英语作文批改

• 3.9 • it is hard for people to see eye to eye.
• [句子错误] 句首单词请 注意大写 • [学习提示] 易混词汇: difficult, hard 均有 “困难”之意。 • [高分短语] see eye to eye意为：看法完全一 致，属于四六级经典 高分短语，用得很 棒！
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• 作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏 短；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；文章用了较 为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时 注意单词拼写的检查。
• 1.1
• English is a internationaly language which becomes importantly for modern world.
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• 他是个性格坚强的人。 × He is a man of firm characters. √ He is a man of firm character.
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解析： character表示“性格”，“品格”[moral nature; good, strong qualities in a person]，通常用作不可数名词，偶尔用作可数名词；但 表示“(某人的)性格”时，通常不用作复数形式。 举例: 1. She is a woman of character. 她是个很有个性的女人。 2. The king is a man of good and noble character. 国王是个品格高尚的人。 3. You have a noble, self-sacrificing character.|你有高尚的自我牺牲 的品格。
• 2.6 • That's a good phenomenan, for English is essential nowadays.
• [拼写错误] phenomenan 拼写错 误，可替换选项为： phenomenon, phenomena, phenomenal • [学习提示] 易混词汇: basic, essential, fundamental, radical, vital 均有“基本的， 基础的”之意。
• [名词错误] 冠词缺失，建议将 modern world 改为the modern world 。 • [拼写错误] 拼写不规范，建议将 internationaly改为 internationally。 • [介词错误] 介词误用，建议将 for modern world改为in modern world。 • [词语错误] 词性错误，建议将 becomes importantly改为 becomes important。 • [学习提示] 易混词汇: word, vocabulary, language, term, lexicon 均有“文字，词，语言” 之意。
• 3.12 • Learning a country's culture, especial its classic culture, the first thing is learn its language.
• [搭配错误] 搭配不当，建 议将classic...culture改为 classical... culture。 • [低频警示] its classic culture 在语料库中无此 用法，疑似中式英语 • [搭配统计] 动名搭配 learn...language • [学习提示] 易混词汇: civilization, culture 均含 “文化，文明”之意。 • [批改提示] country表示 “国家”。注意与state的 区别。
• 3.11 • Only by characters Chinese literature can send off its brilliance.
• [句子错误] 句子错误， only放于句首时句子要到 装，建议改正。 • [低频警示] send...brilliance 在语料 库中无此用法，疑似中式 英语 • [学习提示] 易混词汇: alphabet, letter, character, script 均有 “字母”之意。 • [批改提示] 注意 characters和character 区别。
• [词语错误] 用词不当，建 议将in me opinion 改为 in my opinion 。 • [介词错误] 介词误用，建 议将be for +名词改为be of +名词。 • [低频警示] after all a foreign language 在语料 库中无此用法，疑似中式 英语 • [学习提示] 易混词汇: big, large, great, grand 均含 “大的”之意。
• 3.7 • In addition to, some people think English is superior than Chinese.
• [形容词错误] 语法错误， 建议将形容词+than...改 为形容词比较级 +than...。 • [介词错误] 固定用法错误， 建议将in addition to改为 in addition。 • [学习提示] 易混词汇: consider, think, believe, count, deem, reckon, regard 均含有“认为”之 意。 • [批改提示] people表示 “人，民族”。注意与 person的区别。详情点击 • [批改提示] 注意Chinese 和the Chinese区别。
• 2.4 • They use at least one hour to learn English knowledges a day.
• [词语错误] 用词不当，建 议将use...hour to改为 spend...hour in doing。 • [搭配错误] learn...knowledge 动宾 搭配不地道 • [低频警示] english...knowledge 在 语料库中无此用法，疑似 中式英语 • [学习提示] 易混词汇: knowledge, learning, scholarship 均有“知识， 学问”之意。 • [批改提示] knowledge (知识)是不可数名词，一 般情况下，不采用复数形 式。
• 2.2 • In China, English is took to be a foreigh language which many student choosed to learn.
• [拼写错误] 拼写不规范，建议将 choosed改为chose。 • [拼写错误] 拼写不规范，建议将 foreigh改为foreign。 • [动词错误] 建议把 is took to 改 成 is taken to/is taking to (Auxiliary Verb Agreement) • [低频警示] is took to be 在语 料库中无此用法，疑似中式英 语 • [学习提示] 易混词汇: pupil, student, learner, scholar 均含 “学生”之意。
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English is a internationaly language which becomes importantly for modern world. • In China, English is took to be a foreigh language which many student choosed to learn. They begin to studying English at a early age. They use at least one hour to learn English knowledges a day. Even kids in kindergarten have begun learning simple words. That's a good phenomenan, for English is essential nowadays. • In addition to, some people think English is superior than Chinese. In me opinion, though English is for great significance, but English is after all a foreign language. it is hard for people to see eye to eye. English do help us read English original works, but Chinese helps us learn a true China. Only by characters Chinese literature can send off its brilliance. Learning a country's culture, especial its classic culture, the first thing is learn its language. Because of we are Chinese, why do we give up our mother tongue and learn our owne culture through a foreign language?
• 中国人民非常勤劳。 × Chinese are very industrious. √ The Chinese are very industrious.Fra Baidu bibliotek
• 3.8 • In me opinion, though English is for great significance, but English is after all a foreign language.
• 2.3 • They begin to studying English at a early age.
• [动词错误] 语法错误，建 议将begin to doing形式 改为begin to do形式。 • [名词错误] 冠词误用，建 议将a early改为an early。 • [低频警示] begin to studying 在语料库中无此 用法，疑似中式英语 • [学习提示] 易混词汇: begin, start, commence, initiate, inaugurate 均含有 “开始”之意。
• 3.13 • Because of we are Chinese, why do we give up our mother tongue and learn our owne culture through a foreign language?
• 3.10 • English do help us read English original works, but Chinese helps us learn a true China.
• [动词错误] 主谓不一致， 建议将English后的动词 改为第三人称单数形式。 • [搭配统计] 动名搭配 read...works • [学习提示] 易混词汇: creative, original, imaginative 都可表示“有 创造力的”之意。 • [批改提示] true的近义表 达有accurate 。 • [批改提示] help近义表达 有support/ assist/ aid
• 2.5 • Even kids in kindergarten have begun learning simple words.
• [搭配统计] 动名搭配 learn...word 在教材 中出现过 226 次 • [学习提示] 易混词汇: foolish, silly, stupid, simple, dull 都可表示 “愚蠢的，笨的，傻 的”之意。