2020高考英语作文建议信课件
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高中英语作文写作——如何写建议信课件
introduction
Suggestion Letters
Theme
The importance of suggestion letters in daily communication and their application in different scenarios
Background
Importance
Suggestion letters are an important communication tool that can be used to express opinions, ideas, and suggestions. They are often used to seek improvement or change in a person, organization, or situation.
Use specific examples to illustrate your points and avoid generalizations.
Be specific
Focus on improvement
Avoid blaming
Encourage reflection
Frame your feedback as opportunities for improvement rather than criticisms.
To familiarize students with the purpose and format of suggestion letters and help them understand how to write effective letters
Objectives
Purpose
Suggestion Letters
Theme
The importance of suggestion letters in daily communication and their application in different scenarios
Background
Importance
Suggestion letters are an important communication tool that can be used to express opinions, ideas, and suggestions. They are often used to seek improvement or change in a person, organization, or situation.
Use specific examples to illustrate your points and avoid generalizations.
Be specific
Focus on improvement
Avoid blaming
Encourage reflection
Frame your feedback as opportunities for improvement rather than criticisms.
To familiarize students with the purpose and format of suggestion letters and help them understand how to write effective letters
Objectives
Purpose
英语书面表达之建议信ppt课件
认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才 能开始 对症下 药，然 后药到 病除。 近年来 国家对 扶贫工 作高度 重视， 已经展 开了“ 精准扶 贫”项 目
9. 表示解释说明的过渡词或短语:
in other words; that is (to say); namely; ..., which
means 10. 表示进行举例说明的过渡词或短语: for instance, for example, such as, like, examples include..., ...and so on, and/ or the like, take... for example 11. 表示比较对比的过渡词或短语: instead; instead of; meanwhile; on the contrary; unlike; different from...; as... as...; on the one hand, … and on the other hand, …; some…, and/ while others…; ... while...; for one thing..., and for another (thing)...; similarly; equally; similar to...; in the same way/ manner
B.
表达建议（body） 认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目
1.first，firstly，secondly…．then，after that，in the end．finally．Meanwhile, what’s more．．．
写作要点： 认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目
高考英语复习应用文写作专题建议信课件
我真诚地希望您能考虑我的建议。 3. I believe you will take my advice seriously. 我想您会
认真考虑我的建议。
4. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions useful. 我希望这些提议/建议对您有用。
• 建议信 (Letter of suggestion)
• 建议信通常是写给家人或朋友，对于对方在生活、 工作、求学等过程中遇到的实际问题或困惑提供看 法、指导或给予对方所需要的建议，或对于对方不 明智的举动进行劝勉、告诫或展开讨论。
• 1. 建议信写作注意事项
• 建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点 要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
• 参考范文1：
• Dear school administer,
• I have concerns about randomly pairing students for the oral training class with the foreign teacher.
• Random pairing may not be effective due to varying proficiency levels and learning styles. Instead, I suggest implementing a structured pairing system based on proficiency levels. This would ensure balanced practice sessions and meaningful conversations. By grouping students with similar language abilities, they can learn from and support each other. Additionally, providing guidelines or specific topics for discussion during practice sessions would enhance the learning experience. With a structured pairing system, students can make the most of the training program and improve their oral skills in a supportive environment.
认真考虑我的建议。
4. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions useful. 我希望这些提议/建议对您有用。
• 建议信 (Letter of suggestion)
• 建议信通常是写给家人或朋友，对于对方在生活、 工作、求学等过程中遇到的实际问题或困惑提供看 法、指导或给予对方所需要的建议，或对于对方不 明智的举动进行劝勉、告诫或展开讨论。
• 1. 建议信写作注意事项
• 建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点 要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
• 参考范文1：
• Dear school administer,
• I have concerns about randomly pairing students for the oral training class with the foreign teacher.
• Random pairing may not be effective due to varying proficiency levels and learning styles. Instead, I suggest implementing a structured pairing system based on proficiency levels. This would ensure balanced practice sessions and meaningful conversations. By grouping students with similar language abilities, they can learn from and support each other. Additionally, providing guidelines or specific topics for discussion during practice sessions would enhance the learning experience. With a structured pairing system, students can make the most of the training program and improve their oral skills in a supportive environment.
高中英语复习---英语应用文写作(建议信)(共33张PPT)
常用句： 1. I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite common. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是 很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅 行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之 旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容 包括： 1.你建议的线路; 2.你的理由; 3.你的祝愿。 注意：1.词数100左右; 2（.开二头）和谋结篇尾列已纲给：出，不计入总词数。 (1)说明写信的原因；(2)引出自己的建议； (3)建议的理由一； (4)建议的理由二； (5) 总结建议理由； (6) 祝愿旅游愉快。
6.祝愿您中国之行愉快。
（三）翻译要点并造句 1.很高兴收到您来信，信上说你们要来中国旅游。
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5.I would be ready to discuss about this matter with you to further deal. 我准备好和你进一步讨论这件事情。
信件启首
(1)写信的原因
高考英语建议信教学课件(共14张PPT)
if only you can follow the advice below. 如果对方遇到一般问题，可以用以下开头：
I’m very glad to receive your letter and it’s my pleasure to offer you some advice on... . And I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
enlarge vocabulary
remember Chinese words improve spoken Chinese
How to write a letter of giving advice?
三段式：
Beginning：
suggestions
state your purposaedvice
Ideas
take a Chinese course watch TV and read books, newspapers in Chinese learn and sing Chinese songs
make more Chinese friends
Why learn from… practice with…
Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help improve
your spoken Chinese.
具体建议和理由
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. 总结，表希望
First, it is important to ____. As you’ll ____. Then, it also helps if you ____. Besides, it should be a good idea to ____. Because____. you can also ____. I’m sure that_____.
I’m very glad to receive your letter and it’s my pleasure to offer you some advice on... . And I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
enlarge vocabulary
remember Chinese words improve spoken Chinese
How to write a letter of giving advice?
三段式：
Beginning：
suggestions
state your purposaedvice
Ideas
take a Chinese course watch TV and read books, newspapers in Chinese learn and sing Chinese songs
make more Chinese friends
Why learn from… practice with…
Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help improve
your spoken Chinese.
具体建议和理由
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. 总结，表希望
First, it is important to ____. As you’ll ____. Then, it also helps if you ____. Besides, it should be a good idea to ____. Because____. you can also ____. I’m sure that_____.
高中英语写作建议信完整ppt课件
2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could ... 3.I would like to sugges.t/recommend that...
• 4.If I were you, I would .... • 5.When it comes to such a situation,
I would like to suggest that you should ... • 6.As to..., I suggest that you should....
.
建议信结尾常用句式
1. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 2. 2. I hope what’s mentioned above might be
步
骤 Step3. Form a passage and polish
.
范文讲解：
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。 假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类 图书(popular science books)和文学类图 (literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120个 词的信，推荐这类书，并分别说明推荐理由。
need any help.
.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；
整
暗示性
体
三 2. Body
部 分
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
小结；呼应主题 .
书面表达如何写？ 三 Step 1 List the key points
• 4.If I were you, I would .... • 5.When it comes to such a situation,
I would like to suggest that you should ... • 6.As to..., I suggest that you should....
.
建议信结尾常用句式
1. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 2. 2. I hope what’s mentioned above might be
步
骤 Step3. Form a passage and polish
.
范文讲解：
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。 假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类 图书(popular science books)和文学类图 (literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120个 词的信，推荐这类书，并分别说明推荐理由。
need any help.
.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；
整
暗示性
体
三 2. Body
部 分
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
小结；呼应主题 .
书面表达如何写？ 三 Step 1 List the key points
2024届高考英语应用文--建议信写作指导课件
【高分技巧要记牢】 根据考生书面表达常见错误及评卷要求，我们不难总结出行之有效的“一
式、两头、三写、四关”等高分技巧，即写对格式、写好两头、规范书写等。 一式|写对格式 要求记住英语应用文常用文体的基本写作格式和特点。
要求灵活运用熟悉的句式结构和表达手法，使文章开头和结 两头|写好两头
尾的表达生动准确，引人入胜，耐人寻味。
3. go out to visit some places and enjoy Chinese food to suit to the new environment
Step 3 Expanding (扩词成句）
Para 1（Beginning）
I’m sorry to hear that you are having a hard time. I understand how you feel. It is common for you to feel lonely because you are living in an entirely new environment. Here are some suggestions.
【篇中句】
1. You’d better do / You are supposed to do…, which will help you… 2. It would be a good idea to do…, by doing this you will... 3. I highly recommend that… 4. If I were you, I would do… 5. Why not do…? 6. In this way, you will not only… but also….
also….
高中英语作文写作——如何写建议信 PPT课件 图文
______(问题). First and for the most, _______(建议一). In
addition, _____(建议二). What’s more _____(建议三). I hope you’ll find these proposals useful. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
I hope you’ll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with you / your ______(祝愿).
将介词短语提前（全倒装）
Next to a primary school stands/lies/is our school , faced with / facing a main street.
润色小建议
可将stand next to替换为高级词汇/短语 be located next to (near/beside/by) border/adjoin vt. be adjacent to与…毗邻
主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行分析并说 明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)
结尾(ending)---- 呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion.)
4. 注意事项：
1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出 建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要 礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、 具有合理性和说服力； 2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、 经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建 议； 3）符合英文信件的基本格式； 4）基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。
addition, _____(建议二). What’s more _____(建议三). I hope you’ll find these proposals useful. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
I hope you’ll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with you / your ______(祝愿).
将介词短语提前（全倒装）
Next to a primary school stands/lies/is our school , faced with / facing a main street.
润色小建议
可将stand next to替换为高级词汇/短语 be located next to (near/beside/by) border/adjoin vt. be adjacent to与…毗邻
主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行分析并说 明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)
结尾(ending)---- 呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion.)
4. 注意事项：
1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出 建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要 礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、 具有合理性和说服力； 2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、 经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建 议； 3）符合英文信件的基本格式； 4）基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。
高中英语作文 如何写建议信 ppt课件(完美版)
better do … ★ In my opinion , you can do …
3建议信结尾常用句式： ★ I hope you will find these ideas useful . ★ As things goes on , people ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱill do … ★ I hope what’s mentioned above might be
helpful … ★ I believe that if you follow my
advice ,you will do … ★ I believe , with your determination , you
can manage to do …
1.成为世界上经济增长速度最快的国 家，创 造了世 界经济 增长史 上的新 奇迹。 2.社会生产力高速发展，人民生活发 生翻天 覆地的 变化。 3、掌握十一届三中全会是伟大的历史 转折 4、理解我国在农村和城市改革的成果 5.所有制 形式单 一，排 斥多种 经济形 式和经 营方式 。 6.经营决 策集中 在国家 手中， 企业缺 乏自主 权。 7.分配实 行统收 统支， 国家统 负盈亏 ，吃“ 大锅饭 ”。 8.否定商 品经济 的存在 ，否定 市场及 价值规 律对经 济的调 节作用 。
if you take my advice… ★ Here are some tips to help you . ★ I think you can make it if you follow the
advice below .
2.表达建议常用句式： ★ Firstly , why not do… ? If you do this ,
★没有逻辑， 东一榔头，西一棒槌。 ★时间，时刻的表达不准确。
3建议信结尾常用句式： ★ I hope you will find these ideas useful . ★ As things goes on , people ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱill do … ★ I hope what’s mentioned above might be
helpful … ★ I believe that if you follow my
advice ,you will do … ★ I believe , with your determination , you
can manage to do …
1.成为世界上经济增长速度最快的国 家，创 造了世 界经济 增长史 上的新 奇迹。 2.社会生产力高速发展，人民生活发 生翻天 覆地的 变化。 3、掌握十一届三中全会是伟大的历史 转折 4、理解我国在农村和城市改革的成果 5.所有制 形式单 一，排 斥多种 经济形 式和经 营方式 。 6.经营决 策集中 在国家 手中， 企业缺 乏自主 权。 7.分配实 行统收 统支， 国家统 负盈亏 ，吃“ 大锅饭 ”。 8.否定商 品经济 的存在 ，否定 市场及 价值规 律对经 济的调 节作用 。
if you take my advice… ★ Here are some tips to help you . ★ I think you can make it if you follow the
advice below .
2.表达建议常用句式： ★ Firstly , why not do… ? If you do this ,
★没有逻辑， 东一榔头，西一棒槌。 ★时间，时刻的表达不准确。
高中英语写作-建议信.ppt
and express yourself well in Chinese
I wish you great success and rapid progress in learning Chinese．I am
expecting to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Zhang Peng
• It is necessary for you to ... • In my opinion, it would be better to ... • As far as I'm concerned, you'd better ... • If I were you, I would ... • It should be a good idea to ... • What's more, it will be helpful to you that ... • Why not ...
Li Ming
范文（3） (One possible version)
I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
段尾常用表达
• I hope you will find these suggestions
useful / helpful/ practical. • I believe that you will take my suggestions
into account / consideration. • I'd appreciate if you accept my advice. • Waiting for your good news. • I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
I wish you great success and rapid progress in learning Chinese．I am
expecting to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Zhang Peng
• It is necessary for you to ... • In my opinion, it would be better to ... • As far as I'm concerned, you'd better ... • If I were you, I would ... • It should be a good idea to ... • What's more, it will be helpful to you that ... • Why not ...
Li Ming
范文（3） (One possible version)
I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
段尾常用表达
• I hope you will find these suggestions
useful / helpful/ practical. • I believe that you will take my suggestions
into account / consideration. • I'd appreciate if you accept my advice. • Waiting for your good news. • I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
2020年英语最新高考建议信写作讲义设计课件(共13张)
You usually don’t care about yourself but it is a different situation now. I believe you will take my suggestions into serious account.
yours LIBiblioteka uaThank you行为表达敬意的同时,作为儒励学子,难 道我们 不应该 比外教 做得更 好一些 吗? 其实,想要成为一名“讲文明,树新
2020年最新 高考建议信写作
幽兰英语
Task of the class
1. learn to write a letter of suggestion properly.
2. Pay much attention to the style of a letter and typical expressions .
Dear dad,
I'm writing to remind you to take my suggestions seriously when you are busy with work. They are as follows.
Firstly,be sure to wear a mask in public . we all know that the novel coronavirus is a disease which is Human-to-human transmission .Everyone is in danger. .At present its rapid rise and spread has created a new urgency in the world though the numbers of the infected and the suspected are reducing in China. According to the doctors,What we ordinary people can do first is to wear a mask in public ,which can act as a door closed to the virus . Therefore, don’t take off your mask casually.
yours LIBiblioteka uaThank you行为表达敬意的同时,作为儒励学子,难 道我们 不应该 比外教 做得更 好一些 吗? 其实,想要成为一名“讲文明,树新
2020年最新 高考建议信写作
幽兰英语
Task of the class
1. learn to write a letter of suggestion properly.
2. Pay much attention to the style of a letter and typical expressions .
Dear dad,
I'm writing to remind you to take my suggestions seriously when you are busy with work. They are as follows.
Firstly,be sure to wear a mask in public . we all know that the novel coronavirus is a disease which is Human-to-human transmission .Everyone is in danger. .At present its rapid rise and spread has created a new urgency in the world though the numbers of the infected and the suspected are reducing in China. According to the doctors,What we ordinary people can do first is to wear a mask in public ,which can act as a door closed to the virus . Therefore, don’t take off your mask casually.
高考英语写作之建议信课件
我希望您会发现这些建议是实用的。如果您仍然感到
困惑，请随时与我联系。
建议信写作模版
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建议信写作训练 Letter of
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I hope you will find these suggestions practical. If you
are still confused, please feel free to contact me.
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开头： 从你的来信中，我了解到你遇到了关于…的问题, 下面是我给你提 供的一些建议。
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我希望这些建议对你有帮助，如果你依然有困惑，随时联系我。
【词汇】：
建议有用：find these感s谢u您g下g载e小st木io头n平s台h上e提l供p的ful / practical…
PPT作品，为了您和小木头以及原
满足你的需求：suit
创作者的利益，请勿复制、传播、
/销m售，e否et则将yo承u担r法律ne责e任d！小木
困惑，请随时与我联系。
建议信写作模版
感谢您下载小木头平台上提供的 PPT作品，为了您和小木头以及原 创作者的利益，请勿复制、传播、 销售，否则将承担法律责任！小木 头将对作品进行维权，按照传播下 载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿！
建议信写作训练 Letter of
创作者的利益，请勿复制、传播、
式 级 销售，否则将承担法律责任！小木
头将对作品进行维权，按照传播下 载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿！
I hope you will find these suggestions practical. If you
are still confused, please feel free to contact me.
创销头作售将者，对的否作利则品益将进，承行句式请担维勿法权复律，升级制责按、任照传！传播小播、木下
载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿！
开头： 从你的来信中，我了解到你遇到了关于…的问题, 下面是我给你提 供的一些建议。
From your letter I know you have some trouble in … Here are my sugge感PPs谢Tt作您io品下n，载为s小了木f您o头和r平小台y木上o头提u以供.及的原
结尾：
我希望这些建议对你有帮助，如果你依然有困惑，随时联系我。
【词汇】：
建议有用：find these感s谢u您g下g载e小st木io头n平s台h上e提l供p的ful / practical…
PPT作品，为了您和小木头以及原
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高中英语作文写作——如何写建议信PPT课件
regard.
4. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider
my suggestions.
5. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.
6. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions
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第一步：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但 审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：
思考的问题 第几人称？（person） 文章的体裁是什么？
样题分析 第一人称
一封信
要写的文章主题是什么 (topic) 建议政府采取措施舒缓交
通拥挤的状况
怎样安排信息点的顺序？ (order)
2. I hope you will find these proposals/ suggestions/
recommendations practical/ useful/ helpful.
3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this
following action. 9. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to
suggest that you should…
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C.建议信结尾常用句式
1. I believe you will take my advice into account/ consideration.
and I will try to make some conductive suggestions. 7. You have asked me for my advice about/on …
高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)
Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
高三英语书面表达建议信课件
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Solution: Learn grammar rules
Read more English original works and excellent sample essays to cultivate language sense and reduce grammar errors.
Learn the principle of subject verb consistency to avoid situations where the subject and predicate are inconsistent.
Master the usage and variation rules of commonly used tenses, such as simple present tense, simple past tense, future tense, etc.
Content: Fan Wensan's letter provides clear and useful information, addressing the reader's needs effectively He/She includes relevant examples to illustrate his/her points
Consider the other person's feelings and stance when asking questions to enhance communication effectiveness.
Excellent Sample Analysis
Content: Fan Wenyi's letter is well structured, with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion He/She uses appropriate vocabulary and presence structures to express his/her ideas
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丰富开头篇：介词短语
我喜欢摄影，来记录很多美好的瞬间.
I like photograph,
can record many wonderful moments.
A.for
B.which
C.since 引导原因状语从句+完整的句子
这句话哪个词可以升级？
用如此以至于造句
【2017全国II】假定你是李华想邀请Herry一起参观剪纸艺术展请你给他写封邮件， 内容包括艺术展，请你给他写邮件内容包我想邀请你参加。 这个艺术展是如此的有意义，以至于我们每个月都要举办一次。
As it is of great significance,... so that句型
因果关系是在写作中很好的句式升 级
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【2015全国II】假定你是李华计划和同学们去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人过重阳节 (the double ninth Festival)请给外教露西写封邮件邀他一同前往，内容包括 1.出发及返回时间;2.活动:包饺子、表演节目等。
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【2017年全国I卷】假定你是李华正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语请写封邮件告 知下次的上课计划 内容包括:3课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。
It is important for you to learn Chinese history of Tang Dynasty. 划线部分可升级为? It is of great importance for you...
beneficial---benefit。有益处的
valuable---value有价值的 significant---significance
e.g.It is of great benefit for you to do... I often do morning exercise,which is of great benefit for me.
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高分作文你得这么写 •结构:分三段(看的出你分段了才行) •内容:要点一个都不能少 •语言不犯低级错误，多用高级词句 •评分细则说了算
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写作常见错误
• 不分大小写(句号后面小写) • 只写从句，不写主句(写了一长串从句，忘了写主句)严重会让判卷老师认为不分主句从句，20
参加剪纸艺术展有利于你了解中国传统文化。
Obviously participating in the paper-cutting art exhibition is of great benefit for you to have a better understanding of traditional Chinese culture. 对中国传统文化有更好的理解
believe consider【常用】 hold argue(争论) assume(假设)
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very写作升级 • fairly相当的 • extremely极其的 • extraordinarily非凡的 English study is very important. English study is extremely important.
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污染很严重。
think写作升级
Environment pollution is serious. 写成被动污染被越来越多的专家和教授认为很严重。
Environment contamination is thought very serious by more and more experts and professors. 你觉得这句话中需要替换哪些单词？
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many&much的写作升级
• a great many • a large number of • a variety of多种多样的 • a growing number of越来越多的 • an increasing number of大量的 • an increasing amount of • much • a large amount of 加不可数名词 • a large(great) deal of 加不可数名词
advisable明智的, essential重要的 significant有意义的.vital极其重要的。
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be+adj=be of great+抽象名词
是不是所有的形容词只要有名词形式就可以套用呢？
important---importance
这个活动是如此有趣以至于我们参加了。
This activity was so popular that we all take part in it.
试着用一下so that的倒装
So popular was this activity that...(照抄)
你的思维决定了你写的句子 • n是如此那样以至于…… • 高级思维如此那样是n以至于......
句式也不要反复用，用过一次定从 下一次就不要用了
• What we all know is that…
• It is widely acknowledged(承认) that a great many forinners are learnning Chinese thesedays.
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段首句我们要写亮点句，如何将这两句话写成一句呢？
To begin with，you should learn more about Chinese table manners，which is of great significance for you to be a guest in Chinese friend's home.
下列句子表达正确的是。 A.Learn English is very important. B.I believe do exercise is necessary C.It is of great value for teenager to read many books. D.It is of great valuable for teenages to read many books.
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丰富开头篇：副词
Obviously,明显的,Apparently,(ap+父母)显然的。副词修饰一句话 形修名副修动形句 二段结尾：Consequently=therefore=As a result=so=thus=As a consequence, 介词短语开头
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参加写作升级
• attended sth • join in sth • participate in sth • be/get (actively)involved in sth
I want to take part in more activities. 升级：I have a great desire to participate in more activities.
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英语作文专题(一)
句型升级
丰富开头篇：众所周知
很多外国人都在学习汉语。 ，很多外国人都在学习汉语。
• As we all know that...
• As is known to all,...(as引导的定语从翻译为正如)
• It is widely acknowledged(承认) that... • It is widely believed that...
分绝对没戏。 • 乱用非谓语动词(Knowing that....，只是半句，然后后半句不写了)
• 下面表达正确的是，给主人带个合适的礼物是必要的/明智的 • A.Bring a proper gift to the host is necessary • B.It necessary for you to bring a proper gift to the host. • C.It's necessary to bringing in a prepare gift to the host. • D. It’s advisable to bring a people proper gift to the host.
下列句子表达正确的是。 A.Learn【Learning】 English is very important. B.I believe do【doing】 exercises is necessary.
C.It is of great value for teenager to read many books. D.It is of great valuable【value】 for teenages to read many books.
英语作文专题(一)
词汇升级
空白太多 要求接近满最多空一行
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阅卷时间10~15秒所以 一定要在段首写出亮点 没有低级错误否则即使 有亮点也是18-19分 写错了必须划掉写错划 一道横线就可以了