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That night I took the javelin home with me. Lying in my bed, I stared at the marvewk.baidu.comous stuff, sleepless. No sooner had the sports meeting ended than I was chosen to be a member of the track team. But the flood of excitement was still so fresh, making me suddenly realize the truth: one’s talent is always there, waiting for you to try with courage. From that day in 1953, decades have passed yet I still treasure these words in mind. I tried everything, desiring to explore new possibilities of my life track, and the result turned out to be fruitful. Do remember: everyone has his own javelin, just give it a throw.
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Reflection: To make language vivid, you can----
Use concrete words
Use figure of speech, like simile or Metaphor(修辞) tips Change the part of speech（词性）
Pay special attention to the sentence structure
One possible version:
I watched as the spear took off. My heart quickened constantly as the javelin drew a beautiful curve in the blue sky. “31yards!” the teachers astonished voice hit my eardrum directly, making all the sounds fade into total silence. Contrary to their previous laughs, my classmates looked at me with adoration. It was the best throw that put me to the top of the list. The teacher announced excitedly, “If it hadn’t been for the Javelin, the skinny boy who named Orowitz would never have found his talent.” when the teacher decides to send it home with me as a gift, I gave him a big huge, screaming with excitement.
Everyone has at least one talent, and while it sometimes takes you a life time to find, but it does exist. Trust yourself and just give it a throw.