峰哥雅思托福：2014年11月13日雅思写作机经解析(2)

峰哥雅思托福：2014年11月13日雅思写作机经解析（2）

Research shows that overeating can be just as harmful as smoking. Thus,

the advertising of certain food products should be banned, as cigarette is

banned in many countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

本次考察的是生活话题（贪吃+广告）。难度适中。如同意，则要论证贪吃的危害，以

及广告对于贪吃的诱导性，对于消费者的误导性。如不同意，则要突出广告对于消费者

没什么坏影响（广告引领时尚，引领大众消费。。。）香烟与贪吃完全是两码事（比如，

贪吃伤害自己，而香烟却伤害周围所有人，危害更大）。

本文站在同意的立场上，采用四段式，从两个方面突出贪吃危害，结尾总结原因是因为广告的罪大恶极，所以要禁止广告！（285字）啦啦啦。。。

Traditionally, people concern much about the damage smoking bring to us. However, a research proved that overeating as a bad habit do as much harm as smoking do to our health. Someone, then, suggested the government to ban advertising about certain

food products just as the restraint on tobacco products. I think this advice is very effective in the campaign against overeating and the following are the reasons why I

agree with that.

Overeating increases the chance people get various kinds of devastating diseases, such as stomach cancer, diabetes, hypertension, etc. An alarming fact is that the bad eating habit is not only damaging the older generation’s health, but also affect the younger generation. Reports say that diabetes, which was considered as the old people’s diseases are undermining many children’s health.

峰哥雅思托福：2014年11月13日雅思写作机经解析（2）

Additionally, people with the overeating habit are easily to get overweight, which is

believed as a big threat to our health and a disaster to those women who dream of

keeping a nice figure. What makes things worse is that many people are losing confidence in losing weight. Keeping diet or doing sports are becoming some kind of

mission impossible. No matter how clear they understand the harm overeating brings

to them, they just can not help to buy too much certain kind of food, even junk food, regardless of the spending and real necessity.

This lies in the fact that, in order to stimulate the customers’purchasing desire,

manufacturers or merchants tend to beautify and exaggerate their products in the advertisements and cheat the customers. So if advertising on certain food be banned,

the customers will never be misled and certain food consumption shall be minimized.