A letter of Apology英文道歉信写作
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8. them改为it
9. My mobile phone ran out of battery, because I didn’t get your text messages.
9. because改为so
10. I got the message you leave at the hotel when I got back there late on Thursday. 10. leave改为left
To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots in order to enjoy some appealing scenery. What is more, I will do some voluntary work to enrich my life.
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Definition
A letter of apology is a kind of social letter expressing your regrets for having made a mistake, having done something wrong or having caused a damage, trouble or inconvenience, etc.
school next week. Yours， Li Hua
[满分缘由] 1.结构布局 本文主体部分可分为两段来写： 第一段：向对方表示歉意，并说明道歉的原因； 第二段：提出弥补措施，如我们可以再找什么时间去书店等。 2.亮点词汇 cause sb. trouble; set out; it’s convenient for sb.; suit sb. best; available 3.亮点句式 第⑤句包含so that引导的目的状语从句； 第⑦句包含if not省略的条件状语从句。
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Reminders
Heartily. When you apologize to someone, you should make sure that you write the right words to satisfy that person’s emotions. That is to say, every word you write should come from your heart.
5. Please forgive me for my careless and the inconvenience that I may have caused.
5. careless改为carelessness
6. Again, I do hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apologize.
I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the way, what’s your plan to spend your summer vacation?
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
满分赏析
①第一句为朋友式的日常问候，符合朋友间书信的特点。 ②I feel terribly sorry for …用来引出道歉的内容，句型运用得当。 ③本段用了to start with, in addition, what’s more等连接词，使行 文连贯；not only…but also…也是必须学会运用的高级句型； broaden my horizons也体现了作者平时勤于积累，能给阅卷老师 留下良好的印象。 ④It is a fabulous choice to…(……是极佳的选择)一句是难得的高级 表达；appealing(吸引人的)一词也体现了语言能力。 ⑤最后一段，作者再次用I sincerely apologize again for表达了真诚 的道歉；并询问了对方的暑期计划，符合真实交际情境。
6. apologize改为apology
7. I am really sorry, but I’ve lost the book that you lend me when I stayed with you in June.
7. lend改为lent
8. I would like to buy a new copy of that book and post them to you.
with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class m百度文库eting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
(2016·全国卷丙)假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起 去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.表示歉意； 2.说明原因； 3.另约时间。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Bob， I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore
3. I feel terrible sorry for missing the chance of attending your graduation ceremony.
3. terrible改为terribly
4. I very sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the book report you assigned last week. 4. very前面加am
1. apology改为apologize
2. Much to my regret I was unable to keep my promise to attend your birthday party last Saturday so I had to stay at home to look after my sick mother. 2. so改为because
A letter of Apology
道歉信
Useful words
1. 道歉 _ap__o_lo_g_i_z_e_ v. 因某事向某人道歉：_a_p_o_l_o_g_i_ze__to__s_b_f_o_r_s_t_h_ _a_p_o_l_o_g_y n. 因某事向某人道歉：_m__a_k_e_a_n__a_p_o_lo_g_y__t_o_s_b_f_o_r_s_t_h_
How is everything going? I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. You know, I’ve been preparing for the final exams these days. Now, I am writing to tell you my plans for the summer vacation.
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【2013山东卷改编：未及时回复而道歉】
假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电 子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。 请根据以下要点给他回封邮件：
1. 未及时回信的原因； 2. 你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）
满分佳作 Dear Tom,
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Content
A letter of apology may include the following parts: Express regret or apology. Explain what has happened — the reason for your apology. Express the wish to make up for the loss caused or to promise to remedy the faults. Express the wish for gaining the addressee's forgiveness.
2. _s_o_r_r_y__ adj. 抱歉的 be sorry for sth be sorry to do sth be sorry that...
3
1. I am so sorry for my mistake and I am now writing to apology for my carelessness.
Useful Sentence Patterns
开头常用句式： 1. I am writing to apologize to you for sth 2. I am writing to apologize to you for my failing to do sth 3. I would like to express my deepest apology for not being
14
道歉信 • 我们在工作或生活中，有时难免会犯一些错误，
这时写封致歉信就显得很有必要。
• 写道歉信的语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实，不 要显出丝毫的虚情假意。好的道歉信不仅会取得 对方的谅解，还可能增进彼此的感情。
道歉信写作4步走
4.再次致歉望理解
3.提出补救办法 2.说明具体原因 1.表示歉意
able to do sth 4. I am writing this letter to express my regret... 5. I am very sorry to say that... 6. Here is my deepest apology for...
9
结尾常用句式： 1. Please allow me to say sorry again. 2. Will you please accept my apology? 3. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. 4. I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.
Shall we go on Saturday morning？We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you，let’s meet at 8： 30 outside the school gate. If not，let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after
Directly. Let the addressee know that you were wrong and you are sorry directly.
Timely. You’d better write the letter of apology in time in order not to be misunderstood.
9. My mobile phone ran out of battery, because I didn’t get your text messages.
9. because改为so
10. I got the message you leave at the hotel when I got back there late on Thursday. 10. leave改为left
To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots in order to enjoy some appealing scenery. What is more, I will do some voluntary work to enrich my life.
10
Definition
A letter of apology is a kind of social letter expressing your regrets for having made a mistake, having done something wrong or having caused a damage, trouble or inconvenience, etc.
school next week. Yours， Li Hua
[满分缘由] 1.结构布局 本文主体部分可分为两段来写： 第一段：向对方表示歉意，并说明道歉的原因； 第二段：提出弥补措施，如我们可以再找什么时间去书店等。 2.亮点词汇 cause sb. trouble; set out; it’s convenient for sb.; suit sb. best; available 3.亮点句式 第⑤句包含so that引导的目的状语从句； 第⑦句包含if not省略的条件状语从句。
13
Reminders
Heartily. When you apologize to someone, you should make sure that you write the right words to satisfy that person’s emotions. That is to say, every word you write should come from your heart.
5. Please forgive me for my careless and the inconvenience that I may have caused.
5. careless改为carelessness
6. Again, I do hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apologize.
I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the way, what’s your plan to spend your summer vacation?
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
满分赏析
①第一句为朋友式的日常问候，符合朋友间书信的特点。 ②I feel terribly sorry for …用来引出道歉的内容，句型运用得当。 ③本段用了to start with, in addition, what’s more等连接词，使行 文连贯；not only…but also…也是必须学会运用的高级句型； broaden my horizons也体现了作者平时勤于积累，能给阅卷老师 留下良好的印象。 ④It is a fabulous choice to…(……是极佳的选择)一句是难得的高级 表达；appealing(吸引人的)一词也体现了语言能力。 ⑤最后一段，作者再次用I sincerely apologize again for表达了真诚 的道歉；并询问了对方的暑期计划，符合真实交际情境。
6. apologize改为apology
7. I am really sorry, but I’ve lost the book that you lend me when I stayed with you in June.
7. lend改为lent
8. I would like to buy a new copy of that book and post them to you.
with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class m百度文库eting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
(2016·全国卷丙)假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起 去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.表示歉意； 2.说明原因； 3.另约时间。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Bob， I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore
3. I feel terrible sorry for missing the chance of attending your graduation ceremony.
3. terrible改为terribly
4. I very sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the book report you assigned last week. 4. very前面加am
1. apology改为apologize
2. Much to my regret I was unable to keep my promise to attend your birthday party last Saturday so I had to stay at home to look after my sick mother. 2. so改为because
A letter of Apology
道歉信
Useful words
1. 道歉 _ap__o_lo_g_i_z_e_ v. 因某事向某人道歉：_a_p_o_l_o_g_i_ze__to__s_b_f_o_r_s_t_h_ _a_p_o_l_o_g_y n. 因某事向某人道歉：_m__a_k_e_a_n__a_p_o_lo_g_y__t_o_s_b_f_o_r_s_t_h_
How is everything going? I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. You know, I’ve been preparing for the final exams these days. Now, I am writing to tell you my plans for the summer vacation.
16
【2013山东卷改编：未及时回复而道歉】
假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电 子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。 请根据以下要点给他回封邮件：
1. 未及时回信的原因； 2. 你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）
满分佳作 Dear Tom,
12
Content
A letter of apology may include the following parts: Express regret or apology. Explain what has happened — the reason for your apology. Express the wish to make up for the loss caused or to promise to remedy the faults. Express the wish for gaining the addressee's forgiveness.
2. _s_o_r_r_y__ adj. 抱歉的 be sorry for sth be sorry to do sth be sorry that...
3
1. I am so sorry for my mistake and I am now writing to apology for my carelessness.
Useful Sentence Patterns
开头常用句式： 1. I am writing to apologize to you for sth 2. I am writing to apologize to you for my failing to do sth 3. I would like to express my deepest apology for not being
14
道歉信 • 我们在工作或生活中，有时难免会犯一些错误，
这时写封致歉信就显得很有必要。
• 写道歉信的语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实，不 要显出丝毫的虚情假意。好的道歉信不仅会取得 对方的谅解，还可能增进彼此的感情。
道歉信写作4步走
4.再次致歉望理解
3.提出补救办法 2.说明具体原因 1.表示歉意
able to do sth 4. I am writing this letter to express my regret... 5. I am very sorry to say that... 6. Here is my deepest apology for...
9
结尾常用句式： 1. Please allow me to say sorry again. 2. Will you please accept my apology? 3. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. 4. I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.
Shall we go on Saturday morning？We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you，let’s meet at 8： 30 outside the school gate. If not，let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after
Directly. Let the addressee know that you were wrong and you are sorry directly.
Timely. You’d better write the letter of apology in time in order not to be misunderstood.