托福写作常见语法错误汇总

托福写作常见语法错误汇总

托福写作常见语法错误汇总

1. 托福写作常见语法错误之句子缺少连词

两个句子之间不能只用逗号连接，要有连词。

误：My sister loves to dance， she is very good at it.

2. 托福写作常见语法错误之句式不平行

句子中并列的成分应该是相同的结构。

误：I like to eat Japanese and eating Thai food.(eating- eat)

误：Teenagers are more influenced by their peers than their parents.(than

their parents- than by their parents)

3. 托福写作常见语法错误之句子不完整

句子缺少主语或谓语。

误：Because some necessary procedures such as transporting the factories，

modifying equipment or planting more trees.

4. 托福写作常见语法错误之句意重复或冗余

误：The low-priced car was inexpensive.(low-priced和inexpensive 重复)

误：personally， I believe what the newspaper prints.(personally 和I

believe重复)

5. 托福写作常见语法错误之时态，语态不一致

我们来看几种常见错误(句例说明)：

She did not adapt to the environment, but with time passing by, they find

him more and more proficient.

she 和him是怎么个意思咧?

I shall use my father s experience as an example. My father went to

Australia several years ago. He see many birds and animals.

明明是过去，see怎么穿越回来了?

The gift I made are very pretty. gift是单数啊，are是怎么回事?

6.托福写作常见语法错误之连词类缺失

Successful men will have many places to live, a country house can provide a

nice environment to relax, then it will be a new start point, but will not be an

end one.

大家暂且忽略语法问题，且看这个句子。这个句子的第一个问题就是连词缺失：在live和a country house

之间原作者使用逗号衔接的，但是呢，逗号并不能代替and等连词的作用。因为Successful men will have many places to

live和a country house can provide a nice environment to

relax都是两个完整的句子，而没有主从依附关系，所以必须得有连词(and，but，therefore)等连接才能保证句子有效。

总结：

缺连词的另一大原因是很多同学不知道什么是连词，什么不是。and or but 是最有名的三个连词。但是!however, so, yet,

nevertheless也是连词!!!可以连接两句句子!

托福考试作文独立写作范文：大学应加强设施建设还是招聘好老师

Do you agree or disagree: the universities should spend more money in

improving facilities (libraries, computer labs) than hiring famous teachers.

写作参考一:

Cradles of cultivating talents, universities are supposed to provide most

high-caliber education. Responding to the expectation, universities have

to

think the issue over. Compared with hiring more teachers, from my own perspective, keeping facilities and resources in the universities most advanced

and updated is more essential not only for students but also for renowned professors.

First of all, students are able to enjoy a better study environment if

their schools utilize advanced equipment. With the assistance of exquisite

inventions such as electronic screen and projectors, as well as laboratory equipment, like microscopes and chemical reactors, studying would no longer be a

tedious and repetitious information engrafting process, but a way everyone would

like to get involved in. Similarly, definitions and formulas of physics and

chemistry will graven in students’ minds deeply if they are aided by the equipment when experimenting. However, hardly can professors crystalize abstract

concepts into definite ideas without advanced teaching devices.

What is more, as for famous teachers themselves, a university that does not

invest in its facilities would be appealing. To be constantly enthusiastic on

researching their respective academic fields, teachers have a great demand for

exquisite facilities to maintain progressing on their own fields. The most sophisticated technological devices offered in universities enable these