2017专四写作新题型特训-DAY-1
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TEM4 新题型 写作特训
Lecturer:
写作题型变化
1）命题形式略有变化，不再考查NOTE WRITING.
2）写作模式有所变化 Previously: 陈述观点——论证观点——得出结 论（重申观点或提出建议） NOW: 概括双方观点，并提出自己观点——论 证观点——得出结论（重申观点或提出建议）
As far as I’m concerned, eating and drinking on subway trains are indeed improper behaviors and should be discouraged, and there are several reasons accounting for my stance.
• Previously: Nowadays, more and more advertisements are seen on TV every day. Some people think that advertising on TV can bring us lots of benefits, but other hold a different opinion. In my opinion, I’m in favor of the former.
In my point of view, I believe youth is for us to strive, and there’s no better place for us to do so than big cities. Firstly, although the working condition in big cities is far more arduous, we can still give full play to our initiatives. ….Secondly, in big cities, there’ re more chances for graduates to improve themselves…. Lastly, owing to the fact that many companies and organizations at home and abroad are situated in highly developed cities…
Structure of 1st para.
1. Describe a phenomenon + introduce the discussed topic + opinions from both sides;
2. Introduce the discussed topic + opinions from both sides;
How to write a conclusion
• Now what ???
Passengers Should not Eat and Drink on Subway Trains
• Previously: In recent years, eating and drinking on subway trains have been found more and more common, which has triggered many problems. Thus, in some cities passengers are forbidden to do that and violators will be fined.
材料作文：导语部分写作
2. 是否应该让年轻人担任政府要职？ Nowadays, whether young people should hold important posts in the government has become a controversial issue. Many citizens tend to distrust young leaders’ working abilities due to their age and lack of work experience. However, some people believe that youngsters are eligible for leadership roles because of their innovation ability and vitality.
There has been a raging debate over the new regulation. Some believe that eating and drinking don’t threat the safety of the subway operation and are not against any law and regulation. Others want to curb the bad behavior so as to make the public environment clean and tidy.
微信存在风险之我见。
As far as I’m concerned, it goes to extreme to
abandon an invention just because of its potential
risks,. Firstly, WeChat brings about great
convenience
to源自文库
users
for
communication....Secondly, WeChat pays more
attention to privacy than other communication
tools…
main body
Stance:
1.as far as I’m concerned; 2. as to me;
Now what ??? Should Passengers??
• In recent years, eating and drinking on subway trains have been found more and more common, which has triggered many problems. Thus, in some cities passengers are forbidden to do that and violators will be fined.
OLD WINE IN A NEW BOTTLE! 与传统命题作文并无二致！
Exceptions: The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood
A major advantage and disadvantage of advertising on Television
perspective;
other hand;
4. personally talking;5seIcnotnhdepfilrasctep, llaacset ,biunttnhoet least;
5.in my view;
6 Initially, besides/furthermore,
6. from my point of last but not least
材料作文：导语部分写作
1. 大学生就业时该不该选择大城市。 when it comes to the vast pool of young and
underemployed college graduates, they are really on the horns of a dilemma of choosing a proper place to start their career. To choose a modern city like BJ and SH, or to stay in a small town, is a tough question. Some graduates prefer big cities for the metropolises remains a strong appeal to them with the multitudinous opportunities. Small towns, in some other graduates’ opinion, create a comfortable work environment.
材料作文：导语部分写作
3. 微信存在风险之我见。 Nowadays, WeChat has gained popularity, especially its function of Shake-Shake and Drift Bottle which allows users to randomly connect to other users close by. However, some people are worried about the potential risks brought about by WeChat’s positioning function when using it to socialize with strangers.
那么问题来了
Pros & cons 里那么多points, 如何总结归纳？
Principles u may follow:
1.Locate key words. 2.Write a one-sentence summary with
these keywords.
MAIN BODY
• 大学生就业时该不该选择大城市。
Elaboration: 1.First and foremost, besides, last but not least; 2 First, second, third; 3 Firstly, secondly, thirdly;
3. from my
4 On the one hand, on the
TACTICS to get excellent marks
材料作文
1. 仔细审题，分析材料 (2-3 mins) 2. 列出提纲，确定布局 (3-4 mins) 导语部分：引出话题，概括双方观点； 主体部分：提出自身观点，并列出多条理由论
证自身观点； 结尾部分：重申观点或提出建议 3. 正式写作 (30-35 mins) 4. 检查并优化 (2-3 mins)
All in all, while embracing the convenience of WeChat, we have to take measures to guard against its potential risks. As long as we are aware of the risks which are inherent in software, we can safely enjoy the surprise brought by recent technological advancement.
view etc.
CONCLUSION
In conclusion, I strongly hold that it is better for graduates to choose a job in big cities. The abundant opportunities there will enable young people to exploit their potential and realize their dreams. Although life in big cities may be more difficult and arduous, all the efforts and hardship will be paid off if we are determined to seize the opportunities.
Lecturer:
写作题型变化
1）命题形式略有变化，不再考查NOTE WRITING.
2）写作模式有所变化 Previously: 陈述观点——论证观点——得出结 论（重申观点或提出建议） NOW: 概括双方观点，并提出自己观点——论 证观点——得出结论（重申观点或提出建议）
As far as I’m concerned, eating and drinking on subway trains are indeed improper behaviors and should be discouraged, and there are several reasons accounting for my stance.
• Previously: Nowadays, more and more advertisements are seen on TV every day. Some people think that advertising on TV can bring us lots of benefits, but other hold a different opinion. In my opinion, I’m in favor of the former.
In my point of view, I believe youth is for us to strive, and there’s no better place for us to do so than big cities. Firstly, although the working condition in big cities is far more arduous, we can still give full play to our initiatives. ….Secondly, in big cities, there’ re more chances for graduates to improve themselves…. Lastly, owing to the fact that many companies and organizations at home and abroad are situated in highly developed cities…
Structure of 1st para.
1. Describe a phenomenon + introduce the discussed topic + opinions from both sides;
2. Introduce the discussed topic + opinions from both sides;
How to write a conclusion
• Now what ???
Passengers Should not Eat and Drink on Subway Trains
• Previously: In recent years, eating and drinking on subway trains have been found more and more common, which has triggered many problems. Thus, in some cities passengers are forbidden to do that and violators will be fined.
材料作文：导语部分写作
2. 是否应该让年轻人担任政府要职？ Nowadays, whether young people should hold important posts in the government has become a controversial issue. Many citizens tend to distrust young leaders’ working abilities due to their age and lack of work experience. However, some people believe that youngsters are eligible for leadership roles because of their innovation ability and vitality.
There has been a raging debate over the new regulation. Some believe that eating and drinking don’t threat the safety of the subway operation and are not against any law and regulation. Others want to curb the bad behavior so as to make the public environment clean and tidy.
微信存在风险之我见。
As far as I’m concerned, it goes to extreme to
abandon an invention just because of its potential
risks,. Firstly, WeChat brings about great
convenience
to源自文库
users
for
communication....Secondly, WeChat pays more
attention to privacy than other communication
tools…
main body
Stance:
1.as far as I’m concerned; 2. as to me;
Now what ??? Should Passengers??
• In recent years, eating and drinking on subway trains have been found more and more common, which has triggered many problems. Thus, in some cities passengers are forbidden to do that and violators will be fined.
OLD WINE IN A NEW BOTTLE! 与传统命题作文并无二致！
Exceptions: The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood
A major advantage and disadvantage of advertising on Television
perspective;
other hand;
4. personally talking;5seIcnotnhdepfilrasctep, llaacset ,biunttnhoet least;
5.in my view;
6 Initially, besides/furthermore,
6. from my point of last but not least
材料作文：导语部分写作
1. 大学生就业时该不该选择大城市。 when it comes to the vast pool of young and
underemployed college graduates, they are really on the horns of a dilemma of choosing a proper place to start their career. To choose a modern city like BJ and SH, or to stay in a small town, is a tough question. Some graduates prefer big cities for the metropolises remains a strong appeal to them with the multitudinous opportunities. Small towns, in some other graduates’ opinion, create a comfortable work environment.
材料作文：导语部分写作
3. 微信存在风险之我见。 Nowadays, WeChat has gained popularity, especially its function of Shake-Shake and Drift Bottle which allows users to randomly connect to other users close by. However, some people are worried about the potential risks brought about by WeChat’s positioning function when using it to socialize with strangers.
那么问题来了
Pros & cons 里那么多points, 如何总结归纳？
Principles u may follow:
1.Locate key words. 2.Write a one-sentence summary with
these keywords.
MAIN BODY
• 大学生就业时该不该选择大城市。
Elaboration: 1.First and foremost, besides, last but not least; 2 First, second, third; 3 Firstly, secondly, thirdly;
3. from my
4 On the one hand, on the
TACTICS to get excellent marks
材料作文
1. 仔细审题，分析材料 (2-3 mins) 2. 列出提纲，确定布局 (3-4 mins) 导语部分：引出话题，概括双方观点； 主体部分：提出自身观点，并列出多条理由论
证自身观点； 结尾部分：重申观点或提出建议 3. 正式写作 (30-35 mins) 4. 检查并优化 (2-3 mins)
All in all, while embracing the convenience of WeChat, we have to take measures to guard against its potential risks. As long as we are aware of the risks which are inherent in software, we can safely enjoy the surprise brought by recent technological advancement.
view etc.
CONCLUSION
In conclusion, I strongly hold that it is better for graduates to choose a job in big cities. The abundant opportunities there will enable young people to exploit their potential and realize their dreams. Although life in big cities may be more difficult and arduous, all the efforts and hardship will be paid off if we are determined to seize the opportunities.