极智批改网 用户 TPO第22套独立写作真实批改报告

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TPO第22套独立写作真实批改报告

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题目：TPO第22套

原文字数：437

批改时间：2013年07月02日18：02

Nowadays, 1as the developing of the society and government, people 23starts to have different 4thought 5of 6this country. Some78of them would 9talk about it personally, 10but some 11people will start to spread their views publicly, such as12internet13, 1415poster on the street 16and so on. However, personally, I do not think teachers should make their social or political views known to students in the classroom17, 18the following are the reasons why I agree with the statement.

To begin with, the reason we have 19teacher is to learn academic 20knowledges from21them 22or let me say in another way, what's 23the teacher's job? The answer from all of us 24definitely is to25tranform their knowledge to us. This is what the teachers should be doing in 26the class 27, 28we pay to go to school, their classes, all the parents want their children to receive back is not the teachers' social or political views, in stead they want their children to be educated. They want teachers to change their kids' bad behaviors, unpleasant personalities or the way they 29try to study. 30Also some privates schools 31expect more money than some public schools, therefore if the teachers waste students' learning time by 32express their feeling 33of this society, then the parents will be 34indignation and

unhappy 35, 36this will mainly affect the school's reputation, which no school 37hope 38to 39be happened.

Moreover, teachers do not have the right to 40tell their41views of social and political to students. Everyone 42have the freedom to distinguish what is good or 43not.44They could have different views 45with the 46teachers,47but teachers cannot tell them what is wrong or right. Not all 48the students really think or care about 49the country's political or 50society 51, however,52if the teacher told about it, 53this will affect their thoughts. 54For some kids, they will not listen to the teachers an thinking that they are wrong, but some kids will listen to it and forming the same view strongly that might lead them to start spreading it everywhere. The dangerous thing is that if they 55angeryly posted 56on the Internet, people who are opposed to it will 57comments poorly and this could affect their 58phycology problem.

To sum up, everyone 59have the right to think or 60believ in various 61way, 62and no one should tell someone that they are wrong. Also 63teacher spending time talking about their perspective of the political and social64is not what they should be doing in the 65classroom 66than 67teaching students some academic subjects. Therefore I totally agree with the statement 68with two major reasons 69i 70present above.

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