2020最新全国各地名校模考应用文改错题集锦
高考语用应用文改错
高考语用应用文改错 Modified by JACK on the afternoon of December 26, 2020应用文改错练习1. 刘雪数学成绩不好，数学课代表李兰很着急，想帮帮她。
下面是他们之间的对话，请指出对话中四处不得体的地方并加以改正。
李兰：刘雪同学，这次考试数学题并不难，但你的成绩却不是很理想啊。
刘雪：我数学基础不好，成绩总是提不上去。
李兰：我是数学课代表，以后就指教你吧。
刘雪：那多不好，会耽误你的学习的。
李兰：没关系，从下周开始，有什么不懂的，你都可以来咨询我，我一定会不吝赐教的。
刘雪：那我就先谢谢你了，以后我会不耻下问的。
答案：指教改帮助。
咨询（询问，征求，对象一般为机关单位，企业）改问。
不吝赐教（客套话，用于请教别人时，不能用于自己）改不遗余力不耻下问改经常问你2.下面你是一位父亲给正在上高三的儿子的一封信，其中有三处不得体，请找出并加以修改。
亲爱的儿子：你好！高考在即，只剩下一百天的时间了！此时此刻，爸爸的心情和你一样难以平静。
十二年磨剑，百日见分晓。
你即将走向人生的又一个重要赛场，预祝你冲刺百日，马到成功！在这里，一并奉上你妈妈的祝福。
我们相信，你一定能忝列北大新生的队伍中！希望你好好配合老师，不耻下问。
当你金榜题名时，老师们会翻到非常欣慰的！答案：1.奉上（下对上）改送上 2.忝改为站在（忝列谦辞，表示辱没他人，心中有愧） 3 不耻下问改多多请教3.下面这段文字有5处用词不当，请指出并改正，使文段语言简明、得体。
新年将要莅临。
在这辞旧迎新之际的时候，编辑部格外热闹。
不少读者通过热线电话迎来了感人的祝福，也有读者寄来了贺卡，写下了如火的诗句。
编辑部全体成员感同身受，在此，发自肺腑衷心地感谢各位朋友；同时，还想惠赠各位朋友一份新年礼物，这就是编辑部办好刊物的三条承诺：全方位扫描，零距离贴近，无障碍阅读。
答案：莅临改来临 2.之际的时候保留一个 3.感同身受改为十分感激 4.发自肺腑与衷心保留一个 5 惠赠改回赠4.下面是一则征稿启事，在语言表达上有三处不得体的地方，请指出并加以修改。
2020高考英语冲刺短文改错最新名校模拟30篇(上)(13页)
2020高考英语冲刺短文改错最新名校模拟30篇(上)短文改错1（安徽省皖江名校联盟2020届高三第一次联考）Recently I’ve done a survey in our class on my classmates think of ads. The majority of my classmate take a positive attitude to ads in that ads do bring us convenient. Other students argue that being largely expo-sing to ads may lead to the sameness ranging from clothes, shelters to transportation.From my point of the view, I prefer the former opinion to the latter for the following reasons. The first rea-son is rooted in the fact that there was various ads so that people have various choices. Secondly，with ads, that would be difficult to get across a product's basic message. However, ads，instead of making people seem to be the same. contributes greatly to people’s better life.参考答案：Recently I’ve done a survey in our class on ∧my classmates think of ads. The majority ofwhatmy classmate take a positive attitude to ads in that ads do bring us convenient. Other students argue classmates conveniencethat being largely exposing to ads may lead to the sameness ranging from clothes, shelters to transportation.exposedFrom my point of the view, I prefer the former opinion to the latter for the following reasons. The 删除first reason is rooted in the fact that there was various ads so that people have various choices.areSecondly, with ads, that would be difficult to get across a product’s basic message. However, ads, without it Therefore或Thus instead of making people seem to be the same, contributes greatly to people’s better life.contribute2珠海市2020届高三上学期期末考试Paul, congratulation! I’m exciting to know your admission to Tsinghua University. I am going to takea very important exam the next year. I hope that you can share me some ways that was used in the preparation. For example, how did you reasonable spend your time? Sometimes I do not have enough time to finish your assignment. Besides, could you please tell me what I can deal with anxious and the lack of sleep? To be honest, I had been under great pressure for a long time, especially when my grades were low. Looking forward to your reply!参考答案：Paul, congratulation! I’m exciting to know your admission to Tsinghua University. I am going to take congratulations exciteda very important exam the next year. I hope that you can share ∧me some ways that was used in删除with werethe preparation. For example, how did you reasonable spend your time? Sometimes I do not have enough timereasonablyto finish your assignment. Besides, could you please tell me what I can deal with anxious and the lack my how anxietyof sleep? To be honest, I had been under great pressure for a long time, especially when my gradeshavewere low. Looking forward to your reply!3重庆市第一中学2020届高三上学期期末考试I will never forget that at the age of 12 I was asked to deliver a speech entitled An Unforgettable Experience before the whole class! How terrible shy I was the moment I thought of that. I had no choice but prepare for it, though. First, I drafted the speech, which was easy. But the hardest part lies in my oral presentation. The real moment began as I stood on the platform with my legs trembled and my mind blank. But my listener were waiting patiently. Gradually I found myself back, giving out my speech fluently. After which seemed to be ages, I found my audience applauding. I made it! From then on, my fear disappeared. Actually with your confidence building up, I now turn out to be the great speaker. Looking at back, I know the greatest difficulty on the way to success is fear. Overcome it, or you will be able to achieve your goals.参考答案I will never forget that at the age of 12 I was asked to deliver a speech entitled An Unforgettable Experience before the whole class! How terrible shy I was the moment I thought of that. I had noterriblychoice but ∧prepare for it, though. First, I drafted the speech, which was easy. But the hardest topart lies in my oral presentation. The real moment began as I stood on the platform with my legs laytrembled and my mind blank. But my listener were waiting patiently. Gradually I found myself trembling listenersback, giving out my speech fluently. After which seemed to be ages, I found my audiencewhatapplauding. I made it! From then on, my fear disappeared. Actually with your confidencemybuilding up, I now turn out to be the great speaker. Looking at back, I know the greatest difficulty ona 删掉the way to success is fear. Overcome it, or you will be able to achieve your goals.and4厦门外国语学校2020届高三第三次月考There are times in our lives which we may feel as if we need to walk away from everything. We are tired of trying so hard to work towards our fixing goal in life. Life seems to have become too complex to bear it. It is for these times in our lives that we need to remind ourselves that this will pass. We have joy, love or laughter in our lives which we had simply lost sight of.There is nothing wrong with taking a step back. Give ourselves the time to rest and relax may be all we need to return to our normal activity. We'll then work energetic with new sense of commitment to our best life.参考答案：There are times in our lives which we may feel as if we need to walk away from everything. Wewhenare tired of trying so hard to work towards our fixing goal in life. Life seems to have become too fixedcomplex to bear it. It is for these times in our lives that we need to remind ourselves that this will 删掉 atpass. We have joy, love or laughter in our lives which we had simply lost sight of.and haveThere is nothing wrong with taking a step back. Give ourselves the time to rest and relax may be Givingall we need to return to our normal activity. We'll then work energetic with ∧ new sense ofactivities energetically acommitment to our best life.5武邑中学2020届高三月考There may be two mainly reasons for the popularity of English in China in recent year: the economic reform and the open policy. With the development of international trade and co -operation, English as the international language play a more and more important role. The demand for people known English is increasing. The labor market needs you to do business with foreign companies, to open foreign markets, and to learn to use up advanced technology from abroad. They are also needed to participate international affairs. University students who English level is high are easily employed and well pay. This encourages people to learn English.参考答案：There may be two mainly reasons for the popularity of English in China in recent year: theeconomic reform and the open policy. With the development of international trade and co -operation, English as the international language play a more and more important role. The demand for peopleknown English is increasing. The labor market needs you to do business with foreign companies, to yearsan playsknowingthem mainopen foreign markets, and to learn to use up advanced technology from abroad. They are also neededto participate ∧international affairs. University students who English level is high are easily in whoseemployed and well pay. This encourages people to learn English.6十堰市2020年高三调研考试Dear Peter,I am pleasing to tell you that we have returned to China safely. I'm writing to express our appreciations for your reception.We were impressed with our warm entertainment. With your careful preparation, the journey couldn't have been so successfully. We benefited a lot from the visit. We get a precious chance to learn British culture and history. It also offered us a platform where we could displayed traditional Chinese culture such as like paper-cutting and Chinese painting to more foreigners. We would like to invite you visit China this summer holiday, so you can experience the Chinese culture in person and have a deeper understand of it.Yours,Li Hua 参考答7存瑞中学2019-2020学年度第一学期第三次质检All of we students want to grow up healthily and happily. Here are my tips to you to achieve this goal.First of all, we should have the positive attitude to life. As we all know, there is not onlysunshine but also hard times in our life. So when face with difficulties, we should fight against them bravely. Moreover, working hard is essential that it will contribute to realizing our goal. The reason is because knowledge is power. Only by working hard we get the power to make contribution to our motherland. Final, taking exercise regularly and having balanced diets is also of great importance.The healthier we are, the happier we will be.参考答案8辽宁葫芦岛市2020届高三质量检测About how to keep healthy, I’d like to offer my advices. As we know, we teenagers are going through a rapid growth which needs to be support by a healthy and balanced diet. Thus, we need a variety of food but cut out the food rich in sugar or fat. However, we should take physical exercise regular. For example, we can play basketball or take walk after school. Have enough sleep is of great importance. Therefore, you should have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not stayed up too late. Only in this way that can we keep fit.参考答案：About how to keep healthy, I’d like to offer my advices. As we know, we teenagers are goingadvicethrough a rapid growth which needs to be support by a healthy and balanced diet. Thus, we need asupportedvariety of food but cut out the food rich in sugar or fat. However, we should take physicaldown Besides/Moreoverexercise regular. For example, we can play basketball or take∧walk after school. Have enough regularly a Havingsleep is of great importance. Therefore, you should have at least eight hours of sleep every dayweand not stayed up too late. Only in this way that can we keep fit.stay9陕西咸阳市南郊中学2020届高三月考During my summer vacation last year, I participated some social activities. With the help of my English teacher, I eventual got a part-time job in the city library -----four morning a week. I sometimes stay there longer because there were too many readers. It was a temporary job and I only had a two-month contact with a library. The working hours suited me as mine vacation was just two months long. Although I didn’t earn a big salary, and yet I really enjoyed the atmosphere there. That I liked most about my job was working in complete silent. The only noise I could hear was that of people turn pages while reading.参考答案During my summer vacation last year, I participated∧some social activities.inWith the help of my English teacher, I eventual got a part-time job in the city library— foureventuallymorning a week. I sometimes stay there longer because there were too many readers.mornings stayedIt was a temporary job and I only had a two-month contact with a library. The working hourthesuited me as mine vacation was just two months long. Although I didn’t earn a big salary,myand yet I really enjoyed the atmosphere there. That I liked most about my job was working incompleteWhatsilent. The only noise I could hear was that of people turn pages while reading.silence turning10湖南浏阳市第三中学2020届高三月考Today, I would like to share with you some ways to study English. First, you were supposed toread something in English, such as reading one or two pages of a novel appeals to you each day. Second, you may find this helpful to watch English films. It help you to practise your listening, and makes learn English more interesting. Third, you should work hardly on your English writing by keeping an English diary. Besides focusing on listening or writing skills, you should also take every opportunities to speak English in and after class.On this way, you can use English every day and improve your fluency. I have been doing all these things, so I have made a great progress in learning English.参考答案Today, I would like to share with you some ways to study English. First, you were aresupposed to read something in English, such as reading one or two pages of a novel或appealsappealing to you each day. Second, you may findthisit helpful to watch English films. Ithelphelps you to practise your listening, and makeslearnlearning English more interesting. Third,you should work hardlyhard on your English writing by keeping an English diary. Besidesfocusing on listeningorand writing skills, you should also take everyopportunitiesopportunity to speakEnglish in and after class. On this way, you can use English every day and improve yourInfluency. I have been doing all these things, so I have made a great progress in learningEnglish. 删掉11山东师大附中2015级高三第一次模拟考试Dear John,Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening. Unfortunately, it is much to my regret which I cannot join in you and your family. I will be full occupied with an important exam come the day after tomorrow. I felt terribly sorry for missing the chance of so a happy get-together. I hope that all of you enjoying a good time. Is it possible for you and I to have a private meeting afterward? If so, please don’t hesitate to tell me your preferable dates. I am eager for a pleasant chat about you.Please allow me say sorry again.Yours,Li Hua参考答案：Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening. Unfortunately, it is much to my regret which I cannot join in you and your family. I will be full occupied with an important exam that 删掉 fullycome the day after tomorrow. I felt terribly sorry for missing the chance of so a happy get -together. I coming suchhope that all of you enjoying a good time. Is it possible for you and I to have a private meeting enjoy meafterward? If so, please don’t hesitate to tell me your preferable dates. I am eager for a pleasant chat dateabout you.withPlease allow me ∧say sorry again.to12(2018届福建省百所重点校高三联合考试)As my mother and father were always busy working, so I was often at home by myself. I felt boring all the time and I felt sorry for myself. One day, in my way home from school, I saw a person living in the park. He was wearing dirty but worn -out clothes. He gave me a big smile when he saw me. He looked if he was the happiest man in the world. Looked at him, I realized how luckily I really was. I have enough food to eat and enough clothes to wear and I had hard -working parents who really cared about him. I realized what grateful I was to my parents for all that I had.参考答案：As my mother and father were always busy working, I was often at home by myself. I felt all the time and I felt sorry for myself. One day, my way home from school, I saw a so boring boredin onperson living in the park. He was wearing dirtyworn -out clothes. He gave me a big smile when he saw me. He looked if he was the happiest man in the world. at him, I realized how I really was. I enough food to eat and enough clothes to wear and I had hard -working parents who really cared about. I realized grateful I was to my parents for all that I had.132018届山东省师大附中高三模拟考试Dear Mr. Wang,I'm Li Hua, a Senior 3 student in our school. I’m sorry to disturb you, and I have to ask a favor of you in the hope you will be so kind to help me.Ever since last month, my mother hadn’t allowed me to surf the Internet. In her opinion, it is the waste of time surfing the Internet and also affects my study. However, I don’t agree with him. With the Internet I can easily find the informations I need; I can compare notes to my classmates if I meet with problems in my study. Also I can share something that worry me with my friends, which reduces my stress. Facing with my mother’s rigid attitude, how should I do?I really need your help!Yours,Li Hua参考答案Dear Mr. Wang,I'm Li Hua, a Senior 3 student in our school. I’m sorry to disturb you,I have to ask a favor of you in the hope you will be so kind to help me. Ever since last month, my mother allowed me to surf the Internet. In her opinion, it is waste of time surfing the Internet and also affects my study. However, I don’t agree but and as ∧looked lookingluckily luckyhave had him me what how and but that ∧hadn 't hasn 'tthe awith. With the Internet I can easily find the I need; I can compare notes my classmates if I meet with problems in my study. Also I can share something that me with my friends, which reduces my stress. with my mother’s rigid attitude, should I do? I really need your help!Yours,Li Hua142018届安徽省江淮十校高三联考)Once there was a tale tell of a spider with the name Anansi. He wondered what to be more intelligent. He went around the village to collect for wisdom with a basket. Soon his basket was full. To hide it on the top of the tree with the basket tied to the front part of his body, he found hard to climb the tree. Then her youngest son walked by, “Why not carry a basket on your back instead?” Following his advice, Anansi climbed the tree easily, and he wasn’t happy. “I have collected so many wisdom, but my baby son is still wise than me. Take back your wisdom!” He throw the basket of wisdom into the air. And that’s how wisdom went all over the world.参考答案Once there was a tale of a spider with the name Anansi. He wondered to be more intelligent. He went around the village to collect wisdom with a basket. Soon his basket was full. To hide it on the top of the tree with the basket tied to the front part of his body, he foundhard to climb the tree. Then youngest son walked by, “Why not carry basket on your back instead?” Following his advice, Anansi climbed the tree easily, he wasn’t happy. “I have collected so wisdom, but my baby son is still than me. Take back your wisdom!” He the him herinformations information to withworrry worriesPacing Paced how what tell tellingwhat how for it her his a theand butmany muchwise wiser throw threwbasket of wisdom into the air. And that’s how wisdom went all over the world.152018届河北省衡水中学高三四模When talked about my dream. I recalled my childhood, which I started learning to sing. At that time it was my interest led me to sing. Hard although I learned, I was happy then. And with time going on, I have gradually realized sing is my whole life. I like it or enjoy it. I want to stand on an even big stage to sing where not only will my dream be come true but also I can send my beautiful song to all the audience. I want to transfer happy and encouragement to the audience by singing, letting us cheer up.参考答案When about my dream, I recalled my childhood,I started learning to sing. At that time it was my interest led me to sing. Hard I learned, I was happy then. And with time going on, I have gradually realized is my whole life. I like it enjoy it. I want to stand on anbeeven stage to sing where not only will my dream come true but also I can send my beautiful song to all the audience. I want to transfer and encouragement to the audience by singing, letting cheer up. []。
2020年高考【全国各省市模拟好题精选】英语试题集锦：短文改错(解析版)
2020年高考【全国各省市模拟好题精选】英语试题集锦：短文改错【湖南省五市十校2019-2020学年高三上学期第二次联考】1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was in our school hall where our school held a variety show last week. Filling with enthusiasm, all the teachers and students were attended the show, which proved lively and fantastic. The hall was beautiful decorated. There were twenty shows at all, including singing, dancing and role play. The shows were such wonderful that we all enjoyed it very much. All the performer were trying their best to show their talents to the audiences. As far as I am concerned, the variety show is meaningful activity as it can help us to relax ourselves from our busy study and enriched our school life at the same time.【答案】where→thatFilling→Filled删除students后的werebeautiful→beautifullyat→insuch→soit→themperformer→performersis后加aenriched→enrich【分析】这是一篇记叙文。
语文应用文改错题25题汇编（含答案）
语文应用文改错题25题汇编（含答案）应用文改错题25题汇编应用文改错主要错误在于谦辞敬辞、口语书面语转换、应用文格式这3大方面，此外也有部分涉及语病（如搭配不当）。
1．下面是南山XX中学学生刘林写给《语文报》编辑部的投稿信，其中有五处表达存在不得体的情况，请你找出来并进行修改。
《语文报》编辑部：我是南山XX中学学生刘林，是一位酷爱写作的妹仔。
久闻你刊大名，决定投稿。
现奉上大作《蒙茶飘香》一篇，敬请拜读。
还望务必拨冗回示为谢!此致敬礼!刘林2018年2月11日2．下面一则文稿在表达上有几处不妥当，请任意找出四处并改正。
某中学70周年校庆公告南依历山，东临趵泉，弦歌不辍，薪火相传。
2018年10月18日，山东省实验中学将迎来建校七十周年华诞。
作为齐鲁基础教育的一面旗帜，学校坚持实验性、示范性，在齐鲁文化的深厚滋养中，广育英才，名盛华夏。
为办好此次校庆活动，特面向各届校友，征集在校期间惠存的校徽、校服、奖章、笔记和具有纪念意义的物品。
并藉此向您们发出诚挚邀请：欢迎拨冗光临此次盛会，共商实验发展大计。
特此公告，敬祈传达。
某中学2018年6月1日3．下面是承德中学文学社社长给该校校长写的一封信，其中有五处在表达上不妥当，请找出来并改正。
尊敬的程校长：您好!我是敝校星云文学社的社长，我社想出版一本名为《放飞梦想》的书。
这本书收录了我社同学的102篇大作，是我们文学社成员智慧的结晶。
请您抽出时间拜读，为这本书写一篇序言。
您是著名的教育家，能得到您的鼎力相助，我社一定会蓬荜生辉。
希望您能同意，在此敬谢不敏!祝您工作顺利!承德中学星云文学社2018年5月6日4．下面是一封推荐信，其中有几处语言表达不得体，请找出来并加以修改。
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一直荣任我校晨曦文学社社长，热爱文学，爱好写作，曾在全国新概念作文大赛中获得一等奖，并有多篇大作发表在省级以上文学刊物上。
2020年高考英语全国卷模拟题汇编专题08 改错(解析版)
专题08 改错1．（2020届安徽淮北市高三第一次模拟考试）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写岀修改后的词。
注意：1.毎处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
My senior high school life is almost over. Although exciting about entering college, I can't help miss those good old days so much that I feel sad. I'm unwilling to say goodbye to everyone and everything I am familiar. However, I come to realize nature never. stood still. Different seasons come and go. Plants and animals die mid new one come to life. We, like everything in nature, has to adapt to the changes. Before knowing it, I am a kind of calm. Now I'd like to recall the most wonderful things which have happened, and accept happy whatever is to happen.【答案】1.exciting→excited2.miss→missing3.在familiar后加with4.stood→stands5.one→ones6.has→have7.Before→After8.删掉kind前面a9. what→that10. happy→happily【解析】这是一篇记叙文。
2020高考英语冲刺短文改错最新名校模拟30篇(下)(13页)
2020高考英语冲刺短文改错最新名校模拟30篇(下)短文改错162020年百师联盟届全国高三冲刺考（五）My uncle, director of Yonghua Company, has several expensive cars, which he used to enjoy driving. However, recently he has begun to ride his bicycle at and from work following a doctor's advices. The benefits of the change are obviously. He has become more energetic and is in good shape than before. Besides, he is happy that he can make difference to reducing pollution and preserve natural resources. Following his example, more and more people in his company, which spend a lot of time sitting in the office every day, have been started using bicycles, saying that with the popularity of shared bicycles, this is extremely convenient. Now this has become a new fashion in the company to go green or keep fit.参考答案：My uncle, director of Yonghua Company, has several expensive cars, which he used to enjoy driving.However, recently he has begun to ride his bicycle at and from work following a doctor's advices. The benefitsto advice of the change are obviously. He has become more energetic and is in good shape than before. Besides, he is obvious betterhappy that he can make ∧difference to reducing pollution and preserve natural resources. Following hisa preservingexample, more and more people in his company, which spend a lot of time sitting in the office every day, havewho 删掉been started using bicycles, saying that with the popularity of shared bicycles, this is extremely convenient.Now this has become a new fashion in the company to go green or keep fit.it and172020年百师联盟届全国高三冲刺考（四）Of all my teachers, Mr. Moore is the one what impresses me most. Though he is 43, but he looksvery young for his age. And he is one of most popular teachers in our school.Comparing with other teachers, Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching. He tries various way to make his classes lively and interesting. In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”. Therefore, instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think for us whenever he puts forward questions. Under his help, we've learned how to analyze or settle problems. What a wonderfully world of "why” he leads us to!He is such a learned person that we all admired him very much.参考答案：Of all my teachers, Mr. Moore is the one what impresses me most. Though he is 43, but he looks very youngthat/ who 删掉for his age. And he is one of ∧most popular teachers in our school.theComparing with other teachers, Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching. He tries various way to compared ways make his classes lively and interesting. In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but also understand“why”. Therefore, instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think for us whenever heourselves puts forward questions. Under his help, we've learned how to analyze or settle problems. What a wonderfullyWith and wonderful world of "why” he leads us to!He is such a learned person that we all admired him very much.admire18山西大同市第一中学2020 届高三年级英语模拟试卷三Recently I found a couple of donation box in my living community. People come to it when they have clothes they don't wear. The donation box, I think, is of great useful. I have a lot of clothes which don't fit for me any longer. I have no idea before about how to deal with the clothes that are real new and still in good condition. Now I know how to do next. I will donate them or help those people in need. So I think the donation box is good idea that lights up our life and makethe world a better place to live in.参考答案Recently I found a couple of donation box in my living community. People come to it when theyboxes them have clothes they don't wear. The donation box, I think, is of great useful. I have a lot of clothesusewhich don't fit for me any longer. I have no idea before about how to deal with the clothes that 删掉hadare real new and still in good condition. Now I know how to do next. I will donate them or help really what and those people in need. So I think the donation box is good ∧idea that lights up our life and makea makesthe world a better place to live in.19四川省三台中学实验学校2017级高三上期入学考试My friend Lily and I were on the way back to home from school when we saw a boy fall off his bicycles. The boy lay on the ground, screamed in pain. We rushed to help and found if the boy's left leg was bleeding. It happened that we have learned some knowledge about first aid before, so we knew how we should do. We dialed“120”and called an ambulance. While waiting it, I took out my handkerchief and pressed them onto the bleeding point. Then we rolled the boy onto one side but put him in the recovery position. We stayed with him until the ambulance arrived 5 minutes late.参考答案My friend Lily and I were on the way back to home from school when we saw a boy fall off his删掉bicycles. The boy lay on the ground, screamed in pain. We rushed to help and found if thebicycle screaming 删掉/ thatboy's left leg was bleeding. It happened that we have learned some knowledge about first aidhadbefore, so we knew how we should do. We dialed “120”and called an ambulance. While waiting ∧what forit, I took out my handkerchief and pressed them onto the bleeding point. Then we rolled the boyitonto one side but put him in the recovery position. We stayed with him until the ambulance andarrived 5 minutes late.later20平顶山市平顶山一中2020届高三开学检测Jenny is a girl whom loves writing. Both of her parents were writers. She dreams that to be a writer, too. She believes though creativity is so importance that a good writer can’t lose it, hard-working is more crucial. So in her spare time, she reads varieties of books instead playing games. She learned a lot by read other passages. With his hard work, she got first prize in a writing competition in 2019 and since then she began to works for the school newspaper. She was very happily because she has taken the first step to be the writer.参考答案Jenny is a girl whom loves writing. Both of her parents were writers. She dreams that to be a writer, too. She who are 删掉believes though creativity is so importance that a good writer can’t lose it, hard-working is more crucial. Soimportantin her spare time, she reads varieties of books instead ∧playing games. She learned a lot by read other passages.Of readingWith his hard work, she got first prize in a writing competition in 2019 and since then she began to works for herthe school newspaper. She was very happily because she has taken the first step to be the writer.happy a21Last Friday, our class was invited an old craftsman to teach us how to making dough figurine(面人).When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him warm welcome and two boy helped him with the tool box. First, he shows us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him or watched attentively. Then we started to have a try itself. The old man walked around and helped us patient. Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictureswith the old craftsman. Looking on the figurines, we were all very exciting. We hope we can have more activity of this kind!参考答案 Last Friday, our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to dough figurine(面人).When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him warm welcome and two boyhelped him with the tool box. First, he us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him watched attentively. Then we started to have a try . The old man walked around and helped us . Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking the figurines, we were all very . We hope we can have more of this kind!22I always dream life in the future. What will it be like?Perhaps some people will go to the moon for the holiday, and some people may live under the sea and in pace. Besides, probably there’ll be mo re educational program on the Internet. And therefore, students will be able to study at home instead of go to school every day. What’s more, maybe in the future each family will have a robot, that will be able to do whatever it was told to, such as going to shopping, doing housework and so on.With the breakthrough of technology, I believe that their life will certainly become easier, happy and more colorful.参考答案I always dream life in the future. What will it be like? Perhaps some people will go to the moon for holiday, and some people may live under the sea in space. Besides, probably there’ll be more educational on the Internet. And was making makeshows showedor anditself ourselves patient patientlyon atexciting excitedactivity activities about /ofthe aand or program programstherefore, students will be able to study at home instead ofto school every day. What’s more, maybe in the future each family will have a robot, will be able to do whatever it told to, such as going shopping, doing housework and so on.With the breakthrough of technology, I believe thatlife will certainly become easier, and more colorful. 23I was riding in a taxi to the bus station but from there I was supposed to taking a bus to New York City. It was going to be long journey. I had been packed some chocolates in my suitcase to eat in the way. When the ride was over, I paid the driver the due amount and gave him a tip. He got my suitcase out. I took them and started walking away. However, I realized that it was one of the opportunity to perform an act of kindness. I want to give away all the chocolates to the driver. After all, he had served me even though it was just his job. I gave them away and saw the brightly smile light up his face, what made me feel my heart filled with happiness.参考答案I was riding in a taxi to the bus stationfrom there I was supposed to a bus to New York City. It was going to belong journey. I had been packed some chocolates in my suitcase to eat the way. When the ride was over, I paid the driver the due amount and gave him a tip. He got my suitcase out. I took and started walking away. However, I realized that it was one of the to perform an act of kindness. I to give away all the chocolates to the driver. After all, he had served me even though it was just his job. I gave them away and saw the smile light up his face, made me feel my heart filled with happiness. 24 There are four seasons in a year and each is unique. However, autumn is the one I like best. Belowgo going that which was is to their ourhappy happier but so /and taking take a in onthem itopportunity opportunitieswant wanted brightly brightthat whichare the reason why I have a preference for themIt seems to me what autumn is the most grand and impressive season in a year. First of all, neither can I suffer summer's heat, or can I go through winter's coldness at this time. In addition, it is general acknowledged that autumn is symbol of harvest. The smile from farmers, who are getting a good harvest, always making me happy. What is the most important is that autumn also see leaves of bushes and trees to turn red, gold or orange. What a colorful world it is!That's why I like autumn better.参考答案There are four seasons in a year and each is unique. However, autumn is the one I like best. Beloware thewhy I have a preference for It seems to me autumn is the most grand and impressive season in a year. First of all, neither can I suffer summer's heat, can I go through winter's coldness at this time. In addition, it is acknowledged that autumn is symbol of harvest. The smile from farmers, who are getting a good harvest, alwaysme happy. What is the most important is that autumn also leaves of bushes and trees turn red, gold or orange. What a colorful world it is! That's why I like autumn . 25On December 30，after two weeks’ training ，we finally began our work for volunteer guides in a museum. During the first two weeks ，I learnt a lot about the story behind the artworks. In order to do good in the work ，my teammates and I made fully preparations. We first worked out a careful plan. Then we practiced use proper body language to explain the artworks better. The month -long volunteer work has now come to end ，from what I understand that it isn’t easy to be a good guide. Besides ，I also realize that how important teamwork is. I believed that I will get lifelong benefits from the short and meaningful experience.reason reasonsthem it what thator nor general generallythe making makes see sees to better best参考答案On December 30，after two weeks’ training，we finally began our work for volunteer guides in aasmuseum. During the first two weeks，I learnt a lot about the story behind the artworks. In order to dostoriesgood in the work，my teammates and I made fully preparations. We first worked out a careful plan. well fullThen we practiced use proper body language to explain the artworks better. The month-longusingvolunteer work has now come to ∧end，from what I understand that it isn’t easy to be a good guide.an whichBesides，I also realize that how important teamwork is. I believed that I will get lifelong benefits删掉believefrom the short and meaningful experience.but26I am very luckily to have the opportunity to see so many place, but sometimes I experience culture shock when I see or do something new. Dad and I now are travelled through Denmark, Norway and Sweden. I used to thinking that these countries are the same, but not any more. People in Denmark are a bit of friendlier, while Norwegians and Swedes prefer not to talk to strangers. I’m surprised to learn that many people there speak English in addition their national languages. In Sweden, it seems that anyone has golden hair and blue eyes. I feel a little strange with my black hair and dark eyes. I imagine this is that foreigners feel when they visit China!参考答案I am very luckily to have the opportunity to see so many place, but sometimes I experienceplacescultureluckyandSweden.I used to thinking that these countries are the same, but not any more. Peoplein Denmarkto∧their national languages. In Sweden, itseems that anyone has golden hair and blue eyes. I feel a little strange with my black hair and darkeyes. I imagine this is that foreigners feel when they visit China!27Hearing a news that the 2022 Winter Olympics would be hold in China, I felt very excited. It struck to me how I learned skating when I was a child. At 7, I began to go crazy about skating, like all my friend. At the beginning, it extremely tough for me to keep my balance. I always fall over on the ground, as a result of which I thought I had no talent for skating. So I gradually lost confidence and became impatient. The more impatient I was, the more terrible I did. I was about to give upwhile my father came to my assistance. Encouraged by her, I restored confidence and stood up again. As I practiced skating, he always created a relaxed atmosphere and put forward some specific advice. Eventually, I made it.参考答案Hearing a news that the 2022 Winter Olympics would be hold in China, I felt very excited. It struck to me how I learned skating when I was a child. At 7, I began to go crazy about skating, like all my think how to were the 删掉to 或把struck 改为occurredfriend. At the beginning, it ∧extremely tough for me to keep my balance. I always fall over on the ground, as a result of which I thought I had no talent for skating. So I gradually lost confidence andpracticed skating, he always created a relaxed atmosphere and put forward some specific advice. Eventually, I made it.28 In the past two years, our school had organized many activities. What impressed me most was an activity calling “Learning to Farm”. In an autumn afternoon, we went to the farm, where we learned to plant potatoes. Having been in the city for such a long time, we are so happy to go to the countryside. After we got there, we were divided into three groups, we started to work. Some students cut potatoes into pieces, some dug hole, and the others put the pieces of potatoes into the holes, put the earth back and pushed them down hard. We were all busy working as all the work was done. Though we were tired out, we felt pleased on our way back to home.参考答案In the past two years, our school had organized many activities. What impressed me most was an activity calling “Learning to Farm”. In an autumn afternoon, we went to the farm, where we learned to plant potatoes. Having been in the city for such a long time, we are so happy to go to the countryside. After we got there, we were divided into three groups, ∧we started to work. Somefriends fellrelaxingwas have called awereandwork was done. Though we were tired out, we felt pleased on our way back to home.29Dear Joy,How are you doing? Here is an exciting news for you. There will be an invention competition in our school in the 20th of October. However, there is a rule the participants shall be in a group. But I’d like to invite you to be my partners.I know that you have been longed to design a tiny cooler that people can wear around the wrist. I think it will be a wonderfully idea for the competition. We can make a small air conditioner to controlling the temperature of the wearer.How do you think of my suggestion? Looking forward to you reply.参考答案Dear Joy,How are you doing? Here is an exciting news for you. There will be an invention competition in∧the participants shall be in a group.But I’d like to invite you to be my partners.till/ until删掉删掉Sothatcontrolling the temperature of the wearer.30Dear Mr. Li,I’m Wangtao. I’m written to tell you my opinion about employing a foreign language teacher.They are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the sense of humor is necessary for a teacher, who makes his class interesting and lively. For another, ensure efficiency in teaching and learning, the foreigner’s ability to speak Chinese matters much, so only with the help of Chinese can they communicate with each other smoothly. Various of activities out of class, such as English Evening and English Corner, should beorganized by the foreign language teacher, which brings the students more chances to communicate with the teacher and improve his oral English.参考答案Dear Mr. Li,They are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the sense of humor is necessary for a teacher, who makes his class interesting and lively. For another, ∧ensure efficiency in teaching and learning, the foreigner’s ability to speak Chinese matters much, so only with the help ofcontrolThere which tobecauseChinese can they communicate with each other smoothly.Various of activities out of class, such as English Evening and English Corner, should be Varieties / 删掉oforganized by the foreign language teacher, which brings the students more chances tocommunicate with the teacher and improve his oral English.their。
语文高考冲刺：2020年最新高考语文应用文改错题大全
语文高考冲刺：2020年最新高考语文应用文改错题大全1.招领启事【典例】下面这则应用文有五处表述不当，请找出并作修改。
【答案】①“通知”改为“启事”。
②去掉“各位同学们”中的“各位”或“们”。
③去掉红色。
④“伍拾圆”改为“若干”。
⑤去掉“，本人十分感谢！”。
【解析】①“通知”是通知事项的文书或口信，一般用来发布公文等，此处是个人向公众说明情况的文件，应用“启事”。
②“各位”和“们”不能同时使用。
③招领启事不能具体细致地写出物品的内容，钱夹的颜色不应该写出来。
④人民币的具体数量不应该写出来。
⑤写“招领启事”的人并不是丢失物品的人，所以不应该写“本人十分感谢”。
2.请假条【典例】清明节来到之前，鲁班扬必须随父母回老家祭祖。
下面是鲁班扬写给老师的请假条，其中有五处不当，请找出并作修改。
请假条尊敬的王老师：清明节是我国乃至全世界的传统节日，是祭祖和扫墓的日子。
为继承传统、祭祀先人，令尊决定带家人回乡下老家扫墓。
特向您请假，恳请老师批准。
敬礼！请假人：鲁班扬2019年4月2日【答案】①“尊敬的王老师：”顶格；②删除“乃至全世界”；③“令尊”改为“家父” 或“我的父亲”；④添加请假的具体时间；⑤删除“敬礼！”。
【解析】请假条一般分为请病假和请事假两种。
请假条必须包含的内容有请假受理人（或部门）、请假事由、请假具体时间、请假人、请假日期，要求实事求是，不夸张。
①“尊敬的王老师：”格式错误；②“乃至全世界”夸大其词；③“令尊”，敬辞，称对方的父亲，使用错误；④缺少请假的具体时间；⑤请假条一般不需要祝颂语。
3.招聘启事【典例】为庆祝建校80周年，学校“梦笔生花”文学社决定扩版，需招聘文字编辑若干人。
下面是招聘的相关文字，其中在公文格式、文字表达和语体上共有五处不妥当，请指出并改正。
招聘启示“梦笔生花”是我校的文学社团，曾荣获市“十佳文学社团”称号，出于文学社社刊《梦笔生花》扩版的需要，现从全校同学中诚聘5名文字编辑。
高考语文应用文改错题
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（5分）我处决定对长江江口街道办事处陈庄村至梅龙镇小李庄村段进行整治工作，发现此段内有私自搭建的房屋建筑，根据《安徽省河道管理条例》中关于“清除河堤内非法建筑物”的规定，因此，勒令房主于2010年9月30日前一律将房屋拆除，逾期不拆除的将按有关法律进行处罚。
安徽省长江河道管理处(1)从简明的角度看，应删除的三处是：。
（3分）(2)从得体的角度看，应改的一处是：应改为。
（2分）答案（1）（2）限（指出一处1分，改对一处1分）2、阅读下面一则启事，此启事全文有四处毛病，请找出并进行修改。
（4分））启事我公司应征网页制作人员和平面设计人员各20名。
凡我市二十一至三十五周岁、身体健康、大专或大专以上文化程度的男女青年均可报名。
贵公司地处市中心，交通方便，环境优美。
待遇优厚，最低月工资七百元。
路途较远的职工公司负责安排食宿。
愿者请带身份证到本公司的人事科报名，经考试后即可录用。
试用期三个月。
诚信网络广告公司（××市人民路168号）（1）；（2）（3）；（4）答案（1）“应征”改为“招聘”；“贵公司”改为“我公司”；“考试”后加“合格”；增加“报名时间某月某日”；（5）最后应注明日期解析试题分析：不得体，不得体，不合逻辑，缺少内容要素和日期。
考点：语言表达简明、连贯、得体、准确、鲜明、生动。
能力层级为表达运用e。
3、以下是小张在收到郑先生著作后回信的正文，其中有使用不得体的词语，请找出四处并修改。
（4分）您寄奉的大作已收到。
过目后，深感对我的论文写作有些许帮助，定当惠存。
感激之情，无以言表，他日光临贵府，当面致谢。
（1）将改为（2）将改为（3）将改为（4）将改为答案“寄奉”改为“惠赐”“寄来”；“过目”改为“拜读”；“些许”改为“莫大”“极大”；“惠存”改为“珍存”“珍藏”；“光临”改为“前往”“定到”。
2020年最新语文高考冲刺训练——应用文改错题汇编
2020年最新语文高考冲刺训练——应用文改错题汇编1.招领启事【典例】下面这则应用文有五处表述不当，请找出并作修改。
【答案】①“通知”改为“启事”。
②去掉“各位同学们”中的“各位”或“们”。
③去掉红色。
④“伍拾圆”改为“若干”。
⑤去掉“，本人十分感谢！”。
【解析】①“通知”是通知事项的文书或口信，一般用来发布公文等，此处是个人向公众说明情况的文件，应用“启事”。
②“各位”和“们”不能同时使用。
③招领启事不能具体细致地写出物品的内容，钱夹的颜色不应该写出来。
④人民币的具体数量不应该写出来。
⑤写“招领启事”的人并不是丢失物品的人，所以不应该写“本人十分感谢”。
2.请假条【典例】清明节来到之前，鲁班扬必须随父母回老家祭祖。
下面是鲁班扬写给老师的请假条，其中有五处不当，请找出并作修改。
请假条尊敬的王老师：清明节是我国乃至全世界的传统节日，是祭祖和扫墓的日子。
为继承传统、祭祀先人，令尊决定带家人回乡下老家扫墓。
特向您请假，恳请老师批准。
敬礼！请假人：鲁班扬2019年4月2日【答案】①“尊敬的王老师：”顶格；②删除“乃至全世界”；③“令尊”改为“家父”或“我的父亲”；④添加请假的具体时间；⑤删除“敬礼！”。
【解析】请假条一般分为请病假和请事假两种。
请假条必须包含的内容有请假受理人（或部门）、请假事由、请假具体时间、请假人、请假日期，要求实事求是，不夸张。
①“尊敬的王老师：”格式错误；②“乃至全世界”夸大其词；③“令尊”，敬辞，称对方的父亲，使用错误；④缺少请假的具体时间；⑤请假条一般不需要祝颂语。
3.招聘启事【典例】为庆祝建校80周年，学校“梦笔生花”文学社决定扩版，需招聘文字编辑若干人。
下面是招聘的相关文字，其中在公文格式、文字表达和语体上共有五处不妥当，请指出并改正。
招聘启示“梦笔生花”是我校的文学社团，曾荣获市“十佳文学社团”称号，出于文学社社刊《梦笔生花》扩版的需要，现从全校同学中诚聘5名文字编辑。
高考语文模拟试卷改错题
一、改错题（每题2分，共20分）以下各句中，有错别字或用词不当的地方，请找出并改正。
1. 时光荏苒，转眼间，五年过去了，我们都已从青涩的少年变成了成熟的大人。
（）2. 他的书法技艺炉火纯青，每幅作品都令人赞叹不已，堪称国宝级。
（）3. 在这次比赛中，我国运动员勇夺金牌，为国家赢得了荣誉，真是扬眉吐气。
（）4. 随着科技的发展，智能手机已经成为了人们生活中不可或缺的一部分，极大地丰富了我们的业余生活。
（）5. 老师语重心长地告诉我们，要珍惜时光，努力学习，为实现中华民族伟大复兴的中国梦贡献自己的力量。
（）6. 那位老人孤身一人，生活艰辛，但他始终保持乐观的心态，令人敬佩。
（）7. 雨后的天空，彩虹挂在天边，美得如诗如画，仿佛置身于仙境。
（）8. 他学习成绩优异，品德高尚，是同学们学习的榜样。
（）9. 在这个信息爆炸的时代，我们要学会筛选和甄别信息，提高自己的媒介素养。
（）10. 为了保护环境，我们要从身边的小事做起，比如节约用水、节约用电等。
（）二、改错题（每题3分，共30分）以下各段文字中，有错别字、语病或表达不当的地方，请找出并改正。
1. 以下是一篇关于保护环境的文章，请找出其中的错误并进行改正。
原文：近年来，随着环境问题的日益严重，人们越来越关注环保。
为了减少污染，我国政府采取了一系列措施，如禁止焚烧垃圾、限制汽车尾气排放等。
然而，环保问题仍不容乐观。
许多地方仍然存在污染问题，严重影响了人们的健康。
因此，我们要加强环保意识，从自身做起，共同保护我们的家园。
错误：①（）；②（）；③（）改正：①（）；②（）；③（）2. 以下是一篇关于我国历史文化的文章，请找出其中的错误并进行改正。
原文：我国历史悠久，文化底蕴深厚。
自古以来，我国人民就崇尚和平、勤劳、智慧。
在漫长的历史长河中，我国涌现出了许多伟大的思想家、政治家、军事家、科学家等。
如孔子、老子、秦始皇、诸葛亮、唐太宗等，他们为我国的发展做出了巨大贡献。
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( )2叙述是公文写作中最常用、最主要的表达方式。
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（）8会议记录和会议纪要都是会议的产物，所以它们是一回事。
9各级党政机关的办公厅(室)向下直接行文，必须把握好隶属关系和授权范围。
( )10几个机关或部门的联合发文，一般应由主办该公文的单位负责，送请有关联署机关或部门的承办人会签。
（）11所有的机关单位之间都可以根据工作需要联合行文。
（）12公告、通告一样，都具有发布的公开性的特点。
（）13批复应有针对性地答复下级机关的请示和报告。
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( )15附件说明位于成文日期的左下方，公文版记部分之上，注明所附文件材料的名称及件数。
( )16批转公文在标题中必须标明“批转”字样。
( )17计划的标题同许多事务文书一样不必写明时限。
（）18写批复和复函时应先引标题后引发文字号。
（）19合同的标的是当事人双方权利和义务共同指向的对象。
（）20计划目标确定要掌握一个度，既不能过高，也不能过低。
( )21简报既可以上行，也可以平行或下行。
( )22写计划对任务要写得抽象一些，便于顺时修改。
( )23国务院于2000年8月颁发的《国家行政机关公文处理办法》规定公文文种为12种。
（）24向有关主管部门请求批准应用请示。
（）25起诉状当事人的基本情况的写作一般包括姓名、性别、年龄、民族，工作单位，职业和家庭住址。
（）26发布规章、转发公文、布置工作、传达事项应用通知。
（）27事项性通告的内容不具有强制性和惩处作用。
2019-2020年语文人教版九年级语文中考复习应用文修改专题训练(20篇)(附答
部编版 2019-2020 年语文人教版九年级语文中考复习应用文改正专题训练（20 篇） ( 附答案)一、读下面的夸奖信，按要求回答以下问题。
夸奖信光明中学校领导A：贵校初三（ 1）班高远同学乐于助人，特别值得夸奖B。
我的孩子方旭就读于贵校初三（1）班，一个月前因患急性肺炎住进了医院C。
这时期他耽误了许多功课，我们焦虑万分D。
正在这时，高远同学主动到达我们家，热情为方旭补课E。
整整二十天，每日夜晚都是这样，直到帮助方旭补上落下的功课F。
在高远同学面对中考的要点时辰，牺牲自己的可贵时间来帮助同学G。
这种乐于助人的精神让我们全家特别感人 H。
我们除再次向他表示感谢以外，还要求你们当领导的在全校赐予夸奖I！此致 J敬礼 K！方旭的家长：方明杰李丹敬上2003年4 月 29 日1这封夸奖信在格式上有三处错误，它们是：__________________________2 有语病的是第 _______________处。
3正文中语言有一处不得体，请标出序号_______________二、找出告假条中的两处缺点，将改正建议写在下面告假条张老师：您好！今日我因贵体不佳，故告假一天，望老师赞同。
2003 年 5 月 20 日告假人：李明改正：（1）语言： __________________________（ 2）格式： __________________________三、改正书信尊敬的爷爷：您好！近来身体好吗？我们已有几个月未会面了，我常常挂念着您。
有时思念心切，我恨不得一下子很快飞到您的身边，向您报告我近来的状况，倾吐对您的思念之情。
爷爷，经过您多年对我的谆谆教育，使我各方面都有了很大的进步。
当前，我各科成绩都很好，请勿惦念。
我马上毕业，不久就要填报升学志愿，我准备报考师范学校。
您赞同吗？请您务必来信谈谈建议。
此致敬礼孙××敬上××年×月×日1这封信格式有两处错误：（1） _______________ （ 2） _______________2正文有两个病句，请更正。
2020高考英语考前冲刺英语短文改错最新名校模拟30篇(下)(含答案).docx
2020考前冲刺短文改错最新名校模拟30篇(下)162020年百师联盟届全国高三冲刺考（五）My uncle, director of Yonghua Company, has several expensive cars, which he used to enjoy driving. However, recently he has begun to ride his bicycle at and from work following a doctor's advices. The benefits of the change are obviously. He has become more energetic and is in good shape than before. Besides, he is happy that he can make difference to reducing pollution and preserve natural resources. Following his example, more and more people in his company, which spend a lot of time sitting in the office every day, have been started using bicycles, saying that with the popularity of shared bicycles, this is extremely convenient. Now this has become a new fashion in the company to go green or keep fit.参考答案：My uncle, director of Yonghua Company, has several expensive cars, which he used to enjoy driving.However, recently he has begun to ride his bicycle at and from work following a doctor's advices. The benefitsto advice of the change are obviously. He has become more energetic and is in good shape than before. Besides, he is obvious betterhappy that he can make ∧difference to reducing pollution and preserve natural resources. Following hisa preservingexample, more and more people in his company, which spend a lot of time sitting in the office every day, havewho 删掉been started using bicycles, saying that with the popularity of shared bicycles, this is extremely convenient.Now this has become a new fashion in the company to go green or keep fit.it and172020年百师联盟届全国高三冲刺考（四）Of all my teachers, Mr. Moore is the one what impresses me most. Though he is 43, but he looks very young for his age. And he is one of most popular teachers in our school.Comparing with other teachers, Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching. He triesvarious way to make his classes lively and interesting. In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”. Therefore, instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think for us whenever he puts forward questions. Under his help, we've learned how to analyze or settle problems. What a wonderfully wor ld of "why” he leads us to!He is such a learned person that we all admired him very much.参考答案：Of all my teachers, Mr. Moore is the one what impresses me most. Though he is 43, but he looks very youngthat/ who 删掉for his age. And he is one of ∧most popular teachers in our school.theComparing with other teachers, Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching. He tries various way to compared ways make his classes lively and interesting. In his opinion, we should no t only know “what”, but also understand“why”. Therefore, instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think for us whenever heourselves puts forward questions. Under his help, we've learned how to analyze or settle problems. What a wonderfullyWith and wonderful world of "why” he leads us to!He is such a learned person that we all admired him very much.admire18山西大同市第一中学2020 届高三年级英语模拟试卷三Recently I found a couple of donation box in my living community. People come to it when they have clothes they don't wear. The donation box, I think, is of great useful. I have a lot of clothes which don't fit for me any longer. I have no idea before about how to deal with the clothes that are real new and still in good condition. Now I know how to do next. I will donate them or help those people in need. So I think the donation box is good idea that lights up our life and make the world a better place to live in.参考答案Recently I found a couple of donation box in my living community. People come to it when theyboxes them have clothes they don't wear. The donation box, I think, is of great useful. I have a lot of clothesusewhich don't fit for me any longer. I have no idea before about how to deal with the clothes that 删掉hadare real new and still in good condition. Now I know how to do next. I will donate them or help really what and those people in need. So I think the donation box is good ∧idea that lights up our life and makea makesthe world a better place to live in.19四川省三台中学实验学校2017级高三上期入学考试My friend Lily and I were on the way back to home from school when we saw a boy fall off his bicycles. The boy lay on the ground, screamed in pain. We rushed to help and found if the boy's left leg was bleeding. It happened that we have learned some knowledge about first aid before, so we knew how we should do. We dialed“120”and called an ambulance. While waiting it, I took out my handkerchief and pressed them onto the bleeding point. Then we rolled the boy onto one side but put him in the recovery position. We stayed with him until the ambulance arrived 5 minutes late.参考答案My friend Lily and I were on the way back to home from school when we saw a boy fall off his删掉bicycles. The boy lay on the ground, screamed in pain. We rushed to help and found if thebicycle screaming 删掉/ thatboy's left leg was bleeding. It happened that we have learned some knowledge about first aidhadbefore, so we knew how we should do. We dialed “120”and called an ambulance. While waiting ∧what for it, I took out my handkerchief and pressed them onto the bleeding point. Then we rolled the boyitonto one side but put him in the recovery position. We stayed with him until the ambulance andarrived 5 minutes late.later20平顶山市平顶山一中2020届高三开学检测Jenny is a girl whom loves writing. Both of her parents were writers. She dreams that to be a writer, too. She believes though creativity is so importance that a good writer can’t lose it, hard-working is more crucial. So in her spare time, she reads varieties of books instead playing games. She learned a lot by read other passages. With his hard work, she got first prize in a writing competition in 2019 and since then she began to works for the school newspaper. She was very happily because she has taken the first step to be the writer.参考答案Jenny is a girl whom loves writing. Both of her parents were writers. She dreams that to be a writer, too. She who are 删掉believes though creativity is so importance that a good writer can’t lose it, hard-working is more crucial. Soimportantin her spare time, she reads varieties of books instead ∧playing games. She learned a lot by read other passages.Of readingWith his hard work, she got first prize in a writing competition in 2019 and since then she began to works for herthe school newspaper. She was very happily because she has taken the first step to be the writer.happy a21Last Friday, our class was invited an old craftsman to teach us how to making dough figurine(面人).When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him warm welcome and two boy helped him with the tool box. First, he shows us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him or watched attentively. Then we started to have a try itself. The old man walked around and helped us patient. Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking on the figurines, we were all very exciting. We hope we can have more activity of this kind!参考答案 Last Friday, our class was invited an old craftsman to teach us how to making make dough figurine(面人).When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him warm welcome and two boyhelped him with the tool box. First, he shows showedus the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him or and watched attentively. Then we started to have a try itself ourselves. The old man walked around and helped us patient patiently. Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Lookingon at the figurines, we were all very exciting excited. We hope we can have more activity activities of this kind!22I always dream life in the future. What will it be like?Perhaps some people will go to the moon for the holiday, and some people may live under the sea and in pace. Besides, probably there’ll be more educational program on the Internet. And therefore, students will be able to study at home instead of go to school every day. What’s more, maybe in the future each family will have a robot, that will be able to do whatever it was told to, such as going to shopping, doing housework and so on.With the breakthrough of technology, I believe that their life will certainly become easier, happy and more colorful.参考答案I always dreamabout /oflife in the future. What will it be like? Perhaps some people will go to the moon for the a holiday, and some people may live under the sea and orin space. Besides, probably there’ll be more educational program programs on the Internet. And therefore, students will be able to study at home instead of go goingto school every day. What’s more,maybe in the future each family will have a robot, that which will be able to do whatever it was is told to, such as going to shopping, doing housework and so on. With the breakthrough of technology, I believe thattheir our life will certainly become easier, happy happier and more colorful. 23I was riding in a taxi to the bus station but from there I was supposed to taking a bus to New York City. It was going to be long journey. I had been packed some chocolates in my suitcase to eat in the way. When the ride was over, I paid the driver the due amount and gave him a tip. He got my suitcase out. I took them and started walking away. However, I realized that it was one of the opportunity to perform an act of kindness. I want to give away all the chocolates to the driver. After all, he had served me even though it was just his job. I gave them away and saw the brightly smile light up his face, what made me feel my heart filled with happiness.参考答案I was riding in a taxi to the bus stationbut so /and from there I was supposed to taking take a bus to New York City. It was going to bea long journey. I had been packed some chocolates in my suitcase to eat in onthe way. When the ride was over, I paid the driver the due amount and gave him a tip. He got my suitcase out. I took them itand started walking away. However, I realized that it was one of the opportunity opportunities to perform an act of kindness. I want wantedto give away all the chocolates to the driver. After all, he had served me even though it was just his job. I gave them away and saw the brightly bright smile light up his face, that whichmade me feel my heart filled with happiness. 24There are four seasons in a year and each is unique. However, autumn is the one I like best. Below are the reason why I have a preference for themIt seems to me what autumn is the most grand and impressive season in a year. First of all, neithercan I suffer summer's heat, or can I go through winter's coldness at this time. In addition, it is general acknowledged that autumn is symbol of harvest. The smile from farmers, who are getting a good harvest, always making me happy. What is the most important is that autumn also see leaves of bushes and trees to turn red, gold or orange. What a colorful world it is!That's why I like autumn better.参考答案There are four seasons in a year and each is unique. However, autumn is the one I like best. Beloware the reasonreasonswhy I have a preference forthemitIt seems to me whatthatautumn is the most grand and impressive season in a year. First of all, neithercan I suffer summer's heat,ornorcan I go through winter's coldness at this time. In addition, itisgeneralgenerallyacknowledged that autumn isthesymbol of harvest. The smile from farmers, who aregetting a good harvest, always makingmakesme happy. What is the most important is that autumnalso seeseesleaves of bushes and trees to turn red, gold or orange. What a colorful world it is!That's why I like autumn betterbest.25On December 30，after two weeks’ training，we finally began our work for volunteer guides in a museum. During the first two weeks，I learnt a lot about the story behind the artworks. In order to do good in the work，my teammates and I made fully preparations. We first worked out a careful plan. Then we practiced use proper body language to explain the artworks better. The month-long volunteer work has now come to end，from what I understand that it isn’t easy to be a good guide. Besides，I also realize that how important teamwork is. I believed that I will get lifelong benefits from the short and meaningful experience.参考答案On December 30，after two weeks’ training，we finally began our work for volunteer guides in aasmuseum. During the first two weeks ，I learnt a lot about the story behind the artworks. In order to do storiesgood in the work ，my teammates and I made fully preparations. We first worked out a careful plan. well fullThen we practiced use proper body language to explain the artworks better. The month -long usingvolunteer work has now come to ∧end ，from what I understand that it isn’t easy to be a good guide. an whichBesides ，I also realize that how important teamwork is. I believed that I will get lifelong benefits 删掉 believefrom the short and meaningful experience.but26I am very luckily to have the opportunity to see so many place, but sometimes I experience culture shock when I see or do something new. Dad and I now are travelled through Denmark, Norway and Sweden. I used to thinking that these countries are the same, but not any more. People in Denmark are a bit of friendlier, while Norwegians and Swedes prefer not to talk to strangers. I’m surprised to learn that many people there speak English in addition their national languages. In Sweden, it seems that anyone has golden hair and blue eyes. I feel a little strange with my black hair and dark eyes. I imagine this is that foreigners feel when they visit China!参考答案I am very luckily to have the opportunity to see so many place, but sometimes I experience cultureand lucky placesSweden. I used to thinking that these countries are the same, but not any more. People in Denmarkto∧their national languages. In Sweden, it seems that anyone has golden hair and blue eyes. I feel a little strange with my black hair and darkeyes. I imagine this is that foreigners feel when they visit China!27Hearing a news that the 2022 Winter Olympics would be hold in China, I felt very excited. It struck to me how I learned skating when I was a child. At 7, I began to go crazy about skating, like all my friend. At the beginning, it extremely tough for me to keep my balance. I always fall over on the ground, as a result of which I thought I had no talent for skating. So I gradually lost confidence and became impatient. The more impatient I was, the more terrible I did. I was about to give upwhile my father came to my assistance. Encouraged by her, I restored confidence and stood up again. As I practiced skating, he always created a relaxed atmosphere and put forward some specific advice. Eventually, I made it.参考答案Hearing a news that the 2022 Winter Olympics would be hold in China, I felt very excited. It struck to me how I learned skating when I was a child. At 7, I began to go crazy about skating, like all my friend. At the beginning, it ∧extremely tough for me to keep my balance. I always fall over on thethink how to were the 删掉to 或把struck 改为occurredfellwasground, as a result of which I thought I had no talent for skating. So I gradually lost confidence andpracticed skating, he always created a relaxed atmosphere and put forward some specific advice. Eventually, I made it.28 In the past two years, our school had organized many activities. What impressed me most was an activity calling “Learning to Farm”. In an autumn afternoon, we went to the farm, where we learned to plant potatoes. Having been in the city for such a long time, we are so happy to go to thecountryside. After we got there, we were divided into three groups, we started to work. Some students cut potatoes into pieces, some dug hole, and the others put the pieces of potatoes into the holes, put the earth back and pushed them down hard. We were all busy working as all the work was done. Though we were tired out, we felt pleased on our way back to home.参考答案In the past two years, our school had organized many activities. What impressed me most was an activity calling “Learning to Farm”. In an autumn afternoon, we went to the farm, where we learned to plant potatoes. Having been in the city for such a long time, we are so happy to go to the countryside. After we got there, we were divided into three groups, ∧we started to work. Somefriendsrelaxinghave called awereandwork was done. Though we were tired out, we felt pleased on our way back to home.29Dear Joy,How are you doing? Here is an exciting news for you. There will be an invention competition in our school in the 20th of October. However, there is a rule the participants shall be in a group. But I’d like to invite you to be my partners.I know that you have been longed to design a tiny cooler that people can wear around the wrist. I think it will be a wonderfully idea for the competition. We can make a small air conditioner to controlling the temperature of the wearer.How do you think of my suggestion? Looking forward to you reply.参考答案Dear Joy,How are you doing? Here is an exciting news for you. There will be an invention competition in ∧the participants shall be in a group. But I’d like to invite you to be my partners. controlling the temperature of the wearer.till/ until 删掉删掉 So controlthat30Dear Mr. Li,I’m Wangtao. I’m written to tell you my opinion about employing a foreign language teacher. They are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the sense of humor is necessary for a teacher, who makes his class interesting and lively. For another, ensure efficiency in teaching and learning, the foreigner’s ability to speak Chinese matters much, so only with the help of Chinese can they communicate with each other smoothly. Various of activities out of class, such as English Evening and English Corner, should beorganized by the foreign language teacher, which brings the students more chances to communicate with the teacher and improve his oral English.参考答案Dear Mr. Li,They are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the sense of humor is necessary for a teacher, who makes his class interesting and lively. For another, ∧ensure efficiency in teaching and learning, the foreigner’s ability to speak Chinese matters much, so only with the help ofChinese can they communicate with each other smoothly.There which tobecauseVarious of activities out of class, such as English Evening and English Corner, should be Varieties / 删掉oforganized by the foreign language teacher, which brings the students more chances tocommunicate with the teacher and improve his oral English.their。
(完整)备考2020高考语文语言运用改错题汇编,推荐文档
高考语言运用改错题汇编1、下面是一则征稿启事中的部分内容,其中有五处不得体,请找出并修改。
（5分）为弘扬中华优秀传统文化，繁荣敝市文化艺术事业，推动社区文化的发展，市文化局联合市美术馆,举办第七届社区美术作品大赛，现将征稿要求通报如下：①参赛作品以竖式为好，书体、画风不限；②决不接收硬笔书法作品、油画作品和摄影作品；③获奖作品恕不退稿，由市美术馆惠存。
答：①“”改为“”；②“”改为“”；③“”改为“”；④“”改为“”；⑤“”改为“”。
2、下面是某校一则征稿启事初稿的片段，其中有五处不合书面语体的要求,请找出并修改。
（5分）元旦即将来临，学校团委决定举办一次全校书法作品展。
书法作品征集对象为全校学生。
书体随意，不超过六尺整张(180cm×97cm)，一律竖式。
所有作品请勿装裱。
请一定要在作品背面用铅笔正楷注明：姓名、性别、班别。
征集时间：今天起至2019年2月15日止。
到时聘请专业教师对征集的书法作品进行评审。
希望同学们踊跃交稿。
答：①“”改为“”；②“”改为“”；③“”改为“”；④“”改为“”；⑤“”改为“”。
3、下面是某杂志社一则征稿启事初稿的片段,其中有五处词语使用不当，请找出并作修改,要求修改后语意准确，语体风格一致。
（5分）本刊伫足乡村旅游文化新区，面向全市，努力讲好当地故事，悉心弘扬本土文化，倾心谛听本地人在外地打拼的动人活动，以“百花齐放，百家争鸣”为原则，努力推出新人、新作,繁荣文学事业。
使尽全力为广大作家、诗人、文学爱好者、文化研究者、文艺传承者搭建极具本土特色的梦想平台，要求市内外各界作家、文学爱好者、文化学者不吝赐稿，一经刊用，即付稿酬。
答：①“”改为“”；②“”改为“”；③“”改为“”；④“”改为“”；⑤“”改为“”。
4、下面是某公司总经理开业致辞的片段，其中有五处词语使用不当，请找出来并作修改。
要求修改后语意准确，语体风格一致。
（5分）今天，我们隆重恭贺本公司正式开业。
2020年高考英语试题分类汇编短文改错(全解析)
2020年高考英语试题分类汇编短文改错（全解析）一、（2020.全国卷I）短文改错After five years away in my hometown, I find that 76. ________________ The neighborhood which I used to living in has changed 77.________________a lot. The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop 78 ._______________across the street from our middle school were gone. 79.________________ There exist now a park that has a small river running 80.________________ through. The factory at the comer of Friendship Street and 81. _______________ Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city, and sports 82. ______________ center has been built in their place. The market at the corner of 83. _____________ Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to 84. ________________a supermarket. Besides the bookstore next to our middle 85. _______________school is still there.【解析】76. 【答案】in→from。
2020年最新语文高考冲刺训练——应用文改错题汇编[2020年最新]
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2020年最新语文高考冲刺训练——应用文改错题汇编1.招领启事用文有五处表述不当，请找出并作修改。
则应【典例】下面这【答案】①“通知”改为“启事”。
②去掉“各位同学们”中的“各位”或“们”。
③去掉红色。
④“伍拾圆”改为“若干”。
⑤去掉“，本人十分感谢！”。
【解析】①“通知”是通知事项的文书或口信，一般用来发布公文等，”此处是个人向公众说明情况的文件，应用“启事”。
②“各位”和“们不能同时使用。
③招领启事不能具体细致地写出物品的内容，钱夹的颜色不应该写出来。
④人民币的具体数量不应该写出来。
⑤写“招领启事”的人并不是丢失物品的人，所以不应该写“本人十分感谢”。
2.请假条必须随父母回老家祭祖。
下面是鲁【典例】清明节来到之前，鲁班扬班扬写给老师的请假条，其中有五处不当，请找出并作修改。
请假条尊敬的王老师：日，是祭祖和扫墓的日子。
清明节是我国乃至全世界的传统节为继承传统、祭祀先人，令尊决定带家人回乡下老家扫墓。
特向您请假，恳请老师批准。
敬礼！请假人：鲁班扬2019年4月2日：”顶格；②删除“乃至全世界”；③【答案】①“尊敬的王老师“令尊”改为“家父”或“我的父亲”；④添加请假的具体时间；⑤删除“敬礼！”。
假条必须包含的内【解析】请假条一般分为请病假和请事假两种。
请假人、请容有请假受理人（或部门）、请假事由、请假具体时间、请误；假日期，要求实事求是，不夸张。
①“尊敬的王老师：”格式错② “ 乃 至 全 世 界 ” 夸 大 其词； ③ “ 令 尊 ” ， 敬 辞 ， 称对方 的 父亲， 使用错误； ④ 缺 少请假 的 具 体时间； ⑤请假 条 一 般 不 需 要 祝颂语。
3. 招 聘 启 事【 典 例 】为庆祝 建 校 8 0 周 年 ， 学 校 “ 梦 笔 生 花 ” 文 学 社 决 定扩版 ，需 招 聘 文 字编辑若 干 人 。
下 面 是 招 聘 的 相 关 文 字 ， 其 中 在 公 文 格 式 、 文 字 表 达 和语体 上 共 有 五处不 妥 当 ，请指 出 并 改 正 。
专题01 2020全国名校最新模拟题分类汇编之语法填空和短文改错20题(原卷版)
专题012020全国名校最新模拟题分类汇编之语法填空和短文改错20题1(2020年河南省开封市高考英语三模试卷)语法填空：Unlike some other European languages,English is a little tricky when it comes to writing.How a word1（pr onou nce）and how it is actually spelt can be very different things.T ake two simple2（verb）like "have"and"save"shouldn't they be p r on oun ce d the same?Why do"sir","her"and"fur"all rhyme,but"fork"and "work"don't?Imagine,then,a situation3two words are spelt and p r onou nce d exactly the same way,but have4（complete）different meanings.W elcome to the world of homonyms（同形同音异义词）.5（tak e）,for example,the word"fair"﹣it can be a kind of festival or an adjective to describe the colour of your hair.So how do you know which6（mean）someone is referring to?﹣Y ou don't,except by the context.Obviously,if someone asks you to"give them a hand",they d on't want you to remove7is at the end of your arm.Sometimes even the context doesn't help mu ch﹣the result can be8（amuse）.These sentences play with the double meaning of a noun：I u se d to be a banker,9I lost interest.A small boy swallowed some coins and had to go to hospital.when his grand mother phoned10（ask）how he was,the nurse said,"No change yet.""Waiter,will the br e ad be long?""No,sir.It's round."短文改错：My first stay at home alone was very memorable.O ne day when I was twelve,both of my moth e r and father were away on the business,and I had to be all with myself for two days.My parents left early the first day,I got up soon after they left.The first evening I was a little scare,so I turned on all the lights.I actually k eep the light on in my bedroom the whole night,that finally put me at ease.For fear of get up late the next morning,I put three alarm clocks near my bed and set the alarm respectively at6：00,6：10,and6：15.In order to prove that I could tak e care of me,I washed my own clothes the next day,though I could wait for Mum to do it.I really felt proudly of myself and thought I had gr own up.2(2020年广东省深圳市高考英语模拟试卷（二）)语法填空：After college I wan ted to mak e a difference in the world,so I became a volunteer teacher and1（se nd）to Namibia.Honestly,my first choice wasn't Africa,but I am extremely grateful that I had the chance.So with a group of2（equal）eager young graduates,I went on my journey.Schools were quite bare,and the students3（have）tiring days,walking miles to get to school, o ften barefoot.With their mountains4work at home,few5（possession）and little opportunity,these children were joyful,which I admired.This6（be）my first time living abr o ad in a different culture,simply getting u se d to the living conditions was7big adjustment.I had no electricity,running water,phone or the Internet.Imagine no air ﹣conditioning at a place8the temperatur e o ften goes b ey ond degr ees Celsius!Some days it was just too hot to move.However,I could end each day with a9（glory）African sunset.And at night,I had a light﹣pollution﹣free view of the entire Milky Way.Before Namibia,I never thought I would survive in such an environment.My experience awak ened me to not only the limitations10（place）on ourselves,but also our amazing ability to adapt.S tepping out of your comfort zone in another culture will certainly mak e your life worthwhile.短文改错：W e are encou raged to be nice to other people.However.most people forget to be nice to environment.It is widely acknowledged,the importance of environmental protection can't be ignored for the fact that we should mak e up the earth a good place to live on.There are many ways to help reducing global warming.Walking is my preferring exercise,which I think is a good choice.If I had to go somewher e far away,I'll tak e the public transportations.Additional,I try to encourage friends and families to do the same.It's only when everyone does anything to help which we can hope to mak e a difference together.3(2020年山西省大同一中高考英语模拟试卷（六）)语法填空：What is fear?Fear is a self﹣made thought of our ually,fear should1（overcome）,or it may do harm to us.But sometimes fear is good,but it is not our best friend.There are different types of fear,2（range）from fear of failure,fear of taking risks,fear of dogs, and fear of height to fear of drowning and so on.Now the question is3we can get rid of fear.The only way to overcome our fear4（be）to face it.As soon as we face fear5（brave）,it will be over.Everyone is afraid inside.Sometimes fear is6（help）to us and a little fear is necessary for our 7（grow）.For example,fear of falling mak es us walk properly,fear of accidents mak es us drive the car carefully and fear of failure mak es us work hard.On8other hand,fear stops us9moving further.W e have to move ahead and leave fear behind.At this point,fear is our weakness and we must try to overcome it.At the same time,remember not10（scare）any one for your fun because fear mak es people sick and that's not right.短文改错：My friend T om likes shopping online.He always spends much moneys buying different clothes and decoration. Y esterday,he received the coat he has or der ed online.He felt happy after opening the box.He thought he mu st look handsome in them.However,at the sight of the coat,he felt disappointed and angrily.The coat was too large and it didn't look the same as describing online.He contacted the salesgirl and told her that she should exchange it free of the charge.The salesgirl didn't think that she had made a mistake,but she ag r eed change the coat if he paid the fee. T om did so but he decided that he should think twice before he did something from now on.4(2020年吉林省吉林市高考英语二模试卷)语法填空：There1（be）no team uniform for players in the past.But in the mid﹣19th century,a New Y ork baseball team actually wore a uniform.However,times have changed:almost every sport team now has a uniform of its own.The popularity of team uniforms has hit a new high now,and even the fans2（see）wearing team uniforms these days.Have you ever given3a thought why team uniforms are so important?Most of the games require team spirit4（win）a match.When everyone in the group wears the same color,clothes and cap,it can really mak e you feel like you belong to that group,5helps you perform better on the field.6（wear）team uniforms is a good way to sep arate your teammates from th ose who you are playing against.Y ou are also able to identify players because the clothes they wear carry their7（name）on the back of their uniforms.It also allows your fans in the stadium to k eep track of the game8（easy）.When you ch ange into your team's uniform,you get a sense of equality.Every member of the team plays an important role9the team's success.Y ou play,win,or lose a mat ch as a10（unite）team, and not as an individual.短文改错：Dear Billy,Now I am on holiday with my families in Y angshuo,Guangxi.I knew Y angshuo was well﹣known as its natural scenery before I came here.And I am still amazed at its breathtaking beauty now.The local traditional culture have also impressed me deep.Here you can meet friends from all over the world.It is not surprised that many shopk eepers communicate with foreigners in English.In a word,the t own was well worth a visit.T o experience more local customs and enjoy beauty of nature,we have decided to stay for another two days. W e will post some postcards to my friends,including you of course,before I will leave here.Y ours,Li Hua5(2020年河北省衡水中学高考英语二调试卷)语法填空：How do we prevent transmission of the virus？This new virus currently has a1（limit）geographic spread.2,there are a number of standard hygiene（卫生）practices3have been recommended to protect against infection and further spread.These include covering your mouth and n ose when coughing or sneezing with a medical mask,tissue or flexed elbow；avoiding close contact with those who are unwell;the appropriate use of4（mask）and personal protective equipment,5（especial）in a healthcare setting;washing han d s regularly with soap and water,or alcohol﹣based hand rub.Actions that can be tak en to prevent infection from6animal source include：avoiding unnecessary unpr otected contact with animals;washing hand s after contact with animals or animal products;and ensuring that animal products are cook ed thoroughly before they7（consume）.8is important to stay home if you're feeling unwell.But if you have a fever,cough,and difficulty 9（breath）,seek medical care early and share your previous travel history10your healthcare provider.短文改错:Since I was a kid,I've considered different job I would like to do.First,I wanted to be a fireman,whose uniform look ed so coolly.Then,when I was in the five grade,I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much.When I studied chemistry high school,I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor.They were two reasons for the decision.O ne was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor.And the other is that I wante d to help people in need.6(2020年黑龙江哈尔滨三中高考英语一模试卷)语法填空：1（suffer）many failures,Rio Olympics gold medalist table tennis player Ding Ning rose to the peak of her sport,In2006,Ding's ranking in the national team was the last but one,2within severalyears of practice,she raised her level little by little to become China's number one player.Things d on't always go so3（smooth）.In2010,when taking part in the World T eam T able T ennis Championships in Moscow,Ding was beaten by a duo（搭档）from Singapore in the woman's doubles final,4 made her burst into tears.The experience gave her a heavy blow.Drying her eyes,Ding work ed harder5（relieve）herself of the pressure of the failure.In2011,Ding harvested her first world championship in the woman's singles during the World T able T ennis Championships6（hold）in R otterdam,Netherlands, which helped her step out of the shadow of the Moscow7（lose）.However,when she competed during the2012London Olympics,one of her playing techniques8（judge）repeatedly as&breach（违犯）of rules.At last she returned9a silver,The setback let her suffer a heavier blow."But all these failures are my most precious resources.They10（give）me a lesson about table tennis,life and healthy growth,"said Ding.短文改错:The number and species of fish had dropped sharply in the p ast few decades.It is human behavior which is to blame.Industrial and agricultural waste is pouring into the ocean,which seriously pollutes the water.T o mak e things bad,overfishing destroys the balance of life in the ocean.It is a high time that measures should be tak en to deal with this situation.The government should mak e law to k eep people overfishing.At the same time,any one who causes water pollution should be strict punished.All of us should try our best to protecting the fish in the ocean.After all,that is everyone's duty to protect the environment ar ound us.7(2020年湖北省武汉市高三三月调考英语试卷)语法填空：T oday,many people are worried about endangered species.But isn't it just normal for some animals to die out?The situation today is different from1of the past.In the past,animals died out over a long period of time.When animals died out in the past,it was usually because of the weather or other2（nature）causes.What is happening today is3（total）different.W e are killing millions of species in a short time.The result is that we are killing our future,because8o many species4（kill）in such a short time that even5 fittest can't survive.In fact,there won't be enough species to choose from.Without enough animals and plants, evolution cannot function and nature will get6（bad）instead of better.Many of the species7（disappear）on earth are unknown and few people even know that they are dying out.These animals and plants started to live on earth long8us and we have no right to kill them. W e may also need these species in the future.W e must try to k eep the endangered species alive.If we allow these species9（die）out,we are in fact becoming endangered10（our）.短文改错:W an g Kai lived next to Granny Liu,which depended on the ambulance to tak e him to hospital for treatments. However,things became difficult on cold snowy days.Though W ang Kai had cleared the driveway the week ago to mak e way for the ambulance,more snow fall on the ground last night.W ang Kai knew he had to help with his neighbor clean up the snow and couldn't finish it himself.So he called four of his friend for help.With five boys on hand,to clear the driveway only took30minutes.But it meant all the difference to Granny Liu.A snowstorm could easy turn into a d an ge r ou s situation for her.Thanks to boys,she was send to hospital in time.8(2020年吉林省高考英语二模试卷)语法填空：What mak es the sea turn r ed and causes thousand s of fish to die?As far back as any one could remember,the blame was placed on the"red tides".In1947,scientists finally connected the red tides with a microscopic sea organism（有机体）1（call）the dinoflagellate.The dinoflagellate is so tiny26,000of these organisms may be contained in3single drop ofwater.It stands on the borderline be tw ee n plant and animal in its classification.It pr oduces its own food,as plants do.But it moves4（free）and eats other organisms,as animals do.Dinoflagellates are normally only one of the many kinds of organisms found in plankton.Plankton is the name given to all very small5（form）of sea life.However,when the air and water6（be）calm and warm,dinoflagellates multiply with7（amaze）speed.The surface of the water appears8（cover）with a red carpet.The dinoflagellates give off a poison.Many fish die.Their bodies are washed up on the beach.Beaches are not fit9any use.Fish that are not killed may become10（poison）to animals or people who eat them. Commercial fishing come s to a stop.As dinoflagellates con su me all the food and oxygen in an area,they die.After a time,the sea returns to normal. But when conditions are right,the r ed tide comes again.短文改错:T en years ago,my hometown is a small and poor city with few factories.And the citizens had few choice on transportation.However,nowadays my hometown has tak en on brand new look with rapid development of culture and economy.The citizens'living conditions have been greatly improve and their lifestyles are different from in the past.Shop online has become popular.When they comes to transportation,private cars have become a common way of traveling beside public transportation.The best change is which all the people are living a hopeful life with confident.9(2020年宁夏银川一中高考英语二模试卷)语法填空：What's your definition of1（great）?I think the definition is to inspire the people next to you.Y ou grow up as a kid2（think）that all things are possible,if you put in the work to do it.Y ou grow up having that fundamental belief.My father was really influential at a really critical time.I scored not a free﹣throw,not a3（luck）shot,not a breakaway layup,2﹣0points and I remember crying about it and being upse t about it.My father gave me a hug and said listen4you score zero,score60,I love you no matter what.That is the most important thing that you can say to a child that5（total）gives me all the confidence in the world.I just went to work;I just stayed with it and k ept practicing.When I came back the next summer,I was a little bit6（good）.Open shots and not miss.W e ever shoot it with speed because th ose kids are so m u ch more athletic.So how can we teach our children what it means7（work）har d well?Y ou do it thr ou gh training right so when I get up in the morning.My15﹣year﹣old daughter goes8me and it becomes a d ad dy ﹣daughte r training.Through that process she understands9value of har d work,so it's thr ough those behaviors10I find the motivation to know what is losing feel like to you."Why did you start playing basketball?Because I loved it;because nothing in this world moves without love."短文改错:I took our foreign teacher Mr.Brown,he came to China for the first time,to Sha P otou in last weekend. Having told about the history of NingXia,he was amazing at this wonder.He was struck by the beautiful of the mixture of sand and water.So I took photo of him,which would be a good memory for him.At the top,Mr.Brown was very interested in the activities of protecting the environment that he was eager to join in and sign her name. Both Sha P otou and a NingXia people deep impressed him.He decided to visit more places of interest when free.10(2020年陕西省西安中学高考英语一模试卷)语法填空：Dachi was the name of my pet cockatiel.His name comes from the second half of the Japanese word tomodachi,1means friend.I tau g h t Dachi to whistle two songs,"For He's a Jolly Good Fellow"and"Happy Birthday to Y ou".Though his whole range of skills was small,his2（confident）never lagged（滞后）,and he would frequently wish me a happy birthday when it wasn't﹣which could be3（emb arrass）.When Dachi had been with us for three or four years,I think I may have become a bit too confident with him..O ne day , I walked out of the h ou se and didn 't realize that he was still sitting on my shoulder4 the doorbehind me shut loudly . He5 （fly ） away .After I placed6advertisement in the local paper , I received a phone call from a woman. I was sorelieved to hear this news that I 7（immediate ） drove to her house. When I arrived, she ask ed me tosee whether the bird was 8（I ）.I had a better idea9（identify ） Dachi and began to whistle the "Happy Birthday" song. The ladystopped me, 10（say ）, "He is yours alright ﹣ he 's been whistling that all week."So Dachi came home in the car sitting on my shoulder , whistling.短文改错:P eople always say that we lack of the eyes of realizing the beauty in life. I can 't agr ee complete. Last Friday, Iwok e up very early and decide to tak e a walk. In the square there many senior citizens were dancing, I foundseveral elders bury in feeding birds. Without many cars, I realized the city look ed so clean but beautiful. Somecoffee shops were decorated pretty well, which attracted our eyes. The whole city was covered with gr een tree,making it gr een city. At this mome n t, I found the city was so interesting. How I regret ignore its beauty before!11(2020 年云南省曲靖一中高考英语二模试卷)语法填空：David Katz was upset by all the plastic going into the ocean. T o help solve the problem, he had a1（create ）idea to treat plastic like money . Mr . Katz calls his idea the "plastic Bank". The goal of the Plastic Bank isto use plastic to help people solve the problems 2（gradual ） The Plastic Bank adds a value to plasticwaste by paying people to recycle it.The p r og ram began in 2015 in Haiti, a poor island nation with many 3（pr oblem ）of wasteplastic. The Plastic Bank has 30 "markets" in Haiti. At the Plastic Bank markets, people can exchange the plasticthey've collected for 4they need. The Plastic Bank mark ets sell lots of things that local people need.ofThe stores also allow plastic collectors to use the money they earn to pay 5health care or school.T o mak e sure that the plastic6 （recycle ）, the Plastic Bank works with partners, who agr ee 7（use ）the plastic that is collected. When customers buy these products, which are labeled "Social Plastic", theyknow that they are both helping people in other parts of the world 8k eeping plastic out of the ocean. So far ,the Plastic Bank 9（k eep ） about 7 million pounds of plastic out of the ocean. It mak es a great10（contribute ）to the ocean.短文改错：At lunch in the first day of my high school, I saw a girl sit alone. I decided to sit with her and we had pleasantchat. Late, we became close friends in the following three years. O ne day , he shared something touching with me."Do you remember the day when you come over and sat next to me, wearing a big smile?" she ask ed me. "I wantedyou to know how mu ch special you were. I was disappointing at that time, but your smile made my day," sheadded.I can 't help smile each time I think of the scene, that shows me that a simple act of kindness can ch ange livesgreatly12(2020 年甘肃省西北师大附中高考英语一模试卷)语法填空：The ancient wisdom of Confucius is timeless. His thinking 1（influence ）the Chinese for thou san ds ofyears. However , English teaching see ms to be one place 2his wisdom is forgotten.I came to China 6 years ago, and quickly saw the plight （困境） so many students 3 （struggle ）to learn English. They know a lot "about" English,4 they never master the language. They learned farmore g rammar than students in W estern cultures and almost no oral training. They were made 5（recite ）sentences and p assages from their books. Their teachers were spending 90% of the class talking to them "about"English in Chinese.All effective language teaching in the world is built 6 the basis of oral language. S tudents whoaexcel in English are those that follow the wisdom of Confucius ： they use language! They use it primarily byspeaking and listening, 7（eventual ）supple me nte d （补充）by reading and writing. Every languageis taug h t by gaining speaking compe te nce long before grammar , readingand writing8（ introduce ）.Chinese students work so hard.9 they learned English with correct spok en instructions and classroompractice, they would have the 10（high ） English scores in the world and they would conquer English.短文改错：When surf the Internet yesterday , I saw a blog posted by a mother . She was not sure of whether she couldafford the cost of supplying school books for both of her kid this year . O ne of her boys is one year low than me inthe school, so I write to ask for the b ook list of his school. Because two books of mine matched the list, so I wasable to give them away , what I u se d last school year . I mailed the two books to his son according to the givenaddress. Then she wrote to say how deep she appreciated the gift. It's always nice to do I can to mak e a difference!13(2020 年贵州省贵阳市、六盘水市高考英语模拟试卷（一）)语法填空：The Contemporary Mu seu m of Calligraphy （书法）contains more than 200 art pieces including Arabic,Chinese, 1（Europe ）, Indian, Japanese and Slavic calligraphic works. "One of the most interesting 2（item ）in the museum is a b ook of calligraphic work on the 36 military tactics （战术）applied during wars inancient China," Alexey Shaburov , founder and k eeper of the museum, 3（tell ） group of reporters fromChina on November 24.The giant b ook is exhibited in a large glass case. Shaburov took it out to show some of4 （it ）content. Each tactic, 5is usually expressed in four Chinese characters, is written on one page andaccomp anied by a Russian translation on another page. The tactics represent the 6（wise ）of Chinesepeople. They are not only useful on the battlefield 7also for business and personal life.,He said he became crazy about calligraphy, so he decided 8（establish ） a calligraphic museumin Moscow . The museum has played9 important role in pr omoting calligraphy in Russia. "Calligraphywasn 't seen as an art form in Russia. But this year , some of the artworks from our museum were made a part of thenon public section of the Russian museum collection," Shaburov said, 10（add ）that this means thatcalligraphic works are acknowledged as cultural heritage and will be pr otected in Russia.短文改错：Dear Sir/Madam,I heartedly want to be a volunteer of yours. Here is something about you. I am a student who will gradu atesenior high school. I always regard my class as our family or sacrifice my personally interests whenever necessary .Besides tak e an active part in class activities, I work responsibly to build up a good reputation for the team, Irespected all the people ar ou n d me and I'm always willing to give a hand to those in need. I'm strictin myself ,making every effort to achieve an all ﹣r ound development. In time of difficult, I always k eep strong minded.In addition, I am good at English both in speaking and in writing. I was in an American host family for 20 daysin the su mme r camp and know how to get along well with foreigners. Looking forward to your early reply .14(2020 年河南省百校联盟高考英语模拟试卷（3 月份）)语法填空：During last year's two sessions （两会） Shan Jixiang, director of the Palace Museum, 1（pu sh ）for major renovations （修复） inside the palace museum. And during this year's two sessions, he proposedadopting 2new set of regulations on how to best protect and preserve the historic complex."The Regulation of the Preservation of the Great Wall 3（adopt ） over the p ast years, and it haspr oved very effective, so this year we 've drafted an outline for new regulations and we hope to p ass the culturalrelics of the Palace M u seu m on to many generations 4（come ）." Shan said.The Palace M u se um faces serious pressures. An increasing number of 5（tour ） want tosee the palace 's treasures, but overcrowding could harm preservation efforts. And 6urbanization （城市化） progressing in Beijing, construction ar ound the Palace Muse um may end up d amagi n g7（it ）ancient buildings. The Forbidden City's image as a museum has gr own 8 Shan 's last measures wereappr oved in2012.T o mak e more room for more visitors,Shan has proposed moving750employees,9（r oug h）half th e mu se u m's staff,to offices outside the complex.He has also called for transforming an archaeological site which10（be）unearthed in2016into a new public archaeological museum for the public to enjoy.短文改错：I am pleased to hearing from you and I am writing to tell you something about Liuyi Club.Found in2017, Liuyi Club is a students'society on Chinese traditional culture,especial the Chinese calligraphy."Liuyi"means"the six arts",the general term referring a variety of traditional Chinese arts.Since2017,Liuyi Club had organized a good many of activities aiming at pr omoting traditional Chinese arts.Such events as Chinese calligraphy and painting competition is held regularly for students in the school.The club provides a platform what students can mak e friends with those who have much in common.Through these activities,participant can improve their communication and teamwork abilities.15(2020年辽宁师大附中高考英语模拟试卷（3月份）)语法填空：China is the global host of the2019World Environment Day celebrations,and the main event is being held in Hangzhou in East China.Over the p ast decade,Hangzhou governme nt1（improve）bike friendly infrastructure,such as lanes and traffic signals2（create）for cyclists and has provided almost86,000public bikes.In Hangzhou,a smart card allows users to3（easy）access all forms of public transport,4bikes to buses.Apart from leading the Chinese cycling resurgence,Hangzhou is also home to an innovative way to encourage more5（sustain）lifestyles,with an app6is helping to stop desertification,cut air pollution and plant millions of new trees.The"Ant Forest"mini﹣program,a Hangzhou﹣based project from giant Chinese p ayments and lifestyle app Alipay,encourages users to mak e small,environmentally friendly7（decide）in their daily lives, such as cycling rather8driving to work,or recycling clothes.If users perform any carbon﹣reducing。
2020届高三各地10月和11月英语试卷精选汇编：短文改错专题
2020届高三各地10月和11月英语试卷精选汇编：短文改错专题衡阳市八中2020届高三月考试题 (四)短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
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修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I felt delighted to be informed the news that I would be our Student Union’s next minister of health. Therefore, when I calmed down, I began to realize what challenging the job would be. I can still remember the day when I hold a meeting with all the members, that was a real challenge for me. With so many eyes fixing on me, I struggled to speak as my face and ears turned complete red. I had never felt so nervous ago. Although I went through a series of difficulty, I gained a lot as well --- a plenty of new friends, the ability to communicate and an improvement in my organizational skills.改错rmed后加of或about 72. Therefore改为However73.what改为how 74. hold改为held 75. That改为which76. fixing改为fixed 77. complete改为completely78. ago改为before 79. difficulty 改为difficulties80. plenty of 前的a 去掉安徽省太和中学2020届高三11月份检测辽宁省大连市2009-2010高三第三次模拟考试英语试卷短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
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2020最新全国各地名校模考应用文改错题集锦1.下面是生活中的对话情境，双方共有五处表达不得体，请找出并作修改。
（5分）学生：老师好，我有个问题，请您雅正。
老师：没问题，我不吝回答。
学生：因在家受令尊的影响，我从小喜爱书法。
老师：这很好呀！学生：现在我想光顾市里举办的书法赛，但不知道参赛流程。
老师：噢，本次参赛流程较为复杂，正好也有几位同学询问这事，我下午将拨冗为你们集中解答。
学生：谢谢老师，老师再见！2.下面是一封邀请函的初稿，其中有五处不得体的表达，请找出并作修改。
（5分）尊敬的王好古教授：我们研究会寻思于2019年11月6日在泉城大酒店搞个民间文学理论报告会，想让您就民间文学的现状与发展聊聊高见，敬请抽空出席。
顺祝健康！山东省济南市民间文学研究会邀请人：李民生2019年11月2日3．下面是一则产品说明书的部分内容，其中在结构、内容、语言表达方面有五处错误，请找出并作修改。
（5分）产品的性能和特点——本产品采用创新的外形设计，弧度优美，结构雅致，安装及拆卸都很便宜，面框组合丰富，产品功能齐全。
产品的使用方法——请不要在潮湿的环境下使用。
请勿在插座和电线破损的情况下使用。
请勿用干手插拔插头。
产品的维修——定期适当保养可以延长插板的使用寿命，务必保养插板前拔下插头。
插板长期停用时，应切断电源。
经常检查插板的密封是否破损，如果破损应立即停用。
产品概述——插座，又称电源插座、开关插座，通过它可以插入各种接线，便于与其他电路接通。
4.下面是一封信的主要内容，其中有五处用词不得体，请找出并作修改。
（5分）感谢贤弟的垂爱，寄呈的大作已收到。
粗读之余，激动不已。
文笔精妙，愚兄自愧不如。
个别词句冒昧作一斧正，若有不当之处，诚请笑纳。
5.下面的应用文在语言、标点等方面存在5处问题，请指出并加以修改。
（5分）“好滋味”征文启示运城市某饮料有限公司从2019年6月21日起至2019年10月20日将开展“好滋味”征文活动。
届时将评选出一等奖5名，二等奖10名，三等奖20名，参与奖1000名。
获奖名单及获奖征文将于2019年10月31前在精品购物指南刊出。
征文要求：语言流畅，内容充实，文字精炼，要有真情实感；题目自拟，题材不限。
稿件投递：①电子版发送至邮箱：ycmylgs@ 126．com，请注明“投稿‘好滋味”’；②邮局邮寄：运城市某某路工业园某饮料有限公司；③请在文章末尾注明作者姓名、邮寄地址及联系电话。
兑换奖品地点：盐湖区、夏县、临猗、河津等十三个县市经销商处进行兑换。
运城市某饮料有限公司2019年6月20日6.下面是某校园广播站的一则广播稿，其中有四处表达不得体，请找出并修改。
（5分）《吕梁英雄传》（长篇小说），作者是我国著名作家马烽和西戎。
全书共80回之多，全部是吕梁革命史的真实写照。
为提高同学们的阅读鉴赏能力，校广播站将播出专题节目，为大家解读这部小说，到时将开通热线，由王宏老师为同学们垂询相关问题。
敬请关注！7.下面一则《征稿启事》，从格式到内容都存在问题，请找出五处并加以改正。
（5分）征稿启事XX教育杂志是全国中文核心期刊，热忱欢迎知名人士为本刊撰写稿件。
（一）稿件须是未经发表的学术论著，文内请勿引用未公开发表的资料。
（二）撰写格式必须执行本刊的编排规范。
规范详见杂志文稿。
（三）如本刊认为稿件需要改动，将主动垂询作者，商量改动事宜。
（四）来稿三个月未被录用，有权对稿件另行处理。
鉴于人力所限，本刊一般不予退稿，烦请作者自留底稿。
（五）欢迎将稿件投至本编辑部的电子信箱：XXXX@163．com承蒙热心作者的大力支持，本刊得以不断发展，于此谨致谢。
2018年10月25日XX杂志编辑部8.下面是某校校庆公告初稿片段，其中有五处表述不妥当，请找出并作修改。
（5分）作为某县基础教育的一面旗帜，学校坚持实验性、示范性，在徽文化的深厚滋养中，广育英才。
学校拟定于2018年10月上旬（具体时间另行通知）举办90周年校庆活动。
为办好此次校庆活动，我校特面向各届校友，征集在校期间惠存的校徽、校服、奖章、笔记和具有纪念意义的物品，并籍此向您们发出诚挚邀请。
欢迎拨冗光临此次盛会，共商学校发展大计。
特此公告，敬请传达。
9．公历9月26日是朱孝秋父亲的70岁生日，他想请父亲的老战友刘晖夫妇那天中午一起吃饭。
以下是以朱孝秋的名义写的一份请柬的初稿，其中有五处表达不合要求，请找出并作修改。
(5分)刘伯父伉俪：今逢令尊七十大寿，幸得身体还好，儿孙绕膝，深感珍惜。
遂定于9月26日中午12点聊备薄酒，您二位务必来参加宴席。
敬请光临。
侄儿：朱孝秋2019年9月20日10.某先生同事的女儿考上了名牌大学,他因有事不能参加贺宴。
特编了一条微信给同事,此微信有多处不正确,请找出其中五处并作修改。
（5分）惊悉令爱在今年高考中蟾宫折桂,忝列名校,谨示衷心祝贺。
因俗务缠身,不能拨冗前往贵府出席贺宴,特惠赠路遥《平凡的世界》,祝她学习进步万事如意,还望笑纳。
下次有时间,一定莅临府上,当面致贺!(1)__________改为________(2)_________ 改为________(3)__________改为________(4)__________改为________(5)__________改为________11.下面是某大学100周年校庆公告初稿的片殴，在表达上有五处用语不当，请指出并改正。
（5分）百年奋进求是，百年盛世华章。
2019年4月26日，××大学将迎来建校100周年生日。
建校100周年，是××大学不忘初心、继往开来的新起点。
为此，学校将在2019年4月，启动“百年校庆”系列活动。
我们热情要求社会各界关注××大学百年校庆，真诚邀请广大校友拨冗眷顾，在我校美丽的校园畅叙情谊，共襄盛举，描绘××大学新时代发展宏图！特此公示，敬祈周知。
12．下面是一则家长会的通知，请从格式、内容等方面找出5处不当的地方，并提出修改办法。
（5分）通知尊敬的各位家长：兹定于2019年5月20日下午在我校召开初三年级家长会，传达今年全省中考改革的会议精神，同时汇报我们初三学生德智体美全面发展的情况及存在的问题。
届时请务必到会参加。
此致敬礼×××中学2019年5月15日答案：1. ①“请您雅正”改为“向您请教”。
②“不吝”改为“乐意”。
③“令尊”改为“家父”。
④“光顾”改为“参加”。
⑤“拨冗”改为“抽出时间”。
2. 2.①寻思：决定。
②搞个：举办③让：恭请④聊聊：发表⑤抽空：拨冗（找对改对得1分，不得改动原意。
无必要不得删掉）3.①'便宜'改为'方便'②'干手'改为'湿手'③'产品的维修'改为' 产品的保养'④'务必保养插板前拔下插头'改为'保养插板前务必拔下插头'⑤'产品概述'改为'放在第一段'4、①“垂爱”改为“抬爱”②“寄呈”改为“寄来”③“粗读”改为“拜读”④“斧正”改为“改动”⑤“笑纳”改为“见谅”5、(l)将“启示”改为“启事”(2)给“精品购物指南”加上“书名号”(3)将“内容充实”与“文字精炼”位置调换(4)将“题材”改为“体裁”(5)删去“进行兑换”6、①“《吕梁英雄传》（长篇小说）”改为“长篇小说《吕梁英雄传》”；②“全书共80回之多”改为“全书共80回”；③“全部”删去，或改为“都”；④“垂询”改为“解答”。
7、（1）将“热忱”改为“热诚”(2)“知名人士”改为“教育工作者”(3)“必须”改为“请”(4) “将主动垂询作者”改为“将主动征求作者意见”(“垂询”是敬辞，称别人对自己的询问，使用对象有误。
)(5) “有权对稿件另行处理”没主语，表意不清，可加“作者”(6) 时间在落款之后8、①“示范性”后加“办学特色”；②“惠存”改为“珍藏”；③“和”改为“等”；④“您们”改为“你们”；⑤“敬请传达”改为“敬请周知”或“敬请转告”9.①“令尊”称谓对象有误，改为“家父”或“家严”②“还好”为口语，改为“安康”③日期需明确为公历还是农历，应为“公历9月26日”④缺少详细的地址信息，应在“中午12点”之后加上“在XX酒店”⑤“务必”二字不显谦敬，应该为“诚邀您二位来参加宴席”(每处1分)10.（共5分，1题1分）①“惊悉”改为“欣闻”②“ 忝列”改为“考取”③“拨冗”改为“抽空”④“惠赠”改为“敬送”⑤“ 莅临”改为“到”或“前往”11、①“生日”改为“华辰”；②“要求”改为“期待”；③“眷顾”改为“莅临”或“莅校”；④“我校”改为“母校”；⑤“公示”改为“公告”。
12. （1）“尊敬的各位家长”顶格写（2）“5月20日下午”在“下午”后加具体时间（如：三点半）（3）在“我校”后加“阶梯教室”（加出地点即可）（4）“务必到会参加” 将“参加”或“到会”删去一个（5）“此致敬礼”删除（通知的规范格式中没有“此致敬礼”，“此致敬礼”应属于书信格式要求之一。
百度百科：'此致''敬礼'用作信末祝颂问安。
习惯上将这里的'敬礼'另起一行顶格写，也可在次行空两格书写。
前者相当于提行，后者则无异另起一段，都表示尊重。
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