顾家北最新雅思写作课程
B150-雅思-顾家北写作-0608 精品班第四课公屏
顾家北(389522376) 19:05:12which was 4%顾家北(389522376) 19:13:55The chart shows the online activities of people living in a UK city in two years.顾家北(389522376) 19:15:53The bar chart compares the proportions of Internet users who engaged in different online activities in the years 2007 and 2009.顾家北(389522376) 19:16:26The bar chart compares the proportions of Internet users who engaged in different online activities in the years 2007 and 2009. (T)顾家北(389522376) 19:21:24The proportion of internet users who shopped online was 65%.顾家北(389522376) 19:22:0865% of Internet users shopped online.顾家北(389522376) 19:23:16Those who shopped online accounted for 65% of internet users.广告:主播趣事一箩筐~赵小磊获开1国王，11公爵守护！小损样竟然曝料红叶舞秋山"拉"了；神豪“散人”被曝真容；神壕点哥给天佑刷礼物，破传闻！顾家北(389522376) 19:32:27Booking something online was the next top activity and also gained in popularity, with the figure rising from 56% to 60%.顾家北(389522376) 19:38:31•单图按照对象分•••多图如果对象一致，单位一致，按照单图来看••多图如果对象不一致，单位不一致，按照图来分顾家北(389522376) 19:42:38Listening to music was also popular, but the percentage of users who streamed music online declined to around 45% during this period.顾家北(389522376) 19:48:04On the other hand, other activities attracted a smaller proportion of people on the web.顾家北(389522376) 19:50:37The most remarkable increase was in the use of the Internet for watching TV (reaching 32% in 2009), while the figures for jobseeking and gaming climbed to 32% and 28% respectively.顾家北(389522376) 20:06:43Overall, shopping online and booking something remained the most prevalent online activities. There was an increase in the popularity of all online activities, except online learning and listening to music. 顾家北(389522376) 20:41:04The bar chats show the percentages of people aged 60-64 who were still in the workforce in four countries in 1970 and 2000.顾家北(389522376) 20:42:23The charts compare four countries in terms of the proportions of people who continued to work after the age of 60 in two different years. （T）顾家北(389522376) 21:45:51least likely to。
B147-雅思-顾家北写作-0608 精品班第六次课公屏
顾家北(389522376) 19:07:21A 负社会责任B 对员工好C 员工表现更好，企业受益更好A 负社会责任B 帮助当地社区的人解决问题C 得到当地人支持，效益更好A负社会责任 B 产品符合当地人的需要 C 收益更高A负社会责任 B 保护当地环境 C 得到当地政府的支持，经营更加容易A负社会责任 B 增加企业的成本 C 影响效益顾家北(389522376) 19:07:521. （A工作的收入 B 工作的稳定性 C 工作的升职和发展机会 D 和同事上司的关系 E 工作的环境 F 工作的时间和放假的时间长短 G 工作的自由度 H 实现自己才华的机会）能够决定工作满意度顾家北(389522376) 19:09:41profitable顾家北(389522376) 19:15:06政府、企业、有钱人，甚至是普通人（A 捐钱去帮助穷人 B筹款去解决民生问题，譬如说医疗、住宿还有教育 C捐钱建基础的设施，譬如说图书馆 D 保护环境），使社区减少贫富差距，社区更加快乐和和平广告:年度巅峰大战！Y阅抢先看：阿哲三小时500百万票！荣登22日榜首；神豪星爷下山助战安可儿年度；聆听king获神壕孤帆134万票秒榜；赵家军凑单团购马甲；更多一手战报猛戳这里>>顾家北(389522376) 19:15:451. 公司需要（A 注意客户的需要，设计有竞争力的产品 B 产品性价比高 C提供准时快捷贴心的服务，处理客户投诉很快捷 D有激情、接受过好培训、有创造力的员工 E 好的理财能力，控制好成本 F 足够的资金 G好的商业计划 H好的管理能力，增加效率）才能够获得利润和成功顾家北(389522376) 19:16:41次话题一：能源的消耗，新能源的开发次话题二：水资源的使用和水污染次话题三：垃圾的产生次话题四：动物保护顾家北(389522376) 19:19:16shut down factories顾家北(389522376) 19:30:57In the modern world, fashion is becoming more and more popular in people's choice of clothes. Why has this happened? Do you think it is positive development or negative development?顾家北(389522376) 19:34:401. （A 广告 B 信用卡付账 C 网络商务 D经济发展导致收入增加 E产品不断更新 F某些商品的价格不断下降 G 追求时尚的名人不断在媒体上出现 H 人们追求物质享受）导致了消费文化，人们喜欢攀比，大手大脚花钱，买很多东西。
顾家北手把手教你雅思写作——0414
翻译：居高不下的失业率会对社会稳定产生 负面的影响。 Higher unemployment rate have a negative on social stability. 修改：The soaring unemployment rate has a negative effect on social stability.
It is known to all that the technological and scientific advances have made greater changes to the range and quality of our food. Some people regard it as an improvement while others believe that the change is harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 科技-食物
As economy develops, people get richer. Studies show that people in developing countries feel happier than before, while people in developed countries feel less happier. Why do you think is it? What lessons can we learn from it? 社会观 念-幸福和金钱
顾家北手把手教你雅思写作
——简单的句子也可以看出水平，如何拓展
主讲人：顾家北
2013/04/14
Social sd quantification for success in a job. Do you agree or disagree? 教育- 技能
顾家北雅思作文汇总
顾家北 0813精品班作文大作文Man.peopl.thin.i.i.ver.importan.t.protec.th.environmen.bu.t he.mak.n.effor.t.d.i.themselves.Wh.d.yo.thin.i.i.th.case.Wh a.action.ca.b.don.t.ensur.tha.individual.protec.th.environm ent?顾家北Environmenta.problem.hav.threatene.th.worl.bu.fe.peopl.hav. chose.t.tak.an.actio.t.dea.wit.thes.problems.althoug.the.re alis.th.impac.o.thes.environmenta.woe.o.thei.lives.W.shoul. implemen.som.change.t.improv.th.situation.Man.peopl.spen.mone.wisely.s.the.ar.no.willin.t.purchas.env ironmentall.friendl.products.despit.th.fac.tha.thes.product .ca.hel.preserv.th.environment.Thes.product.ar.normall.mor.expensiv.tha.conventiona.counte rparts.Fo.example.LE.lightin.device.ar.energ.efficient.bu.n ormall.charg.consumer..highe.pric.tha.traditiona.ligh.bulbs .Electri.car.ar.normall.likel.t.cos.mor.mone.tha.thos.vehic le.powere.b.petrol.A.consumer.d.no.op.fo.thes.gree.products .i.i.no.eas.t.conserv.resource.an.reduc.pollution.Anothe.reaso.i.tha.man.peopl.ar.no.willin.t.chang.thei.way. o.life.eve.thoug.thes.lifestyle.ca.b.harmfu.t.th.environmen t..o.electrica.equipmen.ha.le.t..shar.ris.i.electricit.c onsumption.whic.mean.tha.th.powe.generatio.secto.ha..highe. deman.fo.fossi.fuels.Peopl.als.prefe.t.trave.b.car.bu.ca.em ission.ca.caus.globa.warming.whic.i..threa.t.th.environment .Th.relianc.o.differen.electroni.product.includin.mobil.pho ndfil.si tes.●ernment.ca.enaw.t.forbi.thos.behaviour.whic.ca.caus.damag.t.th.environment.suc.a.disposin.o.wast.carelessly.Thos.wh.dro.li tte.shoul.b.fined.s.th.environmenta.impac.o.thi.behaviou .ca.b.reduced.Anothe.solutio.i.t.offe.subsidie.t.encourag.peopl.t.g.green.Fo.example.thos.consumer.wh.bu.fue.efficien.car.ca.b.subsidised.s.ca.emission.ca.b.reduce.sign ificantly.●Currently, more and more people are aware of the importance ofenvironmental protection but the public never give priority to protect environment during their daily life.On.reaso.account.fo.th.phenomeno.i.tha.peopl.liv.carefull.w ithou.spendin.thei.mone.o.environmenta.products.Household.l iv.wit..tigh.budge.ar.no.willin.t.spen.thei.mone.thes.produ cts.whos.price.ar.highe.tha.othe.simila.goods.Fo.instance.L E.light.ar.energ.saving.bu.the.ar.mor.expensiv.tha.incandes cen.bulbs.Similarly.price.o.electri.vehicle.ar.highe.tha.th os.o.traditiona.vehicle.averagely.Fo.th.sak.o.money.peopl.q ui.buyin.gree.product.an.thi.i.contrar.t.ou.purpos.o.enviro nmenta.protection.Anothe.reaso.ca.b.tha.peopl.ar.no.willin.t.chang.thei.livin .styles.whic.nee.t.consum.variou.kind.o.energy.Fo.example.e lectroni.appliance.consum.electricit.whil.drivin.consume.pe trol.Especiall.thos.wh.ar.fon.o.plent.o.material.consum.mor e.w.t .ba.citizen.fro.doin.detrimenta.behaviour.t.environment.Pun ishment.ar.imperativ.fo.thos.wh.littered.O.th.othe.hand.i.iernmen.t.giv.subsidie.t.encourag.en vironmenta.protection.Som.countries.suc.a.China.provid.subs idie.fo.thos.wh.purchasin.vehicle.unde.1.6L.All in all, only through the joint efforts of government and individuals can we live in a sustainable environment.rg.proportio.o.childre.ar.expose.t.a.ocea.o.co mmercia.advertisement.da.t.day..a.o.th.sid.tha.th.ads.whic. purposel.incit.kid.t.bu.snacks.toy.an.electroni.games.shoul .b.limite.o.even.banned.Suppos.tha.ad.ai.t.kid.wer.rectified.childre.wil.no.reques. c.sensiti vit.t.price.nevertheless.parent.ten.t.satisf.thei.materia.n eeds.Fo.instance.som.childre.lik.expensiv.toy.an.girl.ar.i. favo.o.clothes.Thi.wil.brin..heav.burde.fo.th.middle-clas.f amilies.Onl.b.minimiz.th.impac.o.ad.o.kid.ca.th.proble.b.av oided.Childre.ma.hav.eccentri.behaviour.an.ba.livin.habit.du.t.th .ads.Som.kid.ar.fan.o.fas.food.sinc.the.se.ad.o.i.ever.day. Other.ar.i.ba.temper.du.t.th.violen.game.the.pla.daily.Th.p redominanc.o.game.i.als.resulte.fro.merchants.propaganda.Al .thes.problem.wil.influenc.th.health.growt.proces.o.kid.bot .physicall.an.mentally.However.w.canno.den.tha.som.ad.d.hav.thei.advantage.t.kids. k.wheat.etc. cationa.toys.Parent prehensiv.v erdic.accordin.t.advertisements.ernmen.ba.ad.whos.targe.c onsumer.ar.kids.especiall.i.thei.product.ar.harmfu.t.childr en.Bu.i.th.product.th.advertisement.focu.o.ar.beneficial.th e.th.ad.shoul.b.allowed.小作文第一篇i.of.i.Pola nd.Denmark.Germany.Ital.an.Hungary.Th.tw.colon.ar.th.figure .o.youn.peopl.(age.fro.15-24.an.al.citizen.respectively.Th.highes.unemploymen.rat.fo.youn.goe.t.Poland.whic.reache.37.an.i.twic.mor.tha.th.rat.o.it.overal.rat.15%.Comin.nex.i .Italy.Th.proportio.o.it.youn.citizen.wh.ar.ou.o.wor.i.23.a e.t.to.a.18%.Hungar.show. mediocr.rate.o.21.an.17%.An.Germa.figure.ar.4.an.3.lowe.tha .Denmar.respectively.Denmar.keep.bot.figure.lowest.wit.th.u 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fo.bird.t.thei.south.Overall.thi.are.sa.a.increas.i.construction.suc.a.dwellin.p laces.school.an.facilities.althoug.farmlan.an.forest.wer.re move.fo.ne.building.an.transpor.infrastructure.大作文W.liv.i.citie.o.town.whic.hav.museum.displayin.historica.an .cultura.importance.bu.peopl.d.no.visi.them.Wh.d.yo.thin.pe opl.d.no.visi.museum.i.thei.loca.areas？Wha.i.th.importanc.o.museum.t.society?顾家北Visitin.museum.i.hardl..rewardin.experienc.fo.man.people.s. the.wil.no.conside.thi.optio.whe.the.ca.spen.leisur.tim.o.o aniz.ne.exhibition.tha.c a.kee.u.wit.th.trends.o.provid.an.for.o.entertainmen.lik.in teractiv.game.t.attrac.th.youn.audience.Thi.i.wh..tri.t..mu pet.fo.attentio.wit.sports.picnic.an.partie rmatio.abou.thos.ar tefact.o.displa.o.th.Internet.The.wil.increas.knowledg.abou.th.storie.behin.an.th.cultura.valu.o.eac.item.withou.havin .t.visitin.th.museu.i.person.Museum.ca.encourag.visitors.interes.i.thei.cultura.heritag. an.disseminat.knowledg.abou..cit.o..county’.cultura.assets e.b.previou.generat ions.s.peopl.wh.atten.thes.exhibition.ma.hav..goo.ide.o.ho. traditiona.foo.wa.cooked.Som.historica.document.an.painting e.t.predominate.an.ma n.visitor.migh.b.impresse.b.th.architectura.achievement.o.t hei.ancestors.Wit.suc.knowledge.thes.visitor.ma.mak.a.effor .t.preserv.som.tradition.an.kee.som.old-fashione.cookin.ski ll.o.buildin.technique.alive.Museum.hav.als.bee.operatin.a..cente.o.learning.wher.youn.p eopl.ca.kee.u.t.dat.wit.th.cutting-edg.technolog.i.differen .fields.Th.aviatio.museums.fo.example.giv.childre..glimps.o .th.airlin.industr.an.eve.spac.travel.includin.spaceship.an .equipmen.supportin.astronaut.wh.explore.th.oute.space.Th.m useu.o.archeolog.ca.sho.the.ho.som.specie.hav.die.out.an.po ssibl.inspir.the.t.d.researc.i.biolog.an.exten.ou.knowledg.o.ho.t.preserv.ou.ecosystem.The.coul.no.mak.contribution.t. socia.progress.i.the.di.no.hav.acces.t.suc.knowledge.Recently.a.increasin.numbe.o.peopl.refuse.t.pa..visi.t.muse um.i.thei.loca.places.Personally.followin.reason.ma.accoun. fo.th.phenomenon.Som.peopl.recko.museum.a.borin.place.s.tha.the.ar.neve.will in.t.visit.Fo.example.th.historica.an.cultura.importanc.dis playe.ther.ha.neve.change.an.ther.i.n.entertainment.suc.a.i nteractiv.games.Al.thes.ten.t.lef.peopl..borin.feeling.I.co ntrast.peopl.prefe.t.joi.som.interestin.activitie.suc.a.bal .games.picni.an.dinin.out.Anothe.reaso.i.tha.nowaday.peopl. lear.histor.an.acquir.scienc.knowledg.throug.interne.rathe. rmatio.o.th.exhibition'.th.hist orica.valu.an.stor. ca.b.easil.accesse.o.line.However.visitin.museum.pla.a.importan.rol.i.traditio.inheri ting.Ancien.vessel.provid.u.wit.traditiona.cookin.method.wh prehen.styl.o.ancien.architectur.t.so m.degree.I.i.advantageou.fo.youn.peopl.t.pas.o.th.cultur.i.the.hav..goo.acknowledg.o.thei.ow.traditio.b.visitin.museum s.Additionally.museum.offe.u.th.mos.advance.scienc.an.technol tes. developmen.o.spac.an.univers.i.ou.countr.ca.b.acquire.i.spa c.museum.an.th.youn.ca.understan.th.reaso.o.creatur.extinct io.throug.visitin.archaeolog.museums.Museum.ca.motivat.th.i nterest.o.th.adolescent.an.th.youn.wil.accelerate.th.develo pmen.o.societ.i.th.future.Overall, visiting museums is of great significance for both the individuals’ comprehending of culture and the development of our society.顾家北Visitin.museum.i.hardl..rewardin.experienc.fo.man.people.s. the.wil.no.conside.thi.optio.whe.the.ca.spen.leisur.tim.o.o anis.ne.exhibition.tha.c a.kee.u.wit.th.trends.o.provid.an.for.o.entertainmen.lik.in teractiv.game.t.attrac.th.youn.audience.Thi.i.wh..tri.t..mu pet.fo.attentio.wit.sports.picnic.an.partie rmatio.abou.thos.artefact.o.displa.o.th.Internet.The.wil.increas.knowledg.abou .th.storie.behin.an.th.cultura.valu.o.eac.item.withou.havin .t.visitin.th.museu.i.person.Museum.ca.encourag.visitors.interes.i.thei.cultura.heritag. an.disseminat.knowledg.abou..cit.o..county’.cultura.assets e.b.previou.generat ions.s.peopl.wh.atten.thes.exhibition.ma.hav..goo.ide.o.ho. traditiona.foo.wa.cooked.Som.historica.document.an.painting e.t.predominate.an.ma n.visitor.migh.b.impresse.b.th.architectura.achievement.o.t hei.ancestors.Wit.suc.knowledge.thes.visitor.ma.mak.a.effor .t.preserv.som.tradition.an.kee.som.old-fashione.cookin.ski ll.o.buildin.technique.alive.tes.technologica.advances.w hic.i.beneficia.t.th.developmen.o.th.society.Fo.example.th. tes.knowledg.o.aeronautic.whil.th.a prehen.th.reaso.o.extinction.Thi.i.wh.museum.ca.no.onl.motivat.th.interest.o.teenager.bu.als .encourag.the.t.stud.har.i..lon.run.whic.wil.accelerat.th.i mprovemen.o.th.societ.i.th.future.(Self-writte.paragraph)The aviation museums spaceships, shuttles, astronauts, explore the outer space,catio.shoul.provid.student.wit. skill.o.employmen.i.th.futur.whil.other.believ.tha.peopl.sh oul.focu.o.academi.stud.only.Discus.bot.view.an.giv.you.ow. opinion.Som.peopl.thin.th.increasin.busines.an.cultura.contac.betwe e.countrie.bring.man.positiv.effects.Other.sa.i.cause.th.lo s.o.nationa.identities.Discus.o.bot.side.an.giv.you.opinion .Peopl.rel.mor.o.foreig.product.an.imitat.tradition.an.cultu r.o.othe.countries.whic.lea.t..har.wa.t.pas.o.thei.ow.cultu re.Fo.instance.to.muc.relianc.o.th.foreig.cosmetic.wil.sure l.shrin.th.deman.o.domesti.market.whic.require.th.loca.indu str.t.downsiz.wor.forc.an.thu.traditiona.way.o.makin.u.wil.b.abandoned.Additionally.thos.wh.ar.i.favo.o.celebratin.oth ers.festival.ten.t.giv.les.priorit.t.thei.ow.traditions.Thi .wil.pu.th.intangibl.cultur.heritag.for.ou.ancestor.i..dang erou.situation.Man.countrie.spen..lo.o.mone.i.art.Som.peopl.thin.investmen .i.ar.i.necessary.bu.other.sa.mone.i.bette.spen.o.publi.ser vice.an.facilities.Discus.bot.view.an.giv.you.ow.opinion.翻译练习1. 人们对政府赞助艺术（governmen.sponsorship）有不同的看法, 特别在国家遇到预算问题的时候.People have adopted different attitudes towards government sponsorship of arts, especially when their countries’ budgets are in the red.2. 我觉得我们应该首先注重基础设施, 只有政府有盈余的时候才去投资艺术。
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Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world has been increasing. Why this has happened and how to deal with this problem? 犯罪A大城市竞争激烈B经济和心理压力大C年轻人犯罪解决Intense competition economic pressures release negative emotionsA: 影视作品追求收视率 R: 接触承认内容 E：年轻人模仿Boost ratings, exposed to adult content， fall into a life of crime led astrayA政府加强教育宣传R认识到犯罪严重性E少年犯罪率下降Launch awareness campaigns, dire consequences of crimes, curb crime年轻人应注重培养各方面的能力(receive a well-rounded education) b. 提高年轻人的竞争力（increase competitiveness） c. 解决生存问题(make a decent living)，年轻人犯罪率下降Juvenile delinquency has become a widespread problem in some urban areas and it is important to tackle this problem.The competition is intense in cities and this is possibly a primary cause of soaring youth crime. Young people are likely to face some problems that cause economic pressures, and it is difficult for them to find well-paid jobs and afford property. They may choose to commit crimes to release negative emotions or sometimes to earn a fast buck.Another reason is that media companies give importance to the coverage of violence and crime in order to boost ratings. Exposure to violence can have a negative effect on young people's perception of violence, and they do not realise the consequences of their behaviour. As a consequence, they may fall into a life of crime. This is particularly the case for those who lack self-control.To solve this problem, governments should launch awareness campaigns, which enable young adults to understand the dire consequences of crimes. It is therefore easier to curb crime. Young people should also receive a well-rounded education and improve skills. Education can provide them with oppoirtunities to increase competitivenes and make a decent living. This will also lead to a lower crime rate.To summarise, I believe that competition and the media are responsible for juvenile delinquency. This issue can be addressed by government action, such as giving young people educational opportunities.Some teachers say students should be organised into groups to study. Others argue students should be arranged to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.教育类A 小组学习B 互相交流，知识共享C 学生能发现自己知识漏洞（knowledge gaps）Draw upon each other’s ideas pool knowledgeA 单独学习b.不会被同伴拉后腿（held back by peersc. ）专心(concentrate on studies) , 时间自由(Manage time freely )，效率高A小组学习-B一起讨论 -C提升交流 (Communication skills)、合作(abilities to work well in groups) 、解决冲突能力(skills to resolve disagreement)It is sometimes argued that students can achieve more if they study in groups. I agree with this idea, although studying independently is sometimes important.If students study in teams, they are able to communicate with each other and share knowledge. Teamwork provides them with opportunities to discover knowledge gaps and acquire knowledge accordingly to fill these gaps. They can make the most of each other’s knowledge and strengths to overcome their weaknesses. By contrast, it is difficult for those students who study by themselves to realise their problems and make progress. On the other hand, opponents argue that it is possible to improve learning outcomes, if students study independently.These students are less likely to be held back by peers, and they do not have to block out distractions in team meetings or assignments. It is easier for them to concentrate on studies and manage time freely, thereby performing well in studies. This benefit is obvious for high-achievers.In my opinion, studying in groups enables students to improve communicationskills.They normally discuss how to solve problems together and how to deal with team tasks. These experiences make it possible for them to improve abilities to work well in groups and upgrade the skills to resolve disagreement. They are thus well prepared for their working lives.To sum up, I believe that both approaches can benefit students, but it appears that studying in groups offers more advantages.Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion. 全球化Advertising encourages consumers to buy in quantity rather than promoting quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 媒体——广告。
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0210第3次课ABCSome people believe that public health should be improved by increasing the number of sports facilities, while others believe that it has little effects other measures should be taken to solve this problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 政府&行为A提供体育设施B方便大家参加体育活动（take part in sport），鼓励一种健康的生活方式（encourage a healthy/active lifestyle）C提高人们的健康（create health benefits）A 政府可以加大宣传（launch awareness campaigns）B 说一下不运动(an inactive lifestyle/inactivity)的坏处（health problems/adverse health consequences）C 鼓励人们去运动A 政府可以制定法律（enforce laws）B 强迫人们改变生活方式（adopt a healthy lifestyle），改变一些破坏健康的行为（health-damaging habits）C 提高健康People tend to lay emphasis on their fitness today, and I agree that the number of sports facilities should be increased to satisfy their needs. Apart from this, some other approaches should also be taken.It is argued that the access to facilities can provide people with opportunities to take part in sport and improve health effectively. They are likely to exercise regularly in the gym and to make the most of playgrounds and public parks for physical activity. This active lifestyle can create health benefits. These facilities are particularly important for those city dwellers who find it difficult to maintain physical activity due to the lack of sports equipment.It is argued that the access to facilities can provide people with opportunities to take part in sport and improve health effectively. They are likely to exercise regularly in the gym and to make the most of playgrounds and public parks for physical activity. This active lifestyle can create health benefits. It is also worth mentioning that these facilities are available free of charge, so more people will play sport.On the other hand, alternative approaches are proposed and governments can launch awareness campaigns to promote a healthy lifestyle. People will realise that living an inactive lifestyle may cause many health problems, such as obesity and heart disease. They will be encouraged to exercise more frequently, instead of spending many hours in front of the screen every day.In my opinion, enforcing laws to curb some unhealthy habits can also have a positive impact on citizens’ health. Tough punishment can prompt them to adopt a healthy lifestyle and break health-damaging habits. For example, governments can impose a heavy tax on tobacco and alcohol, thereby discouraging smoking and drinking. It is therefore easier to help people maintain health, especially for those who fail to discipline themselves.。
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顾家北雅思作文汇总顾家北 0813精品班作文大作文Many people think it is very important to protect the environment but they make no effort to do it themselves. Why do you think it is the case? What actions can be done to ensure that individuals protect the environment?顾家北Environmental problems have threatened the world but few people have chosen to take any action to deal with these problems, although they realise the impact of these environmental woes on their lives. We should implement some changes to improve the situation.Many people spend money wisely, so they are not willing to purchase environmentally friendly products, de spite the fact that these products can help preserve the environment. These products are normally more expensive than conventional counterparts. For example, LED lighting devices are energy efficient, but normally charge consumers a higher price than traditional light bulbs. Electric cars are normally likely to cost more money than those vehicles powered by petrol. As consumers do not opt for these green products, it is not easy to conserve resources and reduce pollution.Another reason is that many people are not willing to change their ways of life, even though these lifestyles can be harmful to the environment. The use of electrical equipment has led to a sharp rise in electricity consumption, which means that the power generation sector has a higher demand for fossil fuels. People also prefer to travel by car, but car emissions can cause global warming, which is a threat to the environment. The reliance on different electronic products including mobile phones is another issue, since many of these products end up in landfill sites.These problems can be tackled by two policies. Governments can enact laws to forbid those behaviours which can cause damage to the environment, such as disposing of waste carelessly. Those who drop litter should be fined, so the environmental impact of this behaviour can be reduced. Another solution is to offer subsidies to encourage people to go green. For example, those consumers who buy fuelefficient cars can be subsidised, so car emissions can be reduced significantly.Currently, more and more people are aware of the importance of environmental protection but the public never give priority toprotect environment during their daily life.One reason accounts for the phenomenon is that people live carefully without spending their money on environmental products. Households live with a tight budget are not willing to spend their money these products, whose prices are higher than other similar goods. For instance, LED lights are energy saving, but they are more expensive than incandescent bulbs. Similarly, prices of electric vehicles are higher than those of traditional vehicles averagely. For the sake of money, people quit buying green products and this is contrary to our purpose of environmental protection.Another reason can be that people are not willing to change their living styles, which need to consume various kinds of energy. For example, electronic appliances consume electricity while driving consumes petrol. Especially those who are fond of plenty of materials consume more.Personally, the government are supposed to establish relevant laws to ban citizens from doing detrimental behaviours to environment.Punishments are imperative for those who littered. On the other hand, it is also imperative for the government to give subsidies to encourage environmental protection. Some countries, such as China, provide subsidies for those who purchasing vehicles under 1.6L.All in all, only through the joint efforts of government and individuals can we live in a sustainable environment.Currently, a large proportion of children are exposed to an ocean of commercial advertisements day to day. I am on the side that the ads, which purposely incite kids to buy snacks, toys and electronic games, should be limited or even, banned.Suppose that ads aim to kids were rectified, children will not request their parents to buy what they want day in and day out. Kids lack sensitivity to price, nevertheless, parents tend to satisfytheir material needs. For instance, some children like expensive toys and girls are in favor of clothes. This will bring a heavy burden for the middle-class families. Only by minimize the impact of ads on kids can the problem be avoided.Children may have eccentric behaviours and bad living habits due to the ads. Some kids are fans of fast food, since they see ads of it every day. Others are in bad temper, due to the violent games they play daily. The predominance of games is also resulted from merchants’ propaganda. All these problems will influence the healthy growth process of kids both physically and mentally.However, we cannot deny that some ads do have their advantages to kids. Some advertisements promote nutrient food, such as milk, wheat, etc. Meanwhile, some advertise books, games and educational toys. Parents, who are not familiar with these products, can have a comprehensive verdict according to advertisements.In a nutshell, I strongly suggest the government ban ads whose target consumers are kids, especially if their products are harmful to children. But if the products the advertisements focus on are beneficial, then the ads should be allowed.小作文第一篇The table illustrates the proportion of people who are laid off in Poland, Denmark, Germany, Italy and Hungary. The two colons are the figures of young people (aged from 15-24) and all citizens respectively.The highest unemployment rate for young goes to Poland, which reaches 37% and is twice more than the rate of its overall rate 15%. Coming next is Italy. The proportion of its young citizens who are out of work is 23% and its unemployment of whole country comes to top at 18%. Hungary shows mediocre rates of 21% and 17%. And German figures are 4% and 3% lower than Denmark respectively. Denmark keeps both figures lowest, with the unemployment rate for 15-24 age group 8% and for overall only 3%.All of the five countries show 3~5% rates lower of overall unemployment than those of the young, except Poland which has the largest gap between the two figures.第二篇The bar charts provide us information about how families in an Asian country spent their money in 1998 and 2008.A glance at the charts tells that expenditure on different goods in 2008 overweighed that in 1998 except that spent on clothes. People gave much more priority to spiritual enjoyment which lead to a huge increase of expenditure on holiday, eating out, reading (newspapers and magazines) and going to cinema, rising from 8% to 15%, 6% to 15%,3% to 8% and 3%to 5% respectively. The costs for electronic goods also increased from 12% to14% during the decade.The only difference is expenditure on clothes which was totally opposite to the mainstream. The proportion of it was 10% in 1998; however it dropped to half of its original rates in 2008.All in all, the past 10 years witnessed a huge change of the expenditure on various of aspects for households.第三篇The charts tell the proportion of different categories of house people live in three parts of Australia in 2001 and 2006.In 2001, Victoria had 76% residents in house, 12% in semi-detached house, 11%in apartments and the rest in other types. In NSW, house also accounted for the largest part of 66%, with 10% and 13% induplex and flat respectively. And more people lived in other kinds. Tasmania had largest proportion of house living population, which reaches 88%.Five years later, the rates for house all dropped 2% in the three regions. As for semi-detached house, Victoria, NSW and Tasmania saw 1% increase, 1percent decrease and stability respectively. The figures of flat all had a slightly increase. And for the rest unmentioned types, they remained the same at 1% except NSW rose from 11% to 12%.The table compares five European countries in terms of the proportions of unemployed people as well as the figures for those young people out of work.Poland had the highest youth unemployment rate at 37%, nearly five times the level in Denmark. The levels of unemployment for young people were similar in other countries, with the highest seen in Italy 23% and the lowest in Germany at 17%.It is clear from the table that in all these countries, the unemployment rate for the younger generation was higher than the overall unemployment figures. Interestingly, Poland, Germany, Italyand Hungary had similar unemployment rates, ranging between 15% and 18%. The figure for Denmark was significantly lower at 3%.Overall, youth unemployment was more serious in Poland than in other countries. Denmark had the lowest figures for both youth unemployment and overall unemployment, while other countries had similar figuresfor these problems.流程图写作The chart illustrates how to use cocoa beans to produce several food items for customers.Firstly, whole beans are carefully picking before drying in the shell. Then they are pressed into cocoa liquor, which is the main materialof the second stage. Then cocoa liquor is further pressed until it becomes a coca cake, which is directly sent to industry to make cakes and drinks or is sold to the consumer after grinded into cocoa powder. The cocoa liquor can also convert into cocoa and then be sent to relevant industry. Cocoa liquor, after further refining, mix with cocoa and sugar turns to industry chocolate. Finished chocolate products will be put on the shell, before the final process.All in all, cocoa beans can be used to produce cocoa powder,chocolate products and ingredients for relevant industry throughthree simple stages starting from pre-processing raw material tofinal packaging for sell.顾家北The whole beans are picked at the first stage with shells removed, and then dried and pressed until cocoa liquor is created. This marks the start of the second stage, which involves three processes. The cocoa liquor can be used to make coca cakes in the first option. Another choice is the manufacture of cocoa, while cocoa liquor is refined in the third process to produce industrial chocolate.In the final stage, these materials are processed further to create different end products for either corporate clients or ordinary consumers. Coca cakes are ground into cocoa powder for individual consumers, or directly delivered to catering businesses which provide drinks and cakes. Cocoa in the second procedure mentioned earlier is also transported to these businesses. In contrast, the industrial chocolate is flavored with sugar, and finished chocolate products are subsequently available for consumers.第一篇The table provides us with data of the percentage of consumer expenditure on different items in five countries in 2002.The biggest number existed in Turkey, where people spent 32.14% of their income on food, drink and tobacco, almost five times the number of percentage spent on clothing (6.63%) and eight times the figure of percentage spent on spiritual enjoyment. Coming next is Ireland, whose percentage of national consumer expenditure of eating was28.91%. Costs for clothing and footwear accounted for only 6.43%, three times the expenditure of leisure and education. Spain took the third place though the proportion of its national consumerexpenditure was the lowest (1.98%). Expenditure of food items inSpain accounted for 18.8%, threefold the figure of its clothing spending. Italy and Sweden citizens had small percentages of income spent on food(16.36%，15.77%)，only about half the figure of Turkey. However, their clothing costs (9%, 5.4%) and spiritual pay-outs (3.2%, 3.22%) were relatively high.In a nutshell, the percentages of national consumer expenditure by category in 2001 varied a lot among the five countries. But allshared some similarities, namely, largest proportion of expenditureon food, drink and tobacco and smallest percentage of leisure and education costs.第二篇The bar charts show the number of marriages and divorces in USA and marital status of American adults during the period of 1970 to 2000. The number of marriages remained at 2.5 million in 1970 and 1980, after which it had a slightly decrease to 2 million in 2000. The divorces number started form 1 million in 1970 and suddenly increased to almost 1.5 million during that decade. Then it dropped to nearly 1 million in 1980 and finally reached to its start（1 million）.The percentage of never married adults was 15% in 1970 and the figure inclined to 20% thirty years later. The proportions of both married and widowed adults saw drops during the three decades. Married adults accounted for 70% in 1970 while the figure was less than 60% in 2000. As for divorce rate, it had a significant rise form nearly 0% to almost 10%.All in all, the period from 1970 to 2000 witnessed a huge change of marriages and divorces in America. Both the total number and percentage of marriage decreased while the proportions of never married and divorced people saw an upward trend.流程图The two diagrams illustrate how to produce cement and how to use cement to produce concrete.Cement production is relatively complex and uses two materials. Firstly, limestone and clay are placed in the crusher, where these materials are crushed by the crusher. Then powder is mixed by the mixer, before being heated by the rotating heater. At the next stage, heated powder is sent to the grind, where it is grounded into cement. And finally cement is packed in the bags.Concrete production is relatively simple. 15% of cement, 10% of water, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel, namely small stones are mix in the concrete mixer, where they turned out to be concrete.All in all, cement production includes 5 stages and the outcome cement is one of the four raw materials of the concrete production.地图The maps show how an area changed during the period of 1780 to 2000. In 1780, there were 100 homes located on the north-eastern cornerwith woods to the south. A river crossed the area from south to north with four farms in the middle of the region.80 years later, the number of dwelling places doubled to 200, while the number of farms dropped by half and woods also shrank in size. A road was built in the north area, connecting the living place to theriver. Another major change is that a bridge was constructed over the river.In 2000, the number of homes suddenly increased to 500 and a newly built road, heading towards south replaced farm and woods area, which linked the dwelling places to the school and sports field in the south. Several shops opened to the right side of the downstream river with a wetland for birds to their south.Overall, this area saw an increase in constructions such as dwelling places, schools and facilities, although farmland and forests were removed for new buildings and transport infrastructure.大作文We live in cities or towns which have museums displaying historical and cultural importance, but people do not visit them. Why do you think people do not visit museums in their local areas？What is the importance of museums to society?顾家北Visiting museums is hardly a rewarding experience for many people, so they will not consider this option when they can spend leisure time on other activities. These museums do not organize new exhibitions that can keep up with the trends, or provide any form of entertainment like interactive games to attract the young audience. This is why a trip to a museum can hardly compete for attention with sports, picnics and parties. Another reason is that people can gather information about those artefacts on display on the Internet. They will increase knowledge about the stories behind and the cultural value of each item, without having to visiting the museum in person.Museums can encourage visitors’ interest in th eir cultural heritage and disseminate knowledge about a city or a county’s cultural assets. Some exhibitions may show ancient utensils used by previous generations, so people who attend these exhibitions may have a good idea of how traditional food was cooked. Some historical documents and paintings might show the architectural style which used to predominate, and many visitors might be impressed by the architectural achievements of their ancestors. With such knowledge, these visitors may make an effort to preserve some traditions and keep some old-fashioned cooking skills or building techniques alive.Museums have also been operating as a center of learning, where young people can keep up to date with the cutting-edge technology in different fields. The aviation museums, for example, give children a glimpse of the airline industry and even space travel, including spaceships and equipment supporting astronauts who explored the outer space. The museum of archeology can show them how some species have died out, and possibly inspire them to do research in biology and extend our knowledge of how to preserve our ecosystem. They could not make contributions to social progress, if they did not have access to such knowledge.Recently, an increasing number of people refused to pay a visit to museums in their local places. Personally, following reasons may account for the phenomenon.Some people reckon museums as boring places so that they are never willing to visit. For example, the historical and cultural importance displayed there has never changed and there is no entertainment, such as interactive games. All these tend to left people a boring feeling. In contrast, people prefer to join some interesting activities such as ball games, picnic and dining out. Another reason is that nowadays people learn history and acquire science knowledge through internetrather than go to library in person. Information of the exhibition's the historical value and story can be easily accessed on line.However, visiting museums play an important role in tradition inheriting. Ancient vessels provide us with traditional cooking methods while murals enable us to comprehend style of ancient architecture to some degree. It is advantageous for young people to pass on the culture if they have a good acknowledge of their own tradition by visiting museums.Additionally, museums offer us the most advanced science and technology, which is beneficial to the development of the society. The latest development of space and universe in our country can be acquired in space museums and the young can understand the reason of creature extinction through visiting archaeology museums. Museums can motivate the interests of the adolescents and the young will accelerates the development of society in the future.Overall, visiting museums is of great significance for both the individuals’ comprehending of culture and the development of our society.顾家北Visiting museums is hardly a rewarding experience for many people, so they will not consider this option when they can spend leisure time on other activities. These museums do not organise new exhibitions that can keep up with the trends, or provide any form of entertainment like interactive games to attract the young audience. This is why a trip to a museum can hardly compete for attention with sports, picnics and parties. Another reason is that people can gather information about those artefacts on display on the Internet. They will increase knowledge about the stories behind and the cultural value of each item, without having to visiting the museum in person.Museums can encourage visitors’ interest in their cultural heritage and disseminate knowledge about a city or a county’s cultural assets. Some exhibitions may show ancient utensils used by previous generations, so people who attend these exhibitions may have a good idea of how traditional food was cooked. Some historical documents and paintings might show the architectural style which used to predominate, and many visitors might be impressed by thearchitectural achievements of their ancestors. With such knowledge, these visitors may make an effort to preserve some traditions and keep some old-fashioned cooking skills or building techniques alive.Museums can also provide us with the latest technological advances, which is beneficial to the development of the society. For example, the aviation museums offer us latest knowledge of aeronautics while the archaeology museums help us comprehend the reason of extinction. This is why museums can not only motivate the interests of teenagers but also encourage them to study hard in a long run, which will accelerate the improvement of the society in the future. (Self-written paragraph)The aviation museums spaceships, shuttles, astronauts, explore the outer space,Some people think university education should provide students with skills of employment in the future while others believe that people should focus on academic study only. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.People rely more on foreign products and imitate traditions and culture of other countries, which lead to a hard way to pass on their own culture. For instance, too much reliance on the foreign cosmetics will surely shrink the demand of domestic market, which requires the local industry to downsize work force and thus traditional ways of making up will be abandoned. Additionally, those who are in favor of celebrating others’ festivals tend to give less priority to their own traditions. This will put the intangible culture heritage form our ancestors in a dangerous situation.Many countries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent on public services and facilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.翻译练习1. 人们对政府赞助艺术（government sponsorship）有不同的看法，特别在国家遇到预算问题的时候。
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0210 第 2 次课 ABCSome people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings manypositive effects . O ther s say it causes the loss of national identities . Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.In the 21 century, international trade is growing at an amazing pace, and countries are cooperating more closely together in a wide range of fields, such as business and cultural exchange. I agree that the advantages of globalisation outweigh d isadvantages.Supporters of globalisation argue that strong economic ties between countries have aOn the other hand, opponents suggest that globalisation can pose a threat to cultural diversity. Many people tend to adopt western habits because advertisements and movies from western countries have conquered the screen and they regard these habits as fashionable . They choose to eat fast food and celebrate western festivals such as Christmas, and this means that some of their own traditions and norms may disappear. In my opinion, globalisation may encourage people to preserve their cultures. The expansion of some industries including tourism has made it possible for these people to realise the distinctive characteristics of their cultures. The growing popularity of their cultures, heritage sites and works of art can instill a sense of pride in these communities and this is why residents can make a conscious effort to protect their cultures.In conclusion, as countries are interconnected, some disadvantaged areas can expect economic growth and people who live in these areas will also pay attention to their heritage.A 各国之间进行商业文化交流B 增强进出口贸易C 赚得外汇， 促进各国的经济发展 Strengthen economic ties, earn foreign exchange, drive economic growth A 国际间文化交流越来越多 B 人们模范西方习惯 C 文化习俗濒临灭绝Western cultures predominate, adopt western habits, cultural diversity, Preserve well-established conventionsA 交流增加B 人们意识到自己文化的特点 (distinctive cultural characteristics )C 会给他们 灌输一种自豪感(instill a sense of pride )，他们会保护自己的文化060Tracy 0215(534110042) 19:12:14positive effect on economnic growth. Some underdeveloped countries are unable toget rid of poverty due to the lack of capital, technology and infrastructure. International trade provides these countries with opportunities to export goods and services to high-income countries and earn foreign exchange, which can driveeconomic growth and improve citizens’living standards.A 国家特色正在丧失B 语言丧失特色发音,方言；美食的种类过于繁杂没有了当地特色；C Comment[Winnie1]:A 错为了促进全球化而牺牲了当地的特色文化 (尤其是旅游发达的国家或者是沿海的国家)053RED BACK2.15/301(116653756) 19:13:08A 富国穷国交流B 穷国觉得落后C 舍弃自己文化举例：英语的流行造成语言绝种Comment[Winnie2]:A 错，且 B 不一定推出C029Danny0426<****************>19:16:04A 全球化增加效率B 国家与国家之间取长补短C 避免陷入不必要的发展误区，加速发展Comment[Winnie3]:A、B 没有明显的逻辑关B+解释：通过技术交换，国际峰会等手段系057rox0426(279708253) 19:17:00A.文化联系多B.外出留学或者工作的人多C.得到更多的机会去学习Comment[Winnie4]:B 、C 一个意思033Young0315(562653016) 19:19:12A 全球化B 学习外语，引进便宜的进口产品C 冲击本土文化和市场Comment[Winnie5]:“学习外语”放在里面没有逻辑了179 漠(290797170) 19:19:12A 国家间的贸易与文化交流B 商业合作，跨国公司，美剧韩剧英剧等影视业的传播，留学交流 C 自我身份认同感消失，增加国内的竞争人才竞争激烈，工作压力大，崇洋媚外思想严重Comment[Winnie6]:B 是在枚举 A 的分类， C里面包含了好几个 end results……同学，建议你把《对学生的话》再好好看一下，感觉你还不是很明白什么是 ABCA dver tising encour ages consumer s to buy in quantity r ather than pr omoting quality.T o whatextent do you agree or disagree？A 媒体利用明星 (high-profile people) 宣传 (endorse products)B 人们将消费和社会地位联系(associate the brand with higher status) C 大量购买商品，奢侈品(luxury items)A 广告宣传新的产品B 鼓励人们赶时尚(follow fashion)C 导致大家冲动购买(compulsive shopping)A 广告提供大量信息B 人们可以对比产品 ( compare products)C 选择性价高的产品(Maximize value to money)，做出明智的决定 (well-informed decisions )There is controversy on the functions of advertising. I agree that advertisements havebeen used to persuade consumers to buy more than they need, instead of selectinghigh quality goods.Advertisers normally recruit high-profile people to endorse their products and thesecommercial messages can prompt consumers to purchase luxury items in largeamounts. These consumers tend to associate the brand with higher status. They maypurchase branded products such as electronics and handbags, although these productsmay not be practical or even reliable . This is particularly the case for new middleclasses, who intend to purchase luxuries to show wealth.Advertisers also promote the latest products to consumers and their advertising campaigns can lead to compulsive shopping. Many shoppers are likely to follow fashion because they can gain a sense of identity by acquiring advertised goods. They are obsessed with these products; otherwise, they feel that they are behind the times. On the other hand, it may be the case that advedrtising can provide enormous information, and encourage consumers to pay attention to quality. They are able to compare products in terms of quality and functions, so they can make well-informed decisions in shopping. This is possibly the reason why many producers will lay emphasis on quality, if they intend to retain customers.To summarize, advertising is responsible for people’s decision s to buy a large amount of goods and these decisions may not be sensible .However, in some cases, advertising may encourage producers to focus on quality.100Emma0412(1614837065) 19:08:30A 不同广告的展现方法B 吸引眼球C 人们愿意购买194amanda(93693509) 19:08:54A 广告给媒体大量的广告费B 媒体有资金维持下去C 老百姓才能花很少的钱或者免费看到许多好的节目。
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顾家北最新雅思写作课程5篇第一篇：顾家北最新雅思写作课程技巧班F71446ECE401A35DFD5818FE5C7CB71C5FE09B25F0CAD80F26 教主1.23听力预测班链接:老龚1.24阅读预测班链接:码: pi2t顾家北0106精品班链接:码: xpsk我预测梅晗12.1期雅思词汇速记班（词霸营）：链接:顾12月链接:顾家北施正南Frank 结构乐静阅读强化班钱多多frank黄瀚生9月口语预测班王陆8.18期听力高分班链刘洪波阅读高分真经班链密码:wjtp李慧芳听力资料杂2个链接雅思网资料下载链接和密码第二篇：Shrhqa雅思写作课程教案Time will pierce the surface or youth, will be on the beautyof the ditch dug a shallow groove;Jane will eat rare!A born beauty, anything to escape his sickle sweep.--ShakespeareIELTS Writing雅思写作课程教案Foreign Language Teaching and Research DepartmentHeilongjiang University第三篇：雅思写作School teachers used to be the source of information.However，some people argue that teachers are not as important as before because there is an increasing variety of information resources.What is your opinion?(08年4月24日考题)要对上面的句子进行重新描述，最简单的就是用同义词替换，请看下表：Know: recognizecomprehendgraspunderstandrealize 3.使用短语进行替换Some say that building more roads will help reduce the traffic congestion in big cities.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.Do you support or oppose this statement? 在这一段话里，可以替换的短语如下所示:英特网对我们的日常生活带来很大的影响。
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全文翻译1：遵守规则论述类题目写作要点Some people think that children should obey the rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Other people think children controlled too much cannot deal with problem themselves in adulthood.Discuss both views and state your own opinion.全文翻译2：老龄化社会+观点类（advantage/disadvantage）+段落的数量In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have positive or negative effects on society?全文翻译3：看电视学习+观点类（agree/disagree）+写作要点Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?全文翻译4：消费社会报告类题目写作要点It is argued that we are living in a throw-away society people throw away what they use in daily life, instead of recycling or reusing them.Why has this happened and how to address this issue?全文翻译5：城乡转移+混合类题目写作要点+开头段的写作Many people are moving from rural areas to big cities. Why has this happened? To what extent do you think it is a good trend?全文翻译6：廉价航空服务+审题的要素Many people think cheap air travel should be encouraged because it gives ordinary people freedom to travel further. However, others think this leads to environmental problems, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people fromhaving it.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.全文翻译7：法律和社会（如何扣题1）The society is based on rules and laws. The society would not function well if individual were free to do whatever they want.To what extent do you agree or disagree.全文翻译8：传统教育和网络教育（如何扣题2）Nowadays，distance-learning programmes have gained in popularity(those teaching programmes that involve the use of written materials, video, television and the internet), but some people argue that courses can never be taken as good as those by attending a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree.全文翻译9：交税+如何写中心句Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay any tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree.全文翻译10：道德教育+如何举例Some people think school should only teach students academic subjects. Others think schools should also teach students how to discriminate between right and wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.全文翻译11：艺术投资+对比/结尾Many countries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent on public services and facilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.全文翻译12：志愿者活动+观点的先后/前后一致Volunteer work organized by middle schools brings more benefits than problems. T o what extent do you agree or disagree全文翻译13：刑法+如何避免重复和跳跃A longer prison term as a way of punishing those who break the law is not as good as other methods. To what extent do you agree or disagree全文翻译14：学生自己居住+段落句子连接的方法It is better for students to live away from home while studying at university than living with parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree全文翻译15：快餐+代词的使用注意事项In many countries traditional food is being replaced by international fast food. This has negative effects on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree.全文翻译16：教育对成功的意义+词伙Some people who have successful in the society don’t attribute their success to the theoretical knowledge they learned from their university.Do you agree that theoretical knowledges is not as valuable as expected?全文翻译17：政府免学费+如何换表达Instead of asking the government to bear the cost of higher education，students should pay tuition fees themselves. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?全文翻译18：广告+简单句Advertisement aimed at children should be banned. To what extent you agree or disagree.全文翻译19：进口产品+并列句的写作In some countries, it is now possible for people to buy products made in other countries. To what extent do the benefits of this development outweigh the problems全文翻译20：英文全球语言+状语从句The advantage brought by the spread of English as a “global language” will outweigh the disadvantages.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view.全文翻译21：生活方式+名词性从句/定语从句Some people say that the government should ensure that people lead a healthy life, while others believe that individuals should have their own choiceDiscuss both views and give your opinion.全文翻译22：工作稳定+标点符号Today, people do not always work for the same job. Why does it happen and how do people prepare for job insecurity.。
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纸质版已经更新至6.0版本，本书可以作为6.0的预备学习内容。全书包括四章和四个附录，适合所有参加雅 思考试的学生。第1章主要讲述雅思写作及学习方法。第2章为雅思大作文（Task 2）攻略。本章从评分标准入手， 通过分析考官范文加以理论印证。以此为依据，介绍大作文（Task 2）的学习要点和本书使用方法。通过22篇高 分范文的精炼过程，完整覆盖了雅思写作题库，并将雅思写作高分应对策略结合实战详细阐述。在后面的章节里 总结了雅思大作文常见语法错误；提供了丰富的句子翻译练习。并总结了雅思大作文考生常问问题和误区。在第3 章里依然紧扣评分标准、分析考官范文，并概括了雅思普通图表作文的写作要点和顺序，详细覆盖所有题型和整 个题库。总结了图表作文学生常问问题以及流程图写作攻略。在第4章书信写作攻略里，仍然用评分标准和考官范 围为起点，讲述信件完成的步骤，各种书信写法，并提供了15篇范文。总结了书信的常用语。附录为词伙一览表、 顾家北老师考场范文、分图表作文范文和分书信作文范文。扫描本书二维码，可以获得配套音频和补充学习资料。
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雅思作文顾家北作文8步法和ABC法精髓
III 上课的核心概念1 关于ABC （非常重要）ABC 是简单的一个逻辑次序：A 一般是个动作或者行为，B 是这个行为产生的结果，C是B 的结果。
假如题目是：The government should require people to lead a healthy lifestyle. To what extent do you a gree or disagree?题目大意：政府应该要人们过健康的生活。
同意还是不同意？这个题目是确定A：政府要人们过健康的生活如果你支持，那么你需要想一个优点：A 政府要人们过健康的生活B 人们多运动，会减少疾病C 有利于提高生产力和对国家做贡献如果你反对，那么你需要想一个缺点：A 政府要人们过健康的生活B 人们觉得自己不能随心所欲生活C 不开心，没有满足感我们有时候把ABC 说成是ARE：Action-→result--→end result ABC 常见的误解：误解 1： B 和 C 是 A 的解释。
或者 C 是 A 和 B 的一个总结。
答：不是的。
A 是一个动作或者行为， B 是 A 产生的结果， C 是 B 的结果。
误解 2： ABC 各写一句话。
答：不是的。
有时候 A 和 B 可以写成一句话， C 一句话。
ABC 只是一个思路，帮助学生思考事情的因果关系，在考场上不是杂乱无章，仅此而已。
当 ABC 写到段落里的时候， A 和 B 可以写到一句，作为中心句，第二句话是 C。
也可能 A 本身是中心句， B 和 C 写到第二句。
还有其他可能，只要顺序是 ABC 的顺序就可以。
误解 3： ABC 要写的很详细。
答：不是的，考场上没有那么多时间， ABC 简单为主，控制在 15 字以下。
ABC 不是将你大脑里所有的中文都写出来。
恰恰相反， ABC 是让你在大脑的信息里找出一个简单的因果关系，帮助你理清思路。
7ABC 常见的 Q&AQ1：一个段落如果写了ABC 之后，字数不够，可不可以加观点。
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顾家北雅思作文范文1216第二次课ABCSome people think that by paying taxes they have made enough contribution to their society, others think there are more responsibilities than paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.A 公民交税B. 税收（tax revenue）可以资助核心服务（essential services）C. 政府可以运转(keep government operating)，有助于社会稳定（social stability）A人们做志愿(work without being paid) 者B用爱心(loving nature)帮助别人C建立起分享的文化（an ethos of sharing），促进社会和谐（social solidarity）A：人民应该关注环境的影响（environmental cost）B：节约能源(conserve energy)，减少污染（alleviate pollution）C：为下一代(for future generations) 保护生态环境(preserve the ecosystem) It is argued that taxpayers have contributed to the country through the tax system, so it is not necessary for them to assume other responsibilities in society.I disagree with this idea.If all citizens pay taxes, governments will have tax revenues that can fund some essential services. For example, the medical service can help heal the sick and ensure that all people can maintain health, while the law enforcement system can bring criminals to justice. Therefore, taxpayers’ contribution can help keep governments operating effectivelly, which is beneficial to social stability.On the other hand, the alternative view is that citizens can also participate in volunteer work, and help those needy peoplewith loving nature. These volunteers can work in nursing homes to take care of the elderly, or donate money to charities which look after the homeless. As everybody fulfills these responsibilities, it can help create an ethos of sharing and improve social solidarity.In my opinion, taxpayers should also pay closer attention to the environmental cost of their lifestyle and make an efforto preserve the ecosystem for future generations. Motorists, for instance, turn to public transport to conserve energy and alleviate pollution, which have environmental benefits. In contrast, if taxpayers focused solely on taxpaying responsibilities and did not realise their environmental responsibility, their habits might cause damage to the environment.To summarise, it is my personal view that apart from paying taxes, individuals should also give importance to other responsibilities.。
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顾家北 0813精品班作文大作文Many people think it is very important to protect the environment but they make no effort to do it themselves. Why do you think it is the case? What actions can be done to ensure that individuals protect the environment?顾家北Environmental problems have threatened the world but few people have chosen to take any action to deal with these problems, although they realise the impact of these environmental woes on their lives. We should implement some changes to improve the situation.Many people spend money wisely, so they are not willing to purchase environmentally friendly products, de spite the fact that these products can help preserve the environment. These products are normally more expensive than conventional counterparts. For example, LED lighting devices are energy efficient, but normally charge consumers a higher price than traditional light bulbs. Electric cars are normally likely to cost more money than those vehicles powered by petrol. As consumers do not opt for these green products, it is not easy to conserve resources and reduce pollution.Another reason is that many people are not willing to change their ways of life, even though these lifestyles can be harmful to the environment. The use of electrical equipment has led to a sharp rise in electricity consumption, which means that the power generation sector has a higher demand for fossil fuels. People also prefer to travel by car, but car emissions can cause global warming, which is a threat to the environment. The reliance on different electronic products including mobile phones is another issue, since many of these products end up in landfill sites.These problems can be tackled by two policies. Governments can enact laws to forbid those behaviours which can cause damage to the environment, such as disposing of waste carelessly. Those who drop litter should be fined, so the environmental impact of this behaviour can be reduced. Another solution is to offer subsidies to encourage people to go green. For example, those consumers who buy fuelefficient cars can be subsidised, so car emissions can be reduced significantly.Currently, more and more people are aware of the importance of environmental protection but the public never give priority toprotect environment during their daily life.One reason accounts for the phenomenon is that people live carefully without spending their money on environmental products. Households live with a tight budget are not willing to spend their money these products, whose prices are higher than other similar goods. For instance, LED lights are energy saving, but they are more expensive than incandescent bulbs. Similarly, prices of electric vehicles are higher than those of traditional vehicles averagely. For the sake of money, people quit buying green products and this is contrary to our purpose of environmental protection.Another reason can be that people are not willing to change their living styles, which need to consume various kinds of energy. For example, electronic appliances consume electricity while driving consumes petrol. Especially those who are fond of plenty of materials consume more.Personally, the government are supposed to establish relevant laws to ban citizens from doing detrimental behaviours to environment. Punishments are imperative for those who littered. On the other hand, it is also imperative for the government to give subsidies to encourage environmental protection. Some countries, such as China, provide subsidies for those who purchasing vehicles under 1.6L.All in all, only through the joint efforts of government and individuals can we live in a sustainable environment.Currently, a large proportion of children are exposed to an ocean of commercial advertisements day to day. I am on the side that the ads, which purposely incite kids to buy snacks, toys and electronic games, should be limited or even, banned.Suppose that ads aim to kids were rectified, children will not request their parents to buy what they want day in and day out. Kids lack sensitivity to price, nevertheless, parents tend to satisfytheir material needs. For instance, some children like expensive toys and girls are in favor of clothes. This will bring a heavy burden for the middle-class families. Only by minimize the impact of ads on kids can the problem be avoided.Children may have eccentric behaviours and bad living habits due to the ads. Some kids are fans of fast food, since they see ads of it every day. Others are in bad temper, due to the violent games they play daily. The predominance of games is also resulted from merchants’ propaganda. All these problems will influence the healthy growth process of kids both physically and mentally.However, we cannot deny that some ads do have their advantages to kids. Some advertisements promote nutrient food, such as milk, wheat, etc. Meanwhile, some advertise books, games and educational toys. Parents, who are not familiar with these products, can have a comprehensive verdict according to advertisements.In a nutshell, I strongly suggest the government ban ads whose target consumers are kids, especially if their products are harmful to children. But if the products the advertisements focus on are beneficial, then the ads should be allowed.小作文第一篇The table illustrates the proportion of people who are laid off in Poland, Denmark, Germany, Italy and Hungary. The two colons are the figures of young people (aged from 15-24) and all citizens respectively.The highest unemployment rate for young goes to Poland, which reaches 37% and is twice more than the rate of its overall rate 15%. Coming next is Italy. The proportion of its young citizens who are out of work is 23% and its unemployment of whole country comes to top at 18%. Hungary shows mediocre rates of 21% and 17%. And German figures are 4% and 3% lower than Denmark respectively. Denmark keeps both figures lowest, with the unemployment rate for 15-24 age group 8% and for overall only 3%.All of the five countries show 3~5% rates lower of overall unemployment than those of the young, except Poland which has the largest gap between the two figures.第二篇The bar charts provide us information about how families in an Asian country spent their money in 1998 and 2008.A glance at the charts tells that expenditure on different goods in 2008 overweighed that in 1998 except that spent on clothes. People gave much more priority to spiritual enjoyment which lead to a hugeincrease of expenditure on holiday, eating out, reading (newspapers and magazines) and going to cinema, rising from 8% to 15%, 6% to 15%,3% to 8% and 3%to 5% respectively. The costs for electronic goods also increased from 12% to14% during the decade.The only difference is expenditure on clothes which was totally opposite to the mainstream. The proportion of it was 10% in 1998; however it dropped to half of its original rates in 2008.All in all, the past 10 years witnessed a huge change of the expenditure on various of aspects for households.第三篇The charts tell the proportion of different categories of housepeople live in three parts of Australia in 2001 and 2006.In 2001, Victoria had 76% residents in house, 12% in semi-detached house, 11%in apartments and the rest in other types. In NSW, house also accounted for the largest part of 66%, with 10% and 13% induplex and flat respectively. And more people lived in other kinds. Tasmania had largest proportion of house living population, which reaches 88%.Five years later, the rates for house all dropped 2% in the three regions. As for semi-detached house, Victoria, NSW and Tasmania saw 1% increase, 1percent decrease and stability respectively. The figuresof flat all had a slightly increase. And for the rest unmentioned types, they remained the same at 1% except NSW rose from 11% to 12%.The table compares five European countries in terms of theproportions of unemployed people as well as the figures for those young people out of work.Poland had the highest youth unemployment rate at 37%, nearly five times the level in Denmark. The levels of unemployment for young people were similar in other countries, with the highest seen inItaly 23% and the lowest in Germany at 17%.It is clear from the table that in all these countries, the unemployment rate for the younger generation was higher than the overall unemployment figures. Interestingly, Poland, Germany, Italy and Hungary had similar unemployment rates, ranging between 15% and 18%. The figure for Denmark was significantly lower at 3%.Overall, youth unemployment was more serious in Poland than in other countries. Denmark had the lowest figures for both youth unemploymentand overall unemployment, while other countries had similar figuresfor these problems.流程图写作The chart illustrates how to use cocoa beans to produce several food items for customers.Firstly, whole beans are carefully picking before drying in the shell. Then they are pressed into cocoa liquor, which is the main materialof the second stage. Then cocoa liquor is further pressed until it becomes a coca cake, which is directly sent to industry to make cakes and drinks or is sold to the consumer after grinded into cocoa powder. The cocoa liquor can also convert into cocoa and then be sent to relevant industry. Cocoa liquor, after further refining, mix with cocoa and sugar turns to industry chocolate. Finished chocolate products will be put on the shell, before the final process.All in all, cocoa beans can be used to produce cocoa powder,chocolate products and ingredients for relevant industry throughthree simple stages starting from pre-processing raw material tofinal packaging for sell.顾家北The whole beans are picked at the first stage with shells removed,and then dried and pressed until cocoa liquor is created. This marks the start of the second stage, which involves three processes. The cocoa liquor can be used to make coca cakes in the first option. Another choice is the manufacture of cocoa, while cocoa liquor is refined in the third process to produce industrial chocolate.In the final stage, these materials are processed further to create different end products for either corporate clients or ordinary consumers. Coca cakes are ground into cocoa powder for individual consumers, or directly delivered to catering businesses which provide drinks and cakes. Cocoa in the second procedure mentioned earlier is also transported to these businesses. In contrast, the industrial chocolate is flavored with sugar, and finished chocolate products are subsequently available for consumers.第一篇The table provides us with data of the percentage of consumer expenditure on different items in five countries in 2002.The biggest number existed in Turkey, where people spent 32.14% of their income on food, drink and tobacco, almost five times the number of percentage spent on clothing (6.63%) and eight times the figure of percentage spent on spiritual enjoyment. Coming next is Ireland,whose percentage of national consumer expenditure of eating was28.91%. Costs for clothing and footwear accounted for only 6.43%, three times the expenditure of leisure and education. Spain took the third place though the proportion of its national consumerexpenditure was the lowest (1.98%). Expenditure of food items inSpain accounted for 18.8%, threefold the figure of its clothing spending. Italy and Sweden citizens had small percentages of income spent on food(16.36%，15.77%)，only about half the figure of Turkey. However, their clothing costs (9%, 5.4%) and spiritual pay-outs (3.2%, 3.22%) were relatively high.In a nutshell, the percentages of national consumer expenditure by category in 2001 varied a lot among the five countries. But allshared some similarities, namely, largest proportion of expenditureon food, drink and tobacco and smallest percentage of leisure and education costs.第二篇The bar charts show the number of marriages and divorces in USA and marital status of American adults during the period of 1970 to 2000. The number of marriages remained at 2.5 million in 1970 and 1980,after which it had a slightly decrease to 2 million in 2000. The divorces number started form 1 million in 1970 and suddenly increased to almost 1.5 million during that decade. Then it dropped to nearly 1 million in 1980 and finally reached to its start（1 million）.The percentage of never married adults was 15% in 1970 and the figure inclined to 20% thirty years later. The proportions of both married and widowed adults saw drops during the three decades. Married adults accounted for 70% in 1970 while the figure was less than 60% in 2000. As for divorce rate, it had a significant rise form nearly 0% to almost 10%.All in all, the period from 1970 to 2000 witnessed a huge change of marriages and divorces in America. Both the total number and percentage of marriage decreased while the proportions of never married and divorced people saw an upward trend.流程图The two diagrams illustrate how to produce cement and how to use cement to produce concrete.e Cement production is relatively complex and uses two materials. Firstly, limestone and clay are placed in the crusher, where these materials are crushed by the crusher. Then powder is mixed by the mixer, before being heated by the rotating heater. At the next stage, heated powder is sent to the grind, where it is grounded into cement. And finally cement is packed in the bags.Concrete production is relatively simple. 15% of cement, 10% of water, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel, namely small stones are mix in the concrete mixer, where they turned out to be concrete. All in all, cement production includes 5 stages and the outcome cement is one of the four raw materials of the concrete production.地图The maps show how an area changed during the period of 1780 to 2000. In 1780, there were 100 homes located on the north-eastern corner with woods to the south. A river crossed the area from south to north with four farms in the middle of the region.80 years later, the number of dwelling places doubled to 200, while the number of farms dropped by half and woods also shrank in size. A road was built in the north area, connecting the living place to the river. Another major change is that a bridge was constructed over the river.In 2000, the number of homes suddenly increased to 500 and a newly built road, heading towards south replaced farm and woods area, which linked the dwelling places to the school and sports field in the south. Several shops opened to the right side of the downstream river with a wetland for birds to their south. Overall, this area saw an increase in constructions such as dwelling places, schools and facilities, although farmland and forests were removed for new buildings and transport infrastructure. 大作文We live in cities or towns which have museums displaying historical and cultural importance, but people do not visit them. Why do you think people do not visit museums in their local areas ？What is the will not consider this option when they can spend leisure time on other activities. These museums do not organize new exhibitions that can keep up with the trends, or provide any form of entertainment like interactive games to attract the young audience. This is why a trip to a museum can hardly compete for attention with sports, picnics and parties. Another reason is that people can gather information about those artefacts on display on the Internet. They will increase knowledge about the storiesbehind and the cultural value of each item, without having to visiting the museum in person.Museums can encourage visitors’ interest in their cultural heritage and disseminate knowledge about a city or a county’s cultural assets. Some exhibitions may show ancient utensils used by previous generations, so people who attend these exhibitions may have a good idea of how traditional food was cooked. Some historical documents and paintings might show the architectural style which used to predominate, and many visitors might be impressed by the architectural achievements of their ancestors. With such knowledge, these visitors may make an effort to preserve some traditions and keep some old-fashioned cooking skills or building techniques alive.Museums have also been operating as a center of learning, where young people can keep up to date with the cutting-edge technology in different fields. The aviation museums, for example, give children a glimpse of the airline industry and even space travel, including spaceships and equipment supporting astronauts who explored the outer space. The museum of archeology can show them how some species have died out, and possibly inspire them to do research in biology and extend our knowledge of how to preserve our ecosystem. They could not make contributions to social progress, if they did not have access to such knowledge.Recently, an increasing number of people refused to pay a visit to museums in their local places. Personally, following reasons may account for the phenomenon.Some people reckon museums as boring places so that they are never willing to visit. For example, the historical and cultural importance displayed there has never changed and there is no entertainment, such as interactive games. All these tend to left people a boring feeling. In contrast, people prefer to join some interesting activities such as ball games, picnic and dining out. Another reason is that nowadays people learn history and acquire science knowledge through internet rather than go to library in person. Information of the exhibition's the historical value and story can be easily accessed on line.However, visiting museums play an important role in tradition inheriting. Ancient vessels provide us with traditional cooking methods while murals enable us to comprehend style of ancient architecture to some degree. It is advantageous for young people to pass on the culture if they have a good acknowledge of their own tradition by visiting museums.Additionally, museums offer us the most advanced science and technology, which is beneficial to the development of the society. The latest development of space and universe in our country can be acquired in space museums and the young can understand the reason of creature extinction through visiting archaeology museums. Museums can motivate the interests of the adolescents and the young will accelerates the development of society in the future.Overall, visiting museums is of great significance for both the individuals’ comprehending of culture and the development of our society.顾家北Visiting museums is hardly a rewarding experience for many people, so they will not consider this option when they can spend leisure timeon other activities. These museums do not organise new exhibitionsthat can keep up with the trends, or provide any form ofentertainment like interactive games to attract the young audience. This is why a trip to a museum can hardly compete for attention with sports, picnics and parties. Another reason is that people can gather information about those artefacts on display on the Internet. Theywill increase knowledge about the stories behind and the cultural value of each item, without having to visiting the museum in person.Museums can encourage visitors’ interest in their cultural heritage and disseminate knowledge about a city or a county’s cultural assets. Some exhibitions may show ancient utensils used by previous generations, so people who attend these exhibitions may have a good idea of how traditional food was cooked. Some historical documentsand paintings might show the architectural style which used to predominate, and many visitors might be impressed by thearchitectural achievements of their ancestors. With such knowledge, these visitors may make an effort to preserve some traditions and keep some old-fashioned cooking skills or building techniques alive.Museums can also provide us with the latest technological advances, which is beneficial to the development of the society. For example, the aviation museums offer us latest knowledge of aeronautics while the archaeology museums help us comprehend the reason of extinction. This is why museums can not only motivate the interests of teenagers but also encourage them to study hard in a long run, which will accelerate the improvement of the society in the future. (Self-written paragraph)The aviation museums spaceships, shuttles, astronauts, explore the outer space,Some people think university education should provide students with skills of employment in the future while others believe that people should focus on academic study only. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.People rely more on foreign products and imitate traditions and culture of other countries, which lead to a hard way to pass on their own culture. For instance, too much reliance on the foreign cosmetics will surely shrink the demand of domestic market, which requires the local industry to downsize work force and thus traditional ways of making up will be abandoned. Additionally, those who are in favor of celebrating others’ festivals tend to give less priority to their own traditions. This will put the intangible culture heritage form our ancestors in a dangerous situation.Many countries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent on public services and facilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.翻译练习1. 人们对政府赞助艺术（government sponsorship）有不同的看法，特别在国家遇到预算问题的时候。
顾家北手把手教你雅思写作公开课讲义
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• 句4： Life skills are very important and by doing voluntary work, students can learn how to communicate with others and work in a team but also how to manage their time and improve their organisational skills.句5： Nowadays, unfortunately, teenagers do not have many afterschool activities.句6： After-school clubs are no longer that popular and students mostly go home and sit in front of the TV, browse internet or play video games.
标准4： grammatical range and accuracy (词汇的广度和准确度)
• 语法错误 • 句型
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• 开头段竟然没有背景句？！
• On the other hand, citizens should not rely completely on the state funding on medical and learning expense, as the government needs to cover other parts of social welfare.
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剑9第二套8分范文Fra bibliotek• 题目： • Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to young children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
顾家北手把手雅思 20基本句型
标题：深度解析顾家北手把手雅思 20基本句型导言：在准备雅思考试的过程中，语法是一个十分重要的部分。
掌握一定的句型结构不仅可以帮助我们更准确地表达意思，还可以提升文章的整体质量。
而顾家北手把手雅思20基本句型就是一个非常好的学习工具，它简洁明了地总结了雅思写作中常用的句型结构，帮助我们更好地准备写作部分。
接下来，我们将深度解析这些基本句型，并探讨如何灵活运用它们，以提高雅思写作水平。
一、介绍基本句型顾家北手把手雅思 20基本句型是指一组在雅思写作中常用的、基础的句型结构。
它们涵盖了各种句子类型，包括陈述句、疑问句、感叹句等，可以帮助我们构建更加丰富多样的句子，提升文章表达的层次和质量。
二、深入解析每个句型1. "主语+谓语"句型这是最基本的句型结构，用来陈述一个事实或描述一个动作。
例如：“他学习努力”、“天空放晴了”。
2. "主语+系动词+表语"句型这个句型用来说明主语的特征或状态，常用的系动词包括be动词、feel、seem等。
比如：“她看起来很累”、“这本书很有趣”。
3. "主语+及物动词+宾语"句型这个句型用来表示主语对宾语进行的动作，是非常常见的句型结构。
比如：“她吃了一块巧克力”、“他们购物了新房子”。
4. "主语+不及物动词"句型不及物动词不需要宾语，用来表示主语的行为或状态。
例如：“她跑步”、“花儿开了”。
5. "主语+情态动词+动词原形"句型情态动词用来表示可能性、必要性等，常见的情态动词有can、could、may、might、must、shall、should、will、would等。
例如：“你应该努力学习”、“他会成功的”。
6. "疑问词+助动词+主语+谓语"句型这个句型用来构成疑问句，要注意疑问词的选择和助动词的搭配，以确保句子表达的准确性。
比如：“你喜欢什么颜色？”、“他们是否已经离开了？”等等。
顾家北手把手教你雅思写作——0617
• Spending a large amount on celebrations like wedding parties or birthday parties is a relatively popular phenomenon and consequently it is somewhat controversial. With good reasons, many people question this as a waste of money. Others, however, make a convincing argument that people have their rights to decide where to spend their money. My view is that while there are both benefits and drawbacks to this phenomenon, it is safe to say that the pros overweigh the cons.
雅思顾家北写作语法5lecture 1_solutions
1.很多国家都存在环境问题。
拓展：很多国家，特别是发展中国家，都存在环境问题。
正确的答案：Many countries, especially developing countries, have environmentalproblems.结构：主+及物动词+宾语正确的答案：Environmental problems exist in many countries, especially (in) developing countries.结构：主+不及物动词；“in many countries”介宾短语充当状语；developingcountries是同位语，一般紧跟在修饰的名词的后面注： environmental problems=environmental issues注：也可以说there exist some environmental problems in some countries. 这句话是倒装，还原成 some environmental problems exist here in some countries.学生的答案：Many countries, especially developing countries, exist environmentalproblem.错误1：exist不及物动词，不能加宾语。
错误2：problem可数名词，要加复数，或者冠词。
2.环境问题已经变的越来越严重。
拓展：在发展中国家，环境问题已经变的越来越严重。
正确的答案：Environmental problems have become increasingly serious in developingcountries.结构：主+系动词+表语“in developing countries”介宾短语充当状语；注：increasingly 比more and more 更加好，在这个情况下注：environmental problems=environmental issues=environmental woesSerious = severe学生的答案：Environmental problems have been become seriously in the developingcountries.错误1：been become 两个系动词错误2：seriously副词，不能充当表语错误3：developing countries已经是复数，除非特指，否则不需要加定冠词the注：使用have been becoming现在完成进行时态不恰当，因为要用一般完成时态强调结果。
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