落花生张培基译文thepeanut
许地山《落花生》译文对比赏析翻译PPT
行文都是比较简 练准确的语言， 在这里刘所用的 eagerly显然要 比张所用的vied in giving the answer 要简明 得多，而且 eagerly显示出 孩子们的渴望热 切的心理，vie 有竞争的意识， 在这里用‚竞争‛ 一词就有点夸大 事实。
我们都争着答应：‚爱!” “谁能把花生的好处说出 来?”。
3.“可贵‛的翻译，‚good”意思比较广，不够准确； ‚beloved: loved very much”亦欠妥当，个人觉得可 以借用刘的句型，将good 改为valuable 。
这小小的豆不像那好看的苹 果、桃子、石榴，把它们的 果实悬在枝上，鲜红嫩绿的 颜色，令人一望而发生羡慕 之心。他只把果子埋在地底， 等到成熟，才容人把他挖出 来。
刘译："Yes!" we all answered
eagerly. "But who can tell me what the peanut is good for?" 张译：“Yes, we do!” We vied in giving the answer. “Which of you could name the good things in peanuts?”
姊姊说：‚花生的气味很美。‛
哥哥说：‚花生可以制油。‛
刘译："It is very delicious to
eat," my sister took the lead. "It is good for making cooking oil,” my brother followed. 张译：“Peanuts taste good,” said my elder sister. “Peanuts produce edible oil,” said my elder brother.
翻硕英译中国现代散文选
翻硕英译中国现代散文选落花生 我们屋后有半亩隙地。
母亲说：“让它荒芜着怪可惜，既然你们那么爱吃花生，就辟来做花生园罢(1)。
”我们几个姊弟(2)和几个小丫头都很喜欢——买种的买种，动土的动土，灌园的灌园;过了不几个月，居然收获了! 妈妈说：“今晚我们可以做一个收获节(3)，也请你们的爹爹来尝尝我们底新花生，如何?”我们都答应了。
母亲把花生做成好几样食品(4)，还吩咐这节期要在园里底茅亭举行。
那晚上底天色不大好(5)，可是爹爹也来到，实在很难得!爹爹说：“你们爱吃花生吗?” 我们都争着答应：“爱!” “谁能把花生底好处说出来?” 姊姊说：“花生的气味很美。
” 哥哥说：“花生可以榨油。
” 我说：“无论何等人都可以用贱价买它来吃;都喜欢吃它。
这是它的好处。
” 爹爹说：“花生底用处固然很多;但有一样是很可贵的。
这小小的豆(6)不像那好看的苹果、桃子、石榴，把它们底果实悬在枝上，鲜红嫩绿的颜色(7)，令人一望而发生羡慕的心。
它只把果子埋在地底，等到成熟，才容人把它挖出来。
你们偶然看见一棵花生瑟缩(8)地长在地上，不能立刻辨出它有没有果实，非得等到你接触它才能知道。
” 我们都说：“是的。
”母亲也点点头。
爹爹接下去说：“所以你们要像花生(9)，因为它是有用的，不是伟大、好看的东西。
”我说：“那么，人要做有用的，不要做伟大、体面的人了。
”爹爹说：“这是我对于你们的希望。
” 我们谈到夜阑才散，所有花生食品虽然没有了，然而父亲底话现在还印在我心版上。
PeanutsXu Dishan Behind our house there lay half a mou of vacant land. Mother said, “it’s a pity to let it lie waste. Since you all like to eat peanuts so very much, why not plant some here?” that exhilarated us children and our servant girls as well, and soon we started buying seeds, ploughing the land and watering the plants. We gathered in a good harvest just after a couple of months! Mother said, “How about giving a party this evening to celebrate the harvest and inviting your Daddy to have a taste of our newly-harvested peanuts?” We all agreed. Mother made quite a few varieties of goodies out of the peanuts, and told us that the party would be held in the thatched pavilion on the peanut plot. It looked like rain that evening, yet, to our great joy, father came nevertheless. “Do you like peanuts?” asked father. “Yes, we do!” we vied in giving the answer. “Which of you could name the good things in peanuts?” “Peanuts taste good,” said my elder sister. “Peanuts produce edible oil,” said my elder brother. “Peanuts are so cheap,” said I, “that anyone can afford to eat them. Peanuts are everyone’s favourite. That’s why we call peanuts good.” “It’s true that peanuts have many uses,” said father, “but they’re most beloved in one respect. Unlike nice-looking apples, peaches and pomegranates, which hang their fruit on branches and win people’s admiration with their brilliant colours, tiny little peanuts bury themselves underground and remain unearthed until they’re ripe. When you come upon a peanut plant lying curled up on the ground, you can never immediately tell whether or not it bear any nuts until you touch them.” “That’s true,” we said in unison. Mother also nodded. “So you must take after peanuts,” father continued, “because they’re useful though not great and nice- looking.” “Then you mean one should be useful rather than great andnice-looking,” I said. “That’s what I expect of you,” father concluded. We kept chatting until the party broke up late at night. Today, though nothing is left of the goodies made of peanuts, father’s words remain engraved in my mind. 注释: 本文是许地山(1892-1941)的名篇。
《落花生》翻译对比
译文对比
母亲说：“今晚我们过一个收获节，请你们的父亲也来尝尝我们 的新花生，好不好？”母亲把花生做成了好几样食品，还咐附就 在后园的茅亭里过这个节。 Mother said, "Tonight, we will celebrate our harvest, your father will taste our new peanut with us. Ok?" Then she cooked several dishes by using peanuts, and she told us that we would celebrate at the thatched pavilion of backyard.
译文对比
我说；“花生的价钱便宜，谁都可以买来吃，都喜欢吃。这就是它的 好处。” And I said, "The peanuts is cheap, everyone can buy it, everyone likes to eat it. This is the good thing in peanut."
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我们家的后园有半亩空地。母亲说：“让它荒着怪可惜的 ,你们那么爱吃花生，就开辟出来种花生吧。”我们姐弟几 个都很高兴，买种、翻地、播种、浇水，没过几个月，居 然收获了。 母亲说：“今晚我们过一个收获节，请你们的父亲也来 尝尝我们的新花生，好不好？”母亲把花生做成了好几样 食品，还咐附就在后园的茅亭里过这个节。 那晚上天色不大好。可是父亲也来了，实在很难得。 父亲说：“你们爱吃花生吗？” 我们争着答应：“爱！” “谁能把花生的好处说出来？” 姐姐说：“花生的味儿美。” 哥哥说：“花生可以榨油。”
落花生原文和译文
落花生我们屋后有半亩隙地。
母亲说，“让它荒芜着怪可惜，既然你们那么爱吃花生，就辟来做花生园罢。
”我们几姊弟和几个小丫头都很喜欢——买种的买种，动土的动土，灌园的灌园；过不了几个月，居然收获了!妈妈说：“今晚我们可以做一个收获节，也请你们爹爹来尝尝我们底新花生，如何?”我们都答应了。
母亲把花生做成好几样的食品，还吩咐这节期要在园里底茅亭举行。
那晚上底天色不太好，可是爹爹也到来，实在很难得!爹爹说：“你们爱吃花生么?”我们都争着答应：“爱!”“谁能把花生底好处说出来?”姊姊说：“花生底气味很美。
”哥哥说：“花生可以制油。
”我说：“无论何等人都可以用贱价买它来吃；都喜欢吃它。
这就是它的好处。
”爹爹说：“花生底用处固然很多；但有一样是很可贵的。
这小小的豆不像那好看的苹果、桃子、石榴，把它们底果实悬在枝上，鲜红嫩绿的颜色，令人一望而发生羡慕的心。
它只把果子埋在地底，等到成熟，才容人把它挖出来。
你们偶然看见一棵花生瑟缩地长在地上，不能立刻辨出它有没有果实，非得等到你接触它才能知道。
”我们都说：“是的。
”母亲也点头。
爹爹接下去说：“所以你们要像花生，因为它是有用的，不是伟大、好看的东西。
”我说：“那么，人要做有用的人，不要做伟大、体面的人了。
”爹爹说：“这是我对于你们的希望。
”我们谈到夜阑才散，所以花生食品虽然没有了，然而父亲底话现在还印在我心版上。
【译文】译文1为张培基译，选自张培基译注，1999年，《英译中国现代散文选》（汉英对照），上海：上海外语教育出版社。
PeanutsBehind our house there lay half a mu of vacant land. Mother said, "It's a pity to let it lie waste. Since you all like to eat peanuts so much, why not have them planted here. " That exhilarated us children and our servant girls as well, and soon we started buying seeds , ploughing the land and watering the plants . We gathered in a good harvest just after a couple of months !Mother said, "How about giving a party this evening to celebrate the harvest and invite your Daddy to have a taste of our newly-harvested peanuts?" We all agreed.Mother made quite a few varieties of goodies out of the peanuts, and told us that the party would be held in the thatched pavilion on the peanut plot.It looked like rain that evening, yet, to our great joy, Father came nevertheless."Do you like peanuts?" asked Father."Yes, we do! " We vied in giving the answer."Which of you could name the good things in peanuts?""Peanuts taste good , " said my elder sister."Peanuts produce edible oil, " said my elder brother."Peanuts are so cheap, " said I, "that anyone can afford to eat them. Peanuts are everyone's favourite . That's why we call peanuts good. ""It's true that peanuts have many uses, " said Father, "but they're most beloved in one respect. Unlike nice-looking apple, peaches and pomegranates, which hang their fruit on branchesand win people's instant admiration with their brilliant colours, tiny little peanuts bury themselves underground and remain unearthed until they're ripe . When you come upon a peanut plant lying curled up on the ground, you can never immediately tell whether or not it bears any nuts until you touch them. ""That's true," we said in unison. Mother also nodded. "So you must take after peanuts," Father continued , " because they're useful though not great and nice-looking. ""Then you mean one should be useful rather than great and nice-looking, " I said ."That's what I expect of you, " Father concluded .We kept chatting until the party broke up late at night. Today, though nothing is left of the goodi es made of peanuts, Father’s words remain engraved in my mind.译文2为刘士聪译，选自乔萍、翟淑蓉、宋洪玮编著，1999年，《散文佳作108篇》（汉英/英汉对照），南京：译林出版社。
长句翻译(落花生及译文)
落花生许地山我们屋后有半亩隙地。
母亲说：“让它荒芜著怪可惜，既然你们那么爱吃落花生，就辟来做花生园罢。
”我们几姐弟和几个小丫头都很喜欢－－买种的买种，动土的动土，灌园的灌园；过不了几个月，居然有收获了!妈妈说：“今晚我们可以作一个收获节，也请你们爹爹来尝尝我们的新花生，如何？”我们都答应了。
母亲把花生做成好几样的食品，还吩咐这节期要在园里的茅亭举行。
那晚上的天色不太好，可是爹爹也到来，实在很难得！爹爹说：“你们爱吃花生么？”我们都争著答应：“爱！”“谁能把花生的好处说出来？”姐姐说：“花生的气味很美。
”哥哥说：“花生可以制油。
”我说：“无论何等人都可以用贱价买它来吃；都喜欢吃它。
这就是它的好处。
”爹爹说：“花生的用处固然很多；但有一样是很可贵的。
这小小的豆不像年好看的苹果、桃子、石榴，把推们的果实悬在枝上，鲜红嫩绿的颜色，令人一望而发生羡慕之心。
它只把果子埋在地底，等到成熟，才容人把它挖出来。
你们偶然看见一棵花生瑟缩地长在地上，不能立刻辨出它有没有果实，非得等到你接触它才能知道。
”我们都说：“是的。
”母亲也点点头。
点点接下去说：“所以你们要像花生，因为它是有用的，不是伟大、好看的东西。
”我说：“那么，人要做有用的人，不要做伟大、体面的人了。
”点点说：“这是我对于那么的希望。
”我们谈到夜阑才散，所有花生食品虽然没有了，然而父亲的话现在还印在我心版上。
The Peanut刘士聪译At the back of our house there was a mu of vacant land. “It’s a pity to let it go to waste like that,” Mother said, “Since you all enjoy ea ting peanuts, let us open it up and make it a peanut garden.” At that my brother, sister and I were all delighted and so were the younghousemaids. Some went to buy seeds, some dug the ground and others watered it and, in a couple of months, we had a harvest.“Let us have a party tonight to celebrate,” Mother suggested, “and ask Dad to come for a taste of our fresh peanuts. What do you say?” we all agreed, of course. Mother cooked the peanuts in different styles and told us to go to the thatched pavilion in the garden for the celebration.The weather was not very good that night but, to our great delight, Dad came all the same. “Do you like peanuts?” Dad asked.“Yes!” we all answered eagerly.“But who can tell me what the peanut is good for?”“It is very delicious to eat,” my sister took the lead.“It is good for making cooking oil,” my brother followed.“It is inexpensive,” I said, “Almost everyone can afford it and everyone enjoys eating it, I think this is what it is good for.”“Peanut is good for many things,” Dad said, “but there is one thing that is particularly good about it. Unlike apples, peaches or pomegranates that display their fruits up in the air, attracting you with their beautiful colors, peanut buries its fruit in the earth. It does not show itself until you dig it out when it is ripe and, unless you dig out, you can’t tell whether it bears fruit or not just by its frail stems above ground.”“That is true,” we all said and Mother nodded her assent. “So you should try to be like the peanut,” Dad went on, “because it is useful, though not great or attractive.”“Do you mean,” I asked, “we should learn to be useful but not seek to be great or attractive?”“Yes,” Dad said. “This is what I wish you to be.”We stayed up late that night, eating all the peanuts Mother had cooked for us. But Father’s words remained vivid in my memory till this day.。
文本类型导向下《落花生》两英译本之翻译批评
文本类型导向下《落花生》两英译本之翻译批评余小兵(湖南工业大学外国语学院，湖南株洲412000)摘要：本文根据德国翻译理论家凯瑟琳娜·赖斯文本类型理论，以《落花生》的两个译本为例，对其进行文本类型分析，并以此进行翻译批评，最终说明翻译批评不可能是纯粹意义上的内部批评，它不可避免地要涉及外部因素考查译文的适切性。
关键词：文本类型《落先生》文本分析翻译批评一、前言笔者通过互联网查阅得知，《落花生》一文现载于小学五年级语文课本；关于它的教学论文可谓恒河沙数．众多文艺和教学一线教师就《落花生》的语言特色、表现手法，以及思想内容发表了一系列可资借鉴的见解和观点，如李明(1997)、李锋平(2008)、焰明(2009)、伊丽、陈建生、林婷婷(2009)、李婷(2009)、朱晴静和周邦友(2010)、张保红(2010)、隋荣谊、俞琳和闫开红(2011)、张晓平(2010)、杨莉(2011)。
由此我们可以看出，《落花生》于当代年轻一辈的教育启迪意义，不可小觑。
本文选取张培基(1999；2004)和刘士聪(2002)两位名家的译作为范本，以莱斯(2004)的文本类型理论为依据，进行翻译批评。
二、《落花生》原文本分析纵览原文，《落花生》一文的文本特征有：(一)语篇：《落花生》是作者匝忆自己童年时代生活的一个小片段。
通过父母与孩子们的对话、作者借父亲之口以花生的平凡而有用作为类比，隐含了做人的道理；语言文字浅显易懂，风格朴实无华、清新而自然。
(二)句式：语言充满了口语色彩．对话构成了语篇的主体，因而采用了简洁的句式，以简单句和并列句为主。
(三)词汇：原文口语化倾向突出，语言普通．多为日常词汇；个别词语(比如“爹爹”)具有早期方言色彩；与助词“的”语义功能相同的“底”(de)的使用，使语篇流露出早期现代汉语风格。
这些词汇的使用适合与孩子们沟通交流．并为他们所接收、领悟。
基于以上对《落花生》的文本分析，我们可以界定其为重形式的文本，因而与之相应的翻译要求就是译文和原文有相似的形式和同等的美学效果。
落花生翻译比较与赏析
落花生翻译比较与赏析《落花生》翻译比较与赏析苏慧敏2004020337 商英学院 04英语国际贸易3班前言这是一篇比较赏析为了阅读的方便我将其按照原文的顺序分析。
因为篇幅的关系我只选了前面几段赏析。
下文中画线表示译的好的部分数字表示建议改进的地方。
翻译原文落花生许地山我们屋后有半亩隙地。
母亲说“让它荒芜着怪可惜既然称们那么爱吃花生就辟来做花生园罢。
”我们几姊弟和几个小丫头都很喜欢——买种的买种动土的动土灌园的灌园过不了几个月居然收获了妈妈说“今晚我们可以做一个收获节也请你们爹爹来尝尝我们的新花生如何”我们都答应了。
母亲把花生做成好几样食品还吩咐这节期要在园里的茅亭举行。
那晚上的天色不大好可是爹爹也到来实在很难得爹爹说“你们爱吃花生么” 我们都争着答应“爱” “谁能把花生的好处说出来”。
姊姊说“花生的气味很美。
” 哥哥说“花生可以制油。
” 我说“无论何等人都可以用贱价买它来吃都喜欢吃它。
这就是它的好处。
” 爹爹说“花生的用处固然很多但有一样是很可贵的。
这小小的豆不像那好看的苹果、桃子、石榴把它们的果实悬在枝上鲜红嫩绿的颜色令人一望而发生羡慕的心。
它只把果子埋在地的等到成熟才容人把它挖出来。
你们偶然看见一棵花生瑟缩地长在地上不能立刻辨出它有没有果实非得等到你接触它才能知道。
” 我们都说“是的。
”母亲也点点头。
爹爹接下去说“所以你们要像花生因为它是有用的不是伟大、好看的东西。
”我说“那么人要做有用的人不要做伟大、体面的人了。
”爹爹说“这是我对于你们的希望。
” 我们谈到夜阑才散所有花生食品虽然没有了然而父亲的话现在还印在我心版上。
本文是1892-1941的一篇久为流传的散文。
作者回忆自己童年时代的一个小小片段以朴实无华、清新自然的笔调从花生的平凡而有用谈到做人的道理富于哲理反映他身处旧社会的污泥浊流而洁身自好、不慕虚名的思想境界。
标题落花生刘士聪先生下称”刘”译The Peanut 张培基先生下称”张”译: Peanuts 分析The Peanut 让人联想到花生的种类。
落花生 张培基译文 The Peanut
The PeanutXu DishanAt the back of our house there was half a mu of unused land. “It’s a pity to let it lie idle like that,” Mother said. “Since you all enjoy eating peanuts, let us open it up and make it a peanut garden.” At that my brother, sister and I were all delighted and so were the young housemaids. And then some went to buy seeds, some began to dig up the ground and others watered it and, in a couple of months, we had a harvest! “Let us have a party tonight to celebrate,” Mother suggested, “and ask Dad to join us for a taste of our fresh peanuts. What do you say?” We all agreed, of course. Mother cooked the peanuts in a variety of styles and told us to go to the thatched pavilion in the garden for the celebration.The weather was not very good that night but, to our great delight, Father came all the same.“Do you like peanuts?” Father asked.“Yes!” We all answered eagerly.“But who can tell me what the peanut is good for?”“It is very delicious to eat,” my sister took the lead.“It is good for ma king oil,” my brother followed.“It is inexpensive,” I said. “Almost everyone can afford it and everyone enjoys eating it. I think this is what is good for.”“Peanut is good for many things,” Father said, “but there is one thing that is particularly good about it. Unlike apples, peaches and pomegranates that display their fruits up in the air, attracting you with their beautiful colors, peanut buries its fruit in the earth. It does not show itself until you dig it out when it is ripe and, unless you dig it out, you can’t tell it bears fruit or not just by its frail stem quivering above ground.”“That’s true,” we all said and Mother nodded her assent, too. “So you should try to be like the peanut,” Father went on, “because it is useful, though not great or at tractive.”“Do you mean,” I asked, “we should learn to be useful but not seek to be great or attractive?”“Yes,” Father said. “This is what I expect of you.”We stayed up late that night, eating all the peanuts Mother had cooked for us. But father’s words remained vivid in my memory till this day.（刘世聪译）PeanutsXu DishanBehind our house there lay half a mou vacant land. Mother said: “It’s a pity to let it lie waste. Since you all like to eat peanuts so very much, why not plant some here?” That exhilarated us children and our servant girls as well, and soon we started buying seeds, ploughing the land and watering the plants. We gathered in a good harvest just after a couple of months!Mother said, “How about giving a party this evening to celebrate the harvest and inviting your Daddy to have a taste of our newly-harvested peanuts?” We all agreed. Mother made quite a few varieties of goodies out of the peanuts, and told us that the party would be held in the thatched pavilion on the peanut plot.It looke d like rain that evening, yet, to our great joy, father came nevertheless.”Do you like peanuts?” asked father.“Yes, we do!”we vied in giving the answer.“Which of you could name the good things in peanuts?”“Peanuts taste good,” said my elder sister.“Peanuts produce edible oil,” said my elder sister.“Peanuts are so cheap,” said I, “that anyone can afford to eat them. Peanuts are everyone’s favourite. That’s why we call peanuts good.”“It’s true that peanuts have many uses,” said father, “but they’re m ost beloved in one respect. Unlike nice-looking apples, peaches, and pomegranates, which hang their fruit on branches and win people’s admiration with their brilliant colours, tiny little peanuts bury themselves underground and remain unearthed until they’re ripe. When you come upon a peanut plant lying curled up on the ground, you can never immediately tell whether or not it bears any nuts until you touch them.”“That’s true,” we said in unison. Mother also nodded. “So you must take after peanuts,” father continued, “because they’re useful though not great and nice-looking.”“Then you mean one should be useful rather than great and nice-looking,” I said.“That’s what I expect of you,” father concluded.We kept chatting until the party broke up late at night. Today, though nothing is left of the goodies made of peanuts, father’s words remain engraved in my mind.（张培基译）。
英汉译作落花生鉴赏
英汉译作落花生鉴赏《落花生》英译文对比赏析—20__130018杨莎莎《落花生》的作者是许地山现代作家、学者。
名赞字地山笔名落花生。
祖籍广东__生于台湾台南一个爱国志士的家庭。
回大陆后落籍福建龙溪。
1910年中学毕业后曾任师范、中学教员。
1917年考入燕京大学文学院1920年毕业留校任教。
期间与翟秋白、郑振铎等人联合主办《新社会》旬刊积极宣传革命。
“五·四”前后从事文学活动1921年1月他和沈雁冰、叶圣陶、郑振铎等12人在北平发起成立文学研究会创办《小说月报》。
1922年往美国入纽约哥伦比亚大学研究院哲学系研究宗教史和宗教比较学获文学硕士学位。
后转入英国牛津大学曼斯菲尔学院研究宗教学、印度哲学、梵文、人类学、民俗学等。
1927年回国在燕京大学文学院和宗教学院任副教授、教授同时致力于文学创作。
许地山一生创作的文学作品多以__、台、粤和东南亚、印度为背景主要著作有《空山灵雨》、《缀网劳蛛》、《危巢坠筒》、《道学史》、《达衷集》、《印度文学》；译著有《二十夜问》、《太阳底下降》、《孟加拉民间故事》等。
《落花生》是著名作家和翻译家许地山的一篇深受读者喜爱的散文。
文中的父亲借平凡的花生讲述人生的道理深入浅出富于哲理。
作者回忆自己童年时代的一个小小片段以朴实无华、清新自然的笔调从花生的平凡而有用谈到做人的道理富于哲理反映他身处旧社会的污泥浊流而洁身自好、不慕虚名的思想境界。
本文将从张培基和刘士聪的《落花生》译文入手进行对比赏析。
下面首先对译者进行一下介绍。
张培基教授1921年生福建省__市人。
1945年毕业于上海圣约翰大学英文系。
同年任《上海自由西报》英文记者、《中国评论周报》（英文）特约撰稿人。
翌年赴日本东京远东国际军事法庭任英文翻译约两载半随后赴美学习1949年于美国印地安纳大学英国文学系肄业后回国。
历任北京外文出版社编辑、中国人民解放军外国语学院教授、北京对外经贸大学教授。
中国译协第一、三届理事现任《英语世界》杂志顾问。
落花生译文比较
翻译作业第二次《落花生》英译文的分析比较·原文来源《落花生》作者是中国现代作家许地山（1892-1941），原文语篇选自张培基译注，1999年，《英译中国现代散文选》（汉英对照），上海：上海外语教育出版社。
·译文来源< 1 > 译文1为张培基译，选自张培基译注，1999年，《英译中国现代散文选》（汉英对照），上海：上海外语教育出版社。
< 2> 译文2为刘士聪译，选自乔萍、翟淑蓉、宋洪玮编著，1999年，《散文佳作108篇》（汉英/英汉对照），南京：译林出版社。
< 3 > 译文3选自中国文学出版社编, 1998年，《中国文学·现代散文卷》（汉英对照）, 外语教学与研究出版社&中国文学出版社。
·语体特征与翻译策略< 1 > 篇章《落花生》是作者回忆自己童年时代的一个小小片段。
通过父母与孩子们的对话、作者借父亲之口以花生的平凡而有用作为类比，暗含做人的道理。
< 2 > 句式因为对话构成了语篇的主体，所以句式简洁，以简单句和并列句为主；复句比较少使用。
< 3> 语义原文口语化倾向突出，语言普通，多为日常词汇；个别词语----如“爹爹”一词----具有早期方言色彩；与助词“的”的语义功能相同的“底”[de]的使用，使语篇流露出了早期现代汉语风格。
<4 > 翻译策略原文语言风格简练、朴素，翻译时要以保持原作娓娓讲故事的朴素风格为策略，译文除符合英语习惯和规范外，谴词宜力求通俗，造句宜力求简洁。
注意顺译与变通、直译与意译等一些基本概念、以及选词与标点；甚至要特别注意不能误译原文或误用英语----因为所选译文的确存在一些误译原文或误用英语的现象。
II 译法要点1.1语言共性与顺译 1.2辨证译论与变通1.3误用：搭配（VC） 1.4顺译：标点符号(破折号)1.5顺译：标点符号(分号) 1.6顺译：标点符号(感叹号)1.7 选词：近义词 1.8 语域：方言/口语1.9 形式与意义：一致性 1.10 明被动与暗被动1.11 误用：搭配（动词） 1.12 误译：暗被动1.13 顺译:主题主语 1.14变通：合译（语段→并列复句）1.15 选词：语篇因素 1.16 误用：介词短语III 原文与译文【原文】落花生我们屋后有半亩隙地。
张培基先生的英译文《落花生》赏析
张培基先生的英译文《落花生》赏析'Groundnuts' by Mr. Zhang Peiji: An Analysis'Groundnuts' is a poem written by the Chinese poet, Zhang Peiji. The poem is a beautiful portrayal of the humble peanut plant and the value it holds in Chinese culture.The first stanza of the poem describes the peanut plant in vivid detail, highlighting its hardy nature and the beauty of its flowers. The second stanza delves into the cultural significance of peanuts in China, describing how they were once used as currency and how they are now a staple in Chinese cuisine.The final stanza of the poem is a reflection on the resilience of the peanut plant and its ability to thrive in adverse conditions. The poem ends with the lines, 'It does not ask for much, but it gives so much in return. The humble groundnut, a true symbol of resilience.'Overall, 'Groundnuts' is a beautiful tribute to the peanut plant and the role it plays in Chinese culture. The poem is a reminder of the value of humility and resilience, and how even the most humble of things can hold great importance and meaning.。
落花生的三种译文
许地山·《落花生》英译刘士聪；张培基；杨宪益、戴乃迭译我们屋后有半亩隙地。
母亲说：“让它荒芜着怪可惜，既然你们那么爱吃花生，就辟来做花生园罢。
”我们几姊弟和几个小丫头都很喜欢——买种的买种，动土的动土，灌园的灌园；过不了几个月，居然收获了！妈妈说：“今年我们可以做一个收获节，也请你们爹爹来尝尝我们的新花生，如何？”我们都答应了。
母亲把花生做成好几样的食品，还吩咐这节期要在园里底茅亭举行。
那晚上的天色不大好，可是爹爹也到来，实在很难得！爹爹说：“你们爱吃花生么？”我们都争着答应：“爱！”“谁能把花生的好处说出来？”姊姊说：“花生的气味很美。
”哥哥说：“花生可以制油。
”我说：“无论何等人都可以用贱价买它来吃；都喜欢吃它。
这就是它的好处。
”爹爹说：“花生的用处固然很多；但有一样是很可贵的。
这小小的豆不像那好看的苹果、桃子、石榴，把它们底果实悬在枝上，鲜红嫩绿的颜色，令人一望而发生羡慕的心。
他只把果子埋在地底，等到成熟，对容人把他挖出来。
你们偶然看见一棵花生瑟缩地长在地上，不能立刻辨出它有没有果实，非得等到你接触他才能知道。
”我们都说：“是的。
”母亲也点点头。
爹爹接下去说：“所以你们要像花生，因为他是有用的，不是伟大、好看的东西。
”我说：“那么，人要做有用的人，不要做伟大、体面的人了。
”爹爹说：“这是我对于你们的希望。
”我们谈到夜阑才散，所有花生食品虽然没有了，然而父亲的话现在还印在我心版上。
The PeanutXu DishanAt the back of our house there was half a mu of unused land. “It’s a pity to let it lie idle like that,” Mother said.“Since you all enjoy eating peanuts, let us open it up and make it a peanut garden.” At that my brother, sister and I were all delighted and so were the young housemaids. And then some went to buy seeds, some began to dig up the ground and others watered it and, in a couple of months, we had a harvest!“Let us have a party tonight to celebrate,” Mother suggested, “and ask Dad to join us for a taste of our fresh peanuts. What do you say?” We all agreed, of course. Mother cooked the peanuts in a variety of styles and told us to go to the thatched pavilion in the garden for the celebration.The weather was not very good that night but, to our great delight, Father came all the same.“Do you like peanuts?” Father asked.“Yes!” We all answered eagerly.“But who can tell me what the peanut is good for?”“It is very delicious to eat,” my sister took the lead.“It is good for making oil,” my brother followed.“It is inexpensive,” I said. “Almost everyone can afford it and everyone enjoys eating it. I think this is w hat is good for.”“Peanut is good for many things,” Father said, “but there is one thing that is particularly good about it. Unlike apples, peaches and pomegranates that display their fruits up in the air, attracting you with their beautiful colors, peanut buries its fruit in the earth. It does not show itself until you dig it out when it is ripe and, unless you dig it out, you can’t tell it bears fruit or not just by its frail stem quivering above ground.”“That’s true,” we all said and Mother nodded her assent, too. “So you should try to be like the peanut,” Father went on, “because it is useful, though not great or attractive.”“Do you mean,” I asked, “we should learn to be useful but not seek to be great or attractive?”“Yes,” Father said. “This is what I expect of you.”We stayed up late that night, eating all the peanuts Mother had cooked for us. But father’s words remained vivid in my memory till this day.（刘世聪译）PeanutsXu DishanBehind our house there lay half a mou vacant land. Mother said: “It’s a pity to let it lie waste. Since you all like to eat peanuts so very much, why not plant some here?” That exhilarated us children and our servant girls as well, and soon we started buying seeds, ploughing the land and watering the plants. We gathered in a good harvest just after a couple of months!Mother said, “How about giving a party this evening to celebrate the harvest and inviting your Daddy to have a taste of our newly-harvested peanuts?” We all agreed. Mother made quite a few varieties of goodies out of the peanuts, and told us that the party would be held in the thatched pavilion on the peanut plot.It looked like rain that evening, yet, to our great joy, father came nevertheless.”Do you like peanuts?” asked father.“Yes, we do!”we vied in giving the answer.“Which of you could name the good things in peanuts?”“Peanuts taste good,” said my elder sister.“Peanuts produce edible oil,” said my elder sist er.“Peanuts are so cheap,” said I, “that anyone can afford to eat them. Peanuts are everyone’s favourite. That’s why we call peanuts good.”“It’s true that peanuts have many uses,” said father, “but they’re most beloved in one respect. Unlike nice-looking apples, peaches, and pomegranates, which hang their fruit on branches and win people’s admiration with their brilliant colours, tiny little peanuts bury themselves underground and remain unearthed until they’re ripe. When you come upon a peanut plant lying curled up on the ground, you can never immediately tell whether or not it bears any nuts until you touch them.”“That’s true,” we said in unison. Mother also nodded. “So you must take after peanuts,” father continued, “because they’re useful though not g reat andnice-looking.”“Then you mean one should be useful rather than great and nice-looking,” I said.“That’s what I expect of you,” father concluded.We kept chatting until the party broke up late at night. Today, though nothing is left of the goodies made of peanuts, father’s words remain engraved in my mind.（张培基译）The PeanutXu DishanBehind our house there was a patch of land. “It would be a pity to let it go wild,” said Mother. “I suggest that since you are all so fond of peanuts you should grow some there.”We children and the little maidservants were all delighted. Some of us bought seeds, some dug up the plot and others watered it. In just a few months we had a harvest.Mother said, “Let’s have a harvest festival tonight and invite your father to taste our fresh peanuts.”We all agreed. Mother made a variety of dishes using our peanuts and instructed that the festival should be held in the thatched pavilion in the garden.The weather was not very good that evening, but even Father put in an appearance, which was a rare event.“Do you all like peanuts?” asked Father.“Yes!” we all clamoured to reply.“Who can tell me what’s good about peanuts?”“They taste good,” said older sister.“They can be made into oil,” said older brother.“Everybody can afford to buy them, whoever they m ight be, and everyone likes them. That’s what’s good about peanuts,” said I.Father said, “In fact the peanut has many uses, but the most valuable thing about this little nut is this: it’s not like the apple, peach or pomegranate, flaunting their bright, beautiful fruits on their branches for all to see and admire. The peanut lies buried in the soil, waiting until it is ripe before letting people dig it up. If ever you come across a shy peanut plant you cannot immediately tell whether or not it has any nuts. You have to find them to be certain.”We all agreed with this and Mother nodded her head too. Father continued, “So you should all try to be like the peanut, because it is neither grand nor beautiful, but useful.”“Does that mean that people should try to be useful rather than famous or great?”I asked.“That is what I hope of you all,” Father replied.We talked late into the night before dispersing. Although we ate all the peanuts that evening, Father’s words still remain embedded in my mind.（杨宪益、戴乃迭译）。
落花生三篇译文赏析
落花生三篇译文赏析标题：落花生译文一：Peanuts译文二：The Peanut译文三：The Peanut赏析：the+单数名词：以个别别的、具体的实务来象征一些相关的综合的抽象事物。
结合语境：“爹爹接下去说：‘所以你们要像花生，’‘要做有用的人。
’”文章主要是赞扬花生这一物种的优良品格，The Peanut象征落花生的精神，所以The Peanut比Peanuts要好。
选段一：我们屋后有半亩隙地。
母亲说，“让它荒芜着怪可惜，既然你们那么爱吃花生，就辟来做花生园罢。
”我们几姊弟和几个小丫头都很喜欢——买种的买种，动土的动土，灌园的灌园；过不了几个月，居然收获了!译文一：Behind our house there lay half a mu of vacant land. Mother said, "It's a pity to let it lie waste. Since you all like to eat peanuts so much, why not have them planted here. “That exhilarated us children and our se rvant girls as well, and soon we started buying seeds, ploughing the land and watering the plants . We gathered in a good harvest just after a couple of months!译文二：At the back of our house there was half a mu of vacant land. "It’s a pity to let it go to w aste like that,” Mother said. "Since you all enjoy eating peanuts, let us open it up and make it a peanut garden." At that my brother, sister and I were all delighted and so were the young housemaids. Some went to buy seeds, some dug the ground and others watered it and, in a couple of months, we had a harvest!译文三：Behind our house there was a patch of land. "It would be a pity to let it go wild.” said Mother. “I suggest that since you are all so fond of peanuts you should grow some there.”We children and the little maidservants were all delighted. Some of us bought seeds, some dug up the plot and others watered it. In just a few months we had a harvest.赏析：“屋后”从逻辑上讲应该是房子的“后面”Behind，而不是房间的“后部”At the back of。
BW1204第3组--落花生翻译赏析
《落花生》翻译比较与赏析《落花生》是许地山（1893-1941）的散文作品之一，在这篇文章中，作者用朴实有力的文字，从花生的平凡而有用谈到了做人的哲学道理。
下面对刘士聪、张培基和杨宪益三位大家的译文稍作赏析：1.首先就文章题目“落花生”来说，“落花生”只是花生的一种别名，有“Peanuts”和“The Peanut”两种译法，Peanuts或许能够让我们联想到摆放在桌上的一碟花生，而“The Peanut”不仅能让人联想到花生的果实，还能让人想到花生的茎、叶等，所以“The Peanut”更适合做标题。
2.“半亩隙地”：在英文中没有“亩”的概念，相比较来说，像刘和张那样直译成“mu”，杨译的“a patch of land”在表达上更加地道、直观。
3.文章第一句话“我们屋后有半亩隙地。
”，刘译的“At the back of…”是表示在某个空间范围内的后面，例如：教室的后面放着几把伞。
（伞是在教室里面的），所以刘的表达有误。
此外，可以在母亲说之前加上“One day”,这样就不会那么突兀了。
4.“荒芜”：刘译的“let it lie idle”、张译的“let it lie waste”和杨译的“let it go wild”在结构上没什么大的区别，只是idle可能比waste更好。
5.“我们几姊弟，几个小丫头”：杨译的“we children”和刘译的“my brother,sister and I”相比较，前者更加简洁，而后者比较累赘。
在文章和作者的背景之下，这里是指作者家的仆人，三种译法“the young housemaid”, “servant girls”和“little maidservants”都是可以的。
6.“居然”可以看出作者的一种喜悦、惊讶的情感，在张和杨均用了“just”一词来表达。
7.“做一个收获节”，“如何”：妈妈提出要庆祝花生的收获，是一种建议，3个译文中，张译的“How about…”是比较可取的，但张用的“giving a party”是指邀请很多人参加的大型聚会，而文中是指小型的家庭聚会，所以是不恰当的。
落花生翻译比较与赏析
《落花生》翻译比较与赏析苏慧敏2004020337 商英学院04英语（国际贸易）3班前言：这是一篇比较赏析，为了阅读的方便，我将其按照原文的顺序分析。
因为篇幅的关系，我只选了前面几段赏析。
下文中画线表示译的好的部分，数字表示建议改进的地方。
翻译原文：落花生许地山我们屋后有半亩隙地。
母亲说：“让它荒芜着怪可惜，既然称们那么爱吃花生，就辟来做花生园罢。
”我们几姊弟和几个小丫头都很喜欢——买种的买种，动土的动土，灌园的灌园；过不了几个月，居然收获了!妈妈说：“今晚我们可以做一个收获节，也请你们爹爹来尝尝我们的新花生，如何?”我们都答应了。
母亲把花生做成好几样食品，还吩咐这节期要在园里的茅亭举行。
那晚上的天色不大好，可是爹爹也到来，实在很难得!爹爹说：“你们爱吃花生么?”我们都争着答应：“爱!”“谁能把花生的好处说出来?”。
姊姊说：“花生的气味很美。
”哥哥说：“花生可以制油。
”我说：“无论何等人都可以用贱价买它来吃；都喜欢吃它。
这就是它的好处。
”爹爹说：“花生的用处固然很多；但有一样是很可贵的。
这小小的豆不像那好看的苹果、桃子、石榴，把它们的果实悬在枝上，鲜红嫩绿的颜色，令人一望而发生羡慕的心。
它只把果子埋在地的，等到成熟，才容人把它挖出来。
你们偶然看见一棵花生瑟缩地长在地上，不能立刻辨出它有没有果实，非得等到你接触它才能知道。
”我们都说：“是的。
”母亲也点点头。
爹爹接下去说：“所以你们要像花生，因为它是有用的，不是伟大、好看的东西。
”我说：“那么，人要做有用的人，不要做伟大、体面的人了。
”爹爹说：“这是我对于你们的希望。
”我们谈到夜阑才散，所有花生食品虽然没有了，然而父亲的话现在还印在我心版上。
本文是（1892-1941）的一篇久为流传的散文。
作者回忆自己童年时代的一个小小片段，以朴实无华、清新自然的笔调，从花生的平凡而有用，谈到做人的道理，富于哲理，反映他身处旧社会的污泥浊流而洁身自好、不慕虚名的思想境界。
《落花生》英译文对比赏析-精品文档（精品文档）
《落花生》英译文对比赏析-精品文档（精品文档）《落花生》英译文对比赏析【】The paper will compare and appreciate the two English versions―Peanuts written by Xu Dishan from the perspective of aesthetic process. The article will specifically appreciate these two English versions from these following three processes：cognition， process and reproduction. The translation of prose needs consideration of aesthetics and only in this way can the translators achieve an excellent likeness with the original text.一、关于落花生《落花生》是现代散文家许地山先生的杰作，发表于20世纪20年代，正是由于其“质朴淳厚、意境深远”，而被誉为现代散文的经典。
《落花生》一文主要追忆作者年幼时，父亲以花生为榜样，来告诫子女做人真理。
父亲的话对作者一生影响深远。
这篇散文以叙事的方式，进行了独具匠心的表达，语言平实、简明精当，但意趣深远，寓理于物。
本文从翻译美学理论之翻译审美过程来对《落花生》两个英译本进行对比赏析，分别为张培基先生译本（以下简称“张译”），刘士聪先生译本（以下简称“刘译”），来领略散文英译的妙处。
二、关于翻译美学之翻译审美过程1.认识。
要想成功地传译原文所具备的美学信息，须对源语有深刻、彻底地认识。
而这种认识既包括原文语言结构美，也包括风格、意境和文化内涵之美。
总之，译文一定要与原文达到“神似”的境界。
落花生 翻译大家的翻译赏析
落花生赏析原文：我们屋后有半亩隙地。
母亲说：“让它荒芜着怪可惜，既然你们那么爱吃花生，就辟来做花生园罢。
”我们几姊弟和几个小丫头都很喜欢——买种的买种，动土的动土，灌园的灌园；过不了几个月，居然收获了！《落花生》许地山译文1（张培基）：Behind our house there lay half a mou vacant land. Mother said: “It’s a pity to let it lie waste. Since you all like to eat peanuts so very much, why not plant some here?” That exhilarated us children and our servant girls as well, and soon we started buying seeds, ploughing the land and watering the plants. We gathered in a good harvest just after a couple of months!Peanuts Xu Dishan译文2（刘士聪）：At the back of our house there was half a mu of unused land. “It’s a pity to let it lie idle like that,” Mother said. “Since you all enjoy eating peanuts, let us open it up and make it a peanut garden.” At that my brother, sister and I were all delighted and so were the young housemaids.And then some went to buy seeds, some began to dig up the ground and others watered it and, in a couple of months, we had a harvest!Peanuts Xu Dishan译文3（中国文学出版社编）：Behind our house there was a patch of land. “It would be a pity to let it go wild”said Mother.“I suggest that since you are all so fond of peanuts you should grow some there.”We children and the little maidservants were all delighted. Some of us bought seeds, some dug up the plot and others watered it. In just a few months we had a harvest.赏析：散文是一种多以描写真实事件为基础的能够抒发个人感情的文章，在结构上注重层次，往往以生动简洁来打动读者的心扉。
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The Peanut
Xu Dishan
At the back of our house there was half a mu of unused land. “It’s a pity to let it lie idle like that,” Mother said. “Since you all enjoy eating peanuts, let us open it up and make it a peanut garden.” At that my brother, sister and I were all delighted and so were the young housemaids. And then some went to buy seeds, some began to dig up the ground and others watered it and, in a couple of months, we had a harvest!“Let us have a party tonight to celebrate,” Mother suggested, “and a sk Dad to join us for a taste of our fresh peanuts. What do you say” We all agreed, of course. Mother cooked the peanuts in a variety of styles and told us to go to the thatched pavilion in the garden for the celebration. The weather was not very good that night but, to our great delight, Father came all the same.
“Do you like peanuts” Father asked.
“Yes!” We all answered eagerly.
“But who can tell me what the peanut is good for”
“It is very delicious to eat,” my sister took the lead.
“It is good for making oil,” my brother followed.
“It is inexpensive,” I said. “Almost everyone can afford it and everyone enjoys eating it. I think this is what is good for.”“Peanut is good for many things,” Father said, “but there is one thing that is particularly good about it. Unlike apples, peaches and pomegranates that display their fruits up in the air, attracting you with their beautiful colors, peanut buries its fruit in the earth. It does not show itself until you dig it out when it is ripe and, unless you dig it
out, you can’t tell it bears fruit or not just by its frail stem quivering above ground.”
“That’s true,” we all said and Mother nodded her assent, too. “So you should try to be like the peanut,” Father went on, “because it is useful, though not great or attrac tive.”
“Do you mean,” I asked, “we should learn to be useful but not seek to be great or attractive”
“Yes,” Father said. “This is what I expect of you.”
We stayed up late that night, eating all the peanuts Mother had cooked for us. But father’s words remai ned vivid in my memory till this day.
（刘世聪译）
Peanuts
Xu Dishan
Behind our house there lay half a mou vacant land. Mother said: “It’s a pity to let it lie waste. Since you all like to eat peanuts so very much, why not plant some here” That exhilarated us children and our servant girls as well, and soon we started buying seeds, ploughing the land and watering the plants. We gathered in a good harvest just after a couple of months!
Mother said, “How about giving a party this evening to celebrate the harvest and inviting your Daddy to have a taste of our newly-harvested peanuts” We all agreed. Mother made quite a few varieties of goodies out of the peanuts, and told us that the party would be held in the thatched
pavilion on the peanut plot.
It looked like rain that evening, yet, to our great joy, father came nevertheless.”Do you like peanuts” asked father.
“Yes, we do!”we vied in giving the answer.
“Which of you could name the good things in peanuts”
“Peanuts taste good,” said my elder sister.
“Peanuts prod uce edible oil,” said my elder sister.
“Peanuts are so cheap,” said I, “that anyone can afford to eat them. Peanuts are everyone’s favourite. That’s why we call peanuts good.”“It’s true that peanuts have many uses,” said father, “but they’re most beloved in one respect. Unlike nice-looking apples, peaches, and pomegranates, which hang their fruit on branches and win people’s admiration with their brilliant colours, tiny little peanuts bury themselves underground and remain unearthed until they’re ripe. Whe n you come upon a peanut plant lying curled up on the ground, you can never immediately tell whether or not it bears any nuts until you touch them.”“That’s true,” we said in unison. Mother also nodded. “So you must take after peanuts,” father continued, “because they’re useful though not great and nice-looking.”
“Then you mean one should be useful rather than great and nice-looking,”
I said.
“That’s what I expect of you,” father concluded.
We kept chatting until the party broke up late at night. Today, though nothing is left of the goodies made of peanuts, father’s words remain engraved in my mind.
（张培基译）。