广东高考读写任务英语作文训练

如何写好“读写任务”第二部分写作（学案）

I. 如何写出吸引改卷老师眼球的好句？

1. I followed your advice. I went to the supermarket. There I found four chairs. They were in good shape. They were reasonably priced.

使用分词和定语从句合并上述句子：______________ your advice, I went to the supermarket ________________________________________________________________________.

2. The cat walked slowly through the grass. The cat was watching the mouse the whole time.

使用现在分词合并：__________________________________________, the cat walked slowly through the grass.

3. The gold was hidden under the ground. It was safe for many years.

使用过去分词合并：________________________, the gold was safe for many years.

练习：1.Tom was waiting in the queue for half an hour. He suddenly realized that he had left his wallet at home.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

2.The two students were lost in the mountains for a week. They were finally saved by the local police.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

4. 使用定语从句或形容词修饰名词或代词。

1）The house has been turned into an apartment. I was born in the house.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

2）You will have a room in my house. The room is very comfortable. In this room, you will find many things. The things are quite necessary for daily life.

方法一(使用2个定语从句)：You will have a room in my house,

__________________________and ___________ you can find many things that are necessary for daily life.

方法二：（用形容词代替其中一个定语从句，让句子简练）

You will have a ___________________ room in my house, ____________you can find all the necessary things for daily life.

5. 使用介词短语合并（with +O; with+O+OC）

The fire is burning, so I feel warm._________________________, I feel warm.

I lost my bike, so I had to walk home. ______________________________, I had to walk home.

II. 如何写漂亮读写任务第二部分写作？

1. 平时训练要求

1)书写卷面训练：

卷面书写给评卷老师的第一印象非常重要，也是作文能拿到高分的第一道门槛，所谓“印象分”。在高考作文备考过程中，要特别注意书写训练,切忌书写不清、涂涂抹抹。具体要求如下：（1）用纯黑色或颜色均匀的签字笔或钢笔；（2）贴底线书写，保持字母大小基本一致，字母主体部分占行线约一半大小为宜；（3）保持单词间距基本一致，一般为两个字母的位置；（4）错词只用一条横线或斜线划掉，尽量不重复涂写同一字母或单词；（5）每段前空格约4个字母的位置。（3个或5个字母）

2）避开抄袭陷阱：高水平的“抄袭”其实不是抄袭而是改写，是利用原文的信息内容、词汇和句子结构，通过词汇替换和句型转换等手段进行改写。这也正是“读写任务”这种题型所要考查考生是否掌握的写作技能。

3）整篇作文是一个整体，内容要合理安排，语义要连贯，各段之间过渡、衔接要自然，避免对内容要点一问一答式的写作。

2.各段之间过渡、衔接常用句型：

What a touching story, which reminds me of…多么感人的故事呀，该故事使我想起……

例如：Sam’s experience reminds me of my similar experience happening four years ago when I was admitted to senior high school. Sam的经历让我想起了四年前我上高中时发生的类似经历。

I was deeply touched when I read your letter. It’s the first time that I have realized your deepest love for me. 读完您的信后，我很感动，我第一次感受到你对我深深的爱。

But in the meantime, I am looking forward to my new life in the college.但同时，我又期盼着大学生活。

However, life is like a box of chocolate and you’ll never know what’s inside until you open it. 然而人生就像一盒巧克力，直到你打开时，才知道里面是什么口味。