上海中考英语作文专题指导培训资料
上海中考英语作文分类训练：书信作文
书信作文1．假如你是李明，你的美国朋友Bob听说中国正在减轻中小学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。
请你根据下列内容，用英语写一封回信，谈一谈“双减”给你的学习和生活带来的变化。
提示：1．过去，课后常常做很多作业，甚至周末还要上各种辅导班，睡得晚，压力大……2．现在，有很多自由时间读课外书，参观博物馆等；3．周末不上课，可以做自己想做的事情；4．晚上有时间观看新闻，不必再熬夜……要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；演讲中不得提及考生个人身份的相关信息，如人名、校名或地名等；词数80~100，开头结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。
Dear Bob,How nice to hear from you again!_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________Lovely yours,Li Ming2．假如你是校音乐社团的主席John，下周你校将举行校园好声音总决赛（the final of V oice of Our School），请拟一份英文邀请卡，邀请父母们届时参加。
中考英语作文讲解及训练
Suggestedpoints:
●Whatdoyoubelieveyoucando?
SupposethereisanEnglishFestivalinyourschooleveryyear.Somestudentsthinkithelpful,butothersdon’tthinkso.Whatdoyouthink,andwhy?（假设你们学校每年开展英语文化节活动，有些学生认为活动对自己有帮助，有些则不这么认为，你的观点是什么？并说明理由。
2.圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。
3.列提纲：为写作做好准备。写下涉及该题的各种联想和论点。选择句型、关联词连接全文，形成提纲。
4.定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。
5.写全文：组织运用语言：运用语法知识和词汇知识，依据素材形成初稿，要做到语言表达准确、规范、地道，文理通顺，尽量使用学过的、最熟悉也最有把握的句型和结构，应尽量避免中国式英语。
5、书写工整，卷面整洁
6、检查：
（1）.检查动词的时态、语态和主谓一致。（2）.检查非谓语动词。（3）检查动词的搭配。
（4）检查名词的单复数。（5）检查句型的使用。（6）检查句子的完整性。
（7）检查中英文的一致。（8）检查单词的拼写和大小写。（9）检查要点是否翻译完整。
三．审题及构思训练。
Writing(作文):(共20分)（要求：把写作常用句型套入）
上海中考英语作文分类训练：话题作文
话题作文1．Write at least 60 words about the topic “An/A __________ (unusual, interesting...) experience in my life” (以《一次……的经历》为题写一篇不少于60词的短文).Use the following points as a reference.1. What was the experience?2. When and where did it happen?3. Why do you think it was …?_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________2．Write at least 60 words about the topic “The ________ I want to recommend”（请以“我想推荐________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
上海中考英语冲刺讲义-专题08 词汇8+作文8+句转(解析版)
专题八词汇8+作文8+句转一．考纲重点单词梳理TUVW二．专题-句型转换专题知识梳理句型转换是要求学生根据所给的句型，按要求或提示完成考题，考查的是学生对句子结构的构成、变化等方面的知识以及对此类知识的运用能力。
该题型首先给出一个完整的句子，再给出一个含有几个空白处的句子，根据不同的要求填入适当的词完成句型转换。
句型转换涉及到语法知识的各个方面，在做这种题时，应注意时态、语态、人称、数的变化，特殊疑问词的用法，及助动词的用法等。
句型转换考题虽然包括各种句式，但通常以两种形式进行考查：同义型句型转换和条件型句型转换。
专题精讲(一).肯定句<--->否定句：常考的考点：have 、do句型提取助动词+ 动词原形：do/did/does + V原形特例1：现在完成时have/has been --> have/has not been1.He has been there.(改否定句) He _____ _____ there.2.Jake has already downloaded many free games from the App store. (改为否定句)Jake ________ downloaded many free games from the App store ________.【答案】hasn’t been hasn’t yet特例2：一般将来时will do ---> won’t do1. The charity organization will receive some money from the local government next year. (改为否定句) The charity organization _____ receive _____ money from the local government next year.【答案】won’t yet特例3: had better do ---> had better not do (would rather (not) do)(二). 反义疑问：常考的考点：带有否定副词的句子。
【精品】上海中考英语作文：考情分析+范文详解
上海中考英语作文学习资料一.评分标准上海中考英语作文总分为20分，其中内容分8分、语言分8分、组织结构分4分。
以下为上海中考英语作文官方评分标准：1.内容分8分。
内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚完整。
2.语言分8分。
学生需用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误，词汇拼写正确，句型使用恰当。
首先是字数，少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。
3.组织结构分4分，也就是我们常说的文采分。
根据学生使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/俗语的情况来加分。
二.注意点：每少5个词扣0.5分，拼写错误每处扣0.5分，标点，大小写错误每2处扣0.5分3内容和语言表达总分达15分及以上，得2~3分内容和语言总分13~14分，如确有好句型或表达用语，可酌情给1~2分通篇句型，句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，也不给分开头句+给的几个参考点+结尾句+亮点。
先划档次：A档18~15分B档14.5~12分C档11.5~8分D档 3.5~0分然后再仔细批阅看有否语法错误,最后给出总分。
第1页共34页三.学生常出现的问题：1.内容空洞，没有清晰的思路，表达能力不强，总是用一些不合适的句子内容来表达，所以可能让老师觉得理由或是内容太假，当然也就得不了高分。
2.议论过多，描写不足。
大多数情况下，我们把议论当成的作文的重点，所以常常会跑题。
应当多描述提示的内容或加以想像，不能只翻译了事。
3.总是使用同一个主语写句子，重复太多。
尽量使用不同的主语来表达，比如：I must learn English well.就可以换成：It is important for me to learn English well.4.结构散漫，想哪儿写哪儿，乱七八糟。
应该使用总分或总分总的结构。
5.都是简单句，缺少复合句。
多用状语从句，宾语从句，定语从句及一些重要的句型，也人教版新目标初二下英语同步辅导（一）初中二年级下un...初中二年级下Un...可以用用被动语态。
6.连词的使用较少，句子之间的连接很生硬。
上海中考英语复习专题讲义第十讲 写作 教师版.doc
5.The + adj/adv 的比较级 + （n.）+ 主谓，the + adj/adv 的比较级 + （n.）+ 主谓（愈.. 愈... ）The harder you work, the more progress you make. 你愈努力，你愈进步。
The more books we read, the more learned we become.我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。
6.By +Ving, ~~ can ~~ （借着.，........ 能够.... ）By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。
By reading, we can broaden our horizon.通过阅读，我们可以扩大视野。
能够……)7.sth/doing sth enable（s） + Object（宾语）+ to do 主动/ to be done 被动（……使Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed.（宾语us 与feel 之间是主动关系）听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
Travelling enables our life to be enriched.（宾语life 与enrich 之间是被动关系）旅行能丰富人们的生活。
Watching movies enables our horizon （视里予）to be broadened.（被开I阔）看电影能开阔视野。
同学们再看看下面这两个例句是不是就一目了然了：The light enables Damin to see better.The light enables fish to be seen better.8.have a great influence on ~~ （对 ..... 有很大的影响）Smoking has a great influence on our health.抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。
上海中考英语作文指导范文
作文目录1. A good way to study English 学习英语的方法2. A good way to study well 努力学习的方法3. Travelling (7篇) 旅行4. Haze weather in Shanghai（3篇）上海的雾霾天气5. My view on comic strips 漫画之我见6. My way to school （2篇）上学路上7. My views on an English Festival （2篇）英语节之我见8. Using the Internet makes our life convenient 运用网络使生活更便利9. Let’s learn to smile 学会微笑10. Growing up with good books （2篇）好书伴我成长11. The best gift I’ve received（3篇）我收到的最好的礼物12. Encouragement brings me power（5篇）鼓励带给我能量13. Being a polite person 做一个有礼貌的人14. How to protect myself 2013上海中考满分作文15. Write a letter 写一封信16. This time next year 明年此时A good way to study EnglishMy way of studying English is to read lots of English books. It is very efficient.When I read English books, I can learn lots of extra-curricular words （which enable me to write better sentences as well as understand articles better.）Besides, it can set examples of writing articles for me. So I think reading books is a good way. It enables me to learn better with less time. However, there is no doubt that there are still some better ways. But no matter how we learn, the idea of using good methods never changes. A good method can always improve the quantity and quality of what we do, not only for studying English.A good way to study wellIn my opinion, reading widely is a good way to study well.On one hand, reading widely can bring us lots of powerful knowledge which we can’t learn in class as well as give us much fun. Reading is like stairs of a high mountain. The more you read, the higher you will go and the better you will learn. On the other hand, reading can also open your mind, which will help you easily solve the problems which are so difficult that few people can work out. How useful the way is!To sum up, if you read a book every day, you will study better and better.Nowadays,travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. As tourists, we ought to pay attention to our behaviors. First, respecting local customs is of great importance. We should learn some traditions of the place before we travel so that we won’t do things that make local people unhappy. Also, wearing a smile is a good way to show our politeness. Wherever we go and whatever we do, smile is a great passport that shows kindness and friendliness. When we are abroad or in other cities, we should always be friendly and kind to local people. In a nutshell, l hope you can follow my tips when you travel.Nowadays,travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. Many students plan to travel with their parents on holidays. But when we are travelling, we should pay attention to our behaviors and travel politely. Firstly, we should keep quiet when we’re travelling. Secondly, it will be terrible to draw some pictures on famous buildings.I think that if we do these things well, we’ll have a good time when we are travelling.Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. As a tourist, we must pay attention to our behaviors. First of all, we must obey the rules. Next, we must keep the environment clean. For example, we should leave rubbish in rubbish bins. A clean environment can make us feel happy . we must respect local customs so that we can give them a good impression. More importantly, it will be very bad to hurt the ancient buildings because they are very precious and they should be protected . in a word, it is important for us to control ourselves when we are going for a trip.Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. Quite a few people go abroad to spend their holidays. We should pay attention to our behaviors. First, we should put rubbish into rubbish bins instead of leaving it everywhere. Second, when we have a walk along the lakes, we shouldn’t throw stones into the lake. What’s more, we shouldn’t shout or smoke in public places. We should give others a helping hand when they are in trouble. Last but not least, it will be necessary not to draw here and there. I think if we do these,our travelling will be better.Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. While travelling, we should pay attention to our behaviors. It is as important as enjoying the views. First, when we travel to another country, we should respect local customs. If we don’t, we may be not popular among the people in that country. Second , it will be terrible to leave rubbish in the river or on the road. It may make the view less beautiful. Finally, we should be quiet in public p places. If we are noisy, we may make others unhappy. As a result, I think we should pay attention to our behaviors while travelling .Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. When we travel to other places, we should pay attention to our behaviors. Firstly, we must respect local customs. We shouldn’t dra w or write on the wall. What’s more, it will be terrible to leave rubbish. Instead, we ought to put it into rubbish bins. Last but not least, we mustn’t take photos if it isn’t allowed.I hope that everyone can behave well during the trip. In this way, our life will be better.Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. As students, it is common that we go travelling with our parents when we are free. But we must pay attention to our behaviors when we travel to other countries and local places.Firstly, we should respect the local culture. Every country has its own culture and it’s precious. So we can’t be rude to their culture. What’s more, when we ave arrive at a famous scenery spot, wee can take photos with it so that we can have a nice memory about it . but we can’t destroy any of it. Instead, weshould protect it. Last but not least, if we see someone doing something wrong when we travel, we must stop them.All in all , only travel in a right way can we feel the happiness from travelling.Haze weather in ShanghaiIt’s common knowledge that Shanghai is a modern city with constant heavy haze. It has caused great trouble and brought much inconvenience.On the street, we always wear masks and get sick because of the dirty air. At the crossing, accidents always happen because the drivers can’t see clearly. The flights are put off because of the smoggy weather.To avoid the haze weather, I hope that we will protect the environment from now on. On one hand, people should plant more trees to reduce carbon dioxide. On the other hand, people can walk or ride instead of driving cars.Only by doing so, can we reduce the smoggy days and make Shanghai more beautiful.Haze weather in ShanghaiAs we all know, the haze weather in Shanghai brings us lots of inconvenience.First, our outdoor activities have to be cancelled.Second, we have to wear masks because of the poor air quality. In addition, we can’t see clearly in haze weather so there are more traffic accidents and traffic jams on the road.Therefore, in order to have more fresh air, I suggest we’d better go out on foot or by bus instead of driving cars.Haze weather in ShanghaiNowadays, more and more haze appears in Shanghai. It causes a lot of problems in our daily life.In haze weather, I must put on my mask instead of breathing freely. I even can’t play outside with my friends.In order to improve air quality, people should walk instead of driving cars and factories must reduce the release of the dirty gas.All in all, I hope there will be no more haze weather and air pollution in the future and everyone can breathe freely without the masks.My view on comic stripsThere is no doubt that comic strips play an important role in our daily life. It’s because comic strips can make our life colorful and meaningful if we read them properly.Firstly, the plots are so attractive and interesting that I can’t help falling in love with them. What’s more, each character in comic strips h as his or her own strong personalities from which I can learn the value of person’s life and differ good and bad virtues. Last but not the least, amounts of funny pictures and texts in comic strips often make me burst into loud laughter. How relaxing it is to read comic strips.Each coin has two sides. We should bear in mind that we can’t be too indulged in reading comic strips to waste our precious time in studying.My way to schoolThere are many ways to go to school, such as riding a bike and taking a bus. As to me, I usually go to school by bike. I think it is a good way. The following are the reasons.First, it is fast to ride to bike. There is usually a traffic jam on my way to school, so riding a bike can be even faster than driving a car. Second, it is healthy to ride a bike. It can make me strong. In addition, riding a bike can help protect the environment. It won’t use any oil or electricity. Therefore, it can save energy.In a word, riding to school can be a good choice.My way to schoolI go to school on foot, and I think it’s not only good for our environment but also good for my health. Walking to school doesn’t need petrol like cars and buses, so it won’t pollute the air. What’s more, I can do it as a kind of exercise. Imagine that going to school every day is just like exercising regularly, how good it is for our health! In addition, to walk to school is another way to relax myself. I can enjoy the scenery on both sides of streets such as tress, flowers and buy roads. It is enjoyable to walk to school. Do you want to have a try to go to school on foot?An English Festival（Suppose there is an English Festival in your school every year. Some students think it is helpful, but others don’t think so. What do you think, why?）As far as I’m concerned, an English Festival should be held in our school. There are several reasons for it. First, an English Festival can open our eyes and add our knowledge. Second, an English Festival can let us make a lot of friends. Third, an English Festival can enrich our school life and make our school life more colorful and more enjoyable. Therefore, I think it is necessary to hold an English Festival in our school every year.As far as I’m concerned, an English Festival is very useful to our study and school life.On one hand, celebrating an English Festival can make our school life color ful and interesting. It’s enjoyable to spend our school time in celebrating the Festival. On the other hand, we can learn a lot form this festival such as the tradition of foreign countries and the foreign cultures. We can also improve our English speaking skill by talking to others. Above all, we can communicate with teacher and classmates regularly and discuss with them warmly. As a result, we can get along well with them. Because of the reasons I’ve mentioned, I think it is useful to have an English Festival in our school every year.Using the Internet makes our life convenientNow, there is no doubt that the Internet plays an important role in our daily life. It makes our life more convenient. I use it monthly.With the Internet, we can search for any information （we want to know）at home. We don’t have to go to the library or look it up in books any more. This can help us save our time. What’s more, buying things on the Internet is also very convenient. We needn’t go to the mall .We can just buy things we want on the Internet. How wonderful it sounds! More importantly, we can not only communicate with others through the Internet but also make new friends through it. It must be very interesting, isn’t it?In a word, using the Internet makes our life convenient. I can’t imagine what our life will be like without the Internet nowadays.Let’s learn to smileTo tell you the truth, smile is the most beautiful language in the world. I often smile in my daily life.On one hand, smile can make us relaxed and bring happiness and fun to us. On the other hand, smile shows friendship to others and comforts others when they are upset. When we meet difficulties, it’s a good idea to smile and encourage ourselves to try again. We should keep smiling when we feel angry inste ad of losing our temper. It shows that we’re polite and hits the person whooften makes us angry.In a word, smile can make our life better. We ought to learn to smile more often.Growing up with good booksWhen speaking of good books, the first thing to come into my mind is the book with other countries’ cultures and custom. You will find a lot of advantages as long as reading them.First of all, we can get enough knowledge we’ve never known, and widen our views. Besides, they are very interesting . No matter how noisy outside, I I always bury myself in reading. How amazing! We can also travel around the world without leaving a chair. The more books we’ve read, the more culture and custom we will know.To sum up, growing up with good books are very essential . Why not pick up a book to read with me!Growing up with good booksWhen speaking of good books, the first thing to come into my mind is the book with other countries’ cultures and custom. You will find a lot of advantages as long as reading them.First of all, we can get enough knowledge we’ve never known, and widen our views. Besides, they are very interesting . No matter how noisy outside, I I always bury myself in reading. How amazing! We can also travel around the world without leaving a chair. The more books we’ve read, the more culture and custom we will know.To sum up, growing up with good books are very essential . Why not pick up a book to read with me!The best gift I’ve receivedIn my mind, the best gift I’ve received is a basketball. My sister gave it to me on my fifteenth birthday.We usually play basketball on weekends. It not only helps me become stronger and healthier but also teaches me how to get along well with others.In a word, I really love playing basketball and this is the best gift I’ve received.The best gift I’ve receivedWhen we talk about gifts, I can’t help thinking of the best present from Peter which is the bridge of our friendship.When I was in Grade Six, I felt lonely and helpless because I had no friends. But something unexpected happened. A boy called peter gave me a football which is small and round as a gift .After that, we became the best friends and played football together without worry or fear regularly.The football not only brought us happiness and amusement but also stood for our long lasting friendship. Therefore, it is no doubt the best gift I’ve received.The best gift I’ve receivedIt was surprising that my aunt gave me a dress on my 10th birthday.The dress was beautiful with colorful butterflies on it. It shocked me a lot because I was just like a Tom boy at that time. I always wore jeans and shirts so that I could play freely with boys all day long. However, this dress changed me. My aunt told me “A girl needs to wear a dress and be quiet like a little cat but not rude like a boy.”This wonderful gift changed me a lot and I am thankful to my aunt because of her words and the meaningful gift.Encouragement brings me powerEncouragement is important in our daily life. It brings me the power to do everything.Once I was so nervous when taking part in a speech competition that I wanted to give up. At that time, I saw the smile on my teacher’s face. Suddenly, the warmth spread through my body and aroused my confidence. It was my teacher’s encouragement that gave me power to be brave. 详细地记叙一件事Indeed, encouragement gives us the power to conquer the difficulties no matter how hard they are. It can lighten up our roads in the distance and let us gain the hope. To sum up, encouragement makes me powerful and tough.Encouragement brings me powerAlthough it has been several years since my first time to perform on the stage, I still remember every detail of it. That was my first time to stand before such a large audience. My hands were sweating, my legs were shaking and I could even hardly say a word. Under this circumstance, I saw my parentssmiling at me. I just didn’t want to disappoint them, so I determined to try my best. As my shaking voice broke the embarrassing atmosphere, I felt increasingly confident. Thanks to my parents’ encouragement, I finally had my performance perfectly ended. It struck me that it is parents’ encouragement that leads to children’s inspiration of success. Their encouragement gives me power. And sometimes even a simple smile contains their love and understanding.Encouragement brings me powerEncouragement is the most amazing thing in the world. My parents’ encouragement brings me power. 开头点题。
上海中考英语作文分类训练：材料作文
材料作文1．科技的发展正不断地改变我们的学习方式，有人喜欢传统的教学方式(traditional learning in the classroom)，有人喜欢现代化的在线教学(modern learning on the Internet)。
请将题目“I prefer ___________”。
补充完整，谈谈你喜欢这种学习方式的理由。
The following is for reference only. (以下表达/内容仅供参考）Traditional learning in a classroom:• well planned teaching arrangement• face-to-face communication• colourful classroom activitiesModern learning on the Internet:• flexible timetable• a plan made by oneself• rich online learning resources(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
)_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________2．根据所给信息以“My good friend”为题，向你的同学介绍你的好朋友李华。
上海初中英语作文辅导材料
初中英语作文辅导材料As we all know=as is known to us=it is well-known that我们都知道First,…second,….next,…after that,… at last/finally/in the endWhat’s more =in addition= besides 此外As a result = therefore 因此In fact = as a matter of fact = actually 事实上For example 例如In other words换句话说On one hand，……. On the other hand,…. 一方面,….另一方面,…For one thing,…….for another thing，……一方面,….另一方面,…To my joy/surprise, 令我高兴/惊讶的是To tell the truth, 说实话Frankly speaking, 坦白的说Anyway=anyhow 不管怎样Generally speaking, 总的来说In one/a word =in all总之Needless to say，无需多言After all ,毕竟That is to say那就是说On the contrary, 相反=insteadCompared with 与…比较The reason is that ….Perhaps you will question that 也许你会质疑….Above all=most importantly 最为重要的是Because of =due to 由于Even if/though 即使Since=now that 既然For short = in brief 简言之Learn …by heart 熟背As the proverb says= As the saying goes…….谚语说…It must be emphasized that 必须强调的是It must be pointed out that…必须指出的是A more interesting thing is that……更有趣的是No one can deny(否认)/avoid(避免) that……Nothing is more important than the fact that ….谚语：All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.Health is more important than wealth.Great hopes make great man.The true value of life doesn’t lie in what you get, but lies in what you give. Failure is the mother of success.Where there is a will, there is a way.No pains, no gains.Practice makes perfect.Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.Nothing is impossible as long as you put your heart/mind on it.A friend in need is a friend indeed.We can live without a brother, we can’t live without a friend.Better a friend than silver and gold.When you are good to others, you are best to yourself.If you are kind to others, they will usually be kind to you.Two heads are bigger than one.One flower makes no gardens.Time and tide wait for no man.Honesty is the best policy.Honesty is a good virtue(美德).Saving is getting.A penny saved is a penny earned.I’m a slow walker, but I never walk backward.睡眠A good night’s sleep is important for everyone. It is common to see manystudents fall asleep in class. Lack of sleep may make young people feel upset and unhappy. School and parents should cut down some of the homework so that children can enjoy enough sleep every night. As we all know, children are our country’s future. They should be taken good care of.上海变化In the last 20 years, shanghai ,my hometown ,has been developing at a top speed. Great changes has taken place in every corner of the city. Roads and streets are wider. They are lined with trees and bushes which lead to the downtown in all directions. Today people in shanghai are living a modern life. We can find many kinds of foods anywhere when we feel hungry. New technology makes our life more convenient. The world are getting smaller and our life is more exciting.如何学习Do you know how to study better and make your study more effective(有效的)？We all know that many students usually study very hard for long hours. This is very good, but it doesn’t work a lot, for an effective student must have enough sleep, enough food and enough rest. Everyday we go out for a walk or visit some friends. It’s good for your study. When you return to your study, your mind will be refreshed, you will learn more and study better.幸福的理解In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it. when you are in trouble in school ,you friends will help you; when you study hard at your lessons, your parents will take good care of your life and health…all these are your happiness. If you notice a bit of them,you can always find happiness.Happiness can not be bought by money. When you meet with difficulties or setbacks(挫折), say loudly that you are happy ,because you have more chances to challenge yourself.As the saying goes, life is like a revolving(旋转的) door. When it closes, it also opens.母爱Mother is always ready to give everything she has to her children, not to receive. What true love that is in the world! We will remember mother love for ever!喜欢的老师Our maths teacher always bring us into the wonderful world of maths. One day he wrote some function problems on the blackboard which seemed to be difficult. He asked us to solve the problems. We thought and thought ,but couldn’t find the answer. Finally we all looked at the teacher at a loss. After a long time, the teacher smiled and said“no answer”. We were all surprised. He said :”you shouldn’t be cheated by the appearance. Sometimes, the answer is easy.”It seemed those words had a lot of meanings to me.朋友A true friend does indeed find pleasure in your joy and share sadness. He or she is always at our side to give us his or her help and comfort. A true friend can always be trusted, loved and respected. Friend is a kind of treasure in our lives. It is actually like a bottle of wine ,the longer it is kept, the sweeter it will be.Everyone needs friends. It is nice to have a friend to talk ,laugh and do thing with. Sometimes friends don’t get along well. But most of the time they will go on being friends.健康的身体Indeed , a quick mind hardly goes along with a weak body. Without a strong body, you can never achieve anything.生活的态度Life is wonderful. The most important thing is that you should always try your best, and never give up.时间的宝贵Time is money. This means that every moment may put some money in your pockets. If our time is used carefully and correctly, we will increase our knowledge and experience .that is to say, we are making money. Our life is nothing more than time. To kill the time is therefore a form of losing life. Time is precious, if we waste or let it run away at will, we shall never be able to call it back.机会Unless we are careful, it is easy to fail to recognize an opportunity when it is in hand.Chances/opportunities only favor those who are prepared.留学Each year, thousands of Chinese middle school students go to study in foreign countries. Life in foreign countries can be hard for young people. They have to meet a culture shock(文化冲突) and language problems. But to most children, looking after themselves when studying alone in a foreign country is a big challenge. Studying abroad at a young age can help students learn foreign languages easily. And broaden their minds.犯误之后As we grow we should realize the best thing to do after we make a mistake is to accept responsibility, and to offer an apology. Admitting your mistake and saying you are sorry helps others trust you again. it also helps to repair any damage that was caused by the mistake. Another very important thing is that it allows you to put a mistake behind you, and to move on with your life. Perhaps it also helps us to learn to forgive others. Learning to say sorry is a sure way to learnhow to respect yourself and others.控制情绪Do you usually lose your temper easily? If you do, you need to control your feelings and stop getting angry. Here are some tips to help you:Keep a diary. Every time you get angry, write down why you are angry. Look back at it later.Ask your friends to stop talking to you when you get angry. This will help you feel better.Do something different. When you get angry, walk away from the problem and somewhere else.自信，实现梦想If you have a dream –something you really want to do, it can come true. But you must be brave and keeping trying. If something bad happens, don’t give up. Close your eyes and tell yourself, “I can do it”.手机More and more students in school are having a mobile nowadays. Students may love their mobiles but there is a time and a place for them to use properly. Using a mobile in class can result in (导致) “distracted learning”(分心学习)。
上海中考真题范文初中英语作文
上海中考英语备考训练：写作一，一等文要求，1，结构三段式：第一段：简单明了，开门见山。
如我们想表达小强很强壮，直接说XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，一句足矣。
第二段：分析为什么他强壮。
A. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。
B. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。
第三段：结论，与第一段呼应，但不能完全照，要有升华。
也可以提出希望和建议等。
如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day!2，内容和要点：话题topic必须符合题意，提示的要点必须写全，一个都不能漏写。
确定主题、要点是要发表观点，还是举出例子。
如果有具体提示，写作就等于翻译，把提示内容变换句式翻译到位，全面切题。
如果没有提示，自已提炼，找到主题, 跟主旨无关的话不要写。
3，逻辑合理：递进：first, second, third, finally, to begin with, first of all, in addition, what's more, moreover, on the one hand, on the other hand, the last but not the least。
转折：but, yet, however, as far as I am concerned, in the meantime。
总结：in a word, all in all, in conclusion。
4，语法和亮点：单词拼读和语法必须准确，不可以有错误。
在此基础上，用几个有难度的词汇，编几个高级的句型。
一般词汇和简单句型要限量用，不可占字太多。
二，三段十句话：1，三段布局：高考作文题型多样, 有命题作文和材料作文。
材料作文是根据给出的书面材料, 按要求作文。
上海中考英语作文必背素材
Never Give Up
• My spoken English used to be very poor. I thought I could never make any progress in it. A new English teacher suggested that I should read aloud every day. But at the beginning, I could hardly go on. There were too many new words. I didn't want to study English any more. Just then, a voice told me, “Never give up, come on! "Then I persisted in reading aloud for half an hour every day. Now it is improved a lot. I have even won the first prize in our school's oral English contest.
The Sunset
• Dusk is coming. It’s time for the sunset. Look, the sky is getting dim gradually. The setting sun is covering the earth with golden rays. Not only the sky and water surface but also I myself am turning into golden yellow. Several white birds are flying freely above the water. Willows are dancing in the breeze gracefully. Soon, the sun has buried itself in the thick clouds. But I still can see the beautiful scene in the sunset. It will be always in my mind. I love sunset.
上海中考英语作文分类训练：书信作文
书信作文1．Write at least 60 words on the topic "I am no longer a little child"（以"我不再是一个孩子"为题，写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）背景：如今，我们的父母一方面对我们百般呵护，一方面又时常抱怨我们长不大.请给你的父母写一封信，证明你不再是一个孩子了（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入字数）.The following is for reference only：Dear parents_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________Yoursxxx 2．Suppose you are Kitty and you are writing to your best friend, Anna and telling her about your new penfriend. Complete the letter in at least 50 words to Anna and your letter should include the following（假设你就是Kitty，你正在给你最好的朋友Anna写信介绍你的新笔友。
上海初三英语作文讲义
上海初三英语作文讲义As a junior high school student in Shanghai, the English essay workbook holds a pivotal position in our academic journey. It’s not just a collection of essays and exercises; it’s a gateway to enhancing our language skills and understanding of the subject. The workbook, often downloaded by thousands of students, is a testament to its popularity and utility.The workbook is designed in a way that it gradually introduces complex concepts and writing techniques. The initial chapters focus on basic grammar and sentence structure, gradually moving on to more advanced topics like paragraphs and essays. This progressive approach helps students build a solid foundation in the language.One of the most noteworthy features of the workbook is its emphasis on real-life scenarios. The essays and exercises often revolve around topics that are relevant to students’ daily lives, such as school life, family, friends, and hobbies. This makes the learning process more engaging and relatable, encouraging students to think critically and express their thoughts and feelings.Moreover, the workbook provides ample opportunities for practice. There are numerous exercises and writing prompts that challenge students to apply their knowledge and skills. These exercises range from simple sentence completions to complex essay writing, ensuring that students areconstantly challenged and growing.Another noteworthy aspect is the inclusion of sample essays. These essays, often written by experienced teachers or students, provide a glimpse into what good writing looks like. They not only demonstrate excellent language skills but also serve as inspiration for students to aim higher in their own writing.However, the workbook’s popularity is not just aresult of its content. The clear and concise explanations, coupled with engaging graphics and illustrations, make the learning experience more enjoyable. The workbook is also user-friendly, with ample space for notes and reflections, enabling students to customize their learning experience.In conclusion, the Shanghai junior high school English essay workbook is a comprehensive and engaging resource for students. It not only covers the basics of grammar andwriting but also encourages critical thinking andcreativity. With its focus on real-life scenarios and ample practice opportunities, it is an invaluable tool for students aiming to excel in English.**探索上海初三英语作文讲义的奥秘**在上海的初中学习生涯中，英语作文讲义扮演着举足轻重的角色。
上海中考英语作文分类训练：看图作文
看图作文1．Write at least 60 words according to the pictures about “A spring outing”（根据所给图片，写一篇关于“春游”的短文，题目可以另拟，字数不少于60词，标点符号不占格。
）climb a mountain pick up paper andbottles throw…into dustbins_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________2．Write passage of at least 60 words according to the given picture.（以所给提示和图片为主题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
上海中考英语作文分类训练：话题作文
话题作文1．Write at least 60 words on the topic “Changes of my weekend”（以“我周末生活的变化”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）随着“双减”政策的落实，同学们的周末也发生了欣喜的变化，你们有了更多自主的时间来安排丰富多彩的周末活动，例如：阅读、运动和外出游玩等。
请以“Changes of my weekend” 为题写一篇不少于60字的短文。
谈谈你的周末生活较之前有了哪些变化，这些变化对你的影响，并给出一些建议和畅想。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、学校及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
）_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________2．Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “That day, I made a/an ________”. (以“那天我……”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。
上海中考英语作文例文-背诵复习课程
Writing MaterialTrip / un forgettable experie nee / weeke nd /Last year, I was lucky eno ugh to visit … with my …..Before we went there, we had Change / difficulties / how to lear n En glishLove / tha nk you, xxxWhat can I do for our en vir onment? / gree n con sumer / protect the earth Every one can do somethi ng for our en vir onment. For me, I should try to save electricity in my daily life. For example, if I am the last pers on to leave the classroom, I will always remember to turn off the lights. Besides, in order to protectour forests, I will use paper wisely. I should try to use both sides of paper whe never it is possible. What's more, I will not use things like paper cups and disposable chopsticks because of they are made of wood. I believe that doing all these small things will improve our en vir onment and help make our world a better place to live in和谐社会 / a lovely ShanghaineseAs middle school stude nts in Sha nghai, what should we do? Firstly, we should love our motherla nd, and we should love our hometow ns and take an active part in our school activity. Secon dly, let's fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people, our pare nts and our teachers. We should also care for each other and help those who in n eed. More importa ntly, all of us must be hon est in our daily life. What's more, let's work together to save en ergy and protect our n atural en vir onment, in cludi ng an imals, trees, flowers and grass.健康成长We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several thi ngs. Firstly, we should be brave in front of difficulties. Sec on dly, we must study hard becauseknowledge is power. If we have the power, we can help to build our country and enjoy life better. I n order to study well, we n eed to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day's study. If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.SportsSports and games are beneficial to us . First, sports and games are good for our health. They can make us strong, preve nt us from gett ing too fat, and keep us healthy. What's more, they can make our life richer and more colourful.Jogg ing is now in fashi on. Many people begi n joggi ng because they believe it is very good exercises. It makes your stro nger and helps you lose weight. It can also help you build up con fide nee in yourself.Sports help to keep people healthy, make people wise, train people's characters ,an d,above all, help people to live happily.Playi ng table tennis is my favourite sport. I am so in terested in it that I go to play it with my parents every weekend. I find playing table-tennis one of the effective ways to relax. It has not only build up my health but also my con fide nee in my study.HobbyListe ning to music will make you feel relaxed. Whe never you feel sad, you can just turn on the radio and liste n to some music. Music can relieve your stress. Music can cheer you up whe n you are sad.Lear ning En glishTo lear n En glish well, we must read more, speak more, liste n more and write。
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上海中考英语作文专题指导一、中考英语作文写作模式——“四审四注意”写作法“四审”：一审标题文体格式。
这样可以为下面的写作，如人称、时态、内容、格式等奠定基础；二审人称。
如是以第一人称I或we为主还是以第二人称you 或第三人称she, he, it或they 为主；三审时态。
一般而言，写作时文章应多以现在时（包括一般现在时、一般将来时、现在完成时和现在进行时）或过去时（一般宜用一般过去时和过去进行时）为主，切忌时态混乱；四审内容。
如有提示，应尽量按照所给提示来写，不可偏题乱发挥，可将有关内容提炼分解成几句展开叙述，不可遗漏，这是很重要的一点，一般文章按who，when，where，what，how，why等要素展开。
“四注意”：一注意如果文章没有给出开头结尾，一定要写开头结尾。
当然，开头和结尾的方式不能太落于俗套，要有一定的新意，一般一两句即可，结尾要点题，有所立意；二注意句式要富于变化，不能通篇只有一种句式或句式过于单调，否则即使无语言和内容错误也难得高分，如可适当运用if, when, although等状语从句，I think / I hope / I believe that 等宾语从句，如用定语从句必须有绝对把握；三注意适当运用连接词，如on one hand, on the other hand; what’s more; however等，这样使文章更有层次、更富逻辑性，若语言和内容没问题, 做到第二、三项“注意”就很有希望拿组织结构分。
四注意善于运用有把握的词汇和句型，尽量运用课本所学词句，坚决避免不正确的“中国式英语”，更不能乱“发明”, 一般一篇文章能用8个左右的好短语或句式已很不错。
最后需要提醒考生的是，中考作文要取得高分,词数不能太少也不能太多,笔者觉得, 以80词左右为宜。
另外，书写一定要认真、工整，以免造成不必要的失分。
二、中考英语作文常见语言错误调查分析1. 时态错误2. 时间状语错误3. 名词单复数错误4. 动词误用5. 语态错误6．词性误用7. 介词误用8．某些搭配和惯用法误用F中考英语总复习专项训练题写作专项训练A. 中考英语热门写作话题1. 关于学习Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “How to learn English well”. （以“怎样学好英语”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)●When did you start learning English? (in ... / ... years ago)●How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day ...)●What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar ...)_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2. 关于兴趣Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My interest”. （以“我的兴趣”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)●What is your interest?●Why do you like it so much?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3. 关于写事Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Unforgettable memories”. （以“难忘的回忆”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)●What is your unforgettable memory?●Why do you think it is unforgettable?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4. 关于计划Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My plan for summer holiday”. （以“我的暑期计划”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)●What are you going to do during the coming summer holiday?●Give at least two points.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5. 关于朋友Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My good friend”. （以“我的好朋友”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。