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托福写作常见错误及改正

托福写作常见错误及改正

托福写作常见错误及改正托福写作是考察考生英文写作能力的重要部分,但很多考生在备考过程中常常犯一些常见的错误。

本文将针对这些错误进行详细分析,并提供改正方法,以帮助考生顺利应对托福写作考试。

错误一:语法错误很多考生在写作过程中经常犯语法错误,这可能导致文章不流畅,降低得分。

解决这个问题的方法是加强语法的学习和练习,熟悉常见的语法规则和句型结构,并在写作前多加练习。

错误二:使用过于复杂的词汇有些考生为了显示自己的词汇量,常常使用过于复杂或者不太确切的词汇。

这样做容易引起理解上的困惑,并让文章显得不自然。

改正这个错误的方法是在写作中使用简洁清晰的词汇,避免过度夸张或者过于晦涩的表达。

错误三:缺乏提纲在托福写作中,过于匆忙地开始写作,没有一个清晰的提纲,很容易导致思路混乱和文章结构不清晰。

解决这个问题的方法是在写作前花一些时间构思提纲,明确每个段落的主题,确保文章逻辑清晰、层次分明。

错误四:篇幅不足有些考生为了节省时间,写得太简短,致使内容不充分,无法充分展开观点并进行充分的论证。

改正这个错误的方法是在写作之前规划好篇幅,充分展开每个观点,确保文章有足够的内容来支持论点。

错误五:观点不明确托福写作要求考生对于观点有清晰的表达,但有些考生对于自己的观点不够明确,或者在表达观点时含糊不清。

解决这个问题的方法是在写作之前先明确自己的立场和观点,并用清晰的语言进行表达。

错误六:没有充分的论证和举例托福写作要求考生能够提供充分的论证和例证来支持自己的观点,但有些考生在写作时缺乏相关的论证和举例。

改正这个错误的方法是在每个观点之后提供具体的例子或者事实来支持,增强文章的说服力。

错误七:无法准确理解题目有些考生在写作时没有准确理解题目的要求,从而导致偏离主题或者未能全面回答问题。

解决这个问题的方法是仔细阅读题目,确保准确理解题目的要求,并在写作时紧密围绕主题展开论述。

通过改正以上常见错误,考生可以提高托福写作的表达能力和得分。

托福写作常见的语法错误都有哪些?

托福写作常见的语法错误都有哪些?

托福写作常见的语法错误都有哪些?独立写作在语言上要求除了语言多样性之外,还要求考生要尽可能地减少语法错误。

但是,人无完人,考生在紧张的考试环境下,会多多少少地犯一些语法错误。

那么托福写作常见的语法错误都有哪些呢?一起来看环球教育小编的整理。

1.名词单复数:考生在作文中经常会不自觉的就省略复数词尾“s”。

错误:A great number of teacher would benefit from government’s funding on increasing teachers’ salary.正确:A great number of teachers would benefit from government’s funding on increasing teachers’ salary.注意:考生一定要清楚可数名词和不可数名词,student,problem等是可数名词;money,water等是不可数名词,不会出现moneys,waters。

同时也要注意一些集合名词是不需要加s的,比如people, 如果加了s之后意义会发生变化。

2)主谓一致:单数的主语与动词复数形式搭配,或者是复数主语与单数第三人称搭配。

错误:Environmental problems, such as air pollution, is detrimental to public health.正确:Environmental problems, such as air pollution, are detrimental to public health.3)时态不一致:描述一件过去的事情,但是写着写着时态变成了现在时。

错误:Mr. Liu and Mr. Zhang were good friends working in one company, but everything changed as a result of rival for a promotion. In order to get promoted, Mr. Liu throw mud at Mr. Zhang by spreading rumors in their colleagues that Mr. Zhang is so means and stubborn that he might deny their colleagues access from promotion, making Mr. Zhang isolated by his colleagues.正确:Mr. Liu and Mr. Zhang were good friends working in one company, but everything changed as a result of rival for a promotion. In order to get promoted, Mr. Liu threw mud at Mr. Zhang by spreading rumors in their colleagues that Mr. Zhang was so means and stubborn that he might deny their colleagues access from promotion, making Mr. Zhang isolated by his colleagues.4)词性误用将名词、动词、形容词词性搞混,出现误用。

解析托福写作语法常见错误 要避免哦!

解析托福写作语法常见错误 要避免哦!

解析托福写作语法常见错误要避免哦!语法是托福作文中把单词、词组串联起来的规则,如果没有掌握规则而把词汇错误的组织起来,不仅降低托福写作成绩,还是英语基本功不扎实的体现,托福写作语法常见错误:1、中式英语原:Thus, one is easier to draw bosses’ attention and gain appreciation.改:Thus, it’s easier for you to draw bosses’ attention and gain appreciation.评:中文习惯说“人们可以更容易地吸引老板的注意力”,而英语则习惯说“It’s easier for sb. to…”同学们要注意中英表述习惯的区别哦!2、用词不当原:The absence of groupwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society.改:The absence of teamwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society.评:groupwork是“分组”或者“小组集体任务”的意思。

这位同学原本想说teamwork“团队合作”,却用了一个看起来很像,但实际完全不同的词,表达出来的意思就风马牛不相及了。

原:You will be dangerous if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture.改:You will be in danger if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture.评:dangerous表示所修饰的对象是“带来危险的,有危险性的”,而be in danger才是“身处险境”的意思。

到底谁才是威胁呢?原:Firstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might effect their further development.改:Firstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might affect their further development.评:模样长得像,意思可不同了。

托福写作常见错误

托福写作常见错误

托福写作常见错误托福写作中一些同学会犯语法错误,导致*的句式和表达不符合英文表达习惯。

今天给大家带来了托福写作常见错误,希望能够帮助到大家,一起来学习吧。

托福写作常见错误一.句子成分缺失句子不完整这个错误是由于很多同学缺乏common sense,不知道啥叫一个句子的完整,为啥自己写的就不完整。

什么样的句子是完整的?一个主语+一个谓语已经可以构成最简单的完整句子。

举个最简单的例子“我愿意”=“I do”这个“I do”就已经是一个简单完整的句子了。

缺主语,或缺谓语,不能构成一个完整的句子。

a.缺谓语例如:The society develops rapidly.The society是主语,develops是谓语,此时这个句子就是完整的。

常见的错误写法:The society developing rapidly.此时这个句子是缺谓语的。

我们需要改写成:The society develops rapidly.或The society is developing rapidly.b.出现两个或两个以上主谓结构一个句子有且只能有一个主谓结构。

“我干,他不干”这句话正确的表达方法是:I do, but he does not.或: I do. He does not.然而常见的错误形式是:I do, he does not.此时这句话出现了两个主语:I, he.那么这句话肯定就是错误,我们需要用连接词but隔开,或直接句号后另起一句话。

我们举一个难一点的例子:Some people agree with the first statement, I disagree with it.这种错误的表达常见于同学们的写作第一段。

这句话出现了两个主语:Some people; I.出现了两个谓语:agree; disagree.按照我们刚才已经讲过的,一句话不能出现两个主语判断,这句话是有问题的。

正确的写法是:Some people agree with the first statement. However, I disagree with it.或:Some people agree with the first statement, but I disagree with it.二.主谓不一致这是同学们最容易犯的错误,常见指数5颗星!在中文的动词形式中,不管是:你,我,他、她、它,动词形式都一样。

托福写作:独立写作易犯十错

托福写作:独立写作易犯十错

托福写作:独立写作易犯十错托福写作中常常会犯一些明显的错误。

考生们要谨记,切不可掉以轻心。

本文为大家收集整理托福写作考试中常易犯的十个错误,供大家参考。

1、不一致(Disagreements)所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致,它还包括了数的不一致时态不一致及代词不一致等。

例1.Whenonehavemoney,hecandowhathewantto.(人一旦有了钱,他就能想干什么就干什么。

)剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have应改为has;同理want应改为wants。

本句是典型的主谓不一致。

改为:Onceonehasmoney,hecandowhathewants(todo).2、修饰语错位(MisplacedModifiers)英语与汉语不同,同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置,句子的含义可能引起变化。

对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视,因而造成了不必要的误解。

例1.IbelieveIcandoitwellandIwillbetterknowtheworldoutsidethecampus.剖析:better位置不当,应置于句末。

3、句子不完整(SentenceFragments)在口语中,交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等,不完整的句子完全可以被理解。

可是书面语就不同了,句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清,这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后,笔者又想加些补充说明时发生。

例1.Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.剖析:本句后半部分“forexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.”不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词语,不能独立成句。

改为:Therearemanywaystoknowsociety,forexample,byTV,radio,andnewspaper.4、悬垂修饰语(DanglingModifiers)所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。

托福常见语法错误

托福常见语法错误

托福常见语法错误〔〔托福〕〕常见语法错误考生在备考过程中首先应该避免常见的语法错误,然后再追求语法句式的多样性。

以下是我们广大考生常犯的语法错误,应首先避免此类教感错误。

乱用大词:很多考生都以为写作想得高分就要用一些很难、很大、很生僻的词汇。

这反而会弄巧成拙。

这些难词、大词,考生很容易用错,不符合语境。

例1: Students propensity for a certain subject is the biggest motivation for study.解析:propensity换成interestpropensity这个单词表示(性格上的)倾向,习性[S1 ] [(+for/to/towards) ] [+to-v]通常用于负面词汇.例如:He recognized his own propensity to evil.他承认自己生性喜爱作恶。

而这个例句中想要体现的是同学的正面的兴趣,乱用大词却不合适语境。

例2: First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isnt toomuch, but they will keep their salary gingerliness.解析:这里的gingerliness根本是不知所云.此外,该句子还有以下问题:该作文题目是讲同学是杏应该做兼职,因此children的出现就显得很莫名其妙although和but是不能连用的指代不明,they 不知道是指代前面的什么中式〔〔英语〕〕:这是语言表达不地道的典型表现。

例3: The second argumentit might have been noticed by othersis that in someoccasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to techers because are a kind of people,teachers are a kind of vocationteachers are a (tjnfof sncation.解析:句子的表达过于中式化。

英语考试作文-8个语法错误可能使用你的托福写作得分很低

英语考试作文-8个语法错误可能使用你的托福写作得分很低

英语考试作文8个语法错误可能使用你的托福写作得分很低在托福写作当中,如果你的英语水平还不错的话,而你的作文始终得不到高分,那么最有可能让你作文得低分的原因就是语法原因了。

这里为大家整理了托福写作考试中8个失分的语法错误,大家一起来学习一下吧。

1. 托福写作句子不完整。

不完整句子指的是句子当中缺少主语或谓语等,无法形成一个完整的句子。

比如:A movie that inspires deep emotions.(只有名词加定语从句,不是完整的句子)应改为:She went to see “The Silver Star”, a movie that inspires deep emotions.2. 托福写作句子不间断。

不间断句子指的是用逗号来连接两个完整的句子。

比如:There is increasingly widespread reliance on electronic mail, some people still resist using it, especiallythose who prefer handwritten letters.应改为:Although there is increasingly widespread reliance on electronic mail, some people still resist using it, especially those who prefer handwritten letters.(根据两句之间的关系,加入连词)3. 托福写作句子主谓不一致。

主谓不一致指的是句子中主语与谓语没有保持数的一致。

比如:Many students thinks tomorrow is a holiday.应改为:Many students think tomorrow is a holiday.再比如:The use of cell phones during concerts are not allowed.应改为:The use of cell phones during concerts is not allowed.4. 托福写作可数名词完整。

托福写作常见错误整理

托福写作常见错误整理

托福写作常见错误整理在托福写作考试中,很多学生容易犯一些常见的错误。

这些错误可能会导致分数下降,因此我们有必要对这些错误进行整理和总结,以便更好地应对考试。

本文将会介绍几种托福写作常见错误,并提供相应的改进方法。

错误一:缺乏逻辑连贯性在写作中,逻辑连贯性非常重要。

学生们往往会在文章中出现断裂的逻辑关系,导致读者难以理解。

为了避免这种错误,我们可以使用一些过渡词汇来帮助连接句子和段落。

比如,使用表示原因的词汇“because”、“due to”等来引导逻辑关系,使用表示转折的词汇“however”、“although”等来平衡观点。

错误二:过度使用复杂句很多学生为了显示自己的语言水平,过度使用复杂句,导致句子结构复杂、语义混乱。

在写作中,我们应该尽量避免写过长的句子,可以通过拆分句子或使用简单句来提高可读性。

另外,使用一些简单连接词如“and”、“but”、“so”等可以更好地组织句子结构。

错误三:不够具体有时候,学生们写作时候过于泛泛而谈,不够具体。

这样会导致文章缺乏说服力和信息量。

为了改善这个问题,我们可以通过提供详细的支持材料、具体的例子和详尽的论证来加强论点。

这些具体的细节能够更好地展示我们的思考深度和广度。

错误四:文法错误文法错误是所有学生都容易犯的错误之一。

这些错误包括动词时态不一致、主谓不一致、冠词用错等等。

为了避免文法错误,我们需要加强对基本语法知识的学习,并在写作过程中反复检查自己的使用。

此外,可以借助一些语法工具如语法检查软件或者查阅语法书籍来辅助我们的写作。

错误五:模板化表达很多学生为了节省时间,使用一些固定的表达方式和句型,导致文章缺乏个性化和原创性。

为了改正这个问题,我们可以尝试多读多写,增加词汇量,培养自己的个人风格。

此外,在备考过程中,我们也可以积累一些优秀范文,学习范文的表达方式,并加以灵活运用。

总结:托福写作考试中,常见的错误包括缺乏逻辑连贯性、过度使用复杂句、不够具体、文法错误和模板化表达。

托福写作常见语法错误解析

托福写作常见语法错误解析

托福写作常见语法错误解析托福写作常见语法错误解析导语:在托福的独立写作中经常出现名词数词的错误用法,下面是YJBYS店铺整理的托福写作常见语法错误解析,欢迎参考!名词在托福独立写作中会有哪些常见的语法错误呢?从这期开始,我们将和大家一起讨论写作中经常出现的名词、代词、形容词、副词、数词、动词、介词、连词方面的错误,希望大家“引以为戒”——“语言的准确性”是托福独立写作评分标准中的重要要求。

1.可数名词不“裸奔”Even expert or scholar specializing in a certain field might cover a vastspectrum of knowledge in order to succeed.During high school, a very important time in a person’s education career, student will learn skill necessary to be successful in university and the work world.第一句句子中的expert和scholar都是可数名词,因此需要在这些词之前加上冠词(定冠词或不定冠词)或物主代词,或变为名词的复数形式。

Even experts or scholars specializing in a certain field might cover a vast spectrum of knowledge in order to succeed.第二句句子中的student和skill也都是可数名词,全句应该改为:During high school, a very important time in a person’s education career, students will learn most of the skills necessary to be successful in university and the work world.2.集合名词的单复数我们来看下面的例句:Technology is developing at a remarkable speed that our ancestors might never have foreseen.在此句句子中,technology 是不可数名词。

常见托福写作语法错误分类

常见托福写作语法错误分类

常见托福写作语法错误分类CLASS 动词跟名词混成一起Also, we will encounter another problem that with more noi-sy they make, our property value will bear a obviously de-cline and this is the most hatful thing we want to see(we have to see).Also, we will encounter another problem that with more noi-se they make, our property value will obviously decline and this is the most hatful thing we want to see(we have to see). our children, when they are old enough to go to college, are enjoying a big convenient that they are not bothered by Christmas time schedule.our children, when they are old enough to go to college, are enjoying a big convenience that they are not bothered by Christmas time schedule.CLASS adv用成了adjthe truth is people in our community will unavoidable facing the awful fact that students in college are noisy and annoy-ing, indeed.the truth is people in our community will be unavoidably fac-ing the awful fact that students in college are noisy and an-noying, indeed.CLASS 正在进行时没有加be be doingthe truth is people in our community will unavoidable facing the awful fact that students in college are noisy and annoy-ing, indeed.the truth is people in our community will be unavoidably fac-ing the awful fact that students in college are noisy and an-noying, indeed.CLASS 冠词使用错误Because those bikes be rented for people, hence they have the cheaper prices, not only that their using is very simple, they might cost us three minute to download a app in our mobile phones, then spend the money,(???) finally we can ride the yellow bike.Because those bikes are rented for people, hence they have the cheaper prices, not only because their usage is very simple, but also they might cost us three minute to download an app in our mobile phones, then spend the money, (and) f inally we can ride the yellow bike.CLASS be动词使用错误Because those bikes be rented for people, hence they have the cheaper prices, not only that their using is very simple, they might cost us three minute to download a app in our mobile phones, then spend the money, finally we can ride the yellow bike.Because those bikes are rented for people, hence they have the cheaper prices, not only that their using is very simple, they might cost us three minute to download a app in our mobile phones, then spend the money, finally we can ride the yellow bike.CLASS 单复数的错误At present there are many bikes appear beside the streets, which have the yellow pigment(color), as one of the most popular vehicle(s).At present there are many bikes appearing beside the streets, which have the yellow pigment(color), as one of the most popular vehicles.CLASS 情态动词后面要加do 动词原形people also can shopping online,do it in this way, they can spend few money, at the same time they will save their times, for example.people also can do shopping online, do it in this way, they can spend few money, at the same time they will save their times, for example.CLASS 形容词前要加beAlmost cities have the subway, and the airports gradu-ally increase even some cities have two airports that convent for people to travel.Almost all the cities have the subway, and the airports gradually increase even some cities have two airports that are convenient for people to travel.CLASS 被动语态错误be done 不是be doThe vehicle which impresses me is the bikes being share for everyone.The vehicle which impresses me is the bikes being share-d for everyone.CLASS 介词结构使用错误prep+doingfor doingIf my community was chosen for locate a university, I well be pleasure to support this action. Although due to many disadvantage and hardcore issue will come out, there are still have a great amount of positive effect which convince me to side with the university.If my community was chosen for locating a university,It is my pleasure to support this action. Despite many disadvan-tage and hardcore issue coming out,there will be a great amount of positive effect which convince me to side with the university.CLASS 介词结构使用错误conj+prep使用错误If my community was chosen for locate a university, I well be pleasure to support this action. Although due to many disadvantage and hardcore issue will come out, there are still have a great amount of positive effect which convince me to side with the university.If my community was chosen for locating a university,It is my pleasure to support this action. Despite many disadvan-tage and hardcore issue coming out,there will be a great amount of positive effect which convince me to side with theuniversity.CLASS 不定式错误(一般不难)People can use it do many thing, they can use it to search the knowledge which is they do not understand, people al-so can shopping online, do it in this way, they can spend few money, at the same time they will save their times, for example.People can use it to do many thing, they can use it to search the knowledge which is they do not understand, people also can shopping online, do it in this way, they can spend few money, at the same time they will save their times, for example.CLASS 连词没有加在两个句子SVO之间SVO conj(and/but) SVO要么不加conj 就分开!SVO。

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托福写作常见语法错误汇总托福写作常见语法错误汇总1. 托福写作常见语法错误之句子缺少连词两个句子之间不能只用逗号连接,要有连词。

误:My sister loves to dance, she is very good at it.2. 托福写作常见语法错误之句式不平行句子中并列的成分应该是相同的结构。

误:I like to eat Japanese and eating Thai food.(eating- eat)误:Teenagers are more influenced by their peers than their parents.(thantheir parents- than by their parents)3. 托福写作常见语法错误之句子不完整句子缺少主语或谓语。

误:Because some necessary procedures such as transporting the factories,modifying equipment or planting more trees.4. 托福写作常见语法错误之句意重复或冗余误:The low-priced car was inexpensive.(low-priced和inexpensive 重复)误:personally, I believe what the newspaper prints.(personally 和Ibelieve重复)5. 托福写作常见语法错误之时态,语态不一致我们来看几种常见错误(句例说明):She did not adapt to the environment, but with time passing by, they findhim more and more proficient.she 和him是怎么个意思咧?I shall use my father s experience as an example. My father went toAustralia several years ago. He see many birds and animals.明明是过去,see怎么穿越回来了?The gift I made are very pretty. gift是单数啊,are是怎么回事?6.托福写作常见语法错误之连词类缺失Successful men will have many places to live, a country house can provide anice environment to relax, then it will be a new start point, but will not be anend one.大家暂且忽略语法问题,且看这个句子。

这个句子的第一个问题就是连词缺失:在live和a country house之间原作者使用逗号衔接的,但是呢,逗号并不能代替and等连词的作用。

因为Successful men will have many places tolive和a country house can provide a nice environment torelax都是两个完整的句子,而没有主从依附关系,所以必须得有连词(and,but,therefore)等连接才能保证句子有效。

总结:缺连词的另一大原因是很多同学不知道什么是连词,什么不是。

and or but 是最有名的三个连词。

但是!however, so, yet,nevertheless也是连词!!!可以连接两句句子!托福考试作文独立写作范文:大学应加强设施建设还是招聘好老师Do you agree or disagree: the universities should spend more money inimproving facilities (libraries, computer labs) than hiring famous teachers.写作参考一:Cradles of cultivating talents, universities are supposed to provide mosthigh-caliber education. Responding to the expectation, universities havetothink the issue over. Compared with hiring more teachers, from my own perspective, keeping facilities and resources in the universities most advancedand updated is more essential not only for students but also for renowned professors.First of all, students are able to enjoy a better study environment iftheir schools utilize advanced equipment. With the assistance of exquisiteinventions such as electronic screen and projectors, as well as laboratory equipment, like microscopes and chemical reactors, studying would no longer be atedious and repetitious information engrafting process, but a way everyone wouldlike to get involved in. Similarly, definitions and formulas of physics andchemistry will graven in students’ minds deeply if they are aided by the equipment when experimenting. However, hardly can professors crystalize abstractconcepts into definite ideas without advanced teaching devices.What is more, as for famous teachers themselves, a university that does notinvest in its facilities would be appealing. To be constantly enthusiastic onresearching their respective academic fields, teachers have a great demand forexquisite facilities to maintain progressing on their own fields. The most sophisticated technological devices offered in universities enable theseteachers to conduct successful researches and remain at the top, which is reallyattractive to those renowned professors. By contrast, old and obsolete teachingand studying facilities will certainly not inspire teachers to keep furtheracademic researching. Also, practically impossible will teachers have interestin making progress.Granted, it is conceded that hiring more teachers in universities meansguaranteeing education quality in some sense because every student will beconcerned and cared about. Even slightest and most subtle academic performancechanges of students will be noticed; therefore, teachers can encourage and guidefrustrated and upsetting students in time. However, while weighing the benefitsbrought by investing in facilities and hiring more teachers, we can concludethat facilities are more worthwhile.In conclusion, I should reiterate that universities should update theirfacilities, making a top priority. Without advanced facilities, a universitywill not be helped further improved.写作参考二:Advanced facilities, like libraries, research center, universityhospitalare indispensible parts of a good university while famous teachers are also abig component of a prestigious higher institution. Personally, I think it isbetter for universities to spend more money in hiring famous professors. Admittedly, research centers can be a place where advanced technology isincubated, a library that incorporates state-of-the-art technology can also beconducive to students study, however, I still believe that famous professorsplay a more significant role in assessing the reputation of a university. First off, well-respected professors in a specific field can bring lots ofbenefits not only to the whole community but also to the university. To morespecific, prestigious professors can come up with theories and solutions to themost intriguing problems faced by human beings, like treatment of cancers, diabetes and even heart attack. Economists can use data and economic models intheir empirical study to predict the economy, and it can provide lots of information for the authority to make timely adjustment to their policies. Electronic engineers can design some micro-chips that can sustain large-scalecomputation. The benefits that professors bring to the school can be also enormous. For instance, a Novel Prize laureate can attract countless researchfoundations and donations from both the private and public sectors, with thislarge sum of money, the university can in turn renovate labs, research centersand even libraries.Additionally, well-established professors and researchers can educate andenlighten brilliant young students and cultivate future scientists. Famousprofessors are usually expert in education, they might have been teaching andresearching in their field for more than a few decades, thus have accumulatedlots of rich teaching experience and developed the most effective teaching approach. Together with their superb charisma, lots of bright young adults willbe motivated and inspired and therefore embark on the road of scientific endeavor and exploration. Such inspirations and motivations cannot be brought byimproved facilities. Indeed, it is the expertise and charisma of these famousprofessors that attract thousands of brilliant young students to enroll in acollege.To conclude, hiring more famous professors are more advisable than renovating facilities since the scientific discoveries brought by professors canbring colossal benefits to both the community and the university, and also theexpertise and charisma of well-established professors can attract, enlighten andcultivate future scientists.托福考试作文独立写作范文:老师针对青少年学生的不同教法Some believe that teachers (for students from age 14-18) should focus onlecturing and asking students to take notes during lectures. Others believe thatteachers should get students involved in discussion and encourage them toexchange ideas in class. Which way of teaching do you think is more effectivefor students’ learning?写作参考:Educators and researchers have never stopped the examination of the importance and relevance of collaborative and interactive learning that areencouraged by middle schools. When compared with boring lecturing, I, personally, believe that it is far more beneficial to students when they sharetheir ideas and exchange opinions with each other for the following reasons.First off, exchanging ideas with fellow classmates help students developcritical thinking, presentation skills and other kinds of soft skillsets. Whendiscussing issues with peers, students tend to take a position on a certain issue. In this learning process, students will collect their thoughts and synthesize the concepts learned in textbook or in the lecture to supporther points. Also, to respond to others’ comments, students have to reflect onthe rationale of their own arguments and come up with persuasive reasoning. Itis obvious that such activities helps students to learning more meaningfully andextensively. Furthermore, students unconsciously learn how to express themselvesaffirmatively and make their points clear in front of a large audience. It takesright amount of eye contacts, body language and facial expression to conveyone’s idea in a convincing way and such presentation skills can be valuable asset for one’s future career.Additionally, actively discussing issues with peers can help students tocope with different opinions. When discussing issues with peers, not only dostudent contribute to the class, but also they get a chance to be exposed todifferent ideas and perspectives. This is a very conducive experience since weare not living in a vacuum and learning how to appreciate, value and even embrace opinions that are unfamiliar to us can be very important. Furthermore,such experience can be useful in one’s future career when one also has toconfront with different business solutions provided by their coworkers.study conducted by Harvard Business Review shows that the one who experiencedgroup discussions and exchanging of views in school demonstrates a higher potential to resolve possible conflicts with future coworkers and enjoys farmore promising future.In conclusion, discussion and idea exchanges should be encouraged sincesuch activities can help students to develop critical thinking, presentationskills and other kinds of soft skillsets, also they will get students preparedon how deal with different opinions now and in future career.英语写作。

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