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“Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
高中英语写作方法指导(88张PPT)
、 The boss is flying to Rome. His secretary is not flying to Rome.
宾 The boss but not his secretary is flying to Rome.
语 The boss may be flying to Berlin. His secretary may be flying
连接成分
连接成分实际上是一个连词，用来连接两个或几个平行的
词、短语和分句。这种连词叫做并列连词。
另一类连接成分是用来连接两个句子、且一个句子从属于
另一个句子（即从句）的连词。这类连词叫从属连词。从
属连词主要用于引导各种从句。
一个完整的句子（主句或从句）必须包含2个到4个基本成 分，此外，如果意思上有需要，还可包含一个或更多其他 的句子成分。
、 The boss is flying to Paris. His secretary is flying to Paris.
谓
The boss and his secretary are flying to Paris.
语
Both the boss and his secretary are flying to Paris.
• You have to believe in yourself. That's the secret of success. 人必须相信自己，这是成功的秘诀。
•
状语
John often came to chat with me． John likes oranges very much． Whenever he gets drunk，John makes Mary very angry． Hearing the news, he jumped with joy. As he was ill, he didn’t come to class yesterday. She is sitting at the desk, doing her homework. My father worked in this school ten years ago. You’d better stay here.
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件
What is the ideal length for an English composition in the college entrance examination? The ideal length for an English composition depends on the specific requirements of the exam, but generally, it should be between 150-250 words
Motivation and funding: Encourage students to continue in their writing practice and provide positive feedback to boost their confidence
Critique of language use: Assess the language proficiency of students and provide guidance on improving their vocabulary, grammar, and presence structure
Writing format guidance
Instrument students on the appropriate format for different types of writing, such as essays, letters, and narrativscriptive Composition
This type of composition is focused on describing a person, place, thing, or event in detail It requires the student to use rich and vivid language to create a sense of presence and importance
高考英语写作指导课课件(69张PPT)
They even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign "No _____________ littering" nearby.
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
have studied
written
English very well.
is
10.There are some advice in teaching English.
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
1. They even threw rubbish into the lake. They totally ignored the noticeable sign "No littering" nearby. (使用V-ing形式)
6.My English level is common and I can't speak very ∧ well.
average along it
7.I believe we can get alone well with each other.
8.Besides, I think speaking English is as important as writing English. spoken 9.I study English for 12 years so I think I know
be attractive, beautiful,completed in a limited time!
高考英语作文写作技巧(共17张PPT)【优秀课件】
高考英语作文写作技巧（共17张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
• P1 Everyone needs some recreational activities to help them relax after a day's work or study. And there are many recreational activities available to us in today's society. For example, sports fans may choose to play basketball or football. Or one may take a break by watching TV or listening to music.
作文得分技巧
1、 卷面整洁，书写清楚 2、 构思简单，少犯错误 3、 中心突出，层次分明 4、 重在变化，宁简勿烂
议论文写作的基本模式
写作框架如下： 第一段：现象背景介绍+引出话题（公众观
点+大概理由）； 第二段：关于话题的相关因素（影响，作
用，好处，危害或原因等）； 第三段：陈述自己观点或预期未来。
辩论式议论文模版
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the
Model
Presently, one phenomenon calls for people’ s attention that ____.
In general, ______. For one thing, _____. (For example, _____.) For another, _____.
高考英语基础写作指导(ppt 80页)
专题四 │ 真题演练
专题四 │ 真题演练
专题四 │ 真题演练
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高三英语高考作文分析指导写作中小学PPT教学课件
• 2.该产品已售完,无法更换
The model has been sold out . They can’t change a new one for me.
• 3.型号新,无配件,法维修
It is a new model in China. It is impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.
no spare parts; repair/fix/maintain • Point 4：require/request sb. to do sth 或demand of sb. to do sth.
3.连词成句
• 1.手机不响铃,不能发短信
It doesn’t ring . It doesn’t send short messages.
3.型号新,无配件,无法维修 整合前： It is a new model in
China. It is impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. 整合后：
a.Since it’s a new model and there’re no spare parts,I can’t get it repaired .（原因状语从句）
c. All that I request of your company is that you should get my phone changed as soon as possible.(定语从句 和表语从句）
d. I hope that my requirement that you should change a new phone of the same model for me can be satisfied as soon as possible. (宾语从 句、同位语从句、虚拟语气及被 动语态)
The model has been sold out . They can’t change a new one for me.
• 3.型号新,无配件,法维修
It is a new model in China. It is impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.
no spare parts; repair/fix/maintain • Point 4：require/request sb. to do sth 或demand of sb. to do sth.
3.连词成句
• 1.手机不响铃,不能发短信
It doesn’t ring . It doesn’t send short messages.
3.型号新,无配件,无法维修 整合前： It is a new model in
China. It is impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. 整合后：
a.Since it’s a new model and there’re no spare parts,I can’t get it repaired .（原因状语从句）
c. All that I request of your company is that you should get my phone changed as soon as possible.(定语从句 和表语从句）
d. I hope that my requirement that you should change a new phone of the same model for me can be satisfied as soon as possible. (宾语从 句、同位语从句、虚拟语气及被 动语态)
高考英语写作指导-PPT
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●“数词+名词”变为“as many as+数词+名词” As many as ten years ago, my hometown used to be covered by forests.
●适当加一些不关痛痒的插入语：一些连词、副
词可以放到句子中间充当语气较弱的插入语，如I guess、however、in a way、certainly、in my opinion、probably、briefly等，有时可以考虑几 个插入语连用，就更像英美人士的文章了。
●独立主格：将主从句去掉连词，前句动词变为
分词即可。
The weather being fine, a large number of
people went to climb the Western Hills.
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● 由with或without引导的短语。如： He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the
4） As is known to all， "No pains，no gains". （没有苦，就没有甜）
5）Better early than late.宁早勿迟 6）It is never too late to learn.学习永远不嫌 晚。
7）Health is better than wealth.健康胜于财 富。
12）Success covers a multitude of blunders . 成功由大量的错误铸就。
13）Never leave that until tomorrow , which you can do today .今天的事不要拖到明天。 14）When work is a pleasure , life is joy ! When work is duty , life is slavery .工作是一
高考英语写作指导课件PPT
高考英语写作指导课件PPT【PPT实用 课件】
1.
2. 3.
（非限制性）定语从句 It was quite an experience for us both, which I’ll never forget for the rest of my life.
There is no doubt + that 从句 There is no doubt that we will win.
P3 S10 conclusion
高考英语写作指导课件PPT【PPT实用 课件】
转折关系： however, while, on the contrary, on the other hand, nevertheless, otherwise 让步关系： despite, in spite of
高考英语写作指导课件PPT【PPT实用 课件】
We should pay attention to coping with serious problem.
Attention should be paid to coping with the serious problem.
有意识地将学过的好词好 句恰当地运用，少用过难、 甚至超纲的词汇；注重行文 的逻辑结构，平时养成片段 式的思维方法。
importan t significant/vital/ crucial/ indispensible
高考英语写作指导课件PPT【PPT实用 课件】
高考英语写作指导课件PPT【PPT实用 课件】
problem issue/crisis/ dilemma
very
fairly/considera bly
打破全篇人做主语窘状
Because people fail to realize the importance of our environment, water and air are seriously contaminated.
高中英语写作指导课课件(共29张PPT)
In fact (事实上）； for example（例如）
Luckily（幸运地）；in spite of （尽管）
At last (最后 ）； in a word (总之）
高中英语写作指导课课件（共29张PPT ）
高中英语写作指导课课件（共29张PPT ）
第三组：
Lately (最近）；to start with (首先）
1.词组优先原则
【原文】A new railway is being built in my hometown.
[修正] A new railway is under construction in my hometown.
2.避免重复原则
[原文] I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
afternoon. Not until yesterday afternoon did he come
here.(倒装句） It was yesterday afternoon that he came
here.（强调句）
高中英语写作指导课课件（共29张PPT ）
高中英语写作指导课课件（共29张PPT ）
高中英语写作指导课课件（共29张PPT ）
• 为了学习音乐，她去了美国 • She went to America in order to study
music. • She went to America for the purpose of
studying music.
我突然想到了个好主意 Suddenly I thought out a good idea. Suddenly I came up with a good idea. A good idea suddenly struck me .
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二、感知典型范例
——句型层面1
• 他昨天下午来的。
1. He came here yesterday afternoon. 2. He didn’t come here until yesterday
afternoon. 3. Not until yesterday afternoon did he
二、感知典型范例 ——篇章层面1
DISCUSSION:
What is a good writing？ How to catch the experts' eyes?
What is a good writing？
A good composition
content structurelanguage
定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确 定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去
2分。 4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点，
应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性
及上下文的连贯性。
总结：什么样的作文是一篇好作文
• 无遗漏信息点，即要点全面 • 篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词 • 句式复杂多样 • 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组
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2017高考英语写作指导课 课件
近几年来，在新课标试卷中，书面表 达趋向于提纲式作文，但是这些提纲 只给出了大致的写作方向，没有限制 具体内容，属于半开放式的提示；考 查应用中的书信，话题与中学生的学 习生活密切相关，考生会觉得有话可 说，有利于考生的自由发挥。
高考英语评分原则：
1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确
This village is very small， which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are leading a richer and happier life than before. Now it is taking on a new look.
come here. 4. It was yesterday afternoon that he came
here.
二、感知典型范例
——句型层面2
• 令她吃惊的是，小女孩知道这么多事情。 1. He is surprised that the little girl knows so
many things. 2. To his surprise , the little girl knows so
Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅)
Language: * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误) * With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)
接下来，我们具体感知一下优秀作文的要素。
二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面1
• adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的
• clever •→ wise •→ smart •→ bright •→ intelligent
二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面2
•adj.令人惊奇的 • surprising •→amazing •→astonishing
many things. 3. What surprises him is that the little girl
knows so many things.
二、感知典型范例
——段落层面1
This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look.
Avoid Chinglish!
1) Traffic in Shanghai is too chreoawvdye. d. 2) There ihsas a highway connected with
Beijing. 3) Though she's almost 40，but she still
dictionary.
look up
2.The ability to read English passages is slowly.
low
3.There is no doubt that English Study needs lots
be attractive, beautiful,completed in a limited time!
DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？
Content:
Everything which is related to your view needs to includ.(内容要完整) （内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字 提示，可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4，如果人 家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六个图都 要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）