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2010年雅思大作文点评

1月10日、4月5日、4月15日、6月4日、8月5日、8月14日、9月16日、3月20日、1月10日Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to deal with. Others, however, think that each individual should take some actions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.考题分析：本题是一道典型的雅思 (IELTS) 环境类写作考题。

在历届雅思 (IELTS) 写作环境类话题中，出题思路主要有以下三个方面：1.环境保护是谁的责任？考题给出的选项通常会有个人、公司、国家、国际合作等(例如 04 年 5 月 15 日， 0-7 年 2 月 3 日考题) 。

2.如何保护环境？考题通常会给出某个方案问其正确与否(如 06 年 6 月 17 日， 08 年 6 月 14 日考题) 。

3.为什么人们明知环境正在被破坏却不动声色例？(如 08 年 9 月 13 日 A 类议论文)假如考前对以上三方面的雅思 (IELTS) 写作真题都思考过，相信本题一定会变的很简单，实际上只要把一些理由进行组合就可以了。

由于考题的提问形式是“ Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ”所以，既要讨论到个人能够采取何种行动解决一些环境问题，也要讨论为什么有些环境问题个人无法解决(即只有政府或公司才能解决) 。

Sample Answer:It is true that our tiny individual actions often seem insignificant compared to the scale and complexity of global environmental problems such as pollution, deforestation and depletion of natural resources. But that does not relieve our duty as individuals to do as much as we can to deal with these problems.Individual actions, small as they may be, can prove more effective than we realize. We can avoid driving the car, and take public transit, walk, or bicycle instead. This will reduce the use of fossil fuels and cut pollution. Saving energy at home, like turning on the air conditioner only when we have to, or turning water heater down a few degrees, is also ultimately good for the environment. Individual actions can also turn into united powers when, for example, the whole neighborhood is mobilized to participate in a local campaign to oppose environmentally damaging policies.There are, however, obstacles that stand in the way of individual action towards environmental conservation. The first obstacle is the lack of professional knowledge needed to cope with serious environmental issues like soil erosion and salinity, which require a significant amount of investigation and research. Another obstacle which makes individual action almost impossible is when an environmental emergency or accident happens, e.g. an oil spill near the bord der line, which would necessitate government intervention or even international coordination.So, in conclusion, when it comes to environmental problems, individual actions are indispensable in the problem solving process. But the most pressing and complicated problems go far beyond an individual’s capability and so require the concerted effort of the government as well as the global community2010 年雅思大作文点评:不够尊重老人的原因2010-6-4There is not enough respect for the elderly people. What are the causes and what problems does this phenomenon create?There is a growing tendency nowadays for some people to regard the elderly people as a troublesome group. Gradually, this leads to not revere (这是啥意思？！ lead to 后面接doing ！) the elderly people in diverse conditions. Yet in my opinion, instead of contempting every one should treat them as our treasure (这句话本身就有点变扭，感觉很怪！) . But, what causes the promble? Here i give two major reasons (这句太废话了，把两个理由总结一下，写出来会比较好) .On the one hand, some elder people (第一段用的是 elderly people ，这里怎么又变了？！ ) live without any income. In addition, they are weak even some of them cannot look after themselves (这分明是两个句子，怎么可以写在一起！ ) .Thus, they have to be given a hand. A recent statistics ( statistics 这里好像应该是复数吧) shows that 90 percent of the elderly people need to provide (应该是被动语态吧) the allowance and nurses. It costs 80 billions ( billion 不可数的！ ) yuan every year. So the elderly people become a burden to the society. On the other hand ,the young are to blame. Their consciousness of respecting the elderly people should be promoted. What is worse, they don't regard anyone.Nevertheness (应该是 nevertheless ) , for the above reasons, we also can take immediate and specific measures to cope with them. Because no one can deny the fact that a person's moral( 应该是 morality 吧 ) is the most important aspect of the society. If we lose it,I (人称不要变来变去) can't image, (这里逗号多余) what may happen to our society. How terrible it is! As is known to everyone, we are all getting old. But, we may not being esteemed. A yeasty world is proceeding.To sum up ,the reasons and problems for respecting the elderly people are many. I have simply pointed out some of the more obvious ones. However, it is certain that if the whole of society pays more attention to the solicitude of the elderly people, the issue will not being a trouble again.语言分析：1. 整篇文章没有什么精彩的长句或复杂句，所以不太可能上 7 分；2. 低级错误或者明显错误(红色部分)很多，所以也就 4-5 分的水平；3. 错误岁多，但不影响理解，还是能够看得懂作者的观点，所以应该是 5 分的水平。

雅思高分范文之年轻人是否应该保持传统

雅思高分范文之年轻人是否应该保持传统写作题目Some people think that young people should follow traditions of their society, and others think that young people should be free to behave as individuals.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.题目大致意思：到底年轻人(1)是应该遵守传统，(2)还是可以被允许有自由的行为?隐形模板：起3承6转6合3起--允许年轻人自由取舍传统，视传统为历史的导师，而不是未来的狱警。

承--(舍其劣)年轻人自由抗拒不好的传统束缚，如此社会才能进化。

转--(取其优)全力保卫优良的传统价值，如此相传社会的文化遗产。

合--年轻人在行为上分辨理性的活传统与非理性的死传统。

IELTS Example EssayEvery generation, young and old, should be allowed freedom to deal with the breaking down of certain patterns and standards being handed down from the past. As individuals, young people are particularly keen to the need to end whatever tradition they think is unreasonable for the society. All rebellious minds think alike--tradition is a guide for the past but not a jailer for the future.Too often young men and women are enthusiastic about the evolution of beliefs and practices of their society, and their behaviors tend to challenge a number of elements of tradition. For that matter, mental independence is required because without an amount of freedom, tradition would be only an explanation for acting in conformity without thinking independently.Accordingly, young people ought not to be forced to express their new feelings in a mummified form, otherwise the evolution in tradition could not happen. The point is that not just because something is traditional, so there is reason enough to do it. It is good, however, for young people to continue a worthwhile tradition, and it is also good not to be captive of an unreasonable tradition which is not worth having. Although social bondage persists, it makes a difference if young people are permitted to think and act in such a way as different from that of a conservative mind in which the word 'tradition' means a shortcut to thinking or an excuse for acting.Probably a society can only successfully function with traditional values--diverse customs, thoughts, lifestyles, religion, music, dance, arts and languages, among other things of culture. Young people had better learn that modern traditions are built on the past just as the past was builton the times that went before it. Traditions bring continuity to one's existence in a society, even though this sort of continuity is precisely what has been increasingly lost through modernity.Thus, it behooves young individuals to preserve their traditions of value by safeguarding against the negative influence from various factors such as industrialization, globalization, and assimilation or marginalization of special cultural groups. It certainly makes patriotic sense that young people's love for traditions worth continuing always strengthens the well-being of the society and never weakens all that is meant to identify themselves with their country. Good tradition being a good guide, young people, however rebellious, should not be entirely negative about the past with all its enduring heritages and necessary evils.In conclusion, since a modern society is not supposed to be a dead community, young people may behave freely in treating tradition as the living faith of the dead and not as the dead faith of the living. They should not believe in traditions simply because many beliefs and practices have been handed down for many generations, but should instead observe and analyze anything that agrees with reason and is conductive to the good and benefit of the society. It takes a lot of history to make a tradition, so the best of which must be accepted and lived up to, from generation to generation.更多资讯请登录新航道烟台雅思培训官方网站：/。

慎小嶷：十天突破IELTS写作完整真题库与6-9分范文全解(

Day 8法制进行时：犯罪类真题库与各
分数段范文剖析
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Education类各分数段范文剖析
解读Education类真题库
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Technology类各分数段范文深入讲解
解读Technology类真题库
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Media类各分数段范文剖析
解读Media类真题库
学有余力者
Government类各分数段范文剖析
解读Government类真题库
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Development类各分数段范文剖析
解读Development 类真题库
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Culture类各分数段范文深入讲解
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Environment类各分数段范文剖析
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IELTS写作全真题速查指南
Day 9走路去纽约：全球化类真题库与各分数段范文剖析
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雅思大作文万能例子

雅思大作文万能例子英文回答：As an AI language model, I am capable of providing examples and explanations for various topics, including IELTS writing tasks. Here are some examples that can be used as versatile examples in IELTS writing:1. Education:In my opinion, education is the cornerstone of a successful society. For instance, in many countries, education is highly valued and considered as a ticket to a better future. In China, the phrase "读万卷书，行万里路" (dú wàn juǎn shū, xíng wàn lǐ lù) translate s to "read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles," emphasizing the importance of education and exploration. This shows that education is not only about acquiring knowledge but also about gaining experiences and broadening one's horizons.中文回答：就我个人而言，我认为教育是一个成功社会的基石。

官方指南雅思范文(完整大作文附赠部分解析)

Test 1Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.1.For most people, when they get their first job they have little idea whether or not they will remain in the same organisation throughout their working life.2. If they decide to change, they need to consider how this will impact on their career overall.注意开头段写法，说明背景句+观点的方式已经被雅思官方认可，而且一般就两句话。

但是这两句话作者并不是随意的简单同意替换，句型上来说一定要丰富。

比如作者用了一个用了一个时间状语从句+一个条件状语从句。

平时在行文练习中，一定要注意开头段的长句子输出，如果大家无法用一个句子说清楚背景，可以用两个句子，介绍背景加题目观点。

另外一个句子来表达自己观点。

从现在官方范文来看，几乎所有开头段都表达了作者的观点。

3. People who stay with the same organisation will have the advantage of a thoroughly understanding how it works and also becoming familiar with the staff and processes.4. If they work hard, their promotion prospects are good and there is likely to be greater job security with a promise of a good pension when they retire.5. Employers value loyalty and may offer additional incentives to long-term employees, including bonuses and reward schemes.第3句，中心句，表达长期从事一份工作的主要好处第4句，中心句的拓展，解释在长期工作的情况下，如果工作努力，又会得到什么好处第5句，解释雇主对忠心员工提供的好处, including的用法一定要学会别动不动就such as很多同学一遇到稍微抽象的问题，就不知道该怎么拓展了。

英语一大作文多少分

英语一大作文多少分
在不同的英语考试体系中，如雅思(IELTS)、托福(TOEFL)、大学入学考试等，英语作文的分值会有所不同。

以下是一些常见英语考试中作文部分的分值情况：
1. 雅思(IELTS): 雅思考试的写作部分分为两个任务，Task 1 和Task 2。

总分是9分，写作部分的分数通常占总分的四分之一，即
2.25分。

但是，考生的实际得分会根据写作的表现进行四舍五入。

2. 托福(TOEFL): 托福考试的写作部分包括综合写作和独立写作两个任务。

总分是30分，全部用于评估写作能力。

3. 剑桥英语考试: 如CPE（剑桥高级英语证书）等，写作部分的分值会根据具体考试的评分标准而定，但通常是总分的一部分。

4. 美国大学入学考试: 如SAT和ACT，这些考试中的写作部分通常是可选的，分值也会根据考试的具体评分标准而定。

5. 中国大学英语四六级考试(CET-4/6): 四六级考试的写作部分通常占总分的一定比例，具体分值会根据考试的评分标准而定。

6. 英国大学入学考试: 如A-Level英语考试，写作部分的分值会根据不同的试卷和任务而有所不同。

请注意，不同的考试机构和不同的考试类型可能会有不同的评分标准和分值分配。

考生应该根据自己参加的具体考试来了解作文部分的分值。

雅思考试大精选作文范文格式3篇

雅思考试大精选作文范文格式3篇篇一：雅思考试大精选作文范文格式【简介】：Ｓomepeoplepreferplanningforthefuturewhileothersarguethatwesh ouldfocusonthepresent.ＷhatisyouropinionＧivereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamp Ｓome people prefer planning for the future while others argue that we should focus on the present. Ｗhat is your opinion Ｇive reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.真习题大意：有人认为应该计划将来，也有人认为重点就是现在。

你同意哪一种想法请说出你的道理，并却从个人的知识或经验中，举出例子来证明。

Ｅxample Ｗriting:Ｔhe present is where everything begins and there is no time like the present. Ｗithout being prisoners of the past, winners prefer working in the changing present toward the unpredictable future. Ｔhe trouble with some people is that they are planning only for the unforeseeable time to nete and not facing the reality now.Ｐaradoxically, the future is now. Ｉt is more realisticto regard life as an awareness of the present rather than a prediction beyond knowledge. Ｓince the future is anybody's guess, "one today is worth two tomorrows," to quote Ｂenjamin Ｆranklin. Ｔherefore, the way we live and the way we work ought to keep in step with the present leading to the future. Ｔhe logic may be that we can only learn from the past, and on the other hand the future does not affect us now as much as does the present. Ｉt also makes sense that the way to plan tomorrow is to enjoy living and working as wisely and beautifully today as possible.Ｏur argument for focusing on today may as well be based on the fact that the present does not sit still for a portrait, but is changing constantly. Ｃhange being the law of life, concentrating our mind on what is happening in the present is probably more true to life than dreaming of the future. Ｉt means that life for us today is always beneting and never being. Ｏbviously, today has its own problems to be solved, so there is no need to be over troubled about the future. Ａccordingly, it is better not to foresee the future but beconcerned about taking care of the present. Ｉt is one thing to prefer planning for the future, but it is quite another to control the change that follows soon enough.Ｆocusing on the present is more important than merely planning for the future because right now is one of the moments we are influencing our future. Ｐractically, we should see the future in the present which carries more weight in real life. Ｉt stands to reason that the future actually begins now.篇二：雅思写作大精选作文范文格式智课网ＩＥＬＴＳ备考资料雅思写作大精选作文范文格式摘要：雅思写作大精选作文范文格式，小马过河又为大家带来福利啦，在备考雅思写作的时候是不是很想多看多读一些好的大精选作文范文格式呢，今天小编就为大家带来了雅思写作大精选作文范文格式，希望考鸭们都能下载学习哦。

雅思Simon写作大小范文(高清PDF解析使用经验)

雅思Simon写作大小范文（高清PDF解析使用经验）我来讲一下我的学习方法:写作我应该是比较有发言权的。

网上五花八门的雅思写作教程一大堆，别用了这个换那个，把思维全搞乱了，只需要认准一个，一开始先把自己习惯的写作思维方式定下来，后面就只用积累素材就好了。

雅思作文真的不是像洪水猛兽一样可怕的东西。

我全程用的是雅思前考官 Simon 的写作结构和idea第一步，去看他的simon writing，了解一下雅思写作从头到位到底是什么结构，该如何构思，在构思过后该怎么下笔才能让整篇文章连接下来。

然后：①大作文：Simon的一篇自编书籍《idea books for IELTS topics》总结了雅思作文24个topic，关于家庭，政府，教育之类的各种话题素材，每个话题都给出了简洁精辟的idea，这些话题一定要一遍遍的过，亲测非常有效！我这次考的题目是“男人和女人之间对家庭和工作有各自分工”，我用的就是他给的Gender role（性别角色）这个topic里的观点。

此外，我分享的资料里面还有他的范文，我希望大家在读他的范文的时候不要去死记硬背，要去看里面可以模仿和运用的词汇和短语（比如“持续增长”这个词，可以用growing代替continues to increase），Simon的表达和用词非常地道，这些词汇都是可以用来学习在写作里面是要加分的哦！他还有28篇流传很久的经典范文，涵盖了几乎所有的题型，我建议是先不要看范文自己对着题目先写，最后在用范文对比看自己的薄弱点在哪里。

切记不要忘记了他的素材技巧书的24个话题，写的时候去翻前面提到的Simon的idea，看过idea之后再去写，你会发现和自己之前比起来有质的飞跃。

准备一个专门的作文本，每次自己写完之后对照Simon写的把自己的句型和词汇用的不好的都记下来，等复习的时候可以及时发现自己的缺点。

当然我们有时候很难完全自己发现问题，可以去找专门的雅思老师给你修改作文，不是说每篇都得改，你可以根据个人情况自己决定。

剑桥雅思大作文(A类)题目+范文

剑桥雅思作文题目-大作文目录IELTS 8 (2)Test 1 (2)Test 2 (2)Test 3 (2)Test 4 (2)IELTS 7 (2)Test 1 (2)Test 2 P165 (3)Test 3 P167 (4)Test 4 (5)IELTS 6 (6)Test 1 (6)Test 2 (6)Test 3 (7)Test 4 P99 P168 (8)IELTS 5 (8)Test 1 (8)Test 2 (8)Test 3 (9)Test 4 P99 P169 (9)IELTS 4 (10)Test 1 (10)Test 2 (10)Test 3 (11)Test 4 (11)IELTS 3 (12)Test 1 (12)Test 2 (12)Test 3 (13)Test 4 (13)IELTS 8Test 1Task 1 Pie chart TableTask 2 Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Test 2Task 1 Pie chartTask 2 Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed become of technology.In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?Has this become a positive or negative development?Test 3Task 1 Process diagramTask 2 Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problem.To what extent do you agree or disagree?What other measures do you think might be effective?Test 4Task 1 Line graphTask 2 In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?IELTS 7Test 1Task 1 TableTask 2 It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talent, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.文：The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sport, art or music.Obviously, education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills, including those associated with sport, art or music. So from our won school experience, we can find plenty of evidence to support the view that a child can acquire these skills with continued teaching and guided practice.However, some people believe that innate talent is what differentiates a person who has been trained to play a sport or an instrument, from those who become good players. In other words, there is more to the skill than a good learned technique, and this extra talent cannot be taught, no matter how good the teacher or how frequently a child practices.I personally think that some people do have talents that are probably inherited via their genes. Such talents can give individuals a facility for certain skills that allow them to excel, while more hard-working students never manage to reach a comparable level. But, as with all questions of nature versus nurture, they are not mutually exclusive. Good musicians or artists and exceptional sports stars have probably succeeded because of both good training and natural talent. Without the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive, and without the training, the children would not learn how to exploit and develop their talent.In conclusion, I agree that any child can be taught particular skills, but to be really good in areas such as music, art or sport, then some natural talent is required. (282words)Test 2 P165Task 1 Line graphTask 2 Some people believed that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on punishment.Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.文：This is a thoughtful and well-argued response to the task. The candidate examines the opposing views of the topic and gives a clear opinion that is well developed and supported. To reach the highest band a more clearly-signaled conclusion would be needed. The argument is well organized and linking is well-managed throughout. The development of the answer is not helped, however, by poor control of paragraphing which sometimes confused the links across different sections. This is a weak feature of the script which limits the overall rating. In contrast, an excellent range of vocabulary is used with a sophisticated level of control and only rare slips. The range of structures is also wide and most sentencesare accurate and precise, but there are some errors and omissions. These, however, are only minor and do not affect communication.Band 7.5 score:Fixing punishments for each type of crime has been a debatable issue. There are many arguments supporting both views, those for and those against fixed punishments.On the one hand, fixed punishments will have a deterring effect on society. Individuals knowing that they will be subject to a certain punishment if they are convicted with a given crime will reconsider committing this act in the first place.This deterring effect also leads to social stability and security, through minimizing the number of crimes committed.If people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of a reason for having committed the crime they are accused of, penal decisions would be largely arbitrary. This would result into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts.On the other hand, taking the circumstances of a crime and its motivation into consideration is a prerequisite for establishing and ensuring justice and equity.A person killing in self-defense cannot be compared to a serial killer, moving from one victim to the next. In my opinion an intermediary position between both solutions is the perfect way to establish and ensure justice and equity.There have to be fixed punishments for all crimes. However, criminal laws have to provide for a minimum and a maximum for the punishment and the laws also have to foresee certain cases of exemptions.An example for setting minimum and maximum penalties is Competition Law where a person being held liable of a crime under this law will be convicted to pay a fine, according to the harm caused by the violation and the profit gained by the violator through committing the crime.As for the exemptions, in some countries the law exempts thiefs stealing food during a period of famine taking into consideration the distress and hunger.Also, a person killing in self-defense will be exempted from punishment. (325)Test 3 P167Task 1 Bat chartTask 2 As most people spend a major of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.What factors contribute to job satisfaction?How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?文：Nowadays many adults have full-time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent doing such jobs is very high. So feelings about one’s job must reflect how an individual feels about his or her life as whole, and because of this, job satisfaction is indeed very important for the wellbeing of that person.Employees get job satisfaction in a number of ways. Firstly, a person needs to feel that they are doing valued and valuable work, so positive feedback from superiors is very important in this respect. A sense of fulfillment is also encouraged if a worker feels the job is worth doing because it contributes to the society or the economy as a whole. Secondly, when someone feels they are improving or developing their skills through training opportunities, for example, then there is as sense of progression and purpose that rewards a worker. The sense of belonging to a team or a working community also contributes to job satisfaction because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working lives. Satisfaction is also increased by a sense of responsibility for and loyalty to a team.Of course not everyone enjoys heir work. Hard economic realities mean that many people have little choice in the kind of job they can get. In some cases an employee is working in a job that suits neither their skills nor their personality. Some jobs are repetitive and boring, and labour relations may be poor and lead to resentment and insecurity rather than to job satisfaction.However, even though it is unlikely that all workers do feel happy in their work, I think it is not unrealistic to promote more job satisfaction in any job. If the factors identified above are implemented, then any job can be improved and more workers can feel greater degrees of job satisfaction. (303)Test 4Task 1 Pie chartTask 2 Some people think that university should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the work place. Others think that the true function of university should be to give access to knowledge for their own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.What, in your opinion, should be the mine function of a university?文：IELTS 6Test 1Task 1 Line graphTask 2 Today, high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sole.To what extent do you agree or disagree?文：Nowadays, there are lots of advertisements on television or on the streets. Some people think that the advertising boosts the sales of goods and it encourages people to buy things unnecessarily. This arguments may be true. In my country, many advertising companies produce advertisements with famous and popular actors or singers. People, especially youngsters, buy goods that their favourite singer advertise, although they do not really need the products.Also, on the television screen, a product may look gorgeous and good quality. As a result of it, people often buy goods without enough consideration. Consumers may not actually need it but they buy goods impulsively soon after they watch the advertising. Furthermore, as many customers buy a particular product due to its advertising campaign, the other people may be affected by the trend, even if the product is not of the real needs of the society.On the other hand, there are various aspects against these arguments. Moreover, it is people’s choice to make a decision to buy goods. Advertising may be not a cause of customers’buying habits. Individuals have their own spending habits. If they have got enough disposable income, then the right to make a decision is given to them. No one actually can judge whether the goods sold are the real needs of the society or not.In addition, as there should be a limited amount of disposable income consumers are able to spend, people try to allocate their budgets. They cannot be simply swayed by those advertisements.In conclusion, as customers have their own strong opinions and standard of good quality goods, it is better to leave them to make their own decision in buy goods. It is fairly difficult to say everyone is swayed by advertising and buy good impulsively. However, in sensitive area of businesses such as toy industries, it may be necessary to band advertising to those children as children have not got enough ability to control themselves or to know what they need. (332 words)Test 2Task 1 TableTask 2 Successful professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.考官文：As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country. However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds. Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate. So the notion of ‘fairness’ is not the issue.Those who feel that sports stars’salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career. The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight. So all of these factors may justify the huge earnings.Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.翻译：在媒体不断地推波助澜下，我国的许多职业运动员已成为了明星和名人。

(完整版)雅思范文：考官9分雅思大作文模板

雅思范文：考官9分雅思大作文模板编者按：这是一篇新鲜出炉的考官simon9分雅思大作文。

以小编几十篇simon作文的阅读量，大致总结了他最为习惯的行文结构，通过对这个考官所喜欢的9分“模板”的解读，希望大家能在自己的雅思写作备考中，对写作模板的使用能有一个新的认识。

IELTS Writing Task 2: 'positive or negative' essayHere's my full essay for the 'positive or negative development' question that we've been looking at over the last few weeks.In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?9分范文：In recent years it has become far more normal for people to live alone, particularly in large cities in the developed world. In my opinion, this trend is having both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons. On an individual level, people who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members. A young adult wholives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean, pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skills. From an economic perspective, the trend towards living alone will result in greater demand for housing. This is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeowners to buy their products or services.However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle. Firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased independence, people who live alone may experience feelings of loneliness, isolation and worry. They miss out on the emotional support and daily conversation that family or flatmates can provide, and they must bear the weight of all household bills and responsibilities. Secondly, from the financial point of view, a rise in demand for housing is likely to push up property prices and rents. While this may benefit some businesses, the general population, including those who live alone, will be faced with rising living costs.In conclusion, the increase in one-person households will have both beneficial and detrimental effects on individuals and on the economy.(280 words, band 9)【思路分析】四段13句式1.导入段 2句(背景+观点)2.主体段1 5句(观点+论据1+例子+论据2+支持句)3.主题段2 5句(观点+论据1+支持句+论据2+支持句)4.结论段 1句观点重申【模板解读】这是simon自己所最为擅长的雅思大作文四段13句式行文结构。

雅思写作之真题解析

雅思写作之真题解析当拿到一道大作文题目去分析时，我们不仅仅需要去读懂题目本身的意思，同时还得了解到题目所涉及的是哪一类话题，它所考察的是一个什么能力，题目中是否有一些关键词需要格外注意以及对于这道题目所能想到的一些观点论证。

本文中，文都国际教育老师将和大家一起探讨两道典型的教育类话题。

As part of education, students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?审题：题目翻译：作为教育的一部分，学生应该要花一段时间去海外学习和生活来学习当地的语言和文化。

你在多大程度上同意或者不同意?能力考查：这个教育类话题是同意不同意的考试指令，考查考生对于考官所呈现的社会现象或所表达的观点是否能够清晰地给出自己的想法并加以有效论证。

一般来讲，碰到这种指令，理论上是可以写完全支持或者反对的，但是还是建议大家尽量尝试用折中的写法，即部分同意部分反对。

这种一分为二的思考方式可以在考场上帮助你快速想出观点并进行有效作答，另外这种答题模式也不太会发生偏题的情况。

框架构造：Partly agree1. 开头段(用于引出题目背景，并且表明自己的态度)2. 论证出国学习和生活对于学习语言和文化的重要性3. 但是，反面论证这种做法对于部分学生是不现实的4. 结尾(再次重申自己的观点，并且可以给出自己的建议)Sample answer:Going abroad for further study has become more of a trend as large numbers of students participate in international language tests, such as IELTS or TOEFL. Some academics advocate that an experience of learning in foreign countries is a necessary part of education for language betterment and language acquisition. As for me, however, such practice should be considered with discretion.Admittedly, studying and living in another country can be an effective way to achieve the mentioned purposes. Compared with second-hand experience, living in the native environment can provide students with many opportunities to use the language to communicate with local people. Such language ability can make them be more competitive in the future job market. Meanwhile, living experiences can help students to have a deep insight into local life, including history, culture as well as religious belief.However, it would be unrealistic if all students are encouraged to participate in it. First of all, considering students themselves, those who lack learning and adaptive ability may find it hard to integrate into local life and sometimes they will feel disappointed or even depressed because of culture shocks and language barriers. Tuition fees and life expenses can be another problem. Different from rich students, those who come from working-class families or needy families cannot afford such a big cost to study overseas. For example, studying in UK for one year may cost one student nearly 300 thousand, which is far from affordability.To sum up, an experience of studying and living overseas can help students to speak good language and understand the local culture well. However, it is not a practical way for most ordinary families unless they make full preparations.思路分析：Introduction:Going abroad for further study has become more of a trend as large numbers of students participate in international language tests, such as IELTS or TOEFL.(用最熟悉的事件引出背景)Some academics advocate that an experience of learning in foreign countries is a necessary part of education for language betterment and language acquisition.(对于题目的改写)As for me, however, such practice should be considered with discretion.(在段落的最后，用一句话表明出自己的观点)Body 1:主题句：Admittedly, studying and living in another country can be an effective way to achieve the mentioned purposes.(其中mentioned purposes指的是题目中的掌握语言和文化，为了避免重复，改用其他方式来表达)支撑论点部分：Compared with second-hand experience, (用了对比论证手法，强调国外生活与学习的好处)living in the native environment can provide students with many opportunities to use the language to communicate with local people. Such language ability can make them be more competitive in the future job market.(凸显对于语言的好处，使用了因果论证来说明语言的重要性) Meanwhile,(论点之间的连接词) living experiences can help students to have a deep insight into local life, including history, culture as well as religious belief. (论证了对于文化的帮助，使用including来举出文化的一些典型表现)。

英语写作范文：年轻人是否应该遵守传统

英语写作范文：年轻人是否应该遵守传统雅思写作范文：年轻人是否应该遵守传统为大家搜索整理地有关雅思写作范文年轻人地行为相关信息介绍，雅思写作多少会涉及一些改善环境质量方面地考题，所以一下雅思写作范文考生可以借鉴里面地短语、句子或思路，给自己地写作找一些思路和灵感.写作题目Some people think that young people should follow traditions of their society, and others think that young people should be free to behave as individuals.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.areForathoughts, lifestyles, religion, music, dance, arts and languages, among other things of culture. Young people had better learn that modern traditions are built on the past just as the past was built on the times that went before it. Traditions bring continuity to one's existence in a society, even though this sort of continuity is precisely what has been increasingly lost through modernity.Thus, it behooves young individuals to preserve their traditions of value by safeguarding against the negative influence from various factors such as industrialization, globalization, and assimilation or marginalization of special cultural groups. It certainly makes patriotic sense that young people's love for traditions worth continuing always strengthens the well-being of the society and never weakens all that is meant to identify themselves with their country. Goodtradition being a good guide, young people, however rebellious, should not be entirely negative about the past with all its enduring heritages and necessary evils.In conclusion, since a modern society is not supposed to be a dead community, young people may behave freely in treating tradition as the living faith of the dead and not as the dead faith of the living. They should not believe in traditions simply because many beliefs and practices have been handed down for many generations, but should instead observe and analyze anything that agrees with reason and is conductive to the good and benefit of the society. It takes a lot of history to make a tradition, so the best of which must be accepted and lived up to, from generation to generation.。

雅思写作动物医药实验话题解析

雅思写作动物医药实验话题解析为了让大家对雅思写作中动物医药实验这类话题能够得心应手，下面小编给大家整理了一些此类话题的相关解析。

雅思写作话题素材:动物医药实验1. Animals are sometimes used in order to assess the effect of medicines and cosmetics on humans, but to what extent are they j necessary?动物通常被用于测试人类医药和化妆品的效果，在多大程度上言他们是必要的?2. The most common argument against such experiments is that they are cruel.反对这种实验最常用的论据是他们太残酷了。

3. Cruelty suggests that the animals used in the experiments undergo some kind of pain, discomfort or deformity.残酷意味着这些实验中用到的动物需要承受一些痛苦，不适，或者变成残疾。

4. This is understandably upsetting to many, who imagine the rabbit, mouse or frog that they cared for as a child having to endure such things.对于那些把饲养的小动物如兔子，老鼠或青蛙视为小孩子一样照料的人们来说，听到这些动物要遭受这样的痛苦，感到悲痛是可以理解的。

5. The fewer cosmetic products people use, the fewer animals they have to slaughter.人们用的化妆产品越少，屠杀的动物也会越少。

6. I do not think of a single item of toiletry which would justify pain or death to an animal.我想不出任何一种化妆用品能证明动物(在实验中)经受的痛苦甚至死亡是有合理的。

雅思写作标准

雅思写作标准雅思写作标准雅思写作标准1雅思写作6分的评分标准完成任务情况：根据写作任务要求作文;学术类：进行了概括，信息选择合理;普通培训类：写信目的基本清晰，语气可能有不够一贯之处;呈现并说明核心信息，但细节可能不够相关，不适合或不准确连贯与衔接：信息和观点组织连贯;文章有延续性;衔接手段使用有效，但是句子内部和句子之间的衔接可能有误或过于机械; 指代关系可能不能总是清晰、合理地使用词汇资源：使用适当范围的词汇;试图使用较不常见词汇，但有一些不准确;语法结构的范围和准确性：在拼写和构词法上有错误，但这些错误不至于影响交际;能使用简单和复杂句子结构;语法和标点出现一些错误，尽管这些错误很少导致交流障碍。

雅思写作评分标准雅思写作9分评分标准：完成任务情况：完全满足任务的所有要求;连贯与衔接：对于题目的回应清晰而完整;不露痕迹地使用衔接手段;分段得体;词汇资源：词汇使用广泛、自然而老到;极少出现小错误如“笔误”语法结构的范围和准确性：语法结构的使用广泛、准确而灵活;极少出现小错误如“笔误”雅思写作8分评分标准：完成任务情况：充分涵盖题目的所有要求;连贯与衔接：清晰而又得体地呈现并说明核心信息信息和观点的安排有序而富逻辑性; 衔接性的各个方面安排得体; 分段充分、适当词汇资源：能流畅、灵活地使用多样词汇来准确表达思想;能巧妙使用较不常见单词和习语，尽管偶尔有词汇选择和搭配上的不准确; 拼写和构词法错误极少。

语法结构的范围和准确性：灵活使用多种结构; 大部分语句无误;极偶尔情况下出现错误或不准确雅思写作7分评分标准：完成任务情况：涵盖题目要求;学术类：清晰概括主要趋势，差别或阶段;普通培训类：清晰表达写作目的，语气一贯、得体; 清晰呈现并说明核心信息，但可以进行更加充分的扩展连贯与衔接：信息和观点组织有逻辑性;文章从头至尾有延续性; 衔接手段使用合理，虽然可能有一些使用过少或过多词汇资源：词汇使用丰富、有一定的准确性和灵活性; 能使用较不常见词汇，对语体和搭配有所了解;语法结构的范围和准确性：在词汇的选择、拼写和构词法上偶尔有错误使用多种复杂结构; 多数语句无误;语法和标点掌握较好，但可能会犯一些错误;雅思写作5分评分标准：完成任务情况：基本上回应题目要求;格式可能有时不准确;学术类：机械描述细节，缺少清晰概括;可能缺少数据支持;培训类：提出写信目的，有时不清晰;语气可能多变，有时不得体; 呈现核心信息，但涵盖不完整;可能有过于注重细节的倾向; 信息有一定组织但缺少总体延续性;连贯与衔接：衔接手段不充分，不准确，或过度使用; 缺少指代和替换，显得重复过多;词汇资源：使用有限词汇量，但只是在最低层面上满足题目;语法结构的范围和准确性：拼写和构词法上可能出现明显错误，造成读者的某些阅读困难; 只能使用基本句子结构;试图使用复杂句，但复杂句的使用准确性不如简单句; 语法错误较多，标点有误用;错误造成读者的某些阅读困难完成任务情况：试图回应题目要求，但没有涵盖所有主要信息;格式不得体; (普通培训类)没有能够清晰解释写信目的;语气不得体;连贯与衔接：混淆核心信息和细节;有的部分不清晰，不相关，重复或不准确; 提供信息和观点，但安排不连贯，也没有清晰的连续性; 使用一些基本的衔接手段，但可能不准确或重复词汇资源：只使用基本词汇，可能重复，可能使用不得体; 构词法和拼写掌握有限; 错误导致读者理解困难;语法结构的范围和准确性：只使用有限的句子结构，从句很少见;有的结构准确但错误较多，标点经常错误;雅思写作3分评分标准：完成任务情况：没有能够回应题目，可能完全误解题目;连贯与衔接：观点有限，可能大部分都是不相关或是重复; 没有逻辑性地组织观点; 衔接手段的使用非常有限，不能表明观点之间的逻辑关系;词汇资源：只使用非常有限的单词和表达，对于构词法和拼写的掌握很有限; 错误严重干扰信息的传递;语法结构的范围和准确性：试图写出句子但语法和标点错误非常多，扭曲了意思雅思写作2分评分标准：完成任务情况：回答几乎和任务要求无关连贯与衔接：对组织结构的掌握极少词汇资源：词汇使用极其有限;基本没有掌握构词法和拼写语法结构的范围和准确性：除了背诵的短语以外无法使用句子雅思写作1分评分标准：完成任务情况：回答完全和任务要求无关连贯与衔接：无法交流任何信息词汇资源：只能使用一些零散单词语法结构的范围和准确性：完全无法使用句子缺席考试; 交白卷;完全抄袭背诵好的范文雅思写作标准2Task1(20分钟，150字)G类:书信类题目，投诉信，请求信，建议信，邀请信等A类：图表题，曲线图，柱状图等，也有流程图和示意图等Task2(40分钟，250字)A类与G类相同，考生可能需要对某个观点发表支持或反驳意见，或者讨论针锋相对的一组观点，或者解释某种问题出现的原因并提出相应的解决办法。

雅思作文写作常用十大模板

雅思作文写作常用十大模板雅思写作的备考是需要大量的高分句型以及满分模板的,这些材料是考生们拿高分的关键。

下面是小编整理的雅思作文写作常用十大模板，欢迎大家阅读分享借鉴，希望对大家有所帮助。

雅思作文写作十大模板一、指出现象或争议话题Ever since…, there have been ongoing disputes over…自从……起，就有对于……的持续争论。

With the increasing concerns about…, people are calling for…随着对……的日益关注，人们呼吁……… draws the public’s attention once again to…, a repeatedly discussed yet constantly unsolved social issue.……再一次吸引公众的注意力至……，这是一个经常讨论但一直未得到解决的社会问题。

二、引出各方观点There exists a p hilosophy that…有一种观点认为……While many advocate…, I believe it's a better idea to…尽管很多人支持……，我认为……更好。

Quite many are disgusted by this kind of…, because it goes against the traditional Chinese virtue of…很多人都反感……，因为它有悖于中国的传统美德。

三、表示赞同It is apparent that it is a more sensible choice to…很明显，……是更为明智的选择。

…should be encouraged, because it is a rewarding journey, promised with...…应鼓励……，因为它所带来的回报奇迹丰厚，并且允许……It is fair to say that…, is a plausible and advisable option for…客观来讲，……对于……是合理且明智的选择。

ielts.雅思9分写作范文全集

ielts.雅思9分写作范文全集大家在备考雅思写作的时候需要参考一些高分范文，下面小编就给大家整理了一些ielts.雅思9分写作范文，希望大家喜欢。

雅思写作高分范文：close relationship of familiesYou should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Families are not as close as before. Give reasons for this change, and suggest some ways to bring families closer.You should write at least 250 words. You should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.In the past, family was a very important concept in people’s minds, and it was the center of many people’s lives. Nowadays, however, the relationship between family members is not as close as before. But as to what factors contribute to this phenomenon, different people have diverse opinions. As far as I am concerned, it results from the following reasons.The first reason is that people spend more time on their study and work. Compared with the past, people face fierce competition and suffer from great pressure. Therefore, they have to devote more time and energy to their careers. Some people are too occupied to spare time for their family. What is more, many jobs require people to work in other cities and many children have to leave their parents at an early age to study or work elsewhere. As time passes, these people become emotionally estranged from their parents.Another reason is that there are more entertainment forms available. Nowadays high technology brings us more interesting things which can easily attract people’s attention, such as watching TV, surfing the Internet or plating video games. As aresult, people are indulged in these activities, totally neglecting the feelings of other family members.To bring families closer, people put forward various suggestions. Firstly, never bring your work home and leave it in your office. We should spare more time with family members no matter how occupied we are. Secondly, try to squeeze some time for a regular family dinner because dinner time is a perfect time and opportunity for people to exchange their feelings and ideas. Last but not least, we should teach the children the sense of family when they are still young.Family is the basic unit of a society. It plays a significant role in our lives. In order to enjoy a harmonious family life and maintain a stable society, we should take efforts to create a close family relationship. (342 words)雅思写作高分范文：economy and environmentSome people think that the urgent task is to develop economy on a large scale. First, they hold that many people, especially in rural areas, are living in poverty. As a result, many children drop out of school and can’t afford even the compulsory education. Second, they believe only by further balance and developing our economy can we get rid of poverty and gain the overall prosperity.On the other hand, many people insist that environment protection should be a top priority. First, they claim that we have only one mother earth, if our ecological environment is heavily polluted or ruined, we could not even survive on this planet. Second, they believe, it’s the rapid and advanced development of economy that leads to the present situation that most parts of the world are polluted. If the problem left unsolved, one day we may have nothing to drink, let alone develop our economy.In my opinion, both economy and environment protection are our urgent tasks now. Without economic development, we should remain backward. Moreover, we might be conquered or bullied by other powerful countries. And without environment protection, we should lose our home. Therefore, the best solution is to develop environment-protection-oriented industries and agriculture so as to kill two birds with one stone.雅思写作高分范文：education only for employment?You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Some people think the university education is to prepare students for employment, others think it has other functions. Discuss and say what the other functions are?You should write at least 250 words.You should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.Some people think the university education is to prepare students for employment. While we admit that preparation for employment is an important function of education, it is not the only one. We should see this issue with an all-sided view. In the perspective of society, education is for improvement. Students make use of what they have learned to create new theories and tools. This is the way in which our human society develops. And also, through education, government can teach people how to be appropriate citizens, thus in this way, people’s moralities and behaviors are constrained in a value system and the social stability can be maintained.In the perspective of individuals, education can enrich personal lives. Through education, we can explore different cultures and customs. Thus in this way education can open oureyes and broaden our mind. And education can also meet interests of each student.While of course, all the functions mentioned above have one common prerequisite: one can make a living in the first place. For this society is practical, many university students have studied for four years, but their ability to deal with practical things is too low to be acceptable. So education should provide the basic general knowledge to university students, so that they can be get employed and make a living. And if a nation wants to develop and to compete with other nations, it needs skilled workers to support economic development and to maintain the people creative, which can only be achieved through education.So it has some sense to realize that students’ preparation for employment is the function of education, but it has far more function which should not be neglected. (280 words) 雅思写作高分范文：examinationYou should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Some people think that examinations have some bad effects on both students and teachers. Some people say they do a good job in the evaluation of the students’ performance. What is your opinion?You should write at least 250 wordsYou should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.From elementary schools to universities, students have to take many examinations. They even regard examinations as an indispensable part of their life. In most schools and colleges, examinations are used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in a subject. However, although they dothe job efficiently, their side effects are also enormous.Examinations are unable to evaluate one’s true ability. They can only test memory or the skill of working rapidly under pressure. Sometimes the future of a candidate may be decided in a single examination. How can one do his best when he is under the extreme pressure? In other words, it does not mean that all of those who get high scores on examinations possess creativity in dealing with various problems. There are many stories that examinations failures turn out to be great scientists or successful entrepreneurs.Another effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits. Students tend to lay emphasis on the content which will be tested. They are encouraged to memorize rather than to think. Moreover, examinations induce cramming during the exam week. However after the examination, most children forget nearly all the information and facts they stuff into their heads.Examinations lower the standards of teaching as well. They deprive teachers of all freedom. Since teachers themselves are often judged by examination results, they have to train students in exam techniques instead of teaching their subjects. Furthermore, students are required to learn only what teachers tell them.In conclusion, even though examinations have been used in the past, they should no longer be used as the only means of evaluation. They cannot assess a student’s performance in learning and they also have negative impacts on both students and teachers. (290 words)雅思写作高分范文：education only for employment?You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Some people think the university education is to preparestudents for employment, others think it has other functions. Discuss and say what the other functions are?You should write at least 250 words.You should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.Some people think the university education is to prepare students for employment. While we admit that preparation for employment is an important function of education, it is not the only one. We should see this issue with an all-sided view. In the perspective of society, education is for improvement. Students make use of what they have learned to create new theories and tools. This is the way in which our human society develops. And also, through education, government can teach people how to be appropriate citizens, thus in this way, people’s moralities and behaviors are constrained in a value system and the social stability can be maintained.In the perspective of individuals, education can enrich personal lives. Through education, we can explore different cultures and customs. Thus in this way education can open our eyes and broaden our mind. And education can also meet interests of each student.While of course, all the functions mentioned above have one common prerequisite: one can make a living in the first place. For this society is practical, many university students have studied for four years, but their ability to deal with practical things is too low to be acceptable. So education should provide the basic general knowledge to university students, so that they can be get employed and make a living. And if a nation wants to develop and to compete with other nations, it needs skilled workers tosupport economic development and to maintain the people creative, which can only be achieved through education.So it has some sense to realize that students’ preparation for employment is the function of education, but it has far more function which should not be neglected. (280 words)。

英语大作文和小作文分值

英语大作文和小作文分值在英语考试中，大作文（也称为长作文或论述性作文）和小作文（通常指的是短文或描述性作文）是两种常见的题型，它们的分值分配因考试类型和具体要求而异。

以下是一些常见的英语考试中大作文和小作文的分值分配情况：1. IELTS（雅思）:- 小作文：通常占写作部分的三分之一，大约是50分中的15-20分。

- 大作文：占写作部分的三分之二，大约是50分中的30-35分。

2. TOEFL（托福）:- 小作文：托福考试中通常只有一个综合写作任务，这个任务结合了阅读、听力和写作，分值不单独列出，但整体写作分数是0-30分。

- 大作文：独立写作任务，分数同样是0-30分。

3. GMAT（管理学研究生入学考试）:- 小作文：GMAT的写作部分只有一个分析论点的写作任务，分数范围是0-6分。

- 大作文：不适用，因为只有一个写作任务。

4. GRE（研究生入学考试）:- 小作文：GRE的写作部分包括两个任务，一个是分析论点，另一个是分析问题，每个任务的分数范围是0-6分。

- 大作文：不适用，因为分值是两个任务的综合评分。

5. 高中英语考试:- 小作文：可能包括书信、日记、通知等，分值会根据试卷的总体分值分配，可能是总分的20%-30%。

- 大作文：通常是议论文或叙事文，可能是总分的70%-80%。

6. 大学英语四六级考试（CET-4/6）:- 小作文：如应用文写作，占写作总分的一部分，具体分值会根据试卷结构有所不同。

- 大作文：如议论文写作，占写作总分的较大部分。

在准备英语写作考试时，了解每种作文的分值分配对于合理分配复习时间和考试策略是非常重要的。

考生应该根据自己的弱点和每种作文的分值比重来决定复习的重点。

雅思写作9分范文

雅思写作9分范文
《环保意识与可持续发展》
环保意识是当今社会中越来越受到重视的一个话题，人们开始意识到保护环境的重要性，以及可持续发展的必要性。

在雅思写作考试中，这个话题也经常出现，并且对于考生来说，能够深入探讨环保意识与可持续发展的作文会更有深度和分量。

首先，环保意识的重要性不言而喻。

随着工业化进程的加速，地球资源的消耗速度变得越来越快，同时也带来了各种环境问题，比如全球变暖、气候变化、水资源短缺等。

因此，我们需要树立环保意识，意识到自己的行为对地球环境的影响，并且主动做出改变，保护环境。

其次，可持续发展是我们追求的目标。

可持续发展是指在满足当前世代需求的同时，不影响下一代满足其需求的发展模式。

我们需要重视可持续发展，提倡绿色生活方式，减少资源消耗，保护生态环境，以便我们的子孙后代也能够继续享受美好的环境。

在写作中，我们可以从个人、社会和全球层面进行思考。

在个人层面上，我们可以从自身做起，比如节约能源、减少垃圾产生等。

在社会层面上，我们可以探讨政府、企业、NGO等各
种组织对环保意识和可持续发展的推动作用。

在全球层面上，我们可以思考各国如何共同合作，共同应对全球环境问题。

总而言之，雅思写作中关于环保意识与可持续发展的话题是一
个很好的展示自己思考深度和综合能力的机会。

我们应该从多个角度思考这个话题，运用合理的逻辑和丰富的词汇，写出高质量的作文，以获得更高的分数。

雅思小作文九分模板

雅思小作文九分模板英文回答：To start off, it is important to have a clear understanding of the question and to organize your thoughts accordingly. Brainstorming ideas and creating an outline can help structure your response effectively. When writing, use clear and concise language, avoiding colloquialisms or slang. Divide your content into logical paragraphs, with each paragraph focusing on a specific aspect of the topic. Additionally, it is essential to support your ideas with specific examples and evidence to enhance the credibility of your response.Moreover, pay attention to the grammatical accuracy of your sentences and use a variety of sentence structures to avoid monotony. Employing transitional words and phrases can help create a smooth flow throughout your writing. Finally, proofread your response thoroughly to identify any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation beforesubmitting it.中文回答：1. 清晰理解问题，条理清晰地组织思路。

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雅思大作文范文100篇pdf版下载A类写作task 1部分线图是考生在备考过程中最重要的一个图表，其他图表都基本可以根据线图为模型来演变，所以在目前考生备考过程中常用到的剑桥系列5-8中都无一例外的收录了曲线图，且除《剑8》的8分范文外，连同《剑9》全是考官范文供考生学习、借鉴。

所以从这一点上来讲，线图仍然是考生在备考过程中的重点。

从《剑4》线图的两根曲线，《剑5/6》线图的三根曲线，到《剑7/8》线图的4根曲线，再到《剑9》的6根曲线，从数量上来说曲线的难度看似加大，但实际上图表解析难度并未增加。

由于数量的增加，曲线的变化趋势变得相似，所以在细节上的比较将更加的重要。

柱图是目前考试过程中出现概率最高的图表，《剑9》的这套柱图并不新颖，是在前期的考试中出现过多次的类型。

官方此次在《剑9》中发布这样一个图就弥补了前期无官方样题给考生练习的遗憾。

所以这仅是一个很好的补充。

在第三套练习题中发布的4个饼的饼图形式上跟《剑7》test 4 的类型一样。

但是内容更简化，分析难度降低，可写作的点减少，语言表达能力要求提高。

关于这种4个饼图一直存在两种写法的争议，《剑7》中发部的考官范文采用了重点写变化，后写比较的策略。

而《剑9》这篇考生的6分范文则完全采用了另一种重点写比较的策略。

从官方评语来看，这也未尝不可。

在test 1发表的地图并不能预示未来地图的考查将会增加，毕竟上一次地图出现还是在06年的《剑5》。

最近几年时间里地图的考察重心已经由《剑5》地理位置选择类型演变为了地理位置变迁类型。