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2022年新高考一卷英语作文湖南师大附中名师解析

2022年新高考一卷英语作文湖南师大附中名师解析

2022年新高考一卷英语作文湖南师大附中名师解析一、第二节读后续写试题简析2022年新高考1卷英语写作第二节读后续写原文故事情节简单清晰,讲述了David因为脑部疾病影响行动,教练担心他被嘲笑而让他选择是否继续参加比赛。

David选择放弃,而“我”作为该学校特殊教育老师,决定帮助鼓励他参加比赛。

故事语言简明易懂,故事情节为学生所熟悉,让学生有话可写,易于表达。

所给两段段首句没有生词,降低了考生在审题上的困难。

二、第二节读后续写的基本思路根据第二段段首句I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other nunners.可推知,作者在写作第一段中,已成功说服了David 参加比赛。

因此,第一段续写中,考虑重点描写作者如何说服David参赛的;第二段续写中,重点叙述David赛跑中的动作神态、遇到的困难,并以顽强毅力全程跑完了比赛的过程与结果。

这样的情节设计,以作者与David的互动为出发点和落脚点,通过常见的人物动作描写、心理描写等,使得全文语义贯通,故事内容完整,符合“发展-过程-结果”的记叙文逻辑关系,表现故事人物勇敢顽强、不惧困难、勇往直前的精神,传播了正能量。

三、读后续写的步骤与技巧高考英语备考指导的经验告诉我们,高考英语读后续写既要遵循一定的写作步骤,也要娴熟掌握正确的写作方法与技巧。

下面以2022年新高考I卷第四部分第二节的实际续写为例,与各位分享一下读后续写必须遵循的步骤和使用的方法技巧。

(一)找出原文要素,掌握原文大意。

续写的前提是要读懂所给阅读材料,弄清楚文章的体裁、题材、中心人物、主要故事线索、核心素养等,以确保续写的内容与前文叙述故事情节无缝衔接、完整一致。

为此,首要的是归纳出记叙文的六要素(时间、地点、人物和事情的起因、经过和结果,即 who /when / where / what / why / how )。

新高考I卷 新高考II卷通用-高考英语真题作文深度解读+精彩范文

新高考I卷 新高考II卷通用-高考英语真题作文深度解读+精彩范文

2022高考英语新高考I卷作文解读【考题】第四部分写作(共两节、满分40分)第一节(满分15分)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。

内容包括:1.节目介绍;2.访谈的时间和话题。

注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

〖解题思路(写前四审)〗1.审题材:邀请信2.审时态:一般现在时为主3.审人称:第二、一人称为主4.审要点:构思文章是否符合题目要求,主旨突出,内容要点齐全,写作对象明确,语言的选用得当,符合要求等。

〖解题思路(分段落,列提纲)〗第一段:作用:开篇。

要求:开门见山,点名主题,篇幅:2-3行:2句-3句。

自我介绍,表明写作目的,即邀请外教接受访谈。

I am Li Hua, in charge of “Talk and Talk”, an English program from the Campus Broadcasting Station, as your student as well, I will be very honored if you can accept my invitation to do an interview.第二段:作用:文章主体内容。

要求:层次分明,逻辑清晰,要点齐全。

篇幅:4-5行,4-5个句子。

1.节目介绍;2.访谈的时间和话题。

“Talk and Talk” is a face to face interview about some hot topics in and out of campus. Beside s its practical content, the interviewees, who are invited to attend this program, also contribute a lot to its high reputation. Broadcast every day, “Talk and Talk” contains a large amount of information from domestic affairs to the international political situation, from history events to the latest football games. And the most important character is its fast pace. Because of this fast pace, news programs can contain much information in a short time.第三段:结尾段,作用:收尾,点题,补充其他细节等。

2023年高考英语作文真题范文赏析12篇

2023年高考英语作文真题范文赏析12篇

2023年全国甲卷范文1【2023年高考题甲卷】A Famous Figure in Chinese History—Confucius 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。

请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.人物简介及事迹;2. 意义或启示。

注意:1.词数100左右;2. 题目已为你写好。

A Famous Figure in Chinese History—ConfuciusI'd like to introduce one of the great figures in Chinese history, Confucius,who was born in the State of Lu (presentday Qufu, Shandong Province) . As a great philosopher, educator, and politician, he left a profound impact on Chinese culture and society.His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and munities in China and beyond.The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, passion, and social responsibility.范文2【2023年高考题甲卷】A Famous Figure in Chinese History—Li BaiA Famous Figure in Chinese History—Li BaiAs we know,our country has a long history of five thousand years,and there are many famous poets,such as Li Bai,Du Fu, Du Mu, Ou Yangxiu and so on. As for the famous figure whom I admire most, it must be Li Bai.Li Bai,born in the 701 AD,is a romantic poet of the Tang Dynasty,with the name of poetry god. He is cheerful and generous,likes drinking wine,writing poetry and making friends. And he has many famous works,such as Invitation to Wine «将进酒»,Jing Ye Si «静夜思» ,Difficult Roads in Shu «蜀道难» and so on.Li Bai’s poems are not only works of art,but also spiritual food. They give people a tasteful spiritual enjoyment,so that readers can feel the beauty and meaning of life while they are enjoying the poetry, whichcan encourage people to overe difficulties. Maybe I can’t achieve as much as him, but I am determined to bee a person like him, a person of great creativity,optimism and inspiration.范文3【2023年高考题甲卷】A Famous Figure in Chinese History—Fan ZhongyanThe Historical Figure in China—Fan ZhongyanAmong the Chinese historical figures that are widely acknowledged,Fan Zhongyan is the most influential in my opinion. Here are the reasons.Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty,Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he made great contributions to society. He spared no effort to carry out a series of reforms to make our country prosperous. Besides, he proposed the establishment of a national school system, which had a farreaching influence on the Chinese educational system.What impresses me most is his famous philosophy of life: "Be the first to worry about the troubles across the land, the last to enjoy universal happiness." Fan Zhongyan is such a role model that he always encourages me to be a man of noble character.范文4 思想家教育家孔子The Great Thinker and EducatorConfucius假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。

2023高考英语新课标卷i读后续写深度解析

2023高考英语新课标卷i读后续写深度解析

2023高考英语新课标卷I读后续写深度解析一、前言2023年高考英语新课标卷I的读后续写部分是考生备受关注的重要考点之一。

通过这一部分的考察,不仅能够考查考生的英语阅读理解能力,还可以测试考生的表达能力和逻辑思维能力。

本文将对2023年高考英语新课标卷I的读后续写部分进行深度解析,并在此基础上进行思考和总结。

二、文章分析1. 阅读理解的深度解读在2023年高考英语新课标卷I的读后续写部分中,考生需要根据给出的文章内容,进行深入的理解和分析,然后进行适当的延伸和拓展,完成一篇连贯、有逻辑的文章。

这要求考生能够准确把握文章的主题和要点,理解作者的意图和观点,进行合理的推理和想象,从而撰写出一篇富有观点和思想的文章。

2. 表达能力的提升在完成读后续写部分时,考生需要具备较强的表达能力,能够准确、流畅地表达自己的观点和想法。

要求考生能够灵活运用所学的词汇和语法知识,构建复杂的句子和段落,使文章结构清晰,逻辑严谨,层次分明。

3. 思维能力的考察通过读后续写,考生的逻辑思维能力将得到很好的锻炼和考察。

考生需要能够准确地捕捉文章中的信息,理清脉络,有条不紊地展开思路,使整篇文章既有深度,又有广度,形成独特的见解和观点。

三、个人理解和观点在我看来,读后续写不仅是对学生语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力的考验,更是对学生综合运用所学知识的能力的检验。

通过这一部分的考察,考生能够在实践中将语言表达、思维能力、知识储备有机结合起来,形成自己独特的语言风格和思维方式。

我认为通过不断的练习和积累,可以提高自己的读后续写能力,获得更好的成绩。

四、总结通过对2023年高考英语新课标卷I的读后续写部分进行深度解析,我们可以发现这一部分的考察内容涵盖了阅读理解、表达能力和思维能力等方面,要求考生具备较高的综合能力。

希望广大考生能够充分认识到读后续写的重要性,注重平时的积累和训练,从而在考试中取得优异的成绩。

以上就是对2023年高考英语新课标卷I的读后续写部分的深度解析,希望对您有所帮助。

2023新高考1卷英语满分作文译文解析

2023新高考1卷英语满分作文译文解析

2023新高考1卷英语满分作文译文解析全文共10篇示例,供读者参考篇1Hello everyone! Today, let's talk about the translation and analysis of the full marks essay on the first volume of the 2023 new college entrance examination in English. So, let's get started!The essay begins with a prompt that asks the students to write about their favorite season. The student chose winter as their favorite season and wrote about how they love playing in the snow and building snowmen. They also mentioned how winter is a time for hot chocolate and cozy nights by the fireplace.In terms of translation, the student did a great job of capturing the essence of the prompt and expressing their thoughts and feelings about winter. The translation was accurate and easy to understand, with no major grammatical errors.In the analysis section, the student mentioned some key points about why they love winter and how it makes them feel.They also talked about how winter is a time for family and friends to come together and enjoy each other's company.Overall, the student did a fantastic job of translating and analyzing the essay prompt. Their writing was clear, concise, and engaging, and they effectively conveyed their thoughts and feelings about their favorite season. Great job!So, that's all for today's analysis of the full marks essay on the first volume of the 2023 new college entrance examination in English. I hope you found it helpful and informative. Thank you for reading!篇2Title: My Analysis of the Translation and Explanation of the Full Marks Essay for the 2023 New College Entrance ExaminationHey guys! Today, let's talk about the translation and explanation of the full marks essay for the 2023 New College Entrance Examination. I have read the essay and I think it's really awesome! Now, let me break it down for you.First of all, the essay is all about a girl named Lucy who loves reading books and dreams of becoming a writer in the future. I really like Lucy because she is just like me, always with a book inhand and full of imagination. The essay talks about her journey to achieve her dream and the challenges she faces along the way.The translation of the essay is very well done, with clear and concise language that is easy to understand. The explanation of the essay is also great, as it breaks down the main points and provides examples to support them. I learned a lot from reading the essay and now I feel more confident about my own writing skills.In conclusion, the translation and explanation of the full marks essay for the 2023 New College Entrance Examination is top-notch. It's a great guide for students like us who want to improve our English writing skills. I hope you guys enjoyed my analysis and keep practicing your writing! Who knows, maybe one day we will all become great writers like Lucy. Thanks for listening!篇3Oh my gosh, guys! I just aced the 2023 new high school English exam! Let me tell you all about it!So in the first essay section, we had to write about our favorite season. I chose summer because I love going to thebeach and eating ice cream. I talked about how the sun feels on my skin and all the fun things I do during the summer.Then, in the second section, we had to translate a passage from English to Chinese. It was about a girl who went on a trip to the Great Wall of China. I made sure to pay attention to the details and used the correct grammar and vocabulary.Finally, in the third section, we had to analyze a poem by Shakespeare. It was a tough one, but I remembered what my teacher taught me about analyzing poetry and applied it to the poem. I talked about the themes, imagery, and language used by Shakespeare.Overall, I think I did really well on the exam. I made sure to use good grammar, vocabulary, and organization in my writing. I can't wait to see my score when it comes back!I hope this helps you guys out with your own exams. Remember to stay calm, read the instructions carefully, and take your time to do your best! Good luck, everyone!篇4Oh my gosh, guys! Let me tell you all about the English section in the 2023 New High School Entrance Exam! It was like,totally crazy but super fun at the same time. I'm gonna share with you all the translation and analysis of the essay that scored full marks. So, sit back, relax, and let's dive into it!The prompt for the essay was about the importance of learning a second language and how it can benefit us in our lives. The student started by explaining why learning a second language is important, like how it helps us communicate with people from different countries and understand different cultures. Then, they talked about how it can open up more opportunities for us in terms of jobs and travel.In terms of translation, the student did a great job of maintaining the original meaning while using simple and clear language. They made sure to use proper grammar, punctuation, and vocabulary throughout the essay. For example, they used phrases like "in addition", "on the other hand", and "as a result" to show the flow of their ideas.As for analysis, the student really nailed it by providing strong arguments and evidence to support their points. They used real-life examples to illustrate how learning a second language can benefit us in various ways. They also structured their essay in a logical and organized manner, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.Overall, this essay was a perfect example of how to ace the English section in the 2023 New High School Entrance Exam. The student showed a solid understanding of the topic, excellent translation skills, and strong analytical abilities. So, if you wanna score full marks like them, just remember to practice your English skills regularly and stay confident in your abilities. Good luck, everyone! Let's all rock that exam together!篇5Oh my gosh, guys and gals! I just aced the 2023 new Gaokao English exam and scored full marks on my essay! Wanna know how I did it? Well, let me break it down for ya in a super fun and easy way!First off, the topic of the essay was all about my dream job. I totally rocked it by talking about how I wanna become a super cool astronaut and explore outer space. I mean, who wouldn't wanna fly to the moon and walk on Mars, right?Then, I talked about why this dream job is so important to me. I mentioned how I've always been fascinated by the stars and planets since I was a little kid. Plus, I wanna inspire other kids to reach for the stars (literally!) and follow their dreams too.Next up, I explained how I plan to achieve my dream job. I mentioned how I'm gonna study really hard in school, take extra science classes, and join space clubs and camps to learn more about space exploration. And of course, I'll never give up, no matter how tough it gets!Finally, I wrapped up my essay by talking about how excited I am for the future. I can't wait to put on that space suit, hop in a rocket ship, and blast off into the unknown. It's gonna be an epic adventure of a lifetime!And that's how I aced the 2023 Gaokao English exam, folks! Dream big, work hard, and never stop reaching for the stars! Woo-hoo!篇6Hey guys, have you ever thought about how to get a full score in the new high school entrance exam in 2023? Well, today I'm gonna share with you the translation and analysis of an English essay from the exam!The essay is about 2000 words long and it talks about the importance of friendship. The author starts by saying that true friendship is priceless and can bring us happiness and support.They also mention that friends can help us when we are in need and share our joys and sorrows.The author then gives examples of famous friendships from history and literature, such as Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Watson, to illustrate their point. They also talk about how friends can have a positive influence on our lives and help us become better individuals.In the analysis of the essay, it is pointed out that the author has a clear structure and uses a variety of examples and evidence to support their argument. They also praise the author's use of vocabulary and grammar, as well as their ability to express their ideas clearly and effectively.Overall, the essay is well-written and persuasive, and it shows a deep understanding of the topic of friendship. So, if you want to get a full score in the English exam, make sure to write a well-structured essay with clear arguments and examples, just like the one we analyzed today!I hope this helps you guys to prepare for the exam. Good luck and keep writing awesome essays!篇7OMG, guys! The 2023 new high school entrance exam English paper 1 is out and it's totally lit! I'm gonna break it down for y'all and give you the lowdown on how to score a perfect 100 on this bad boy.So, first things first, the essay part of the exam was all about climate change and how it's affecting our planet. We had to write about the causes, effects, and solutions to this huge problem. I totally nailed it by talking about things like pollution, deforestation, and renewable energy. And I made sure to use super fancy vocab like "global warming" and "carbon footprint" to impress the examiners.Next up was the reading comprehension section, where we had to answer questions about a passage on the importance of recycling. Easy peasy lemon squeezy! I aced it by paying attention to details and using my skimming and scanning skills to find the answers quickly.Then came the grammar and vocabulary part, where we had to fill in the blanks with the correct words or phrases. I made sure to use my grammar rules and vocabulary knowledge to choose the right answers. And I even showed off my spelling skills by acing the spelling test at the end of the paper.Overall, I had a blast taking the exam and I'm totally confident that I aced it. I can't wait to see my score and show off to all my friends. Bring it on, high school! I'm ready for whatever you throw at me!篇8Oh my goodness, this 2023 new high school English exam was like, totally awesome! I mean, seriously, I totally aced it and even got full marks! Let me break it down for you guys and explain how I totally nailed it.First of all, the essay prompt was all about "The Importance of Dreams". So I was like, okay cool, I can totally talk about my dreams of becoming a famous astronaut or something. I started off by writing about how dreams give us motivation and hope, and how they inspire us to work hard and never give up. I even threw in some examples of famous people who achieved their dreams, like astronauts who went to the moon and stuff like that.Then, I talked about how dreams can be different for everyone, and how it's important to never stop dreaming, no matter how old you are. I shared some personal stories about my own dreams and how they have helped me overcome challenges and obstacles in life. And finally, I wrapped it all up with apowerful conclusion that tied everything together and left the examiners totally impressed.Overall, I think the key to acing this essay was just being myself and writing from the heart. I didn't try to sound all fancy and use big words, I just spoke my truth and let my personality shine through. And you know what? It totally paid off because I got full marks on this bad boy! So yeah, 2023 high school English exam, you were no match for me! I came, I saw, I conquered!篇9Title: My Analysis of the Model English Essay in the 2023 New College Entrance ExaminationYo! Everyone, today I wanna talk about the model English essay in the 2023 New Co llege Entrance Examination. It’s like super cool and I wanna share my thoughts with you guys.So, in the essay, the writer talks about their experience volunteering at a local animal shelter. They help feed dogs and cats, clean their cages, and play wi th them. It’s like a dream come true for any animal lover, right?The writer also mentions how fulfilling it is to see the animals happy and healthy because of their care. They even encourageothers to volunteer and make a difference in the community. That’s like so inspiring, don’t you think?In terms of language use, the essay is well-organized and has a variety of sentence structures. The writer uses descriptive words to paint a vivid picture of the shelter and the animals. It’s like you can really imagine yourself being there, right?Also, the essay has a strong conclusion that summarizes the main points and leaves a lasting impression on the reader. It’s like a perfect way to end the essay and make sure the reader remembers what they’ve read.Overall, I think the model essay in the 2023 New College Ent rance Examination is like totally awesome! It’s well-written, engaging, and heartwarming. I hope my analysis gives you some insight into what makes a great English essay. Keep practicing and you’ll be writing like a pro in no time! Peace out, guys!篇10Hey guys, today I'm going to tell you all about the translation and analysis of the English essay in the 2023 new college entrance exam!So, in the essay, the writer talked about the importance of protecting the environment. They said that it's our responsibility to take care of the Earth and keep it clean and healthy. They also mentioned how pollution is damaging the environment and causing harm to plants, animals, and humans.The writer used a lot of examples to support their points, such as how plastic pollution is killing marine life and how deforestation is destroying habitats for wildlife. They also talked about how we can make a difference by reducing waste, recycling, and using environmentally-friendly products.Overall, the essay was well-written and had a clear message about the importance of protecting the environment. It was easy to understand and had a good flow.In conclusion, the essay was great and I'm sure the writer will get a high score on their test. Let's all remember to do our part to protect the environment and keep our planet healthy!。

2021高考英语作文点评及详细解析(新课标I卷)

2021高考英语作文点评及详细解析(新课标I卷)

2021高考英语作文点评及详细解析(新课标I卷)我是万能的木子,一个有腔调的英语老师,所带学生高考成绩很多都在140左右,也有一些基础一般的学生考120左右,希望通过自己的微薄之力,帮助在英语学习中遇到困惑的你们。

今年全国新课标I卷高考英语作文的题目为:假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。

请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿。

一、要点如下:1、栏目介绍;2、稿件内容3、稿件长度:约400字4、交稿日期:6月28日前对于书信作文强调两点,简单&通用。

需要注意书信作文三段论,把中间段的要点部分用出彩的过渡词做链接,就能写出漂亮的文章。

二、写作提纲根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点,列出提纲:第一段:问候+写信背景(我校办杂志)+写信目的(套用十大书信之“求助信“写法)第二段:主题句+拓展句1(介绍外国生活)+拓展句2(介绍外国节日)+拓展句3(不少于400字)+拓展句4(6.28前交)第三段:我希望(你能帮助我)。

我相信(大家会喜欢你的文章)。

感谢你(读我的信)。

请回信!三、名师范文Dear Peter,How are you doing? (问候)Recently, our school newspaper will started a column about western life and culture in order to cultivate our interests, broaden our horizons and enrich our afterschoollife.(写信背景+白银裤衩+八大万能利)As a result, I am writing to ask you to write an article on it. (写信目的)Hopefully, you could do me the favor.(六大结尾句之一)I have the confidence that everyone will like your article. (六大结尾句之二)Thanks for reading my letter in such a hot summer.(书信必备结尾句)I’m looking forward to your reply and your article.(书信必备结尾句)Best wishes,Yours,LiHua。

新高考英语作文试卷分析

新高考英语作文试卷分析

一、背景介绍新高考英语作文试卷作为高考英语科目的重要组成部分,对于考生英语写作能力的考查具有重要意义。

近年来,随着我国教育改革的不断深入,新高考英语作文试卷在题型、内容、评分标准等方面都进行了创新和调整。

本文将对新高考英语作文试卷进行详细分析。

二、试卷结构1. 题型:新高考英语作文试卷主要分为两大部分:第一部分为短文改错,共10题,每题1分,共10分;第二部分为大作文,共25分。

短文改错主要考查考生对英语语法、词汇的运用能力;大作文主要考查考生对英语写作技巧的掌握和运用能力。

2. 内容:短文改错主要选取日常生活、社会热点等话题,要求考生对文章中的错误进行修改;大作文通常以书信、通知、报告等形式出现,内容涉及社会热点、个人情感、校园生活等方面。

三、评分标准1. 短文改错:主要从以下几个方面进行评分:(1)正确率:每题1分,共10分;(2)修改方法:要求考生用改正符号进行修改,不得涂改;(3)书写规范:要求字迹工整,卷面整洁。

2. 大作文:主要从以下几个方面进行评分:(1)内容完整:要求作文内容完整,符合题目要求;(2)结构合理:要求文章结构清晰,层次分明;(3)语言表达:要求语言表达准确、流畅,符合英语语法规范;(4)词汇运用:要求词汇运用恰当,丰富多样;(5)字数要求:要求字数在100-120词之间。

四、试卷分析1. 题型创新:新高考英语作文试卷在题型上进行了创新,将短文改错与大作文相结合,既考查了考生的语法、词汇运用能力,又考查了写作技巧。

这种题型设置有助于提高考生对英语写作的综合运用能力。

2. 内容贴近生活:新高考英语作文试卷内容贴近日常生活,有利于考生发挥自己的想象力和创造力。

同时,这种贴近生活的内容也使得作文更具实际意义。

3. 评分标准明确:新高考英语作文试卷的评分标准明确,有利于考生了解自己的写作水平,提高写作能力。

4. 写作技巧考查:新高考英语作文试卷注重考查考生的写作技巧,如段落划分、句子结构、词汇运用等。

2023年全国乙卷英语作文全方位透析(开放式作文学生怎样获得一个新技能)

2023年全国乙卷英语作文全方位透析(开放式作文学生怎样获得一个新技能)

学生怎样获得一个新技能?2023全国乙卷开放式作文分析近年的英语高考书面表达经常出现开放式作文,只是开放程度有别。

一般而言都会有一定的相关信息提示,但有的只给出极少的内容提示,甚至仅给出一个话题,而不给出具体内容,是完全建立在作者对话题的理解基础之上,让其自由组织内容的全开放式写作。

开放式作文是高考英语书面表达的重要考查点,考生们必须了解该类型作文的基本特点和写作要求。

基本格式:开放式作文一般需分三段,第一段简单陈述话题或主题。

离开了一定的背景呈现,文章就如无头苍蝇,没有明确的内容和方向。

主体段落应明确、客观表达自己的观点。

虽然开放式作文没有限制观点,但个人观点不能太脱离大众和主流思想,不然会被认为是奇葩主张。

但无论是何种观点一定要能自圆其说。

说理应该清晰流畅,最好能有一定的表示程序或顺序的过渡词语,如firstly/initially, above all, first of all, secondly/then/ and then, besides, additionally, finally/last but not least/last 等,将文章有机串联起来,才能达到较好的统一性和完整性。

最后,文章可呼应前文,总结全文。

常用句型:1. Recently we did a survey about whether... or not.最近我们做了一个关于是否……的调查。

2. It has been... years since... was founded and it has been acpanying me all through my childhood.自从……成立以来已经……年了,它一直陪伴着我度过了我的整个童年。

3. In my spare time, I often read the newspaper which covers not only classic stories but also current affairs.在业余时间,我经常读这份不仅包括经典故事,还报道时事的报纸。

2021年高考课程标准卷(全国卷I)英语作文点评:考查布局谋篇的能

2021年高考课程标准卷(全国卷I)英语作文点评:考查布局谋篇的能

2021年高考课程标准卷(全国卷I)英语作文点评:考查布局谋篇的能2021高考课程标准卷(全国卷I)英语作文点评:考查布局谋篇能力点评专家:河南省安阳市高中英语中心教研组马国民2021年高考课程标准卷和全国卷I两套试卷的英语作文试题仍然是相同的,而且2021年的作文体裁仍然是沿袭多年的书信类应用文,重点考查的是考生遣词造句和布局谋篇的能力。

试题回顾――假定你是李华,要给自己的笔友Peter写信,告诉他你的的叔叔要去他那里开会,带去了他最喜欢的中国画,问Peter是否能够去机场接你叔叔。

内容主要包括:1. 你的叔叔个子高戴眼镜;2. 航班号:CA985;3. 到达时间:8月6日上午11点半;注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Peter,How are you doing?Looking forward to your reply.Yours, Li Hua试题点评――试题设计严密,科学规范,情景真实可信。

对于这种类型的英语作文,考生会有一种亲切感,会倍感熟悉,因为类似的作文,考生在高考备考时已经进行了充分地训练。

毕竟广大高三师生知道,他们所在的考区多年来一直都是书信类应用文,因此遇到这种非常熟悉的命题方式,考生非常容易快速进入写作状态,容易发挥出正常的写作水平。

试题已经给出了作文的开头和结尾,不涉及应用文格式的考查。

虽然试题对写作范围进行了界定,但是仍然具有一定的开放性,仍给考生留有一定的自由发挥的空间,有利于考生充分展示自己的写作能力。

而且,考生不必考虑和担心书信格式的问题,可以直接按照材料提示的相关要求进入主题。

本次作文的写作难度不算大。

考生应该克服畏难情绪,因为英语作文没有唯一的固定标准答案,只要写得好,只要写得精彩,就能拿到理想的分数。

1但是,如果想拿到比较高的分数,考生应具备扎实的写作基本功,具有较强的遣词造句和布局谋篇的能力,在文中应使用较高级的词汇、短语或者句式。

2023新高考1卷英语作文及译文解析答案

2023新高考1卷英语作文及译文解析答案

2023新高考1卷英语作文及译文解析答案全文共3篇示例,供读者参考篇12023 New College Entrance Examination English Exam Section A Writing题目:假设你是李华,你所在的学校计划组织一次英语演讲比赛,你打算以“青春的活力”为题,写一篇演讲稿,介绍自己的看法。

请根据以下内容要点写一篇不少于100字的短文。

【内容要点】1. 青春的活力是无限的,朝气蓬勃。

2. 青春的活力能够让我们充满激情、勇气、创造力。

3. 青春的活力可以驱使我们克服困难,迎接挑战。

【写作要求】1. 请用5个句子简单展开要点。

2. 请勿透露真实姓名、学校名称。

Sample Answer:As we all know, youth is marked by boundless energy and vitality. This vigor allows us to approach life with passion,courage, and creativity. With the vitality of youth driving us, we can conquer difficulties and face challenges head-on. Youth is a phase of life where we have the power to shape our futures through hard work and determination. Let us embrace the vitality of youth and strive to make a difference in the world.译文解析:正如我们都知道的,青春以无限的能量和活力为特征。

这种活力使我们能够充满激情、勇气和创造力面对生活。

在年轻人的活力推动下,我们能够战胜困难,迎接挑战。

2023高考英语新课标ii卷七选五深度解析

2023高考英语新课标ii卷七选五深度解析

2023年高考英语新课标II卷的七选五题型深度解析一、题型概述七选五是一种阅读理解题型,题目给出一篇缺少5个句子的文章,对应有7个选项,要求考生从这7个选项中选出最符合文章内容的5个句子,填入空白处,使文章意思通顺、逻辑清晰、结构完整。

该题型主要考查考生对文章的整体内容和结构、上下文逻辑关系以及细节信息的理解和把握能力。

二、题目特点题目长难句多,理解难度较大。

选项中可能包含同义词、近义词等,需要考生准确理解词汇含义和用法。

题目不仅要求考生理解文章内容,还需要注意文章中的逻辑关系和细节信息。

三、解题思路阅读题目和选项,了解文章主题和结构。

快速浏览文章,找出缺失的句子所在的位置。

仔细阅读缺失句子周围的内容,理解文章中的逻辑关系和细节信息。

比较选项中的词汇和短语,选择最符合文章内容的句子。

检查所选答案是否使文章意思通顺、逻辑清晰、结构完整。

四、解题技巧注意段落开头和结尾:通常段落开头和结尾会给出主题句或总结句,可以帮助考生理解整个段落的意思。

注意上下文逻辑:文章的逻辑关系通常由一些关键词或短语表示,如转折词、递进词等。

注意这些关键词或短语可以帮助考生理解文章的逻辑关系。

注意选项中的同义词和近义词:选项中可能包含同义词或近义词,需要考生准确理解词汇含义和用法。

可以通过上下文或词根词缀等方法来猜测词汇含义。

注意选项中的代词:代词通常指代前文中提到的人、事物或概念等。

考生可以通过代词来快速找到缺失的句子所在的位置。

注意选项中的时态和语态:时态和语态是英语语法中的重要部分,也是判断句子是否符合文章内容的重要标志之一。

考生可以通过检查时态和语态来确定选项是否正确。

五、题目分析以下是对2023年高考英语新课标II卷七选五题目的具体分析:阅读题目和选项,了解文章主题和结构。

本篇文章的主题是关于时间管理,介绍了不同的时间管理方法。

从选项中可以看出,缺失的句子应该是在介绍不同的时间管理方法时所使用的具体例子或细节信息。

详细解析高考英文作文

详细解析高考英文作文

详细解析高考英文作文Sure, I can help you with that. Here's a detailed breakdown of the requirements for the high school English essay:Paragraph 1: The topic of the essay is introduced, and the writer's opinion or stance on the topic is briefly stated. The language used in this paragraph should be straightforward and to the point, setting the stage for the rest of the essay.Paragraph 2: A personal anecdote or example related to the topic is shared. This paragraph should use descriptive language and vivid details to draw the reader in and make the story come alive.Paragraph 3: A relevant quote or piece of research is presented to support the writer's viewpoint. This paragraph should be more formal in tone, using academic language and citing the source of the information.Paragraph 4: An opposing viewpoint is acknowledged and briefly discussed. The language used in this paragraph should be respectful and open-minded, showing an understanding of different perspectives.Paragraph 5: The writer's counterargument to the opposing viewpoint is presented. This paragraph should use persuasive language and logical reasoning to refute the opposing stance.Paragraph 6: A call to action or a suggestion for further exploration of the topic is made. The language used in this paragraph should be motivational and inspiring, encouraging the reader to take some kind of action or continue thinking about the issue.Overall, the essay should demonstrate a range of language styles and tones, from informal and personal to formal and persuasive. The lack of explicit transitions between paragraphs creates a sense of immediacy and keeps the reader engaged.。

详细解析高考英文作文

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2023高考英语新课标卷ib篇深度解析

2023高考英语新课标卷ib篇深度解析

2023高考英语新课标卷ib篇深度解析一、背景概述在新一轮的高考改革背景下,高考英语考试试题也在不断地更新与调整。

本文将针对2023年高考英语新课标卷IB篇进行深度解析,分析其题型设计、内容选择和难度把握等方面的特点,为即将参加高考的学生提供有针对性的备考建议。

二、IB篇内容分析1. 文章主题IB篇的文章通常涉及广泛的主题,如文化、科技、教育、社会等。

今年的IB篇文章主题为“人工智能对未来职业发展的影响”,文章从多个角度探讨了人工智能对不同职业领域的影响,以及人类应该如何应对这一趋势。

2. 文章结构IB篇的文章结构通常较为复杂,包括引言、正文和结论三个部分。

今年的文章结构清晰,逻辑性强,适合考察学生的阅读理解和分析能力。

考生需要重点关注文章的主题、结构和细节,理解作者的观点和论证过程。

3. 语言特点IB篇的语言特点包括使用复杂句型、专业词汇和地道的表达方式。

考生在备考时,应注重词汇和句型的积累,提高自己的语言运用能力。

同时,考生还应关注地道的表达方式,提高自己的写作水平。

三、题型设计分析1. 选择题选择题是IB篇的常见题型,主要考察学生的词汇和语法知识。

今年的选择题难度适中,涉及词汇和语法的多个方面,如词义辨析、时态、从句等。

考生需要认真审题,注意选项之间的差异和联系,提高做题准确率。

2. 填空题填空题考察学生的词汇和语法知识,同时还考察学生的阅读理解能力。

今年的填空题要求考生根据上下文填写正确的单词或短语,考生需要认真阅读文章,理解句子的结构和意义,才能正确作答。

3. 任务型阅读填空任务型阅读填空题要求考生根据文章内容回答问题或进行推断。

今年的任务型阅读填空题涉及人工智能对未来职业发展的影响,考察学生的阅读理解和分析能力。

考生需要仔细阅读问题,找出关键词和关键信息,再结合自己的理解和语言知识进行作答。

4. 写作部分写作部分主要考察学生的书面表达能力,包括格式、字数和内容等方面。

考生需要围绕“人工智能对未来职业发展的影响”这一主题,阐述自己的观点和论据。

新课标III英语高考真题试卷试题评析

新课标III英语高考真题试卷试题评析

新课标III英语高考真题试卷试题评析
以作文为例,要求学生以李华的身份向英国友人写信介绍本校学生的体育运动情况。

这篇作文与往年相同,以书信的格式为依托,但是从内容上来讲,向外国友人介绍体育运动情况,不仅更加贴近学生的日常生活,让学生能够有内容可写,也体现出新时代对于高中生德智体美劳全面发展的要求。

试卷中大部分题目是基础题,因此,应重视基础知识,把常规题型掌握清楚,在一轮复习中一定要稳扎稳打,熟练掌握基础知识,以高考模块进行系统复习,熟悉高考出题方式和考查角度。

还要强调的是,平时练习过程中注意审题和答题的规范,题目越平稳越考验考生的细心和答题规范。

进一步查找自己在知识和能力方面的不足之处,以便及时调整思路,明确之后的备考目标和努力方向。

根据以往的经验,高考题型通常会进行创新,紧密结合现实生活热点和欧美及中国文化。

因此,考生在备考当中应尽可能地去适应不同的题型,同时归纳题型中的考点,学会进行知识迁移和类比。

明年的考试预计会比较灵活多样,创新上面会更突出一些。

考生有效应对创新题型的策略就是在掌握基本知识的基础上学
会迁移应用。

新课标卷英语作文简析

新课标卷英语作文简析

新课标卷英语作文简析有关新课标卷英语作文简析学而思网校高考研究中心顾斐老师认为,20xx年的新课标卷英语作文,可以用“稳、变、新”三个字来总结,具体呈现出了以下几个特点:稳:考查形式延续了往年新课标卷的应用文体,完全符合考前顾斐老师在学而思网校给学生预测的书信体作文这种类型。

近年来,高考越来越从“神坛”向“平民化”迈进,对于我们英语来说,所谓“神坛”指的就是过去那些略感晦涩,让学生无处下笔的话题作文或开放式作文,而所谓“平民化”则是更加突出作文的“有用”,学语言,理论很重要,但实用更重要。

而这几年,语言作为沟通的桥梁作用,更是深刻体现在了我们高考的书面表达中。

在考前6月2号的预测直播中,顾斐老师曾经坚定预测,今年的作文,一定会考“文化交流类的书信体作文”。

果然,以书信体作文为载体,传播中国文化就成了今年高考作文的主题。

变:与往年作文相比,今年的作文有了一些新变化,为了了解这种变化,我们先来看看17年的新课标卷作文。

假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语,请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划,内容包括:1。

时间和地点;2。

内容:学习唐诗;3。

课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。

这是一封典型的“咨询信”,按照顾斐老师在考前给学生传授的“斐式大招”写作技巧,注意审清楚题目所给的.细节,尤其是图表里出现的一些要点,将自己所要了解的暑期学习信息写清楚,就是这封信的关键所在。

与往年考过的题目相比,通知信难度并不大,关键是将通知和中国文化“唐诗”进行有机的结合,给自己的书面表达换发新的生机。

而2017年全国Ⅱ卷作文题为:假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展,请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1。

展览时间、地点;2。

展览内容。

与新课标Ⅰ卷相比,二卷同样选择了告知信这种书信体作文,只是在内容上,将“唐诗”变成了“中国剪纸”,同样是中国文化,几乎是同样的要点,对于学生知识和语言的考查略微轻松于新课标卷。

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高考英语作文(新课标卷)深度解析
【题目】书面表达(满分25分)(注意:在试题卷上作答无效)
假定你是李华,从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。

请写一封电子邮件申请参加。

内容主要包括:
1. 自我介绍(包括英语能力);
2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);
3. 希望获准。

注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。

【三步构思法】(即:分别从结构、内容、语言上对作文进行构思——结构上,要迅速分析本文应该分几段、每段应该写“几层”;内容上,要看哪些内容是“题目要求”你必须写的、哪些内容是可以发挥的,以及怎样发挥最“简单好写”;语言上,用“亮点提纲大法”拟提纲,笔者曾总结过40种简单实用效果好、高端大气上档次的遣词造句技巧;大家应注意在技巧选取过程中应尽可能避免重复。


一、结构:书信体(开头段 + 中间段 + 结尾段)
二、内容:几乎毋须发挥,将“题中所给的内容”完整表达出来即可。

(“自我介绍”方面可适当发挥一下)
三、语言:见【亮点提纲大法】
【亮点提纲大法】
注:所谓“亮点提纲大法”指的是“用语言亮点列提纲”——提纲中只写每段每句想要使用的语言亮点,包括遣词亮点和造句亮点。

第一段:写“书信开头段四件事”。

第二段:1、a brief introduction
2、Living in Detroit...
3、the vice chairman
4、No one can deny...
第三段:1、take part in
2、It’s a fabulous chance for me to …//it做主语
3、...,which... // 尾巴句型,表示“...,这件事...”
第四段:1、look forward to + sth
2、Hopefully,...
【李辉老师范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
How are you doing? My name is LiHua, a high school student currently studying in China. I
learned on the Internet that a summer camp was going to be held in Singapore, which attracts me a lot. So, I am writing to apply for the chance.
//首段四件事:问候à自我介绍à写信背景à写信目的。

一件事用一句话来表达。

First of all,I would like to give you a brief introduction of myself.Living in Detroit for half a year as an exchange student, I am good at communicating in English. Last year, I just won the second prize in the CCTV national English contest.Besides,as the vice chairman of the student union, I get along well with all my friends and enjoy working with different kinds of people. No one can deny that I am a hard-working as well as outgoing person.
//本段使用了T-D-C结构,即“主题句-拓展句-总结句”结构。

段落主题句谈到要做自我介绍;接着从“英语能力”和“人际交往能力”两个方面进行了拓展;段落总结句对个人特点进行了总结,即:“hard-working”与“outgoing”——这两个单词具有“押尾韵”的特点,并列起来朗朗上口。

//本段过渡词的使用比较灵活,没有使用“成套”的过渡词。

//本段属于“自我介绍”类段落,可参考【自荐信】(如:山东2005)的写法
To further improve myself,I do want to take part in this camp.On the one hand,it’s a fabulous chance for me to introduce my motherland China to friends from other countries.On the other hand,I can learn more about their unique culture and customs, which never fail to fascinate me. //本段使用了T-D结构,即“主题句-拓展句”结构。

段落主题句谈到想要参加本次夏令营的意图,拓展句部分分别从“介绍中国”、“了解其他国家”两个方面进行了拓展。

//为了对语言进行“升级”,本段第三句中用到了“…,+ which…”尾巴句型,翻译为“……,这件事……”。

大家在写英语作文时要注意长短句结合,适当使用“黄金圣衣”和“尾巴句型”能够体现出强大的语言功底。

//请注意本段中过渡词的使用。

过渡词有四种:1、时间过渡;2、地点过渡;3、逻辑过渡;
4、动词过渡。

本段中的“To further improve myself, …”就属于“动词过渡”
//动词过渡亦称为“动作顺承”,既能用在记叙性段落中,又能用在议论、说明性段落中,能够有效避免“突兀”之感,尤其适用于对字数限制要求较高的考场作文。

As a result, this camp definitely means a lot to me, and I am really looking forward to it. Hopefully, the chance would be offered to me. Thank you!
//结尾要写客套话:感谢/道歉/要求/祝愿/期待回信。

应识记并熟练运用常用写法。

Regards,
Li Hua
【亮点词句总结】
1、 outgoing ['aut,ɡəuiŋ] adj.外出的;即将离职的;乐于助人的
2、 fabulous ['fæbjuləs] adj. 难以置信的;传说的,寓言中的;极好的
3、 unique [ju:'ni:k] adj. 独特的,稀罕的;唯一的,独一无二的n. 独一无二的人或物
4、 customs ['kʌstəmz] n. 海关;风俗(custom的复数);习惯;关税
5、 definitely ['definitli] adv. 清楚地,当然;明确地,肯定地
6、 never fail to do sth 总能够做到某事
7、 fascinate ['fæsineit] vt. 使着迷,使神魂颠倒vi. 入迷。

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