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2023-2024学年人教版中考英语(写作)书面表达主题分类训练10篇-西方文化-解析版

2023-2024学年初中书面表达主题分类训练10篇-西方文化1. (2023·广东省广州市·模拟题)请根据以下图片及关键词，用英语讲述《丑小鸭》这个童话故事。

要求：1.80词左右；可适当发挥；2.故事内容合理、完整；句子及篇章结构准确、连贯；3.不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

It was a long time before Mother Duck's last egg broke.When Ugly Duckling was born，____________【答案】It was a long time before Mother Duck's last egg broke.When Ugly Duckling was born，he looked very different from his brothers and sisters.He was much bigger than them and he was grey. 【高分句型一】Because he was so different，all the ducks hated him and bit him.Ugly Duckling wanted to play games with them，but they pushed him away from their games. 【高分句型二】He became so unhappy that he cried sadly and left the lake.As time went by，Ugly Duckling grew bigger and he was no longer a terrible grey thing that nobody liked.His neck grew long and his body turned white.He became a swan.【解析】【高分句型一】He was much bigger than them and he was grey.他比他们大得多，头发灰白。

人教版中考英语书面表达议论文结构练习题50题含答案解析

人教版中考英语书面表达议论文结构练习题50题含答案解析1. Many people think that environmental protection is very important. Which of the following can be the best topic sentence for an argumentative essay on this?A. There are many beautiful sceneries in the worldB. Environmental problems are too difficult to solveC. Everyone should take actions to protect the environmentD. Some people don't care about the environment答案：C。

解析：议论文的主题句应明确表达论点。

A选项描述世界上有很多美景，与环保的论点无关；B选项强调环保问题难以解决，不是一个积极的论点；D选项只是陈述部分人的态度，不能作为主题句。

C选项提出每个人都应该采取行动保护环境，明确且积极地表达了论点，适合作为议论文关于环保主题的主题句。

2. Regarding education equality, which statement can best serve as a supporting point in an argumentative essay?A. Some schools have better facilitiesB. All students should have equal access to educational resourcesC. Teachers in different schools have different teaching levelsD. There are more students in urban areas答案：B。

【英语】中考英语书面表达练习题

【英语】中考英语书面表达练习题一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1．亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班的学生。

请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。

提示：1.个人基本情况介绍2.校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。

3.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。

要求：1. 文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。

2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。

【答案】My junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together.I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。

中考英语书面表达热点话题练习题50题(带答案)

中考英语书面表达热点话题练习题50题(带答案)1. 请以“Protecting the Environment”（保护环境）为题写一篇短文。

写作要点：环境问题的现状；保护环境的重要性；我们可以采取的行动。

提示词：pollution, importance, recycle, save energy答案：保护环境是当今社会面临的重要问题。

我们应该采取行动来保护我们的地球。

首先，我们可以减少污染，如减少使用塑料袋和一次性餐具。

其次，我们可以回收利用资源，如纸张、塑料和玻璃。

最后，我们可以节约能源，如关灯、关水龙头等。

解析：写作思路是先阐述环境问题的现状，然后强调保护环境的重要性，最后提出我们可以采取的行动。

重点词汇有pollution（污染）、importance（重要性）、recycle（回收利用）、save energy（节约能源）。

句型有“As we all know, protecting the environment is very important.” 众所周知，保护环境非常重要。

）和“We can take some actions to protect our environment, such as reducing pollution, recycling resources and saving energy.”（我们可以采取一些行动来保护环境，如减少污染、回收利用资源和节约能源。

）2. 请以“My School Life” 我的校园生活）为题写一篇短文。

写作要点：校园生活的乐趣；学习的收获；与同学和老师的关系。

提示词：fun, knowledge, friendship, respect答案：我的校园生活充满了乐趣。

我在学校里学到了很多知识，也结交了很多朋友。

我和老师之间的关系也很融洽，他们尊重我们，我们也尊重他们。

解析：写作思路是先描述校园生活的乐趣，然后讲述学习的收获，最后强调与同学和老师的关系。

(英语)中考英语总复习--英语书面表达含解析

（英语）中考英语总复习--英语书面表达含解析一、英语书面表达1．书面表达难忘的初中生活即将结束。

你们班计划举行“告别初中生活”的主题班会。

假如你是班长，根据以下提示，用英语写一则通知。

要点如下：1. 时间：6月26日下午3:00.2. 地点:六楼会议室3. 活动内容：1）对老师用话语表达谢意；2）与同学交流自己的将来的梦想；3）师生合影，互赠留言等等。

参考词汇：look back at , say goodbye to, express thanks to , talk about, take photos..备注：词数100左右，通知开头已拟好，不计入总数。

Boys and girls,The wonderful middle school life will go to the end._______________________【答案】Boys and girls,The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to keep the happy times in our hearts for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, we may give our wishes to each other.Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如In order to，look back at，be going to，have a class meeting，say goodbye to，talk about，the dreams of，take some photos，in the end，each other，be late等。

2023-2024学年人教版中考英语(写作)书面表达主题分类训练10篇-兴趣爱好-解析版

2023-2024学年初中书面表达主题分类训练10篇-兴趣爱好1. (2023·全国·历年真题)艺术充满魅力，艺术课使校园生活丰富多彩。

你校英文周刊以"My favourite art course为题向同学们征稿。

请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：（1）学校开设的艺术课（如音乐、绘画、舞蹈、书法、戏剧等）；（2）你最喜欢的一门艺术课及其开课情况（如上课时间、活动等）；（3）喜欢的理由。

注意：（4）词数为80左右；（5）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（6）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；（7）短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：art course （艺术课），painting（n.绘画），calligraphy（n.书法），drama（n.戏剧）My favourite art courseArt courses are important at school【答案】My favourite art courseArt courses are important at school.Our school offers many art courses，such as music，painting，dance，calligraphy，drama and so on. （学校开设的艺术课）I like art very much，especially dance.We have a dance class every Friday.We have a class in the dance classroom. （最喜欢的一门艺术课及其开课情况）There aremany of my classmates and friends in the classroom.We mainly study folk dance and Latin dance.By learning dance，I not only strengthened my physique，but also made a lot of friends.【高分句型一】I hope to be a dancer in the future.（喜欢的理由）I hope my dream will come true.【高分句型二】【解析】【高分句型一】By learning dance，I not only strengthened my physique，but also made a lot of friends.通过学习舞蹈，我不仅增强了体质，而且结交了很多朋友。

人教版英语专题训练中考英语书面表达(word)1

人教版英语专题训练中考英语书面表达（word）1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1．书面表达假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。

请你根据以下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。

写作要点：1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（physical test）做准备。

2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况：（1）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。

（2）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，没时间。

（3）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。

3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。

写作要求：1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。

2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。

4. 至少80词。

2023-2024学年人教版中考英语(写作)书面表达主题分类训练10篇-节假日活动-解析版

2023-2024学年初中书面表达主题分类训练10篇-节假日活动1. (2023·浙江省宁波市·期末考试)端午节（The Dragon Boat Festival）是我们中国的传统节日。

请根据表格信息的提示，以The Dragon Boat Festival为题写一篇短文，叙述今年端午节的活动以及你对这些活动的感受。

要求：（1）短文内容必须包含所给要点，并适当发挥；（2）语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范；（3）文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名；（4）词数80左右。

开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

参考词汇：农历lunar calendar，传统的traditional时间活动感受早上看龙舟赛……下午包粽子……晚上聚餐，讲屈原的故事……The Dragon Boat Festival The Dragon Boat Festival is on May 5th in the lunar calendar._______【答案】The Dragon Boat Festival The Dragon Boat Festival is on May 5th in the lunar calendar.The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival in our country.I'll never forget this year's Dragon Boat Festival.I had a goodtime on vacation. 【高分句型一】I did a lot of interesting things.I helped my mother make rice dumplings in the afternoon.It was difficult but fun. （包粽子）Then I had a big dinner with my family.It was a happy time to be with my family.My parents told me the story of Qu Yuan.I learned a lot about Chinese history and culture.（聚餐，讲屈原的故事）One of the most exciting things was watching the dragon boat races.People did these activities in order to let the old and young remember poet Qu Yuan.These activities not only carry forward the traditional Chinese culture，but also bring people the joy of life.（看龙舟赛）In my opinion，I think we should hold more activities to celebrate the Chinese traditional festival. 【高分句型二】Festivals play an important part in Chinese culture.It is our duty to respect the traditions and make Chinese culture known to the world.【解析】【高分句型一】I had a good time on vacation.我假期过得很愉快。

中考英语历年书面表达真题练习及答案

中考英语历年书面表达真题练习及答案1. 假设你是李华，你们学校最近举办了一次英语演讲比赛。

请你根据以下图画写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对这次比赛的感受，并简单介绍一下你的演讲内容。

答案：Last week, our school held an English speech contest. I was really excited to take part in it. In my speech, I talked about the importance of protecting the environment.I started my speech by showing a picture of a polluted river. I explained how human activities such as littering and factory waste have damaged the environment and caused various problems. Then, I introduced some practical ways to protect the environment, such as reducing the use of plastic bags, recycling waste, and planting more trees. I also shared some examples of successful environmental initiatives around the world.During the contest, I was impressed by the speeches of other contestants. They talked about different topics, such as the benefits of reading, the impact of technology on our lives, and the importance of friendship. It was amazing to see how confident and fluent they were in English.Although I didn't win the first prize, I felt proud of myself for participating. It was a valuable experience that helped improve my English speaking skills and boost my confidence. I also realized that we all have a responsibility to protect the environment and make the world a better place.2. 假如你是李华，你的美国好友Tony 假期要来你所在城市。

2020-2021年中考英语书面表达经典题型带答案

2020-2021年中考英语书面表达经典题型带答案一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1．你有没有因为没能好好管理时间而影响了学习的经历?请你写一篇文章谈谈这件事及你的看法。

内容包括：1.你没完成学习任务的经历（事情，原因及后果）；2.针对如何管理好时间给出几点建议。

作文要求：1.短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on mystudy.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________【答案】Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset.How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如make good use of，last weekend，how to do，play a game，a kind of，spent more time on，forget to do，in the end，be angry with，be going to do，on the paper，put up等。

2024年江苏地区中考英语真题分类汇编-书面表达(含参考范文+解析)

2024年江苏地区中考英语真题分类汇编-书面表达学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 一、书面表达1．（2023·江苏淮安·统考中考真题）假如你是李华，你们学校的英语社团将开展以“体育锻炼，健康你我”为主题的英语演讲比赛。

请以“Better Exercise, Better Life”为题，根据以下要点，写一篇英语演讲稿。

我的日常锻炼（1）最喜欢的锻炼方式（2）锻炼时长（3）带来益处（不少于两点)给同学的建议（1）校内锻炼方式（不少于两点）（2）校外锻炼方式（不少于两点）号召（1）希望大家多锻炼（2）…参考词汇：做早操do morning exercises上体育课have PE lessons压力减轻feel less stressed合理锻炼exercise properly注意：（1）词数在80—100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数；（2）可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；（3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

Better Exercise, Better LifeDear classmates,I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “Better Exercise, Better Life”._______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening. 2．（2023·江苏盐城·统考中考真题）在人生的旅程中，亲人、朋友、老师、书籍等陪伴我们同行，助力我们成长。

2022中考《书面表达》(专项训练题集附答案)

专题07 书面表达（解析版）目录一、百色二、北部湾三、贵港四、桂林五、柳州六、梧州七、玉林一、百色61．假设你是李华，今年15岁，是建华中学一名九年级学生，请以“My Daily Life”为题写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍你的日常生活及感受。

要求：1. 语气通顺，语法正确，书写工整，卷面整洁；2. 词数80左右；3. 文中不能出现“李华”和“建华中学”以外的其它人名或校名、地名。

My Daily Life____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________61．例文My Daily LifeI get up at six every day. I dress myself quickly and have breakfast at half past six. After breakfast I go to school.I have four lessons in the morning and three in the afternoon. I study hard and always help my classmates with their lessons. I have lunch at school. School is over at five. After supper I read newspapers or watch TV for half an hour. I prepare my lessons between half past seven and nine. I go to bed at nine. I feel fulfilled.The above is a brief account of my daily life on weekdays. There is no school on Sundays. I usually review my lessons in the morning and call on some friends to go to see a film in the afternoon. I enjoy myself on Sundays.【解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文。

【英语】中考英语书面表达点+例题-全面解析(word)1

【英语】中考英语书面表达点+例题-全面解析（word）1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1．亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班的学生。

请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。

3.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。

要求：1. 文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。

2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。

玉溪市书面表达训练中考英语专项训练含答案解析

玉溪市书面表达训练中考英语专项训练含答案解析一、中考英语书面表达训练1．同学们，初中生活即将结束，本次考试后，盼望已久的假期就要到来！请你根据以下提示，制定出度假计划，可以结合自己的实际发挥。

写作内容：1.和家长/同学一起旅游，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。

2.参加志愿活动，帮家长做家务。

3.读自己喜欢的书。

4.远离危险的地方。

写作要求：1.80 词左右，开头部分已给出，但不计入规定字数。

2.内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。

3.不得出现自己的校名和自己的姓名等个人信息。

My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.【答案】My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous places.Besides, I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.【解析】试题分析：短文要制定出度假计划，文章需要用第一人称“I”进行书写，不可使用“we/ you”等其他人称。

2024中考英语真题大分类题型六书面表达类型五、活动打算类类型六、人物介绍类 (含答案)

2024中考英语真题大分类题型六书面表达类型五、活动打算类类型六、人物介绍类类型五活动打算类第1篇(2023宁夏)暑假临近，你有什么计划吗？你校英语社团正在开展以“My Summer Vacation Plan”为主题的征文活动。

请根据思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的暑假计划。

要求：1. 文中须包含思维导图中的所有信息；2. 补充至少两条计划；3. 合理增加细节，以使行文连贯。

注意：1. 词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

提示词语：take part in参加social practice activities社会实践活动My Summer Vacation PlanThe__summer__vacation__is__coming._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第2篇(2023武汉)假如你是李欣，你与Bob叔叔及其家人约定了一起去北京旅行。

请你给Bob叔叔写一封英文电子邮件，告知你的旅行安排。

内容要点如下：1. 6月30日下午2：00机场见；2. 酒店已预订好，直接前往；3. 第二天观看升旗仪式；4. 游长城，吃北京烤鸭；5. 补充一两点与旅行有关的信息或想法。

中考英语书面表达(命题作文、短文填空)专题训练含参考答案-精选5份

中考英语书面表达（命题作文、短文填空）专题训练50题含答案一、2022年中考真题1．假如你是Rickey，你发明的“会飞的房子”在学校科技节中获奖，被推荐参加国际青少年科技展览。

请根据以下内容提示，用英语介绍你的发明。

要求：80词左右，给出部分不计入总词数，可适当发挥。

提示：1）外观：四个轮子，两只翅膀；2）特点：可以高速飞行，可在短时间内到达一个较远的地方；声音控制，非常方便；使用太阳能环保；3）功能：节省大量空间……（至少添加一项）My inventionHello, everyone, my name is Ricky. Now let me introduce my invention—a flying house.二、2021年中考真题2．假如你的朋友在外宾大街新开了一家Meet All水饺馆，请你根据下面表格中的提示给这家水饺馆写一则广告，向前来就餐的外国朋友介绍一下Meet All水饺馆。

要求：1）内容须包括所有要点提示，可适当发挥;2）词数70左右，开头已给出,不计入总词数。

Meet All House of DumplingsWelcome to Meet All House of Dumplings.三、变式练习3．根据表格提示信息描述一下你的小宠物。

My new pet4．Write at least 60 words about the topic "A thank-you letter to ▲ ".（以“给……的一封感谢信”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。

信件格式已给，标点符号不占格。

）在日常的生活与学习中有许多人曾经帮助或鼓励过我们，令我们时常心存感激。

请选择一个对象写一封感谢信，并结合你们之间的真实经历谈一谈你为何要感谢他/她，说一说你当时的感受以及此时此刻想对他/她说的话。

（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。

(英语)中考英语英语书面表达汇编题20套(带答案)及解析

（英语）中考英语英语书面表达汇编题20套(带答案)及解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，在你的帮助下，交换生Tom在中文演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。

请你给他写一封祝贺信，表达你的真诚祝贺，回忆他比赛时的表现，以及你从他身上学到了什么。

提示词语：wm，priZP,，speech competition，pronounce，practlce提示问题：Why do you congratulate Tom?What made him successfulin the competition?What can you leam from him?【答案】Dear Tom,I am very happy to know that you won the first prize in the Chinese speech competition, so I’m writing to congratulate you on your wonderful performance.You did a good job in the Chinese speech competition. You pronounced really well during your speech and your voice was beautiful. You spoke so fluently that we all felt proud of you. What’s more, we were surprised at your rich and meaningful contents.As your best friend, I know you tried your best for the competition. You kept practicing your speech every day in order to make it better. I know it is important to keep on trying and never to give up. I hope I can be successful like you one day in the future.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。

上海高东中学书面表达训练中考英语专项训练含答案解析

上海高东中学书面表达训练中考英语专项训练含答案解析一、中考英语书面表达训练1．现在智能手机（smartphone）越来越普及，很多中学生都有智能手机。

请你根据下面的提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，谈一谈你对智能手机的看法，可适当发挥。

提示：1、在生活中你用智能手机做什么？2、智能手机对你的生活产生了怎样的影响？3、你对中学生使用智能手机有什么看法？_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________【答案】例文：The smartphone is becoming more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two sides.Sometimes I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams.So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.【解析】【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，要求根据内容提示，写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对智能手机的看法。

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（英语）中考英语书面表达专题训练答案含解析一、英语书面表达1．临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是 Moonlight 小组的组长，请根据下面表格中的信息和提示，为你的组员 Tommy 进行综合素质的评价，写一份素质报告．要求：1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯；2、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3、词数：100 词左右；4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good e ffect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn’t have enough sleep.I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】这篇作文要求我们按照表格里的内容介绍一下Tommy的情况，为Tommy写一篇综合素质的评价报告。

在表格中有非常详细的关于Tommy各方面的内容，我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容有条理的表达出来。

表格中涉及的内容较多，写作时要注意表达的条理性。

这篇作文应主要使用第三人称来写。

在最后要给Tommy提一些建议，这一部分应该用第一人称。

同时注意表达的准确性，尤其是表格中的第五项和第六项内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。

这篇作文内容完整，包含了表格中的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。

表达准确，注意了被动形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。

写作时注意了条理性，使文章具有层次感，条理清楚。

短文注意到了长短句的结合，并恰当的使用了一些连词，使文章表达的连贯。

如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year.等。

2．“inspire” 一词的汉语解释是“激励；鼓舞；赋予灵感；或启发思考”等。

请以“The person who inspired me”为题写一篇不少于 80 词的短文，向校报的英语园地投稿。

要点： 1. What kind of person is he/ she？2. How did he/ she inspire you？要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

2. 语言流畅，字迹清楚。

【答案】The person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warm-hearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang. He got the first prize in last year's ping-pang competition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以The person who inspired me为题，介绍一个曾经激励过你的人。

题目中用问题的形式给予了提示，审题可知，短文应包括两个部分的内容：首先介绍这个激励过你的人是谁，他是怎样的一个人；然后介绍他是如何激励你的。

学生们可以这两个问题为提纲，发挥想象力，充实细节信息，组织语言，连贯成文。

短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主来叙述，人称是第三人称和第一人称，注意谓语动词形式的变化。

写作时应注意：首先要符合题目要求，包括题目中要求的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，可以适当发挥，注意上下文的衔接。

其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要按照汉语思维逐词翻译。

应该从句子的整体结构入手，写完整的句子。

可以简单句结构为主，辅以并列句、复合句。

为提升文章档次，应使用高级词汇以及复杂结构。

同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了一个曾经激励过自己的人。

短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，层次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介绍了这个人是谁，第二段描写了这个人身上的品质以及对自己的应选；最后一段结尾。

各部分内容安排合理，主次分明。

其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，文章以第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述，主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，注意了第三人称单数形式以及过去式形式的变化，语法规范。

用词准确，语言得体，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。

短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如But the person who inspired me most,I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.等等。

3．Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 请你以“Learn to Smile”为题，根据下表所列的要点写一篇100词左右的文章（文章开头已给出）。

学会对自己微笑1、面对困难与烦恼学会微笑（考试失利、被别人误解等）。

2、使你自信，击败你的人有时就是你自己。

3、有益于身心健康。

学会对他人微笑1、便于与他人之间的交流。

2、给别人带来快乐,自己也快乐。

微笑是一种语言人人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离。

1、参考词汇：对某人微笑 smile at sb. 误解 misunderstand2、短文必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。

Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.”Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy.Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well.In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.【解析】这是一篇表格式的作文，要点是一表格的形式出现，首先要研究表格，找出需要表达的要点，然后加以整合，也可以适当增加使意思更连贯，但要点一定要全，不能漏掉。