高三英语写作复习讲解分析课件
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高三英语二轮复习读后续写写作思路分析课件(共20张PPT)
试卷讲评课件
As George warmed up, he was still digesting his father's words. "This will be a struggle every second, " the coach emphasized before they got on court to play. "I want to see tough defense, sharp passing, and, above all, smart play as a team. "
试卷讲评课件
重要词汇解读： 1. scoring record - 得分记录，指在体育比赛中个人或团队的最高得分 记录。 2. championship game- 冠军赛，决赛，决定联赛冠军的比赛。 3. anniversary - 周年纪念，指某个事件从开始到现在经过的完整年数。 4. top scorer- 最佳得分手，指在比赛中得分最高的球员。 5. all-time record - 历史记录，指有史以来的最高或最佳记录。 6. teammates - 队友，指在同一团队中共同参与比赛的其他成员。 7. struggle every second - 每秒的奋斗，形容比赛的艰难和紧张。
试卷讲评课件
写作思路分析： 主题: 团队精神和个人成就之间的选择。 情节发展: 乔治面临着打破父亲得分记录的机会，但同时也意识到比赛 的胜利更为重要。 冲突: 乔治个人想要创造历史的愿望与作为团队一员的责任之间的冲突。 解决方案:乔治可能会选择传球给位置更佳的队友，而不是自己强行得分。 结局: 强调团队合作的重要性，以及乔治从父亲那里学到的教训。
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件《polish your writing》
衔接美：使用恰当的连接词
使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
作文例析
• 假定你是李华。你是学生会主席。你校将于5月25—30日 在广州举行龙舟赛 (Dragon Boat Race)。请根据以下内容 给姐妹学校剑桥中学（Cambridge High School)写一封邀 请信。
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
2. After his family were told that he hadn’t passed the exam, they were disappointed.
Having been told that he hadn’t passed the exam, his family were disappointed.
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
Some students agreed on it, because they thought that the senior 3 students worked hard, and they easily felt tired, but the tonic could help them overcome. Besides, they often have no time to do exercise.
Because of his not passing the exam, his family were disappointed.
Not having passed the exam, he made his family disappointed. With him not passing the exam , his family were disappointed
使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
作文例析
• 假定你是李华。你是学生会主席。你校将于5月25—30日 在广州举行龙舟赛 (Dragon Boat Race)。请根据以下内容 给姐妹学校剑桥中学（Cambridge High School)写一封邀 请信。
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
2. After his family were told that he hadn’t passed the exam, they were disappointed.
Having been told that he hadn’t passed the exam, his family were disappointed.
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
Some students agreed on it, because they thought that the senior 3 students worked hard, and they easily felt tired, but the tonic could help them overcome. Besides, they often have no time to do exercise.
Because of his not passing the exam, his family were disappointed.
Not having passed the exam, he made his family disappointed. With him not passing the exam , his family were disappointed
高考英语概要写作讲解+课件-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项
并用自己的话简单地写出来。（一句话） ➢ 写下每个主要想法的关键支持点，不要涉及小细节。 ➢ 以符合逻辑的顺序组织主要和相关的支持点，实现连贯性的必要过渡。 ➢ 校对语法、拼写和标点错误等。
概要写作（小作文）
把握文体特点
记叙文
六要素：what who when where why how
概要写作（小作文）
概要写作（小ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ文）
如何获取一篇文章的要点信息
④Finally, the anxiety of dating is greatly lessened with cyber-dating. Traditionally, men take the lead in dating. They are the ones who have to ask a woman out on a date. They have to risk rejection. It’s no better for women, however. Many women still wait for a man to ask them out first. Then, if they don’t want to go out with him, they have to let the man down gently. While it’s true that sometimes with cyber-dating men still get rejected and women still reject, you experience this in the privacy of your own home. Moreover, you never have to see the person again because you have never met! It’s the perfect solution.
概要写作（小作文）
把握文体特点
记叙文
六要素：what who when where why how
概要写作（小作文）
概要写作（小ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ文）
如何获取一篇文章的要点信息
④Finally, the anxiety of dating is greatly lessened with cyber-dating. Traditionally, men take the lead in dating. They are the ones who have to ask a woman out on a date. They have to risk rejection. It’s no better for women, however. Many women still wait for a man to ask them out first. Then, if they don’t want to go out with him, they have to let the man down gently. While it’s true that sometimes with cyber-dating men still get rejected and women still reject, you experience this in the privacy of your own home. Moreover, you never have to see the person again because you have never met! It’s the perfect solution.
高三英语复习课(写作)精品PPT课件
周末活动
减负前
减负后
白天
上课、做作业
参观博物馆、学习电脑、绘画等
晚上
做作业
看新闻、读书、看报
就寝时间
11：30
10：30
注意：1词数100左右；2开头已写好。生词：减轻学习负担— reduce learning load Dear Dick,
How nice to hear from you again.
1．休息； 2.读书； 3.陪伴父母； 4.参加社会活动； 注意：1.词数100左右，信的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数）；
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3.参考词汇：高考college entrance examination
社会活动social activities Dear Henry，
① the plan；the college entrance examination ② a rest ③ do some reading ④ stay with my parents ⑤ take part in social activities
3.联词成句，把中心词或词组扩展成句子。
① It’s a pleasure for me to tell you my plan of this coming
高考书面表达备考指导
PartI书面表达的五个步骤
1. 仔细审题，注意文字信息和图画信息，判断其主题、 体裁、人称、时态、要求（格式、生词和字数）。
示例：（2001年高考题）假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友 Dick 听说中国的中小 学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请根据下表提供的信息，写一 封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。
高考英语写作专题复习备考讲座课件
三、动笔成文
确定好文章中心后，列好提纲，方可动笔写作，一气呵成。 写作时可根据题目的主题和要求套用适当的模板，把材料按照一 定的逻辑顺序组织起来，使用一些关联词使文章丰满，上下连贯 ，同时把各个句子和段落连接起来，使文章衔接自然，语言流畅 ，符合英语的表达习惯。对于与要求无关的内容切忌任意发挥， 画蛇添足。
3. 我看到了一些不良行为。
I found some bad behavior.
→ I found some bad behavior.I was quite disappointed to find some bad behavior. (心理 )
方法三 添加与所给信息有关的原因，结果，条 件，让步，手段，目的等内容
). 33.5% of the students feel happy that their parents trust them ，laying a basic foundation for family communication (3) (扩展 句). 31.7% are content to be in the equal position with their parents when they are talking with each other (4) (扩展句)．
此外，三段之间要灵活运用“启、承、转、合”的过 渡手段。
利用十句作文法要注意：
(1) 选好开头句 (做到概括性强，表达清楚，主题突出) (2) 合理安排结构 (3) 恰当选择句型
下面是一篇典型的十句作文法的例子。
假如你校最近就“家长应该如何对待孩子”的问题进行了调 查，结果如下。请根据图表1中提供的信息描述调查结果，并针对 图表2中的一个数据所反映的情况表达你的看法。
确定好文章中心后，列好提纲，方可动笔写作，一气呵成。 写作时可根据题目的主题和要求套用适当的模板，把材料按照一 定的逻辑顺序组织起来，使用一些关联词使文章丰满，上下连贯 ，同时把各个句子和段落连接起来，使文章衔接自然，语言流畅 ，符合英语的表达习惯。对于与要求无关的内容切忌任意发挥， 画蛇添足。
3. 我看到了一些不良行为。
I found some bad behavior.
→ I found some bad behavior.I was quite disappointed to find some bad behavior. (心理 )
方法三 添加与所给信息有关的原因，结果，条 件，让步，手段，目的等内容
). 33.5% of the students feel happy that their parents trust them ，laying a basic foundation for family communication (3) (扩展 句). 31.7% are content to be in the equal position with their parents when they are talking with each other (4) (扩展句)．
此外，三段之间要灵活运用“启、承、转、合”的过 渡手段。
利用十句作文法要注意：
(1) 选好开头句 (做到概括性强，表达清楚，主题突出) (2) 合理安排结构 (3) 恰当选择句型
下面是一篇典型的十句作文法的例子。
假如你校最近就“家长应该如何对待孩子”的问题进行了调 查，结果如下。请根据图表1中提供的信息描述调查结果，并针对 图表2中的一个数据所反映的情况表达你的看法。
2023届高三英语应用文写作复习课件
【整体思路】首先，根据开头给出的句子简要分析 网上学习具体有何优势，为什么重要。然后分析另 一方面：网上学习的不足之处。针对网上学习的缺 点，提出自己的学习建议。最后，总结以上内容， 再以演讲稿的套语结尾，如Thanks for your attention！
Be smart online learners Learning online has become an important way to study recently. As a matter of fact, we benefit a lot from the rapid pace of the Internet development. For example, we are taking advantage of various online programs for further study, which allow us to learn wherever we are at any time, making it easier to earn a degree. However, it can be difficult for some students without self-control and self-discipline. Therefore, I would like to recommend tips to be smart online learners. First, get organized and make sure we have materials on hand to take reliable notes.Besides,making a good schedule is a must,for good time management will contribute to our efficiency. I am fully convinced that with the tips above we will become smart online learners and get the most value out of our next class. Thanks for your attention!
高三英语一轮复习应用文写作讲解专项课件
2、语言水平欠缺导致语言本身的语用失误 This way have a big problem. I’m honored to write this letter.
3、模板套句影响，不知变通 I’m writing to tell you. You should
4、母语影响，无法进行符合英语礼节的交际导致社交语用失误。 It’s wrong to divide...
I would appreciate it if you could put me on the right track. Looking forward to your reply. (117w)
Yours sincerely Li Hua
（2023.6全国卷英语）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生 随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存 在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
应用文：书信体
2024届温州一模+2023.6英语高考
Shirley Hu
试题分析
培养学生解决问题的思维能力
（2023.11温州一模）假定你是李华，在外刊阅读中遇到了困难，尝试一 些方法后仍未达到预期效果，请你给外教 Marcus 写一封邮件寻求帮助， 内容包括:1. 尝试方法; 2. 请求指导。
缺乏动力： lack motivation
英语水平不均衡 unbalanced English levels/proficiency/ability
阻碍进步：prevent students from making progress/hinder the progress
3、模板套句影响，不知变通 I’m writing to tell you. You should
4、母语影响，无法进行符合英语礼节的交际导致社交语用失误。 It’s wrong to divide...
I would appreciate it if you could put me on the right track. Looking forward to your reply. (117w)
Yours sincerely Li Hua
（2023.6全国卷英语）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生 随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存 在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
应用文：书信体
2024届温州一模+2023.6英语高考
Shirley Hu
试题分析
培养学生解决问题的思维能力
（2023.11温州一模）假定你是李华，在外刊阅读中遇到了困难，尝试一 些方法后仍未达到预期效果，请你给外教 Marcus 写一封邮件寻求帮助， 内容包括:1. 尝试方法; 2. 请求指导。
缺乏动力： lack motivation
英语水平不均衡 unbalanced English levels/proficiency/ability
阻碍进步：prevent students from making progress/hinder the progress
高三英语高考作文分析指导写作中小学PPT教学课件
• 2.该产品已售完,无法更换
The model has been sold out . They can’t change a new one for me.
• 3.型号新,无配件,法维修
It is a new model in China. It is impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.
no spare parts; repair/fix/maintain • Point 4：require/request sb. to do sth 或demand of sb. to do sth.
3.连词成句
• 1.手机不响铃,不能发短信
It doesn’t ring . It doesn’t send short messages.
3.型号新,无配件,无法维修 整合前： It is a new model in
China. It is impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. 整合后：
a.Since it’s a new model and there’re no spare parts,I can’t get it repaired .（原因状语从句）
c. All that I request of your company is that you should get my phone changed as soon as possible.(定语从句 和表语从句）
d. I hope that my requirement that you should change a new phone of the same model for me can be satisfied as soon as possible. (宾语从 句、同位语从句、虚拟语气及被 动语态)
The model has been sold out . They can’t change a new one for me.
• 3.型号新,无配件,法维修
It is a new model in China. It is impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.
no spare parts; repair/fix/maintain • Point 4：require/request sb. to do sth 或demand of sb. to do sth.
3.连词成句
• 1.手机不响铃,不能发短信
It doesn’t ring . It doesn’t send short messages.
3.型号新,无配件,无法维修 整合前： It is a new model in
China. It is impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. 整合后：
a.Since it’s a new model and there’re no spare parts,I can’t get it repaired .（原因状语从句）
c. All that I request of your company is that you should get my phone changed as soon as possible.(定语从句 和表语从句）
d. I hope that my requirement that you should change a new phone of the same model for me can be satisfied as soon as possible. (宾语从 句、同位语从句、虚拟语气及被 动语态)
2024届高三英语二轮复习应用文写作课件
（详述个人优势和能做的事情）Firstly， my fluent English enables me to communicate smoothly with British painting
lovers. Moreover, with a wide knowledge of Chinese painting, I can introduce the art form better. （利用介词短语说明自己的第二个优势）Better yet, I've participated in several similar activities, which equipped me with relevant experience. （非限制性定语从句十高级表达，说明相关工作经验）
Dear Miss Evans,
（说明写信目的）How is everything going？ I’m writing to ask you for advice regarding a play we have adapted from our
textbook. (利用高级词汇regarding和定语从句，说明求助事项)
Dear Mr Henry, How is everything going these days?①I’m writing to seek help from you .（我写信向你求助）. While preparing to attend MUN next week, I have some difficulty with concepts and expressions of the current affairs and
Dear Steven, I can't wait to inform you a rope skipping competition will be held on our school playground next Friday. ①I'd like to invite
lovers. Moreover, with a wide knowledge of Chinese painting, I can introduce the art form better. （利用介词短语说明自己的第二个优势）Better yet, I've participated in several similar activities, which equipped me with relevant experience. （非限制性定语从句十高级表达，说明相关工作经验）
Dear Miss Evans,
（说明写信目的）How is everything going？ I’m writing to ask you for advice regarding a play we have adapted from our
textbook. (利用高级词汇regarding和定语从句，说明求助事项)
Dear Mr Henry, How is everything going these days?①I’m writing to seek help from you .（我写信向你求助）. While preparing to attend MUN next week, I have some difficulty with concepts and expressions of the current affairs and
Dear Steven, I can't wait to inform you a rope skipping competition will be held on our school playground next Friday. ①I'd like to invite
精品高三高考英语作文复习PPT课件
二、表解释：
that
is to say, in other words, or rather Eg. These animals are all used to their environm ent; that is , they have learned how to live succe ssfully in their habitat. Eg. We stayed at my friend’s house , or rather at my friend’s parents’ house.
Just as the saying goes#34;.
As the proverb goes: “Every coin has its two sid es”. 正像谚语所说：“任何硬币都有两面”.
第一步，审题。
拿到题目后，手中拿铅笔，手脑眼嘴并用， 开始审题.看题目的要求是什么，要点是什么， 特殊要求是什么,最好用铅笔划下来，以免出错
三、表示“反意见”：
but,
however, still, yet, after all, in spite of, on the contrary, on the other hand等 Eg. Jim is intelligent but lazy. Singapore is not a big country.On the contrary, it is very small.
第二步，草稿。
1.结构就是你打算分几段写，每段都写什么？哪段转哪段承 哪段起合？心里都要是有谱的。 2.关键词：结构拟定后，迅速在草稿纸上写下自己这篇作文 可能用到的一些关键词。包括一些漂亮的词和自己可能会 忘记的词。主要是动词和名词。
《高三英语书面表达复习》PPT课件
the town. No matter how much you want to bathe, it just isn’t safe. How can they get rid of waste water in this way?
重点句型
Other waste may be thrown into the sea, either 19 kilometers from land, or more than 40 kilometers from land, depending on the nature of the materials.
文字提示--举一反三
有些人以为某些数字，比如6，8，9等会带来好 运。他们在选择车牌号，电话号码时不惜花费 “择号费”要这些数字。而你本人却不相信这些。 你认为成功和财富与所谓的吉祥数字无关，要靠 自己艰苦的劳动和努力。请你根据以上内容写一 篇文章，词数100。
关键动词：
believe，think, hold the view, consider choose, decide, like, prefer spend money on, cost much money, pay much for, charge for depend on, have to work hard, lie in, result from
5．高考书面表达要求
测试考生的英语书面表达能力。 共两小题，35分，其中第一小题20分，第二小题
15分。 书面表达提供必要的提示。提示包括目的、 过程、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提示的形式 有文字、图画、图表等。 第一小题（情景作文）要求考生根据所给的情景 用英语写一篇约100个单词的短文。 第二小题（开放作文）要求考生根据简略提示， 写一篇不少于50个单词的短文。
重点句型
Other waste may be thrown into the sea, either 19 kilometers from land, or more than 40 kilometers from land, depending on the nature of the materials.
文字提示--举一反三
有些人以为某些数字，比如6，8，9等会带来好 运。他们在选择车牌号，电话号码时不惜花费 “择号费”要这些数字。而你本人却不相信这些。 你认为成功和财富与所谓的吉祥数字无关，要靠 自己艰苦的劳动和努力。请你根据以上内容写一 篇文章，词数100。
关键动词：
believe，think, hold the view, consider choose, decide, like, prefer spend money on, cost much money, pay much for, charge for depend on, have to work hard, lie in, result from
5．高考书面表达要求
测试考生的英语书面表达能力。 共两小题，35分，其中第一小题20分，第二小题
15分。 书面表达提供必要的提示。提示包括目的、 过程、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提示的形式 有文字、图画、图表等。 第一小题（情景作文）要求考生根据所给的情景 用英语写一篇约100个单词的短文。 第二小题（开放作文）要求考生根据简略提示， 写一篇不少于50个单词的短文。
高三英语作文复习和讲评(29张)PPT课件
E. 热点话题写作训练。（结合高三复习
11—3月
资料《高考调研》）（15个话题）
1-2个板块/周
1话题/周
（2）时间安排 ：从九月下旬开始，跟随一轮复习的步骤和
安排进行，定好每月每周的复习写作计划。
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（二）具体复习实施策略
A. 书写训练(1课时)： （1）重要性：
B.英语教学大纲对书写也提出具体要求： 能用书写体熟练，清楚地书写大小写， 词句，标点等运用正确、规范。
C.英语作文评分标准：如果书写书面较差，将作文降一个档次。
（2）让书写较差的学生，从大小写字母开始练习，然后 抄写词、句、段和篇章，最后自由书写。
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B. 写作流程指导（四步法）（ 1课时）
审题： 作文题目要求是什么？是否要写标题？是什么体裁？有哪 些要点？应分几段来写？用什么人称和时态？有无特殊要 求？（重要信息，最好用铅笔勾下来，以免出错）
草稿： 1.不建议：全草稿和不打草稿。 2.结构（写几段，每段写什么，哪段转哪段承哪段）
关键词（关键单词和短语） 句式 （高级句式）
遣词造句
成文： 1.注意语言的自然流畅，清楚正确地表达。 2.注意书写和卷面的美观性（规范，清楚，干净、整洁）
＊模板的运用
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＊使用正确简单句表达内容（先无错）:
五大基本句型：
1）主语+ 不及物动词 （S+Vi.） 2）主语+及物动词+宾语 （S+Vt.+O） 3）主语+及物动词+间宾+直宾（S+Vt.+O+O） 4）主语+系动词+表语（S+Link-V+P） 5）主语+及物动词+宾语+宾补（S+Vt.+O+C） 附： There be/exist/stand/live//lie/…………. （第六句型） 强调： 一个句子至少要有“主语+谓语” （除特殊句式外，如祈使句，省略句
高中英语高考高考英语总复习课件：高考四联图作文写作技巧 (共47张PPT)
情景作文写作四“绝杀”： 绝杀1. 主题先行+双线并行（动作+感情） 绝杀2. 矛盾冲突+心理发展 绝杀3. 联想画面+细节补充 绝杀4. 起承转合+合理分段
文章结构 1.主题段：一句话概括这个故事 2.展开段：按顺序描述四幅图 （时间地点、天气人物、工具事件、动作心情） 3.总结段：所感所悟
【例4】
money, which embodied our sincerely love and hope for the poor
children to the post office. When I was filling the post list, I felt so proud of my classmates and me. Though the little donations from us wouldn’t completely change the life of the children, I hope our action can bring them hope to fight against the adversities of life.For I know, love is such a little thing, but it has the strength to change the world.
did we donate our pocket money, but also a lot of useful goods were donated, such as school bags and quilts.
As soon as the donating party ended, we carried the goods and
高三英语二轮复习专项应用文写作指导课件(共21张PPT)
Praise+Meaning+(Expectations)
Getting to Know the Plants Around UsLast week, with the purpose of learning more about the importance of ecological balance, all students in our school participated in the field trip themed Getting to Know the Plants around Us.The meaningful activity began with a 30-minute instruction in each classroom, where students were instructed about basic principlesof scientific observation, Then, the enthusiastic participants were led to a tiny forest to identify different kinds of tree species. Observing plants attentively, each student eagerly shared their findingsThe activity proved an incredibly great success as not only did it facilitate students‘ development but also it deepened their insight into the plant world.
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Getting to Know the Plants Around UsLast week, with the purpose of learning more about the importance of ecological balance, all students in our school participated in the field trip themed Getting to Know the Plants around Us.The meaningful activity began with a 30-minute instruction in each classroom, where students were instructed about basic principlesof scientific observation, Then, the enthusiastic participants were led to a tiny forest to identify different kinds of tree species. Observing plants attentively, each student eagerly shared their findingsThe activity proved an incredibly great success as not only did it facilitate students‘ development but also it deepened their insight into the plant world.
Para.2
Para.3
高三英语复习写作课说课课件 (共46张PPT)
2.表转折关系： but, yet, while, however等 3.表因果关系：first, second, later, finally, at last等 4.表顺序： for, so, because of, thanks to 5.表解释说明：such as, for example，and so on等 6.表递进关系： what’s more，besides等 7.表总结：in short, in brief, in a word, in general等 8.强调: indeed(确实)，above all(尤其), even so等。
③Not only is she helpful in life, but also her teaching methods are unique. For example, she knows how to make her lessons lively and interesting and we are crazy about her lessons; ④ Besides, Miss Sun gets on well with us and she is very popular among students. In a word, Miss Sun is a unique teacher, and we all love her and her teaching!
Pre-writing：
1、审——仔细阅读写作要求及注 意事项；
2、定——确定体裁，人称和时态 及篇章结构；
Writing：
3、列——列出要点，重要词组及句型；
4、连——整理成篇，行文连贯；
Rewriting：
5、美——润色丰富要点； 6、改——查错改错;
③Not only is she helpful in life, but also her teaching methods are unique. For example, she knows how to make her lessons lively and interesting and we are crazy about her lessons; ④ Besides, Miss Sun gets on well with us and she is very popular among students. In a word, Miss Sun is a unique teacher, and we all love her and her teaching!
Pre-writing：
1、审——仔细阅读写作要求及注 意事项；
2、定——确定体裁，人称和时态 及篇章结构；
Writing：
3、列——列出要点，重要词组及句型；
4、连——整理成篇，行文连贯；
Rewriting：
5、美——润色丰富要点； 6、改——查错改错;
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I prefer to go in July because I will have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful, but I’d like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture. With the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games more and more foreigners are eager to know about China. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture.
２００５年湖南高考英语写作
题目要求：假设你是李平，最近参加了由某电视台举办 的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去 北京参加一次英语夏令营活动，现就有关事项，征求你 的意见．请根据下表所提供的信息，用英语以书信形式 给予答复。 注意： ７月１５日－２２日或８月 １选择适合你的时间 活动时间 １５日－２２日 并说明理由．
Mary is opening the door,and John is greeting her guests.
请用括号中所给的词把此组句子 连接为一个复合句。
I still remember the day .I first came to Beijing on that day.(when)
It’s been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp.
Thank you very much． Yours truly,
Li Ping
高分作文的标准（２１－２５分）：
并列句 (The compound sentence)
复合句 (The complex sentence)
请用合适的并列连词把每组句子合并为一个并列 句。 并列句
1. I turned on the TV.I watched it.
I turned on the TV and watched it.
１．完全完成了规定任务；
２．覆盖所有内容要点；
３．应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;
４．语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误但为尽力使 用较复杂或较高级词汇所致，具备了较强的语言 运用能力；
５．有效的使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构 紧凑；
６．完全达到了预期的写作目的．
Ⅰ英语句子的种类
简单句 (The simple sentence)
优点：完成了试题规定的任务．应用的
语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求．应 用了简单的语句的连接成分，使全文结 构紧凑，无语法错误，达到了预期的写 作目的。 句式单一。对建议的表达缺乏思想性。
缺点：没有应用较多的语法结构和词汇，
参考范文
Dear Sir or Madame, I am very glad to be invited to the English summer camp.
活动内容
参加英语角／学唱英语歌曲 听英语讲座／表演英语短剧 看英语电影／教外教学中文
２选择两项你喜欢的活 动并说明理由． ３对活动的内容提出至 少一个建议或要求． ４词数１００左右． ５信的开头和结尾已经 给出．
对活动内容 的建议或要 求
考生作品
Dear Sir or Madame, I am very glad to be invited to the English summer camp. I prefer to go in August, because I am free at that time. I like to take part in English Corner and learn to sing English songs. I like English corner because I want to use English to talk with others. I like English songs because my parents are artists. At the same time, I suggest that all the activities should be organized together and then we will have a good time together. Thanks a lot. Yours truly, Li Ping
2. I bought my sister a present.She
didn’t like it.
I bought my sister a present,but she didn’t like it.
3.He was tired. He went to bed. He was tired, so he went to bed.
I still remember the day when I first cld hid behind his mother's skirt. He was afraid of the dog.
The child hid behind his mother's skirt,for he was afraid of the dog.
3.He made a promise.He didn’t keep it. He made a promise, but he didn’t keep it. 4.Mary is opening the door. John is greeting her guests.
２００５年湖南高考英语写作
题目要求：假设你是李平，最近参加了由某电视台举办 的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去 北京参加一次英语夏令营活动，现就有关事项，征求你 的意见．请根据下表所提供的信息，用英语以书信形式 给予答复。 注意： ７月１５日－２２日或８月 １选择适合你的时间 活动时间 １５日－２２日 并说明理由．
Mary is opening the door,and John is greeting her guests.
请用括号中所给的词把此组句子 连接为一个复合句。
I still remember the day .I first came to Beijing on that day.(when)
It’s been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp.
Thank you very much． Yours truly,
Li Ping
高分作文的标准（２１－２５分）：
并列句 (The compound sentence)
复合句 (The complex sentence)
请用合适的并列连词把每组句子合并为一个并列 句。 并列句
1. I turned on the TV.I watched it.
I turned on the TV and watched it.
１．完全完成了规定任务；
２．覆盖所有内容要点；
３．应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;
４．语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误但为尽力使 用较复杂或较高级词汇所致，具备了较强的语言 运用能力；
５．有效的使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构 紧凑；
６．完全达到了预期的写作目的．
Ⅰ英语句子的种类
简单句 (The simple sentence)
优点：完成了试题规定的任务．应用的
语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求．应 用了简单的语句的连接成分，使全文结 构紧凑，无语法错误，达到了预期的写 作目的。 句式单一。对建议的表达缺乏思想性。
缺点：没有应用较多的语法结构和词汇，
参考范文
Dear Sir or Madame, I am very glad to be invited to the English summer camp.
活动内容
参加英语角／学唱英语歌曲 听英语讲座／表演英语短剧 看英语电影／教外教学中文
２选择两项你喜欢的活 动并说明理由． ３对活动的内容提出至 少一个建议或要求． ４词数１００左右． ５信的开头和结尾已经 给出．
对活动内容 的建议或要 求
考生作品
Dear Sir or Madame, I am very glad to be invited to the English summer camp. I prefer to go in August, because I am free at that time. I like to take part in English Corner and learn to sing English songs. I like English corner because I want to use English to talk with others. I like English songs because my parents are artists. At the same time, I suggest that all the activities should be organized together and then we will have a good time together. Thanks a lot. Yours truly, Li Ping
2. I bought my sister a present.She
didn’t like it.
I bought my sister a present,but she didn’t like it.
3.He was tired. He went to bed. He was tired, so he went to bed.
I still remember the day when I first cld hid behind his mother's skirt. He was afraid of the dog.
The child hid behind his mother's skirt,for he was afraid of the dog.
3.He made a promise.He didn’t keep it. He made a promise, but he didn’t keep it. 4.Mary is opening the door. John is greeting her guests.