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语言学习策略 养成...习惯 扩大某人的词汇量 查字典 做某事的有效方法 对…熟练掌握 比...有优势 培养兴趣 有益于... 被用来做...
How your writing: Try to topolish translate these sentences. 思考2：如何描述词典的特色★ ★ ★ 相关句子 •There are several reasons why I like the dictionary. 1. 有几个理由为什么我喜欢这本字典。 •I regard the accurate explanations of words as one of the most important. 2. 我认为准确的单词解释是最重要的。 •People’s views on learning English vary from person to person. 3. 不同的人对学习英语有不同的看法。 •With many vivid examples, it has an advantage over others. 4. 因为有很多生动的例子，它比其他的更有优势。
chance to show something in this class meeting.
recommend /introduce an English-English dictionary to you
信件的开头注意明确对象，开门见山！
Good samples:
•Hello, everyone! Today I would like to recommend an English-English dictionary to you in this class meeting.(邱怀彬) 开门见山，简练切题！ •Hello, everyone! In this class, I want to introduce a new English dictionary whose name is Happy Dictionary. I think it is very suitable for senior high school students.(沈晴) •Hello, everyone! Recently I bought a new Oxford English-English dictionary and I found it is very worthwhile to buy it, so I want to introduce it to all of you today .(郭安琪)
利用短语或从句，增加与主题相关的成分，简练收尾
In my opinion, it is a helpful book for us. Through this dictionary, I can learn more about English. I recommend this dictionary to you sincerely and hope that you will like it. (陈思琪)
How to improve it? Para 2：如何描述词典的特色?
•First of all, the dictionary has a large vocabulary,
which contain 3500 words we should learn in senior
high school. If we meet some unknown words, you
要点3: 使用心得 (总结陈词，再次点题)
提炼信息列提纲
明确主次分段落
How to improve it? Para 1: 信件开头怎么写? •Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua, studying in an
international school. I’m very glad that I have a
Hello, everyone! …………………………………………………..
Thank you for listening.
Outline
背景： 在班会课上向同学推荐一本英英词典
Para. 1
Para. 2 Para. 3
要点1：表明写作目的 (推荐词典) 要点2: 特色 (如词汇量，用法，例句等方面)
can refer to it. Besides, the use of every word is listed with detailed phrases and examples in this dictionary. After all, there is no worse thing than explain a lot without examples. Moreover, the
明确主题，简要拓展！
Para 2：如何描述词典的特色 ?（如词汇量，用法，例句 等方面） 本词典的特色： 1. 词汇量大 2. 用法解释详细 3. 例句容易理解 ※如果简单罗列：
1. large vocabulary
2. detailed explanation of usage
3. example sentences that are
After studying English with the dictionary, I can memorize words easily and solve problems quickly. It is a great helper for my study, so I suggest that everyone should buy one for yourself. (王健超)
example
sentences
canFra Baidu bibliotek
not
only
help
us
to
understand the word, but also practical in life.
Group work: 1. How to evaluate(评价) this writing?
Checklist:
Are all the points stated? Are there any details to support the points? Does the writer use the linking words properly? Are there any good sentence patterns（句式）? Are there any mistakes? 2. Mark the good sentence patterns. ★ 3. Circle the mistakes and correct them.
can refer to it. Besides, the use of every word is
1.注意检查语法错误。
3. 恰当选词，注意变换句型。 explain a lot without examples. Moreover, explaining
example
understand the words word, but also practical in life.
can refer to it. Besides, the use of every word is listed with detailed phrases and examples in this dictionary. After all, there is no worse thing than explain a lot without examples. Moreover, the
•First of all, the dictionary has a large vocabulary,
which contain 3500 words we should learn in senior
high school. If we meet some unknown words, you
How to improve your writing?
---Letters of Recommendation
审题
假如你是某国际学校的学生李华，你最近使 用了一本新版的XX英英词典，感觉非常实用， 请你利用英语班会时间向同学们推荐它。内 容要点如下： 1. 特色（如词汇量，用法，例句等方面）； 2. 使用心得
Here are some related phrases.
短语积累 •language learning strategy •form the habit of... •enlarge one’s vocabulary •look up a word in the dictionary •the effective ways to do sth. •have a good command of •have an advantage over... •develop one’s interest •be of much help to... •be used to do...
easy to understand
结果： 篇幅简短，内容单薄，无法体现语言表达能力。 对策： 对要点进行合理拓展，使内容丰满，详略得当！遇 到翻译难点，则转换表达方式！
Para. 2 ：如何描述词典的特色 ? （如词汇量，用法，例 句等方面）； 阐述要点，延伸细节 (vocabulary) First, it has a large vocabulary, with more than 1000 new words added, which is indeed a help to us. And the words are explained in details. (魏琪敏) (usage) Secondly, the dictionary shows us different ways to use the words so that we can use the words correctly when writing English articles. (马泽华)
Para 3：如何收尾? （使用心得，回归主题） In a word, with the help of this dictionary, I have made progress in English learning, and I hope that all of you can get one. (林彦希)
example
sentences
can
not
only
help
us
to
understand the word, but also practical in life.
How to improve it? Para 2：如何描述词典的特色?
•First of all, the dictionary has a large vocabulary, ★ which contains contain 3500 words we should learn in senior high school.★ If we meet some unknown words, you we
listed 2. with detailed phrases and examples in this 合理运用连接词。 ★ dictionary. After all, there is no worse thing than ★ only helpful us to sentences are can not not only helpfor us the
(example sentence) The example sentences are easy to understand, which helps us have a better understanding of a certain word. (陈晓杉)
How to improve it? Para 2：如何描述词典的特色?
How your writing: Try to topolish translate these sentences. 思考2：如何描述词典的特色★ ★ ★ 相关句子 •There are several reasons why I like the dictionary. 1. 有几个理由为什么我喜欢这本字典。 •I regard the accurate explanations of words as one of the most important. 2. 我认为准确的单词解释是最重要的。 •People’s views on learning English vary from person to person. 3. 不同的人对学习英语有不同的看法。 •With many vivid examples, it has an advantage over others. 4. 因为有很多生动的例子，它比其他的更有优势。
chance to show something in this class meeting.
recommend /introduce an English-English dictionary to you
信件的开头注意明确对象，开门见山！
Good samples:
•Hello, everyone! Today I would like to recommend an English-English dictionary to you in this class meeting.(邱怀彬) 开门见山，简练切题！ •Hello, everyone! In this class, I want to introduce a new English dictionary whose name is Happy Dictionary. I think it is very suitable for senior high school students.(沈晴) •Hello, everyone! Recently I bought a new Oxford English-English dictionary and I found it is very worthwhile to buy it, so I want to introduce it to all of you today .(郭安琪)
利用短语或从句，增加与主题相关的成分，简练收尾
In my opinion, it is a helpful book for us. Through this dictionary, I can learn more about English. I recommend this dictionary to you sincerely and hope that you will like it. (陈思琪)
How to improve it? Para 2：如何描述词典的特色?
•First of all, the dictionary has a large vocabulary,
which contain 3500 words we should learn in senior
high school. If we meet some unknown words, you
要点3: 使用心得 (总结陈词，再次点题)
提炼信息列提纲
明确主次分段落
How to improve it? Para 1: 信件开头怎么写? •Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua, studying in an
international school. I’m very glad that I have a
Hello, everyone! …………………………………………………..
Thank you for listening.
Outline
背景： 在班会课上向同学推荐一本英英词典
Para. 1
Para. 2 Para. 3
要点1：表明写作目的 (推荐词典) 要点2: 特色 (如词汇量，用法，例句等方面)
can refer to it. Besides, the use of every word is listed with detailed phrases and examples in this dictionary. After all, there is no worse thing than explain a lot without examples. Moreover, the
明确主题，简要拓展！
Para 2：如何描述词典的特色 ?（如词汇量，用法，例句 等方面） 本词典的特色： 1. 词汇量大 2. 用法解释详细 3. 例句容易理解 ※如果简单罗列：
1. large vocabulary
2. detailed explanation of usage
3. example sentences that are
After studying English with the dictionary, I can memorize words easily and solve problems quickly. It is a great helper for my study, so I suggest that everyone should buy one for yourself. (王健超)
example
sentences
canFra Baidu bibliotek
not
only
help
us
to
understand the word, but also practical in life.
Group work: 1. How to evaluate(评价) this writing?
Checklist:
Are all the points stated? Are there any details to support the points? Does the writer use the linking words properly? Are there any good sentence patterns（句式）? Are there any mistakes? 2. Mark the good sentence patterns. ★ 3. Circle the mistakes and correct them.
can refer to it. Besides, the use of every word is
1.注意检查语法错误。
3. 恰当选词，注意变换句型。 explain a lot without examples. Moreover, explaining
example
understand the words word, but also practical in life.
can refer to it. Besides, the use of every word is listed with detailed phrases and examples in this dictionary. After all, there is no worse thing than explain a lot without examples. Moreover, the
•First of all, the dictionary has a large vocabulary,
which contain 3500 words we should learn in senior
high school. If we meet some unknown words, you
How to improve your writing?
---Letters of Recommendation
审题
假如你是某国际学校的学生李华，你最近使 用了一本新版的XX英英词典，感觉非常实用， 请你利用英语班会时间向同学们推荐它。内 容要点如下： 1. 特色（如词汇量，用法，例句等方面）； 2. 使用心得
Here are some related phrases.
短语积累 •language learning strategy •form the habit of... •enlarge one’s vocabulary •look up a word in the dictionary •the effective ways to do sth. •have a good command of •have an advantage over... •develop one’s interest •be of much help to... •be used to do...
easy to understand
结果： 篇幅简短，内容单薄，无法体现语言表达能力。 对策： 对要点进行合理拓展，使内容丰满，详略得当！遇 到翻译难点，则转换表达方式！
Para. 2 ：如何描述词典的特色 ? （如词汇量，用法，例 句等方面）； 阐述要点，延伸细节 (vocabulary) First, it has a large vocabulary, with more than 1000 new words added, which is indeed a help to us. And the words are explained in details. (魏琪敏) (usage) Secondly, the dictionary shows us different ways to use the words so that we can use the words correctly when writing English articles. (马泽华)
Para 3：如何收尾? （使用心得，回归主题） In a word, with the help of this dictionary, I have made progress in English learning, and I hope that all of you can get one. (林彦希)
example
sentences
can
not
only
help
us
to
understand the word, but also practical in life.
How to improve it? Para 2：如何描述词典的特色?
•First of all, the dictionary has a large vocabulary, ★ which contains contain 3500 words we should learn in senior high school.★ If we meet some unknown words, you we
listed 2. with detailed phrases and examples in this 合理运用连接词。 ★ dictionary. After all, there is no worse thing than ★ only helpful us to sentences are can not not only helpfor us the
(example sentence) The example sentences are easy to understand, which helps us have a better understanding of a certain word. (陈晓杉)
How to improve it? Para 2：如何描述词典的特色?