7.1托福写作话题解析及高分范文

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toefl托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析为了让大家更好的预备托福考试,我给大家整理了托福考试满分范文,下面我就和大家共享,来观赏一下吧。

托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析:衡量工作价值的方式托福写作难点话题一览Is money the most important aspect of a job?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路绽开结构分析这道题目问的是大家对于职业选择的看法。

由于题目中使用了most important这样的肯定词,所以一般来说都是选择反对这个观点会比较简单绽开论述。

实际上除了看工资以外,关于一项工作的价值还可以从其职业进展,对个人力量提升的关心等方面来绽开,这些都是大家比较简单想到也相对好绽开的论点。

本话题高分范文赏析I understand that nowadays it is very important for people to earn a lot of money. As a matter of fact, many people equate money with success: the more money you earn, the more successful you are. However, the financial aspect is not the most important aspect of a job.The work environment and camaraderie with ones coworkers, the personal fulfillment from ones occupation, and the opportunity to balance professional and personal lives are much more important. People who spend forty hours a week or more at their place of employment should enjoy their work environment, especially the company of their co-workers. After all, the prospect of having to spend any amount of time in a room or a building with people who one does not respect, who are unpleasant, or, even worse, hostile, will have a very negative effect on ones disposition and mental health. A few more dollars in the bank account cannot compensate for this. Similarly, one should derive a special fulfillment or pleasure from doing ones job. Normally, a person will spend at least a third of his/her adult life at work (eight hours or more every day). One should not waste this time by doing work that is boring or tedious even if it is well paid. The money earned will only enrich the life away from work but not enhance the work experience. Finally, the personal life can only be enjoyed adequately if there is enough time away from the professional life. Affluence affords many nice things, such as houses or cars or television sets, but a person who has to work night and day will not be able to derive any pleasure from them. Also, a father or a mother who makes a lot of money might be able to provide his or her family with a comfortable life, but how much good does that do if he or she never sees them? Time spent withfamily, especially children, is invaluable, and thus a job with long hours might cost a person more than it affords.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析:加入团队做leader还是member?Is it better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.论做leader的好处:主动,可以使用多的资源,获得更多;缺点:风险大,要担当更多责任。

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:peopledothingsthattheydonote

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:peopledothingsthattheydonote

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:peopledothingsthattheydonotenjoy托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:peopledothingsthattheydonotenjoy大家需要在备考中多接触各类作文话题了解写法思路,积累些高分范文阅历提前做好预备。

今日我给大家带来了托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文,盼望能够给关心到大家,下面我就和大家共享,来观赏一下吧。

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:people do things that they do not enjoy托福写作难点话题一览Should people sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路绽开结构分析大家要留意审题,不是始终做自己不喜爱的事,这个statement 里面的限定词是sometimes。

所以这个话题其实两个观点并不是很对立。

个人建议可以选择同意这个观点会比较好绽开。

比较经典的理由是Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future。

另外大家也可以从胜利学的角度去写,比如Most successful people have one thing in common: they are capable of doing things that they virtually do not enjoy doing.本话题高分范文赏析We live in a world in which every one wants to be successful. Nothing is wrong about the desire to be No. 1, and there is no doubt that being successful is enjoyable. Nevertheless, it is somewhat childish to think we can be finally successful by only doing what we enjoy doing. People often are amazed by the glorious appearance of a skyscraper, however they at the same time forget the fact that the skyscraper had taken a long time to construct, maybe much longer time to design, and possibly even cost peoples lives during the constructing process! We may categorize things into two groups, the enjoyable and the unenjoyable; at the same time, another category can be made: the necessary and the unnecessary. The point is, things that are necessary are not always enjoyable and things that are enjoyable sometimes may be unnecessary. Doing things that are necessary rather than those that are merely enjoyable is not only helpful, but might also be indispensable for individual success. We all admire even envy those who now have attained great achievements, such those famous stars as Jacky Chen, Jet Li. We should, however, be aware of the exorbitant prices they have paid for their present glories. Jacky Chen once told that when he was still a teenager, he and his partners were required to practice more than 12 hours a day; and it was said that Jet Li was sent to be an apprentice when he was hardly four years old! Apparently, those seemingly cruel hardships have turned out to be the best gifts years later. But for yesterdays struggle, todays glories could not exist. Things that are both enjoyable and necessary or both unenjoyable and unnecessary virtually seldom exist. We may dislike some curriculums in university, such as mathematics or history, but they are necessary; we may prefer leisure times to work days, but the latter are indispensable. Pursuing a successful life is nothing more than making wise decisions, and by wise we mean the choice of doing the necessary first.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:transportation vehicle changes peoples lives托福写作难点话题一览A transportation vehicle that has changed peoples livesChoose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed peoples lives.Automobiles?Bicycles?Airplanes?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路绽开结构分析没有明显倾向性的题目,选择3个都应当可以拓展出不少可以细说的点。

TOEFL写作高分满分范文点评和思路

TOEFL写作高分满分范文点评和思路

TOEFL写作高分满分范文点评和思路为了让大家更好的预备托福考试,我给大家整理了托福考试满分范文,下面我就和大家共享,来观赏一下吧。

托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析:有助儿童成长的礼物托福写作难点话题一览What gift would you give to help a child develop?A gift (such as a camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a childs development. What gift would you give to help a child develop? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.写作思路绽开结构分析关心孩子成长进展应当送什么礼物?这个问题其实问的比较大的,由于在不同人眼里怎样才是好的进展原来就有很大差异,假如大家没思路又或是想法太多不知道挑哪个,我的建议是干脆实行比较保险的it depends策略,比如不同年龄的孩子可能需要不同的礼物等等。

本话题高分范文赏析Childs development is often supplemented by the gifts they receive from important adults in their life. It is important to choose these gifts carefully, and foster growth in the right areas. If I were to give a gift to a child, it would be the game of chess. Chess offers a number of advantages to a child. Chess builds social skills, it encourages the child to develop the higher functions of the brain, and it is a good hobby. As withmost games, chess encourages a child to be social with others. As chess is a two-person game, any time children play the game they will be interacting with others. As chess is a competitive game with a winner and a loser, children will have to learn how to lose gracefully if they hope to keep their chess partners. Building social skills when one is young is very important for future successes throughout ones life. Playing chess is also an excellent way to increase ones thinking abilities. Chess is a game of strategy. When playing chess, a child will build important skills such as pattern recognition, strategic thinking, and analytical thinking. All of these skills are very important, especially when going through school. Many subjects a young person must take in school utilize all of these skills, and working on them early in life can be nothing but beneficial. Finally, chess is an excellent hobby for a young person.2021-08-21 20:29:11Playing chess, or any other time-intensive game, keeps children out of trouble. If they are spending their time working on building their chess strategies, they are not out on the streets causing trouble. Many children develop behavioral problems because of simple boredom. Chess is an excellent remedy for this, as it is fun to spend ones free time. Thus, I think chess is an excellent present to give to a young child. Chess encourages both personality and mental development, which are very important in a childs early years. While many gifts will encourage thematurity of one of these types of development, there are few gifts that foster the development of both.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析:同学需要上体育课吗托福写作难点话题一览Should we spend all school day studying or set aside some time for exercising?Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. Other people believe that students should spend the whole school day on academic studies. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.写作思路绽开结构分析同意前者更简单写一些。

托福写作话题满分范文(优选5篇)_2

托福写作话题满分范文(优选5篇)_2

托福写作话题满分范文(优选5篇)Business should hire employees for their entire lives. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.In some business cultures, it is the practice to hire workers when they are young and employ them until they retire. In other business cultures companies hire people to do a job and then fire them when they are not needed. To me, the important considerations in today’s economy is job performance: speed and change. Loyalty is not a consideration.Today there is a lot of competition and we need to hire workers who can perform a task well. We need to find skilled workers who can do a job without a lot of training. We need to match the job to the worker, and, if the job changes, we change the worker.Because of this increased competition, we need to be able to produce our goods or services quickly. We need young people who are willing to put in long hours. We need young people who are aggressive and will push themselves to do their job faster.In order to compete, we have to be innovative. By changing our workforce frequently, we can bring in new ideas. We must constantly be looking for new ways to do new things. We need fresh workers with fresh points of view.Although a company’s loyalty to a worker and a workers loyalty to acompany is a noble idea, it is not practical today. Skilled workers do not want to be tied down to one company; they want the flexibility to improve their opportunities. Change makes the economy powerful.托福写作话题满分范文第4篇There are many people want to go to university or college every year and they decide to do so formany different reasons. I believe there are three common reasons are to prepare for career,increase their knowledge and get new experience.Prepare for career is very important for young people nowadays. In a competitive society, if theyhave not a good educational background, they will not get a good opportunity in their career oreven cannot find a job, so college and university can provide them new skills to meet therequirements of career.Also, students attend to university or college can increase their knowledge in subjects theyinterested, for many people, this is maybe the primary reason to go to college. There are manyexcellent professors and experts can give us a plenty of knowledge which including many areas.For many people this maybe their last chance for a long time to get knowledge that don't relate totheir career.Besides looking for knowledge, some people want to go to college or university because theydecide to live a new life. University can support young people an environment where they canintercommunicate about many topics such as literature, goal of life, art and emotions whicharehard to talked about after their university lives, so it is a special experience for young people tolive and study in college or university.All in a word, I prefer increase knowledge and get a special experience to prepare for career inuniversity because getting good opportunities in career is partly depend on your knowledge andexperiences on diverse areas.托福写作话题满分范文第5篇Now days, more and more people are trying to attend college or university. Different people do sofor different reasons. Some typical reasons are new experiences, career preparation and increasedknowledge. In my opinion, it is the fast developement, almost explosion, of our world that makepeople to consider attending college or university.People would usually get bored when they focus on one field for a long time. For this reason, theygo to college to pursue experiences in new areas. We often hear that an electrical engineer wentto a university to study art or music. With the new experiences, they expand their ken. Maybesome good ideas would jump out during their daily work.As for the young, they attend college for career preparation. Not only could they get knowledgeneeded for their future work, they could learn how to think and how to solve questions. Theprojects students attended are very like their future work.Some people, who have been graduated from universities for years, are also planning to go back toschool. Most of them reattend universities to increase their knowledge. Techlogy is developing sofast that people could not keep up with them unless they keep increasing their knowledge.All in all, people, who attend college or university, are preparing for their better futures.。

2024托福写作范文赏析整合

2024托福写作范文赏析整合

2024托福写作范文赏析整合在2024年的托福考试中,写作部分还是会是同样的难点。

为了让各位考生更好地备考,我们整合了以下几篇经典的范文,供大家参考学习。

1. 题目:Do you agree or disagree with the statement that self-driving cars will become the primary means of transportation in the future?范文:With the rapid development of technology, self-driving cars have become a well-talked topic around the world. Some people believe that self-driving cars will become the primary means of transportation in the future because of the advantages they bring. However, other people hold a different view. From my perspective, although self-driving cars have many advantages, they are unlikely to become the primary means of transportation in the future.First and foremost, self-driving cars still have some problems that need to be solved. For example, they cannot cope with extreme weather conditions or complex roadsituations. It is hard to imagine a self-driving car maneuvering through a flooded road or a narrow alley with alot of pedestrians and cyclists. Additionally, self-driving cars cannot replace all the functions of traditional cars.For some situations, such as off-road trips or extreme sports, traditional cars with manual control will still be theprimary choice.Moreover, the cost of self-driving cars is still high. At present, only a few people can afford to own a self-driving car, and the price of it will remain high for a long time. Therefore, self-driving cars will not become the primary means of transportation for most people, especially in developing countries.Last but not least, there are still many people who enjoy driving their cars. Driving on your own gives you a sense of control and freedom, and it is a joy that cannot be replacedby a machine. Even if self-driving cars become more prevalent in the future, there will always be people who prefer driving their own cars.In conclusion, self-driving cars have many advantages,but they are unlikely to become the primary means oftransportation in the future. They still have some problems that need to be solved, such as their inability to cope with extreme weather or complex road situations, and their high cost. Moreover, there are still many people who enjoy driving their cars. Therefore, we should not overestimate the importance of self-driving cars.2. 题目:Do you agree or disagree with the statement that advertisements are manipulative and should be banned?范文:Advertisements are an indispensable part of our daily lives. However, there is a growing concern that advertisements are manipulative and should be banned. From my perspective, I partially agree with the statement that advertisements are manipulative. However, I do not think that they should be banned completely.Firstly, advertisements are manipulative by nature. Advertisers use different techniques to present their products in the most appealing way, and they often exaggerate the benefits of their products while minimizing their drawbacks. This is understandable, as the goal ofadvertisements is to attract consumers and boost sales. However, this can also lead to unrealistic expectations and disappointment when the product does not live up to the advertisement.On the other hand, advertisements can also be informative and educational. Advertisements can provide valuable information about new products, services, or events. They can also raise awareness of social issues or health problems. For example, some public service announcements can be very effective in promoting safe driving, healthy lifestyle or environmental protection.Moreover, advertisements can also provide entertainment. Many commercials use humor, music, or other creative elements to capture our attention and evoke our emotion. They can be an enjoyable part of our daily lives and can even become a cultural phenomenon.In conclusion, advertisements are manipulative by nature, but they are not necessarily bad. They can be informative, educational, and entertaining. We should not ban advertisements completely, but we should also be aware of their manipulative nature and use critical thinking when weencounter them. As consumers, we should choose products wisely based on our own needs and preferences, instead of being swayed by advertisements.。

托福写作高分满分范文

托福写作高分满分范文

为了让大家更好的准备托福考试,小编给大家整理了托福考试满分范文,下面小编就和大家分享,来欣赏一下吧。

托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析:好学生才能接受高等教育?Should higher education be available to all students or only to good students?Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why.写作思路展开结构分析两个观点都有些极端。

所以,大家应该先分析,再选择自己的立场。

义务教育制度(institution of compulsory education )说明社会已经认识到基础教育(fundamental education) 对所有的人都是必需的。

但是大学教育是不是所有人都需要的?这个社会很多职业(比如,饮食业)不需要大学教育。

让所有的人都上大学,是不是成为过分的财政负担(financial burden of the government)?用什么样的方法确定一个学生good enough so as to deserve higher education? 考试?考试制度也有缺陷。

可能选择的立场比如:我们国家目前是需要更多的人接受大学教育。

与此同时,一方面要保障大学教育的质量,另一方面,要改革考试制度,保障考生的公平机会。

本话题高分范文赏析Some people believe that only good students should have access to a university education. Others posit that higher education should be open to everyone, regardless of their academic abilities. I agree with the former opinion. Universities should only allow good students into their programs because these students value the importance of a good education and are interested in furthering their education. Furthermore, if all students were allowed into universities, the schools would quickly become saturated, and the quality of education received would diminish. A university education is very important to a good student. This type of student has set his/her sights on a university education from early on, and has put in the necessary work to earn a place in a good university. Poor students who did not try to achieve good grades in high school obviously do not care about their education, and therefore, do not deserve to go to university. However, if these poor students go back to school and improve their grades, they should also be allowed to go to university. Good students are very interested in furthering their education. They have put copious amounts of work into their education, and are interestedin learning more. Poor students are usually not as interested in furthering their education. If they were interested in this, they would have tried harder to begin with. With that said, let us suppose for a moment that universities did allow all students, regardless of their grades, into university. The school would quickly become overfull, and good students, who really care about their education, would suffer because of it. They might not be able to get into the classes they want, and if they do get in, there might be so many students in the class that it is impossible to learn. In conclusion, I think that it is important to save a university education for those who really want it—good students. If a poor student wishes to go to university, then he/she will have to return to high school and improve his/her grades.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析:儿童是否应该早上学?托福写作难点话题一览Should young children spend most of their time on school studies or playing?Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most of their time on school studies. Others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. Compare these two views. Which view do you agree with? Why?两种观点都有些极端。

2017月7月01日托福真题回顾.doc

2017月7月01日托福真题回顾.doc
第2段:由于盐度的变化,这里的生物需要维持自己体内液体的盐度和周围环境一致,有 两种维持方法,一是体内水分调节盐分的含量,叫Osmoconformers,一是维持体内盐分不变, 叫osmoregulators
第3段Jellyfish是一种osmooconformers,增加体内水分调节盐分的含量
第4段Osmoiregulators调节的方法更多,比如可以释放和吸收周围的盐分,比如crab,还有 的生物既是Osmoconformers,乂是osmoregulators
词汇题:
Specific= typical
Focus on = dependent on
Imminent = future
Refinement = improvement
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5.英国工业
6.家庭纺织业发展
7.动物的智பைடு நூலகம்测试
8.地球起源
9.欧洲的军队贸易
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词汇题:
1 .exploit二take the advantage of
2.Optimal=favorable
3.Excrete=release
4.Stationary=fixed
Passage Four
学科分类:Geology
题目:How to Predict Earthquake
10.松鼠
11.turtles晒太阳的时长和季节觅食产卵的关系
12.英国制造业发展
13.欧洲建筑风格的变迁
14.weather forecast
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话题分类:student and anthropology professor

【托福写作范文】托福独立写作高分范例-现代科技带来单一世界文化

【托福写作范文】托福独立写作高分范例-现代科技带来单一世界文化

【托福写作范文】托福独立写作高分范例-现代科技带来单一世界文化对于托福备考来说,想要提升自己的成绩充分的备考时间和方法是比不可少的。

而对于中国考生而言,在托福写作中,所缺少的并是词汇量和句型掌握,而更多的是逻辑思维的运用和展开。

那么,相信在以下一些满分范例的阅读中就会为大家带来不少的备考灵感。

托福IBT高分作文:Is modern technology creating a single world culture?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technology is creating a single world culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.托福IBT高分作文分析:立场:不同意。

确实技术的进步使得各个文化之间的差异减少了。

(可以举出很多例子)但是有一些文化差异是不会改变的。

(也可以举出很多例子)结论:技术将使文化间的差异变少,却不可能形成一个single world culture。

托福IBT高分作文范文:现代科技带来单一世界文化Through modern technology such as TV, telephone, and the Internet, it has become easier for people from different cultures to communicate. In a sense the world has become a smaller place. However, it is questionable if technology is creating a single world culture, because, even though a cultural exchange is taking place, accessibility of this technology is still very limited, and, more importantly, people have come to value the differences inherent in their cultures.People around the world are taking advantage of the opportunities, presentedby modern technology, to learn about other cultures. Not only foreign movies,music, and books communicate with the locals, but the different cultural values do, which are readily available on DVD, CD and via the Internet. Similarly, TV broadcasts fashions across the world and a new style of dress will likely catch on quickly in different parts of the globe. People adopt foreign things they like and make them their own. In this sense cultural assimilation is taking place.However, while some societies and their cultures are technologically advancedand thus connected with other parts of the world, the majority of the world’spopulation lives largely isolated. Such isolation is the result oflimited technological resources, which in turn is, generally, related topoverty. For example, nearly the entire continent of Africa is impoverished. Itspeople have few means to learn about other cultures, and even if they did they would have little use for Western culture, which to a great extent is a consumer culture. They are also extremely limited in the ways they can educate people from other parts of the world about their cultures.Finally, people who are learning about foreign cultures generally come to appreciate and accept the differences between other cultures and their own. They recognize the value of variety. The enjoyment they derive from experiencing foreign languages, dances, songs, visual and culinary arts, also allows them tosee the value in their own cultures’ achievements. Therefore, cultural exchange does not necessarily result in the melting of many cultures into one.。

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:doweneedNever,nevergiveup

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:doweneedNever,nevergiveup

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:doweneedNever,nevergiveup托福写作遭受生疏话题缺乏思路是常见问题,简单影响考生发挥和心态。

今日我给大家带来了托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文,盼望能够给关心到大家,下面我就和大家共享,来观赏一下吧。

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:do we need Never, never give up托福写作难点话题一览Do we need Never, never give up?The expression Never, never give up means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路绽开结构分析这道题目比较狡猾,许多人可能一看到never就立刻选好边预备反对了,但我觉得大家最好还是结合题目的实际状况来分析。

never的确是一个肯定词,但是由于这道题目说的是never give up,本身是一个乐观向上的说法,所以,我认为比较合理的态度是“很大程度上同意”。

比如大家可以说永不放弃的前提是“制订一个现实、可行、并有意义的方案”等等。

本话题高分范文赏析Near the end of the Second World War, Churchill delivered his most famous and the shortest speech: Never, Never Give Up. The British and people in many other countries were tremendously encouraged, andfinally went through the hardest period in human history. Never give up represents a strong and positive life attitude. Some people are ready to quit when they feel they cannot endure the difficulties of some work or they think they cannot find a way to finish the required task. Such people usually become upset and disappointed and lose their self-confidence, although they virtually can do every thing well simply by trying once more. In cases such as acquiring second language, most people failed simply because they had given up. Acquiring second language might be the easiest task among diverse academic curriculums, because one can be successful only by plain repetition, though it is painstaking andtime-consuming. Never give up. Such strong belief often gives us the second chance. The fact that we fail-somewhere does not mean we are going to fail everywhere, and especially it does not necessarily mean that we are deprived of opportunities to win there. There probably is a second chance. Many successful people did fail before. Yu Minhong, the founder of New Oriental School, was able to study in Peking University only after three attempts. He wasnt reckoned as successful after graduation, among many signs is the fact that almost all his classmates went abroad while he w~ each and every time refused by officials in visa-granting office for unexplained reasons. Yet he never gave up, which makes his later success inevitable. Psychology teaches us that we do get what we want, if we know exactly what we want and want the right thing. First of all, we must make sure that our clearly defined goals are achievable, and that our carefully designed means are practicable. A superficial claim like I want to be a millionaire brings nothing. And an unrealistic goal like inventing a perpetual motion machine is absolutely meaningless. But if we want to acquire a second language, it is both realistic and meaningful. By careful planning, and relevant persistence we have no reason to fail. And numerous examples tell us that even if the methods are problematic, many still finally attain great achievements. Therefore, in most cases, the belief Never, never give up is really something that we should always bear in mind.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:land for humanneeds or endangered animals托福写作难点话题一览Land for human needs or endangered animalsSome people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路绽开结构分析虽然两边立场都可以选,但一般来说根据政治正确的思路还是建议选择站濒危动物这一边,中国考生比较简单relate到的例子就是熊猫了吧。

托福写作范文点评和思路解析

托福写作范文点评和思路解析

作为托福考试中最为重要的一门科目,写作在很大程度上决定了考生的总分数。

对于考生来说,掌握如何在考场上写出一篇优秀的作文,是非常关键的。

本文将通过对托福写作满分范文的点评和思路解析,向考生们展示如何在考场上写出一篇满分作文。

我们来看一篇托福写作满分范文:Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: In order to improve your overall health, youshould take a break and go on a vacation every year.Essay:There is no doubt that work and study are important for our lives. However, with the rapid development of the society, people are paying more and more attention to their health. Many people hold the opinion that taking a break and going on a vacation every year is a good way to improve overall health.I agree with this point of view for reasons as follows.To begin with, going on a vacation provides people withan opportunity to relieve stress. As we all know, stress is one of the most common problems that people face in theirdaily lives. People may encounter different levels of stressdue to various reasons, such as work overload, interpersonal conflicts, or family issues. Therefore, taking a break and going on a vacation every year could help people reduce their stress levels and recover their energy. They can spend more time in nature, breathe fresh air, and enjoy some new experiences. All these activities will make them feel relaxed and refreshed, which is good for their health.In addition, going on a vacation can increase people’s physical activity level. When people are on vacation, they tend to engage in more physical activities than they do in their daily lives. They may enjoy hiking, swimming, skiing,or just walking around the new places they visit. These activities not only provide people with the opportunity to exercise, but also allow them to explore the new environment and understand the local culture. Furthermore, they can meet new people and make new friends during the vacation, which is good for their social life.Finally, going on a vacation can improve people’s mental health as well. Research has shown that taking a break and going on a vacation can help people reduce the risk of depression and anxiety. By getting away from the routine of daily life, people can focus more on their own experience andfeelings. They can also spend more time with their family and friends, which is good for their emotional life. Moreover, they can learn new things and enrich their knowledge during the vacation, which is beneficial to their mental health.In conclusion, I believe that taking a break and going on a vacation every year is a good way to improve overall health of people. It can relieve stress, increase physical activity level, and improve mental well-being of people. Therefore, I would strongly recommend everyone to take a break and go on a vacation every year.点评:本文开头引入话题,明确表明自己对于“每年休假可以提高整体健康水平”这一观点的支持;接着从三个方面阐述了自己的论点,分别是:1)休假能缓解人们的压力;2)休假可以提高人们的身体活动水平; 3)休假对人们的精神健康也有益处。

如何提高托福考试分数:20202001托福独立写作大作文解析

如何提高托福考试分数:20202001托福独立写作大作文解析

如何提高托福考试分数:20202001托福独立写作大作文解析编者按:托福考试是很多人所纠结的问题,因为这考试还是有难度的。

但是纵观一张试卷,还是最难的。

20xx0701托福独立写作题目:范文:Thanks to the efforts of mass medias, modern citizens are increasingly aware of the severity of environment problems. Facing the worsening conditions on earth, people have adopted various methods to protect the environment, such as giving up driving, recycling objects and buying local organic food. In my mind, the last one is the simplest but most effective solution that we common people can take to preserve environment.In the first place, for the cultivation of organic food, farmers are strictly restrained to use fertilizers and pesticides which contribute a lot to pollution. It is true that fertilizers and pesticides can help farmers increase yields and reduce costs. In the long term, however, many chemical elements are left in soil and drain to local water system, like underground water and rivers. The accumulation of those chemical elements is detrimental to local ecosystem, as some small animals, such as fish and frog, may take in and store them in their body. In addition, while killing harmful insects, pesticides are also poisonous to birds who prey on them. So, it is fair to say that if more people buy local organic food, there will be fewer fertilizers and pesticides applied, and therefore less pressure on the environment.In the second place, to decrease the market share of food transported from places far away is to reduce energy consumption, especially gasoline and electricity. We have tonotice that the rapid economic development and population growth is burning up our natural resources. The improvement of living standards also exacerbates energy crisis. If local food is actually enough to satisfy people’s needs, the long distance transportation of food is absolutely unnecessary but a waste of energy. Even worse, some kinds of food have to be carefully stored under certain temperature or be frozen. Then, the transportation cost is even higher. For example, fresh tropical fruits transported by air to cities in the northern areas are usually sold at a high price which includes the cost of transportation. Therefore, when we buy local food, we are actually save energy.In the third place, walking and bicycling to work or study place and recycling old objects are not feasible or effective in conserving environment. For some citizens, driving to the office or school is the only choice, as there is no convenient access to public transportation and walking and cycling will cost too much time on the road. In addition, although it is a good habit to recycle old objects, this may generate other problems. For instance, there must be enough space in the room for the storage of old subjects, which is quite inconvenient for people renting a small flat.To sum up, individuals can contribute a lot to environment preservation. Among all the methods discussed above, the purchase of local organic food is the best option.which of the following is the most effective way to protect the environment:1 walking and bicycling instead of driving to work and study2 recycling old objects3 buying locally grown organic food1 步行或汽车利:节省能源,减少尾气排放弊:不方便,因为没有公共交通,或者距离太远,浪费时间2 循环利用利:减少资源的使用弊:比较麻烦,而且废旧物品的储存占据太多空间3 购买当地有机食品利:有机食品不使用化肥农药,而化肥农药造成污染;减少食品运输能源消耗弊:一般比较贵作者:Cindy。

托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析2020

托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析2020

托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析2020托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析:从玩游戏中学到什么?托福写作难点话题一览Does playing games teach us about life?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing games teaches us about life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析玩游戏的好坏处讨论算是比较热门的话题之一,但这道题目转了个弯,问能不能教会我们生活中的事情。

大家如果支持的话可以说玩游戏的过程也能学到很多道理,比如团队合作的重要性,或是持之以恒的毅力等等。

不支持可以说游戏就只是放松娱乐的方式,并没有太多深刻的含义。

当然也可以用it depends的思路来说,比如玩什么游戏,怎么玩才能学到东西等等,不同情况要分开来看等等。

本话题高分范文赏析Across the world many cultures have their own favoredgames. While most of these cultures created the games themselves, many of these games have similar attributes. One reason for this is that people everywhere find games entertaining. More importantly, however, games teach us about life, socialization, and about how to work as a team, and how to win and lose gracefully.One of the most important developments one can make in his personality is the ability to socialize well with others. Having a charismatic personality will take a person far in any field. Almost all games have socialization aspect deeply ingrained in them. Football and basketball both encourage a person to treat others with respect. This is known as having good sportsmanship. Of course respecting others is a social skill that we all must learn if we are to succeed in life.Many popular sports involve a group of people, ranging from two people to twenty people working together as a team. In these situations it is always of utmost importance to be a team player. Of course in the business world being a “team player" has become a buzzword in most offices. Being a team player means that one should work well with others in the face of adversity. Team sports are full of challenges and obstacles that a team mustovercome together.Finally most sports teach a person the value of winning and loosing gracefully. In sports etiquette it would be incredibly uncouth to start crying or throw a tantrum if one were to lose a game. Likewise if one wins a game and gloats excessively in the face of their adversary, it is equally looked down upon. The same goes in "real life." One must learn the subtleties of defeat and victory and learn to minimize their outward emotions.In conclusion, I posit that games have much to teach us about life. To sum up they teach us how to work well with others. On a lighter note they also teach us how to have fun, which is an important life lesson in and of itself.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析:要不要尝试新事物?托福写作难点话题一览Do what you already do well or try new things?Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.写作思路展开结构分析讨论两种attitudes各自的好处。

【写作提分】托福独立写作之社会类话题详解与范文

【写作提分】托福独立写作之社会类话题详解与范文

【写作提分】托福独立写作之社会类话题详解与范文纵观历年的托福独立写作,我们不难发现,话题总是永远属于一些主流内容。

其中包括社会、教育、工作、朋友、休闲等等,这些话题依然保持火热程度。

那么,下面我们就针对写作中最为常见的社会类话题为大家做一个详细的分析,希望能为大家的备考带来帮助。

托福独立写作之社会类话题对于托福独立考试来说,社会生活类话题虽然不是出题频率最高的一类,但是对于这样的题目却是也有着一定的难度。

比如,托福独立写作真题(It isimpossible for us to be completely honestto afriend.)也可以被归纳在这一类中。

就这类命题,我们可以思考一下人与人之间关系的意义,如家庭关系——父母与子女的关系、祖孙之间的关系,还有朋友之间的关系,我们如何建立和睦的关系等等。

托福独立写作真题1.2014年8月23日考题:Although new technology and science will continue to advanceand improve people’s life, the most significant improvement has been made.很多同学被这道题目难住,因为其中提及的逻辑非常严谨:没有否定科技的发展人类的进步,只是在程度上做文章,遇到这种情况做何处理呢?首先,从立场来讲,这道题算是要反对的,因为人类前进的步伐不可否认。

在这个大前提下,如何证明今后还会有质的发展呢?我们不妨换个角度思考这个问题。

可以产生重大进步的领域,势必是目前并不尽人如意的领域,而相关问题一旦弥补,便可实现质的提升,比如交通,如果可以在代步的同时实现节能环保;比如通讯,如果可以实现普及性的随时随地可视通话(moreaffordable),那么人们的生活质量将得到significant的提升。

2.2014年10月18日考题:It is important for everyone to know about what happening allaround the world even though the events have not affected our daily life.社会类话题可以涉及的角度还有经济、教育、灾难等,都是非常高频的角度,大家可以有意识的积累相关表达和素材。

2024托福考试写作历年题目综合解析

2024托福考试写作历年题目综合解析

2024托福考试写作历年题目综合解析托福考试(TOEFL)作为一项国际英语语言测试,对考生的写作能力有着较高的要求。

通过解析历年的托福考试写作题目,可以更好地了解考试的趋势和特点,并为备考提供参考。

本文将综合解析2024年托福考试的写作题目,帮助考生更好地准备考试。

【题目一】Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should spend more time interacting with nature. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.这个题目是要求对“人们应该花更多时间与大自然互动”这一论点发表观点,并给出理由和例子来支持自己的论述。

首先,我同意这个观点。

现代社会人们的生活节奏非常快,每天都过着忙碌的生活。

然而,与大自然互动不仅可以使人们放松身心,缓解压力,同时也有助于保护环境和增加生态平衡。

举个例子,如果人们花更多的时间与大自然互动,就会更加关注环境问题。

他们会更加珍惜自然资源,减少浪费,并采取积极的措施来保护环境,例如参加环保活动或者种植树木。

此外,与大自然互动可以使人们更好地欣赏自然的美丽和奇迹。

例如,当人们在大自然中散步时,可以欣赏美丽的风景、听鸟儿的歌唱和感受大自然的力量。

这些体验将使人们更加深刻地认识到自然的伟大和美好。

总的来说,与大自然互动对人们的身心健康和环境保护都有积极的影响。

因此,我认为人们应该花更多的时间与大自然互动。

【题目二】Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have a small number of close friends than a large number of casual acquaintances. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.这个题目是要求对“拥有少数亲密朋友比拥有大量的泛泛之交更好”这一说法发表观点,并给出理由和例子来支持自己的论述。

托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析 怎样才算好同事

托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析 怎样才算好同事

托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析怎样才算好同事考生需要在写作备考中就开始多接触各类作文话题了解写法思路,多读一些高分范文提前进行铺垫。

今天给大家带来了托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析 ,希望能够帮助到大家,下面就和大家分享,来欣赏一下吧。

托福写作难点话题一览What makes a good co-worker?We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important.写作思路展开结构分析这道题目可能有些还在初高中阶段的同学会觉得不知道怎么写,毕竟缺少工作经验是事实。

大家不妨把同事的概念转换为一起小组学习完成某些课题的同学,这样会比较容易找到切入的点。

像这道题目,写有团队合作精神teamwork spirit应该是比较容易展开的,大家可以参考一下。

本话题高分范文赏析Healthy co-workers relations are crucial for the suess of business. Since average workers spend at least 8 hours a day with their co-workers, their relationships with their co-workers are among the most important relationships in their lives. The best kinds of co-workers will possess team spirit, be hard working, and have a sense of humor.Co-workers with team spirit will put the needs of the pany and their co-workers before their own needs.For instance, an employee with team spirit might put in unpensated overtime to help a co-worker finish a project before a big deadline. If the worker who needs help does not meet the deadline, the whole pany might lose an important client. If co-workers help each other, even though the rewards might not be immediately apparent, each individual will gain more than if they worked separately.A good co-worker needs to be hard working. This is the responsibility of every worker in any pany. Just as the failure of employees to cooperate will hurt each member of a pany, failure of each worker to perform to the best of his/her ability will hurt the pany. It will not only lower that particular worker's productivity, it will also damage the co-workers' morale. If I see a co-worker of mine slacking off, I might begin to think to myself, "Why should I work hard? I can slack off like my co-worker and still make the same amount of money!" Hard work is not only important for productivity; it is also a crucial prerequisite of team spirit. Finally, good co-workers need to have a sense of humor. Working at any pany can be very stressful. Even though it is necessary for everyone to work hard, that does not mean that work cannot be fun. Since co-workers spend so much time together, being able to joke and laugh each other is also important. If an employee is perceived by his/her co-workers as a humorless workaholic, then they might not want to go along with him/her. His/her lack of humor hurts team spirit, and not only irritates the people around him/her, but also damages the whole pany.本文分为三个部分:其中Independent Writing Task 9个问题,Integrated Writing Task 6个问题,以及牵涉全局写作的3个问题。

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析为了让大家更好的预备托福考试,我给大家整理一些托福考试作文范文,下面我就和大家共享,来观赏一下吧。

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:the best way to travel托福写作难点话题一览Is traveling in a group led by a tour guide the best way to travel?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路绽开结构分析不能同意这个观点。

由于题目中用到了肯定修饰词the best。

建议大家排列两三个除了用导游之外的旅游方法:独自旅游;与同事、伴侣相伴等等。

或者根据不同的状况下有不同的选择的思路来写也是不错的选择。

本话题高分范文赏析Those lucky enough to travel, particularly those fortunate enough to visit foreign countries, face the decision of traveling in a group with an experienced tour guide or traveling by themselves. The choice is a difficult one as both ways of travel have advantages. personally, I believe that, although traveling in a group with a tour guide is obviously convenient, the benefits are often not significant enough and in many ways traveling in this kind of way can limit ones travel experience.The conveniences of group travel with a tour guide include the fact that one easily meets other people and thus has a more enjoyable and comfortable travel experience. This is particularly important when traveling in a foreign country where a language barrier prevents interaction with the locals and isolation can become a problem. The tour guide is often experienced in generating a jovial atmosphere within the group, and his/her knowledge of the foreign culture and places of interest provide travelers with a greater appreciation of their trip. Also, and maybe most importantly, when traveling with a guide the individual traveler normally does not have to worry about hotel reservations and transportation. Those aspects are taken care of.On the other hand, convenience might not be important to a traveler, and traveling alone allows far more personal freedoms. For example, one can easily make changes to the travel itinerary. The traveler can choose to stay in certain places or move on more quickly than otherwise possible, because he does not follow a set schedule.Learning about culture and places of interest is also easy as that information is readily available in books.Furthermore, travelers tend to congregate, and it is very easy to meet fellow vacationers who might have insightful tips as far as where to go and what to do. Generally, basic command of the English language suffices to have such informative exchanges with other travelers and locals, who are often eager to share their customs and culture.Therefore, traveling outside a large tour group can result in a richer and more genuine experience, and I believe this experience to be more exciting to me.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:students take classes in subjects托福写作难点话题一览Should students be required to take classes in many subjects or to specialize in one subject?Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路绽开结构分析很难说哪一个比另外一个更好。

托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析

托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析

托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析为了让大家更好的准备托福考试,给大家了托福考试满分范文,下面就和大家分享,来欣赏一下吧。

托福写作难点话题一览Land for human needs or endangered animalsSome people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析虽然两边立场都可以选,但一般来说按照政治正确的思路还是建议选择站濒危动物这一边,中国考生比较容易relate到的例子就是熊猫了吧。

所以认为选择不同意更好写一些。

大家可以列举两三个保护endangered animals的重要性。

同时不要忘了说明人类也确实需要更多的土地。

只不过不能只顾眼前利益(short term benefits)而已。

这样就能两边都兼顾到一些了。

本话题高分范文赏析When making decisions about land use, some say that human needs should e before animal needs in every case. While I agree that human needs should have primary consideration, humans have a special responsibility to protect the land that endangered animals call home. Animals adapt very slowly to sudden changes in their environments. Many endangered animals can only live in one place, or in a specific type of place. Humans, on the other hand, have a special ability to adapt quickly to changing and hostile environments. For instance, if humans need to live in a very dry environment they can use technology to locate and drill for water, or build pipelines to bring in water from outside. Thousands of years ago the residents of Xinjiang province dug underground tunnels hundreds of kilometers long to carry water to oasis towns like Turpan. Because humans are thus flexible while many animals are not, humans should make an effort to use up all available space before encroaching upon the habitats of endangered animals. One of the important reasons to protect endangered animals is thatthe delicate ecological balance of an area might be irreparably harmed by their extinction. For example, if humans chop down forests and use the land to grow corn, they might simultaneously destroy the habitats of a kind of bird that eats locusts. The next year because the locust population can grow unchecked, locusts might destroy the entire nearby corn crop. Not only do the birds lose their homes, but humans are also harmed. The ecological balance of many natural habitats is still not well understood and humans interfere in it at their peril. Finally, humans have much to learn from endangered species. One example is in the field of medicine. By observing a particular species of endangered monkeys in South America, scientists have discovered that monkeys eat a certain kind of plant when they get sick. Through research the scientists discovered that this plant also has medicinal value for humans. If the monkey's habitat had been destroyed to create more farmland, not only would we lose the plants and the monkeys, we would also lose life-saving medicines and the potential for medical research.托福写作难点话题一览Do we need "Never, never give up"?The expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析这道题目比较狡猾,很多人可能一看到never就马上选好边准备反对了,但觉得大家最好还是结合题目的实际情况来分析。

托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析汇总

托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析汇总

托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析汇总为了让大家更好的预备托福考试,我给大家整理了托福考试满分范文,下面我就和大家共享,来观赏一下吧。

托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析:读写力量在现代社会的重要性托福写作难点话题一览Is literacy more important today than in the past?Is the ability to read and write more important today than in the past? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路绽开结构分析肯定程度上,同意这个说法。

(In a sense, it is true that…)阅读并理解(Comprehend)的力量,在信息过度丰富的今日,更加重要。

现代人的阅读量要比过去高出很多倍(过去高校生就是很高的学历,现在博士后[postdoctoral]才算是高学历)。

需要更多的力量去辨别真伪。

写作的力量更是如此,比如在工作中,写报告是一项重要内容,公司的规模越大,越是如此。

没有写作力量,就等于没有升迁机会。

本话题高分范文赏析As the world becomes smaller and smaller due to the process of globalization, it becomes more and more important that everyone learnshow to read and write. If one is to keep up with the fast pace of the world, literacy skills are of utmost importance.Technology is expanding at an ever-increasing rate. Computers, and the Internet, have become common terms in almost all nations in the world. If one wants to be able to communicate with others using this efficient method, one must learn the basics of reading and writing. The objects we have in our home are also becoming increasingly more complicated. For example, if one wants to use a DVD player with their television, one must be able to read the manual to learn how to work it. Even the most basic technologies come with an instruction guide: if one is unable to read, they will constantly be struggling to figure out how to work these technologies.As mentioned above, the world is becoming much smaller. More people are finding it necessary to leave their homes in small towns and villages, moving to the big cities where there is more opportunity. Some of these people find it quite difficult to navigate around the city, as one must know how to read in order to understand the street signs. If one cannot find the place where one has to report for work, it would be very difficult to make a living.Finally and perhaps most importantly, being able to read and write gives us the opportunity to think for ourselves. Wherever we are, people in authority positions tell us what we should believe. However, in manycases, it is not in our own best interest to follow the leaders ideas. People must learn to read and then examine the information for themselves. This is the only way that culture can evolve. Therefore, I think the skills of reading and writing are of vast importance, no matter where one lives in the world. The world population will continue to grow, and the only way to keep ahead is to learn to read and write.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析:介绍代表国家的象征托福写作难点话题一览The thing representing your countryIf you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition, what would you choose? Why? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.写作思路绽开结构分析这道题目自由度很高,对中国考生来说应当也很简单想到各种代表性的事物,比如中国特产的吉利物大熊猫,或者中国瓷器,这些都是对老外来说也特别具有中国特色,耳熟能详的事物。

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7月1日托福写作话题解析及高分范文!
先奉上7月1日托福独立写作真题~~
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Competition between friends usually negatively impacts friendships. Use specific details and examples to support your opinion.
朋友类朋友类!这是我们预测里面的话题类别,所以吧,我们的预测有参考性吧~~
看这里,这是我们北美考试帮对7月1日考试的预测截图:
上次说过不仅给预测,而且还给解析甚至范文,马上实现自己的诺言哈,今天解析和范文就来啦~~呜啦呜啦呜啦~~(掌声在哪里~~嘿嘿)
解析:
就体裁而言是同意不同意(准没准?准没准?);就话题而言是朋友类。

不过这个朋友类呢,有点难度,是说朋友之间的竞争是否影响友谊。

竞争这个话题本身就不太好写,何况还牵涉到朋友之间的竞争,所以就更不好写了。

大家可以想自己思考思考,你是同意呢还是不同意呢?
如果同意,你的理由是什么?如果不同意,你的理由又是什么?
可以从朋友的范畴上去思考,什么是朋友?诚实,互相帮助...那竞争如何去破坏友谊的哪些呢?
所以这里就可以用分类的方法去构思了。

我同意,竞争损害了朋友之间的诚实和互相帮助,而且更严重的是竞争会让朋友互相诋毁。

所以这篇文章的构思就有了。

废话不多说,直接上范文(刚写的,新鲜出炉~~我似乎看了热气~~哈哈)范文:
From ancient time to modern days, friendship has played a key role in our daily life. However, it is unavoidable for friends to compete for a stuff in such an increasing interactive and connecting world, such as for a school or for a job. As far as I am concerned, honestly, competition does have a negative influence on friendships among involvers, which will be illustrated in three aspects.
To begin with, competition will teach friends to conceal something from each other. Owing to the fact that nearly all of them desire to achieve the goal, competitors will lie to others more or less to lower others’vigilance or to confuse rivals. To be more specific,in the process of preparing for a test, test takers , who are friends and competitors, will not tell opponents which material is significant and which stage they are in; in the pursuit of an advanced position, opponents, to a large extent, will engage in something under the rose, such as treating the boss or bribing voters. A good case in this point is that before taking college
entrance examination, one of my friends always did not tell me the books she had read and learned. Due to competition, friends are not honest any more like before.
In addition, lending friends’a hand cannot be expected in competition. As an old saying said, a friend in need is a friend petition, however, will hinder companion do others a favor on the ground that helping friends is to set obstacles or increase difficulties for themselves. That is to say, it is more hazardous for them to reach the target. Plenty of evidence in our life has proved it. Two boys chasing the same girl definitely do not give advice to each other; two competitive tenders will drive the price higher rather than lower for auction goods; two actresses for a role are unlikely to help the other illustrate the feelings of the role. In short, competition makes friends hesitate to assist each other.
What was worse, some opponents even do some harmful things to defame friends. These behaviors include publicizing friends’physical disadvantages, previous relationship and family condition and criticizing friends’dressing style, economic condition and eating habits. To illustrate,
in order to win the position of president, Obama’s group claimed Hillary was too old and uglified her photos. Without any doubt, these behaviors break the friendship to some extent.
From what have been discussed above, I am extremely convinced that competition between friends will damage friendship and even make them to become enemy not only because competition gives birth to lies, but also friends are unlikely to aid each other as well as it is possible for them to implement some defaming behaviors.
看了范文,可以再好好复习里面的词语和句型表达。

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