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写作技法指导
Unit 4 Writing 五步写作规范
写作范式必备
如何写新闻报道
英文新闻报道通常包括下面四个部分： 1．标题：标题是新闻的题目，是编辑对最有新闻价值内容的浓缩、
概括。为了撷取新闻要点、诠释新闻意义、吸引读者阅读，好 的标题应该简洁明了。 2．导语：导语是消息开头的第一段或第一句话，它扼要地揭示出 消息的核心内容。
第五步：巧衔接、顺成文 A train accident happened in Wenzhou city of Zhejiang at 8：
34 pm yesterday, which shocked the whole country. The two trains crashed together violently. Immediately, two coaches fell off a bridge, one of which fell to the ground and the other hung in the air. On hearing the news, the rescue team arrived at the spot to help people who were injured and trapped in the coach. More than 30 people lost their lives and a great number of people got injured.
3．主体：主体是消息的主要部分，它用充足的事实表现主题，是 对导语内容的进一步展开和阐释。主体要根据不同内容运用适 当句型对新闻细节进行描述。
4．结束语：一般是最后一句话或者一段话，通常对全文内容作概 括性的总结。有时，作者根据报道在结束语中提出令人深思的 问题。
[题目要求] 从北京开往温州的两列列车在浙江省温州市相撞，引起全国 人民的震惊，根据下面表格写一篇新闻报道。
第一步：细审题、三确定 1．确定体裁：本文为 新闻报道 。 2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第 三 人称。 3．确定时态：本文是发生过的事情，因此以 一般过去时 为主。 第二步：拟要点、列提纲 事件：①________ ②________ 时间：③________ 地点：④________ 事故经过：⑤________ ⑥________ ⑦________ ⑧________ ⑨________
第三步：依提纲、准翻译 要点一：昨晚 8：34 在浙江温州市发生火车相撞事故。 A train accident happened in Wenzhou city of Zhejiang at 8：34 pm yesterday. 要点二：此事震惊全国。 It shocked the whole country.
第四步：句升级、求靓丽 句式升级一：用 which 引导的定语从句连接要点一和要点二 A train accident happened in Wenzhou city of Zhejiang at 8：34
pm yesterday, which shocked the whole country. 句式升级二：用 one of which 引导的定语从句改写要点四和要点五 Two coaches fell off the bridge, one of which fell to the ground and the other hung in the air. 句式升级三：用 who 引导的定语从句改写要点六和要点七 The rescue team arrived to help people who were injured and trapped in the coach.
要点六：乘客困于车厢中。 Passengers were trapped in the coach. 要点七：救援队火速奔赴现场救援。 The rescue team arrived to help people injured. 要点八：三十多人死亡，多人受伤(a great number of)。 More than 30 people lost their lives and a great number of people got injured.
要点三：两列火车猛烈地撞在一起。 The two trains crashed together violently. 要点四：两节车厢从桥上掉下来。 Two coaches fell off the bridge.
要点五：一节车厢坠落地面；一节悬挂在空中。 One coach fell to 来自百度文库he ground and the other hung in the air.
谢谢
2019/12/5
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Unit 4 Writing 五步写作规范
写作范式必备
如何写新闻报道
英文新闻报道通常包括下面四个部分： 1．标题：标题是新闻的题目，是编辑对最有新闻价值内容的浓缩、
概括。为了撷取新闻要点、诠释新闻意义、吸引读者阅读，好 的标题应该简洁明了。 2．导语：导语是消息开头的第一段或第一句话，它扼要地揭示出 消息的核心内容。
第五步：巧衔接、顺成文 A train accident happened in Wenzhou city of Zhejiang at 8：
34 pm yesterday, which shocked the whole country. The two trains crashed together violently. Immediately, two coaches fell off a bridge, one of which fell to the ground and the other hung in the air. On hearing the news, the rescue team arrived at the spot to help people who were injured and trapped in the coach. More than 30 people lost their lives and a great number of people got injured.
3．主体：主体是消息的主要部分，它用充足的事实表现主题，是 对导语内容的进一步展开和阐释。主体要根据不同内容运用适 当句型对新闻细节进行描述。
4．结束语：一般是最后一句话或者一段话，通常对全文内容作概 括性的总结。有时，作者根据报道在结束语中提出令人深思的 问题。
[题目要求] 从北京开往温州的两列列车在浙江省温州市相撞，引起全国 人民的震惊，根据下面表格写一篇新闻报道。
第一步：细审题、三确定 1．确定体裁：本文为 新闻报道 。 2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第 三 人称。 3．确定时态：本文是发生过的事情，因此以 一般过去时 为主。 第二步：拟要点、列提纲 事件：①________ ②________ 时间：③________ 地点：④________ 事故经过：⑤________ ⑥________ ⑦________ ⑧________ ⑨________
第三步：依提纲、准翻译 要点一：昨晚 8：34 在浙江温州市发生火车相撞事故。 A train accident happened in Wenzhou city of Zhejiang at 8：34 pm yesterday. 要点二：此事震惊全国。 It shocked the whole country.
第四步：句升级、求靓丽 句式升级一：用 which 引导的定语从句连接要点一和要点二 A train accident happened in Wenzhou city of Zhejiang at 8：34
pm yesterday, which shocked the whole country. 句式升级二：用 one of which 引导的定语从句改写要点四和要点五 Two coaches fell off the bridge, one of which fell to the ground and the other hung in the air. 句式升级三：用 who 引导的定语从句改写要点六和要点七 The rescue team arrived to help people who were injured and trapped in the coach.
要点六：乘客困于车厢中。 Passengers were trapped in the coach. 要点七：救援队火速奔赴现场救援。 The rescue team arrived to help people injured. 要点八：三十多人死亡，多人受伤(a great number of)。 More than 30 people lost their lives and a great number of people got injured.
要点三：两列火车猛烈地撞在一起。 The two trains crashed together violently. 要点四：两节车厢从桥上掉下来。 Two coaches fell off the bridge.
要点五：一节车厢坠落地面；一节悬挂在空中。 One coach fell to 来自百度文库he ground and the other hung in the air.
谢谢
2019/12/5
11