u_c_h__ti_m_e__on__th_e_ir _h_o_b_b_i_es__an_d__c_a_n_'t_f_in_i_sh__th_e_i_r_h_o_m_e_w_o_r_k__on time.
二、评分档次： 一档文(17-20分) 写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有句式变化，
有复杂结构。 二档文(13-16分) 基本写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有少量
语法错误。
三档文(9-12分)写出大部内容要点，语言基本通顺有一些语法和拼写错误。
四档文(5-8分) 写出一半左右有关内容要点，语言不通，影响理解。 五档文(0-4分)言不达意，不知所云。
具体做法： 用笔勾画
主题 人称
体裁 结构
自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时 间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这 种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如 何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给 该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：
不良现象和行为 1. 花太多时间在兴趣爱好上
（至少3点） 2. 迷恋网吧，上网打游戏
3. ……
已知信息
以一般现 在时为主
时态
看法
我认为……
1. 建议（至少3条） 2.
3.
合理安排时间 参加兴趣小组 ……
未知信息
字数
注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数
第二步：
列出写作提纲不（要Ou遗tli漏ne）。 要点！
具体做法：
根据段落整理写作要点
He wishes he could have his parents' support.
Conclusion
Discussion
Writing skills —six steps
抄写规范
抄
组段成篇
组
集句成段
审
作文
集
审清题意
抓 抓住要点
连 连词成句
自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些
However, how can we make better use of our spare time? There are many things we can do. For example, we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. And also we can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in some good social activities. Besides these, we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework.
同学“不校知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室
园英请语你之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。
用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。
内容不要良点现包象括和：行为 1. 花太多时间在兴趣爱好上
（至少3点）
2. 迷恋网吧，上网打游戏
3. ……
看法
我认为Baidu Nhomakorabea…
1. 建议（至少3条） 2.
3.
合理安排时间 参加兴趣小组 ……
Let's enjoy our own
compositions!
一、评分原则： 1.短语及句子结构不对，人称、时态、语态误用，均为大错。一处大 错扣1分。 2.通篇人称错误，统扣2分。 3.拼写、标点符号、冠词、介词等方面的 错误为小错。2个小错相当 于1个大错。 4.相同错误，只扣一次。字数不足 90词扣3分。 5.文中若出现自己及老师、学校等真实姓名扣 3分。 6. 书写潦草，卷面不清，扣2分。
3. Make sentences with the keywords about suggestions. Sentences: _________________________________ _________________________________
第五步：集句成段，组段成篇
However, how can we make better use of our spare time?
2. List some keywords about opinions.
Phrases: ___n_o_t_g_o_o_d__fo__r _s_tu_d__y_a_n_d__h_e_a_lt_h_,_…_______
____________________________________
3. List some keywords about suggestions. Phrases: ____________________________________ ____________________________________
2. Make sentences with the keywords about opinions. Sentences: _I_d__o_n_'t_t_h_in__k_i_t'_s_g_o_o_d__f_o_r_o_u_r_s_t_u_d_y___ __a_n_d__h_e_a_lt_h_.______________________
中考专题复习课
Writing
检查口语
爱好与学业
1.迈克疯狂地迷恋足球，喜爱看足球比赛， 当然也喜爱踢足球；
2. 放学后，他经常花 1个小时左右的时间和 同学们一起 踢足球；
3. 他的父母不喜欢这一点，要求他在 5点半 之前回家；他认为在爱好上花些时间是重 要的，希望能得到父母的支持。
分析结构
Introduction Hobbies and studies
Thank You!
Your advice is welcome!
变换句式
Some students spend too much time on their hobbies. They can't finish their homework on time.
Suggestions
写作：
第一步就是要认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、 人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息 第二步就是要列出写作提纲（列关键词、连词成 句、集句成段、组段成篇）
写作前：确定人称、时态 写作后：查错改错
Homework
1.复习本课要点 2.背诵精彩范文
祝同学们在中考中取得好成绩！
注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数 参考词汇: make good use of, interest groups social activities, do sports, net bar
第一步:审清题意
认真审题 ，明确写作 主题、体裁、 人称、字数、结构、时态、提示 要点和补充信息