英语基础写作人物,地点高分tips

一，说明文（人物，地点，院校）

A. 怎样写人物简介

（一）人物简介的写作步骤；(概,貌,育,平,估)

1）age, sex, birth-place, background

2）appearance ,character

3）education

4）big events in his or her life ( in order of time )

5）evaluation

(二) 语法，句法高分tips

A. 概况（尽量用同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺) 如；

1) Born in Poland on Nov. 7 ，1867, Madam Curie is a great scientist.

2) Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12th,

1809.

3) Born of a poor clerk's family, Charles Dickens, a great novelist, had little schooling.

4) Sun Showier, a world champion in diving, is a boy of 14 from Guangdong.

B．外貌,性格(巧用with做定语) 如；

1) He is near-sighted /far-sighted guy with a pair of glasses on his nose.

2) She is good-looking /ordinary-looking/funny-looking with long beautiful hair.

3) He is a tall and thin guy with thick eyebrows, looking very handsome.

4) Born in Germany, Einstein is a great scientist with an extraordinary imagination.

有备无患

C. 教育经历(注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼) 如；

1）Majored in Science, he graduated from a famous University in the north and after 4 years,

he went abroad for further studies.

2）Graduated from the department of English of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctor's degree.

D．生平(尽量用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章)如；

1）Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music.

2）He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.

3）So hard does he work that he devotes almost all his lifetime to our human cause.

4）With great determination and perseverance, he took 37 years to finish the book, which makes a great contribution to China.

E．评估（注意运用一些动词,形容词等短语，词组）如；

1）Leifeng set us a good example ,so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him .

2）He is one of the greatest novelists in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man.

3）We sing high praise for his brave stories, and his heroic story will spread all of China.

4）Lishizhen makes great contributions to Medical literature.

（三）实例分析

9. 说明：

上海出版的《学生英文报》，对象是我国的学生，请用英语为该报写一段人物介绍，介绍游泳运动员罗雪娟。内容要点如下：

1）罗雪娟（Luo Xuejuan）,昵称：罗罗，女，23岁，浙江人；

2）从小接受游泳训练，2000年，崭露头角；

3）取得成绩：2003年在巴塞罗那世界锦标赛中获得三枚金牌；2004年雅典奥运会打破纪录；夺得100米游泳冠军。

4）其他情况：由于身体原因，现宣布退役，将到北京大学读书。

注意：

1）要有标题。

2）介绍须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。

[写作要求]

只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容

[评分标准]

句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性和连贯性

2. 题解：

这是一篇人物报道，根据所提供的材料组织文章。首先应确定标题。如：Luo Xuejuan—Our Pride 其次应介绍人物的姓名、性别、年龄、籍贯，随后介绍她的成长过程，最后介绍她取得的成就。如；

Luo Xuejuan—Our Pride

Born in Zhejiang province, Luo Xuejuan, with the nickname, Luoluo is a 23-year-old China’s female Olympic swimming champion. She went in for swimming at early age and with her greatest efforts, she began to show her great talent in 2000. Three years later, she caused wide