雅思写作专题之 结尾(Conclusion)部分的写作方法

雅思写作专题之 结尾(Conclusion)部分的写作方法




结尾部分经典写作模式




1. 传统模式




重申作者的观点和立场，简要地重述理由




不良范例：Topic- Should college students be allowed to get married?




(Introduction) Nowadays, there has been a heated discussion about the issue whether college students should be allowed to get married. From my point of view, it is not a wise decision for college students to get married as they are too young to form a family.




(Conclusion) So, from the above reasons, we could draw the conclusion that it is really not a good wise decision for college students to get married. They are really too young, so they really can’t form a family.




优秀范例：Topic-Should college students be encouraged to take up part-time job?




From the above comparison and contrast, we can see clearly there are more disadvantages than advantages in taking up part-time jobs for college students. To students of all levels, their main task is to acquire knowledge and skills. It is unwise to earn a little money at the cost of neglecting one’s study.




注意点：(1) 切忌简单重复观点和理由。




(2) 力求简洁明了。







2. 利弊综合模式




通过比较正反双方观点的利与弊，得出结论或表明自己的立场、看法。




不良范例：Topic-Should college students be encouraged to take up part-time job?




It seems that the above two sides both have their reasons. But I just agree to the second point of view-College students should not be encouraged to take up part-time jobs. Because I think it is more reasonable.




优秀范例：As the proverb goes: “Every coin has its two sides.” There are both merits and drawbacks to students’ taking part-time jobs. It is quite understandable that people’s attitudes are divergent on this controversial issue. For my part, I am in favor of the practice of taking up a part-time job. Earning some money through one’s own effects helps one to realize the value of labor and cultivate a strong sense of independence. The precondition is that one should never neglect study to pursue money and material gains.







注意点： （1）可以选择支持某一方观点，也可以采取折衷的方法。




(2) 如选择支持某一方观点，在支持该观点的同时把它与对应的观点进行比较，说明前者为何比后者更有道理可以起到锦上添花的作用。




(3) 如采取折衷的方法，切记应该要兼顾双方的观点，在分别指出双方的优点与缺点的前提下得出自己的观点。




(4) 应该占据文章中相当的比重。







3. 倡议号召模式




发出倡议号召，展望未来




不良范例：Topic-The population problem




So, my dear brothers and sisters, let’s join hands a

nd work hard to solve the problem! I believe as long as we work hard, our future will be bright!




优秀范例：Topic－Is it fair to cover celebrities’ private lives in the mass media?




From my point of view, on no account should the private life of noted people be exposed to the public. We should take a more rational attitude towards the issue. Everyone is equal before the law and enjoys the same right to protect their privacy. Reports of this sort should focus more on their performance and contribution to the society instead of their personal lives.

注意点：(1)倡议和号召的内容应该是针对特定问题的实际的解决方案。内容切忌空洞。




(2) 篇幅不必过长，对遣词造句的要求较高。







Conclusion部分常用套句汇总：




总而言之。 All in all/in general/on the whole/generally







综上所述。 In summary/In conclusion/In short/In a word/To sum up/To conclude







以上两个观点都有一定的道理，如果让我在两者之中选择一个的话，我会选择……




The both viewpoints have their reasons, if I have to make a choice between them, I would prefer……







通过以上的比较，任何人都可以轻易地得出这样的结论……




From the above comparison and contrast, anyone can easily conclude that……







当仔细比较了其长处和短处之后，最有力的结论就不言而喻了。




When both of its advantages and disadvantages are carefully compared, the most striking conclusion is self-evident.







从以上所讨论的来看，我们可以得出以下结论……




From the above discussion, we may arrive at the conclusion that……







就个人而言，我站在前者/后者的观点这一边。Personally, I side with the former/latter opinion.







最后，我想用一句古话来结束我的文章。




Finally, I would like to quote an old saying to conclude my essay.







不仅仅是我们自己，更是为了我们的后代，政府和普通公民应该联合起来，使这个世界变得更美好。




Both governments and ordinary citizens should join hands to make our world a better place, not only for ourselves, but also for future generations.