14年考研英语小作文范文

Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
注：bias towards对......偏爱
【精彩句式】
1.
1）写出简单句
Students’physical condition gets worse.
It haห้องสมุดไป่ตู้ become an urgent problem
2)整合简单句
It has become an urgent problem that students’physical condition gets worse.
Dear Sir,
I’m writing to express my humble opinions about physical health problem among college students. Deteriorating students’physical condition has become a burning issue. A recent report mentioned that there are stunningly 6,000 times medical treatment for 3,500 students in one new students’military training. The root of the problem, I think, lies in the bias towards scores. The evaluation system based mainly, even solely, on examination scores makes students’attention directed to book learning and generates little motivation for physical exercises.
I hope that our university could take the responsibility for our students’ physical health.I will be highly grateful if you could take my suggestions into account.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Section III Writing
Part A
51. Directions:
Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university, suggesting how to improve students’ physical condition.
You should include the details you think necessary.
You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.
It makes students pay their attention to book learning.
It makes students have little desire for physical exercises.
2)整合简单句
People base the evaluation system mainly on examination scores,which makes students pay their attention to book learning and have little desire for physical exercises.
Exam-driven system is the major barrier to health improvement of students and should be reformed. Meanwhile, the value of health should be stressed and opportunities for students to exercise, such as sports meeting, should be provided.
3)增加表达精确性和美感
Deteriorating students’physical condition has become a burning issue.
2.
1)写出简单句
People base the evaluation system mainly on examination scores.
3)增加表达精确性和美感
The evaluation system based mainly, even solely, on examination scores makes students’attention directed to book learning and generates little motivation for physical exercises.
另附
Dear Mr. President,
It is my great honor towrite to you. As far as I am concerned, we have enough extraordinary lectures and what we need now is physical exercise.
Since most of the time is spent in watching TV and playing computer games, our physical conditions are not good enough. i still have some suggestions for you. To begin with, our university shouldarrange more PE classes. To continue, weshouldhave a fixed schedule for a certain time of outdoor activity. What is more, teaching faculty should be involved in the same kind of physical exercise.
Do not write the address.(10 points)
要点归纳：
1.要求写一封书信，书信格式要完整；
2.收信人为校长，语气应该恭敬、客气；要求就学校课程给校长提建议。根据题目的要求，我们可以判断本文为公务信函，语域为正式语域，即不能出现缩写、省略问句和和口语表达。
3.写信内容必须包括：指出学生体质（poor physical condition /quality）(health)堪忧（deteriorate）的现实问题，并提出改善（improve）建议(suggestion)。可以指出体质问题（problem）的具体表现，适当分析问题产生的原因并提出建议。