2014 2018年高考全国卷英语作文及参考翻译
高考英语作文范文与翻译
高考英语作文文汇总2010年全国卷I【作文题目】假设你是育才中学学生会主席华。
你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest)一封信。
优秀文:Dear Ms. Smith,I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university. I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic "Man and Nature". We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.I am looking forward to your reply.With best wishes,Li Hua译文:我是与您的大学距离很近的育才中学学生会主席华。
我在写信邀请您成为6月15日在我们学校举行的英语演讲比赛的法官。
比赛将于2:00 pm开始,持续约三个小时。
十名学生将就给定的主题“人与自然”发表演讲。
如果方便的话,我们希望您接受我们的邀请。
如有任何疑问,请致电44876655与我联系。
期待您的回复。
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2014年高考满分作文-五年高考(2014-2018年)英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累(原卷版)
2021年(高|考)英语总分值作文1.2021年新课标全国卷I假定你是李华,方案暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周.下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容) .注意:1.词数100左右.2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________2.2021年新课标全国卷II1.家庭;2.工作;3.业余生活.注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;你写好.I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________3.2021重庆卷(1 )请结合材料,按要求用英文写作."My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry."要求:(1)就此材料发表你的看法;(2)紧扣材料,有明确的观点;(3)词数不少于60 .____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________4.2021年浙江卷学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见.假设你是李越,你认为学校图书馆最||需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books) .请你用英语给图书馆||王老师写一封100 -120个词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由.注意:信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数) .Dear Mr. Wang,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Yue5.2021年天津卷假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津,得知美国学生Chris作为交换生,下学期将到你班学习.请你根据以下提示,给他写封邮件:(1)表示欢迎;(2)介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如气候、饮食等);(3)介绍本班情况;(4)希望Chris做哪些事情,以增进中美学生间的了解和友谊.注意:(1)请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息;(2)可适当参加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)词数不少于100;开头已给出,不计入总词数.参考词汇:交换生exchange studentDear Chris,I'm Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Jin6.2021年北京卷第|一节(15分)你给英国笔友Chris写一封信,内容包括:1. 你们原方案7月份一同去云南旅游;2. 由于脚部受伤,你无法按原方案前往;3. 表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份.注意:1. 词数不少于50 .2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总次数.Dear Chris,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Joe第二节假设你是红星中学高三(1 )班的学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,为校刊"英语园地〞写一篇短文,记述你和同学们向学校提建议,解决自行车存放问题的过程.注意:1. 词数不少于60 .2. 短文的开头已给出,不计入总字数.There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________7.2021年安徽卷为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了"HEART -TO -HEART〞专栏.假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie ,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信.信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响 .请用英文给该同学写一封回信.内容要点如下:1.表示理解并给予抚慰;2.提出建议并说明理由.注意:1.词数120左右;2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数.________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____Yours,Jamie8.2021年陕西卷假定你是中学生李华.美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动.请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词.写作要点:1.表示对客人的欢迎;2.介绍此项活动(如活动目的、内容等);3.表达对客人的祝愿.写作要求:1.词数不少于100;2.称呼已经给出,请写欢迎词正文;3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称.Dear American guests,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________9.2021年福建卷如何理解"成功" ,不同的人有不同的看法. 请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation) ,按要求用英语写一篇短文."Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm."-Sir Winston Churchill 内容要求:1.你对该引语的理解;2.你的相关经历;3.恰当的结尾.注意:1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息;3.词数:120左右.This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________10.2021年四川卷假设你是李夏,你的美国笔友Sam来信关心你参加(高|考)的情况,请根据以下要点回信告知.1.考试日期与科目;2.考试准备情况;3.考试时的状态;4.对试题的感受;5.可能的考试结果.注意:1.词数120左右;2.开头语和结尾语已为你写好;3.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;4.文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称.参考词汇:(高|考)college entrance examinationDear Sam,Thank you for your.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes!Yours,Li Xia11.2021年湖北卷请根据以下提示,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇短文.Small things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.注意:①无须写标题;②除诗歌外,文体不限;③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例;④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;⑤词数不少于120 ,如引用提示语那么不计入总词数 .____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________12.2021年湖南卷学校正在组织科技创新大赛,你想为日常生活中某件物品(如钢笔、书包、鞋子……)设计添加新功能来参赛.请以"My Magic "为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你的创意.内容:1. 说明设计理由;2.介绍新功能.注意:1.词数不少于120个;2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文赏读】My Magic ShoesAs is known to us all, shoes play an important role in our life, for it can protect our feet from being hurt. However, as a boy who has athlete's foot, I am looking forward to inventing a pair of shoes helping my feet keepdry and me walk conveniently. Therefore, this new kind of shoes has come into being recently.To keep the feet dr y and comfortable, this new kind of shoes is equipped with a micro -fan. When you walk, a small machine changes the energy produced by walking into electric energy and stores it. If you stop walking, the micro -fan can work immediately to dry your feet. However, what amazes you most is the foll owing new function. There is a special red button in each of the shoes. If the road you are walking is flat, you can press the red button, which helps your shoes change into a roller skate with two rollers appearing beneath your shoes, and you can reach your destination quickly. On arriving at your destination, press the red button again and the rollers will return to your shoes, so you can walk normally like others.That's my magic shoes. Do you like it or would you like to have a try?13.2021年江西卷假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华,母校将为高一新生举办主题为"What to learn in senior high school?"的英语沙龙活动,特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会.请根据以下提纲准备一份英语发言稿. :方法、习惯等;:真诚、友善等;:考生自拟.注意:;2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you!14.2021年山东卷15.2021年辽宁卷假定你是学生会主席李华 .学校将举办一次以"校园生活·创意无限"(Innovations on Campus)为主题的创意作品展评活动.请你根据以以下列图示,以短文形式用英语写一份书面通知.注意:;,以使行文连贯;,不计入总词数.参考词汇:校园campus创意作品innovation颁奖prize-givingNoticeAn exciting event "Innovations on Campus" is around the corner.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Come on, everybody! It's your show time.Student Union2021年(高|考)英语总分值作文1.2021年新课标全国卷I假定你是李华,方案暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周.下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容) .注意:100左右.2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.3.参考词汇:住宿- accommodation____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【写作指导】(一)仔细审题理思路看到英语作文试题后,不要急于往答题卷上书写,应该先对试题所提供的材料及要求进行仔细地审读,理清写作思路,明确写作任务.在审题时,要审清写作文体,审清动词时态,审清使用的人称,审清写作要点及具体的写作要求等.只有进行了充分地试题,才可能有的放矢,才可能圆满地完成写作任务.李华方案暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周,看到广告后自己感觉有一些问题广告里不清楚,想要给校方写信咨询有关事项,考生要清楚这是一封信,要符合信的格式.这是考生非常熟悉的一个应用文文体.考生要注意动词时态的变化,以一般现在时为主,兼有将来时,比方:功课什么时间开始?这是将来的事情.注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅.使用一些高级||句型和词汇来提高作文档次.(二)精心布局谋好篇在经过仔细审题之后,考生还需要进一步对所要写的作文进行总体精心设计,包括需要涵盖几方面的内容要点,需要分成几个段落来写,需要使用哪些句型等.有些考生可能会感觉这样做没有必要,感觉这样做浪费时间.其实不然,这一环节是为下一步写好作文奠定坚实的根底.(三)搭好框架信心足如果不是因为时间问题,考生最||好先在草稿纸上草拟一个写作小提纲,搭好写作的整体框架,列出主要的要点提纲,列出需要使用的主要词汇、短语、句型等,这样再往答题卷上书写时,就会信心十足,就会条理更加清晰.(四)扩展提纲连成文紧接着就是对写作提纲进行充实扩展,在答题纸上进行书写.写作时应注意要点的完整性,上下文的连贯性,词汇及句式的多样性,语言的准确性.而且需要注意内容充实,积极健康,逻辑清晰,语言标准,交际得体,建议词数保持在80至||120之间.应尽可能运用比较熟悉的词汇、短语和句型,尽量变换句式,在有把握的情况下,才可使用一些使短文能够增色的较高级||的词汇、短语或者句式.(五)过渡词语文紧凑考生在写作时,可在文中穿插一些过渡性词汇、短语或句型,这样会使短文过渡自然,衔接紧密,行文紧凑.例如:表示困果关系- -therefore ,so ,hence ,thus ,accordingly ,consequently ,as a result表示举例示范- -for example ,in other words ,for instance ,that is ,that is to say表示总结概括- -in summary ,to sum up ,in brief ,in short ,on the whole ,in a word ,all in all ,in conclusion ,as has been noted ,on the whole表示递进过渡- -again ,also ,worsestill ,obviously ,then ,besides ,further ,furthermore ,moreover ,next ,similarly ,after a while ,at the same time ,in addition ,meanwhile, suddenly, later, soon, in the same way, what ,s more表示转折让步- -unfortunately ,though/ although ,anyway ,but ,howeve r, otherwise ,still ,yet ,after all ,in spite of ,on the contrary ,on the other hand ,in any case ,whatever(六)卷面整洁悦人目英语作文毕竟是一项主观性试题,考生的作文分数除了受写作水平影响以外,还受阅卷老师的主观评价影响.干净整洁的卷面,漂亮工整的字体,会使人赏心悦目,会使阅卷老师眼前一亮,从而给阅卷老师留下非常好的印象,无疑会使作文增色不少.这样的英语作文相对来说,分数会明显高于写作水平相当,但是卷面比较差的考生.因此,在写作时,书写与卷面是考生应该留意的一个重要方面,需要做到英语字母书写标准,工整清晰,大小适中,卷面整洁,忌潦草凌乱,乱涂乱改,卷面一塌糊涂,令阅卷老师头痛不已.(七)耐心复查把好关作文写完后,并不是完事大吉了,考生还需要对自己的作文进行从头至||尾耐心地复查,把好写作的最||后一道关.这是写作中不可缺少的一个重要环节.在复查的过程中,考生需要查看是否由于粗心而出现了一些低级||错误,如单复数、拼写、搭配、时态、标点符号等.对于查找出来的错误,切忌乱涂乱改,可以按照短文改错的纠错方法在原文上进行单词的添加、删除或者修改.【总分值范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua 【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语,增加了文章的色彩,如:plan to do sth ;would like to do sth; pay for; look forward to doing/sth等;用了一些过渡词如:First ,Besides等,使文章过渡自然;用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化不再单一.如:I ,d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.并且wish后用了虚拟语气,增加了文章的亮点.2.2021年新课标全国卷II一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是"十年后的我" .请根据以下要点和你的畅想完成短文.1.家庭;2.工作;3.业余生活.注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好.I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】这是一篇典型的提纲式半开放书面表达.主题是"十年后的我〞.在写作时要注意从家庭、工作和业余生活三方面要点着手,因为提示信息较少,所以要充分发挥想象,增加适当的细节以使行文连贯,充实内容.比方可以联想到的内容有健身,度假,聚会等等.在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词或者插入语以使文章层次清楚,条理清晰.还要正确使用多种句式结构和高级||亮点词汇来提高文章的档次,如定语从句,宾语从句和状语从句等.此外,因为是畅想未来,所以要用一般将来时.【总分值范文】【亮点点击】本篇范文短小精悍,要点全面,语言简练,时态人称准确,很好的完成了写作任务.在文章开头作者紧扣题目,提出自己对未来的畅想,然后从生活,工作,家庭三个方面描述了自己十年后的生活.在文中作者用到了短语In my free time , In a word , such as等介词短语,防止了文章句式的单一.此外,还用到了宾语从句in whatever I do、I will work in a computer company as a program designer等,这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点.3.2021重庆卷(1 )请结合材料,按要求用英文写作."My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry."要求:(1)就此材料发表你的看法;(2)紧扣材料,有明确的观点;(3)词数不少于60 .____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【总分值范文】When I hear that someone says, "My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry." I feel rather annoyed and surprised. What he says suggests that he cares little about others' pain or trouble, even if they're his friends. Moreover, it seems that he always thinks more of himself than of others.I argue that every one of us should try our best to help those in need. Then we can have someone to turn to when in trouble. Otherwise we'll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later. That is what the saying goes: "A friend in need is a friend indeed." Only when you learn to give can you expect to receive.(2 )青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏,邀请大家分享心目中的"最||好礼物" .她认为,礼物贵在心意,应为之付出时间和精力.假设你是李华,请用英文发帖,内容应包括:●赞同Susan的看法●你收到或送出的最||好礼物是什么●该礼物的意义●期待大家回复注意:(1)词数不少于80;(2)符合语言标准;(3)开头已给出(不计入总词数) .I am a high school student from China.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【总分值范文】I am a high school student from China. I quite agree with you that gifts should be worth time and energy if you want to send them to someone you love. It does't matter whether it is expensive or not. What really matters is whether it comes from your inner heart.Now, it is still hanging on the wall of my bedroom. Whenever I look at it, I couldn't help thinking of my friend. However far away we are, we feel close to each other. So I think a gift full of love and effort is a true and most valuable one.4.2021年浙江卷学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见.假设你是李越,你认为学校图书馆最||需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books) .请你用英语给图书馆||王老师写一封100 -120个词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由.注意:信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数) .Dear Mr. Wang,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Yue 【写作指导】根据提示你用英语给图书馆||王老师写一封100 -120词的信,可知这里应该是考生比较熟悉的书信格式.学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见.先写这个内容来引出你要提出的建议.在写推荐的两类书时,要写出为什么要推荐这些书.【总分值范文】Dear Mr. Wang,Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I'd like to give some suggestions.What we need most are popular science bo oks. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.Yours sincerely,Li Yue 【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式增加了文章的色彩,如:would like to do;help sb do sth;not only...but also;encourage sb to do sth;That is why…等,还用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化,如:What we need most are popular science books这里what引导的主语从句;That is why I recommend another category of books:这里why引导的表语从句;I ,ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.这里是if引导的条件状语从句 .5.2021年天津卷假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津,得知美国学生Chris作为交换生,下学期将到你班学习.请你根据以下提示,给他写封邮件:(1)表示欢迎;(2)介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如气候、饮食等);(3)介绍本班情况;(4)希望Chris做哪些事情,以增进中美学生间的了解和友谊.注意:(1)请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息;(2)可适当参加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)词数不少于100;开头已给出,不计入总词数.参考词汇:交换生exchange studentDear Chris,I'm Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________Li Jin 【写作指导】本试题只给了要写的信的大致内容,而具体的细节需要考生自己发挥,因此它是一篇半开放式作文.私人信件一般分为以下几局部:一是说明知道对方的情况后的态度,如果是好的事情,一般用"I'm /feel glad to hear that...";如果是不好的事情,那么用"I'm sorry to hear that ..." ,然后就是对朋友的抚慰.二是谈一谈自己周围的情况.三是鼓励朋友更加努力以获得更大成就或者提出一些防止不好事情发生的建议.最||后对朋友表示祝愿.【总分值范文】Dear Chris,I'm Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school as an exchange student. You're welcome to stay with us.Our class is made up of 50 lively boys and girls, who are warm and generous and ready to offer help. They are very friendly and easy to get along with. You will have a good time and get used to the life soon.Yours,Li Jin 【亮点点击】文章由三段构成,结构非常清楚、合理,使阅卷老师一目了然地了解考生想表达的内容 .文中使用了复合句,如:I'm glad to hear that...及where和who引导的非限制性定语从句.恰当地使用短语be located in,be famous for,be made up of,get along with等 .6.2021年北京卷第|一节(15分)你给英国笔友Chris写一封信,内容包括:1. 你们原方案7月份一同去云南旅游;2. 由于脚部受伤,你无法按原方案前往;3. 表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份.注意:1. 词数不少于50 .2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总次数.Dear Chris,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Joe【写作指导】应用文写作包括书信,通知和演讲稿,书信是较为常考的类型.2021年北京(高|考)英语考查的为书信中的抱歉信,学生在写抱歉信时障碍比较小,但如何写出高分作文是难点.写应用文时应保证以下内容:表达歉意Please accept my heartfelt apology.解释原因the reason why I …is that…提出建议I would appreciate it if you can allow me to …结尾Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience I caused.考生在写作中一定要注意到格式标准、语气合理,交际感强烈,否那么分数很可能会在12分以下,应用文书写不需要过长的句子,句子长度控制在两行以内,应注意行文流畅,感情真挚,多用sincerely, from the bottom of my heart, I am indeed sorry for the trouble ,使用schedule, postpone等升级||单词难度,但注意不要通篇难词.另外需要提醒的是,书信应有称呼,有结尾,假设开头结尾已给出,需要在答题纸上重新抄写一遍,否那么扣相应分数.【总分值范文】Dear Chris,How is it going?I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July.But now, because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.I'm sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand . I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Joe第二节假设你是红星中学高三(1 )班的学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,为校刊"英语园地〞写一篇短文,记述你和同学们向学校提建议,解决自行车存放问题的过程.注意:1. 词数不少于60 .2. 短文的开头已给出,不计入总字数.There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】本篇情景作文属于北京(高|考)的常规出题模式,体裁为稿件,主题是"和谐校园,人人有责〞类.从体裁和主题的角度上来说,考生并不陌生. "提建议〞主题在应用文中出现过,而且其中一些场景"讨论〞在之前的模拟考试屡次出现,自行车拥堵和提交建议也属于日常表达,还是相对容易操作的.只要各位考生关注以下四个方面即可:体裁:北京卷的情景作文主要考查两种体裁,一为"稿件〞,二为"日记〞.前者关注的是"我们做了什么事〞,所以在写作中,重点要突出事件的描写;而后者强调的是"我/我们的感受〞.另外,从时间上看,这题考的是周记,也就意味着图与图之间动作转折性大,不及日记动作衔接紧密.因此,在该题中,假设想分数比较理想的话,重点需要突出事件的描写,以及对动作时间间隔的把握.要点:情景作文的评卷原那么是每幅图的要点3分,所以考生一定要抓住图画要点,比方首||幅图的要点是"发现问题,自行车阻塞〞,第二图的要点是"讨论问题〞,第三幅图的要点是"提交建议〞,最||后一幅图的要点是"又建了一个门,不再堵塞〞.因此,对于考生的最||低要求是将这四个短语变成四句话,写在作文当中.这样的话,作文至||少从要点上来说,没有失分的地方.细节和过渡:情景作文的要点全面是不够的,细节描写也是考官在最||终给分时的一个重要考量.第|一幅图的细节是中文"存车处〞"入口〞以及李华的担忧表情;第二幅图细节在于一个同学在记录"建议〞;第三幅图的细节是钟表的时间"下午五点〞,还有中文字"校长室〞以及"我和另一个同学〞.当然,情景作文的情感描写也是细节的一局部,该题中分别有第|一幅图李华的担忧,第二幅图大家的踊跃积极,第三幅图我们提交建议时的迫不及待,第四幅图我的成就感.如果细节描写不齐全的话,有可能会减掉一定的分数.另外,良好的细节支持是行文连贯即过渡的根底,当然,过渡主要考察学生逻辑思维和过渡情景的能力,它使行文饱满流畅,这点也是将二档文和三档文区分的重要根据.句式多样:句式是否多样取决于考生平时的功夫够不够,语法和句型掌握和准确适用情况如何.这点是高分作文不可或缺的权衡因素.综上,该情景作文难度中等.要点没有偏难词汇和表达.假设要到达及格的分数,首||先保证体裁、要点没问题,不出现大的语法错误(如时态、人称) .但是假设要分数比较理想,还需要良好的细节补充衔接以使行文连贯和多样的句式应用来丰富文章表达.总之情景作文还是考察学生用英语说事的能力,需要学生平时多观察生活,积累语料.在此根底上,建议考生平时学好语法,多写多练多修改多研究范文,这样方能练就一个扎实的写作功底.【总分值范文】【亮点点击】本篇范文要点齐全,言简意赅,句子之间衔接自然.前两句开门见山地介绍了发现的问题,almost blocked两个单词的运用符合图画内容,生动形象;接着用So把第|一幅图画和第二幅图画的内容连接起来,并用"had a discussion and wrote a report"简洁地表达出了第二幅图画的要点;然后又用一个Then 把第二幅图画的内容和第三幅图画的内容自然地连接起来,用两句话概括了第三幅图画的所有内容;最||后,用Soon afterwards引出了最||后一个要点,同时文章最||后一句话也是点睛之笔,起到了总结作用.7.2021年安徽卷为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了"HEART -TO -HEART〞专栏.假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie ,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信.信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响 .请用英文给该同学写一封回信.内容要点如下:1.表示理解并给予抚慰;2.提出建议并说明理由.注意:1.词数120左右;2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数.参考词汇:temper n. 脾气,情绪Hi Worried ,I ,m sorry to know that you ,re having such a bad time at the moment.________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____Yours,Jamie 【写作指导】本文属于半开放性作文,要为你编辑Jamie的口吻回复Worried的求助信,他的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响.要注意书信的格式和特殊用词.要点:1.很遗憾听说对方有此问题.并解释每个人都可能会遇见这样的问题,所以不必担忧.只有的是要学会控制自己的脾气.2.提出建议:与信任的人进行交流,告诉别人你的困扰,释放自己的压力.同时多参加各种户外活动,和朋友多玩球类运动.保持乐观的心态.对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力.需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级||词汇和高级||句型使文章显得更有档次.【一句多译】每个人都会有过这样的一段时期,在这时情况都很糟糕,所以你不要太担忧了.(1 )The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry so much.(2 )It is true that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry so much.。
20142018高考英语全国卷I书面表达题目及参考范文汇总
2014-2018高考英语全国卷I书面表达题目及参考范文汇总本文为2014-2018高考英语全国卷I书面表达题目及参考范文汇总。
文中将参考范文中的值得借鉴的有用表达用黑体字标出,仅供参考。
研究高考真题,把握命题规律,朗读范文,有助于考生更好地把握高考英语书面表达。
2014年高考英语全国卷I书面表达题第二节书面表达(满分25分)假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。
下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇:住宿– accommodation。
One Possible VersionDear Sir / Madam,I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course. First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be host family or university dormitory?I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua2015年高考英语全国卷I书面表达题第二节书面表达(25分)假定你是李华, 你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。
历年高考英语全国卷I、II、III 作文真题及满分范文汇总
历年高考英语全国卷I、II、III 作文真题及满分范文汇总2013-2019年高考英语全国卷I、II、III作文真题及满分范文汇总2013年全国卷I高考英语满分作文:询问朋友是否可以接机的信在这封信中,作者介绍了自己的情况并请求朋友接机。
作者用简单明了的语言表达了自己的请求和感激之情。
2013年全国卷II高考英语满分作文:请朋友代买中国结作者在这篇作文中介绍了代购中国结的情况,包括价格和计算方式。
作者用清晰的语言和逻辑结构使得文章易于理解。
2014年全国卷I高考英语满分作文:请给该校写封信,询问有关情况在这篇作文中,作者写了一封给学校的信,询问有关暑期课程的情况。
作者用清晰的语言和逻辑结构使得文章易于理解。
2014年全国卷II高考英语满分作文:十年后的我在这篇作文中,作者展开了自己的家庭、工作和业余生活的想象,描述了自己十年后的生活。
作者用生动的语言和细节描写使得文章生动有趣。
2015年全国卷I高考英语满分作文:请给美国朋友XXX写信约稿在这篇作文中,作者写了一封给美国朋友XXX的信,邀请他来中国参观。
作者用清晰的语言和逻辑结构使得文章易于理解。
2015年全国卷II高考英语满分作文:邀请去外教去敬老院的信在这篇作文中,作者写了一封邀请外教去敬老院的信,告知时间和活动流程等。
作者用清晰的语言和逻辑结构使得文章易于理解。
2016年全国卷I高考英语满分作文:请求外教修改申请书和简历在这篇作文中,作者请求外教修改自己的申请书和简历。
作者用清晰的语言和逻辑结构使得文章易于理解。
2016年全国卷II高考英语满分作文:请求朋友XXX提供摄影作品在这篇作文中,作者请求朋友XXX提供自己需要的摄影作品。
作者用清晰的语言和逻辑结构使得文章易于理解。
2016年全国卷III高考英语满分作文:道歉信(告知朋友Bob不能赴约)在这篇作文中,作者写了一封道歉信,告知朋友XXX自己不能赴约的情况。
作者用简单明了的语言表达了自己的歉意和感激之情。
2014-2018高考英语全国卷 II书面表达题目及参考范文汇总
2014-2018高考英语全国卷II书面表达题目及参考范文汇总本文为2014-2018高考英语全国卷II书面表达题目及参考范文汇总。
文中将参考范文中的值得借鉴的有用表达用黑体字标出,仅供参考。
研究高考真题,把握命题规律,朗读范文,有助于考生更好地把握高考英语书面表达。
2014全国卷II【作文题目】一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。
请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文。
1.家庭;2.工作;3.业余生活。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好。
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I’ll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I’ll do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I’ll continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I’ll travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.2015年全国卷II假如你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。
2018高考英语作文真题及满分范文全汇总
2018高考英语作文真题及满分范文全汇总高考英语作文真题及满分范文全汇总2018【2018 •全国I卷】将去中国朋友家做客,Terry假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友发邮件向你询问有关习俗。
请你回复邮件,内容包括:到达时间;1.合适的礼物;2.餐桌礼仪。
3.左右;1001.词数可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.2017 全国1In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.2016 全国1My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.2015 全国1When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city ,but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming hasalready become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it .Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted Some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then- for all these years-we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste. There are somuch that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!2018 全国2When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we wouldplay card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. Theywould say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I di dn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very usefullater in my life.2017 全国2Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. Whensummer came, they will invite their students pick thevegetables!2016 全国2The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn littleabout world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman sawhim drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice tosee you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.2014 全国2My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon .We di dn’t need to do so many homework .Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities .For example , we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day .My dream school look like a big garden .There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings .We can lie on the grass for a rest , or sat by the lake listening music .The teachers here are kind and helpfully .They are not only our teachers but also our friends .2018 全国3It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.2017 全国3When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown notonly physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.2016 全国 3The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything a nd could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.2018 全国1During my last winter holiday, I went to∧thecountryside with my father to visit mygrandparents. Ifindfounda big change there. 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TheTurninginstructor keptrepeating the words , “Speed up!”“Slowdown!”“lateTurnleft!” I was so muchnervousthat I could hardly tell which direction was left.A few minutessuddenly lateron, the instructor asked me to stopthe car. Itwas a relief and Icame to a sudden stop just in themiddleofthe road.2016 全国171. that →where 72. but 去掉73. had →have 74. hone st→ honesty 75. or→ and范文范例指导参考76. using →used 77. becoming 前加of 78. the →a 79. our→ his 80. stead→steadily2015 全国176. think –thought 77. countryside 前加the 78. or—and 79. on—with80. been 去掉81. seriously—serious 82. airs—air 83. much—many 84. found—find 85. your—our2014 全国1范文 范例 指导 参考2018 全国 2When I was little,Friday ’s Fridaynight was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games ofal l sor t sort sin the sittingroom. Asthe akid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked towatching watchthem, my parents would not to letme. The y wou ld say tous methat playing card games wouldhelp my brain. 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2018年高考满分作文-五年高考(2014-2018年)英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累(原卷版)
2021年(高|考)英语总分值作文1.2021年新课标全国卷I假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗.请你回复邮件,内容包括:1.到达时间;2.适宜的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪.注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________2.2021年新课标全国卷II你受学生会委托为校宣传栏"英语天地〞写一那么通知,请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together ,内容包括:(1)短片内容:学校的开展;(2)放映时间、地点;(3)欢迎对短片提出意见.注意:(1)词数100左右;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________3. 2021年新课标全国卷III假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况.请给他回信,内容包括:1. 学校的体育场馆;2. 主要的运开工程;3. 你喜欢的工程 .注意:1. 词数100左右:2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________4.2021年浙江卷第|一节应用文写作假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生.请你写信应聘,内容包括:1. 口语能力:2. 相关经验;3. 应聘目的.1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________第二节读后续写阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事.It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me t o a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad ,s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listenin g to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearb y. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens. while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn ,t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don ,t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don ,t get lost!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul an d his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右;2. 至||少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语:4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.5.2021年天津卷假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖.你打算邀请他参加你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世|界青少年机器人技能竞赛.请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件.(1 )比赛的时间、地点;(2 )邀请他的原因;(3 )训练方案将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议.注意:(1 )词数不少于100;(2 )可适当参加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3 )开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.参考词汇:世|界青少年机器人技能竞赛the World Adolescent Robotics CompetitionDear Chris,I have good news to tell you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________I ,m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin6.2021年北京卷第|一节(1) 表示欢迎;(2) 推荐他上哪所大学;(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作.注意:(1). 词数不少于50;(2). 开头和结尾已给出 ,不计入总词数.Dear Jim,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ You rs,Li Hua假设你是红星中学高三学生李华 ,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序 ,写一篇英文周记 ,记述你们上周接待外国学生 ,带着他们体验中国茶文化的全过程.注意:词数不少于60 .(请务必将作文写在答题卡指定区域内)____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________7.2021年江苏卷请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章.【写作内容】1. 用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings )进行消费的现象;2. 谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用2 -3个理由或论据支撑你的看法.1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3. 不必写标题.【评分标准】内容完整,语言标准,语篇连贯,词数适当.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2021年(高|考)英语总分值作文1.2021年新课标全国卷I假定你是李华,方案暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周.下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容) .注意:100左右.2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.3.参考词汇:住宿- accommodation____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】(一)仔细审题理思路看到英语作文试题后,不要急于往答题卷上书写,应该先对试题所提供的材料及要求进行仔细地审读,理清写作思路,明确写作任务.在审题时,要审清写作文体,审清动词时态,审清使用的人称,审清写作要点及具体的写作要求等.只有进行了充分地试题,才可能有的放矢,才可能圆满地完成写作任务.李华方案暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周,看到广告后自己感觉有一些问题广告里不清楚,想要给校方写信咨询有关事项,考生要清楚这是一封信,要符合信的格式.这是考生非常熟悉的一个应用文文体.考生要注意动词时态的变化,以一般现在时为主,兼有将来时,比方:功课什么时间开始?这是将来的事情.注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅.使用一些高级||句型和词汇来提高作文档次.(二)精心布局谋好篇在经过仔细审题之后,考生还需要进一步对所要写的作文进行总体精心设计,包括需要涵盖几方面的内容要点,需要分成几个段落来写,需要使用哪些句型等.有些考生可能会感觉这样做没有必要,感觉这样做浪费时间.其实不然,这一环节是为下一步写好作文奠定坚实的根底.(三)搭好框架信心足如果不是因为时间问题,考生最||好先在草稿纸上草拟一个写作小提纲,搭好写作的整体框架,列出主要的要点提纲,列出需要使用的主要词汇、短语、句型等,这样再往答题卷上书写时,就会信心十足,就会条理更加清晰.(四)扩展提纲连成文紧接着就是对写作提纲进行充实扩展,在答题纸上进行书写.写作时应注意要点的完整性,上下文的连贯性,词汇及句式的多样性,语言的准确性.而且需要注意内容充实,积极健康,逻辑清晰,语言标准,交际得体,建议词数保持在80至||120之间.应尽可能运用比较熟悉的词汇、短语和句型,尽量变换句式,在有把握的情况下,才可使用一些使短文能够增色的较高级||的词汇、短语或者句式.(五)过渡词语文紧凑考生在写作时,可在文中穿插一些过渡性词汇、短语或句型,这样会使短文过渡自然,衔接紧密,行文紧凑.例如:表示困果关系- -therefore ,so ,hence ,thus ,accordingly ,consequently ,as a result表示举例示范- -for example ,in other words ,for instance ,that is ,that is to say表示总结概括- -in summary ,to sum up ,in brief ,in short ,on the whole ,in a word ,all in all ,in conclusion ,as has been noted ,on the whole表示递进过渡- -again ,also ,worsestill ,obviously ,then ,besides ,further ,furthermore ,moreover ,next ,similarly ,after a while ,at the same time ,in addition ,meanwhile, suddenly, later, soon, in the same way, what ,s more表示转折让步- -unfortunately ,though/ although ,anyway ,but ,howeve r, otherwise ,still ,yet ,after all ,in spite of ,on the contrary ,on the other hand ,in any case ,whatever(六)卷面整洁悦人目英语作文毕竟是一项主观性试题,考生的作文分数除了受写作水平影响以外,还受阅卷老师的主观评价影响.干净整洁的卷面,漂亮工整的字体,会使人赏心悦目,会使阅卷老师眼前一亮,从而给阅卷老师留下非常好的印象,无疑会使作文增色不少.这样的英语作文相对来说,分数会明显高于写作水平相当,但是卷面比较差的考生.因此,在写作时,书写与卷面是考生应该留意的一个重要方面,需要做到英语字母书写标准,工整清晰,大小适中,卷面整洁,忌潦草凌乱,乱涂乱改,卷面一塌糊涂,令阅卷老师头痛不已. (七)耐心复查把好关作文写完后,并不是完事大吉了,考生还需要对自己的作文进行从头至||尾耐心地复查,把好写作的最||后一道关.这是写作中不可缺少的一个重要环节.在复查的过程中,考生需要查看是否由于粗心而出现了一些低级||错误,如单复数、拼写、搭配、时态、标点符号等.对于查找出来的错误,切忌乱涂乱改,可以按照短文改错的纠错方法在原文上进行单词的添加、删除或者修改.【总分值范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua 【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语,增加了文章的色彩,如:plan to do sth ;would like to do sth; pay for; look forward to doing/sth等;用了一些过渡词如:First ,Besides等,使文章过渡自然;用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化不再单一.如:I ,d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.并且wish后用了虚拟语气,增加了文章的亮点.2.2021年新课标全国卷II一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是"十年后的我" .请根据以下要点和你的畅想完成短文.1.家庭;2.工作;3.业余生活.注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好.I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】这是一篇典型的提纲式半开放书面表达.主题是"十年后的我〞.在写作时要注意从家庭、工作和业余生活三方面要点着手,因为提示信息较少,所以要充分发挥想象,增加适当的细节以使行文连贯,充实内容.比方可以联想到的内容有健身,度假,聚会等等.在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词或者插入语以使文章层次清楚,条理清晰.还要正确使用多种句式结构和高级||亮点词汇来提高文章的档次,如定语从句,宾语从句和状语从句等.此外,因为是畅想未来,所以要用一般将来时.【总分值范文】【亮点点击】本篇范文短小精悍,要点全面,语言简练,时态人称准确,很好的完成了写作任务.在文章开头作者紧扣题目,提出自己对未来的畅想,然后从生活,工作,家庭三个方面描述了自己十年后的生活.在文中作者用到了短语In my free time , In a word , such as等介词短语,防止了文章句式的单一.此外,还用到了宾语从句in whatever I do、I will work in a computer company as a program designer等,这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点.3.2021重庆卷(1 )请结合材料,按要求用英文写作."My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry."要求:(1)就此材料发表你的看法;(2)紧扣材料,有明确的观点;(3)词数不少于60 .____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【总分值范文】When I hear that someone says, "My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry." I feel rather annoyed and surprised. What he says suggests that he cares little about others' pain or trouble, even if they're his friends. Moreover, it seems that he always thinks more of himself than of others.I argue that every one of us should try our best to help those in need. Then we can have someone to turn to when in trouble. Otherwise we'll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later. That is what the saying goes: "Afriend in need is a friend indeed." Only when you learn to give can you expect to receive.(2 )青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏,邀请大家分享心目中的"最||好礼物" .她认为,礼物贵在心意,应为之付出时间和精力.假设你是李华,请用英文发帖,内容应包括:●赞同Susan的看法●你收到或送出的最||好礼物是什么●该礼物的意义●期待大家回复注意:(1)词数不少于80;(2)符合语言标准;(3)开头已给出(不计入总词数) .I am a high school student from China.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【总分值范文】I am a high school student from China. I quite agree with you that gifts should be worth time and energy if you want to send them to someone you love. It does't matter whether it is expensive or not. What really matters is whether it comes from your inner heart.Now, it is still hanging on the wall of my bedroom. Whenever I look at it, I couldn't help thinking of my friend. However far away we are, we feel close to each other. So I think a gift full of love and effort is a true and most valuable one.4.2021年浙江卷学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见.假设你是李越,你认为学校图书馆最||需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books) .请你用英语给图书馆||王老师写一封100 -120个词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由.注意:信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数) .Dear Mr. Wang,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Yue 【写作指导】根据提示你用英语给图书馆||王老师写一封100 -120词的信,可知这里应该是考生比较熟悉的书信格式.学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见.先写这个内容来引出你要提出的建议.在写推荐的两类书时,要写出为什么要推荐这些书.【总分值范文】Dear Mr. Wang,Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I'd like to give some suggestions.What we need most are popular science bo oks. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.Yours sincerely,Li Yue 【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式增加了文章的色彩,如:would like to do;help sb do sth;not only...but also;encourage sb to do sth;That is why…等,还用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化,如:What we need most are popular science books这里what引导的主语从句;That is why I recommend another category of books:这里why引导的表语从句;I ,ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.这里是if引导的条件状语从句 .5.2021年天津卷假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津,得知美国学生Chris作为交换生,下学期将到你班学习.请你根据以下提示,给他写封邮件:(1)表示欢迎;(2)介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如气候、饮食等);(3)介绍本班情况;(4)希望Chris做哪些事情,以增进中美学生间的了解和友谊.注意:(1)请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息;(2)可适当参加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)词数不少于100;开头已给出,不计入总词数.参考词汇:交换生exchange studentDear Chris,I'm Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________Li Jin 【写作指导】本试题只给了要写的信的大致内容,而具体的细节需要考生自己发挥,因此它是一篇半开放式作文.私人信件一般分为以下几局部:一是说明知道对方的情况后的态度,如果是好的事情,一般用"I'm /feel glad to hear that...";如果是不好的事情,那么用"I'm sorry to hear that ..." ,然后就是对朋友的抚慰.二是谈一谈自己周围的情况.三是鼓励朋友更加努力以获得更大成就或者提出一些防止不好事情发生的建议.最||后对朋友表示祝愿.【总分值范文】Dear Chris,I'm Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school as an exchange student. You're welcome to stay with us.Our class is made up of 50 lively boys and girls, who are warm and generous and ready to offer help. They are very friendly and easy to get along with. You will have a good time and get used to the life soon.Yours,Li Jin 【亮点点击】文章由三段构成,结构非常清楚、合理,使阅卷老师一目了然地了解考生想表达的内容 .文中使用了复合句,如:I'm glad to hear that...及where和who引导的非限制性定语从句.恰当地使用短语be located in,be famous for,be made up of,get along with等 .6.2021年北京卷第|一节(15分)你给英国笔友Chris写一封信,内容包括:1. 你们原方案7月份一同去云南旅游;2. 由于脚部受伤,你无法按原方案前往;3. 表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份.注意:1. 词数不少于50 .2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总次数.Dear Chris,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Joe【写作指导】应用文写作包括书信,通知和演讲稿,书信是较为常考的类型.2021年北京(高|考)英语考查的为书信中的抱歉信,学生在写抱歉信时障碍比较小,但如何写出高分作文是难点.写应用文时应保证以下内容:表达歉意Please accept my heartfelt apology.解释原因the reason why I …is that…提出建议I would appreciate it if you can allow me to …结尾Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience I caused.考生在写作中一定要注意到格式标准、语气合理,交际感强烈,否那么分数很可能会在12分以下,应用文书写不需要过长的句子,句子长度控制在两行以内,应注意行文流畅,感情真挚,多用sincerely, from the bottom of my heart, I am indeed sorry for the trouble ,使用schedule, postpone等升级||单词难度,但注意不要通篇难词.另外需要提醒的是,书信应有称呼,有结尾,假设开头结尾已给出,需要在答题纸上重新抄写一遍,否那么扣相应分数.【总分值范文】Dear Chris,How is it going?I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July.But now, because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.I'm sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand . I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Joe第二节假设你是红星中学高三(1 )班的学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,为校刊"英语园地〞写一篇短文,记述你和同学们向学校提建议,解决自行车存放问题的过程.注意:1. 词数不少于60 .2. 短文的开头已给出,不计入总字数.There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】本篇情景作文属于北京(高|考)的常规出题模式,体裁为稿件,主题是"和谐校园,人人有责〞类.从体裁和主题的角度上来说,考生并不陌生. "提建议〞主题在应用文中出现过,而且其中一些场景"讨论〞在之前的模拟考试屡次出现,自行车拥堵和提交建议也属于日常表达,还是相对容易操作的.只要各位考生关注以下四个方面即可:体裁:北京卷的情景作文主要考查两种体裁,一为"稿件〞,二为"日记〞.前者关注的是"我们做了什么事〞,所以在写作中,重点要突出事件的描写;而后者强调的是"我/我们的感受〞.另外,从时间上看,这题考的是周记,也就意味着图与图之间动作转折性大,不及日记动作衔接紧密.因此,在该题中,假设想分数比较理想的话,重点需要突出事件的描写,以及对动作时间间隔的把握.要点:情景作文的评卷原那么是每幅图的要点3分,所以考生一定要抓住图画要点,比方首||幅图的要点是"发现问题,自行车阻塞〞,第二图的要点是"讨论问题〞,第三幅图的要点是"提交建议〞,最||后一幅图的要点是"又建了一个门,不再堵塞〞.因此,对于考生的最||低要求是将这四个短语变成四句话,写在作文当中.这样的话,作文至||少从要点上来说,没有失分的地方.细节和过渡:情景作文的要点全面是不够的,细节描写也是考官在最||终给分时的一个重要考量.第|一幅图的细节是中文"存车处〞"入口〞以及李华的担忧表情;第二幅图细节在于一个同学在记录"建议〞;第三幅图的细节是钟表的时间"下午五点〞,还有中文字"校长室〞以及"我和另一个同学〞.当然,情景作文的情感描写也是细节的一局部,该题中分别有第|一幅图李华的担忧,第二幅图大家的踊跃积极,第三幅图我们提交建议时的迫不及待,第四幅图我的成就感.如果细节描写不齐全的话,有可能会减掉一定的分数.另外,良好的细节支持是行文连贯即过渡的根底,当然,过渡主要考察学生逻辑思维和过渡情景的能力,它使行文饱满流畅,这点也是将二档文和三档文区分的重要根据.句式多样:句式是否多样取决于考生平时的功夫够不够,语法和句型掌握和准确适用情况如何.这点是高分作文不可或缺的权衡因素.综上,该情景作文难度中等.要点没有偏难词汇和表达.假设要到达及格的分数,首||先保证体裁、要点没问题,不出现大的语法错误(如时态、人称) .但是假设要分数比较理想,还需要良好的细节补充衔接以使行文连贯和多样的句式应用来丰富文章表达.总之情景作文还是考察学生用英语说事的能力,需要学生平时多观察生活,积累语料.在此根底上,建议考生平时学好语法,多写多练多修改多研究范文,这样方能练就一个扎实的写作功底.【总分值范文】【亮点点击】本篇范文要点齐全,言简意赅,句子之间衔接自然.前两句开门见山地介绍了发现的问题,almost blocked两个单词的运用符合图画内容,生动形象;接着用So把第|一幅图画和第二幅图画的内容连接起来,并用"had a discussion and wrote a report"简洁地表达出了第二幅图画的要点;然后又用一个Then 把第二幅图画的内容和第三幅图画的内容自然地连接起来,用两句话概括了第三幅图画的所有内容;最||后,用Soon afterwards引出了最||后一个要点,同时文章最||后一句话也是点睛之笔,起到了总结作用.7.2021年安徽卷为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了"HEART -TO -HEART〞专栏.假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie ,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信.信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响 .请用英文给该同学写一封回信.内容要点如下:1.表示理解并给予抚慰;2.提出建议并说明理由.注意:1.词数120左右;2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数.参考词汇:temper n. 脾气,情绪Hi Worried ,I ,m sorry to know that you ,re having such a bad time at the moment.________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____Yours,Jamie 【写作指导】本文属于半开放性作文,要为你编辑Jamie的口吻回复Worried的求助信,他的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响.要注意书信的格式和特殊用词.要点:1.很遗憾听说对方有此问题.并解释每个人都可能会遇见这样的问题,所以不必担忧.只有的是要学会控制自己的脾气.2.提出建议:与信任的人进行交流,告诉别人你的困扰,释放自己的压力.同时多参加各种户外活动,和朋友多玩球类运动.保持乐观的心态.对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力.需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级||词汇和高级||句型使文章显得更有档次.【一句多译】每个人都会有过这样的一段时期,在这时情况都很糟糕,所以你不要太担忧了.(1 )The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry so much.(2 )It is true that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry so much.【总分值范文】Hi Worried,I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you ,ll regret. Here are three useful tips:I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours,Jamie假定你是中学生李华.美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动.请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词.写作要点:1.表示对客人的欢迎;2.介绍此项活动(如活动目的、内容等);3.表达对客人的祝愿.写作要求:1.词数不少于100;2.称呼已经给出,请写欢迎词正文;3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称.Dear American guests,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】这篇文章要求考生写一篇欢迎词,写起来相对容易 .在写作时,首||先,要注意写作要点的齐全,具体应该包括(1)表示欢迎;(2)活动的目的和内容;(3)表示祝愿.在这些要点中可以适当地增加一些内容;使文章内容更丰富;其次,要注意使用一些高级||词汇和连接词,使文章通顺流畅;最||后,按照写作要求,文章应该以一般现在时和一般将来时为主.【总分值范文】Dear American guests,On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities.I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.【亮点点击】此篇写作要点齐全,表达流畅,符合(高|考)的要求.特别值得一提的是,文章中使用了大量的高级||词汇,如on behalf of, express our warm welcome to, develop our interest in, consist of, benefit from;同时也使用了一些高级||的句型,如As scheduled等.。
2018年高考满分作文-五年高考(2014-2018年)英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累(解析版)
2021年(高|考)英语总分值作文1.2021年新课标全国卷I假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗.请你回复邮件,内容包括:1.到达时间;2.适宜的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪.注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【试题分析】书面表达具有很强的开放性和选择性,给予考生畅所欲言的空间,摆脱单一方法,唯一答案的思维模式,在展示多彩思维活动的同时,真正考查了考生语言能力、文化意识、思维品质和学习能力,让考生感受英语学习的趣味与魅力,突出英语学科的独有特征 .2021年全国卷I书面表达体裁为应用文电子邮件,内容为回复外国朋友Terry的邮件,向其介绍在中国|家庭做客方面的相关习俗 .要求文中涵盖试题给出的三方面内容要点,即到达时间、适宜的礼物和餐桌礼仪.该题型和内容设计紧密联系考生实际,但是,餐桌礼仪这个普通得再普通不过的日常小节反而在生活中被很多中学生忽略了.如果没有跨文化比照凝练出的思维品格和文化素养的意识,学生很难在短时间内写出中国老百姓的餐桌礼仪文化.例如受邀赴宴客人可以准时到达但切忌过早到达.外地客人所带礼物常见为能表达客人当地特色的物品.但注意,传统的中国人收到礼物后一般不会当着客人的面翻开.中国餐桌为圆桌,正对门的位置为上座,一般为长者位置. 中国人特别尊敬长辈,用餐时,需等长辈先动筷子.吃饭时不得发出声响,强调"食不语寝不言〞等.中国地域广文化差异也很大,给予思维发散的考生提供了充分表达自己的空间和时机.在宣传中国习俗文化的同时,对考生的跨文化意识、思维品质提出了更高的要求,鼓励考生站在外国人的角度讲中国习俗特色,积极调动语言,说明事实,说明差异.【思路点拨】本文是一篇电子邮件类应用文写作.餐桌礼仪也是考生比较熟悉的话题.成文时注意以下几点:一、内容要点要齐全1.到达时间;2.适宜的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪.二、时态:主要用一般现在时和将来时;三、人称:第二、三人称.四、注意使用恰当的高级||词汇、短语或句型,以提高作文的水平;五、适当使用一些连接词和插入语,使文章表达自然、流畅.1. 浏览信息要点2.三个任务点,第|一段内容:问候对方,马上呈现对方所涉及的话题,拜访中国|家庭,做客时间的要求和忌讳! 第二段内容:做客拜访的适宜礼物,可以适当延展,初次拜访,亲密朋友之间拜访,二次拜访,家庭情况适合的礼物,通用的礼物等.第三段:table manners,可以描述两三个通常的中国人的餐桌礼节和忌讳的地方,有鲜明特色之处,最||后一句表达祝愿.3.时态,给对方的建议和说明,用一般现在时,描述风俗礼仪这是客观规律性的东西,用一般现在时.4.头脑风暴短语、句型结构,开始打草稿5.行文6.检查拼写和语法.If you have any other problems, please don ,t hesitate to contact me.YoursLi Hua 【素材积累】做客礼仪:1. 预先约定一个时间以便对方事先作好安排.如果事先已经约定好了时间,就应遵守约定,准时到达,如需提早十分钟二十分钟之内可以接受,不要迟到,以免主人等候,也不要太早到,以免主人未作好准备.这是一个根本礼节问题.2.如果有专属地域文化特色的礼物是最||好的.如果朋友家有长辈,带点烟酒和茶叶或一些老人家用的保健品等;如果朋友家有小孩,带点儿童玩具或买箱牛奶,然后加点烟酒或茶叶;不要送钟、梨、伞等这些东西,被认为不桔祥.3.主人会请客人入座上席,再请长辈入座客人旁.入座的时侯要从椅子的左边进入.在中餐结束时,筷子应整齐地放在靠碗右边的桌上,并应等客人们都放下筷子以后,主人示意离席前方可以离开,不能自己吃完了放下筷子就走,这样做是很没礼貌的表现.常用词语和句子准时on time/punctually餐桌礼仪table manners适宜的、恰当的appropriate拜访pay a visit toYou are supposed/expected/required to do…It ,s a good idea to…It ,s appropriate/suitable to do …It ,s sensible/reasonable/advisable to do …It ,s good manners to do …It ,s noteworthy that…I think it would be more help ful if you could do…It would be wise of you to…It ,s desirable to do …It ,s inappropriate to do …It ,s impolite to do…It ,s unwise/inadvisable to do …Never (助动词/系动词/情态动词)主语+谓语动词…It ,s not suitable for you to do…in such a situation.【备考启示】近年来(高|考)写作的命题常用的思想就是高起点低落点.高起点题目很高,中国文化,中国故事,中国礼仪等等,但最||终都把它们落在应用文的框架里,这就是低落点.写这样的作文,一定要注意不能写过于具体的内容,要找最||重要的,最||熟悉的写,不要面面俱到,中国餐桌礼仪内容太多,100单词无法写.找重点,以点带面.但选择重要内容本身就是一种能力.2.2021年新课标全国卷II你受学生会委托为校宣传栏"英语天地〞写一那么通知,请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together ,内容包括:(1)短片内容:学校的开展;(2)放映时间、地点;(3)欢迎对短片提出意见.注意:(1)词数100左右;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【写作点拨】英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主,多使用被动语态、简单句.在通知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子.第二个注意点:层次一定要清晰,一个层次要表达一件事情,使人看起来一目了然.【总分值范文】Boys and girls,To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing together, which is about the development of our beloved school; as a result, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, it will be in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. What ,s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.The Student Union3. 2021年新课标全国卷III假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况.请给他回信,内容包括:1. 学校的体育场馆;2. 主要的运开工程;3. 你喜欢的工程 .注意:1. 词数100左右:2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路点拨】此题作文为提纲式作文,形式依然是书信,即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况,属于学校生活话题.这一话题贴合学生生活的实际,学生并不陌生,有话可说.首||先可以介绍学校的体育场馆,场馆的位置,大小,开放时间等等.然后简要介绍学校主要开设的体育工程有哪些,可挑选一到两个做详细介绍,如学生的活动时间,活动形式,以及此类活动的好处等.再次简要分析自己喜欢的体育工程是什么,并简单分析喜欢的原因,自己从中得到的益处等.文章可主要采用一般现在时态,第|一人称的方式来写.【总分值范文】Dear Peter,I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping -pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I ,m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.Yours,Li Hua4.2021年浙江卷第|一节应用文写作假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生.请你写信应聘,内容包括:1. 口语能力:2. 相关经验;3. 应聘目的.注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写应聘信.第|一步:根据提示可知,学校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生.要求写封应聘信,内容包括:1. 口语能力:2. 相关经验;3. 应聘目的.第二步:根据写作要求确定关键词(组) .第三步:根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题.第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要标准清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的.本文内容完整,语言标准,语篇连贯,词数适当.另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力.【范文】Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What ,s more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.I ,m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.Hopefully I can receive your acce ptance.Yours faithfully,Li Hua第二节读后续写阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事.It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad ,s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens. while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn ,t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don ,t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don ,t get lost!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右;2. 至||少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语:3. 续写局局部为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.【思路点拨】读后续写要求考生首||先要读懂已有信息,不仅能读懂字面含义,还要理清文章的脉络.续篇这篇短文时,考生要搞清楚故事的开展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等.在此根底上,考生要顺着文章的思路,根据线索,发挥想象,对其后的情节进行合理预测,并用语言表达出来.通过阅读所给文章可知,父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活,见父亲和叔叔骑马,儿子也很想骑,于是亲身上马体验.根据第|一段所给首||句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.这一句是故事开展的转折点,可从rabbit出现后带来的反响扩展开,可以写马的反响,也可以写人的反响,但要注意与第二段首||句相照应.第二段首||句是We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.这一句照应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱- -不要误吃晚饭,可从如何寻路返回农场去写.续写时注意要使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语,我们要熟悉所给划线词语,恰当的时候加以运用.最||后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右;续写完成后要用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语. 【总分值范文】We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little light when we were looking for the way to the farm house. After what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance. My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep. As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us over. What a night!5.2021年天津卷假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖.你打算邀请他参加你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世|界青少年机器人技能竞赛.请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件.(1 )比赛的时间、地点;(2 )邀请他的原因;(3 )训练方案将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议.注意:(1 )词数不少于100;(2 )可适当参加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3 )开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.参考词汇:世|界青少年机器人技能竞赛the World Adolescent Robotics CompetitionDear Chris,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________I ,m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin 【思路点拨】本篇书面要求写一封邀请信.写作的时候要注意以下几点:一、动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.内容要点包括:1. 代表兴趣小组发出邀请;2. 介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排;3. 说明邀请他的原因,包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖;4. 告诉他训练方案将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议.二、写作时注意准确运用时态,对于本文来说,以一般将来时为主,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级||词汇和高级||句型使文章显得更有档次.【总分值范文】Dear Chris,I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the coming competition. I am sure that your involvement will not only help us in winning the award but also enhance the friendship between our two schools.With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your advice because you are more experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners.I ,m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin6.2021年北京卷第|一节假设你是红星中学高三学生李华 ,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣 ,方案明年来北京上大学.他向你咨询相关信息.请给他回邮件 ,内容包括:(1) 表示欢迎;(2) 推荐他上哪所大学;(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作.注意:(1). 词数不少于50;(2). 开头和结尾已给出 ,不计入总词数.Dear Jim,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Hua【思路点拨】本文为提纲式作文,文章要求写推荐信,为英国朋友介绍北京的大学.首||先可以介绍一下写作背景(Jim对中国文化感兴趣,要来中国学习) ,表达欢迎.然后推荐一所大学,并简要介绍推荐的原因(如大学的特色,可以学到什么等) .再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备,如可以提前学习汉语,读点有关中国传统文化的书,了解中国的习俗,让自己更好地适应中国的生活.文章可采用一般现在时,人称可以使用第二人称. 【总分值范文】Dear Jim,I ,m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it ,s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that daycomes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.Yours,Li Hua 第二节假设你是红星中学高三学生李华 ,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序 ,写一篇英文周记 ,记述你们上周接待外国学生 ,带着他们体验中国茶文化的全过程.注意:词数不少于60 .(请务必将作文写在答题卡指定区域内)____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路点拨】本文为图片介绍类作文,这类作文是根据给出的一幅或几幅图画所提供的信息写短文.此类题的体裁较广泛,可以是记叙文、说明文,也可以是议论文.按照本文的要求可知,是写一篇记叙文.1. 认真读图,把握中|心.根据提示可知,内容是带着外国学生体验中国茶文化的全过程,介绍了茶具,泡茶,沏茶,品茶的过程,所以这是这组图画所要表达的中|心.3. 连词成句,然后再连句成文.运用适当的单词或短语正确表达各图的意思.然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来.串连时,要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句,不至||于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象,更使上下文更为紧凑、自然.一篇文章写好后,应进行检查,看短文中是否有错,如拼写、用词、时态、语态及表达方面的错误.5. 宜详那么详,该略那么略.对于一些细节方面的内容,如果是文章必不可少的,在写作过程中是不可将其忽略的.如果是可有可无的细节,那么可视具体情况进行增删.据此,我们在读图时一定要注意阅读各图中的一些细节内容,看其是否影响文章的内容.【总分值范文】Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.On arriving at the tea house, the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups. I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety, and the exquisite craftsmanship of making tea with their interest greatly sparked, I then began to teach them how to make tea.In order to deliver a clear presentation, I slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail. Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldn ,t help taking pictures fr om time to time.Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves. Washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups, they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture. The tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us.At the end of the activity, holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day. It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value. And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world.【亮点说明】巧妙使用定语从句 ,提升了文章档次:Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.使用非谓语动词,使句子表达更简洁:On arriving at the tea house…I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety, Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique cultureholding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day.使用倒装句突出重点 .Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves.使用it做形式主语,使表达更地道.It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value.7.2021年江苏卷请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章.【写作内容】1. 用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings )进行消费的现象;2. 谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用2 -3个理由或论据支撑你的看法.【写作要求】1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3. 不必写标题.【评分标准】内容完整,语言标准,语篇连贯,词数适当.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路点拨】今年作文仍然是读写作文,即先用30词概括阅读材料,然后针对材料中的话题写一篇议论文谈看法.首||先要认真阅读两段有关消费排名现象及观点的纯文字材料,然后进行比较和分析,说明态度,作出价值判断 .文章首||段要简要介绍两段材料,第|一段材料为一对母子买旅行箱看了网上的评论,结果买回来的旅行箱质量很好.第二段材料为一帮人去餐馆吃饭,看了on -line rating ,结果饭菜很不好吃,从而凸显出online rating的不靠谱.然后写你对online rating的看法,说明观点,注意用2 -3个论据来支撑自己的看法.文章属于议论文,要注意主题句的使用,论点之间要注意有条理.文章可主要采用一般现在时,第三人称来写.【总分值范文】Possible version one:As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings. Possible version two:Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others , judgment on the product or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to payfor good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.2021年(高|考)英语总分值作文1.2021年新课标全国卷I假定你是李华,方案暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周.下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容) .注意:100左右.2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.3.参考词汇:住宿- accommodation____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】(一)仔细审题理思路看到英语作文试题后,不要急于往答题卷上书写,应该先对试题所提供的材料及要求进行仔细地审读,理清写作思路,明确写作任务.在审题时,要审清写作文体,审清动词时态,审清使用的人称,审清写作要点及具体的写作要求等.只有进行了充分地试题,才可能有的放矢,才可能圆满地完成写作任务.李华方案暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周,看到广告后自己感觉有一些问题广告里不清楚,想要给校方写信咨询有关事项,考生要清楚这是一封信,要符合信的格式.这是考生非常熟悉的一个应用文文体.考生要注意动词时态的变化,以一般现在时为主,兼有将来时,比方:功课什么时间开始?这是将来的事情.注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅.使用一些高级||句型和词汇来提高作文档次.(二)精心布局谋好篇在经过仔细审题之后,考生还需要进一步对所要写的作文进行总体精心设计,包括需要涵盖几方面的内容要点,需要分成几个段落来写,需要使用哪些句型等.有些考生可能会感觉这样做没有必要,感觉这样做浪费时间.其实不然,这一环节是为下一步写好作文奠定坚实的根底.(三)搭好框架信心足如果不是因为时间问题,考生最||好先在草稿纸上草拟一个写作小提纲,搭好写作的整体框架,列出主要的要点提纲,列出需要使用的主要词汇、短语、句型等,这样再往答题卷上书写时,就会信心十足,就会条理更加清晰.(四)扩展提纲连成文紧接着就是对写作提纲进行充实扩展,在答题纸上进行书写.写作时应注意要点的完整性,上下文的连贯性,词汇及句式的多样性,语言的准确性.而且需要注意内容充实,积极健康,逻辑清晰,语言标准,交际得体,建议词数保持在80至||120之间.应尽可能运用比较熟悉的词汇、短语和句型,尽量变换句式,在有把握的情况下,才可使用一些使短文能够增色的较高级||的词汇、短语或者句式.(五)过渡词语文紧凑考生在写作时,可在文中穿插一些过渡性词汇、短语或句型,这样会使短文过渡自然,衔接紧密,行文紧凑.例如:表示困果关系- -therefore ,so ,hence ,thus ,accordingly ,consequently ,as a result表示举例示范- -for example ,in other words ,for instance ,that is ,that is to say表示总结概括- -in summary ,to sum up ,in brief ,in short ,on the whole ,in a word ,all in all ,in conclusion ,as has been noted ,on the whole表示递进过渡- -again ,also ,worsestill ,obviously ,then ,besides ,further ,furthermore ,moreover ,next ,similarly ,after a while ,at the same time ,in addition ,meanwhile, suddenly, later, soon, in the same way, what ,s more表示转折让步- -unfortunately ,though/ although ,anyway ,but ,howeve r, otherwise ,still ,yet ,after all ,in spite of ,on the contrary ,on the other hand ,in any case ,whatever(六)卷面整洁悦人目英语作文毕竟是一项主观性试题,考生的作文分数除了受写作水平影响以外,还受阅卷老师的主观评价影响.干净整洁的卷面,漂亮工整的字体,会使人赏心悦目,会使阅卷老师眼前一亮,从而给阅卷老师留下非常好的印象,无疑会使作文增色不少.这样的英语作文相对来说,分数会明显高于写作水平相当,但是卷面比较差的考生.因此,在写作时,书写与卷面是考生应该留意的一个重要方面,需要做到英语字母书写标准,工整清晰,大小适中,卷面整洁,忌潦草凌乱,乱涂乱改,卷面一塌糊涂,令阅卷老师头痛不已.(七)耐心复查把好关作文写完后,并不是完事大吉了,考生还需要对自己的作文进行从头至||尾耐心地复查,把好写作的最||后一道关.这是写作中不可缺少的一个重要环节.在复查的过程中,考生需要查看是否由于粗心而出现了一些低级||错误,如单复数、拼写、搭配、时态、标点符号等.对于查找出来的错误,切忌乱涂乱改,可以按照短文改错的纠错方法在原文上进行单词的添加、删除或者修改.【总分值范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua 【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语,增加了文章的色彩,如:plan to do sth ;would like to do sth; pay for; look forward to。
2014-2018全国卷高考英语书面表达汇编
2014—2018年高考英语全国卷书面表达汇编(2017 全国卷1)假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。
请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。
内容包括:(1)时间和地点;(2)内容:学习唐诗;(3)课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。
Dear Leslie,How are you? Glad to see you have made some progress in Chinese learning and I’m writing to tell you something about our next lesson. The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the classroom 502. In the class, you will mainly learn Tang poetry, which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese. You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry. You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class.If there is anything that I can help you, please don’t hesitate to tell me. Looking forward to meeting you.Yours sincerely,Li Hua(2017 全国卷2)假定你是李华,想邀请邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。
(全)高考英语全国卷作文题+优秀范文汇总2014—2019
高考英语全国卷作文题+优秀范文汇总2014—20192014年全国卷(新课标I)假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。
下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇:住宿--accommodation优秀范文Dear Sir/Madam,I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.I’ve seen your ad,and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course.First,when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?Besides,I wish there would not be too many students in a class.I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua2014年全国卷(新课标II/大纲)一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。
请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。
1. 家庭;2. 工作;3. 业余生活。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头语已为你写好。
2014-2018高考英语全国卷III 书面表达题目及参考范文汇总
2014-2018高考英语全国卷III 书面表达题目及参考范文汇总本文为2014-2018高考英语全国卷III 书面表达题目及参考范文汇总。
文中将参考范文中的值得借鉴的有用表达用黑体字标出,仅供参考。
研究高考真题,把握命题规律,朗读范文,有助于考生更好地把握高考英语书面表达。
2014年全国卷III假定你是李华,从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。
请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括:1. 自我介绍(包括英语能力)2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)3. 希望获准。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Sir or Madam,I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply!2015年全国卷III假如你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。
(90页)(五年高考)全国各地高考英语作文真题及满分作文(2018-2014年)(打包下载)
(90页)全国高考英语作文真题及满分作文2018年高考英语满分作文1.2018年新课标全国卷I假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。
请你回复邮件,内容包括:1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _______【试题分析】书面表达具有很强的开放性和选择性,给予考生畅所欲言的空间,摆脱单一方法,唯一答案的思维模式,在展示多彩思维活动的同时,真正考查了考生语言能力、文化意识、思维品质和学习能力,让考生感受英语学习的趣味与魅力,突出英语学科的独有特征。
高考05 2014年高考满分作文-五年高考(2014-2018年)英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累 Word版含解析
2014年高考英语满分作文1.2014年新课标全国卷I假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。
下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇:住宿— accommodation____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】(一)仔细审题理思路看到英语作文试题后,不要急于往答题卷上书写,应该先对试题所提供的材料及要求进行仔细地审读,理清写作思路,明确写作任务。
在审题时,要审清写作文体,审清动词时态,审清使用的人称,审清写作要点及具体的写作要求等。
只有进行了充分地试题,才可能有的放矢,才可能圆满地完成写作任务。
李华计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周,看到广告后自己感觉有一些问题广告里不清楚,想要给校方写信咨询有关事项,考生要清楚这是一封信,要符合信的格式。
这是考生非常熟悉的一个应用文文体。
考生要注意动词时态的变化,以一般现在时为主,兼有将来时,比如:功课什么时间开始?这是将来的事情。
注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅。
2018全国卷英语作文
2018全国卷英语作文参考范文:Environmental protection is a topic that has been receiving more and more attention in recent years. With the rapid development of industry and technology, the environment has been severely damaged. Therefore, it is of great importance for us to protect the environment and make it sustainable for future generations.First and foremost, environmental protection is crucial for the survival of all living beings on Earth. The air we breathe, the water we drink, and the food we eat all come from the environment. If the environment is polluted and destroyed, it will directly affect our health and well-being. For example, air pollution can lead to respiratory diseases, water pollution can cause gastrointestinal problems, and soil pollution can contaminate the food we eat. Therefore, it is essential for us to protect the environment in order to protect ourselves.Moreover, environmental protection is also importantfor the preservation of biodiversity. The Earth is home to millions of species of plants, animals, and microorganisms, all of which play a vital role in maintaining the balance of the ecosystem. However, due to human activities such as deforestation, overfishing, and pollution, many species are facing the threat of extinction. If we do not take action to protect the environment, we may lose many valuable species forever. This will not only disrupt the balance of the ecosystem, but also have a negative impact on human society.In addition, environmental protection is essential for the sustainable development of human society. The Earth's resources are limited, and if we continue to exploit them at the current rate, they will soon be depleted. Therefore, it is necessary for us to adopt sustainable practices such as recycling, using renewable energy sources, and reducing waste. By doing so, we can ensure that future generations will have access to the resources they need to live a good quality of life.To sum up, environmental protection is of great importance for the survival of all living beings, the preservation of biodiversity, and the sustainable development of human society. It is our responsibility to protect the environment and make it sustainable for future generations. We should all take action to reduce our environmental footprint and make a positive impact on the world. Only by working together can we create a better future for ourselves and for the planet.。
14-18全国卷高考英语作文最新版
2014-2018年高考全国卷(I,II,III)英语作文真题范文2018.1全国1卷英语作文范文假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家里做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。
请你回复邮件,内容包括:1、到达时间2、合适的礼物3、餐桌礼仪Dear Terry,How is everything going?In your last letter,in which you asked me about how to be a guest to a Chinese friend’s home.Now,I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.To begin with,according to our tradition,you are supposed to arrive early,so that you can help the family prepare the dinner,which is not only meaningful but also fun.Besides,you’d better bring some gifts, such as a book or a Chinese knot.What’s more,when you are enjoy the meal,you need to avoid making noise while chewing food.Hopefully,these suggestions would be helpful for you.I have the confidence that you will have a great time.I am looking forward to your good news.Best wishes!Yours,LiHua2018.2高考全国2卷英语作文你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together,内容包括:1、短片内容:学校的发展;2、放映时间、地点;3、欢迎对短片提出意见。
2014-2018高考英语全国卷短文改错真题含答案
Nearly five years ago, and with the help of our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then- for all these years-we have been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As a result, the plants are growing everywhere. The fruits are smaller in size,but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!2015年(新课标I )When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I thought I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in the countryside. There the air is clean and the mountains are greener. Unfortunately, with the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The air we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rarely animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.2015年(新课标I I)One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parents. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looking at the toy for some time, he turned around and found that his parents were missing. Tony was scared and began to cry. A woman saw him crying and told him to wait outside the shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw his parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.My uncle is the owner of a restaurant closely to where I live .Though not very big, the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal time. Some people even have to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables and high quality oil are used for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams of becoming rich in a short period of time. Instead, he hopes that his business will grow steady.2016(新课标全国卷3 )The teenage years from 13 to 19 were the more difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think so. They always told me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independently by wearing strange clothes. Now I am leaving home for college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I need help.2017(新课标I )In the summer holiday following my eighteenth birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hardly the first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, but once I started the car, my mind went blankly. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the words, "Speed up!""Slow down!""Turn left!"I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle of the road.2017(新课标II )Mr. and Mrs. Zhang both work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about an hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, theyare interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, which is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful information from the Internet. When summer come, they will invite their students to pick the fresh vegetables!2017(新课标III )When I look at this picture of myself, I realize how fast time flies. I have grown not only physically, and also mental in the past few years. About one month after this photo was taken, I entered my second year of high school and became a new member of the school music club. Around me in the picture are the things that were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me much happy memories of my high school days.2018(新课标I卷)During my last winter holiday, I went to the countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I found a change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a smaller house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chickens. They also had a small pond,where they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by selling the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return every two years, and he agreed.2018(新课标II卷)It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begun. Everyone was silence waiting to see who would be called upon to read his or her paragraph aloud. Some ofus were confident and eagerly to take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done my homework, but I was shy. I was afraid to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that includes leaning from textbooks, and mistakes as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.2018(新课标Ⅲ卷)When I was little, Friday night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sorts in the sitting room. As a kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how much times I asked to watch them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to me that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwillingly to play the games with them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents were until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me when I was a child turned out to be very much useful late in my life.参考答案:2014(新课标I)smaller-small taste ---tasty much---many wonderfully---wonderful2015年(新课标I )greener-green Seriously--serious much-many rarely-rare2015年(新课标I I)very去掉late-later nicely-nice terrible-terribly2016 (新课标I )closely-close honest→ honesty highly- high stead→steadily2016(新课标全国卷3 )more- most worse—worst freely—free independently-independent2017(新课标I )hardly-hard blank-blankly 去掉much late---later suddenly---sudden2017(新课标II )interesting---interested earlier---early Beside---Besidesusefully-useful2017(新课标III )mental-mentally difference---different late---latest much--many2018(新课标I卷)smaller-small another-other here-there happily-happy2018(新课标II卷)silence-silent eagerly-eager larger---large Immediate---Immediately2018(新课标Ⅲ卷)much-many unwillingly-unwilling 去掉much late-later。
2014-2018年高考全国卷英语作文及参考翻译
2014·新课标全国卷Ⅰ假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。
下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况 (箭头所指内容 )。
注意: 1.词数 100 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:住宿accommodation【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summerschool during the vacation.I've seen your ad,and I'd like to know something more about your six-week English course.First,when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week ?Besides,I wish there would not be too many students in a class.I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua亲爱的先生 / 女士,我是一名在中国的学生,我计划在假期期间去英国上暑期学校。
我看过你的广告,我想了解一下你为期六周的英语学习情况。
首先,课程什么时候开始,每周有多少课时?此外,我希望一个班的学生不要太多,我还想知道我要付多少钱是否包括住宿,是否有寄宿家庭或大学宿舍?希望早日得到你的答复。
全国高考英语范文
全国高考英语范文20142018年高考语文考试已经结束,以下为2018年全国卷II高考作文题(适用地区:甘肃、青海、内蒙古、黑龙江、吉林、辽宁、宁夏、新疆、陕西、重庆、海南)。
二战期间战斗机防护,多数人认为,应该在机身中弹多的地方加强防护。
但有一位专家认为,应该注意防护弹痕少的地方。
如果这部分有重创,后果会非常严重。
而往往这部分数据会被忽略。
事实证明,专家是正确的。
请考生结合材料进行分析。
自定立意、自拟标题,写一段作文。
...2014年高考英语作文《十年后的我》范文In ten years,I think I'll be a reporter.I'll live in Shanghai,because I went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it.I think it's really a beautifulcity.As a reporter,I think I will meet lots of interesting people.I think I'll live in an apartment with my best friends, because I don't like living alone.I'll have pets.I can't have any pets now becausemy mother hates them and our apartment is too small.So in ten years,I'll have many different pets.I might even keep a pet parrot! I'll probably go skating and swimming every day.During the week I'll look smart,and probably will wear a suit.On the weekends, I'll be able to dress more ca...As a reporter,I think I will meet lots of interesting people, because I don't like living alone,and one day I might even visitAustralia.On the weekends.I think I'll live in an apartment with my best friends.I'll have pets.I can't have any pets now because my mother hates them and our apartment is too small,and probably will wear asuit.So in ten yearsIn ten years.I might even keep a pet parrot.I'll live in Shanghai. I think I'll go to Hong Kong on vacation! I'll probably go skating and swimming every day,because I went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it,I think I'll be a reporter,I'll have many different pets.I think it's really a beautiful city.During the week I'll look smart, I'll be able to dress more casually2014年高考湖北英语范文It isn't hard to grow up into a responsible member of society.I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she wasnot badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.2014年北京高考英语作文范文There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school, I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggfestions. Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to park our bikes there.希望能帮助到你,还望采纳2014年全国课标一卷英语作文范文,在线等Happy is neither a gift nor a right,we must take the initiative to seek out,heart to pursue in order to obtain.When you try new things,accept newchallenges,because you will discover a new dimension of life but pleasantly surprised.There aredreams,there to pursue,there will be happy.Because the course of the struggle and achieve the goals of the brilliant,can engender immense pleasure.What is happiness - we have to learn to tell myself over and not with others than to recognize their own weaknesses and humbly accept the remendations of others高考英语作文范文(带翻译)高考英语满分作文(带翻译)谢谢Dream and Reality The beautiful legeng ,Chang'e flying to zhe moon, implies the dream of Chinese to explore the Moon . For thousands of years ,we Chinese have been working hard for it one generation after another . The moon orbiter ,Chang'e One,is named after thefairy . And the successful launch marks the nation's first step towards realizing its dream of exploringthe Moon.Indeed,I've got to learn a lot from this historycal event . First of all ,we need dreams in our life ,for they are the primitive drive toeverything .Then we should follow our dreams and nevergive up.At the same time we have to be aware that the path to any success may not be easy to gothough .Yet whatever we do ,we should believe “Where there is a will ,there is a way ." And then try our best to make our dreams e true.梦想和现实嫦娥奔月的美丽传说暗示着中国人民探索月球的梦想。
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2014·新课标全国卷Ⅰ假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。
下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:住宿accommodation【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.I've seen your ad,and I'd like to know something more about your six-week English course.First,when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?Besides,I wish there would not be too many students in a class.I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua亲爱的先生/女士,我是一名在中国的学生,我计划在假期期间去英国上暑期学校。
我看过你的广告,我想了解一下你为期六周的英语学习情况。
首先,课程什么时候开始,每周有多少课时?此外,我希望一个班的学生不要太多,我还想知道我要付多少钱是否包括住宿,是否有寄宿家庭或大学宿舍?希望早日得到你的答复。
你的忠诚,厉华[2014·新课标全国卷Ⅱ] 一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。
请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。
1. 家庭;2. 工作;3. 业余生活。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头语已为你写好。
【参考范文】I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I'll work in a computer company as a program designer. I'll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I'll do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I'll continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I'll travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colourful.我经常想象将来我的生活会是什么样的。
我想我的生活在十年里会有很大的不同。
到那时我就要二十八岁了。
我将拥有我自己的家人,很可能会有一个人你的孩子。
我希望我能在一家电脑公司当一名程序设计师。
我将享受我的工作,并与我的同事相处得很好。
无论我做什么我都会做得很好。
在我的空闲时间,我会继续定期运动,如游泳、跑步和各种球类运动。
在我的假期里,我将环游世界。
总之,我的生活将更加丰富多彩。
假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。
请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:栏目介绍;2015一稿件内容;稿件长度:约400词;交稿日期:6月28日前。
Dear Peter,I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures”section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?I’m looking forward to hearing from you.亲爱的彼得,我想请你为我们学校的英文报纸写一篇文章。
我们报纸上的“外国文化”栏目在我们学生中很受欢迎。
里面有写的文章外国朋友对本国文化的了解。
请你写一些关于你所在地区的文化的文章好吗?我们特别欢迎关于美国人度过他们的假期和节日,以及美国高中生的生活。
你可以写任何相关的东西,只要它是有趣和信息丰富的。
400字就行了。
联我们在6月28日前收到了你们的商品吗?我期待着收到你的来信。
假如你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们国重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。
请给外教Lucy写封邮件,邀她一同前往,内容包括:2015二1. 出发及返回时间;2. 活动:包饺子、表演节目等。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 结语已为你写好。
【参考答案】Dear Lucy,I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly peoplethere. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning. Looking forward to your reply.亲爱的露西,我想邀请你和我们一起去附近的疗养院参加下个星期六的重阳节。
在我们的文化中,这是老年人的节日。
我们去做假人和老人一起吃蛋糕。
我们也会在一起度过一些有趣的时光,一起唱歌,跳舞,玩游戏,我们希望这会让他们快乐。
我们应该在凌晨4点左右回来。
中午。
如果你能和我们一起去,请告诉我们,我们上午9点在门口等你。
期待您的回复。
2016年Ⅰ卷假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。
给外教Mr Jenkins 写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,已使行文连贯。
满分作文Dear Ms Jenkins,I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my jobapplication and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.Yours,Li Hua亲爱的詹金斯女士,我是厉华,我写信告诉你一些关于我即将到来的暑假的计划,我也希望你能帮我一个忙。