高考英语作文写作:邀请信课件(共26张PPT)
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高考英语写作之邀请信定ppt课件
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Dear Peter, I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s
English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is
very popular among us students.It carries articles written
基于高考范文指导下 的写作训练专题
——邀请信
An invitation letter
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What does it impress you?
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Why is writing so tough?
Input Output
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2004-2015十年高考全国卷作文体裁分析
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Brainstorming
Definition:
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Dear Peter,
Step1(head):
① I'd like to ask you to write aWn arrittiincglepfuorrpoosuer school’s
English newspaper.
② The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is
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Dear Peter, I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s
English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is
very popular among us students.It carries articles written
基于高考范文指导下 的写作训练专题
——邀请信
An invitation letter
.
What does it impress you?
.
Why is writing so tough?
Input Output
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2004-2015十年高考全国卷作文体裁分析
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Brainstorming
Definition:
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Dear Peter,
Step1(head):
① I'd like to ask you to write aWn arrittiincglepfuorrpoosuer school’s
English newspaper.
② The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is
25 by foreign friends ab过o去ut 分th词e c作ultures of their home
countries.Would you 后ple置as定e w语rite something about the culture in your part of the United States?And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their宾h语oli从da句ys and festivals, and the life of American high sitc’hsoinotlesrteusd高tienn级gts词a.Yn汇oduincfaonrmwraittievea.n4y0t0hiwngorrdeslewvaonutldsobelong as fine.Could we have your article before June 28?
高中英语写作(邀请信专题)(共18张ppt)
Body: 点明目的+希望与鼓励
4. 为提高外国学生对中文学习的兴趣,我们学校将举办以中国文化 为主题的演讲比赛。时间为下周五晚上8点到9点,地点在大礼堂。
To__p_r_o_m_o_t_e_t_h_e__fo_r_e_i_g_n_s_t_u_d_e_n_t_s_' _in_t_e_r_e_s_t _in__C_h_i_n_e_s_e_c_u_l_tu_,re a Chinese speech contest on Chinese culture will be organized, _w__h_ic_h__is__s_c_h_e_d_u_l_e_d_f_ro__m__8_t_o_9__n_e_x_t_F_r_id_a_y__ e_v_e_n_i_n_g__in__th_e__a_u_d_i_to_r_iu__m_._______
2比赛的主题是“My impression of China”.根据安排比赛将于下 星期五晚上在学校大礼堂举行。
As is scheduled, the contestt_h_e_m_e_d___ “My Impression of China” is _d_u_e__t_o_b_e__h_e_ld__n_e_x_t_F_r_id__a_y_i_n_o_u_r__sc_h__o_o_l’_s_____ __________a_u_d_it_o_r_iu_m__.________________________
How to write a letter of invitation
Kay
历年考题
• 2017.6 邀请英国朋友一起郊游 • 2017.11 邀请外教到家里一起过春节 • 2020.1 邀请英国朋友参加你校举办的外国学生
高考英语复习课件 高考应用文写作(邀请信)22张
仿写:知道你对音乐感兴趣,我就写信邀请你参加 我校的音乐节。
Knowing that you are interested in __m__u_s_ic__, I am writing
to invite you to join ___th_e__m_u_s_ic_fe_s_ti_v_al__ in our school.
Here are some details about the music festival. It will be held from 5 pm to 8 pm next Sunday on the playground. We will see many fascinating performances, like singing and dancing. This can help us relax. Besides, we will meet some students there, so we can make some new friends. What’s more, we all expect you to be on the stage.
3.再次表明自己邀请的诚意
I’d appreciate it if you could join us. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
仿写:如果你能加入我们,我将非常开心。
_I’_d_b_e__d_e_lig_h_t_e_d__ if you could join us. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
高考应用文写作
邀请信 letter of invitation
2019年全国卷III英语作文
Knowing that you are interested in __m__u_s_ic__, I am writing
to invite you to join ___th_e__m_u_s_ic_fe_s_ti_v_al__ in our school.
Here are some details about the music festival. It will be held from 5 pm to 8 pm next Sunday on the playground. We will see many fascinating performances, like singing and dancing. This can help us relax. Besides, we will meet some students there, so we can make some new friends. What’s more, we all expect you to be on the stage.
3.再次表明自己邀请的诚意
I’d appreciate it if you could join us. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
仿写:如果你能加入我们,我将非常开心。
_I’_d_b_e__d_e_lig_h_t_e_d__ if you could join us. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
高考应用文写作
邀请信 letter of invitation
2019年全国卷III英语作文
高三英语写作专题邀请信课件(共18张)
Yours,
Li Hua
高三英语写作专题邀请信课件(共18 张)
高三英语写作专题邀请信课件(共18 张)
邀请信常用句式 1.开头常用语 (1)(2019·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)I'm Li Hua,chairman of the Students' Union. Knowing that you are fond of classical music, I'm writing to invite you to take part in music festival to be held in our school. 我是学生会主席李华。知道你喜欢古典音乐,我写信邀请 你参加将在我校举办的音乐节。
参考范文:
Dear John,
Knowing that you are interested in science fiction, I'd like to
invite you to see a film this weekend.
The Wandering Earth is being shown these days, whose aim is to
高三英语写作专题邀请信课件(共18 张)
高三英语写作专题邀请信课件(共18 张)
Step5. 课堂小结:
Step6. 当堂训练:
高三英语写作专题邀请信课件(共18 张)
高三英语写作专题邀请信课件(共18 张)
(2019·山东潍坊高考模拟)假定你是李华,你想邀请你的 朋友 John 在周六晚上去看科幻电影 The Wandering Earth,请 用英语给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
高三英语写作专题邀请信课件(共18 张)
高三英语写作专题邀请信课件(共18 张)
高考英语一轮复习之应用文写作邀请信 课件(23张ppt)
2. Some traditional Chinese paintings, created by those talented students, are waiting for you to appreciate.
foreigners at my school on Marc发h 1出st, 2邀02请0.
The theme of the upcoming speech contest is British Culture which we sincerely expect to know from a native of Britain. Undoubtedly, your fluent
(2020浙江1月)假定你是李华, 你校将举办外国 学生中文演讲比赛,请给你的英国朋友George写 封邮件,邀请他参加。内容包括: 1. 比赛时间;2. 演讲话题;3. 报名方式。
(2016全国II)假定你是李华, 你校摄影俱乐部将 举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国朋友 Peter写封信,请他提供作品。信的内容包括: 1. 摄影主题: 环境保护;2. 展览时间; 3. 投稿邮箱intlphotoshow@。
2020 浙江1月 文字提纲 邀请英国朋友参加演讲比赛 邀请信 80 15
2017 浙江11月 文字提纲
邀请外教到家里过春节
邀请信 80 15
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Comparison-requirements 邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信(节日、聚会、展览、比赛等)
(2019全国III)假定你是李华, 你校将举办音乐 节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内 容包括: 1. 时间; 2. 活动安排; 3. 欢迎他表演节目。
(2017浙江11月)假定你是李华, 得知外教 Mr. Hall寒假不回国,想邀请他到你家过春节。 请你给他写一封信,内容包括: 1. 时间;2. 一同过节的家人;3. 活动。
高考英语-书信类写作-邀请信-教师备课PPT
• 正文 邀请原因;活动内容
邀请原因 我一看到这个表演的海报,就知道你会感兴趣, 因为你一直喜欢戏曲文化。 As soon as I saw the poster of the show, I knew you would be interested in it, because you are always fond of Chinese drama culture.
时间地点 10月5日下午2点在新落成的国家大 剧院将上演越剧《梁山伯与祝英 台》。
It will be put on in the newly-built National Theater at 2 p.m. on October 5th.
I’m writing to invite you to attend to watch a famous Opera, Butterfly Lovers.
• 开头 提出邀请
提出邀请
I am writing to invite you to write an article for the Foreign Cultures section of our school’s English new要求
栏目介绍
The minute I saw the poster of the show, I knew you would find it appealing since you have always been enthusiastic about Chinese drama culture.
内容介绍 这个故事讲述的是两个年轻的感人的故事。 The opera tells a touching love story between two young persons.
高考英语写作之邀请信-课件·PPT
I am LiHua,
00 and ends at 5:00 June 15 afternoon. Ten students take part in . My will it telephone number is 44876655.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation
I am sure that it will be a great success if you can give us some precious remarks/ I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation I am looking forward to your reply.
返回目录
2.段尾常用语: (1)Would you please drop me a line(写信给我) to let me know if you can come to…?
(2)My family and I would feel much honored if you could come. (3)We would be looking forward to your coming with great pleasure. (4)I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision soon.
(另一个安排). Ring me up and tell me whether you will come or not, will you? My phone number is ________.I really hope you can make it. Looking forward to ________. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
高中英语作文专题——邀请信 PPT课件 图文
• It will be held in… from …to … on …
• 3.邀请信模板:
• 模板1:
• Dear ,
• I will hold a/an ____ at
on
in
order to . As you are a close friend of our
family, my parents and I would very much like
(3)最少使用一个定语从句。
四.查漏缺:
(1)表顺序 first; second; then; next; finally (2)表递进
besides,what’s more; moreover,furthermore; most important of all,most importantly, (3)表因果
Ⅲ.邀请信写作
• 1. 写作步骤:“三步走” • 开头:开门见山,说明目的。 • 正文:邀请内容(活动性质,地点,时间,
日期,相关注意事项)。 • 结尾:重申对方参加的重要性,期待参加
并致谢。
• 2. 必备句型
• ⑴ 开头 • It’s a great honor/honor for me to invite you to… • It’s my pleasure/honor to invite you to… • I take the pleasure to invite you to … • I’m writing to invite you to… • I’d like to invite you to… • on be half of …., I have the honor to invite you
①邀请信分类
正式(公函)
• 3.邀请信模板:
• 模板1:
• Dear ,
• I will hold a/an ____ at
on
in
order to . As you are a close friend of our
family, my parents and I would very much like
(3)最少使用一个定语从句。
四.查漏缺:
(1)表顺序 first; second; then; next; finally (2)表递进
besides,what’s more; moreover,furthermore; most important of all,most importantly, (3)表因果
Ⅲ.邀请信写作
• 1. 写作步骤:“三步走” • 开头:开门见山,说明目的。 • 正文:邀请内容(活动性质,地点,时间,
日期,相关注意事项)。 • 结尾:重申对方参加的重要性,期待参加
并致谢。
• 2. 必备句型
• ⑴ 开头 • It’s a great honor/honor for me to invite you to… • It’s my pleasure/honor to invite you to… • I take the pleasure to invite you to … • I’m writing to invite you to… • I’d like to invite you to… • on be half of …., I have the honor to invite you
①邀请信分类
正式(公函)
高三英语一轮复习写作训练邀请信公开课(共25张)ppt课件
假设你是李华,请给你的外教Mr. Black写一封邮件,邀请他参加你学 校举行的英语读书会(reading circle)活动。邮件的内容包括:
1.介绍读书活动的相关信息(例如:时间、地点、活动内容等); 2.说明你发出邀请的原因; 3.询问对方的意向。
注意:1.词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
最新版整理ppt
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讲座将于本周时六间状下语午、4点地钟点在状语报告厅举行。
本次讲座将持续两个小时。
报告厅 lecture hall The lecture will be held in the lecture hall at 4:00 p.m. this Saturday afternoon. The lecture will last about two hours.
Para 2 Combine the sentences into a paragraph
time/place
contents of the lecture meaning/importance
The lecture will be held in the lecture hall at 4:00 p.m. this Saturday afternoon, which will last about two hour. IInnffaacctt,,Students show great interest in the American culture, especially the campus life of American high school students. BBeessiiddeess,,You can talk about some interesting American customs, which will be welcomed by the students. I believe the students will benifit a lot from the lecture. Only when we have a better undestanding of American culture can we avoid the misunderstanding in communication.
1.介绍读书活动的相关信息(例如:时间、地点、活动内容等); 2.说明你发出邀请的原因; 3.询问对方的意向。
注意:1.词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
最新版整理ppt
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讲座将于本周时六间状下语午、4点地钟点在状语报告厅举行。
本次讲座将持续两个小时。
报告厅 lecture hall The lecture will be held in the lecture hall at 4:00 p.m. this Saturday afternoon. The lecture will last about two hours.
Para 2 Combine the sentences into a paragraph
time/place
contents of the lecture meaning/importance
The lecture will be held in the lecture hall at 4:00 p.m. this Saturday afternoon, which will last about two hour. IInnffaacctt,,Students show great interest in the American culture, especially the campus life of American high school students. BBeessiiddeess,,You can talk about some interesting American customs, which will be welcomed by the students. I believe the students will benifit a lot from the lecture. Only when we have a better undestanding of American culture can we avoid the misunderstanding in communication.
高三英语:邀请信 课件(共17张PPT)
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Yours sincerely,
•
Li Ming
模板2:
• Dear ,
• On behalf of , I would like to invite you to visit our school / my hometown for .
• It would give us great pleasure if you could deliver a speech on the topic of ____ during the visit, because . I am sure that it would be beneficial to ____ if .
• During your stay in ____ , we would like to offer you with , , which is free of charge, and .
邀请信写作特点
开头:开门见山,说明目的。
正文:准确明了,清晰流畅。写出邀请内 容(活动性质、项目、地点、时间、安排等) 以及有关要求与希望。
结尾:符合礼节,情真意切。重申对方参 加的重要性,希望尽快回复。
邀请信写作"三步走":
说明活动安排
说明邀请目的
Tips:
信中要说明关于活动 的详细信息,包括活动时 间、地点、内容,有时需 要说明参加活动的人员。 语气要热情真挚,但不要 强人所难。
• I would feel honored if you could come. • I do hope that you can make it to our party. • I’m looking forward to seeing you there. • I look forward to hearing from you. • I do hope that you will be able to come. • I would like to meet you there and please let me
高考英语《邀请信》(示范课)课件(共21张)
Learning suggestions and prospects
Self-study
It is recommended that students review the courseware before class and complete the homework assignments.
05
Course Summary
Key review of this lesson
Key Points of Grammar
This lesson focuses on the key points of English grammar, including sentence structure, tense usage, and modal verbs.
Use polite and respectful language throughout the letter.
Be mindful of the recipient's time, and try to keep the letter short and to the point.
Check for any possible spelling or grammar errors before sending the letter.
"It would mean a lot to us if you could accept our invitation."
"We look forward to your presence."
Notes on Writing Invitation Letters
Be clear and direct in your invitation. Avoid using complex language or long sentences.
高考英语《邀请信》(示范课)课件(共21张)
itishightimethatweshouldpayavisitbackandsharesuchameaningfulmomentwithouroldfriendshaswitnessedseen为了庆祝计划为了庆祝计划安排预计发生于等待我们参与代表表达我们最诚挚的感激尽情地见证了安排预计发生于等待我们参与代表表达我们最诚挚的感激尽情地见证了youhaveanitchfor
A. good B. wonderful C. fabulous D. enjoyable E. unforgettable F. joyful G. excellent
H. deep I. everlasting J. interesting K. entertaining L. profound M. meaningful N. merry
夺 人 眼 球 开 头 句
Part 2 : 介绍活动,陈述理由
1. 介绍活动(时间、地点、内容、意义)
2. 陈述理由00th anniversary is coming…… 1. 活动时间、地点
为了庆祝 of A grand anniversary is to be held ________________ in celebration its 100th birthday of our high school. As 计划 __________, scheduled / 安排 the when / celebration is预计发生于 _________ from October 1st to 3rd, _______ due during which time our old classmates and schoolmates will get together and pay a visit to our school. To ensure a satisfying celebration, many activities are ___________________________. 等待我们参与 in store for us to get involved in During the daytime, a representative, ___________ on 代表 behalf of all schoolmates present, will deliver a speech _______________________________ showing our deepest appreciation to our 表达我们最诚挚的感激 school and teachers. When the night falls, a party is to be 尽情地 our hearts’ content held. Not only can we dance and sing to __________________, but we can also share happiness and sorrow with friends. / to the fullest 3. 活动意义 见证了 100 years has _______________ many great changes in our witnessed/seen school. It is high time that we should pay a visit back and share such a meaningful moment with our old friends.
A. good B. wonderful C. fabulous D. enjoyable E. unforgettable F. joyful G. excellent
H. deep I. everlasting J. interesting K. entertaining L. profound M. meaningful N. merry
夺 人 眼 球 开 头 句
Part 2 : 介绍活动,陈述理由
1. 介绍活动(时间、地点、内容、意义)
2. 陈述理由00th anniversary is coming…… 1. 活动时间、地点
为了庆祝 of A grand anniversary is to be held ________________ in celebration its 100th birthday of our high school. As 计划 __________, scheduled / 安排 the when / celebration is预计发生于 _________ from October 1st to 3rd, _______ due during which time our old classmates and schoolmates will get together and pay a visit to our school. To ensure a satisfying celebration, many activities are ___________________________. 等待我们参与 in store for us to get involved in During the daytime, a representative, ___________ on 代表 behalf of all schoolmates present, will deliver a speech _______________________________ showing our deepest appreciation to our 表达我们最诚挚的感激 school and teachers. When the night falls, a party is to be 尽情地 our hearts’ content held. Not only can we dance and sing to __________________, but we can also share happiness and sorrow with friends. / to the fullest 3. 活动意义 见证了 100 years has _______________ many great changes in our witnessed/seen school. It is high time that we should pay a visit back and share such a meaningful moment with our old friends.
《英语写作邀请信》PPT课件
例文
Time : 8:00 p.m. Date: December 31st , Friday
Your presence on this occasion would be our greatest honor.
We would appreciate it if you could confirm your acceptance of our invitation by telephone or letter before December 30th.
例文
December 15 Dear Mr. Smith,
Our company has planned to hold a costume dance to make New Year’s Day. Therefore, Mr. Howard would like to invite you and your clients to our costume dance with the following details: Place : Dance Hall, 2nd Floor, Holiday Inn
The address of the receiver
the date of writing
Dear… , We have pleasure in inviting you to ….. , it will be taking place
at/ in ….. from….to……. We enclose ……….
《英语写作邀请信》PPT 课件
Letters of Invitation
邀请信是日常生活和外事活动中常用的一种信函。
一种为正式请帖(invitation card)
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6.如书写较差以至影响交际,将其分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(21~25分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 - 覆盖所有内容要点。 - 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 - 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力 使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。 - 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结 构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
Procedures to write a letter of invitation
structure content
intention activity expectation
what , when, where
language
precise expressions
advanced sentence structures
Part 1 How to express your intention?
Conclusion
I'm writing to invite you to ...
Women's day is approaching. I wonder if you could come to... I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in...
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第二档(6~10分) 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 - 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关 内容。 - 语法结构单调,词汇知识有限。 - 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写 作内容的理解。 - 较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
Part 2
Details --activities
We'll have lots of activities . First, ____. After that, ______. Later,______. At last,______.
We've arranged various activities . First, ______. In addition,______. By the way,_____.
Thank you!
Translation 会议将于周二下午2点在会议中心召开。
The meeting will start at 2 p.m. on Tuesday at the Conference Center.
英语夏令营时间:2016年7月底,为期四天 地点:海南
The English Summer Camp, which lasts four days, will be held in Hainan at the end of July, 2016 .
I' m _____, chairman of our Students Union. I'm writing to invite you to...
On behalf of the______, I would be very pleased to invite you to attend...
Part 3 How to express your expectation&gratitude?
How to write a letter of invitati人过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件, 邀请她一同前往,内容包括:
1. 出发及返回时间; 2. 活动:包饺子、表演节目等。 注意:
Part 2
Details --time/place
Which description is clear and precise?
We will meet tomorrow morning at school.
We will meet at 8:00 a.m. tomorrow morning at the school gate.
proper linking words
Practice
(2010课标卷1)你校将举办一次演讲比 赛,希望附近某大学的外籍英语教师 Smith来做评委。 主题:人与自然 时间:6月15日下午2:00-5:00 地点: 501教室 参加选手10人 联系人:李华(484876655);欢迎大家 光临
Dear Ms.Smith, I am Lihua, the leader of the Students Union of Yucai
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第三档(11~15分) 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 - 虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。 - 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 - 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响 理解。 - 应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文内容连贯。 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
高考英语作文评分标准
一、评分原则
1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。 2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属 档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次, 最后给分。 3.词数少于80和多于120的,从总分中减去2分。 4.评分时应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇 和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时, 应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇 用法均可接受。
To make your composition smooth, you need to use some proper linking words!
Part 2
Details --linking words
列举顺序 firstly, secondly...... besides, then, for one thing; for another thing, in addition, by the way, what's more...
Middle School. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for our English Speech Contest and be a judge.
The contest, the theme of which is “Man and Nature”, will be held in the Room 501 from 2:00 to 5:00 on the afternoon of June 15. What’s more, there will be ten students taking part in it. I am sure that it will be a great success if you can give us some precious remarks.
时间过渡 now, later, after that, meanwhile, in the meantime......
Part 2
Details-- highlights
Don't forget to use some advanced sentence patterns!
Avoid grammar and spelling mistakes.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. My telephone number is 44876655. I am looking forward to your reply. With best wishes, Li Hua
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第一档(1~5分) 未完成试题规定的任务。 - 明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能 是未理解试题要求。 - 语法结构单调,词汇知识有限。 - 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容 的理解。 - 缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。 信息未能传达给读者。
0分 未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;所 写内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第四档(16~20分) 完成了试题规定的任务。 - 虽漏掉一两个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。 - 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 - 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误 主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 - 应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。 达到了预期的写作目的。
Conclusion
We do hope that you can come and look forward to seeing you.
I will be grateful if you are willing to come. Looking forward to your reply.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. I'm looking forward to your early reply.
1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 结语已为你写好。
structure of an invitation
Para.1
(beginning)
intention
Para.2
(body)
Para.3
(ending)
what, when, where
expectation gratitude
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(21~25分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 - 覆盖所有内容要点。 - 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 - 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力 使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。 - 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结 构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
Procedures to write a letter of invitation
structure content
intention activity expectation
what , when, where
language
precise expressions
advanced sentence structures
Part 1 How to express your intention?
Conclusion
I'm writing to invite you to ...
Women's day is approaching. I wonder if you could come to... I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in...
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第二档(6~10分) 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 - 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关 内容。 - 语法结构单调,词汇知识有限。 - 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写 作内容的理解。 - 较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
Part 2
Details --activities
We'll have lots of activities . First, ____. After that, ______. Later,______. At last,______.
We've arranged various activities . First, ______. In addition,______. By the way,_____.
Thank you!
Translation 会议将于周二下午2点在会议中心召开。
The meeting will start at 2 p.m. on Tuesday at the Conference Center.
英语夏令营时间:2016年7月底,为期四天 地点:海南
The English Summer Camp, which lasts four days, will be held in Hainan at the end of July, 2016 .
I' m _____, chairman of our Students Union. I'm writing to invite you to...
On behalf of the______, I would be very pleased to invite you to attend...
Part 3 How to express your expectation&gratitude?
How to write a letter of invitati人过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件, 邀请她一同前往,内容包括:
1. 出发及返回时间; 2. 活动:包饺子、表演节目等。 注意:
Part 2
Details --time/place
Which description is clear and precise?
We will meet tomorrow morning at school.
We will meet at 8:00 a.m. tomorrow morning at the school gate.
proper linking words
Practice
(2010课标卷1)你校将举办一次演讲比 赛,希望附近某大学的外籍英语教师 Smith来做评委。 主题:人与自然 时间:6月15日下午2:00-5:00 地点: 501教室 参加选手10人 联系人:李华(484876655);欢迎大家 光临
Dear Ms.Smith, I am Lihua, the leader of the Students Union of Yucai
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第三档(11~15分) 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 - 虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。 - 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 - 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响 理解。 - 应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文内容连贯。 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
高考英语作文评分标准
一、评分原则
1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。 2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属 档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次, 最后给分。 3.词数少于80和多于120的,从总分中减去2分。 4.评分时应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇 和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时, 应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇 用法均可接受。
To make your composition smooth, you need to use some proper linking words!
Part 2
Details --linking words
列举顺序 firstly, secondly...... besides, then, for one thing; for another thing, in addition, by the way, what's more...
Middle School. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for our English Speech Contest and be a judge.
The contest, the theme of which is “Man and Nature”, will be held in the Room 501 from 2:00 to 5:00 on the afternoon of June 15. What’s more, there will be ten students taking part in it. I am sure that it will be a great success if you can give us some precious remarks.
时间过渡 now, later, after that, meanwhile, in the meantime......
Part 2
Details-- highlights
Don't forget to use some advanced sentence patterns!
Avoid grammar and spelling mistakes.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. My telephone number is 44876655. I am looking forward to your reply. With best wishes, Li Hua
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第一档(1~5分) 未完成试题规定的任务。 - 明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能 是未理解试题要求。 - 语法结构单调,词汇知识有限。 - 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容 的理解。 - 缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。 信息未能传达给读者。
0分 未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;所 写内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第四档(16~20分) 完成了试题规定的任务。 - 虽漏掉一两个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。 - 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 - 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误 主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 - 应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。 达到了预期的写作目的。
Conclusion
We do hope that you can come and look forward to seeing you.
I will be grateful if you are willing to come. Looking forward to your reply.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. I'm looking forward to your early reply.
1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 结语已为你写好。
structure of an invitation
Para.1
(beginning)
intention
Para.2
(body)
Para.3
(ending)
what, when, where
expectation gratitude