[实用参考]高考英语作文指导之应用文求助信.ppt

一审文体：
格式正确，语言得体；
二审时态、人称：时态前后照应人称上下一致；
三审要点：
要点齐全，逻辑清晰
2、列出提纲，构建框架结构
--- 框架
--- 要点分布
--- 逻辑关系
--- 语言（词汇、语法）
（动词、连接成分、可用句型）
3、依据提纲，扩展成文 紧扣提示，适度发挥， 扩展成句，连句成文。
I’m writing to ask you a fovor.
Would you do me a favor? 结束语 (the closing sentence)
I sincerely hope you can…
I am looking forward to your early reply.
尽量使用较丰富的词汇和语法结构。 4、核查文章，适度修改。 格式正确 要点齐全 语言准确 衔接自然
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刘晓
求助信
内容要点： ---写信目的
-->说明困难 -->请求帮助 -->感谢并期待答复
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求助信
起首句（the opening sentence）
3、依据提纲，扩展成文
Supporting + Key
❷ sign up for a reading activity and write a book review
As a keen lover of English books, I signed up for an
English origial reading activity during the summer
vocation. I wrote a book review on my favorite book
Jane Eyre.
non-restrictive clause
As a keen lover of English books, I signed up for a
reading activity during the summer vocation, where I
3、依据提纲，扩展成文 ❶ ask you a favor
highly related
I am writing to ask you a favor. loosely related
I am Li Hua, a student from our school. I am writing to ask you a favor.
Practical Writing (Request)
应用文-求助信 ---刘晓
折衷式 (Semi-Block Style)
Dear Sir or Madam,
…(Para1) …(Para2) …(Para3)
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Yours (sincerely),
Lihua
刘晓
信件写作流程
1、仔细审题，明确写作要求
sincerely hope you can help me to correct it and give me
some advice on writing.
Being poor in writing, I am worried there might be
some mistakes.Would you be so kind as to help me make
…(Para1) 写信目的
Yours respectfully,
…(Para2)
说明困难 介绍活动 请求帮助
Yours truly, Yours sincerely,
提出请求 &约定时间
感谢并期待答复
Yours (sincerely),
Li Hua
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要点罗列
❶ ask you a favor ❷ sign up for a reading activity and write a book review ❸ help me correct it /make some corrections ❹ meet after class on Friday/ spare me some time ❺ thanks and expectations
read some English originals and wrote a book review.
3、依据提纲，扩展成文
Supporting + Key
❸ help me correct it / make some corrections
I am not sure whether I have got my idea across, so I
Hope for an early reply
I would be grateful if you could…
I would appreciate it if you could…
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表示求助的常用句式 Would you be so kind as to…? Is it possible that…? I sincerely hope that you can…
写信目的 求助内容 结束语
1. 简要介绍活动
2. 提出请求
3. 提议见面时间 注意： 1. 词数80次左右
original English books English originals
2.
可适当增加细节，使行文连贯
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2、列出提纲，构建框架结构
Dear …,
根据交流对象 选用称呼和结尾礼语 Dear Sam,
some corrections?
Using a question to be polite
3、依据提纲，扩展成文
Concession
Baidu Nhomakorabea
❹ meet after class on Friday/ spare me some timession
1、仔细审题，明确写作要求 (1) 文体 求助信
假如你是李华，暑假参加了某 (2) 人称 第一人称
微信公众号（Wechat official account）举行的英语原版书阅读
(3) 时态
一般现在时 一般将来时
活动，并写了一篇书评（a book review）。现你用英语给外教 (4) 要点 Sam写一封信，希望他能帮你当面 批改书评，内容包括：