高三英语写作公开课课件 (共26张)
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“Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
高三英语写作公开课课件(共26张)
Para.2
因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练，所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美在哪里，还可以讲述他们背后的故事。
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补充细节：
语言表达：
连词成句：
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traditional Chinese art;
I am deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and I have received a good education in art, so I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.
基本得体
基本清楚
6-10
漏掉主要要点
贫乏
错误较多，影响理解
不得体
混乱
1-5
未能传达任何信息，写的内容与要求无关
要点完整；语言准确且多样；结构清晰； 逻辑连贯交际得体书写美观
好作文标准：
好作文的写作步骤 (写作七步法)
审 题体裁时态人称要点
列提纲结构要点关键词
补充细节
语言表达准确地道词汇句式
连词成句+过渡词逻辑连贯流畅连句成篇
(2019 全国1卷)
体裁人称时态 要求
一般现在时
120左右
gallery, art center
应用文（申请信）
第一人称
A Chinese painting exhibition其它相关表达：中国画Chinese paintings, traditional Chinese art, the artworks.
Para.1Para.2Para.3
个人优势+能做的事（具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势）
因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练，所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美在哪里，还可以讲述他们背后的故事。
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补充细节：
语言表达：
连词成句：
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traditional Chinese art;
I am deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and I have received a good education in art, so I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.
基本得体
基本清楚
6-10
漏掉主要要点
贫乏
错误较多，影响理解
不得体
混乱
1-5
未能传达任何信息，写的内容与要求无关
要点完整；语言准确且多样；结构清晰； 逻辑连贯交际得体书写美观
好作文标准：
好作文的写作步骤 (写作七步法)
审 题体裁时态人称要点
列提纲结构要点关键词
补充细节
语言表达准确地道词汇句式
连词成句+过渡词逻辑连贯流畅连句成篇
(2019 全国1卷)
体裁人称时态 要求
一般现在时
120左右
gallery, art center
应用文（申请信）
第一人称
A Chinese painting exhibition其它相关表达：中国画Chinese paintings, traditional Chinese art, the artworks.
Para.1Para.2Para.3
个人优势+能做的事（具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势）
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件
2023-12-23
PowerPoint courseware for the open class of English position and writing in the college entrance examination
Student exercises and mentsSuggestions for preparing English positions for the college entrance examination
THANKS
Summary
Accumulating vocabulary is the key to improving English writing ability.
Candidates should focus on accumulating monly used vocabulary and phrases, and continuously expand their vocabulary through reading, writing, and practice. Vocabulary cards, word software, and other tools can be used to assist memory.
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To enhance students' ability to express their ideas clearly and effectively in English
To familiarize students with different types of writing tasks and formats monly accounted for in the college entrance examination
PowerPoint courseware for the open class of English position and writing in the college entrance examination
Student exercises and mentsSuggestions for preparing English positions for the college entrance examination
THANKS
Summary
Accumulating vocabulary is the key to improving English writing ability.
Candidates should focus on accumulating monly used vocabulary and phrases, and continuously expand their vocabulary through reading, writing, and practice. Vocabulary cards, word software, and other tools can be used to assist memory.
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To enhance students' ability to express their ideas clearly and effectively in English
To familiarize students with different types of writing tasks and formats monly accounted for in the college entrance examination
【课件】高中英语写作公开课(共30张PPT)
Tag to tell you that … • I’d like you to … • Would you please …? • I wonder if you can …? •…
必要的连接词
表示递进：besides, as well, in addition 表示比较：just like, in the same way,
Yours, Li Hua
Ⅳ. post-writing
Revise your compositions in pairs. Then, make evaluations for him or her.
写作过程评价标准表
注意：达到8至10项标准为优秀，6至8项为良好；4 至6项为合格；4以下为需努力。
Task 1: person(人称) tense （时态）
Person: The first person Tense: The present and the future tense
Task 2: Decide the structure
Beginning
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
Please write down the letter in 15 minutes. You can use the following structure.
Dear Peter, How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that________________ ___________, and__________________________.
welcome
Writing
Ⅰ. Discussion
高考英语书面表达高分写作技巧公开课教学课件(共25张PPT)
二、忌次序混乱，连接词单一或缺乏
审完题后，不少考生虽已知道了要写的内容，却不能合 理地组织所给的材料，东一句、西一句，写得支离破碎， 文理不通，让人不知所云。考生最好能迅速地列出要点， 在这个过程中，要考虑一下先写什么，后写什么，句与句 之间，不得逐字或逐条翻译。 段与段之间最好能使用一些能清晰表达逻辑结构的连 接词或句子，如first of all , above all , secondly , next , in fact,besides, in a word , at last , the most important point is that…等等，使文章过渡自然、流畅，做到前后连贯、 层次分明、有条不紊。
注意：不能不 用，且不能少 用，但也不能 滥用。
一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him . 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
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六、忌充分自信、不回查
写出来的东西，很可能有不正确、不恰当的 地方，因此，在答完卷时，至少应从以下几个方 面认真检查：（1）对照题目要求，看全部要点是 否都已包括进去，有无遗漏或误解；（2）文体格 式是否正确规范；（3）词语使用是否合适、正确， 有无语法与用词上的错误， 表达是否符合英语表 达习惯；（4）单词拼写、字母大小写有无错误， 标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。 一句话，对书面表达应尽量做到：不跑题，不 漏点，语言精简合习惯，灵活表达要规范，书法 整齐词有限。
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
要点一
要点二
Description
The teacher can provide examples of both narrative and argumentative essays and explain the differences between them They can then assign topics for both types of essays and ask the students to write them, ensuring they understand the nuances of each type of writing
Parts of speech
It involves understanding the different types of words and their functions in a sense (noun, verb, objective, etc.). The correct usage of each part of speech is essential for clear communication
Writing evaluation and feedback
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Content: The evaluation criterion for content includes the accuracy and depth of information, the coherence and logic of ideas, and the originality and creativity of the content
Through peer evaluation, students can learn to apply different writing styles and viewpoints, improve their critical thinking ability, and enhance their communication and cooperation skills
要点二
Description
The teacher can provide examples of both narrative and argumentative essays and explain the differences between them They can then assign topics for both types of essays and ask the students to write them, ensuring they understand the nuances of each type of writing
Parts of speech
It involves understanding the different types of words and their functions in a sense (noun, verb, objective, etc.). The correct usage of each part of speech is essential for clear communication
Writing evaluation and feedback
04
Content: The evaluation criterion for content includes the accuracy and depth of information, the coherence and logic of ideas, and the originality and creativity of the content
Through peer evaluation, students can learn to apply different writing styles and viewpoints, improve their critical thinking ability, and enhance their communication and cooperation skills
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件(34张)
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
四喜丸子
four happy meatballs X
meatballs √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
Possible version
Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
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Thank you for you letter asking about the rebuilt
6. 绕/爬过小山
6. to the other side of hill
7. 我们在（湖畔）小树林里 7. in small woods, by lake
•三“变”为变要点为句子。
Expand the key points have a picnic, in People’s Park We will have our picnic in the People’s Park. We are going to the People’s park for a picnic. We are going to the People’s park, where we will have a picnic.
(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
Enjoy one possible version from your classmate.
a good composition
structure contents language
beauty
be attractive, finished in a limited time!
Homework
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
3. Reading English books helps a lot.(改为强调句） _It__ is reading English books _t_h_a_t _ helps a lot.
4.I hope my suggetions will be of great help.(改为强 调句） I_d_o__hope my suggestions will be of great help.
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
5. In this way, you can make great progress in English.(改为倒装句） _O__n_ly_ in this way, _c_a_n_ you make great progress in English.
Step6. polish your writing（润色）
How to polish your writing？
Polish your composition by improving your handwriting（书写）
Polish your composition by improving your language
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
It provides a comprehensive guide to help students develop their writing ability, including essay writing, letter writing, and other practical writing tasks
It is important to understand the basic rules of English grammar, such as subject verb agreement, use of positions, and correct placement of commands PowerPoint presentations can break down these rules into easy to understand slides with examples and exercises to help students master them
Argumentative Writing: Practice and Feedback
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Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
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Letters and Emails
Resumes and Cover Letters
Introduction
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The courseware uses a variety of examples and practical exercises to make learning more interesting and effective
It is important to understand the basic rules of English grammar, such as subject verb agreement, use of positions, and correct placement of commands PowerPoint presentations can break down these rules into easy to understand slides with examples and exercises to help students master them
Argumentative Writing: Practice and Feedback
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03
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Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
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02
03
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Letters and Emails
Resumes and Cover Letters
Introduction
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The courseware uses a variety of examples and practical exercises to make learning more interesting and effective
高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)
Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
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I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I Hear that volunteers are needed for the coming Chinese painting exhibition in the local gallery.
I can ’t wait to apply for the position. 8
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Para.1
自我介绍+写信目的
我是李华，是从中国来的一个留学生；得知你们美术 馆要举行中国画展，正在招募志愿者；我迫不及待地 写信想申请这个工作。
an exchange student; the local gallery; the coming Chinese painting exhibition; can’t wait to do;apply for the position;
体裁 应用文（申请信）
人称 第一人称
时态 一般现在时
字数 120左右 写作背景:(抓关键词)
美术馆 gallery, art center
要求
A Chinese painting exhibition
内容
中国画展
其它相关表达：中国画 Chinese paintings, traditional
Chinese art, the artworks.
志愿者 a volunteer, the voluntary job, the position
内容要求：1.写信目的; 2.个人优势; 3.能做的事
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Para.1 开头 自我介绍+写信目的
Para.2 正文 个人优势+能做的事（具体说明 能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势）
Para.3 结尾 总结意愿
Para.2 个人优势②+能做的事 （在伦敦的中国人）
我的英语很流利，这使得我在与别人交流方面没有障 碍。
have a good knowledge/ grasp/ understanding/ command of; communicate with others; have no trouble/difficulty in doing
润色修正
列提纲
• 结构 • 要点
语言表达 连词成句 • 补充细节 • 准确 +过渡词 •
• 逻辑 • 地道
• 连贯 • 词汇
• 流畅 • 句式
美化句子 高级替换
• 关键词
连句成篇
定稿
典题示例
(2019 全国1卷)
假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展， 请写一封信申请做志愿者。 内容包括：1.写信目的; 2.个人优势; 3.能做的事 注意：1.词数120左右
I am enthusiastic and responsible, so I believe I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer.
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Para.2 总结
具备了以上提到的所有品质(如上所述)，我可以肯定的 说，我就是你要找的合适人选。
What makes a good writing ?
A Good Writing
作文评分标准
分数 档
要点
词汇
语法
交际
21-25 覆盖所有要点 丰富
基本无错
得体，满足 要求
16-20 覆盖所有要点 基本满足任 少许错误 务要求
基本符合要 求
11-15 漏掉一些要点 有限
有一些错误但不 基本得体 影响理解
6-10 漏掉主要要点 贫乏
错误较多，影响 不得体 理解
1-5 未能传达任何信息，写的内容与要求无关
逻辑 清楚、合理 清楚、合理 基本清楚 混乱
好作文标准：1. 要点完整；
3. 结构清晰；
2. 语言准确且多样； 4. 逻辑连贯
5. 交际得体 6. 书写美观
好作文的写作步骤 (写作七步法)
审题
• 体裁 • 时态 • 人称 • 要点
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.结束语已为你写好
Dear sir or madam, __________________________________________ _______________________________________________
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely , Li Hua
I have a good command of English, so I have no difficulty communicating with others.
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Para.2 个人优势③+能做的事 （申请做志愿者）
我非常热情并且有责任心，我相信我完全胜任志愿者 工作。
enthusiastic and responsible; be qualified f in traditional Chinese art and I have received a good education in art, so I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings. I can not only explain to the visitors the beauty of the paintings, but also tell the stori9es behind them.
Para.2 个人优势①+能做的事 （中国画展）
因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练， 所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美 在哪里，还可以讲述他们背后的故事。
traditional Chinese art; be deeply interested in; have a good knowledge/ grasp/ understanding/ command of; not only···but also···; explain to
As is mentioned above；with；qualities
With all these qualities mentioned above, I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.