2016年全国高考英语应用文写作训练之投诉信-(共21张)汇编
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【真题满分佳作赏析】
【2008湖北卷改编：投诉手机质量问题】 假设你是李华，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问 题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。 要点： 1. 问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信；
该产品已售完，无法更换； 型号新，无配件，无法维修。 2. 要求：公司应尽快予以更换。 参考词汇：配件 spare part
Fra Baidu bibliotek8. an改为a
【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误
9. The reason for my dissatisfaction is what it’s not the double-room I ordered.
9. what改为that 10. Under this circumstance, I find it difficult to be stay in your hotel any more.
【必备词语】
in a rude manner 粗鲁地；态度恶劣地 a reasonable explanation 合理的解释 woolen sweater 羊毛衣 make sb annoyed 让某人烦恼 service number 服务电话 examine 检查 expect an early reply 期待尽快回复 prompt attention 即时的关注
【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误
1. I received so poor service that I felt I should bring it to your attention. 1. so改为such 2. I think it must have some quality problems and I really annoyed about it. 2. really前面加am
【好句朗诵】
1. The main problems are as follows. 主要的问题如下。 2. Therefore, I require that you send me a new one. 因此，我要求你 发一个新的给我。 3. I hate to say that there is something wrong with my mobile phone. 我很遗憾地说，我的手机有些问题。 4. Taking into account all three factors above, I request that the company should have a change of it for me as soon as possible. 考虑到 以上的三个因素，我要求公司要为我尽快换一个新的。
5. I believe that you will consider this matter serious and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind.
5. serious改为seriously
6. Frankly speaking, I am not prepare to tolerate this situation any more.
全国高考英语应用文写作
【必备词语】
inform sb. 通知某人 order 订货 regretful 遗憾的 work 运转；运行 take the temperature 测量温度 interrupt 干扰;打扰 make a complaint 投诉；抱怨 an electric fan 电扇 assistant 助手；营业员
【好句朗诵】
5. But we are regretful to find that it cannot work normally. 但是，我 们很遗憾地发现它不能正常地工作。 6. Your prompt attention and early reply will be appreciated. 感谢您即 时的关注和及早的回复。 7. I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint. 很抱歉打扰您，但是我必须投诉。 8. I am waiting for a reasonable explanation and expecting an early reply. 我在等待一个合理的解释，并期待及早回复。 9. Could you change a new one for me or return my money as soon as possible? 您能否尽快换一个新的给我或者给我退款？
满分佳作（一） Dear Sir,
I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr,2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. I contacted the saleswoman but the problem of my mobile phone could not be effectively solved.
3. It makes me so unsatisfied that I want to change it and have my money back. 3. and改为or
【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误
4. On Tuesday, February 18, I went to your store look for a Tshirt. 4. look前面加to
6. prepare改为prepared
【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误
7. I am regretful to inform you that the heating system in the room stopped working a few day ago.
7. day改为days 8. I feel sorry to trouble you but I have to make an complaint.
【真题满分佳作赏析】
【2008湖北卷改编：投诉手机质量问题】 假设你是李华，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问 题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。 要点： 1. 问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信；
该产品已售完，无法更换； 型号新，无配件，无法维修。 2. 要求：公司应尽快予以更换。 参考词汇：配件 spare part
Fra Baidu bibliotek8. an改为a
【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误
9. The reason for my dissatisfaction is what it’s not the double-room I ordered.
9. what改为that 10. Under this circumstance, I find it difficult to be stay in your hotel any more.
【必备词语】
in a rude manner 粗鲁地；态度恶劣地 a reasonable explanation 合理的解释 woolen sweater 羊毛衣 make sb annoyed 让某人烦恼 service number 服务电话 examine 检查 expect an early reply 期待尽快回复 prompt attention 即时的关注
【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误
1. I received so poor service that I felt I should bring it to your attention. 1. so改为such 2. I think it must have some quality problems and I really annoyed about it. 2. really前面加am
【好句朗诵】
1. The main problems are as follows. 主要的问题如下。 2. Therefore, I require that you send me a new one. 因此，我要求你 发一个新的给我。 3. I hate to say that there is something wrong with my mobile phone. 我很遗憾地说，我的手机有些问题。 4. Taking into account all three factors above, I request that the company should have a change of it for me as soon as possible. 考虑到 以上的三个因素，我要求公司要为我尽快换一个新的。
5. I believe that you will consider this matter serious and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind.
5. serious改为seriously
6. Frankly speaking, I am not prepare to tolerate this situation any more.
全国高考英语应用文写作
【必备词语】
inform sb. 通知某人 order 订货 regretful 遗憾的 work 运转；运行 take the temperature 测量温度 interrupt 干扰;打扰 make a complaint 投诉；抱怨 an electric fan 电扇 assistant 助手；营业员
【好句朗诵】
5. But we are regretful to find that it cannot work normally. 但是，我 们很遗憾地发现它不能正常地工作。 6. Your prompt attention and early reply will be appreciated. 感谢您即 时的关注和及早的回复。 7. I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint. 很抱歉打扰您，但是我必须投诉。 8. I am waiting for a reasonable explanation and expecting an early reply. 我在等待一个合理的解释，并期待及早回复。 9. Could you change a new one for me or return my money as soon as possible? 您能否尽快换一个新的给我或者给我退款？
满分佳作（一） Dear Sir,
I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr,2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. I contacted the saleswoman but the problem of my mobile phone could not be effectively solved.
3. It makes me so unsatisfied that I want to change it and have my money back. 3. and改为or
【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误
4. On Tuesday, February 18, I went to your store look for a Tshirt. 4. look前面加to
6. prepare改为prepared
【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误
7. I am regretful to inform you that the heating system in the room stopped working a few day ago.
7. day改为days 8. I feel sorry to trouble you but I have to make an complaint.