英语作文的批改范文与评语

英语作文的批改范文与评语

The person I love/ admire most

要求

1. No less than 90 points by Pigai.

2. No less than 26o words.

3. Deadline Nov. 3.

作文号:357928 教师:邵春字数:260~500 满分:100

Attitude

要求

For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Attitude by menting on the famous saying, “A man can sueed at almost anything for which he has unlimited enthusiasm .” You should write at least 260 words but no more than 500 words.

作文号:357929 教师:邵春字数:100~500 满分:100

The person I love/ admire most

Everyone has someone in his heart that he admires most, who may be a scientist, a writer, a musician or a movie super star. But,as for me,the most admirable person of mine is Christian Ronaldo, who is one of the greatest football player in today's world. Ronaldo was born in 1985, He was played for the Manchester united and now plays for real Madrid, when he was 18 years old he became a main force of Portugal national team. As for the world’s most brilliant super football stars, he not only has a handsome appearance, also has a special skill and efficient scoring ability. However, this is not reason why I admire him, the really point let me be his fans is his gratitude feelings and persistence of perseverance.

Ronaldo is a tender feelings man under his tough appearance,the most important things he teach me is that we should gratitude everyone who ever helped us, When he was 18,of which playing for Manchester united，even though he has

unparalleled football talent，he was always neither well with team cooperation, nor handle for his applause and criticism. At this time, the Manchester united coach Sir Alex ferguson give most patient guidance to him. Latter, When Ronaldo every time honored, he always expresses his gratitude to Alex ferguson.“He is just like my father and friend!”

Moreover, another point he inspired me is his persistence for his persuit. From a youth to the leader of the national football team, Ronaldo is always to spare no effort to devote his time and energy, and as for the life of football. He is always the first came to the training ground, the last to leave. Now, he is nearly thirty years old, but he still keep the highest level on the field.

In sum, it is my general description about Christian Ronaldo above, I learn to be an gratitude person with strong mind from he. no pains, no gains. Only when you work hard, you can e true your dream. These lessons exercise a great influence on my life. Ronaldo, thank you so much for not only giving interest of football to me but also teaching me how to be a good person. Recently, the New Year's golden ball players will