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Task 1：大家要小心，因为有两张图，第一张图是柱形图，是关于专利认可权的，美国，日本，巴西，还有一个国家好像是肯尼亚，颁发专利认可权给resident and non-resident 的，美国和日本在两方面都有统计数据，巴西和肯尼亚各有一个，这是1999的数据

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TASK2:讲了一个毒品的名称,然后说PEOPLE HAS FREEDOM TO USE IT ,BUT SOME PEOPLE SAYS THAT IT SHOULD BE ILLEGALE AS OTHER DRUGS.问你是AGREE OR DISAGREE?

Although it is a freedom to use

tobacco

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while some people think it should be made illegal as the same way as other drug s. To what extent do you agree or disagree ？ What’s your opinion? 同意会比较好写,

1.通过数据来验证,这是很强有力的(数据可以自己编)

2. 吸烟对SMOKER 自身的坏处：容易上瘾，尼古丁的毒害等等。可以引用某某医生，某某组织的研究，论断等

3.吸烟可以传播很多都是被动吸烟者,谈谈被动吸烟的坏处

4. 社会影响：走私活动危害社会的安全，使政府税款流失。 不同意

1.通过数据来验证，吸烟的危害远不及毒品(数据可以自己编)

2.在强烈的工作压力下，吸烟可以缓解疲劳

3.天赋人权，人人生而平等与自由。吸烟也是一种自由，所以不应被干涉。

3. 烟草的交易有巨大的商业利润，在一些国家，更是国民经济的支柱。如果被禁止，给政府和社会带来的损失是无法估量的。注意举例。

范文1

Nowhere in the world has the issue of tobacco been so much debated as in our society. Nowadays, tobacco is more harmful than drug to people ’s health, therefore many people think that smoking is legal that is a direct and

primary reason to induce this kind of problem. The above point is certainly true; this essay will outline three reasons.

The main reason is that tobacco is a silent killer to smokers. Tobacco is known to be the probable cause of some 25 different diseases, and for some, such as lung cancer, bronchitis and emphysema, it is the main cause. According to a WHO report four million people die yearly from tobacco-relate d diseases, that is one death every eight seconds. Tobacco is significantly becoming a greater cause of death and disability than any other single cause. Another reason is that more and more young people are under 18 years old who smoke cigarette have been blinded by the

deceit of tobacconists. Tobacco among adolescents remains stubbornly persist ent. Smoking among

adolescents rose in the 1990s in several developed countries， such as China, Vietnam and Thailand . While new markets are being opened by the tobacco industry actions, old markets have not

been closed. Tobacco is a global threat.

Last but not the least reason is the increase in cigarette smuggling. Because of tobacco smuggling, the legal retailing and distribution systems are badly affected, and faced with increased lawlessness and heavy tax losses. This be havior severely affects the economy.

In conclusion, the tobacco should be considered illegal. Perhaps a pack of cigarettes is less harmful than another drug, but tobacco is actually the biggest killer of all the drugs.

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范文2

Advertisements of tobacco and those of “smoking is harmful”are often seen together. But there has been an on-going argument about whether or not to bacco should be forbidden and made illegal. I have always believed that smoking should be illegal for the following reasons. First, smoking does great harm to human health and causes many diseases. It is reported that more than 70% of lung cancer sufferers are smokers, and the average life-span of smokers is seven years less than that of non- smokers. Moreover, it hurts not only smokers, but also the ones around the smokers. Many researchers claim that breathing “second-hand smoke” may be even more harmful than smoking.

Second, many social problems and disasters can be attributed to smoking. For instance, many wives cannot bear their husbands’ smoking all the time, which causes many quarrels, or even divorces. Furthermore, the biggest fire disaster in China, the Daxinganling fire disaster, was caused by a burning cigarette end, and the cost of the resulting loss was unimaginable.

Last, smoking tobaccos is a main source of air pollution.A magazine said that for every cigarette smoked each day,a whole tree is needed to clean the air. In other words, smoking one less cigar every day equals planting a tree. It is a brilliant contribution to the earth we are living on.

In a word, all the above demonstrate that smoking harms yourselves as well as your neighbors, pollutes the air we ourselves are breathing, and even agitates the social peace. So, in my opinion, tobacco should be strictly forbidden, and smoking should be made illegal.