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高中英语外研版必修1 Module4《Writing》省级名师优质课教案比赛获奖教案示范课教案公开课教案
高中英语外研版必修1Module4《Writing》省级名师优质课教案比赛获奖教案示范课教案公开课教案【省级名师教案】1教学目标1、让学生掌握何时用and 何时用but。
(make the students master when to use “and ” as well as when to use “but”)2、让学生掌握如何来描写一个地方。
(make the students master how to write a description of a place)2学情分析写作课的主要目的是让学生会用英文来思维,用英文来表达自己的所想。
这节课时的目的是让学生把在本单元学到的描述地方的句型及短语等用上来描写一个地方,而我们学校的学生绝大多数学生来自于农村,基础差,英语表达能力薄弱,所以写作课一定要从最基础的开始。
3重点难点1、让学生学会使用并列连词来使写作更加的连贯。
(learn to make use of coordinate conjunctions to make their writing more coherent)2、使学生掌握如何来描述一个地方。
(make the students master how to write a description of a place)3、让学生掌握如何通过and 和but 来连贯的描绘一个地方(make the students master how to write a description of a place by using “and ” as well as “but”)4教学过程4.1第一学时教学活动1【导入】课堂导入，引出话题Ask the students to read A lively City again carefully and underline the sentences that contain the c oordinate conjunctions “and”as well as “but”.Sentences:1 It’s been six years since we last saw each other, you know. And this is the first time I’ve visited your hometown.。
公开课_高中英语写作PPT教学课件
a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
2020/12/12
3
Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
2020/12/12
10
正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless
高中英语《基于IFOE框架的概要写作教学》公开课精品PPT课件
With so many cultural differences between people, it is _a_m_a_z_in_g__ to have somesi_m_i_la_r_it_ie_s___ in body language, ______ makes it easier for people to understand each other.
Assignment
1. Polish your summary and add it to the “English Corner”. 2. Try to practice the skills about summary writing after class.
One sample
Body language, a useful way to communicate, sometimes can be misunderstood, but some are universal. (要点1) For example, though smiling can be comprehended to hide negative emotions, it is frequently used to convey happiness. (要点2) Besides, there are also some globally understood universal actions, such as frowning, turning one’s back, nodding the head, keeping a certain distance and so on. (要点3) Generally speaking, the similarities of body language makes it easier for people to “read” each other. (要点4) (78words)
Assignment
1. Polish your summary and add it to the “English Corner”. 2. Try to practice the skills about summary writing after class.
One sample
Body language, a useful way to communicate, sometimes can be misunderstood, but some are universal. (要点1) For example, though smiling can be comprehended to hide negative emotions, it is frequently used to convey happiness. (要点2) Besides, there are also some globally understood universal actions, such as frowning, turning one’s back, nodding the head, keeping a certain distance and so on. (要点3) Generally speaking, the similarities of body language makes it easier for people to “read” each other. (要点4) (78words)
高中英语 读后续写微专题公开课
2. 他如此害怕以至于站在那儿一动不动。 He was __so__s_ca_r_e_d__th__a_t _ he stood rooted to the spot.
Sentence pattern 2
1. Happy and excited, we sat together to enjoy a big dinner, wishing everyone a
descriptions more vivid.
Use the 4 sentence patterns in a continuation writing.
Lead-in
Divide words related to emotions into four groups.
Group1
①angry
Group2
happy new year.
——B1U3 改
2. Tired but excited, I have been working on this, selecting his favourite
music.
——B1U3改
句型2: 情绪adj.1+情绪adj.2, 主+谓+宾, doing sth.
(感到)...和...,某人做某事1,并做某事2
2. 当大卫终于下定决心继续赛跑时,我被欣慰(relief)和开心 给淹没了。 (2022全国1卷)
_R__e_li_e_f_a__n_d__d_e_l_ig_h__t_f_lo__o_d_e_d__o_v_e_r__m__e_ when David finally became determined to continue the race.
眼睛因难以置信/惊讶/恐惧而睁大,...
Sentence pattern 2
1. Happy and excited, we sat together to enjoy a big dinner, wishing everyone a
descriptions more vivid.
Use the 4 sentence patterns in a continuation writing.
Lead-in
Divide words related to emotions into four groups.
Group1
①angry
Group2
happy new year.
——B1U3 改
2. Tired but excited, I have been working on this, selecting his favourite
music.
——B1U3改
句型2: 情绪adj.1+情绪adj.2, 主+谓+宾, doing sth.
(感到)...和...,某人做某事1,并做某事2
2. 当大卫终于下定决心继续赛跑时,我被欣慰(relief)和开心 给淹没了。 (2022全国1卷)
_R__e_li_e_f_a__n_d__d_e_l_ig_h__t_f_lo__o_d_e_d__o_v_e_r__m__e_ when David finally became determined to continue the race.
眼睛因难以置信/惊讶/恐惧而睁大,...
高中英语作文—求助信写作共PPTPPT优质公开课
Signature
六.写作训练 假设你是高中生李华，就读于光明中
学。你在英语学习中遇到了很多问题， 希望得到你的外教Miss Bruce的帮助。 请给Miss Bruce写一封信。内容包括 以下要点：
课文中生词太多，难记； 课文太长，难背； 希望Miss Bruce介绍一些英语学习 方法。 注意： 1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Introduce the purpose of writing the letter and your problems
Faced with___, I have to ask for your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____. Also, I would like you to ____.
I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____.
助原因和事情经过时应恰当使用过去 结构的倒装用法使用准确，强调了词典的重要，为本文增加了得分点。
求助信 一任务呈现 假设你是李华，留学期间寄宿在 Mr.Brown家里，回国后你发现你有一 本英语字典落在他家了。请参照以下 要点给Mr.Brown写一封信。内容如下：
一本英语词典忘记带回国,词典是美 国老师送的，非常珍贵；
词典很可能落在卧室的书架上； 邮资自付。
注意： 1.词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已给 出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.参考词汇：邮资postage Dear Mr.Brown, _____________________________ ______________________________ ___________________
六.写作训练 假设你是高中生李华，就读于光明中
学。你在英语学习中遇到了很多问题， 希望得到你的外教Miss Bruce的帮助。 请给Miss Bruce写一封信。内容包括 以下要点：
课文中生词太多，难记； 课文太长，难背； 希望Miss Bruce介绍一些英语学习 方法。 注意： 1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Introduce the purpose of writing the letter and your problems
Faced with___, I have to ask for your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____. Also, I would like you to ____.
I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____.
助原因和事情经过时应恰当使用过去 结构的倒装用法使用准确，强调了词典的重要，为本文增加了得分点。
求助信 一任务呈现 假设你是李华，留学期间寄宿在 Mr.Brown家里，回国后你发现你有一 本英语字典落在他家了。请参照以下 要点给Mr.Brown写一封信。内容如下：
一本英语词典忘记带回国,词典是美 国老师送的，非常珍贵；
词典很可能落在卧室的书架上； 邮资自付。
注意： 1.词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已给 出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.参考词汇：邮资postage Dear Mr.Brown, _____________________________ ______________________________ ___________________
(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
...
talk in English
Brainstorming
read English books
ways to improve English
watch English films
have a good attitude
listen carefully
Step4: organize your writing（组织语言）
to sum up 观点 in my opinion, as far as I'm concerned, from
my perspective
Write a draft(草稿） by groups.
Step5: write a draft（草稿）
para1：Purposes and Problems
2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua, ————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————
Best wishes.
Yours,
xxx
Step1：analyze (审题)
Writing
Suggestion Letter
建议信
Free talk
As a new student in senior one, do you have some problems?
在此输入您的封面副标题
chemistry
math physics
English
假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信 中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很 苦恼。请写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学 习。 注意： 1. 词数100左右；
高中英语《概要写作专练》公开课PPT课件
People’s opinions are divided on the issue of change
Para 1
• People’s opinions are divided on the issue of change.
• People hold different views on change • People differ in their attitudes towards change • Different people hold different attitudes
towards change.
3.Locate the topic sentence
Para 2
FFrroomm oonnee ppooininttofovfievwie, wpe, oppeleopwlehowahcocepatccehpatngcehsatnhginesk tthhaint k that cchhaannggeess make ththeeirirlifelifme emaneianngifnugl.ful. Firstly, changes create new opportunities, which make us leap forward. A new job, for instance, mighOtmpitreesxeanmptlcehs allenges that push the person to adapt, acquire new knowledge, or add to their skill set. Secondly, a change can represent a break with the past and an old routine which has become boring and predictable. Finally, as well as making life more fun and interesting, new experiences can be good for our physical and mental health. We find that changes can make us experienced and valuable.
Para 1
• People’s opinions are divided on the issue of change.
• People hold different views on change • People differ in their attitudes towards change • Different people hold different attitudes
towards change.
3.Locate the topic sentence
Para 2
FFrroomm oonnee ppooininttofovfievwie, wpe, oppeleopwlehowahcocepatccehpatngcehsatnhginesk tthhaint k that cchhaannggeess make ththeeirirlifelifme emaneianngifnugl.ful. Firstly, changes create new opportunities, which make us leap forward. A new job, for instance, mighOtmpitreesxeanmptlcehs allenges that push the person to adapt, acquire new knowledge, or add to their skill set. Secondly, a change can represent a break with the past and an old routine which has become boring and predictable. Finally, as well as making life more fun and interesting, new experiences can be good for our physical and mental health. We find that changes can make us experienced and valuable.
公开课-高中英语写作课件
英语写作训练
The essay
What makes a good essay?
A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.
Topic paragraph
general statement
To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.
topic statement
The paragraph
为了丰富同学们的课外生活，你校英语协会将举办 音乐周活动，其中一项活动为征文比赛。请你根据以下 提示The benefits of listening to music为题写一篇英 语短文参加征文活动：
1.听音乐有助于减轻压力； 2.听音乐能消除烦恼，有助睡眠； 3.听音乐给人灵感，培养创造力。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：灵感inspiration
典型病例
1.单词拼写问题 2.名词的单复数问题 3. 主谓一致问题 4.时态和语态问题 5.代词(主格、宾格)问题
6.Chinglish现象
A Sample Writing(范文欣赏) The benefits of listening to music A large number of people like listening to music.Listening to music is beneficial to us in many ways. To begin with, since stress is the cause of many illnesses, we can reduce the risk of getting these diseases by listening to music that we like.Secondly, listening to music is an effective way to remove worry and it is also helpful to a good night's sleep.In addition, listening to music can provide us with inspiration and help develop our creativity, which will play an important role in our future success. In general, listening to music will make us live better.
The essay
What makes a good essay?
A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.
Topic paragraph
general statement
To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.
topic statement
The paragraph
为了丰富同学们的课外生活，你校英语协会将举办 音乐周活动，其中一项活动为征文比赛。请你根据以下 提示The benefits of listening to music为题写一篇英 语短文参加征文活动：
1.听音乐有助于减轻压力； 2.听音乐能消除烦恼，有助睡眠； 3.听音乐给人灵感，培养创造力。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：灵感inspiration
典型病例
1.单词拼写问题 2.名词的单复数问题 3. 主谓一致问题 4.时态和语态问题 5.代词(主格、宾格)问题
6.Chinglish现象
A Sample Writing(范文欣赏) The benefits of listening to music A large number of people like listening to music.Listening to music is beneficial to us in many ways. To begin with, since stress is the cause of many illnesses, we can reduce the risk of getting these diseases by listening to music that we like.Secondly, listening to music is an effective way to remove worry and it is also helpful to a good night's sleep.In addition, listening to music can provide us with inspiration and help develop our creativity, which will play an important role in our future success. In general, listening to music will make us live better.
高中英语写作公开课道歉信写作技能提升
I sincerely hope I can fix another time for a trip organized by your agency.
Dear Sir or Madam, I am li Hua, an exchange student in New Zealand.
Last week, I booked a holiday to Australia for 8 days in your agency. But now I am sorry to tell you that I have to cancel my booking. (写作目的)
I will have an important exam on Monday, which I can’t afford to miss.
Expand sentences扩展句子
Beijing is a famous historic city.
Beijing is a famous historic city, _w_h_ic_h__h_as__a_l_o_n_g_h_i_st_o_r_y_o_f_m_o. re
1.I would like to do a part-time job， which _________________.
2. Class 106 is a big family, which ____________________.
3.President Xi recently advised young people not to stay up late， which _____________________. 4.I would like to do voluntary work， which _________________.
Dear Sir or Madam, I am li Hua, an exchange student in New Zealand.
Last week, I booked a holiday to Australia for 8 days in your agency. But now I am sorry to tell you that I have to cancel my booking. (写作目的)
I will have an important exam on Monday, which I can’t afford to miss.
Expand sentences扩展句子
Beijing is a famous historic city.
Beijing is a famous historic city, _w_h_ic_h__h_as__a_l_o_n_g_h_i_st_o_r_y_o_f_m_o. re
1.I would like to do a part-time job， which _________________.
2. Class 106 is a big family, which ____________________.
3.President Xi recently advised young people not to stay up late， which _____________________. 4.I would like to do voluntary work， which _________________.
高中英语概要写作Shyness公开课PPT课件
要点1: Shyness is becoming more and more common, and scientists have some interesting ideas about why people are shy
tohfeooppinpioosnitaenisdctrraiusuke.stIaeskrai3neglisaroeftsetnrobnlagmly esufapipluorreteodn.
This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less shy.
Para 5
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Are you shy① ? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Nowp, hsceiennotismtseanreotnrying to understand
over one.
your
suggestion
写作思路解读
Para. 1 Are you shy? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy.
tohfeooppinpioosnitaenisdctrraiusuke.stIaeskrai3neglisaroeftsetnrobnlagmly esufapipluorreteodn.
This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less shy.
Para 5
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Are you shy① ? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Nowp, hsceiennotismtseanreotnrying to understand
over one.
your
suggestion
写作思路解读
Para. 1 Are you shy? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy.
高中英语作文写作教学公开课ppt课件
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句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
1
基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
2
考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
1
基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
2
考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
高中英语信件作文课优秀公开课课件
●__正__文_____________(_注__意__：____英__文__书__信__不__要__写___一__些___ (B__o__d____y__o____f __L__e__t__t__e__r__）______h②__e__l__正l__o__文,______部h__i__分之____，类____严的____格问____按候____照语______文)____章____的____提
●签名（Signature） (文章一般都会给出）
Yours sincerely， Li Hua
Organization
Mood
In a moderate mood!!
Content:
Cover all the information
Better to arrange the passage according to the given order of the content.
Good points
书写有较大进步， 总体来说书写认真， 字迹较工整
书信写作的格式及其要求：
Dear Mr. Smith●，称呼（Salutation） 文章一般会给出
__________________________________①____起____首____语______-__-__-__-____亮____明____身____份______，____开____门____见 _________________山__说__意__图_______________________
Language:
No chinglish or grammatical or spellingmistakes
In accordance with the requirements of the composition
●签名（Signature） (文章一般都会给出）
Yours sincerely， Li Hua
Organization
Mood
In a moderate mood!!
Content:
Cover all the information
Better to arrange the passage according to the given order of the content.
Good points
书写有较大进步， 总体来说书写认真， 字迹较工整
书信写作的格式及其要求：
Dear Mr. Smith●，称呼（Salutation） 文章一般会给出
__________________________________①____起____首____语______-__-__-__-____亮____明____身____份______，____开____门____见 _________________山__说__意__图_______________________
Language:
No chinglish or grammatical or spellingmistakes
In accordance with the requirements of the composition
高中英语Summary-Writing概要写作公开课精品课件
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4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
5
Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
5
Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件(34张)
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
四喜丸子
four happy meatballs X
meatballs √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
Possible version
Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
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Thank you for you letter asking about the rebuilt
6. 绕/爬过小山
6. to the other side of hill
7. 我们在（湖畔）小树林里 7. in small woods, by lake
•三“变”为变要点为句子。
Expand the key points have a picnic, in People’s Park We will have our picnic in the People’s Park. We are going to the People’s park for a picnic. We are going to the People’s park, where we will have a picnic.
高中英语Summary Writing概要写作公开课精品PPT课件
Para.1: Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of technology.
Para.2: According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-to-face human relationships.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Tip3: use the third person Tip4: use various sentence structures Tip5: use general words Tip6: change the part of speech（改变词性） Tip7: replace with synonyms(同义词） Tip8atter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Rewrite the topic sentences
1. Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of technology. 2. According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-toface human relationships. 3. However, a report suggests that technology can actually better relationships.
Para.2: According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-to-face human relationships.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Tip3: use the third person Tip4: use various sentence structures Tip5: use general words Tip6: change the part of speech（改变词性） Tip7: replace with synonyms(同义词） Tip8atter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Rewrite the topic sentences
1. Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of technology. 2. According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-toface human relationships. 3. However, a report suggests that technology can actually better relationships.
高中英语读后续写公开课 共18张PPT
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Paragraph 1 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. __________________________
Paragraph 2 We had no idea where we were and it got dark. ___________________________________
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn‘t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.【答题时需注意】 1. 所续写短文的词数应为 l50 左右； 2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
高中英语写作公开课(共61张PPT)
表示选择关系的并列句
常用的连词有or , either…or…..，otherwise, or else(否则）, 等连接.如：
Either you are mad or I am. You must go early, otherwise you will miss the bus.
Will he still be there or will he have gone away? Take this bus or else you won’t get there in time.
第五种句型：S+V+P
She is a student. He has become an engineer.
It tastes sweet.
His face goes red.
注意：系动词除了be 动词外，还包括become, turn, look, seem, appear, sound, taste, smell, remain, prove, keep, fall.
并列句：由并列连词把两个或两个以上的简单句 连在一起的句子叫做并列句。
He helps me and I help him. He not only gave us a lot of advice , but also helped us to study English.
注意：不同的并列连词表示并列分句之间的不同关系， 根据并列分句之间的关系不同，并列分句可以分为四种。
Once, she teached in India for many years . In 1950, she set up the Missionaries of charity to help the poor in Calcutta. She devoted to help the poor 、 the patiences、the homeless persons and the dead persons. Because of those, in 1979, she got the Nobel peace prize in 1997. she died in India.
高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)
Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
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A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.
I believe English is more important than other foreign languages for many reasons. First of all, English is spoken by a large number of people, and these people are the most widely spread across the world in a great many countries. Secondly, English is the most widely used language on the internet. It has become an on-line language. Thirdly, the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in our country and English will be very useful. Lastly, …
英语书面表达
English Composition Writing
The essay
What makes a good essay?
A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.
Conclusion
Personally,… in conclusion, in brief, From what has been discussed above,
we may draw the conclusion that ... In summary, it is wiser ...
The paragraph
theirtnoepstiscinsterneetseonrcheoles in the rocks. Other
species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at all…
Supporting Paragraphs (Body) Paragraphs
TS Firstly, ...
SS Secondly, ...
SS Moreover, ... SS Finally, . . . However, ...
SS
In addition, … Furthermore, ...
What makes a good paragraph?
A good paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences.
There are different kinds of bee. Some live in large groups like the honey bee______
Wherever you go in our school, you see green lawns and trees and beautiful flowers. Dotted among these trees and flowers are many buildings of different styles. A stream runs through our school and you always see everything reflected in the water. Our school is just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless 因果关系：because, since, as, thanks to, owing to, as
a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that 递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
Topic statement
general statement
To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.
topic statement
表 列 举： for example / instance, take…for example, that’s to say, in other words, as follows
表 总 结： in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word,