英语作文的批改范文与评语

英语作文的批改范文与评语The person I love/ admire most要求1. No less than 90 points by Pigai.2. No less than 26o words.3. Deadline Nov. 3.作文号:357928 教师:邵春字数:260~500 满分:100Attitude要求For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Attitude by menting on the famous saying, “A man can sueed at almost anything for which he has unlimited enthusiasm .” You should write at least 260 words but no more than 500 words.作文号:357929 教师:邵春字数:100~500 满分:100The person I love/ admire mostEveryone has someone in his heart that he admires most, who may be a scientist, a writer, a musician or a movie super star. But,as for me,the most admirable person of mine is Christian Ronaldo, who is one of the greatest football player in today's world. Ronaldo was born in 1985, He was played for the Manchester united and now plays for real Madrid, when he was 18 years old he became a main force of Portugal national team. As for the world’s most brilliant super football stars, he not only has a handsome appearance, also has a special skill and efficient scoring ability. However, this is not reason why I admire him, the really point let me be his fans is his gratitude feelings and persistence of perseverance.Ronaldo is a tender feelings man under his tough appearance,the most important things he teach me is that we should gratitude everyone who ever helped us, When he was 18,of which playing for Manchester united，even though he hasunparalleled football talent，he was always neither well with team cooperation, nor handle for his applause and criticism. At this time, the Manchester united coach Sir Alex ferguson give most patient guidance to him. Latter, When Ronaldo every time honored, he always expresses his gratitude to Alex ferguson.“He is just like my father and friend!”Moreover, another point he inspired me is his persistence for his persuit. From a youth to the leader of the national football team, Ronaldo is always to spare no effort to devote his time and energy, and as for the life of football. He is always the first came to the training ground, the last to leave. Now, he is nearly thirty years old, but he still keep the highest level on the field.In sum, it is my general description about Christian Ronaldo above, I learn to be an gratitude person with strong mind from he. no pains, no gains. Only when you work hard, you can e true your dream. These lessons exercise a great influence on my life. Ronaldo, thank you so much for not only giving interest of football to me but also teaching me how to be a good person. Recently, the New Year's golden ball players willreveal, Ronaldo remains at the top, all is own to his gratitude mentality and uemitting persistence, and I will continue to give my greatest respect, Hala Madrid!The person I admire mostEveryone has someone in his heart that he admires most, who may be a scientist, a writer, a musician or a movie super star. But, as for me, the most admirable person of mine is my dearest mother. My mother is an ordinary woman. She is not very beautiful and a little heavy as well as me. But sometimes, you will think she is very kind and enthusiastic. Although she doesn’t have high education, she is very capable. She is excellent in social contact and bargaining. She loves me and my brother, tries to give us the fortable surroundings to study and live in. She is a sensible person, but she can’t stand someone screwing the number of my family over. No one in the world loves you more than your mother. While she gave me life, she takes me as her concern. She devotes her whole life to the family.I learn to be an optimistic person with strong mind from my mother. She also teaches me that no pains, no gains. Only when you work hard, you can e true your dream. These lessons exercisea great influence on my life.Although my mother is an ordinary person, she is still the person that I admire most. Mom, thank you so much for not only giving birth to me but also teaching me how to be a good person. No matter what will be in the future, I will always love you.AltitudeIt is said “A man can sueed at almost anything for which he has unlimited enthusiasm!”,we can known how altitude play a important role to our suess. A person who even though take a extraordinary talent, he will hard to get outstanding achievement without a good altitude to his work or study.These are two causes why a positive altitude is so significant to our career,on the one hand, we can build a strong confidence from a good mental state facing unpredictable challenges,in turn, which will unleash yourunlimited enthusiasm to push you to devote time and energy to your work. Beethoven, who is the greatest poser and pianist in the history of music,who also is a blind man at the sametime,even if so, he was optimistic in the facing of life, e over all blocks we can not image with a strong determination ,and finally pose the many wonderful music . On the other hand, as the saying goes, “Failure is the mother of suess”, but I think it better to say,”Failure will always around you without a good attitude!”,there is no doubt that it is be so difficult for us to sueed. When I was third grade in primary school, it was very popular for us learning play the guitar, Before that, I have had some music knowledge due to study for a year, for which , I don't have to go to learn to play guitar with a good altitude, of course, in the end, those who had not studied or without any basis students learn better than me under the positive and careful study. So it is a enthusiastic attitude that make their life full of music and make goal has been achieved.In sum, which the factors of suess dominated by altitude after all Confidence, optimistic, courage or all above Perhaps,it is not necessary for us to discuss the answer to it, because someone have adjust a good altitude to facing their life,stress and work ,when you are consider this question.标题：大学生参加社会实践字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字满分: 100要求：For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled College Students Should Take Part in Social Practice following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.1、很多大学生缺乏社会实践2、大学生应该参加社会实践3、我的观点范文:Aording to a survey, in recent years, many universities ignored the phenomenon that college students did not have enough chance to take part in social practice leaded to they lacked the ability to adapt to society in the future.When we asked college students whether they had engaged in social practice, most of them said no. I take it for granted that social practice can bring many benefits to college student. In the first instance, social practice can offer students adequate chance to meet various people in society. They can aumulate enough experience and use it in the future career. The second thing that must be taken into consideration is that it is a great opportunity for them put theory into practice and improve their In a word, I take the attitude that social practice is a critical thing for university students and they should also learn how to balance between study and work.标题：Five(Three) Famous Symbols of Chinese Culture字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字满分: 100要求：字数200字左右，须有中心，围绕一个中心选取三至五个具有中国特征的事物描写As we know, China is one of the countries with the longest history of ancient civilization in the world. Our ancestors made a contribution to our country even world with a wealth of cultural legacy.One of the famous symbols of Chinese Culture is the Yellow River. It is the second longest river in China and considered as Mother river of Chinese individual. It is generally recognized that Huang Di was born here and Nu Wa was made by mud from Yellow River.Chinese knot is also a famous symbol in culture. Our ancestors used it to record things but now it is mainly used for decoration in the Favorite Spring. It must be emphasized that Chinese knot represents love, harmony and marry.The last symbol that must be taken into consideration is The Great Wall. The Great Wall was built by ordinary people to avoid other countries attacking ourselves at the beginning. It is called as world miracle was made by in ___igent individual.The Yellow River, Chinese knot and The Great Wall, represents Chinese outstanding culture and it is just a part of the Chinese excellent culture. I hope everyone from the world could learnthe acknowledgeable about Chinese culture.标题：扇子字数: 不低于100字并且不高于300 字满分: 100原文：扇子是一种用来拨动空气以使人感到凉快的工具。