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英语考研作文范文(精选十一篇)英语考研作文范文(篇一)Suppose your class is to hold a charity sale for kids in need of help. Write your classmates an email to1) inform them about the details, and2) encourage them to participate.You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.Do not use your own name. Use "Li Ming" instead.Do not write your address. (10 points)【范文】My dear classmates,May I have your attention, please? On the evening of January 4th, 2023, namely, this Friday night, we will hold a charity sale at the school auditorium for the purpose of helping the children who need help.Those kids who come from remote areas lack proper and fine education. Our assistance can improve their lives and even may change their destinies. Some stars, local industrial bosses and all thestaff of our school will attend the activity.I trust that everyone has a kind heart and believe that our help can really make a big difference. Thank you very much for your kindness and I am looking forward to seeing you on time.Yours sincerely,Li Ming(注:电子邮件的格式可以采用“齐头式”,即为了换行方便而每行开头都以顶头的格式对齐。
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顾家北 0813精品班作文大作文Man.peopl.thin.i.i.ver.importan.t.protec.th.environmen.bu.t he.mak.n.effor.t.d.i.themselves.Wh.d.yo.thin.i.i.th.case.Wh a.action.ca.b.don.t.ensur.tha.individual.protec.th.environm ent?顾家北Environmenta.problem.hav.threatene.th.worl.bu.fe.peopl.hav. chose.t.tak.an.actio.t.dea.wit.thes.problems.althoug.the.re alis.th.impac.o.thes.environmenta.woe.o.thei.lives.W.shoul. implemen.som.change.t.improv.th.situation.Man.peopl.spen.mone.wisely.s.the.ar.no.willin.t.purchas.env ironmentall.friendl.products.despit.th.fac.tha.thes.product .ca.hel.preserv.th.environment.Thes.product.ar.normall.mor.expensiv.tha.conventiona.counte rparts.Fo.example.LE.lightin.device.ar.energ.efficient.bu.n ormall.charg.consumer..highe.pric.tha.traditiona.ligh.bulbs .Electri.car.ar.normall.likel.t.cos.mor.mone.tha.thos.vehic le.powere.b.petrol.A.consumer.d.no.op.fo.thes.gree.products .i.i.no.eas.t.conserv.resource.an.reduc.pollution.Anothe.reaso.i.tha.man.peopl.ar.no.willin.t.chang.thei.way. o.life.eve.thoug.thes.lifestyle.ca.b.harmfu.t.th.environmen t..o.electrica.equipmen.ha.le.t..shar.ris.i.electricit.c onsumption.whic.mean.tha.th.powe.generatio.secto.ha..highe. deman.fo.fossi.fuels.Peopl.als.prefe.t.trave.b.car.bu.ca.em ission.ca.caus.globa.warming.whic.i..threa.t.th.environment .Th.relianc.o.differen.electroni.product.includin.mobil.pho ndfil.si tes.●ernment.ca.enaw.t.forbi.thos.behaviour.whic.ca.caus.damag.t.th.environment.suc.a.disposin.o.wast.carelessly.Thos.wh.dro.li tte.shoul.b.fined.s.th.environmenta.impac.o.thi.behaviou .ca.b.reduced.Anothe.solutio.i.t.offe.subsidie.t.encourag.peopl.t.g.green.Fo.example.thos.consumer.wh.bu.fue.efficien.car.ca.b.subsidised.s.ca.emission.ca.b.reduce.sign ificantly.●Currently, more and more people are aware of the importance ofenvironmental protection but the public never give priority to protect environment during their daily life.On.reaso.account.fo.th.phenomeno.i.tha.peopl.liv.carefull.w ithou.spendin.thei.mone.o.environmenta.products.Household.l iv.wit..tigh.budge.ar.no.willin.t.spen.thei.mone.thes.produ cts.whos.price.ar.highe.tha.othe.simila.goods.Fo.instance.L E.light.ar.energ.saving.bu.the.ar.mor.expensiv.tha.incandes cen.bulbs.Similarly.price.o.electri.vehicle.ar.highe.tha.th os.o.traditiona.vehicle.averagely.Fo.th.sak.o.money.peopl.q ui.buyin.gree.product.an.thi.i.contrar.t.ou.purpos.o.enviro nmenta.protection.Anothe.reaso.ca.b.tha.peopl.ar.no.willin.t.chang.thei.livin .styles.whic.nee.t.consum.variou.kind.o.energy.Fo.example.e lectroni.appliance.consum.electricit.whil.drivin.consume.pe trol.Especiall.thos.wh.ar.fon.o.plent.o.material.consum.mor e.w.t .ba.citizen.fro.doin.detrimenta.behaviour.t.environment.Pun ishment.ar.imperativ.fo.thos.wh.littered.O.th.othe.hand.i.iernmen.t.giv.subsidie.t.encourag.en vironmenta.protection.Som.countries.suc.a.China.provid.subs idie.fo.thos.wh.purchasin.vehicle.unde.1.6L.All in all, only through the joint efforts of government and individuals can we live in a sustainable environment.rg.proportio.o.childre.ar.expose.t.a.ocea.o.co mmercia.advertisement.da.t.day..a.o.th.sid.tha.th.ads.whic. purposel.incit.kid.t.bu.snacks.toy.an.electroni.games.shoul .b.limite.o.even.banned.Suppos.tha.ad.ai.t.kid.wer.rectified.childre.wil.no.reques. c.sensiti vit.t.price.nevertheless.parent.ten.t.satisf.thei.materia.n eeds.Fo.instance.som.childre.lik.expensiv.toy.an.girl.ar.i. favo.o.clothes.Thi.wil.brin..heav.burde.fo.th.middle-clas.f amilies.Onl.b.minimiz.th.impac.o.ad.o.kid.ca.th.proble.b.av oided.Childre.ma.hav.eccentri.behaviour.an.ba.livin.habit.du.t.th .ads.Som.kid.ar.fan.o.fas.food.sinc.the.se.ad.o.i.ever.day. Other.ar.i.ba.temper.du.t.th.violen.game.the.pla.daily.Th.p redominanc.o.game.i.als.resulte.fro.merchants.propaganda.Al .thes.problem.wil.influenc.th.health.growt.proces.o.kid.bot .physicall.an.mentally.However.w.canno.den.tha.som.ad.d.hav.thei.advantage.t.kids. k.wheat.etc. cationa.toys.Parent prehensiv.v erdic.accordin.t.advertisements.ernmen.ba.ad.whos.targe.c onsumer.ar.kids.especiall.i.thei.product.ar.harmfu.t.childr en.Bu.i.th.product.th.advertisement.focu.o.ar.beneficial.th e.th.ad.shoul.b.allowed.小作文第一篇i.of.i.Pola nd.Denmark.Germany.Ital.an.Hungary.Th.tw.colon.ar.th.figure .o.youn.peopl.(age.fro.15-24.an.al.citizen.respectively.Th.highes.unemploymen.rat.fo.youn.goe.t.Poland.whic.reache.37.an.i.twic.mor.tha.th.rat.o.it.overal.rat.15%.Comin.nex.i .Italy.Th.proportio.o.it.youn.citizen.wh.ar.ou.o.wor.i.23.a e.t.to.a.18%.Hungar.show. mediocr.rate.o.21.an.17%.An.Germa.figure.ar.4.an.3.lowe.tha .Denmar.respectively.Denmar.keep.bot.figure.lowest.wit.th.u nemploymen.rat.fo.15-2.ag.grou.8.an.fo.overal.onl.3%.Al.o.th.fiv.countrie.sho.3~5.rate.lowe.o.overal.unemploymen rges.ga.betwe e.th.tw.figures.第二篇The bar charts provide us information about how families in an Asian country spent their money in 1998 and 2008..glanc.a.th.chart.tell.tha.expenditur.o.differen.good.i.200 .overweighe.tha.i.199.excep.tha.spen.o.clothes.Peopl.gav.mu c.mor.priorit.t.spiritua.enjoymen.whic.lea.t..hug.increas.o.expenditur.o.holiday.eatin.out.readin.(newspaper.an.magazi nes.an.goin.t.cinema.risin.fro.8.t.15%.6.t.15%,3.t.8.an.3%t .5.respectively.Th.cost.fo.electroni.good.als.increase.fro.12.to14.durin.th.decade.Th.onl.differenc.i.expenditur.o.clothe.whic.wa.totall.oppos it.t.th.mainstream.Th.proportio.o.i.wa.10.i.1998.howeve.i.d roppe.t.hal.o.it.origina.rate.i.2008.All in all, the past 10 years witnessed a huge change of the expenditure on various of aspects for households.第三篇The charts tell the proportion of different categories of house people live in three parts of Australia in 2001 and 2006.I.2001.Victori.ha.76.resident.i.house.12.i.semi-detache.hou se.11%i.apartment.an.th.res.i.othe.types.I.NSW.hous.als.acc rges.par.o.66%.wit.10.an.13.i.duple.an.fla.re rges .proportio.o.hous.livin.population.whic.reache.88%.ter.th.rate.fo.hous.al.droppe.2.i.th.thre.region s.A.fo.semi-detache.house.Victoria.NS.an.Tasmani.sa.1.incre ase.1percen.decreas.an.stabilit.respectively.Th.figure.o.fl a.al.ha..slightl.increase.An.fo.th.res.unmentione.types.the .remaine.th.sam.a.1.excep.NS.ros.fro.11.t.12%.pare.fiv.Europea.countrie.i.term.o.th.proportion .o.unemploye.peopl.a.wel.a.th.figure.fo.thos.youn.peopl.ou. o.work.Polan.ha.th.highes.yout.unemploymen.rat.a.37%.nearl.fiv.tim e.th.leve.i.Denmark.Th.level.o.unemploymen.fo.youn.peopl.wer.simila.i.othe.coun tries.wit.th.highes.see.i.Ital.23.an.th.lowes.i.German.a.17 %.I.i.clea.fro.th.tabl.tha.i.al.thes.countries.th.unemploymen .rat.fo.th.younge.generatio.wa.highe.tha.th.overal.unemploy men.figures.Interestingly.Poland.Germany.Ital.an.Hungar.ha. simila.unemploymen.rates.rangin.betwee.15.an.18%.Th.figur.f o.Denmar.wa.significantl.lowe.a.3%.Overall.yout.unemploymen.wa.mor.seriou.i.Polan.tha.i.othe.c ountries.Denmar.ha.th.lowes.figure.fo.bot.yout.unemploymen.an.overal.unemployment.whil.othe.countrie.ha.simila.figure. fo.thes.problems.流程图写作.coco.bean.t.produc.severa.foo.it em.fo.customers.Firstly.whol.bean.ar.carefull.pickin.befor.dryin.i.th.shell .The.the.ar.presse.int.coco.liquor.whic.i.th.mai.materia.o. th.secon.stage.The.coco.liquo.i.furthe.presse.unti.i.become ..coc.cake.whic.i.directl.sen.t.industr.t.mak.cake.an.drink .o.i.sol.t.th.consume.afte.grinde.int.coco.powder.Th.coco.l iquo.ca.als.conver.int.coco.an.the.b.sen.t.relevan.industry .Coco.liquor.afte.furthe.refining.mi.wit.coco.an.suga.turn. t.industr.chocolate.Finishe.chocolat.product.wil.b.pu.o.th. shell.befor.th.fina.process.e.t.produc.coco.powder.chocolat.p roduct.an.ingredient.fo.relevan.industr.throug.thre.simpl.s tage.startin.fro.pre-processin.ra.materia.t.fina.packagin.f o.sell.顾家北Th.whol.bean.ar.picke.a.th.firs.stag.wit.shell.removed.an.t he.drie.an.presse.unti.coco.liquo.i.created.Thi.mark.th.sta r.o.th.secon.stage.whic.involve.thre.processes.Th.coco.liqu e.t.mak.coc.cake.i.th.firs.option.Anothe.choic.i.t h.manufactur.o.cocoa.whil.coco.liquo.i.refine.i.th.thir.pro ces.t.produc.industria.chocolate.I.th.fina.stage.thes.material.ar.processe.furthe.t.creat.di fferen.en.product.fo.eithe.corporat.client.o.ordinar.consum ers.Coc.cake.ar.groun.int.coco.powde.fo.individua.consumers .o.directl.delivere.t.caterin.businesse.whic.provid.drink.a n.cakes.Coco.i.th.secon.procedur.mentione.earlie.i.als.tran sporte.t.thes.businesses.I.contrast.th.industria.chocolat.i .flavore.wit.sugar.an.finishe.chocolat.product.ar.subsequen tl.availabl.fo.consumers.第一篇The table provides us with data of the percentage of consumer expenditure on different items in five countries in 2002.Th.bigges.numbe.existe.i.Turkey.wher.peopl.spen.32.14.o.the i.incom.o.food.drin.an.tobacco.almos.fiv.time.th.numbe.o.pe rcentag.spen.o.clothin.(6.63%.an.eigh.time.th.figur.o.percein.nex.i.Ireland.whos.per centag.o.nationa.consume.expenditur.o.eatin.wa.28.91%.Cost. fo.clothin.an.footwea.accounte.fo.onl.6.43%.thre.time.th.ex cation.Spai.too.th.thir.plac.thoug. th.proportio.o.it.nationa.consume.expenditur.wa.th.lowes.(1 .98%).Expenditur.o.foo.item.i.Spai.accounte.fo.18.8%.threef ol.th.figur.o.it.clothin.spending.Ital.an.Swede.citizen.ha. smal.percentage.o.incom.spen.o.food(16.36%, 15.77%),onl.abou.hal.th.figur.o.Turkey.However.thei.clothin.cost.(9 %.5.4%.an.spiritua.pay-out.(3.2%.3.22%.wer.relativel.high.I..nutshell.th.percentage.o.nationa.consume.expenditur.b.ca tegor.i.200.varie..lo.amon.th.fiv.countries.Bu.al.share.som rges.proportio.o.expenditur.o.food.d catio.cos ts.第二篇The bar charts show the number of marriages and divorces in USA and marital status of American adults during the period of 1970 to 2000.lio.i.197.an.1980.afte. lio.i.2000.Th.divorce.numb lio.i.197.an.suddenl.increase.t.almos.1..m lio.i.198.a n.finall.reache.t.it.start(.million).Th.percentag.o.neve.marrie.adult.wa.15.i.197.an.th.figur.in ter.Th.proportion.o.bot.marrie.an.w idowe.adult.sa.drop.durin.th.thre.decades.Marrie.adult.acco unte.fo.70.i.197.whil.th.figur.wa.les.tha.60.i.2000.A.fo.di vorc.rate.i.ha..significan.ris.for.nearl.0.t.almos.10%.Al.i.all.th.perio.fro.197.t.200.witnesse..hug.chang.o.marri age.an.divorce.i.America.Bot.th.tota.numbe.an.percentag.o.m arriag.decrease.whil.th.proportion.o.neve.marrie.an.divorce .peopl.sa.a.upwar.trend.流程图The two diagrams illustrate how to produce cement and how to use cement to produce concrete.e.tw.materials.Firs tly.limeston.an.cla.ar.place.i.th.crusher.wher.thes.materia l.ar.crushe.b.th.crusher.The.powde.i.mixe.b.th.mixer.befor.bein.heate.b.th.rotatin.h eater.A.th.nex.stage.heate.powde.i.sen.t.th.grind.wher.i.i. grounde.int.cement.An.finall.cemen.i.packe.i.th.bags. Concret.productio.i.relativel.simple.15.o.cement.10.o.water l.smal.stone.ar.mi.i.th.concre t.mixer.wher.the.turne.ou.t.b.concrete.All in all, cement production includes 5 stages and the outcome cement is one of the four raw materials of the concrete production.地图Th.map.sho.ho.a.are.change.durin.th.perio.o.178.t.2000.I.1780.ther.wer.10.home.locate.o.th.north-easter.corne.wit. wood.t.th.south..rive.crosse.th.are.fro.sout.t.nort.wit.fou .farm.i.th.middl.o.th.region.ter.th.numbe.o.dwellin.place.double.t.200.whil.th. numbe.o.farm.droppe.b.hal.an.wood.als.shran.i.size..roa.wa. buil.i.th.nort.area.connectin.th.livin.plac.t.th.river.Anot he.majo.chang.i.tha..bridg.wa.constructe.ove.th.river.I.2000.th.numbe.o.home.suddenl.increase.t.50.an..newl.buil. road.headin.toward.sout.replace.far.an.wood.area.whic.linke .th.dwellin.place.t.th.schoo.an.sport.fiel.i.th.south.Sever a.shop.opene.t.th.righ.sid.o.th.downstrea.rive.wit..wetlan. fo.bird.t.thei.south.Overall.thi.are.sa.a.increas.i.construction.suc.a.dwellin.p laces.school.an.facilities.althoug.farmlan.an.forest.wer.re move.fo.ne.building.an.transpor.infrastructure.大作文W.liv.i.citie.o.town.whic.hav.museum.displayin.historica.an .cultura.importance.bu.peopl.d.no.visi.them.Wh.d.yo.thin.pe opl.d.no.visi.museum.i.thei.loca.areas?Wha.i.th.importanc.o.museum.t.society?顾家北Visitin.museum.i.hardl..rewardin.experienc.fo.man.people.s. the.wil.no.conside.thi.optio.whe.the.ca.spen.leisur.tim.o.o aniz.ne.exhibition.tha.c a.kee.u.wit.th.trends.o.provid.an.for.o.entertainmen.lik.in teractiv.game.t.attrac.th.youn.audience.Thi.i.wh..tri.t..mu pet.fo.attentio.wit.sports.picnic.an.partie rmatio.abou.thos.ar tefact.o.displa.o.th.Internet.The.wil.increas.knowledg.abou.th.storie.behin.an.th.cultura.valu.o.eac.item.withou.havin .t.visitin.th.museu.i.person.Museum.ca.encourag.visitors.interes.i.thei.cultura.heritag. an.disseminat.knowledg.abou..cit.o..county’.cultura.assets e.b.previou.generat ions.s.peopl.wh.atten.thes.exhibition.ma.hav..goo.ide.o.ho. traditiona.foo.wa.cooked.Som.historica.document.an.painting e.t.predominate.an.ma n.visitor.migh.b.impresse.b.th.architectura.achievement.o.t hei.ancestors.Wit.suc.knowledge.thes.visitor.ma.mak.a.effor .t.preserv.som.tradition.an.kee.som.old-fashione.cookin.ski ll.o.buildin.technique.alive.Museum.hav.als.bee.operatin.a..cente.o.learning.wher.youn.p eopl.ca.kee.u.t.dat.wit.th.cutting-edg.technolog.i.differen .fields.Th.aviatio.museums.fo.example.giv.childre..glimps.o .th.airlin.industr.an.eve.spac.travel.includin.spaceship.an .equipmen.supportin.astronaut.wh.explore.th.oute.space.Th.m useu.o.archeolog.ca.sho.the.ho.som.specie.hav.die.out.an.po ssibl.inspir.the.t.d.researc.i.biolog.an.exten.ou.knowledg.o.ho.t.preserv.ou.ecosystem.The.coul.no.mak.contribution.t. socia.progress.i.the.di.no.hav.acces.t.suc.knowledge.Recently.a.increasin.numbe.o.peopl.refuse.t.pa..visi.t.muse um.i.thei.loca.places.Personally.followin.reason.ma.accoun. fo.th.phenomenon.Som.peopl.recko.museum.a.borin.place.s.tha.the.ar.neve.will in.t.visit.Fo.example.th.historica.an.cultura.importanc.dis playe.ther.ha.neve.change.an.ther.i.n.entertainment.suc.a.i nteractiv.games.Al.thes.ten.t.lef.peopl..borin.feeling.I.co ntrast.peopl.prefe.t.joi.som.interestin.activitie.suc.a.bal .games.picni.an.dinin.out.Anothe.reaso.i.tha.nowaday.peopl. lear.histor.an.acquir.scienc.knowledg.throug.interne.rathe. rmatio.o.th.exhibition'.th.hist orica.valu.an.stor. ca.b.easil.accesse.o.line.However.visitin.museum.pla.a.importan.rol.i.traditio.inheri ting.Ancien.vessel.provid.u.wit.traditiona.cookin.method.wh prehen.styl.o.ancien.architectur.t.so m.degree.I.i.advantageou.fo.youn.peopl.t.pas.o.th.cultur.i.the.hav..goo.acknowledg.o.thei.ow.traditio.b.visitin.museum s.Additionally.museum.offe.u.th.mos.advance.scienc.an.technol tes. developmen.o.spac.an.univers.i.ou.countr.ca.b.acquire.i.spa c.museum.an.th.youn.ca.understan.th.reaso.o.creatur.extinct io.throug.visitin.archaeolog.museums.Museum.ca.motivat.th.i nterest.o.th.adolescent.an.th.youn.wil.accelerate.th.develo pmen.o.societ.i.th.future.Overall, visiting museums is of great significance for both the individuals’ comprehending of culture and the development of our society.顾家北Visitin.museum.i.hardl..rewardin.experienc.fo.man.people.s. the.wil.no.conside.thi.optio.whe.the.ca.spen.leisur.tim.o.o anis.ne.exhibition.tha.c a.kee.u.wit.th.trends.o.provid.an.for.o.entertainmen.lik.in teractiv.game.t.attrac.th.youn.audience.Thi.i.wh..tri.t..mu pet.fo.attentio.wit.sports.picnic.an.partie rmatio.abou.thos.artefact.o.displa.o.th.Internet.The.wil.increas.knowledg.abou .th.storie.behin.an.th.cultura.valu.o.eac.item.withou.havin .t.visitin.th.museu.i.person.Museum.ca.encourag.visitors.interes.i.thei.cultura.heritag. an.disseminat.knowledg.abou..cit.o..county’.cultura.assets e.b.previou.generat ions.s.peopl.wh.atten.thes.exhibition.ma.hav..goo.ide.o.ho. traditiona.foo.wa.cooked.Som.historica.document.an.painting e.t.predominate.an.ma n.visitor.migh.b.impresse.b.th.architectura.achievement.o.t hei.ancestors.Wit.suc.knowledge.thes.visitor.ma.mak.a.effor .t.preserv.som.tradition.an.kee.som.old-fashione.cookin.ski ll.o.buildin.technique.alive.tes.technologica.advances.w hic.i.beneficia.t.th.developmen.o.th.society.Fo.example.th. tes.knowledg.o.aeronautic.whil.th.a prehen.th.reaso.o.extinction.Thi.i.wh.museum.ca.no.onl.motivat.th.interest.o.teenager.bu.als .encourag.the.t.stud.har.i..lon.run.whic.wil.accelerat.th.i mprovemen.o.th.societ.i.th.future.(Self-writte.paragraph)The aviation museums spaceships, shuttles, astronauts, explore the outer space,catio.shoul.provid.student.wit. skill.o.employmen.i.th.futur.whil.other.believ.tha.peopl.sh oul.focu.o.academi.stud.only.Discus.bot.view.an.giv.you.ow. opinion.Som.peopl.thin.th.increasin.busines.an.cultura.contac.betwe e.countrie.bring.man.positiv.effects.Other.sa.i.cause.th.lo s.o.nationa.identities.Discus.o.bot.side.an.giv.you.opinion .Peopl.rel.mor.o.foreig.product.an.imitat.tradition.an.cultu r.o.othe.countries.whic.lea.t..har.wa.t.pas.o.thei.ow.cultu re.Fo.instance.to.muc.relianc.o.th.foreig.cosmetic.wil.sure l.shrin.th.deman.o.domesti.market.whic.require.th.loca.indu str.t.downsiz.wor.forc.an.thu.traditiona.way.o.makin.u.wil.b.abandoned.Additionally.thos.wh.ar.i.favo.o.celebratin.oth ers.festival.ten.t.giv.les.priorit.t.thei.ow.traditions.Thi .wil.pu.th.intangibl.cultur.heritag.for.ou.ancestor.i..dang erou.situation.Man.countrie.spen..lo.o.mone.i.art.Som.peopl.thin.investmen .i.ar.i.necessary.bu.other.sa.mone.i.bette.spen.o.publi.ser vice.an.facilities.Discus.bot.view.an.giv.you.ow.opinion.翻译练习1. 人们对政府赞助艺术(governmen.sponsorship)有不同的看法, 特别在国家遇到预算问题的时候.People have adopted different attitudes towards government sponsorship of arts, especially when their countries’ budgets are in the red.2. 我觉得我们应该首先注重基础设施, 只有政府有盈余的时候才去投资艺术。
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Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world has been increasing. Why this has happened and how to deal with this problem? 犯罪A大城市竞争激烈B经济和心理压力大C年轻人犯罪解决Intense competition economic pressures release negative emotionsA: 影视作品追求收视率 R: 接触承认内容 E:年轻人模仿Boost ratings, exposed to adult content, fall into a life of crime led astrayA政府加强教育宣传R认识到犯罪严重性E少年犯罪率下降Launch awareness campaigns, dire consequences of crimes, curb crime年轻人应注重培养各方面的能力(receive a well-rounded education) b. 提高年轻人的竞争力(increase competitiveness) c. 解决生存问题(make a decent living),年轻人犯罪率下降Juvenile delinquency has become a widespread problem in some urban areas and it is important to tackle this problem.The competition is intense in cities and this is possibly a primary cause of soaring youth crime. Young people are likely to face some problems that cause economic pressures, and it is difficult for them to find well-paid jobs and afford property. They may choose to commit crimes to release negative emotions or sometimes to earn a fast buck.Another reason is that media companies give importance to the coverage of violence and crime in order to boost ratings. Exposure to violence can have a negative effect on young people's perception of violence, and they do not realise the consequences of their behaviour. As a consequence, they may fall into a life of crime. This is particularly the case for those who lack self-control.To solve this problem, governments should launch awareness campaigns, which enable young adults to understand the dire consequences of crimes. It is therefore easier to curb crime. Young people should also receive a well-rounded education and improve skills. Education can provide them with oppoirtunities to increase competitivenes and make a decent living. This will also lead to a lower crime rate.To summarise, I believe that competition and the media are responsible for juvenile delinquency. This issue can be addressed by government action, such as giving young people educational opportunities.Some teachers say students should be organised into groups to study. Others argue students should be arranged to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.教育类A 小组学习B 互相交流,知识共享C 学生能发现自己知识漏洞(knowledge gaps)Draw upon each other’s ideas pool knowledgeA 单独学习b.不会被同伴拉后腿(held back by peersc. )专心(concentrate on studies) , 时间自由(Manage time freely ),效率高A小组学习-B一起讨论 -C提升交流 (Communication skills)、合作(abilities to work well in groups) 、解决冲突能力(skills to resolve disagreement)It is sometimes argued that students can achieve more if they study in groups. I agree with this idea, although studying independently is sometimes important.If students study in teams, they are able to communicate with each other and share knowledge. Teamwork provides them with opportunities to discover knowledge gaps and acquire knowledge accordingly to fill these gaps. They can make the most of each other’s knowledge and strengths to overcome their weaknesses. By contrast, it is difficult for those students who study by themselves to realise their problems and make progress. On the other hand, opponents argue that it is possible to improve learning outcomes, if students study independently.These students are less likely to be held back by peers, and they do not have to block out distractions in team meetings or assignments. It is easier for them to concentrate on studies and manage time freely, thereby performing well in studies. This benefit is obvious for high-achievers.In my opinion, studying in groups enables students to improve communicationskills.They normally discuss how to solve problems together and how to deal with team tasks. These experiences make it possible for them to improve abilities to work well in groups and upgrade the skills to resolve disagreement. They are thus well prepared for their working lives.To sum up, I believe that both approaches can benefit students, but it appears that studying in groups offers more advantages.Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion. 全球化Advertising encourages consumers to buy in quantity rather than promoting quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 媒体——广告。
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严格的纪律有时很重要,但我认为这会对孩子的问题解决能力产生不利的影响。
有些人坚决主张强加规则,因为规则可以让孩子对自己的行为负责,帮助他们从小就发展良好的行为模式。
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共83句翻译及83句拓展练习翻译1:经常做运动会提高人的自信错误的句子:Exercise regularly can rise one's confidence.错误1 Exercise 如果这里是动词,应该用动名词,如果是名词,不能用副词修饰错误2 rise 不及物动词正确的句子:Regular exercise can increase one's self-confidence.句子结构:主语+及物动词+宾语(confidence)可以用定语从句扩充:Participating in sports frequently can boost people's confidence, which is important not only tothe youth but also to the elderly.注:不可以说“regular doing exercise”,因为形容词regular 不可以修饰doing中文翻译:经常参加体育活动能够提高人们的自信心,这不但对年轻人而且对老人很重要。
翻译2:依赖计算器会影响人的心算能力(mental arithmetic)。
错误的句子:Rely heavily on calculators will have negative impact on human beings` mental arithmetic.错误1 rely 是动词,不能充当主语错误2 impact 可数名词,要有冠词。
错误3 human beings 多余,不是人类莫非是动物么?正确的句子:Relying heavily on calculators will have a negative impact on mental arithmetic.句子结构:主语+及物动词+宾语(impact)也可以用现在分词扩充:The excessive reliance on calculators is likely to have an adverse impact on children's mental arithmetic and pose a threat to their intellectual development.中文翻译:过度依赖计算器可能会对人们的心算能力有负面影响,对孩子的智力发展有威胁。
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2008年北京市卷高考作文典型失误分析:杯家四兄弟“噼里啪啦!”过年了,家家户户都放起了烟花爆竹。
杯家多年不聚的四兄弟都赶回家过除夕夜。
?“开饭喽!”他们的母亲端上了一道道可口的饭菜。
一家人开心地聚在了一起,四兄弟饮酒畅谈。
这时,他们谈起了各自的事业。
?老大——一只装满水的杯子,说:“我现在,创办了自己的公司,钱就像流水似的,直往我这儿跑。
不过,话又说回来,现在的社会竞争这么激烈,随时都有倒闭的风险啊!不过,我相信自己!哈……”老二——一只装了半杯石头,半杯沙子的杯子,说道:“我呢,跟大哥比起来稍差了点儿,我现在有两份工作,钱是不愁挣,但每天都快累死了!”老三——一只装了半杯沙子的杯子,说:“我啊!文化程度比较低,现在只是个小工人,不过养家糊口不成问题。
”这时,该老四发言了。
老四是一只什么也没装的空杯子。
他吞吞吐吐说:“大哥,二哥,三哥……我……我……之前……有份工作……后来……没兴趣……所以……?辞职了……现在……学电脑……”其他三兄弟开始劝老四:“没兴趣……哈,这年月,能有饭吃就不错了,还谈什么兴趣不兴趣?”“要不到大哥的公司来吧……”“要不先干上二哥的一份工作?”这时他们的母亲说:“老四,别难过,你别看你哥他们都有工作,可他们也不是有多么如意呀!你大哥的工作压力也很大啊,你从他的白头发便可看出,他还不到四十岁啊!你二哥虽然有两份工作,可每天都快累死了,他也很固执,不听妈的话。
你三哥呢!只是一个小工人,只能维持生活而已。
可你呢,还年轻,一切重新开始还来得及,选择自己喜欢的,学电脑可是件好事,妈支持你,相信你最终会找到你感兴趣的工作的。
”几年后,老四成为国内最知名的一个网络创始人。
是啊!人生有时候像一个空杯子未尝不好,一切都可以从头开始。
所以,随时抛弃对你没用的东西,让人生变得更加精彩,让我们的人生像雪地里深深的脚印一样踏实而又清晰吧!?【失分警示】这篇作文的构思真让人感叹作者的奇思妙想。
全文采用了拟人手法,将四个人假想成四只杯子,装满水的杯子为老大,装有半杯石头、半杯沙子的杯子为老二,装了半杯沙子的杯子为老三,什么也没有装的杯子是老四。
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审题一着不慎,作文全盘皆输。
仔细梳理各地中考作文,其中有以下的审题失误:一、背离关键,重点错位审题时抓错关键词,写作时抓错重点,导致跑题。
2012年福建福州中考作文题目:人都有爱心,人都有爱好,爱是人的天性,爱有时要讲究方式;爱,有时要把握尺度。
请你以“爱,还要会爱”为题,写一篇记叙文或议论文。
2012年山东聊城中考作文题:女孩生下来就是唇腭裂,六岁时她发现了自己的“与众不同”。
女孩:“妈妈,我为什么与别人不一样呢?”妈妈:“孩子,世界上每一个人都是不同的。
”其实,我们每个人都有缺陷,都是“被上帝咬过一口的苹果”。
你有缺陷吗?你是怎样面对自己缺陷的呢?别人有缺陷吗?你又是怎样面对别人缺陷的呢?请以“面对缺陷”为话题,写一篇文章。
二、混淆概念,似是而非审题时,对有意味的关键概念,未加辨析就用一个似是实非、似同实异的概念置换题目中的概念,而导致指东说西、南辕北辙。
012年湖北武汉中考作文题目:今年年初,《咬文嚼字》杂志社,邀请读者一起“咬嚼”名人博客,大家惊讶地发现一些市场意识很强,人气很旺的名人在撰写博客时,频频出现语言运用方面的“低级错误”,对语言文字缺乏敬畏之心。
古今中外,一直不乏“推敲”文字的佳话。
即使到了网络时代,我们阅读优秀作品时也总能感受到作者严肃恭敬的写作态度。
请以“敬畏文字”为题,写一篇不少于60 0字的文章,自选文体(诗歌除外),文中不要出现自己的姓名,校名。
三、片面理解,顾此失彼一是对好几个概念的题目,只注意所谓的“中心词”,而置其他概念于不顾,结果偏离题意。
比如2012年山东烟台中考语文作文题:“你是我最好的朋友”二是对半命题作文,只注意到补充的词语,而忽视了题目中固有的词语。
比如2012年安徽中考作文题:“_____在其中”四、忽略副词,落入陷阱无视题目中“ 最”“ 也”“ 还”“更”“其实”等副词所隐藏的信息和要求。
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passage 1:environmental problems are so big that they cannot be solved by any person or country alone. Instead, it should be solved at international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree.Environmental degradation has been recognized as one of the main challenges that we have to overcome in the 21st century. The rapid deterioration of environmental problems is believed to have posed a threat to our survival. To address this concern, countries worldwide should join forces, instead of working individually for their own targets.People support international cooperation for two reasons and the first point is that the impact of environmental problems is normally on a global scale. It is common knowledge that we share the same biosphere, whose components are interrelated. For example, a stream in one country can be polluted by the sewage dumped by its neighboring country. In other words, one country’s effort to tackle pollution can be futile if other countries are not involved. It should be noted that some countries do not have adequate resources(including capital and technology) to reduce pollution, even though these countries realise the importance of environmental protection. These countries can cooperate with developed countries, introduce technology and draw on experience so as to implement environmentally friendly policies continuously.Despite the importance of international cooperation, countries should take the initiative to implement some changes. It is fair to say that countries are confronted with different environmental problems. For instance, greenhouse gas emissions in china are mainly created by the electricity generation industry while those in the United States are primarily attributed to the increase in car use. The technologies and methods that are globally applicable may not be effective in some countries. In addition, countries should enforce some environmental laws and raise citizens’ awareness so as to restore the environment. To summarize, countries should make a joint effort not only because the ecosystem is a unified mechanism but also because it can make optimal use of financial and human resources. Countries’s resource commitment is also important at regional or national level. futile: 没有⽤用的In some countries, it is now possible for people to buy products made in other countries. To what extent do the benefits of this development outweigh the problems?As the world is increasingly globalized, the exchange of commodities across the border is proceeding at an astounding rate. It has sparked the controversy over whether the increase in imports has adverse impacts. From my point of view, the practice’s advantage s outweigh its disadvantages.Importing goods can yield a number of benefits. The first benefit is that despite the high cost of transportation, imports are competitively priced. The main reason is that the countries which export these goods normally have their technology and professional knowledge to ensure the goods’ quality and affordability. For example, China specializes in the production of textile products so china-made textile are cheaper than local counterparts in many parts of the world. Besides,imported goods have challenged domestic manufactures’ dominance and intensified competition, thereby prompting these manufacturers to lower product prices. It is beneficial to domestic customers, because products are more affordable and the cost of living will decline.On the other hand, the downside of importing goods is that the excessive reliance on imports is likely to lead to the underdevelopment of some domestic industries. For instance, many countries import computers, resulting in domestic manufacturers’ bankruptcy. This is detrimental to the development of a self-contained economy, and also likely to trigger massive job cuts. Another problem is that transportation may create considerable pollution, especially when it involves air freight. It will degrade air quality and also lead to other environmental issues, such as global warning.It is therefore reasonable to think that the advantage of importing commodities should be accepted with caution. Although customers are able to acquire commodities at lower cost, countries also need to pay attention to the development of their respective industries.Some people believe that charities should give aid to whose who need the aid most, wherever they live. Some people believe that charity organisations would better concentrate on people in their own countries instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Concern about humanitarian assistance has been heightened in recent years. Although international aid illustrates the moral ideal of mankind, many people who hold opposing views think that the welfare of fellow citizens is the priority. International aid has its weaknesses, but its importance should not be denied.The main reason why international donation agencies should view international assistance from a global perspective is that their funds can help the citizens of those recipient countries to combat poverty, disease and inequality. We should recognize that citizens of developing countries are in desperate need of aid, because they are susceptible to natural or man-made disasters such as wars. In those war-torn or poverty-stricken countries, where resources are scanty, there is a high demand for food, medicine, tents and shelters. Despite the importance of helping those beyond our national borders, it is reasonable to lend a hand to our fellow citizens. Even in the richest countries, there are some disadvantaged/ deprived/ needy people whose needs for daily necessities are not met. If we can solve problems on our doorstep, low income people can have basic living standards and this is beneficial to social stability.From my personal perspective, humanitarian action can restore some of their basic rights, such as the right to receive education, in recipient countries. This is consistent with the universal principle of supporting vulnerable populations. Those who cannot provide financial support can work as aid workers and deliver services (e.g., training and medical service) to those needy people.To summarise, we should realise the implications of international aid to those who are affected by disasters, poverty and misfortunes. We can deliver aid to other countries to show compassion, although local beneficiaries is important.Societies benefit from international tourism and business. To what extent do you agree or disagree?In recent years, tourism has become an important industry and brought unprecedented opportunities to these countries. However, the impact of tourism on these countries remains a source of constant debate. The essay will elaborate on both positive and negative effects fo tourism.The implications of tourism for some countries are two fold. First of all, it should be recognized that the development of tourism stimulates economic growth by generating enormous employment opportunities and increasing foreign exchange earning. The benefit is particularly valuable to those impoverished countries, whose citizens are jobless, malnourished and ill-housed. Tourism provides a driving force for the development of various industries such as hospitality, transportation, communications, retail sales and manufacture, which require substantial capital investments. Without the revenues created by tourism, these industries are not likely to develop and the economic growth will be sluggish. Furthermore, tourism provides economic incentives for cultural preservation, because some places of cultural importance, e.g., historical sites, remain the most popular destinations. Those who express concerns about the negative effect of tourism should realise that tourism revenues can be used to protect cultural or historical heritage and also the local landscape.On the negative side, environmental destruction is one problem that arises from international tourism. The construction of infrastructure and tourism facilities(including airports, roads, hotels and resorts)will destroy environmental resources. Another problem associated with tourism is that it can threaten the local culture. The arrival of tourists can disrupt the life of local people, who abandon their traditional livelihoods and start to work in the tourism industry. It is true that in many places, local people do not embrace tourism with open arms. Due to a lack of understanding of local customs, tourists might display some impolite or even offensive behavior, which can lead to local people’s unhappiness or hostility.In the light of these facts, we can come to the conclusion that tourism can help some countries reap economic benefits although these countries may have to accept social and environmental costs. These countries should promote culturally appropriate activities and require tourists to show respect for the local life, traditions and natural scenery.English has become a universal language. Do you think that the positive effects of this trend outweigh negative effects?Today, the role of english as a global language is indispensable/irreplaceable, but it is worth mentioning that the prevalence of english worldwide might has its negative effect. In my opinion, English’s dominance can be viewed in a positive light.It is unquestionable that the extensive use of english worldwide helps promote international cooperation, as language constitutes the biggest barrier to people’s communication in the global setting.For example, if a company’s financial statements are written in english, any investor who a good command of english ia able to read this company’s documents and understand this company’s operation, whether or not english is their first language. That’s why English has been identified/regarded/ recognised/acknowledged as the main language by many international conferences and academic groups and also by 80 per cent of websites in the world when presenting information. It would be no exaggeration to say that those who do not speak English find it difficult to survive in the global community. By contrast, people who have proficiency in two languages (English plus their native language) can easily find jobs, collect information and travel overseas.Despite the contribution of the language to globalisation, it is considered the culprit of the loss of language diversity. The idea lies in the fact that many english leaners, such as those who move to English-speaking countries, speak their native language less frequently. It should also be noted that English, as the favorite language for international media, conveys English-speaking countries’s lifestyles, values and beliefs to different parts of the world. It might affect the world’s cultural diversity. In spite of this, I am convinced that english is able to bridge the language gap and introduce minority cultures to the world, thereby protecting these cultures.In conclusion, English plays a vital role in communication and cooperation among people from different countries. Although some people suspect that english will endanger some minority languages, this claim is not supported with evidence. The reality is that english sometimes assists us protecting cultural heritage.Many countries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent public services and facilities. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Government sponsorship for arts is a controversial issue, especially when the state is confronted with budget problem. Those who object to public funds for arts believe that money should be diverted to the construction of public facilities. i am of the opinion that the government should take citizen’s benefits into consideration and adjust the spending on art or infrastructures accordingly.It is important to realize that art is an essential component of cultural legacy, so the protection and development of art has important implications to cultural diversity. In terms of painting, for example, styles, genres, tools and materials differ from culture to culture. if not well protected, an art form is likely to disappear and we would like live in a mundane world.Despite the importance of art, public facilities deserve more of government spending than art. Citizens are interested in the availability of public facilities, such as water and electricity supply, schools, libraries and roads, which have a direct impact on their daily lives. By contrast, for most people, sculptures, paintings, or operas are luxury items, which cannot bring any tangible benefit to them. Therefore, it is pointless to support the use of public funds for this purpose, if basic facilities are underfunded and ill-equipped to meet public needs.I personally think that the arts should get public money, because it boosts the appeal of the built environment, reflected in the diversity of architecture and landscaping. If we are exposed to visually attractive objects every day, we can enjoy peace of mind and feel an increased level of satisfaction with life. People will be less likely to commit violent or anti-social acts, and this is beneficial to community cohesion.In the light of the facts outlined above, government investment in the arts is essential to cultural diversity and the visual appeal of the built environment. However, in those countries whose infrastructure is inadequate, spending cuts on the arts are justifiable.Instead of asking the government to bear the high cost of higher education, students should pay tuition fees themselves. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?The government has long been the major funder of university education. Those people who support government spending on education think that some students do not enrol because of learning costs. My view is that students’ personal situations should be considered, before the government decides whether to offer free education.It is worth noting that university education is the key to closing/bridging the income gap. There are numerous students, especially those from low income families, who cannot afford educational expenses. For example, students who study law or medical science may spend years in the university, and in other words, university education is an expensive option for them. Because of financial constraints, people of low socio-economic status are at a disadvantage in terms of educational opportunities and career development. If the government provides free access to education, children from disadvantaged backgrounds can get into the college and find decent jobs in the future. this can close the social divide and create a prosperous country.Even though government sponsorship can inspire people to receive tertiary education, it can also cause the waste of public resources. Free education may be a reason why many students are reluctant to complete their courses and enter the workforce at the earliest date.It not only adds/imposes a burden on the country but also affects state funding for other sectors(e.g., primary and secondary education). Another problem is that, because of financial pressures, universities cannot upgrade facilities and recruit well-qualified lecturers, which can have a negative impact on students’ academic achievement.To summarize, the government should provide financial support according to students’ needs to ensure that they have access to education. However, tuition fees are applicable to most students, especially those from middle to high income families, as it helps maintain the quality of tertiary education.Some people say that the government should ensure that people lead a healthy life, while others believe that individuals should have their own choices. Discuss both views and give your opinion.Leading a healthy lifestyle is important because it is closely correlated with one’s dignity and wellbeing. It is suggested that people are unlikely to adopt healthy lifestyles, unless the government takes some actions. My view is that the lifestyle should be decided by people themselves, despite the importance of the government guidance and intervention. It is reasonable to think argue that if people can choose their lifestyles freely, it reflects the respect for basic human rights. People who are obsessed with how to comply with government regulations will live under tremendous pressure. Although people are encouraged to eat vegetables and adopt a balanced diet, it does not mean that laws should specify the proportion of vegetables in diet. It not only poses a threat to their health, but also causes their resentment against the government.On the other hand, it is important for the government to impose restrictions on some habits, especially those that are wildly believed to be damaging. This is due to the fact that most people have difficulty in disciplining themselves and cannot refrain from some unhealthy habits. For example, it is common knowledge smoking is harmful to people’s health but many people have problems ceasing smoking. The consequence is that their behavior not only damages their own health but also has an adverse effect on others. Their reliance on medical care leads to overconsumption of resources and a higher demand for the use of tax payer’s money; this is unfair to those who follow healthy habits. Overall, i believe that one’s freedom to choose lifestyles should be protected provided that is does not interfere with other people.The primary role of the government is to provide information rather than to regulare citizens’ behavior.The society is based on rules and laws. The society would not function well if individuals were free to do whatever they want. To want extend do you agree or disagree?Laws refer to the rules imposed on human beings. Although the law is important in regulating people’s behavior, many people argue that it restricts individual’s freedom. I think that it is necessary to gain a comprehensive understanding of the functions of law in society and its demerits.It is an undeniable fact that the law informs citizens of the rules that are recognized by the whole society. The essential point of formulating laws is that laws can prevent one from engaging in actions that are harmful to other people. Anybody who fails to comply with laws will be punished, so the law helps establish a harmonious society. For example, people may commit robberies and murders because of jealousy, greed and hatred. If these actions were accepted/permitted on the grounds of personal choice, it would be detrimental to other people’s interest. It is also true that many ethical standards, such as those standards that emphasize honesty, loyalty, and compassion, enhance/ improve/ increase social cohesion.Nevertheless, laws sometimes inevitably infringe upon human’s freedom and even hamper/hinder/obstruct social development. For instance,if one country has many restrictions on the business world, the business activity will not be active/brisk. High income earners who subject to high income tax rates may lack motivation to maker greater efforts to increase their income. It is also true that in a society where personal freedoms, such as the freedom of speech, are limited, it is impossible to have different voices heard and solve problems efficiently.It is reasonable to conclude that the society cannot operate well without laws and rules. Even though the law does not allow people to act at will, the main purpose is to create a society where people can live in harmony.Economic progress is one way to measure the success of one country, while some people think that there are other factors. What other factors should be considered? Among these factors, do you think that any factor is more important than the others?The rapid growth of emerging economies has fueled the controversy over how to define successful countries. Regarding the distinguishing features of successful countries, people might have some shared opinions but they do not reach any agreement. I think that besides economic development, other factors should be taken into consideration. Firstly, social welfare is a significant factor, which has relevance to people’s satisfaction with life. There is ample evidence that in many in many countries, poor people do not benefit from economic growth,which is reflected in the widening gap between haves and have-nots. National wealth is not distributed evenly, and the health service and the education are underfunded. Because of the ever-increase cost of living, people are not satisfied with their living standards, while the escalating class conflict can threaten social cohesion. It is also important to realise that the economic progress of some countries is achieved at environment’s expense. Industrialization leads to the exploitation of natural resources, destroying the environment and causing severe pollution.Considering these factors, economic growth should not be regarded as the main criterion for measuring a country’s success. There is a growing recognition that a successful country should ensure the fair distribution of wealth so citizens’ needs can be satisfied. People are able to acquire necessities such as food, housing, education, medical care and so forth at affordable prices. In deciding whether a country is liveable, it is also important to consider air quality, access to clean water, waste disposal, sewage management and transport infrastructures. In addition, we must take into account the issue of whether or not the economic development is sustainable, namely, whether the country can conserve resources for future generations.In brief, it is premature to equate wealth with success. Living standards and sustainable development are among those factors that can be taken into consideration when a country’s success is evaluated.Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay any tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Tax has long been a disputable issue, especially when people struggle with economic uncertainties and higher costs of living. Some people might complain that tax is a heavy burden especially when it undermines their buying power significantly. I am of the opinion that we are beneficiaries rather than victimes of taxation.The reasons for levying tax are manifold. With tax revenues, the government can pump money in public facilities, including roads, dams, ports, bridges and airports, which are essential to the public well-being. The public sector, which is normally state-funded, also plays an integral role in services such as waste management, sewage treatment and public transport while private enterprises are not likely to deliver thees services at low cost.Public security is another benefit that people can obtain from tax-paying. The expenses of law enforcement, fire department and national defence all have been paid by the taxes imposed on taxpayers. We should also recognise that the government can achieve the gaol of income redistribution and bridge the gap between rich and poor by taxation. For example, in many countries, the high income group needs to pay high tax, while the low income group can get assistance from the government.Taxation is also one of the important approaches to intervene in the economy.For instance, when one country’s economy experiences a downturn, the government needs to reduce the tax to encourage public consumption and business investment. In contrast, the government may levy higher taxes to curb consumption in order to avoid economic overheating.Another function of tax collection is to regulate citizens’ behavior. One example is that the heavy tax on cigarette and alcohol discourages people from spending on these items and from developing unhealthy habits.I am convinced that nobody would perceive tax as a burden which does not create any benefit, if he or she has a comprehensive understanding of taxation. The truth is that without tax revenues, the country would not function well while many public services are no longer widely available.。
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顾家北 0813精品班作文大作文Many people think it is very important to protect the environment but they make no effort to do it themselves. Why do you think it is the case? What actions can be done to ensure that individuals protect the environment?顾家北Environmental problems have threatened the world but few people have chosen to take any action to deal with these problems, although they realise the impact of these environmental woes on their lives. We should implement some changes to improve the situation.Many people spend money wisely, so they are not willing to purchase environmentally friendly products, de spite the fact that these products can help preserve the environment. These products are normally more expensive than conventional counterparts. For example, LED lighting devices are energy efficient, but normally charge consumers a higher price than traditional light bulbs. Electric cars are normally likely to cost more money than those vehicles powered by petrol. As consumers do not opt for these green products, it is not easy to conserve resources and reduce pollution.Another reason is that many people are not willing to change their ways of life, even though these lifestyles can be harmful to the environment.The use of electrical equipment has led to a sharp rise in electricity consumption, which means that the power generation sector has a higher demand for fossil fuels. People also prefer to travel by car, but car emissions can cause global warming, which is a threat to the environment. The reliance on different electronic products including mobile phones is another issue, since many of these products end up in landfill sites.These problems can be tackled by two policies. Governments can enact laws to forbid those behaviours which can cause damage to the environment, such as disposing of waste carelessly. Those who drop litter should be fined, so the environmental impact of this behaviour can be reduced. Another solution is to offer subsidies to encourage people to go green. For example, those consumers who buy fuel efficient cars can be subsidised, so car emissions can be reduced significantly.Currently, more and more people are aware of the importance of environmental protection but the public never give priority to protect environment during their daily life.One reason accounts for the phenomenon is that people live carefully without spending their money on environmental products. Households livewith a tight budget are not willing to spend their money these products, whose prices are higher than other similar goods. For instance, LED lights are energy saving, but they are more expensive than incandescent bulbs. Similarly, prices of electric vehicles are higher than those of traditional vehicles averagely. For the sake of money, people quit buying green products and this is contrary to our purpose of environmental protection.Another reason can be that people are not willing to change their living styles, which need to consume various kinds of energy. For example, electronic appliances consume electricity while driving consumes petrol. Especially those who are fond of plenty of materials consume more.Personally, the government are supposed to establish relevant laws to ban citizens from doing detrimental behaviours to environment. Punishments are imperative for those who littered. On the other hand, it is also imperative for the government to give subsidies to encourage environmental protection. Some countries, such as China, provide subsidies for those who purchasing vehicles under 1.6L.All in all, only through the joint efforts of government and individuals can we live in a sustainable environment.Currently, a large proportion of children are exposed to an ocean of commercial advertisements day to day. I am on the side that the ads, which purposely incite kids to buy snacks, toys and electronic games, should be limited or even, banned.Suppose that ads aim to kids were rectified, children will not request their parents to buy what they want day in and day out. Kids lack sensitivity to price, nevertheless, parents tend to satisfy their material needs. For instance, some children like expensive toys and girls are in favor of clothes. This will bring a heavy burden for the middle-class families. Only by minimize the impact of ads on kids can the problem be avoided.Children may have eccentric behaviours and bad living habits due to the ads. Some kids are fans of fast food, since they see ads of it every day. Others are in bad temper, due to the violent games they play daily. The predominance o f games is also resulted from merchants’ propaganda. All these problems will influence the healthy growth process of kids both physically and mentally.However, we cannot deny that some ads do have their advantages to kids. Some advertisements promote nutrient food, such as milk, wheat, etc. Meanwhile, some advertise books, games and educational toys. Parents, who are not familiar with these products, can have a comprehensive verdict according to advertisements.In a nutshell, I strongly suggest the government ban ads whose target consumers are kids, especially if their products are harmful to children. But if the products the advertisements focus on are beneficial, then the ads should be allowed.小作文第一篇The table illustrates the proportion of people who are laid off in Poland, Denmark, Germany, Italy and Hungary. The two colons are the figures of young people (aged from 15-24) and all citizens respectively.The highest unemployment rate for young goes to Poland, which reaches 37% and is twice more than the rate of its overall rate 15%. Coming next is Italy. The proportion of its young citizens who are out of work is 23% and its unemployment of whole country comes to top at 18%. Hungary showsmediocre rates of 21% and 17%. And German figures are 4% and 3% lower than Denmark respectively. Denmark keeps both figures lowest, with the unemployment rate for 15-24 age group 8% and for overall only 3%.All of the five countries show 3~5% rates lower of overall unemployment than those of the young, except Poland which has the largest gap between the two figures.第二篇The bar charts provide us information about how families in an Asian country spent their money in 1998 and 2008.A glance at the charts tells that expenditure on different goods in 2008 overweighed that in 1998 except that spent on clothes. People gave much more priority to spiritual enjoyment which lead to a huge increase of expenditure on holiday, eating out, reading (newspapers and magazines) and going to cinema, rising from 8% to 15%, 6% to 15%,3% to 8% and 3%to 5% respectively. The costs for electronic goods also increased from 12% to14% during the decade.The only difference is expenditure on clothes which was totally opposite to the mainstream. The proportion of it was 10% in 1998; however it dropped to half of its original rates in 2008.All in all, the past 10 years witnessed a huge change of the expenditure on various of aspects for households.第三篇The charts tell the proportion of different categories of house people live in three parts of Australia in 2001 and 2006.In 2001, Victoria had 76% residents in house, 12% in semi-detached house, 11%in apartments and the rest in other types. In NSW, house also accounted for the largest part of 66%, with 10% and 13% in duplex and flat respectively. And more people lived in other kinds. Tasmania had largest proportion of house living population, which reaches 88%.Five years later, the rates for house all dropped 2% in the three regions. As for semi-detached house, Victoria, NSW and Tasmania saw 1% increase, 1percent decrease and stability respectively. The figures of flat all had a slightly increase. And for the rest unmentioned types, they remained the same at 1% except NSW rose from 11% to 12%.The table compares five European countries in terms of the proportions of unemployed people as well as the figures for those young people out of work.Poland had the highest youth unemployment rate at 37%, nearly five times the level in Denmark. The levels of unemployment for young people were similar in other countries, with the highest seen in Italy 23% and the lowest in Germany at 17%.It is clear from the table that in all these countries, the unemployment rate for the younger generation was higher than the overall unemployment figures. Interestingly, Poland, Germany, Italy and Hungary had similar unemployment rates, ranging between 15% and 18%. The figure for Denmark was significantly lower at 3%.Overall, youth unemployment was more serious in Poland than in other countries. Denmark had the lowest figures for both youth unemployment and overall unemployment, while other countries had similar figures for these problems.流程图写作The chart illustrates how to use cocoa beans to produce several food items for customers.Firstly, whole beans are carefully picking before drying in the shell. Then they are pressed into cocoa liquor, which is the main material ofthe second stage. Then cocoa liquor is further pressed until it becomes a coca cake, which is directly sent to industry to make cakes and drinks or is sold to the consumer after grinded into cocoa powder. The cocoa liquor can also convert into cocoa and then be sent to relevant industry. Cocoa liquor, after further refining, mix with cocoa and sugar turns to industry chocolate. Finished chocolate products will be put on the shell, before the final process.All in all, cocoa beans can be used to produce cocoa powder, chocolate products and ingredients for relevant industry through three simple stages starting from pre-processing raw material to final packaging for sell.顾家北The whole beans are picked at the first stage with shells removed, and then dried and pressed until cocoa liquor is created. This marks the start of the second stage, which involves three processes. The cocoa liquor can be used to make coca cakes in the first option. Another choice is the manufacture of cocoa, while cocoa liquor is refined in the third process to produce industrial chocolate.In the final stage, these materials are processed further to create different end products for either corporate clients or ordinary consumers.Coca cakes are ground into cocoa powder for individual consumers, or directly delivered to catering businesses which provide drinks and cakes. Cocoa in the second procedure mentioned earlier is also transported to these businesses. In contrast, the industrial chocolate is flavored with sugar, and finished chocolate products are subsequently available for consumers.第一篇The table provides us with data of the percentage of consumer expenditure on different items in five countries in 2002.The biggest number existed in Turkey, where people spent 32.14% of their income on food, drink and tobacco, almost five times the number of percentage spent on clothing (6.63%) and eight times the figure of percentage spent on spiritual enjoyment. Coming next is Ireland, whose percentage of national consumer expenditure of eating was 28.91%. Costs for clothing and footwear accounted for only 6.43%, three times the expenditure of leisure and education. Spain took the third place though the proportion of its national consumer expenditure was the lowest (1.98%). Expenditure of food items in Spain accounted for 18.8%, threefold the figure of its clothing spending. Italy and Sweden citizens had small percentages of income spent on food(16.36%,15.77%),only about half thefigure of Turkey. However, their clothing costs (9%, 5.4%) and spiritual pay-outs (3.2%, 3.22%) were relatively high.In a nutshell, the percentages of national consumer expenditure by category in 2001 varied a lot among the five countries. But all shared some similarities, namely, largest proportion of expenditure on food, drink and tobacco and smallest percentage of leisure and education costs.第二篇The bar charts show the number of marriages and divorces in USA and marital status of American adults during the period of 1970 to 2000.The number of marriages remained at 2.5 million in 1970 and 1980, after which it had a slightly decrease to 2 million in 2000. The divorces number started form 1 million in 1970 and suddenly increased to almost 1.5 million during that decade. Then it dropped to nearly 1 million in 1980 and finally reached to its start(1 million).The percentage of never married adults was 15% in 1970 and the figure inclined to 20% thirty years later. The proportions of both married and widowed adults saw drops during the three decades. Married adultsaccounted for 70% in 1970 while the figure was less than 60% in 2000. As for divorce rate, it had a significant rise form nearly 0% to almost 10%.All in all, the period from 1970 to 2000 witnessed a huge change of marriages and divorces in America. Both the total number and percentage of marriage decreased while the proportions of never married and divorced people saw an upward trend.流程图The two diagrams illustrate how to produce cement and how to use cement to produce concrete.Cement production is relatively complex and uses two materials. Firstly, limestone and clay are placed in the crusher, where these materials are crushed by the crusher. Then powder is mixed by the mixer, before being heated by the rotating heater. At the next stage, heated powder is sent to the grind, where it is grounded into cement. And finally cement is packed in the bags.Concrete production is relatively simple. 15% of cement, 10% of water, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel, namely small stones are mix in the concrete mixer, where they turned out to be concrete.All in all, cement production includes 5 stages and the outcome cement is one of the four raw materials of the concrete production.地图The maps show how an area changed during the period of 1780 to 2000. In 1780, there were 100 homes located on the north-eastern corner with woods to the south. A river crossed the area from south to north with four farms in the middle of the region.80 years later, the number of dwelling places doubled to 200, while the number of farms dropped by half and woods also shrank in size. A road was built in the north area, connecting the living place to the river. Another major change is that a bridge was constructed over the river.In 2000, the number of homes suddenly increased to 500 and a newly built road, heading towards south replaced farm and woods area, which linked the dwelling places to the school and sports field in the south. Several shops opened to the right side of the downstream river with a wetland for birds to their south.Overall, this area saw an increase in constructions such as dwelling places, schools and facilities, although farmland and forests were removed for new buildings and transport infrastructure.大作文We live in cities or towns which have museums displaying historical and cultural importance, but people do not visit them. Why do you think peopledo not visit museums in their local areas?What is the importance of museums to society?顾家北Visiting museums is hardly a rewarding experience for many people, so they will not consider this option when they can spend leisure time on other activities. These museums do not organize new exhibitions that can keep up with the trends, or provide any form of entertainment like interactive games to attract the young audience. This is why a trip to a museum can hardly compete for attention with sports, picnics and parties. Another reason is that people can gather information about those artefacts on display on the Internet. They will increase knowledge about the stories behind and the cultural value of each item, without having to visiting the museum in person.Museums can encourage visitors’ interest in their c ultural heritage and disseminate knowledge about a city o r a county’s cultural assets. Some exhibitions may show ancient utensils used by previous generations, so people who attend these exhibitions may have a good idea of how traditional food was cooked. Some historical documents and paintings might show the architectural style which used to predominate, and many visitors might be impressed by the architectural achievements of their ancestors. With such knowledge, these visitors may make an effort to preserve some traditions and keep someold-fashioned cooking skills or building techniques alive.Museums have also been operating as a center of learning, where young people can keep up to date with the cutting-edge technology in different fields. The aviation museums, for example, give children a glimpse of the airline industry and even space travel, including spaceships and equipment supporting astronauts who explored the outer space. The museum of archeology can show them how some species have died out, and possibly inspire them to do research in biology and extend our knowledge of how to preserve our ecosystem. They could not make contributions to social progress, if they did not have access to such knowledge.Recently, an increasing number of people refused to pay a visit to museums in their local places. Personally, following reasons may account for the phenomenon.Some people reckon museums as boring places so that they are never willing to visit. For example, the historical and cultural importance displayed there has never changed and there is no entertainment, such as interactive games. All these tend to left people a boring feeling. In contrast, people prefer to join some interesting activities such as ball games, picnic and dining out. Another reason is that nowadays people learn history and acquire science knowledge through internet rather than go to library in person. Information of the exhibition's the historical value and story can be easily accessed on line.However, visiting museums play an important role in tradition inheriting. Ancient vessels provide us with traditional cooking methods while murals enable us to comprehend style of ancient architecture to some degree. It is advantageous for young people to pass on the culture if they have a good acknowledge of their own tradition by visiting museums.Additionally, museums offer us the most advanced science and technology, which is beneficial to the development of the society. The latest development of space and universe in our country can be acquired in space museums and the young can understand the reason of creature extinction through visiting archaeology museums. Museums can motivate the interestsof the adolescents and the young will accelerates the development of society in the future.Overall, visiting museums is of great significance for both the individuals’ comprehending of culture and the development of our society.顾家北Visiting museums is hardly a rewarding experience for many people, so they will not consider this option when they can spend leisure time on other activities. These museums do not organise new exhibitions that can keep up with the trends, or provide any form of entertainment like interactive games to attract the young audience. This is why a trip to a museum can hardly compete for attention with sports, picnics and parties. Another reason is that people can gather information about those artefacts on display on the Internet. They will increase knowledge about the stories behind and the cultural value of each item, without having to visiting the museum in person.Museums can encourage visitors’ interest in their cultural heritage and disseminate knowledge about a city or a county’s cultural assets. Some exhibitions may show ancient utensils used by previous generations, so people who attend these exhibitions may have a good idea of how traditionalfood was cooked. Some historical documents and paintings might show the architectural style which used to predominate, and many visitors might be impressed by the architectural achievements of their ancestors. With such knowledge, these visitors may make an effort to preserve some traditions and keep some old-fashioned cooking skills or building techniques alive.Museums can also provide us with the latest technological advances, which is beneficial to the development of the society. For example, the aviation museums offer us latest knowledge of aeronautics while the archaeology museums help us comprehend the reason of extinction. This is why museums can not only motivate the interests of teenagers but also encourage them to study hard in a long run, which will accelerate the improvement of the society in the future. (Self-written paragraph)The aviation museums spaceships, shuttles, astronauts, explore the outer space,Some people think university education should provide students with skills of employment in the future while others believe that people should focus on academic study only. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion. People rely more on foreign products and imitate traditions and culture of other countries, which lead to a hard way to pass on their own culture. For instance, too much reliance on the foreign cosmetics will surely shrink the demand of domestic market, which requires the local industry to downsize work force and thus traditional ways of making up will be abandoned. Additionally, those who ar e in favor of celebrating others’ festivals tend to give less priority to their own traditions. This will put the intangible culture heritage form our ancestors in a dangerous situation.Many countries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent on public services and facilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.翻译练习1. 人们对政府赞助艺术(government sponsorship)有不同的看法,特别在国家遇到预算问题的时候。
2010年高考语文作文十大典型失误文启示

2010年十大典型失误文启示绿色生活江苏一考生1不知从何时起,窗外的梧桐叶漫过了屋顶,逢了夏日,便洒下片片绿荫,透过枝丫的阳光支离破碎的(地)像一片片碎玻璃[照]着我的双眸。
我不断的(地)晃荡着杯子,直到里面的水溅到手上才发现自己已发呆了很久。
2“如今,人们似是不大欢迎绿色的东西了。
”妈妈在饭桌上如是说。
(,)“前些日子城南才种的绿化带最近两天又拆了,说是要拓宽道[路],城西那原先的公园被拆了,说要搞房地产,可是现在那只是一群(堆)脚手架……”我诺诺地应和着,不知道该用什么话给母亲带来些宽慰。
3“好精致的花!”我不禁微叹道,(。
)眼前的这盆花,叶子实在是翠得惹人,嫩得像要滴出水来,我忍不住上前一抚,却发现这只是盆假花。
逛了三遍花鸟市场后最终在一个不起眼的地方,挑了一盆茉莉花。
我的天,如今买一盆真花可真不容易。
4阳台上不再寂寞了,妈妈赋闲在家的时候便在侍弄她的花园,等我们回来便开始做晚饭。
“这个周末,我带你们去郊区玩。
”饭后,爸爸笑着对我说。
我们一家人顿时兴奋了起来。
“终于可以呼吸呼吸新鲜的空气了。
”姐姐高兴地说着。
5当我们在飞行器上摘下氧气面罩时,一股股的恶臭吹进了舱内,我们立即关上窗户再次戴上面罩。
“没想到郊外的污染这么严重。
”“警报,警报,二噁英气体浓度严重超标(!)”“警报,警报,二氧化硫浓度严重超标(!)”“警报,警报,氮氧气体浓度超标(!)”……6《人民报》二零八零年六月七日报:今日上午郊区,一家乘坐小型飞行器旅游因误开舱窗导致有毒有害气体进入,飞行器不幸坠毁,无人幸免,各市领导呼吁人们外出旅游时要带上充足氧气不要开窗,并且下达命令整治污染企业,据本报调查,此类命令一月之内已是第五十七次下达,面对如此环境,我们表示无比悲痛……【误区警示1】这篇文章写到了窗外绿色的梧桐叶、因房地产开发绿化带遭到?毁坏、买茉莉花的艰难和郊外空气质量的恶化,写出了现代社会人们对绿色生活的严重忽视,审题基本符合题意。
(完整版)顾家北雅思作文汇总

顾家北 0813精品班作文大作文Many people think it is very important to protect the environment but they make no effort to do it themselves. Why do you think it is the case? What actions can be done to ensure that individuals protect the environment?顾家北Environmental problems have threatened the world but few people have chosen to take any action to deal with these problems, although they realise the impact of these environmental woes on their lives. We should implement some changes to improve the situation.Many people spend money wisely, so they are not willing to purchase environmentally friendly products, de spite the fact that these products can help preserve the environment. These products are normally more expensive than conventional counterparts. For example, LED lighting devices are energy efficient, but normally charge consumers a higher price than traditional light bulbs. Electric cars are normally likely to cost more money than those vehicles powered by petrol. As consumers do not opt for these green products, it is not easy to conserve resources and reduce pollution.Another reason is that many people are not willing to change their ways of life, even though these lifestyles can be harmful to the environment. The use of electrical equipment has led to a sharp rise in electricity consumption, which means that the power generation sector has a higher demand for fossil fuels. People also prefer to travel by car, but car emissions can cause global warming, which is a threat to the environment. The reliance on different electronic products including mobile phones is another issue, since many of these products end up in landfill sites.These problems can be tackled by two policies. Governments can enact laws to forbid those behaviours which can cause damage to the environment, such as disposing of waste carelessly. Those who drop litter should be fined, so the environmental impact of this behaviour can be reduced. Another solution is to offer subsidies to encourage people to go green. For example, those consumers who buy fuelefficient cars can be subsidised, so car emissions can be reduced significantly.Currently, more and more people are aware of the importance of environmental protection but the public never give priority toprotect environment during their daily life.One reason accounts for the phenomenon is that people live carefully without spending their money on environmental products. Households live with a tight budget are not willing to spend their money these products, whose prices are higher than other similar goods. For instance, LED lights are energy saving, but they are more expensive than incandescent bulbs. Similarly, prices of electric vehicles are higher than those of traditional vehicles averagely. For the sake of money, people quit buying green products and this is contrary to our purpose of environmental protection.Another reason can be that people are not willing to change their living styles, which need to consume various kinds of energy. For example, electronic appliances consume electricity while driving consumes petrol. Especially those who are fond of plenty of materials consume more.Personally, the government are supposed to establish relevant laws to ban citizens from doing detrimental behaviours to environment. Punishments are imperative for those who littered. On the other hand, it is also imperative for the government to give subsidies to encourage environmental protection. Some countries, such as China, provide subsidies for those who purchasing vehicles under 1.6L.All in all, only through the joint efforts of government and individuals can we live in a sustainable environment.Currently, a large proportion of children are exposed to an ocean of commercial advertisements day to day. I am on the side that the ads, which purposely incite kids to buy snacks, toys and electronic games, should be limited or even, banned.Suppose that ads aim to kids were rectified, children will not request their parents to buy what they want day in and day out. Kids lack sensitivity to price, nevertheless, parents tend to satisfytheir material needs. For instance, some children like expensive toys and girls are in favor of clothes. This will bring a heavy burden for the middle-class families. Only by minimize the impact of ads on kids can the problem be avoided.Children may have eccentric behaviours and bad living habits due to the ads. Some kids are fans of fast food, since they see ads of it every day. Others are in bad temper, due to the violent games they play daily. The predominance of games is also resulted from merchants’ propaganda. All these problems will influence the healthy growth process of kids both physically and mentally.However, we cannot deny that some ads do have their advantages to kids. Some advertisements promote nutrient food, such as milk, wheat, etc. Meanwhile, some advertise books, games and educational toys. Parents, who are not familiar with these products, can have a comprehensive verdict according to advertisements.In a nutshell, I strongly suggest the government ban ads whose target consumers are kids, especially if their products are harmful to children. But if the products the advertisements focus on are beneficial, then the ads should be allowed.小作文第一篇The table illustrates the proportion of people who are laid off in Poland, Denmark, Germany, Italy and Hungary. The two colons are the figures of young people (aged from 15-24) and all citizens respectively.The highest unemployment rate for young goes to Poland, which reaches 37% and is twice more than the rate of its overall rate 15%. Coming next is Italy. The proportion of its young citizens who are out of work is 23% and its unemployment of whole country comes to top at 18%. Hungary shows mediocre rates of 21% and 17%. And German figures are 4% and 3% lower than Denmark respectively. Denmark keeps both figures lowest, with the unemployment rate for 15-24 age group 8% and for overall only 3%.All of the five countries show 3~5% rates lower of overall unemployment than those of the young, except Poland which has the largest gap between the two figures.第二篇The bar charts provide us information about how families in an Asian country spent their money in 1998 and 2008.A glance at the charts tells that expenditure on different goods in 2008 overweighed that in 1998 except that spent on clothes. People gave much more priority to spiritual enjoyment which lead to a hugeincrease of expenditure on holiday, eating out, reading (newspapers and magazines) and going to cinema, rising from 8% to 15%, 6% to 15%,3% to 8% and 3%to 5% respectively. The costs for electronic goods also increased from 12% to14% during the decade.The only difference is expenditure on clothes which was totally opposite to the mainstream. The proportion of it was 10% in 1998; however it dropped to half of its original rates in 2008.All in all, the past 10 years witnessed a huge change of the expenditure on various of aspects for households.第三篇The charts tell the proportion of different categories of housepeople live in three parts of Australia in 2001 and 2006.In 2001, Victoria had 76% residents in house, 12% in semi-detached house, 11%in apartments and the rest in other types. In NSW, house also accounted for the largest part of 66%, with 10% and 13% induplex and flat respectively. And more people lived in other kinds. Tasmania had largest proportion of house living population, which reaches 88%.Five years later, the rates for house all dropped 2% in the three regions. As for semi-detached house, Victoria, NSW and Tasmania saw 1% increase, 1percent decrease and stability respectively. The figuresof flat all had a slightly increase. And for the rest unmentioned types, they remained the same at 1% except NSW rose from 11% to 12%.The table compares five European countries in terms of theproportions of unemployed people as well as the figures for those young people out of work.Poland had the highest youth unemployment rate at 37%, nearly five times the level in Denmark. The levels of unemployment for young people were similar in other countries, with the highest seen inItaly 23% and the lowest in Germany at 17%.It is clear from the table that in all these countries, the unemployment rate for the younger generation was higher than the overall unemployment figures. Interestingly, Poland, Germany, Italy and Hungary had similar unemployment rates, ranging between 15% and 18%. The figure for Denmark was significantly lower at 3%.Overall, youth unemployment was more serious in Poland than in other countries. Denmark had the lowest figures for both youth unemploymentand overall unemployment, while other countries had similar figuresfor these problems.流程图写作The chart illustrates how to use cocoa beans to produce several food items for customers.Firstly, whole beans are carefully picking before drying in the shell. Then they are pressed into cocoa liquor, which is the main materialof the second stage. Then cocoa liquor is further pressed until it becomes a coca cake, which is directly sent to industry to make cakes and drinks or is sold to the consumer after grinded into cocoa powder. The cocoa liquor can also convert into cocoa and then be sent to relevant industry. Cocoa liquor, after further refining, mix with cocoa and sugar turns to industry chocolate. Finished chocolate products will be put on the shell, before the final process.All in all, cocoa beans can be used to produce cocoa powder,chocolate products and ingredients for relevant industry throughthree simple stages starting from pre-processing raw material tofinal packaging for sell.顾家北The whole beans are picked at the first stage with shells removed,and then dried and pressed until cocoa liquor is created. This marks the start of the second stage, which involves three processes. The cocoa liquor can be used to make coca cakes in the first option. Another choice is the manufacture of cocoa, while cocoa liquor is refined in the third process to produce industrial chocolate.In the final stage, these materials are processed further to create different end products for either corporate clients or ordinary consumers. Coca cakes are ground into cocoa powder for individual consumers, or directly delivered to catering businesses which provide drinks and cakes. Cocoa in the second procedure mentioned earlier is also transported to these businesses. In contrast, the industrial chocolate is flavored with sugar, and finished chocolate products are subsequently available for consumers.第一篇The table provides us with data of the percentage of consumer expenditure on different items in five countries in 2002.The biggest number existed in Turkey, where people spent 32.14% of their income on food, drink and tobacco, almost five times the number of percentage spent on clothing (6.63%) and eight times the figure of percentage spent on spiritual enjoyment. Coming next is Ireland,whose percentage of national consumer expenditure of eating was28.91%. Costs for clothing and footwear accounted for only 6.43%, three times the expenditure of leisure and education. Spain took the third place though the proportion of its national consumerexpenditure was the lowest (1.98%). Expenditure of food items inSpain accounted for 18.8%, threefold the figure of its clothing spending. Italy and Sweden citizens had small percentages of income spent on food(16.36%,15.77%),only about half the figure of Turkey. However, their clothing costs (9%, 5.4%) and spiritual pay-outs (3.2%, 3.22%) were relatively high.In a nutshell, the percentages of national consumer expenditure by category in 2001 varied a lot among the five countries. But allshared some similarities, namely, largest proportion of expenditureon food, drink and tobacco and smallest percentage of leisure and education costs.第二篇The bar charts show the number of marriages and divorces in USA and marital status of American adults during the period of 1970 to 2000. The number of marriages remained at 2.5 million in 1970 and 1980,after which it had a slightly decrease to 2 million in 2000. The divorces number started form 1 million in 1970 and suddenly increased to almost 1.5 million during that decade. Then it dropped to nearly 1 million in 1980 and finally reached to its start(1 million).The percentage of never married adults was 15% in 1970 and the figure inclined to 20% thirty years later. The proportions of both married and widowed adults saw drops during the three decades. Married adults accounted for 70% in 1970 while the figure was less than 60% in 2000. As for divorce rate, it had a significant rise form nearly 0% to almost 10%.All in all, the period from 1970 to 2000 witnessed a huge change of marriages and divorces in America. Both the total number and percentage of marriage decreased while the proportions of never married and divorced people saw an upward trend.流程图The two diagrams illustrate how to produce cement and how to use cement to produce concrete.e Cement production is relatively complex and uses two materials. Firstly, limestone and clay are placed in the crusher, where these materials are crushed by the crusher. Then powder is mixed by the mixer, before being heated by the rotating heater. At the next stage, heated powder is sent to the grind, where it is grounded into cement. And finally cement is packed in the bags.Concrete production is relatively simple. 15% of cement, 10% of water, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel, namely small stones are mix in the concrete mixer, where they turned out to be concrete. All in all, cement production includes 5 stages and the outcome cement is one of the four raw materials of the concrete production.地图The maps show how an area changed during the period of 1780 to 2000. In 1780, there were 100 homes located on the north-eastern corner with woods to the south. A river crossed the area from south to north with four farms in the middle of the region.80 years later, the number of dwelling places doubled to 200, while the number of farms dropped by half and woods also shrank in size. A road was built in the north area, connecting the living place to the river. Another major change is that a bridge was constructed over the river.In 2000, the number of homes suddenly increased to 500 and a newly built road, heading towards south replaced farm and woods area, which linked the dwelling places to the school and sports field in the south. Several shops opened to the right side of the downstream river with a wetland for birds to their south. Overall, this area saw an increase in constructions such as dwelling places, schools and facilities, although farmland and forests were removed for new buildings and transport infrastructure. 大作文We live in cities or towns which have museums displaying historical and cultural importance, but people do not visit them. Why do you think people do not visit museums in their local areas ?What is the will not consider this option when they can spend leisure time on other activities. These museums do not organize new exhibitions that can keep up with the trends, or provide any form of entertainment like interactive games to attract the young audience. This is why a trip to a museum can hardly compete for attention with sports, picnics and parties. Another reason is that people can gather information about those artefacts on display on the Internet. They will increase knowledge about the storiesbehind and the cultural value of each item, without having to visiting the museum in person.Museums can encourage visitors’ interest in their cultural heritage and disseminate knowledge about a city or a county’s cultural assets. Some exhibitions may show ancient utensils used by previous generations, so people who attend these exhibitions may have a good idea of how traditional food was cooked. Some historical documents and paintings might show the architectural style which used to predominate, and many visitors might be impressed by the architectural achievements of their ancestors. With such knowledge, these visitors may make an effort to preserve some traditions and keep some old-fashioned cooking skills or building techniques alive.Museums have also been operating as a center of learning, where young people can keep up to date with the cutting-edge technology in different fields. The aviation museums, for example, give children a glimpse of the airline industry and even space travel, including spaceships and equipment supporting astronauts who explored the outer space. The museum of archeology can show them how some species have died out, and possibly inspire them to do research in biology and extend our knowledge of how to preserve our ecosystem. They could not make contributions to social progress, if they did not have access to such knowledge.Recently, an increasing number of people refused to pay a visit to museums in their local places. Personally, following reasons may account for the phenomenon.Some people reckon museums as boring places so that they are never willing to visit. For example, the historical and cultural importance displayed there has never changed and there is no entertainment, such as interactive games. All these tend to left people a boring feeling. In contrast, people prefer to join some interesting activities such as ball games, picnic and dining out. Another reason is that nowadays people learn history and acquire science knowledge through internet rather than go to library in person. Information of the exhibition's the historical value and story can be easily accessed on line.However, visiting museums play an important role in tradition inheriting. Ancient vessels provide us with traditional cooking methods while murals enable us to comprehend style of ancient architecture to some degree. It is advantageous for young people to pass on the culture if they have a good acknowledge of their own tradition by visiting museums.Additionally, museums offer us the most advanced science and technology, which is beneficial to the development of the society. The latest development of space and universe in our country can be acquired in space museums and the young can understand the reason of creature extinction through visiting archaeology museums. Museums can motivate the interests of the adolescents and the young will accelerates the development of society in the future.Overall, visiting museums is of great significance for both the individuals’ comprehending of culture and the development of our society.顾家北Visiting museums is hardly a rewarding experience for many people, so they will not consider this option when they can spend leisure timeon other activities. These museums do not organise new exhibitionsthat can keep up with the trends, or provide any form ofentertainment like interactive games to attract the young audience. This is why a trip to a museum can hardly compete for attention with sports, picnics and parties. Another reason is that people can gather information about those artefacts on display on the Internet. Theywill increase knowledge about the stories behind and the cultural value of each item, without having to visiting the museum in person.Museums can encourage visitors’ interest in their cultural heritage and disseminate knowledge about a city or a county’s cultural assets. Some exhibitions may show ancient utensils used by previous generations, so people who attend these exhibitions may have a good idea of how traditional food was cooked. Some historical documentsand paintings might show the architectural style which used to predominate, and many visitors might be impressed by thearchitectural achievements of their ancestors. With such knowledge, these visitors may make an effort to preserve some traditions and keep some old-fashioned cooking skills or building techniques alive.Museums can also provide us with the latest technological advances, which is beneficial to the development of the society. For example, the aviation museums offer us latest knowledge of aeronautics while the archaeology museums help us comprehend the reason of extinction. This is why museums can not only motivate the interests of teenagers but also encourage them to study hard in a long run, which will accelerate the improvement of the society in the future. (Self-written paragraph)The aviation museums spaceships, shuttles, astronauts, explore the outer space,Some people think university education should provide students with skills of employment in the future while others believe that people should focus on academic study only. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.People rely more on foreign products and imitate traditions and culture of other countries, which lead to a hard way to pass on their own culture. For instance, too much reliance on the foreign cosmetics will surely shrink the demand of domestic market, which requires the local industry to downsize work force and thus traditional ways of making up will be abandoned. Additionally, those who are in favor of celebrating others’ festivals tend to give less priority to their own traditions. This will put the intangible culture heritage form our ancestors in a dangerous situation.Many countries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent on public services and facilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.翻译练习1. 人们对政府赞助艺术(government sponsorship)有不同的看法,特别在国家遇到预算问题的时候。
雅思作文顾家北作文8步法和ABC法精髓

雅思作文顾家北作文步法和8 法精髓ABC.III 上课的核心概念1 关于 ABC (非常重要)ABC 是简单的一个逻辑次序: A 一般是个动作或者行为, B 是这个行为产生的结果, C是 B 的结果。
假如题目是:The government should require people to lead a healthy lifestyle. To whatextent do youa gree or disagree?题目大意:政府应该要人们过健康的生活。
同意还是不同意?这个题目是确定 A:政府要人们过健康的生活如果你支持,那么你需要想一个优点:A 政府要人们过健康的生活B 人们多运动,会减少疾病C 有利于提高生产力和对国家做贡献如果你反对,那么你需要想一个缺点:A 政府要人们过健康的生活B 人们觉得自己不能随心所欲生活C 不开心,没有满足感Action-?result--?end: ARE时候把 ABC 说成是我们有resultABC 常见的误解:误解 1: B 和 C 是 A 的解释。
或者 C 是 A 和 B 的一个总结。
答:不是的。
A 是一个动作或者行为, B 是 A 产生的结果, C 是 B 的结果。
误解 2: ABC 各写一句话。
答:不是的。
有时候 A 和 B 可以写成一句话, C 一句话。
ABC 只是一个思路,帮助学生思考事情的因果关系,在考场上不是杂乱无章,仅此而已。
当 ABC 写到段落里的时候, A 和 B 可以写到一句,作为中心句,第二句话是 C。
也可能 A 本身是中心句, B 和 C 写到第二句。
还有其他可能,只要顺序是 ABC 的顺序就可以。
误解 3: ABC 要写的很详细。
答:不是的,考场上没有那么多时间, ABC 简单为主,控制在 15 字以下。
ABC 不是将你大脑里所有的中文都写出来。
恰恰相反, ABC 是让你在大脑的信息里找出一个简单的因果关系,帮助你理清思路。
考场作文偏离题意的十大症状

考场作文偏离题意的十大症状作者:胡家曙来源:《广东教育·高中》2011年第01期高考作文要得很高的分数,必须有很强的实力;相反,得了过低的分数,多半却不是实力的原因,只能说是一失足成千古恨。
研究各地高考出现的三类卷、四类卷作文,会发现它们的失误几乎都是作文内容偏离题意造成的。
以2010年各地高考作文为例,低分作文的失误主要表现为十大症状。
一、误解题意:不理解题目意图,错误解读题目含义,造成作文“脱离材料内容及含意的范围”。
典型病例:2010年全国Ⅰ卷考的是漫画作文题:四个猫正在吃鱼时,一个猫跃身而起去捉旁边的老鼠,其中一个猫惊奇:“都什么年代了,有鱼吃还捉老鼠!”这个题目意在表达责任、追求、坚守等方面的主题。
而一位河南考生写猫捕鼠是因为“物以稀为贵”,这就显然和漫画主旨大相径庭了。
因为偏离题旨,这篇作文只得了33分。
治病处方:认真审读题目,整体把握题目意图,在此基础上再确立主题。
二、忽视范围:有些题目对写作内容有明确的范围限制,而作文时考生却忽视了这个限制,使作文内容超出了题目划定的圆圈。
典型病例:2010年高考浙江卷要求根据材料以“角色转换之间”为题作文,只要认真读一下材料,不难发现,材料讲的是年青一代对年长一代的“文化反哺”问题,而一位考生作文时却始终围绕“真情,存在于角色转换之间”,写两代人之间的角色转换。
因内容不符合要求,该文只得了30分。
治病处方:任何题目都会规定写作范围,强化题目的范围意识,确保构思时不越界。
三、不明方向:对题目设置的前提性要求视若无睹,考生写得热火朝天,没想到一开始就会注定失败。
典型病例:2010年高考安徽卷提供了清朝阮元的《吴兴杂诗》,题目指出:“这首诗蕴含的哲理,引发了你怎样的思考或联想?”这就要求,作文必须根据诗歌的哲理为写作方向,而一位考生却以“好的图片”为作文题目,文章主要想象原诗描写的水乡图景,这样的内容显然是不符合要求的,作文只得了33分。
治病处方:细致研究题目及材料的指向,根据题目确定的方向思考问题。
高考作文中堪称经典笑话的错误

高考作文中堪称经典笑话的错误
1. 主题错误:某篇高考作文主题为“健康饮食的重要性”,但考生误将主题理解为“钱的重要性”。
作文内容全文围绕着“只有钱才能吃到健康食品”的观点展开,完全偏离了题目。
笑点在于考生对作文题目理解的荒谬性。
2. 文字错误:在一篇高考作文中,考生试图描绘一幅美丽的春日景象,但却出现了一个明显的错别字。
考生误将“鲜花盛开”写成了“炎花盛开”。
这个错误造成了极大的滑稽效果,令人忍俊不禁。
3. 句法错误:某一篇高考作文的第一句话应该是“随着科技的高速发展”,考生却将句子写成了“随着科技的高速垮掉”。
这个意想不到的糟糕翻译,给整篇作文注入了荒诞的气氛,让人捧腹大笑。
请注意,以上的错误例子只是为了娱乐目的而编写,并非真实的高考作文错误。
在高考作文中,正确理解并准确回答题目,使用正确的词汇和语法非常重要。
高考小作文常见失误展示

高考小作文常见失误展示自90代以来,普通高考作文形成了相对稳定的命题模式,除了1994年只有一篇作文外,均采取了一大一小两篇作文的方式。
这种测试形式,已得到广大师生、专家及社会的认可,主要原因育二:一是将评分主观性强的作文分成两块,可由两个以上的阅卷人批阅评分,减少了主观评分的误差,给考生以相对公正的评价;二是小作文可以更集中测试考生某一方面写作技能的水平,同时避免一篇作文分值过于集中,“一着不慎,全盘皆输”,好学生“败走麦城”的偶然性,为考生的公平竞争提供更为宽松的机会。
据笔者近十年高考作文阅卷情况看。
小作文虽然“小”,但出现的失误却远比大作文要“大”得多,暴露出了写作中的薄弱环节,值得我们引以为鉴。
描写类小作文[考题一]材料1:小新背双腿瘫痪的同学小牧到一公里外的学校上学,从小学五年级到现在高中一年级,一背就是6年1000多个日子。
根据材料1,描写背同学上学的情景。
注意:①体会人物的思想品质和“材料1”所提供的条件,设想小新同学上学的情景。
想象要合理。
②重点写小新,用什么人称都可以。
③重点在行动描写,也可适当运用其它表达方式。
④200字左右。
【失误一】想象不合理。
从阅卷中发现,有相当数量的考生在设想小新背同学小牧上学时的情景是不合情理的,也就是说,违背了题目所要求的“想象要合理”这一条。
譬如说,有的学生设想小新有“低血糖”病,自顾尚且不暇,何以助人?有的设想小新上学途中有条大河,必须背着小牧涉水而过;有的甚至至设想上学必经一条大河,恰逢洪水泛滥,桥被冲垮,小新只能背着小牧在洪水中拼命挣扎,险些丧失性命,等爬上岸,已累得如同一堆烂泥;也有考生设想小新经常背小牧上学途中“累昏过去”,等等,这些想象显然是不合理的。
如下文:在一条涨潮的小河前有两个人在经受着风雨的洗礼。
你看,小新下定了决心,可忧愁仍不免锁在了他的心头,他背着小牧下了深不可测的河,想游过去。
可是体弱的他经不得长时间的拼搏,渐渐地体力开始不支,牧说:“放下我!小新说:“不行,我无论如何也……”渐渐地渐渐地小新的身体一点点地向下沉,小新使出全身的力量奋力奋斗着,紧咬牙关一股劲把小牧托到了河对岸,而自己则在水中打转。
高二小说:错误

错误本文是高中关于高二小说的错误,欢迎阅读。
他开着车,突然手机响了。
看到号码后,他忙满脸堆笑地接电话:“局长啊,我们在路上呢,您放心,我一定将她老人家安全送到医院检查,再安全送回。
您的母亲就是我的母亲,我……您现在有事啊,那我就不打扰了。
”他是局长的司机,更是他的私人秘书。
局长平时很忙,家里的老母亲一直是他在照顾。
今天是医院免费为老年人检查身体的日子,他应局长之托,送局长的母亲到医院检查。
他心里有一种隐隐的愧疚感,于是给自己的母亲打了个电话:“喂,妈,我最近工作忙没时间回去,行了行了,我正忙着呢!”说完,他面带不耐烦的愠色挂了电话。
坐在车后排的局长的母亲轻轻叹了口气。
中秋节快到了,他早早备好了给局长母亲的礼品。
一来是局长的嘱托,二来谁不想趁这个机会献个殷勤呢?他在中秋节之前去看望了一下许久未见的母亲。
母亲见他来了,显得很高兴。
临走时,母亲仿佛想起了一件要紧事,她从里屋拿出一个包装十分精美的礼盒,他愣住了,这不是自己买给局长母亲的礼品吗?没错,礼盒上还印着“祝天下父母身体健康”的字样呢!“虎子啊,昨天你媳妇儿送来这个礼盒,我瞧着挺贵吧。
你带回去送给局长吧,没准儿人家更看重你。
妈身体好着呢,没事别往家里跑,工作要紧。
”他机械地伸手接过礼盒,又机械地伸回来,鼻子酸酸的。
回到家,他开始抱怨妻子:“你也不问我这是送给谁的就往咱妈那儿送,你送错了!这是我买给局长母亲的。
幸亏咱妈又给了我,要不然我得再买一份,你知道这有多贵吗?”这时,他收到一条短信,他被短信的内容惊着了:“老人家出事了,快送去医院。
”他忙起身,在那条走得频率最高的路上,他火速赶往局长家。
敲开门,局长母亲有些惊讶地说:“你怎么来了?”他瞧着局长母亲似乎一切都好,于是讪讪的地说:“啊,这个,我,我给您送中秋节礼品来了。
”“谢谢你啊,进来坐会儿吧。
”局长母亲说。
局长母亲给他倒了杯茶,说到:“大虎啊,平时多亏你来看我,不像我那儿子,节假日只知道去看望厅长母亲,你来我这倒比他勤些。
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错误以少妇的角度来写作文

错误以少妇的角度来写作文
哎呀,这天气热得让人受不了!少妇我穿着短袖短裤,坐在沙
发上扇着扇子,还是感觉黏糊糊的。
哈哈哈,今天真是个好日子啊!超市打折,我抢购了一堆东西,回来一看账单,感觉自己好像捡了个大便宜。
嗯哼,今天和老公安静地坐在阳台上,看着孩子们在楼下玩耍。
这种平淡的幸福,其实也很美好啊。
我的天,刚刚接到婆婆的电话,说家里有点事,我得赶紧回去
看看。
这生活啊,总是有意想不到的惊喜和惊吓。
嗯?今天的菜怎么这么咸?啊,原来是我盐放多了。
哈哈,看
来我今天的厨艺又有待提高啊。
哎哟,刚刚不小心把杯子打碎了。
看来我得小心点了,不然家
里的东西都得遭殃。
啊,老公突然说晚上要加班,我又得一个人看孩子了。
不过也
没关系,我能应付得来。
嘿嘿,今天和朋友聚会,大家都说我越来越有少妇的味道了。
是不是因为我最近学会了做一手好菜?
哎呀,孩子的作业我又不会做了。
看来我得去找个家教了,不然孩子的学习可怎么办?
哈哈,今天终于抽出时间去健身房了。
虽然累得一身汗,但感觉身体都轻松了许多。
嗯,运动还是有好处的嘛!。
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作文典型错误:
1.We are frequently confronted with statement about the alarming rate of loss of language diversity.
2.Globalisation will always have supporters who are blind on the destruction it can cause.
3.One problem that has not yet been addressed is the existing infrastructure and facilities fail to meet the demand posed by increased arrivals of tourists.
4.Children, if grown up in a multicultural society, are more likely to embrace different cultures and values.
5.It is obvious that comparing with its drawbacks, the rise of English as a global language can bring us a lot of benefits.
6.Importing goods from overseas might cause a country to depend exceedingly on imports, which mean that it would gradually lose the control on the market.
7.It would be not denying that almost every country has its unique culture or art forms that is different from other countries'.
8.Cultural diversity can be viewed both positively and negatively. While some see it as a barrier to effective communication or a cause of miscommunication, the others regard it as an asset.
9.It is undeniable fact that the tourism industry has provided a substantial source of income for many countries.
10.I believe that everything has its downside, and the spread of English as a global language in the world is not exception.
11.New immigrants cannot fit into a new environment can happen very often.
12.Tourism also enables people, not only visitors, but also local dwellers, learn values and features of different cultural backgrounds.
13.Cross-cultural communication occurs between people living in same country but from different cultural backgrounds.
14.In a multi-ethnical society, nationality can a taboo subject and people are embarrassed to talk openly about it.
15.Many donor countries believe that main obstacle to third-world development is lack of capital and that giving poor countries cash to invest can spur rapid grow.
16.The continuing cultural invasion creates problems and troubles for social solidarity, whether it is at the level of nation, community or family.
17.No matter where they come from or what their previous lifestyle is, migrants should seek to adapt to a new culture.
18.The host country provides many social settings for language acquisition to be taken place.
19.We are not surprising to see that in the coming decades, English language learners will account for the majority of the entire school-aged population in every part of the world.
20.There can be little doubt that the people who are fluent bilinguals outperform monolingual speakers in the workplace, as the world is increasingly global connected.
21.As our world shrinks and business becomes increasingly increasingly international, people, who can speak two languages fluently, will be taken as a valuable resource to society.
22.The effect globalisation has had on culture is immense and diversity.
23.During last decade, there has been much discussion and controversy over the impact of global economic integration.
24.Globalisation poses both opportunities and problems for every industry in a worldwide scale.
25.There is an inescapable trend that those economic developed areas are in the vanguard of cultural change.
26.Like tourism,telecommunications represent the fastest-growing and the most profitable industry in many countries across the world.
27.Movies have a means to present contemporary attitudes, fashions and events.
28.The government and the local people have to preserve the original appearance of the local cultures, customs and etiquettes, even though their purpose is meeting the expectation of the tourists from all over the world.
29.The easy of communication and the spread of information increase the proportion of economic activity that can operate beyond national borders.
30.Those who speak English as the native language have an overt advantage, in large part because they have not difficulty in communicating in the business, scientific and educational worlds.。