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中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
美(beautify)
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中考英语写作指导
学学习习目目标标：：
1.了解中考作文要求及命题特点。 2.学习如何组织作文。 3.如何有效地使用连词。
1. 中考作文要求及命题特点
要求：要求学生在15-20分钟内，根据所给提
示，写一篇语言正确、内容完整，语句连贯的 短文。词数控制在80个左右。
特点：1.贴近生活，贴近时代，有充分的思维
加谚语(Proverb)
集中注意力于学习
We should concentrate on our studies. As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...
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• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents. A few
people work.
(th and enjoy your vacation. People who relax
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Enjoy an article
Group learning 1:
Read the article and find out: 1 What’s the main idea of each paragraph? （每一段的主要内容是什么？） 2 What’s the writer’s opinion? What are the reasons?（作者的观点是什么？理由？） 3 Is the experience typical for the topic? （作者的亲身经历对于观点来说典型吗？） 4 Are there any good phrases or sentences? Underline them!（有好词好句吗？请划住。）
正方： Last year, I got into trouble learning math. I got poor grades on math and I was really worried. However, I believed that I could deal with it by
me much time, my eyesight became
worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some
personal information, I often got many unwanted calls.
自己的亲身经历
All in all, as middle school students, we should be far away from the mobile phones, and pay much attention to our study.
Group learning 2:
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going to the People’s Park by bus on July 10th, Sunday. (扩展句) We’ll leave at 7:00 a.m. at the
school gate and arrive there at 8:30 a.m. in the morning. (扩展句) Then you can go boating and swimming. ( 扩 展 句 ) Let’s have lunch in a
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根据下面表格所提供的信息，写一则通知，告诉你 的同学关于你们郊游的计划。
时间
星期日（７月１０日）
地点
人民公园
交通工具 坐公共汽车前往
出发时间 早上７：００
到达公园时 早上８：３０ 间
活动安排
上午：划船；游泳；在饭馆吃午餐 下午：英语角活动（English corner activities）；照相
5、内容的完整：一般供料作文包括一定数量的 内容点，漏写某一点则要被扣掉2~3分，因此审 题要细心观察，特别是在做看图作文题时，要注 意某些夸张“画点”，它（们）常是暗示应当写 出的内容点。画面内容较多时，不要事无巨细， 全面开花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍，做到 详略得当。此外，80词左右的英语作文至少需 70词，最多不能超过完9整版0p词pt课件，少词或多词则要扣4
begin and how much does it cost? ( 扩 展 句 )
Where will the class be held? (扩展句) Also, do
you have any more information about what we
中考英语作文指导课件(共38张PPT)
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
中考英语作文提高方法 ppt课件(完美版)
b. We know that more and more students like pop songs. As we all know, more and more students like pop songs.
brother .
）学会使用感叹句； 2 It is necessary to help others. ！How necessary it is to help others
善用复合句； )3 a. We need to help people. The people are in trouble.
then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that … 4) 表示空间关系的过渡词：near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside …
吴轶佳建议，英语作文在整个写作过程中，要适当选择恰当的连词来表示文 中的并列、转折、选择、条件、因果等关系，并且注意句子结构的变化，避免重 复和单调。
• Making an invition 考试中的写作是一种控制性写作，在至多25分钟的时间内要实现审题，列
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1. seem, appear 等表示“似乎”、“好像” 等意思的动词；
2. look, taste, smell, sound, feel等表示 五官感觉的动词；
3. remain, keep等表示“维持，保持”等 意思的动词；
practise my English and make some new friends.
(扩展句) I think this English evening class will be
helpful to me. (扩展句) Could you please tell me a
little more about the class? (扩展句) When does it
第16页/共30页
Good morning, everyone! Now I’ll tell you a piece of good news.(主题句)
We are planning an outing. (主题句) We are
going to the People’s Park by bus on July 10th, Sunday. (扩展句) We’ll leave at 7:00 a.m. at the
We are planning an outing. __________
第8页/共30页
Good morning, everyone! Now I’ll tell you a piece of good news.(主题句)
We are planning an outing. (主题句) We are
practise my English and make some new friends.
——如何提高中考英语成绩 (共31张PPT)
八、作文注意事项
1. 注意分三大段，每段开头空两格。（2分） 2. 2. 文章审题要清楚，特别是人称和时态。写作文前先把省略号 的地方补充成中文，有很多人只补了一部分，改作文老师最喜 欢看的最后一段部分表达你自己观点的省略的部分没有补充成 中文，以至于在最后一段失很多分。 3. 3. 注意每一段的主题句，加连词（如：however, besides, not only…but also, what’s more（此外）, what’s worse(更糟糕的是 ), as for me, in my opinion）。 4. 4. 文章字数要控制好，不要写的太多, 最多不超过50%以上。语 句要简练不啰嗦。可以尝试用些大的句型如：It’s +adj.+of/for sb to do sth. 宾语从句、定语从句包括符合要求的英语谚语。 5. 5. 本次中考命题还是对比型的作文，即A观点、B观点最后表达 你自己的观点。我们可以把第二段B观点的开头直接固定下来 ，如：B: However, some others don’t think so/disagree. 第三段 表达自己的观点开头可以这样：As for me/In my opinion,…
ways to keep fit The 1________
Eating properly
Keeping off germs
You should have proper breakfast because it can provide 2________ you with necessary energy. You should have enough for lunch and little for supper 3________. but Sweet snacks and desserts arc tasty, 4________ you shouldn't eat too much. brush your teeth every It's necessary for you to 5________ day, cough or sneeze into your arms’ and wash your hands often to stop germs from 6________. speeding
《中考英语写作指导》公开课课件共25张PPT
一、写作要点 • “一审”即审题。 • “二写”即列纲或打腹稿。 • “三连”即连词和句成文。 • “四改”即修改润色全文。
审题：做到三审
• 体裁看清楚题目要求，读懂题目所表达
的含义，抓住要点，注意文体是什么
• 时态、人称如果是日记和故事，宜采
用过去时态；如是简介之类的，宜采用现 在时态。
列纲：做到三思
中考英语作文指导
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英语写作在中考英语中占据重要 的地位，写作分值的高低直接影 响到英语测试的成绩，怎样才能 写出一篇优秀作文，在中考中获 取高分呢？
习作范例
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers. •What exactly your hobby is; •When and how you became interested in this hobby; •Why you enjoy your hobby; •About your hopes and plans for the future. 写作要求： 1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将 提供的信息体现在文章中。 2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。 3.词数60-80.
• In my life, I will thank my mother forever. My mother is busy everyday. she does housework and works hard in the factory. I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties. I am ill, she looks after me carefully. I will thank my mother for giving me life. I will thank her for helping me. I love my mother very much.
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健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请
Bad sample（0-3分）
• Students healthy is important. Even though have a good hard. But haven't healthy is not good. • Have a good fit is very important.
I want to have a mountain bike There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows. First of all, a mountain bike can be very useful because riding it to school can save a lot of time. I needn’t worry about being late any more. Besides, it’s also helpful for me to take some exercise. I believe I will lead a healthier life. What’s more, when I go out with friends, it will be more convenient to ride a mountain bike than taking the bus.
3.转折关系 but, while 4.因果关系 for, so,
初三英语作文的技巧和方法课件
初三英语作文的技巧和方法课件**Introduction**As students progress into their third year of secondary school, English essay writing becomes a crucial skill to master. Writing an effective essay not only requires a good grasp of the English language but also demands a strategic understanding of essay structure, content development, and language techniques. This article aims to provide students with a comprehensive guide to writing excellent English essays in their junior year.**1. Understanding the Essay Prompt**The foundation of any essay is the understanding of the prompt. Students need to carefully read and interpret the given topic or question, ensuring they fully comprehend the expectations of the task. This involves identifying the key points to discuss, the audience, and the purpose of writing. **2. Planning the Essay Structure**An organized essay is essential for a clear andcoherent presentation of ideas. Students should plan theiressays by dividing them into three main parts: introduction, body, and conclusion.* **Introduction**: Begin with a catchy openingsentence that grabs the reader's attention. Follow with a brief overview of the topic and a clear statement of the main argument or point of view. * **Body**: Develop themain ideas and arguments in separate paragraphs. Ensureeach paragraph has a clear topic sentence followed by evidence and examples to support the topic. ***Conclusion**: Summarize the main points and arguments made in the essay, restating the thesis statement if necessary. Conclude with a closing statement that leaves a lasting impression on the reader.**3. Using Effective Language Techniques**Language usage is crucial in essay writing. Students should aim to use a variety of sentence structures, vocabulary, and language devices to enhance their writing. * **Vary Sentence Structure**: Mix simple, compound,and complex sentences to create a dynamic flow of ideas. ***Choose Precise Vocabulary**: Use specific and relevant vocabulary to convey ideas accurately. * **Employ LanguageDevices**: Utilize devices like similes, metaphors, and personifications to add depth and interest to the essay.**4. Revising and Editing**Revision and editing are essential steps in essay writing. Students should proofread their essays for grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors. They should also checkfor coherence and logical flow, ensuring that ideas are presented clearly and effectively.**Conclusion**Mastering the techniques and strategies of essaywriting in junior year can significantly improve students' academic performance. By understanding the essay prompt, planning the structure, using effective language techniques, and revising and editing their work, students can produce engaging and persuasive essays that reflect their knowledge and understanding of the subject matter. With practice and dedication, essay writing can become a valuable skill that students can use throughout their academic careers.**初三英语作文技巧与方法深度解析****引言**随着学生进入初三，英语作文写作成为了一项必须掌握的关键技能。
最新英语作文提分技巧课件ppt
the school library. 7、 各种名词性从句 e.g.
That’s what I should do. We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.
riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary. 5、 with短语 e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a
handbag in her hand.
6、 定语从句 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information.
三 高考大纲中常用的连接词
1. 表示递进; 另外，还有：what is more; besides; also; moreover; in addition
2. 表示转折关系 但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.
2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him .
3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
二 丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）
中考英语作文解题技巧(共40张PPT)【完美版】PPT文档43页
谢谢
11、越是没有本领的就越加自命不凡。——邓拓 12、越是无能的人，越喜欢挑剔别人的错儿。——爱尔兰 13、知人者智，自知者明。胜人者有力，自胜者强。——老子 14、意志坚强的人能把世界放在手中像泥块一样任意揉捏。——歌德 15、最具挑战性的挑战莫过于提升自我。——迈克尔·F·斯特利
中考英语作文解题技巧(共40张PPT)【完 美版】
11、获得的成功越大，就越令人高兴 。野心 是使人 勤奋的 原因， 节制使 人枯萎 。 12、不问收获，只问耕耘。如同种树 ，先有 根茎， 再有枝 叶，尔 后花实 ，好好 劳动， 不要想 太多， 那样只 会使人 胆孝懒 惰，因 为不实 践，甚 至不接 触社会 ，难道 你是野 人。(名 言网) 13、不怕，不悔(虽然只有四个字，但 常看常 新。 14、我在心里默默地为每一个人祝福 。我爱 自己， 我用清 洁与节 制来珍 惜我的 身体， 我用智 慧和知 识充实 我的头 脑。 15、这世上的一切都借希望而完成。 农夫不 会播下 一粒玉 米，如 果他不 曾希望 它长成 种籽； 单身汉 不会娶 妻，如 果他不 曾希望 有小孩 ；商人 或手艺 人不会 工作， 如果他 不曾希 望因此 而有收 益。-- 马钉路 德。
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• 第三档(6-8分)：文本长度与要求有明显距离，书写不规范， 要点不完整 （只有1个要点），行文不连贯，词汇量不足， 错误较多，勉强能看出作文意图。
• 第二档（3-5分）：能用句子表达，错误百出，只能勉强 猜测出作文意图。
• 第一档（0-2分）：有一些英语单词，但与话题毫不相干。
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中考英语高分作文的特点
We need to help the people who are in trouble.
b. We know that more and more students like pop songs. As we all know, more and more students like pop songs.
”现状“一）初中生写作(
：”六大病症“初中生写作 2
审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯； )1 单词拼写错误； )2 frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet … 动词缺失； )3 Eg: I happy I can go to Peking.
）前后不一致（数、人称、时态、主谓不一致等） 4 Eg: All people have their own dream.
二、中考英语高分作文的特点
6、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。 7、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段， 让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要 点和重要句子。 8、要点齐全。 9、首尾呼应，自然成一体。 10、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师 一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就 给打高分了。
3. 鼓励学生（尤其是优等生）坚持课外阅读，并用“积 累”本收集高频词汇、短语、佳句，加强记忆。
的词汇。”高端“鼓励学生使用 .4 Eg: I am very interested in pop music.
= show/take great interest in I have lots of homework to do every day.
英语作文 注意交叉使用长短句
吴轶佳说，在5月份长春市模拟考试当中，很多同学都觉得大作文不太容易 写好，不容易得高分。我们容易忽略的一个重要问题是我们面对的是高中老师来 批改我们初三学生的作文，高中老师的要求水准，他们指导高考作文的习惯，他 们对于作文的品位和要求都可能与我们平时的思维习惯有所不同，所以文章的可 读性就更能成就一篇完美的中考作文。
brother .
）学会使用感叹句； 2 It is necessary to help others. ！How necessary it is to help others
善用复合句； )3 a. We need to help people. The people are in trouble.
汇丰富，没有任何语法错误。
• 第五档（12-14分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，涵 盖所有要点，结 构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇比 较丰富有少量语法错误。
• 第四档（9-11分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，基本 涵盖要点（有2 要点得给9-10分），行文比较连贯，词ts to have a good rest. （ ）中式英语（Chinglish5 Eg: I very like sports.
6) 综合性错误。 包括单词大小写、标点符号以及形容词副词
的混淆、连词的缺失误用、句子结构不完整等。
中考英语作文评分标准
• 满分档（15分）：长度符合要求（80-90字），书写规范， 涵盖所有要 点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词
=endless/oceans of
Playing too much computer is bad for our study.
=gets in the way of = have a bad influence on
句子
词不离句， 完整、准确、 新颖、丰富的句式表达是一篇好 文章的必备条件。
有效的句式教学
在英语写作中，过多地使用长句和短句都不好，正确的做法是，根据实际情 况，在文章当中交叉使用长短句。综合使用各种所谓的“高级”结构。在适合的 语境当中，在自己十分有把握的情况下，使用一句名言警句来增加文章的色彩。 但是在大型考试的考场上，不鼓励现场原创的语言，还是尽量使用平时老师给批 改过的，教材中有的，你十分熟悉和有把握的语言。这样的作文才会在紧张的情 绪影响之下少犯错误
吴轶佳建议，英语作文在整个写作过程中，要适当选择恰当的连词来表示文 中的并列、转折、选择、条件、因果等关系，并且注意句子结构的变化，避免重 复和单调。
• Making an invition 考试中的写作是一种控制性写作，在至多25分钟的时间内要实现审题，列
提纲，打草稿，修改草稿，打磨语言，并准确，美观地誊写在答题卡上。
基本句式。”五大“帮助学生掌握认清 .1 背、听写、加强中考相关话题必备佳句的朗读 .2 。句子翻译以及课外佳句的积累、诵、仿写 的句式变换中不断积攒实战经”多样“让学生在 .3 验。
句子
3. “多样”的句式变换
）合并为简单句； 1
Eg: My brother helped me in maths. I made great progress. I made great progress in maths with the help of my
中考英语写作高分“秘笈”
• 要点齐全 过渡自然 • 首尾相呼 分段提行 • 连词增色 名句添光 • 长短得当 高分有望
如何逐步培养和提 升英语写作能力？
写作能力的引导 二
词汇短语 句子
篇章
词汇短语
同时,词汇是学生用英语表达思想 也是写作的基础和源泉。
”攻关秘笈“词汇短语
1. 词汇的巧妙记忆。 （children; believe…( 加强中考课标词汇、短语的听默写。 .2
1、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入 主题。
2、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。 3、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成 一体。
4、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一 个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇 量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。
5、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。