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II.增加要点中的细节
•首先，细读和分析书面表达原文和提示， 理解句意，再适当增加细节，完善句子， 常用的方法有：增加原信息有关原因、条 件和目的等从句
II.增加要点中的细节
•1、增加与原信息有关的原因的句子 •假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry最近 来信，询问你高考后的暑期安排。请你根 据以下要点，用英语回一封信，说明你的 计划，并简述理由。 （1）.休息； （2）. 读书；
• 我们有许多共同爱好。（例如旅行，游泳，钓鱼） • We have a lot of common interests. • such as travelling,swimming,fishing.
• 集中注意力于学习（不劳无获） • We should focus our mind on our studies. • As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should focus our mind
• 3 我爸爸会带外国学生参观这个城市（很高兴带，在空闲时间） • My father will be very glad to show the foreign students around our
city
• in our spare time. • 4 .我会帮您还书的。（给图书馆/你的老师） • I will help you return the book. to the the library./your teacher.
成文：
• Dear Henry, • I’m glad to receive your letter. It’s a pleasure for me to tell you
my plan of this coming summer vacation after the college entrance examination. • First of all, I need a good rest because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years .Of course, I’ll do some reading for fun, and for knowledge as well. I’ll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework. They’ve done so much for me, you know. If possible, I’ll take part in some social activities so that I can know more about the society. （105字）
高中英语写作提升之如何增加细节 课件(共21张ppt)
crowds. Only in this way can you keep yourself far away from
学会分析优秀的范文 the virus. More importantly, you must wear protective clothing or at least mask when you have to go out, as the protective
job in a foreign company.
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Dear Tim,
补充原因
Learning that the COVID 19 is also spreading in America
and you are asking for advice since Chinese have done quite
well in fighting in this battle, I am writing this letter to offer you
二、补全前因后果或目的
2.补充前因后果或目的
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Looking forward to your early reply.
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I am glad to hear that you are eager to improve your Chinese and know more about Chinese culture.It 's my pleasure to recommend you some resources.
Ending
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I am glad to hear that you are eager to improve your Chinese and know more about Chinese culture.It 's my pleasure to recommend you some resources.
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高中英语一轮课件写作微技能书面表达如何增加细节
Noticing the use of vidid verbs and objections: Excellent sample essays of using vidid verbs and objections to bring the details to life, making the reader feel as if they are witnessing the scene firsthand
03
Tips and methods for adding details
Expand presence components and enrich presence
structure
01
Add advertisements
By inserting advertisements such as time, place, banner, and
The role of detail description in writing
Enhancing the vividness of the text
Detail description helps to create a sense of presence and immersion for the reader, making the text more vivid and engaging
Organize the content
Identify key details
Determine which specific examples, facts, or accessories will be best illustrated or support the main ideas
Arrange the ideas in a logical order to ensure a coherent flow of information
03
Tips and methods for adding details
Expand presence components and enrich presence
structure
01
Add advertisements
By inserting advertisements such as time, place, banner, and
The role of detail description in writing
Enhancing the vividness of the text
Detail description helps to create a sense of presence and immersion for the reader, making the text more vivid and engaging
Organize the content
Identify key details
Determine which specific examples, facts, or accessories will be best illustrated or support the main ideas
Arrange the ideas in a logical order to ensure a coherent flow of information
如何增加细节+课件-2023届高三英语一轮复习应用文写作
1)添加修饰成分使文章更丰满。 (运用更富内涵的词，短语或句型） 2)变换更高级和丰富的句式。如：定语从句，独立主格结构，非谓语等
2. 补加语句: Specific examples，Causes/ purposes， results/meaning，Ways/conditions
1)列举实例来补充说明。 2）增加心理描写及背景渲染。 3）结尾发挥，写你的感受，评价，愿望，倡议等。
Discuss the principles
1.which information should be extended(哪些信息需要扩展)
2. from what aspects to extend the details(从哪方面扩展)
3. extend effective details (有效扩展) 4. know the logic of the details(逻辑性)
3. 增添过渡：如， besides, meanwhile，in brief, on the contrary, as a result , on condition that…
Instance exercise:
（2018 全国卷I） 假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去
中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。 请你回复邮件,内容包括： 1.到达时间2.合适的礼物3.餐桌礼仪 注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Apply the rules to writing!
Dear Terry, How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend’s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details. To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you’d better bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What’s more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food. Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time. Best wishes!
2. 补加语句: Specific examples，Causes/ purposes， results/meaning，Ways/conditions
1)列举实例来补充说明。 2）增加心理描写及背景渲染。 3）结尾发挥，写你的感受，评价，愿望，倡议等。
Discuss the principles
1.which information should be extended(哪些信息需要扩展)
2. from what aspects to extend the details(从哪方面扩展)
3. extend effective details (有效扩展) 4. know the logic of the details(逻辑性)
3. 增添过渡：如， besides, meanwhile，in brief, on the contrary, as a result , on condition that…
Instance exercise:
（2018 全国卷I） 假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去
中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。 请你回复邮件,内容包括： 1.到达时间2.合适的礼物3.餐桌礼仪 注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Apply the rules to writing!
Dear Terry, How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend’s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details. To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you’d better bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What’s more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food. Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time. Best wishes!
2018广东高考英语复习指导合理增加6个细节,提升书面表达(共23张) 精品优选公开课件
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行
看看历年高考英语作文真题，除了 “都叫李华”之外有什么共同点？
2007高考卷作文 假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一个英语笔友。请写一 封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔 友。具体条件包括：
年龄；性别；爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。
share with her our traveling experiences, taking ca
wEnhgaltisehvebrywdeohinagves增原oin加因acnodmlemaornn.mAonrde
I believe I about her
w增i加ll i c结o果un
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
3.坚持锻炼 普通表达：We should keep on doing exercise. 增加目的：To keep up good spirits and prepare big day efficiently and healthily， we are advise regular workout， building up our bodies.
2011年高考卷作文
希假望设得你到是学李校华辅，导正中在心一（所L英ea国rn学in校g学C习en暑te期r）课的程帮，助遇。到根一据些学困合校难规理，
定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：
增加
1、本人简介； 2、求助内容； 3、约定时间；4、你的联系方式（Email： lihua@；phone： 12345678）。
让要点更具体清晰
意义： a. 历史/纪念屈原 b. 休闲娱乐 c. 强身健体
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行
看看历年高考英语作文真题，除了 “都叫李华”之外有什么共同点？
2007高考卷作文 假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一个英语笔友。请写一 封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔 友。具体条件包括：
年龄；性别；爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。
share with her our traveling experiences, taking ca
wEnhgaltisehvebrywdeohinagves增原oin加因acnodmlemaornn.mAonrde
I believe I about her
w增i加ll i c结o果un
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
3.坚持锻炼 普通表达：We should keep on doing exercise. 增加目的：To keep up good spirits and prepare big day efficiently and healthily， we are advise regular workout， building up our bodies.
2011年高考卷作文
希假望设得你到是学李校华辅，导正中在心一（所L英ea国rn学in校g学C习en暑te期r）课的程帮，助遇。到根一据些学困合校难规理，
定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：
增加
1、本人简介； 2、求助内容； 3、约定时间；4、你的联系方式（Email： lihua@；phone： 12345678）。
让要点更具体清晰
意义： a. 历史/纪念屈原 b. 休闲娱乐 c. 强身健体
高考英语写作,如何提升亮点课件(共27张)
(8) In my opinion, I am in favor of... (9) Personally，I prefer to... (10) In short，...should learn to...；Only in this way can the most difficult problems be solved properly.
面表达的主要困难有： 1、汉语谓语无字形变化，而英语谓语变
化多、时态、语态、语气的语法概念和英
语动词变化之间的关系，写作应用起来不
明确不熟练，加之英汉在动词意义上有差
别，用英语写作时就很容易出错，这就要 加强英语谓语动词变化的训练。
2、英语的句子结构以动词为中心各有特定 的搭配，写作时感到缺乏表达思想的语感。 经常有汉英翻译词对字硬译的现象，加之英 汉两种语言在文化思维方面语言表达有相当 的差异，也造成英语书面表达的一定困难。 要培养英语表达的语感必须加强平时口头和 笔头整句表达习惯的建立和听力理解。
(5) There is no immediate solution to the problem of..., but... might be helpful/beneficial.
(6) There is little doubt/denying that...
(7) As far as...be concerned, I believe/think that...
2．借用关键词汇压缩句子长度，提升句子品味
The flat has an area of 25 square metres with a bedroom，a bathroom and a kitchen.
3．语态互换 Someone saw him studying hard in his study. He was seen studying hard in his study. 4．语序调整 The scholar didn't write a single paper the whole term. Not a single paper did the scholar write the whole term. 5．强调句式 You must write to me when you get there. Do remember to write to me when you get there.
面表达的主要困难有： 1、汉语谓语无字形变化，而英语谓语变
化多、时态、语态、语气的语法概念和英
语动词变化之间的关系，写作应用起来不
明确不熟练，加之英汉在动词意义上有差
别，用英语写作时就很容易出错，这就要 加强英语谓语动词变化的训练。
2、英语的句子结构以动词为中心各有特定 的搭配，写作时感到缺乏表达思想的语感。 经常有汉英翻译词对字硬译的现象，加之英 汉两种语言在文化思维方面语言表达有相当 的差异，也造成英语书面表达的一定困难。 要培养英语表达的语感必须加强平时口头和 笔头整句表达习惯的建立和听力理解。
(5) There is no immediate solution to the problem of..., but... might be helpful/beneficial.
(6) There is little doubt/denying that...
(7) As far as...be concerned, I believe/think that...
2．借用关键词汇压缩句子长度，提升句子品味
The flat has an area of 25 square metres with a bedroom，a bathroom and a kitchen.
3．语态互换 Someone saw him studying hard in his study. He was seen studying hard in his study. 4．语序调整 The scholar didn't write a single paper the whole term. Not a single paper did the scholar write the whole term. 5．强调句式 You must write to me when you get there. Do remember to write to me when you get there.
高考英语如何提高写作成绩精品课件
• We get up early every morning. The meeting lasted 2 hours.
主语+系动词+形容词 Good medicine tastes bitter to the mouth.
He was so tired that he fell asleep the moment he went to bed.
主语+谓语+过去分词
• I must have my watch repaired.
• We must get he task finished on time.
• Speak louder to make yourself understood by everybody.
主语+谓语+宾语(动名词)
造句的原则：句式多变，语法活用，句子 是表达一个完整意思的最小当位，所以造句 能力在英文写作中是非常重要的。好的英语 句子能够生动，形象，准确的表达内容。所 以要想写出漂亮的书面表达，必须从写好句 子开始。
英语基本句型及造句:
• 主语+谓语+状语(介词,名词短语或从 句) The sun rises up in the east and sets in the west.
Mr. Green is a tall man with a pair of thick glasses.
2) The ice on the lake is too thin for us to skate on. (使 用so…that…结构改写句子)
• The ice on the lake is so thin that we can’t skate on it.
主语+系动词+形容词 Good medicine tastes bitter to the mouth.
He was so tired that he fell asleep the moment he went to bed.
主语+谓语+过去分词
• I must have my watch repaired.
• We must get he task finished on time.
• Speak louder to make yourself understood by everybody.
主语+谓语+宾语(动名词)
造句的原则：句式多变，语法活用，句子 是表达一个完整意思的最小当位，所以造句 能力在英文写作中是非常重要的。好的英语 句子能够生动，形象，准确的表达内容。所 以要想写出漂亮的书面表达，必须从写好句 子开始。
英语基本句型及造句:
• 主语+谓语+状语(介词,名词短语或从 句) The sun rises up in the east and sets in the west.
Mr. Green is a tall man with a pair of thick glasses.
2) The ice on the lake is too thin for us to skate on. (使 用so…that…结构改写句子)
• The ice on the lake is so thin that we can’t skate on it.
高考英语作文的润色与提高课件(共50张PPT)
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8.近义词的误用 The school requests that all the students should wear the school uniform. I quarreled with my teacher about my grades.
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整洁卷面 不影响交际
词与词间距适当 字母大小适当
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8.近义词的误用 The school requests that all the students should wear the school uniform. I quarreled with my teacher about my grades.
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如何提高高考英语写作水平PPT课件( 36页)
逻辑角度
⑴排序关系 ⑵并列关系 ⑶举例关系 ⑷转折关系 ⑸因果关系 ⑹归纳总结 ⑺递进关系
合适的过渡性词汇
first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least
and; too; as well as; along with; together with
提高句子档次的小结：
1. 用高级结构和词汇 2. 用分词短语合并句子
用介词短语合并句子 用独立主格结构合并句子 用连接词连接句子 3. 用定语从句、主语从句、强调句、倒装句 4. 用不同结构和词汇 5. 合适的过渡性词汇
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Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways.
4.适当使用过渡性语句 如:The reasons are as follows. Every coin has two sides. All roads lead to Rome. As the result/survey shows. We can draw an conclusion.等
Television is not only a convenient source of entertainment, but also a comparatively cheap one. But_e_v_e_r_y_c_o_i_n_h_a_s__tw__o_s_id_e_s___, television also has disadvantages, such as its effects on young people.
• 3. The flat is in a building on Beijing Road. It is not far from our School.
2025届高考英语书面表达句型提升策略与实例课件(共16张PPT)
ormance last night was very good. ➢The performance last night was really amazing/fantastic/fascinating. 2. He went home directly after school. ➢He headed home directly after school. 3.The program made our life interesting. ➢The program enriched our life. 4. You should say sorry to him. > You should apologize to him.
4. I _______ to tell you that I can’t make it..我很抱歉.. 5. I ______ ______ much trouble in writing an essay…. 遇到困难 6. Your prompt _______ will be highly a________. 如能尽快回复将不胜感
3. 用高级的句型代替普通的表达
• 1. I realized that I wouldn’t pass the exam. • > It occurred to me that it would fail the exam. • 2. I’m very happy to attend the competition. • > It’s my pleasure to take part in the competition. • 3. I want to go to the party very much. • > I can’t wait to go to the party. • 4. He does best in our class in math. • > When it comes to math, he is second to none in our class.
4. I _______ to tell you that I can’t make it..我很抱歉.. 5. I ______ ______ much trouble in writing an essay…. 遇到困难 6. Your prompt _______ will be highly a________. 如能尽快回复将不胜感
3. 用高级的句型代替普通的表达
• 1. I realized that I wouldn’t pass the exam. • > It occurred to me that it would fail the exam. • 2. I’m very happy to attend the competition. • > It’s my pleasure to take part in the competition. • 3. I want to go to the party very much. • > I can’t wait to go to the party. • 4. He does best in our class in math. • > When it comes to math, he is second to none in our class.
高考英语作文技巧(21张PPT)-经典通用课件资料
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常用句子
• It can be seen from this that there is no difficulty in the world we cannot overcome. • These volunteer’s activities can help us to gain some social experience and make good sense of our
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• I think • I firmly believe that … • In my opinion, • Personally speaking,… • As far as I am concerned, … • From my point of view, ….
表达个人观点的用语
2
How to summarize an argumentation
Skill: 议论三步法 论点—观点 主题句 论据— （事例）
结论
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典型模板
评论某一事物利与弊的套用格式
1. 提出要评论的事物或观点. 2. 分别陈述利与弊(或不同的观点) 3. 归纳得出作者的结论. 4. a. 有定论的,作者可明确表态(赞成或反对) 5. b. 争议较大的或尚无定论的, 可不明确表态, 提出扬长避短的方法,也可以平衡其利弊,提出某种
4) From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that… All in all , In conclusion, On the whole
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要
点 全
如何算是一篇好文章？ －覆盖了所有的要点
－应用了较多的语法结构 和词汇 词汇,句型 （高级）和
语法多样化（较复杂）
连 接 词
－有效地使用了语句间的 连接成分，使全文结构紧 凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。
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The school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it.
Thank you.
5. You can find my house easily.
You’ll have no trouble finding my house.
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要
点 全
如何算是一篇好文章？ －覆盖了所有的要点
－应用了较多的语法结构 和词汇 词汇,句型 （高级）和
语法多样化（较复杂）
连 接 词
－有效地使用了语句间的 连接成分，使全文结构紧 凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。
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The school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it.
Thank you.
5. You can find my house easily.
You’ll have no trouble finding my house.
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高考英语写作公开课如何添加有效细节
你最近过得怎样？
How are things going with you recently?
得知你要去语文老师家做客，以下是你需要注意的一些细节。
I hear from your last letter that you are going to pay a visit to your Chinese teacher.
吃书信饭（时告知不信要）喋喋不休。
定篇章结构：（书信/邮件）
Dear Tony,
称呼
第一段：问候语 + 写信目的（Beginning）
第二段：主体部分（Body）
第三段：结束语（Ending）
落款
Yours, Li Hua
第一段：问候语 + 写信目的（Beginning）
近来好吗？
How is everything going?
真题演练（2018全国I卷
假定你是李华），你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家
做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包 括：
1.到达时间； 2.合适的礼物； 3.餐桌礼仪。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
篇章结构：（书信/邮件）
Dear Terry,
Here are some relevant details you should pay attention to.
第二段：主体部分（Body）
到达时间：提前10分钟
如何连词成句？
合适的礼物：水果或者鲜花
餐桌礼仪：提前练习使用筷子； 不能用筷子指着别人； 吃饭时不要喋喋不休。
到达时间：提前10分钟
你应该提前10分钟到达你老师的家。
You are supposed to arrive at your teacher’s house ten minutes earlier.
How are things going with you recently?
得知你要去语文老师家做客，以下是你需要注意的一些细节。
I hear from your last letter that you are going to pay a visit to your Chinese teacher.
吃书信饭（时告知不信要）喋喋不休。
定篇章结构：（书信/邮件）
Dear Tony,
称呼
第一段：问候语 + 写信目的（Beginning）
第二段：主体部分（Body）
第三段：结束语（Ending）
落款
Yours, Li Hua
第一段：问候语 + 写信目的（Beginning）
近来好吗？
How is everything going?
真题演练（2018全国I卷
假定你是李华），你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家
做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包 括：
1.到达时间； 2.合适的礼物； 3.餐桌礼仪。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
篇章结构：（书信/邮件）
Dear Terry,
Here are some relevant details you should pay attention to.
第二段：主体部分（Body）
到达时间：提前10分钟
如何连词成句？
合适的礼物：水果或者鲜花
餐桌礼仪：提前练习使用筷子； 不能用筷子指着别人； 吃饭时不要喋喋不休。
到达时间：提前10分钟
你应该提前10分钟到达你老师的家。
You are supposed to arrive at your teacher’s house ten minutes earlier.
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二、补全前因后果或目的
2.补充前因后果或目的
1. K__n_o_w_in_g__th_a_t_y_o_u__s_h_o_w_g_r_e_a_t_in_t_e_re_s_t_i_n_C__h_in_e_s_e____ __tr_a_d_it_io_n_a_l_c_u_lt_u_r_e_, (知道你对中国传统文化很感兴趣,）
I am writing to invite you to participate in this activity.
2._In__o_r_d_e_r_t_o__g_e_t_s_o_m__e__p_ra__c_ti_c_a_l _e_x_p_e_r_ie__n_c_e_,_______
(为了获得一些实践经验) I'm planning to take a part-time
I can feel how anxious Mr Steven will be now.
暂停3分钟
Because of the experience of...
三、适当将写作内容具体化
3.适当将写作内容具体化
1.The activity will be held
_f_ro_m__9__a_.m__._to__1_0_a_._m_._o_n__M_a_r_c_h_1__i_n_C__la_s_s_ro_o_m( 501.
我擅长于运动。
, such as A，B and C/ so on.
, including A，B and C/ so on.
I am good at sports, such as swimming, playing basketball and running/ so on. I am good at sports, including swimming, playing basketball and running/ so on.
不同的主题 不同的模板
背诵+灵活运用
并不是每篇文章都需要使用到这5种增加 细节的方法 根据实际，进行合理的、适当的增加
写作实练
假定你是李华，你校2020年英语夏令营俱乐部正在 招聘团队组长，你有意参加。请你发一封邮件向主 办方提出申请，内容包括：
1.自我简介 2. 自己的优势（性格，爱好，英语能力等）
for example
I am good at sports. For example，I play basketball as well as CXK.
四、写出个人感受、评价或后果
暂停3分钟
4.写出个人感受、评价或后果
1. I think it is a good chance to appreciate local operas,
including enough rest, a balanced diet and regular exercise. If not, you are
more likely to be infected because you may be in poor health.
I would be grateful if my suggestions will be of help to you. Looking
很难理解这本书)
五、补充惯用套语（模板）
5.惯用套语
It's my pleasure to have the chance to 1__in_tr_o_d_u_c_e_o_u_r__C_h_in_e_s_e__tr_a_d_it_io_n_a_l_c_u_lt_u_re__to___
_y_o_u_._____（我很荣幸能向你介绍我们中国的 传统文化）
Dear Tim,
补充原因
Learning that the COVID 19 is also spreading in America and you are
asking for advice since Chinese have done quite well in fighting in this
you keep yourself far away from the virus. More importantly, you must
wear protective clothing or at least mask when you have to go out, as the
学会分析优秀的范文 protective clothing and mask serve as a vital barrier between you and the virus. Last but not least, keeping a healthy lifestyle is of great importance,
job in a foreign company.
3.__S_i_n_c_e_/A__s_/B__e_c_a_u_s_e__I_h_a_v_e__t_h_e__e_x_p_e_r_ie_n_c_e__o_f_____ ___l_o_s_in_g__m__y_p__u_rs_e__，______(由于我有过丢钱包的经历）
w_h_i_c_h__w_i_ll__s_u_re__ly__h_e_lp__y_o_u__le__a_rn__m__o_r_e_a_b__o_u_t__
C_h_i_n_e_s_e__c_u_l_tu__re_. (这必将有助于你学到更多的中国文化）
2.We can set out early
__s_o_t_h_a_t_w__e_c_a__n_h_a__v_e_m__o_r_e__ti_m_e__t_o_r_e_a_d__a_n_d__
battle, I am writing this letter to offer you some suggestions.
Since the COVID 19 is highly infectious, you should take effective
具体化
measures to protect yourself from the virus. To begin with, you should wash your hands frequently and avoid large crowds. Only in this way can
___a_n_e_x_ch_a_n_g_e__st_u_d_e_n_t _fr_o_m__C_h_i_n_a_. _____________
(我们学校的学生会主席/来自中国的一位交换生).
2. I want to have a pen friend, __h_o_p_ef_u_ll_y_a__g_ir_l _w_i_th__in_t_er_e_s_ts_s_i_m_i_la_r_t_o_m__in_e_.____ (希望是一位跟我有相同兴趣的女孩).
补充后果
forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
惯用套语
Байду номын сангаас
Li Hua
一、增加同位语 二、补全前因后果或目的 三、适当将写作内容具体化 四、写出个人感受、评价或后果 五、补充惯用套语（模板）
一、增加同位语
1 增加同位语
暂停2分钟
1 I am LiHua, _t_h_e_c_h_a_ir_m_a_n__o_f _th_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts_’_U_n_i_o_n_o_f_m__y school.
注意：1.词数不少于100； 2.可以适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； 3.称呼和落款已给出，不计入总词数。
_s_e_l_e_c_t_b_o__o_k_s_(以便我们有更多的时间阅读和挑选图书）
3.There are quite a few missing pages,
ma_k_in_g__i_t _d_if_fi_c_u_lt__fo_r__u_s_t_o__u_n_d_e_r_s_ta__n_d_t_h_e__b_o_o_k_._(变得
I’m writing the letter to express my gratitude 2.__t_o_y_o_u__fo_r_h_e_l_p_in_g_m__e_r_e_p_a_ir__m_y_c_a_r_. ___
（我写信给你是为了表达感谢你帮我修车）
3. __L_o_o_k_in_g__fo_r_w_a_r_d_t_o_y_o_u_r_e_a_r_ly_r_e_p_ly_.____ （期待着你的早日回复）
具体时间、地点）
举例：such as
2.I know the owner is Steven
for example
a__1_7_-y_e_a_r_-o_l_d_s_t_u_d_e_n_t _fr_o_m__E_n_g_la_nd . (相in关cl身ud份ing
信息)
3 When I received the dictionary, I found that __t_h_e_re__w_e_r_e_s_o_m__e_m_i_s_p_ri_n_ts__a_n_d_p_a_g_e_s__fr_o_m__ __2_3__to__4_5_w_e_r_e_m__is_s_i_n_g_. _________________ (具体存在问题 如错印、缺页等)