胡敏雅思作文笔记
胡敏读故事记单词2
A rant against consumerism"The situation is really not that complicated, Mike. The company simply has a compendium of charges that have been compiled against you and they just don' t want you to work here any more! There's nothing I can do to help you!""Aw c'mon, Mr. Moan. We’re old compatriots in this company. We’ve always shared compartments and I thought we had such compatible characteristics! I'm as competent as you are with often more compelling excuses for our bosses as to why we missed the completion of project deadlines! You need me!""Actually not, Mike. Ever since they promoted me, they have been compelling me to get rid of you. And please don' t make any comparison to your lying ways and my honest mistakes.""Okay okay. You are an honest man. But hey, who will get you complementary tickets to see the Bulls if I'm gone?""Mike. For now let' s compartmentalize our friendship from work, okay? They have great compensation for you! And if you are in compliance with leaving, they will write a glowing recommendation for you about your competence, so that you can go and get a job with the competition! They've taken all of the complexity out of it for you!""Really? So how will they compensate me? Hey, you're right, that's not a complex deal at all. I can take a long vacation! Okay. I'll take it. But no more free tickets for you buddy. You're the competition now! Some kind of friend you turned out to be!"再见,麦克“情况真的没有那么复杂,麦克。
胡敏读故事背雅思单词
胡敏读故事背雅思单词1(abandon-accomplish)An honorable entryThe acclaimed academic, Dr. Sir Walter T.J. Fitzbody, accompanied the equally accessible expert of aboriginal history, Dr. Mugambe H. C. Carriky, slowly to the platform to accept his National Science Foundation Award. Both were noted for their absenteeism, rarely seen in public and still marveled at for their abnormal usage of double abbreviations in their names. That it was Dr. Carriky, the former pupil of Dr. Fitzbody who was receiving this life-time award before his mentor was only minor. Dr. Fitzbody knew that academia was not always fair and, having always been rather accommodating for his favorite student anyhow, was taking the event as an honor to his work as well.When Dr. Carriky accidentally tripped over the toe of a person with his leg extended too far into the aisle, the gasps of the crowd conveniently covered the abusive words that came out of Dr. Carriky's mouth. The man did not take the abuse kindly, however, and abandoning all respect, began to rise to respond to the guest of honor. Dr. Fitzbody, sensing trouble, quickly accelerated towards the stage. It did not matter that an accessory of his robe was lost to the floor as they escaped. The rest of the audience, sensing a need for accommodation, politely gave clear access so that no further mishaps would occur.Having accomplished their entry, Dr. Fitzbody began his introduction of Dr. Carriky. He gently smiled and said a joke that related the fall to a historical abstraction. The crowd laughed in relief and breathed easily as they knew that honor and dignity had been restored.体面的入场广受赞誉的学者沃尔特.T.J.费茨博迪博士陪同同样平易近人的土著历史研究专家穆甘贝.H.C.克里奇博士缓缓走向领奖台领取国家科学基金奖。
雅思小作文教案
新航道胡敏雅思图表写作表达集粹Ⅰ. Introduction Paraphrase the Words on the Graphic MaterialPattern One Without the Summary of the Trend1.This diagram unfolds a clear comparison between Florida; a state of the United States; and the United States as a whole in four aspects; namely; registered engineers; the civilian labor force; manufacturing employment and hi-tech employment; from 1978 to 1987.2. There were many significant changes in modes of transport used by city dwellers from 1950 to 1990. The following paragraphs will identify and discuss the trends in the accompanying graph.3. The chart below displays the average earnings per week; in pounds sterling; of people of different levels of education living in the UK between the years 1965 and 1995.4. The chart indicates the subjects studied by university students in Australia during the latter of last century.5. The chart shows the number of road accidents in Britain over a period of six years.6. The line graph reveals the amount of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers over a 25-year period between 1975 and 2000.7. The bar chart illustrates the percentage of employees in different occupations absent from work in a given week in 2001.8. Indicators of economic and social conditions in four countries; Canada; Japan; Peru and Zaire; in 1994; compiled by the UN;reflect the great differences that exist between wealthier and poorer nations.Pattern Two With the Summary of the Trend9. The graph compares the rate of smoking in men and women in Erewhon between the years 1960 and 1995. It can be clearly seen that therate of smoking for both men and women is currently declining and that fewer women have smoked throughout the period.10. The graphs compare the number of deaths caused by six diseases in Erewhom in 1990 with the amount of research funding allocated to each of those diseases. It can be clearly seen that the amount of research funding in many cases did not correlate with the seriousness of the disease in terms of numbers of deaths.11. The three graphs provide an overview of the types of music people purchase in the UK. At first glance; we see that classical music is far less popular than pop or rock music.流程图常用句型1.描述过程;流程常用句子the following diagraph showsthe structure of……it mainly consists of……it works as follows.it always involves following steps.the whole procedure can be divided into…stages.2.描述流程;过程的常用过渡性词语secondlythirdly/finallythe first step is tothe next step is tothe last step is to -in the next stagein the following stagein the last stagefirst of allto begin withnextlaterat the same time simultaneouslysubsequentlyconsequentlybefore thisduringafter thisin the course ofin order to/in order not toin order thatso as to/so as not to描述流程的文章;应说明:1.首先说明是做什么工作的过程;目的是什么2.准备工作3.按时间/过程先后描述4.结果5.简单总结可有可无描述一个实物/器具的工作过程;文章应分以下几点:1.实物是什么;做什么用的2.基本结构3.工作过程4.简单总结雅思考试学习策略笔记应试原则:一、LISTENING:1..5-6分:反复听;模仿;换角度欣赏---口语材料;注意音标;边听边写 ;2..7分:用研究的眼光:1从口语的角度研究;在听的时候;作下观察笔记--就地点、人物、话题、用了什么样的词汇、使用了什么样的句子;2对话的考点和题眼..3..8分:IELTS 听力理解10套题及初级;中级听力教材二、READING1..词汇:突破记忆7000词汇左右滚动式记忆法:每天只记忆固定的半个小时;反复记忆很多次7次为佳;第二天;首先回忆一次前一天记的;每周最后一天;不记新单词;只需重复会议一个星期记过的所有单词..巩固加深印象..2..复杂句子结构:一般2遍仍看不懂的;为复杂句子;归纳有40--200个复杂句语法--非谓语动词;不定式;vn;v-ing;v-p--复合句各类从句建议参考张道真和薄冰的语法书三、WRITING:考察书面英语的表达能力有两大误区: 1ideas ;ideas ;ideas2用简单的词汇和句子结构写文章1..英汉对比:1以句子为单位:英文句子“化零为整”---像一棵大树中文句子“化整为零”---像竹节2英译汉---破句重组忠告:切勿死记硬背文章;无较大收益2..英语写作究竟考什么1词汇:vocabulary range/wide 宽度vocabulary difficult 难度2句子结构: accuracy 精确性complex 复杂性建议:一般TASK1 要写3个复杂句;TASK2需要写5-7个复杂句3..学习方法:下面介绍一种;本人一直用于学习英语文章并行之有效的方法给大家学习从八个层次学习每一篇文章:a.同义表达;b.词伙关系:能够意想到的词类搭配联想记忆法去remember vocabularyc.短语词组;d.惯用句型;e.句子开端;应变化多样;f.复杂句子;g.衔接手段:直接用 first; second; finally 等来衔接的;是水平较低的表现;应用语言的魅力来让别人一目了然你的段落层次感..h.篇章结构..建议;仔细用上述方法;研究IELTS写作的20篇范文..四、SPEAKING:分三个阶段;也是现实生活中的三种技能学会如何去应用这种语言交流1..人员之间的交往:策略:变换第一阶段的ANSWER;别太常用;应与众不同..2..单独展示自己的个人魅力:策略:可以用那允许的1 MIN 写几个简单的提示中英文皆可;概念要完整;条理要清晰;让考官对你讲的东西感兴趣属于构思技巧;语速应该适中;贯穿始终;勿TOO SLOW---会被认为是真实水平的体现;也勿TOO FAST---会有背诵嫌疑..任务1:图表写作要求考生在20分钟内完成150字以上的短文..以考核图表为主..主要有:曲线图 line chart; graph柱状图 bar chart饼状图 pie chart表格等 table偶尔也会有流程图flow chart、地图geography和示意图diagram/figure 评分标准和任务2一样;评分观测点也有四项:Task achievement task response task 2Coherence and cohesionLexical resourcesGrammatical range and accuracy首先让我们搞明确task achievement 要求完成什么..1 summarize the general features/trends2 select important information3 compare and contrast dataThe table below shows three social and economic indicators of seven American countries for the year 1997.Sample answerWe can see that GDP per capita varies substantially from 2100 USD in Cuba to 13000 USD in the Bahamas; with 5 of the 7 countries below 5000 USD per capital GDP.The illiteracy rates also differ considerably. The highest illiteracy rates are for Brazil 16.8% and Jamaica 15.2% ; whilst Argentina has the lowest rate; at 3.6%. Mexico 10.5% and Surinam 7% lie in the middle. Surprisingly; the adult illiteracy rate for Cuba and the Bahamas is the same; at 4.4%.And finally; let's look at newspaper sales. It has a tendency that the higher the rate at which a country has sold newspapers; the lower its adult illiteracy rate is. But the Bahamas is an exception. Though its adult illiteracy rate is the second low among the seven countries; it has not got a comparable high rate of newspaper sale.图表写作且记住一定要客观;只写图表上要描述的信息;而不能主动解释背后的原因或深层次的含义..We are required to describe rather than explain.也不要面面俱到;机械地记录图表内容;犹如流水账..Example:The bar chart below shows the marriage rates of people at the age of 25 in English from 1950 to 1980. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. the green is male; the red is femaleBesides giving information in the chart; the candidate also raised a question and analyzed the possible reasons why the marriage rate of men is higher than that of women; which are not supposed to be done properly. It is not your task to reason out why.文章结构首段:图表作文的首段必须交待三个要素:图表研究的时间段、研究的对象和研究所采用的数据形式是具体的数字还是百分比..应当将这三个内容用一句话说清楚..实际上就是把题目中描述图表的那句话用自己的语言说出来并拓展一下即可..首段不要写得过长;两句话比较合适..主体段:主体段描写单方向的趋势;根据趋势的分类来决定主体段应该划分成几个自然段;例如一图表讲美国、澳大利亚、日本、英国四个国家的消费情况..在主体段落中;每一个单方向的趋势都应当用一句话来概括描述;这句话不一定要涉及具体数据;是概括性的描述;代表某一段的总的方向..就像任务2中主题句的写法..接下去就要有数据的支撑..相当任务2中的例证..所以图表写作主体段必须有两个要素:单方面的趋势和数据支持..结尾段:图表通过对具体数据的对照和对比来说明问题;因此在结尾部分要写出对照对比的趋势;以及从这个趋势中得出的一个结论..图表写作这部分的写法与任务2 完全不同..它的信息完全来自图表;不能加进任何自己的见解;不需要分析评论..文章内容与任务2写作一样;图表写作也要紧紧围绕任务去完成..也要依据题目提供的已知信息进行写作..与任务2不同的是图表作文的信息载体不是文字而是图表;考生将图表承载的信息用文字表达出来..在转化的过程中很容易遗漏信息..所以写完后的审查就显得更加重要..趋势描写图表中反映的是某一事情或情况的变化趋势;有总趋势也有局部趋势;因而趋势描写便成为图表作文中必不可少的内容..图表的目的是通过对比对照来说明问题;因此文章中也应该描写有关对比对照的趋势..数据导入图表的另一个特点就是表中会出现大量的数据;所以导入数据便是一个重要任务..描述完某种趋势后;必须有具体的数据来支撑..没有数据的对比是空洞的..数据是重要信息;一定不要遗漏..1、表示“说明”的句子结构和常用句型This table/chart/ diagram/graph shows that ...The figures /statistics show thatmore other verbs:describe; illustrate; display; exhibit; indicate; reflect; represent; reveal; unfold; summarize etc.More patterns:According toAs is shown in theAs can be seen fromIt can be seen fromWe can see fromIt is clear fromIt is apparent/obvious/ evident还可用第一人称复数引入要说明的信息..切记不要使用第一人称单数.. We can seeWe conclude from ...that ...We find1数据统计时;表示静态数据的句子结构“有” “占” “是...倍” “达到” 等..常用的动词有:be; have; reach; hit; account for;e.g. 澳大利亚和英国都占10%..Australia and UK both had 10%.e.g. 中国人占市场份额最大..The Chinese accounted for the largest percentage of market share.1 表示增加动词+副词结构e.g. 1999年度家庭轿车的数量陡然增加..The number of family cars increased suddenly in the year 1999. 形容词+名词e.g. 参与者的数量有一个明显的上升..There was a significant jump in the number of participants.e.g. 该产品的市价在稳步上升..There is a steady increase in the price of this product.介词短语e.g. 申请者的人数仍然在增加..The number of applicants is on the rise.e.g. 从2008年到2010年专职教师的人数在增加..The number of full-time teachers was on the increase form 2008 to 2010.2 表示下降动词+副词结构e.g. 当地学校的失学人数在去年略有下降..The number of drop-outs in the local school dropped slightly last year.形容词+名词e.g. 上个月的销售额出现了急剧下降..There was a steep fall in the sales volume last month.介词短语e.g. 数据显示本财政年上半年海外投资规模一路走低..The statistics shows that the overseas investment was on the decline over the first half of this fiscal year.e.g. 美元对港元的汇率出现了持续疲软..The exchange rate of USD over that of HKD is still on the decrease. 3表示“持平” “不变” "最高点” “最低点”短语动词A: level offe.g. 收音机的听众人数在早晨6:30到8:30之间一直攀升;然后从8:45分起出现持平现象..The number of radio audience is on the rise between 6:30 and 8:30; and then levels off since 8:45.3表示“持平” “不变” "最高点” “最低点”短语动词B: 系表结构Stay / keep / remain + steadyunchangedstableconstant3表示“持平” “不变” "最高点” “最低点”短语动词B: 系表结构e.g. 这个县的离婚率在前三个季度没有发生变化..The divorce rate of the first three quarters in his county remains constant.e.g. 美国近三个月来的国内生产总值基本没有发生任何变化..The growth rate of GDP in the U.S.A stayed basically unchanged over the recent three months.3表示“持平” “不变” "最高点” “最低点”短语动词C: there be + little / no / hardly + any changee.g. 六、七两个月的轿车销售几乎没有出现任何变化..There was hardly any change in the number of cars sold from June to July.e. g. 该公司的股票交易量没有发生变化..There was no change in the turn-over of the company's stocks.3表示“持平” “不变” "最高点” “最低点”短语动词D: 最高点和最低点The figure / The situation / The monthly+ peaked / reached a peak a hign point / bottomed out / reached the bottom a low poite.g. 这个国家的居民消费指数在2010年十月创历史最高;达到6%..出现了严重的通胀..CPI in that country reached a peak of 6% in Oct. 2010. Inflation was serious.4“数据比较” 常用结构和替换词汇A. thane.g. 男子接受高等教育的人数比女子多;分别是男子10%; 女子5%.. There were more males than females who have their higher education. 4“数据比较” 常用结构和替换词汇B. ase.g. A校学生人数几乎是B校学生人数的3倍..School A has approximately three times as many students as School B.D. to / be superior / inferior/ senior toe.g. A组的成员比B组成员年轻三岁..Mumbers of Group A are three times junior to those of Group B. 4“数据比较” 常用结构和替换词汇E. 直接用动词表示e.g. 使用电脑的优点远远大于它的缺点..The advantages of using computers far outweigh the disadvantages.e.g. 男人接受高等教育的人数以 4比1的比例超出了女人接受高等教育的人数..The male outnumbered the female four to one in higher education.5 关于倍数表达倍数的增加..A“n times larger than…”与“n times as large as” 的概念..汉语中A是B的n倍;与A比B大n-1倍概念相同;而英文中则不是..注意英语的“n times larger than…”与“n times as large as” 的概念是一致的;即“是原来的n倍”..一般讲英语国家的人认为“two times larger than” 等于原来的两倍; 即“two times as large as”;所以为了避免歧义;应用更加明确的表示方法:three times its original size; three times as large as it used to bee.g. 经过十几年的建设;深圳市的面积比以前大了两倍..With more than ten years’ construction; the area of Shenzhen City is three times larger than before.With more than ten years’ construction; the area of Shenzhen City is three times its original size.With more than ten years’ construction; the area of Shenzhen City is three times as large as it used to be.误译:With more than ten years’ constr uction; the area of ShenzhenCity is twice larger than before.2当倍数与表示上升下降趋势的词连用时;无论是否有介词;均表示“增加到n倍”..如:increase to N timesincrease N times/N-foldincrease by N timesincrease by a factor of NThere is a N-fold/N times increase/growth…注意此句应译为“增加了N-1倍倍数的减少1“A is n times as small as B” 与“A is n times lower than B” 的概念中文中不用倍数表示“减少”;不说“A比B小/少多少倍”;而是说“A比B小几分之几”;用分数表达;所以英文的“A is n times lower than B”或“A is n times as small as B”应译成“A是B的n分之一”或“A 比B小n分之n-1”..e.g. 公司今年的利润是去年的三分之一../公司今年的利润比去年下降三分之二..The profits of the company this year is three times lower than last year.可以用分数直接表达以避免歧义..The profits of the company this year is one third of last year. 2当倍数与表示上升下降趋势的词连用时;无论是否有介词;均表示“减少到1/n”..如: decrease N times/N-folddecrease by N timesdecrease by a factor of NThere is a N-fold decrease/reduction…表达的意思相同; 均为“减少到1/n”..翻番问题:两番double;三番triple;4番quadruple1 嘉实多的油在越南每公升售价1.5美元;这个价格是那些从台湾和泰国进口油价的三倍..Castrol oil costs about $1.5 per liter in Vietnam; about three times as much as the price of cheaper oil imported from Taiwan and Thailand.2 到2020年中国将实现国内生产总值比2000年翻两番;达到40000亿美元左右..By 2020; China’s GDP will quadruple that of 2000 to approximately USD 4 trillion.3 印度贫富之间的差距越来越大;是10年前的两倍..India’s growing gap between the rich and the poor is twice as much as 10 years ago.4. 棉花产量比1996年增加了三倍/是1996年的四倍..The cotton output was four times greater than that of 1996.5. 英中两国贸易在过去五年就翻了一番..British trade with China has doubled over the last five years alone.6这房子的价钱已升至我们购买时的三倍..The house is worth treble what we paid for it.7 近几年来;电视机的价格下降了一半儿..The price of TVs has been twofold down over these years.8. 改革开放30年来;人们的生活水平得到了显着的提高;人均年收入是40年前的30倍..For the 30 years of reform and opening up; people’s standard ofliving has been a significant increase; and the per capita annualincome is 30 times more than that of 40 years ago.更多的动词:takes up; increase; rise; climb; grow; soar; jump; amount to; double;decrease; drop; fall; diminish; decline; remain; keep;Sample One :The following graphs give information about the Gross DomesticProduct and employment sectors of a developing country. Write areport for a university lecturer describing the information shownbelow. naturalResources % industry % trade; restaurants; hotels %transport communication %government % other % tota %ployment77.4 3.6 4.9 1.6 1.6 3.8100. P19.215.437.18.412.57.4100.。
新东方胡敏谈雅思考试实录(一)
主持⼈:今天,我们很荣幸的请到新东⽅胡敏⽼师和友们聊聊雅思考试的相关问题,⾸先请胡⽼师向⼤家问好。
胡敏:各位友晚上好,⾮常⾼兴和⼤家聊天,今天晚上主要聊关于雅思考试的⼀些⾼分策略和雅思考试发展的最新动态。
实际上,我今天是上午和下午,各上了⼆个半⼩时课,都讲雅思作⽂课,上午下了课回到校长办公室办公,刚才直接从办公室过来,样⼦可能会显得有点疲惫不堪,⼀想到友想听听我对雅思的看法,好象回到新东⽅的课堂,新东⽅的课堂会使我充满激情,所以⼤家畅所欲⾔,有什么问题尽管问,谢谢⼤家。
友:请胡⽼师对雅思考试⼀些新的⾛向作⼀些介绍。
胡敏:雅思考试在中国历史也有相当长时间,只不过是从九⼋年开始以来,在中国开始变得热起来,到最近是⽕爆,主要是有⼏个⽅⾯的原因促使雅思考试在中国异常⽕爆,第⼀个⽅⾯的原因是澳⼤利亚直接宣布再也不承认托福成绩,只承认雅思成绩,这是⼀个。
第⼆个⽅⾯的原因是相当多的⼈觉得到北美去留学深造太拥挤,是⼀个独⽊桥,所以⼤家把视线开始转向了英联邦国家。
第三个原因就是,移民加拿⼤和澳⼤利亚新西兰,需要申请者考试雅思。
第四个原因是咱们中国经济发达了,越来越多的家庭有经济实⼒,把⾃⼰的⼦⼥送到英联邦国家⾃费留学。
第五⽅⾯原因就是雅思考试本⾝具有相当的可信度,拿剑桥⼤学考试委员会,雅思的项⽬负责⼈的话来说,你可以完全信任这种考试。
第六个⽅⾯的原因是,现在很多⼈不⼀定是想店铺,或者说移民到国外去发展,他们就是为了学习英语,全⾯从听说读学四个⽅⾯来提⾼⾃⼰。
所以六个⽅⾯使雅思在中国最近⼆年便的异常⽕爆。
友:胡⽼师,我现在对雅思还不是很了解,它的考试难度怎样?想⿇烦你和托福考试作⼀下⽐较。
胡敏:今天晚上有很多友抱着⾮常好奇的⼼情来了解雅思的。
雅思主要有⼆⽅⾯的⽤途,⼀⽅⾯的⽤途是留学,⽐⽅说留学英联邦国家,澳⼤利亚、新西兰,再⼀个是移民,移民到加拿⼤、澳⼤利亚、新西兰,这是⽐较直接的⽤途。
实际上,在99年的时候,我就喊出⼀句话,叫做留学考试,它是留学的新途径、移民的直通车。
胡敏考研英语书信写作不可不背的句式与套话
胡敏考研英语书信写作不可不背的句式与套话1、投诉信投诉信的开头常用句式和套话I am writing to inform you that I am dissatisfied withyour …投诉信的结尾常用句式和套话I understand you will give immediate attention to this matter.I would like to have this matter settled by the end of …2、询问信询问信的开头常用句式和套话I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding/concerning …I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding …询问信的结尾常用句式和套话Your prompt attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.I am looking forward to hearing from you.3、请求信请求信的开头常用句式和套话I am writing to seek for your assistance in …请求信的结尾常用句式和套话I would like to thank you for your generous help in this matter.4、抱歉信抱歉信的开头常用句式和套话I am writing to apologize for …I am writing to say sorry for …抱歉信的结尾常用句式和套话I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and aept my apologies.5、感谢信感谢信的开头常用句式和套话I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for …感谢信的结尾常用句式和套话I must thank you again for your generous help.6、建议信建议信的开头常用句式和套话I am writing to express my views concerning …You have asked me for my advice with regard to … and I will try to make some conducive suggestions.表达建议常用句式和套话I feel that it would be benefic ial if …I would like to suggest that …I would remend that …If I were you, I would …You may consider doing …It would seem to me that you could …As you may agree that …建议信的结尾常用句式和套话I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details.7、求职信求职信的开头常用句式和套话I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a waitress …求职信的结尾常用句式和套话Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to meeting you.If you need to know more about me, please co ntact me at … 8、推荐信推荐信的开头常用句式和套话I would like to present … for your consideration in your search for a qualified manager.With reference to your requirements, I shall, without reservation, remend … as an ideal candidate.推荐信的结尾常用句式和套话Therefore, I don’t hesitate to remend … as the right person for your consideration.Any favorable consideration to this letter would be considered a personal favor.9、寻找失物信寻找失物信的开头常用句式和套话I am writing this letter to see if it is possible for me to have my camera back.寻找失物信的结尾常用句式和套话I would really appreciate it if you could …10、邀请信邀请信的开头常用句式和套话I am writing to invite you to …I wonder if you could e …邀请信的结尾常用句式和套话My family and I would feel honored if you could e.We would be looking forward to your participation in the party.I really hope you can make it.模板,内容仅供参考。
雅思写作辅导书推荐
雅思写作辅导书推荐雅思写作备考有哪些比较好用的参考书呢?下面小编就推荐给大家,预祝你们都取得好成绩。
雅思A类写作备考书推荐这7本书给你练习的首选材料依然是真题。
剑桥系列后面附有考官的范文,很值得研究。
其他反响较好的练习材料有:1、《十天突破雅思写作》这本书的江湖地位不用多说。
基本一提到雅思写作,就必会有人推荐此书,简直就是《圣经》一般的地位。
客观的讲,书籍能够风靡,自然有一定的道理。
这本书算得上是很实用基础的辅导教材,里面的内容包括雅思写作技巧、常见的错误、亮点的词汇和句型。
值得好好研究。
但是不要生硬地照搬,否则画虎不成反类犬。
2、《雅思8分万能作文》这书经常拿来和十天相提并论,是考官所写的书。
里面收录了考官所写的范文。
可以借鉴。
3、《雅思写作套路剖析与范例大全》这书比较厚,讲的也很细,从语法到句子再到范文,和十天一个套路的。
可以看看,多借鉴一些写作思路总没有坏处。
4、朗文出版,《Writing Academic English》这不是专门为雅思考试量身定做的,但也许是雅思写作最给力的书籍。
因为雅思写作的大作文,考的就是学术写作。
书籍适合雅思考试想考高分的人(6.5-7分),因为是全方位的讲解,里面对结构、逻辑、上下文衔接的问题解释的很清楚,适合基础不错力求高分的人。
毕竟是英文原版书籍,看起来多少有些吃力。
但如果能啃完,嘿嘿,会受益匪浅的。
同为英文原版书籍,Macmillan出了本《Improve Your IELTS Writing Skills 》,专门针对雅思考试的。
书籍没有上面那本的口碑好,有时间的话,可以翻一翻,对照着做参考。
6、语法书。
语法书列在这里可能有些突兀,其实不然。
雅思里面没有直接的语法考题,但是其实处处涉及语法。
语法不好,阅读长难句一定会觉得吃力,而最直接的表现就会是在写作里。
语法是语言的章法,不过关的话,写出的句子是对是错都无法判断,甚至无法让人读懂。
此书适合语法不好、写作功底薄弱的人,不要过分的好高骛远,写作功底是一点一滴的积累起来的。
成功人士例子作文素材
成功人士例子作文素材每一位成功人士背后都有不为人知的故事,在他们走向成功的路上留下浓墨重彩得一笔!店铺精心为大家搜集整理了成功人士例子作文素材,大家一起来看看吧。
成功人士例子作文素材篇1:霍金的故事科学家霍金小时候的学习能力似乎并不强,他很晚才学会阅读,上学后在班级里的成绩从来没有进过前10名,而且因为作业总是“很不整洁”,老师们觉得他已经“无可救药”了,同学们也把他当成了嘲弄的对象。
在霍金12岁时,他班上有两个男孩子用一袋糖果打赌,说他永远不能成材,同学们还带有讽刺意味地给他起了个外号叫“爱因斯坦”。
谁知,20多年后,当年毫不出众的小男孩真的成了物理界一位大师级人物。
这究竟是什么原因呢?原来,随着年龄渐长,小霍金对万事万物如何运行开始感兴趣起来,他经常把东西拆散以追根究底,但在把它们恢复组装回去时,他却束手无策,不过,他的父母并没有因此而责罚他,他的父亲甚至给他担任起数学和物理学“教练”。
在十三四岁时,霍金发现自己对物理学方面的研究非常有兴趣,虽然中学物理学太容易太浅显,显得特别枯燥,但他认为这是最基础的科学,有望解决人们从何处来和为何在这里的问题。
从此,霍金开始了真正的科学探索。
成功人士例子作文素材篇2:成功来自勤奋语言大师侯宝林只上过三年小学,由于勤奋好学,他的艺术水平达到炉火纯青的程度,成为著名的语言专家。
有一次,他为了买到自己想买的一部明代笑话书《谑浪》,跑遍北京所有的旧书摊也未如愿。
后来,他得知北京图书馆有这本书。
时值冬日,他顶着狂风,冒着大雪,一连18天都跑到图书馆去抄书。
一部10字的书,终于被他抄录到手。
侯宝林正是凭着“不达目的不罢休”得坚强毅力,才成为一代相声艺术宗师的。
成功人士例子作文素材篇3:成功需要不懈的追求以下是一个人一生的简历:5岁时,他父亲去世;14岁时,他从学校辍学,开始了流浪生活;16岁时,他谎报年龄参了军,而军旅生活也是处处不顺心;18岁时,她去了个媳妇,可只过了几个月,媳妇就变卖了他所有的财产跑回了娘家;他曾通过函授学习法律,可不久又放弃了;后来,他卖过保险,卖过轮胎,还经营过一条渡船,开过一家加油站,但都失败了。
胡敏作文14篇背诵
胡敏上课时指定的的作文14篇背诵如何是作文的时态简单化,以最大程度地避免错误?参加国际上的任何一场考试,只要是写英语作文,主体上应该是一般现在时态;只有当你提到具体的、过去的、某一事件段发生的具体的某一件事情作为例证时,可以一般过去时。
中心时态是简单的一般现在时。
图画作文以下四篇背诵文章解决该类题型:第一:对图画进行描述:第二:透过画面点出图画的寓意;第三:发表议论、提出问题方法和建议。
P102 Exercise 7Fill in the blanks with appropriate words.(背诵第一篇)As is shown in the pictures, (From the pictures, we can see clear that) with the increase of commercial fishing, the number of fishes dramatically decreased. In one picture, there were various kinds of fish and only one fishing-boat in 1900. On the contrary, in 1995 there was only one fish, with many fishing-boats.The purpose of this picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to the decline of ocean resources. Owing to overfishing the number of fishes has obviously dropped. If we let this situation go/continue as it is, we do not know where fish will be in the future. By that time, our environment will suffer a great destruction.Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures. For one thing, we should appeal to our authorities to make strict laws to control commercial fishing. For another, we should enhance the awareness of people that the ocean resources are very vital to us. Only in this way can we protect our ocean resources. Also I believe that we humans can overcome this difficulty, and we will have a brighter future.(背诵第一篇)P25 范文十Directions:沙进我退,我进沙退A. Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in about 200 words.B. Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET Ⅱ.C. Your essay should meet the requirements below:1. Describe the cartoon(对图画进行描述)and the message conveyed(透过画面点出图画的寓意)2. Draw a conclusion and give your comment on the cartoon.(发表议论、提出问题方法和建议)(背诵2)From the pictures, we can see clearly the relationship between people and the deserts. In the first picture, people are fleeing from greedy sand hills because they cut down all the trees. The caption reads: As the sand advances, we retreat. In the second picture, the people have returned carrying tools, water and young trees to plant the land again. The caption reads: As we advance, the sand retreats.(描述)It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about the importance of trees in water and soil conservation, and the need for everyone to fight against the danger of desertification. In fact,what he is saying is if we do not fight against the sandhills, the sandhiills will drive us away from the land. (In fact, what he is saying is that the sandhills will drive us away from the land if we do not fight against them.) If we let this situation go as it is, our environment will suffer a great destruction. (寓意)The best way to fight back against the greedy desert is made clear in the second picture. There the local people are actively setting about the task of planting trees to reclaim(改造) the land and make it(代词的使用) fertile. The fact that(同位语)there are three people in the picture each with a different job(逻辑独立主谓结构,介词短语表示动态概念), suggest that (事实说明)working together is the key to success in the battle against soil erosion.(措施、建议)(背诵2)?????????? Today, the earth's deserts are spreading and getting larger and desertification is a serious problem facing the world. The major reason for this is irresponsible cutting down of trees. As is shown in the first cartoon, when people cut down trees desert forces on and becomes irrepressible.People cut down trees for various reasons but they may forget that trees play a vital part in water and soil conservation. Trees can preserve moisture and fertility in the soil, protect soil against erosion and prevent fertile land from becoming desert. Therefore when people cut down all of the trees, the earth lies bare and dry in the hot sun, and desert is inevitable.Desertification can lead to many other serious problems which may threaten the existence of human beings, such as a reduction of arable land, terrible droughts and famine. In order to prevent desertification, people have to plant trees, as the second cartoon shows. The time when people plant trees is the time when desert retreats. People should not cut down trees any more, as is done in the first cartoon, but rather, they should plant more trees, and only in this way can desertification be finally defeated.P23:范文八隐形杀手Directions:A. Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in about 200 words.B. Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET Ⅱ.C. Your essay should meet the requirements below:1. Describe the cartoon and the message conveyed2. Draw a conclusion and give your comment on the cartoon背诵3Pollution is becoming more and more serious all over the world. As is shown in the cartoon, two cars are giving off waste gas and three people are trying to avoid breathing in the poisonous gas by masking their face with their hands. The poisonous gas sent off by factories, domestic appliances and automobiles has made the air unhealthy for people to breathe.(对图画进行描述)There is no denying that automobiles are indications of civilization, progress and development; nevertheless, automobiles cause the serious problem of air pollution. Scientists have warned that unless effective measures are taken, the problem of pollution will eventually get out of hand. Actually, people are showing a real concern over the problem. For example, there is an increasingly loud voice from the public(公众)for firm action against pollution from automobiles.(寓意)Indeed, the earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our descendants. In my opinion, we should work out concrete solutions to the problem of pollution from poisonous gas given off by automobiles. For example, the automobiles should be equippedwith a device which can dispose of waste gas so as to prevent it from polluting air. Only in this way can we really solve the problem of air pollution caused by automobiles.(措施、建议)背诵3P24 范文九产销会Directions:A. Write an essay that conveys the information in the following chart/graph/picture/drawing/cartoon accompanied by your comments.B. Time limit: 40 minutesC. Word limit: no less than 150 wordsD. Your essay should be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET.背诵4This picture shows two people reading the announcement on a billboard, and being shocked at the message. This is because the billboard is advertising a "Sale of Dead Bodies." The cartoon is a criticism of the careless use of simplified characters.Obviously, the advertiser wants to inform people of the sale of something else- not dead bodies! But we don't know what it is, because the three characters which make up the message are used incorrectly. Nowadays too many people not only do not take enough care to write properly, they even invent their own simplified ways of writing.Simplifying the old, complicated characters has been a great benefit, enabling people to learn to read and write quickly. But we should stick to the standard simplified characters, make sure that we use them properly, and definitely not make up our own simplified characters. Otherwise, what was intended to make communication easier could result in making it more difficult.背诵4图画+提纲+场景P7 2001年写作考题评分标准及样卷76. Directions:Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone has his/her own understanding of it.(不是重心, 不能展开)There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper to1) show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the picture below,(描述,寓意)2) give a specific example, and(举例)3) give your suggestion as to the best way to show love. You should write about (建议措施)200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)Sample 1(235词15句)背诵5 (Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest. ) 删除,败笔,机械抄袭命题语言Love is of the utmost importance to us humans. Everybody not only needs love, but also should give others love.As can be seen in the picture, "love is a lamp which is brighter in darker places." This is indeed true. People in darker places need more light than other people. Maybe even a dim light can give them much hope for a better life. Maybe just a thread of light will call forth their strength and courage to help them step out of their difficulties.I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the following examples. (Numerous examples can be given easily, but these will suffice<足够> For instance when someone is starving to death,just a little food and water from you may save his(her) life. Again, when a little girl in a poor rural area drops out of school because of poverty, just a small sum of money from you may support her t o finish school and change her life. In these circumstances you have given love which is like a lamp in a dark place where light is most needed.To sum up, we should offer our help to all the needed. We expect to get love from others and we also give love to others. So when you see someone in difficulty or in distress and in need of help, don't hesitate to give your love to him (her). I believe that the relationship between people will be harmonious and our society will be a better place for us to live in. (20分)背诵5Sample 2背诵6 It is generally believed that love is a hot topic which is most talked about.(意思重复,但是给人的印象很好)= > Love is one of our /the favorite topic today. This is true not only in China but also in other countries. We live in different countries and speak different languages, but love is something common to us all. The picture tell us a simple truth: love is like a lamp which shines brightest in dark places.Love is most valuable when it is most needed. For example, once I saw a foreign lady get lost in the street. She could not speak Chinese and nobody seemed to be able to help her. Though my English is not very good and I am a shy person, I thought she needed help desperately(绝望地). I asked her what she wanted. She told me she lost her way, so I showed her the way to her hotel. It was a small thing but she thanked me very much/a lot because my help was needed greatly. Therefore, my help was like a lamp in a dark place.But how to show love may be different with different people in different countries. This is something we should give more thought to(more thoughts should be given to the way to show love√).I think we all should be like a lamp in a dark place, showing our love, giving our help to others, even to strangers. In this way we can make this world a harmonious and peaceful world.(18分)背诵69个句子242单词加深两点认识:老师写的,全是复杂句子1.文章趋势是复杂句子,基本上拿不到高分。
雅思之父胡敏读故事记单词
读故事记单词(六级)abbreviationn.缩写, 缩写词abidevt. 容忍abide by遵守,履行abnormala.反常的,异常的abolishvt. 废止, 废除(法律、制度、习俗等) abortionn. 流产, 堕胎aboundvi. 1. 大量存在2.(in,with)充满,富于abreastad. 并列,并排keep abreast of与……齐头并进,了解……的最新情况abrupta. 1. 突然的,意外的2.(举止、言谈等)唐突的,鲁莽的abstainvi. 1.弃权2.(from)戒除absurda. 荒谬的,荒唐的abundancen. 大量,丰富,充足in abundance充足,丰富accessoryn. 1.附件,零件,配件2.[常pl.](妇女手提包之类的)装饰品3.同谋,帮凶,包庇犯acclaimvt. 向……欢呼,为……喝彩n. 称赞,欢迎accommodatevt. 1.容纳2.向……提供住处(或膳宿)3.使适应,顺应accomplicen. 共犯,从犯accountablea. 负有责任的acen. 1.(纸牌等中的)幺点,“A”牌2.(网球等比赛中)发球得分3.(在某方面的)佼佼者a. 第一流的,杰出的acoustica. 1.听觉的,声音的2.(乐器)原声的acquaintvt. (with)使认识,使了解,使熟悉acquitvt. 1.宣判……无罪2.(oneself)使(自己)作出某种表现activatevt.使活动起来,使开始起作用Accommodating a PregnancyXiaomin never thought abortion was a big deal. As he became acquainted with American politics , however , he realized you have to work hard to keep abreast of changing value s to truly understand how absurdly controversial this issue has become. He found out from his American friends that opinions are in abundance of how to teach people to be accountable for their actions, how to make people abide by Family Planning laws, and even how to teach people just to abstain from sex. The significance of this issue became abruptly clear when Xiaomin's best friend, Jeff, got his girlfriend pregnant.Jeff was an acclaimed graduate student who was living an abnormal life from other Americans just by attending a Chinese university to get his Ph.D.(Ph.D. is an abbreviation for Doctor of Philosophy, the highest degree available in a university). Jeff was also an ace soccer player and acoustic guitar player. There was also alway an abundance of women around him. This is how he met Sarah.When Sarah became pregnant with Jeff, his friends suddenly treated him as if he was an accessory to murder. Jeff also felt as if he needed to be acquitted of some crime. But he decided in the end that he and his accomplice, Sarah, would keep the baby. According to Jeff and Sarah, the life of their child was more important than their career. Xiaomin was amazed. Keeping the child would abolish any chance of a successful career for Jeff. And in Xiaomin's eyes, one could activate the process for an abortion with a simple visit to the doctor even though there might be lines, three people abreast.But Jeff and Sarah were firm in their decision and Xiaomin had to abide his friends' decision. Life abounded in surprises. Now Jeff and Sarah were leaving school and returning to the United States. They would do everying they could to accommodate themselves to their new situation.选择生孩子小民从来没想过流产是个大事。
新航道胡敏考研短文写作必背句式word精品文档4页
新航道胡敏考研短文写作必背句式(1)图画概述1. It goes without saying that drawings aim at revealinga common and series problem in the world: how toprotect the ocean resources.2. Let’s take a closer look at the two pictures. The one on the left shows the state of the housing before the government implemented its urban renewal project, whereas the one on the right illustrates the situation afterwards.3. As described/portrayed/illustrated/shown in thepicture, many people nowadays like to go to fitness centers to keep their bodies in shape.(2)图表概述1. The graph shows that the incidence of violent crimehas in fact dropped in most US cities over the past decade.2. As we can see from the chart, divorce increasedphenomenally up until about 1990, but has since remained at a fairly constant level.3. The sales figures for A amount to the combined salesfigures for B and C.The profits over the past five years add up to an incredible 1.2 billion dollars.4. The figures fluctuate between 1000 and 1100 unitsper year.The sales are expected to go up and down over the next few months.5. The number of pandas in the reserve suddenly roseto over 200.6. The birth rate decreased steadily after World War2.The number of users rose smoothly throughout the decade.Profits have declined slowly as competitors have taken away market share.7. Computer use is forecast to shoot up in Africa during the coming decade.Housing prices soar when there is a sudden increase in demand.8. There was a slump in production between 1980 and 1985.9. The number of Internet users should climb from 20 million in 2004 to 50 million in 2008.10. The number of road accidents is expected to decrease from 50,000 in 2005 to 40,000 in 2007.Unless the situation changes, there will be a decline from 20 in 2006 to 12 in 2010.11. January will witness the launch of two new products, which should increase revenue dramatically.12. The population will remain stable thanks to the one-child policy.13. The percentage of young people attending university reached a peak of 47% in 2003.14. The number of people who could not read hit its lowest point in 2003.15. The number of Internet users is on the rise/increase at the moment.16. Book sales are on the decline nowadays.(3)图画含义1. What does the author really want to tell us ? In my opinion, his real implication is that everyone has to meet difficulties in their life experiences.2. The purpose of the pictures is to warn us that due attention has to be paid to the decrease of ocean resources.3. The idea conveyed by the cartoon is apparent: the finishing point is just a new starting point.4. I cannot help relating these drawings to reality. They clearly show how human interpersonal relationships have developed.(4)举例论证1. A case in point is Wuhan, which has a pedestrian shopping street.2. Take the recent tsunami for example.3. Take my father as an example.4. Numerous examples can be given easily. But these will suffice.5. Another case in point is the misleading packaging used on many products.6. This is also true in the case of Singapore, which has many restrictions on cars.It is the same with African countries, which have huge debts.The same thing goes for aother cities in China.The same sort of thing happens in developed countries, though not as often.In this case, Shanghai can also serve as a good example.7. Perhaps the most striking instance happened to me when I was a child at primary school.8. The list of such examples can go on and on. Examples like these can form a long list.(5)原因分析1. A number of factors can account for the increase in deaths from heart disease.2. Another important factor is the availability of the Internet.3. Finally, the creation of more jobs is responsible for the change/ increase/ decrease/ growth.4. Why does this phenomenon appear? I think there are several possible reasons for this situation.(6)建议措施1. It is high time that parents, educators and the government made concerted efforts to put an end to this situation.2. The best way to solve this problem I think is to give young people opportunities to do things independently.3. It is imperative that drastic measures should be taken to end poverty worldwide.4. These are not the only three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we need to take strong action to eliminate the use of illegal drugs.5. Only in this way can we overcome this difficulty, and .we will have a bright future.希望以上资料对你有所帮助,附励志名言3条:1、宁可辛苦一阵子,不要苦一辈子。
胡敏雅思作文笔记
一.雅思考试介绍听力:听力教材、英语中级听力阅读:整理难句笔记本——摘抄分析写作:图表作文——柱状图、饼状图、曲线图、表格——上面有百分比、数据、固定 的时间段,善于从现象中发现规律,趋势,提炼,升华,得出结 论——科研能力口语:1.自信:不要太介意语音语调,语法,允许犯错误,关注内容,体态语言, 2.小心陷阱。
要时刻注意沟通,符合生活逻辑。
不要忘记提问卡上的问题逻辑 顺序。
3.争取主动。
4.有备而来。
在很大程度上可以预测。
二:写作总的指导5堂课:1.总的知道 2.写作流程,问题极其对策(审题)——重点第二篇 3.审题,指令,展开。
4.书信作文。
5.图表作文。
本身内容和语言。
最后总的串讲。
范文作用:吸取语言的营养,不能机械背诵。
三:写作总论1.用书面语言2.题目中有单词不认识:它可能是不重要的,或联系上下文可以知道意思,实在看不明白就抓住看得懂的部分做文章。
3.时间概念很重要。
重点在第二篇。
先写第二篇(写对位置)。
4.字数:第一篇至少140字(10到12句话)。
第二篇至少250字(15到18句话)。
5.四大原则:1.图表作文重点在描述,不要随意解释,根据文字可以复原图表。
2.要让考官觉得你的思路非常清晰,要有“路标行标”,承上启下的短语 结构词。
3.中心论点由几个分支论点支持。
并提供证据。
4.7分必须有复杂句子结构(并列句、复合句、非谓语动词形式);用词面 宽一点,尽量不要多次重复。
第一篇用3个复杂结构,第二篇用5—7, 个复杂结构。
四:作业21页task 5 version c (多少个字,多少句话,每一段由几句话组成,找语法错误, 评论结构布局) 74页 task 2 严格按照40分钟写。
2002年3月28日星期四一.针对十个问题的思考1.情感分段和逻辑分段首先晾出观点,罩住一个自然段,2.文章中心思想句是读者体会(中文)还是作者交代(英文)——第一段就说3.引言段(开头第一段)是开门见山(英文)还是层层剥开(中文)议论文不可以太长,第一段只能3——5句话4.段落主题句有(英文)没有(中文)不要把每个主题句分散在不同处,在第一句写5.线性段落(英文)还是螺旋性段落(中文)说出来——为什么这样说6.人证(中文)与法证(英文)强调事实、数据、普通人事件、该领域专家7.一般具体(英文)还是曲折前进(中文)8.段内连贯:过渡词语(英语)还是词义重复(中文)英语:形式语言 中文:意合语言for, obviously, turn out, as a result, and, in the end英语靠过渡词的衔接、词汇的纽带、语法的照应9.段落之间的连贯:形和义10.结尾部分是概括(英文)还是训导(中文)二.点评文章 第一段一定要有整片文章的中心思想句 不要让读者体会,要交代主题 交代的观点就要展开,否则就不要展开 结构上的错误是致命的 不能机械抄袭题目 命题中给的信息应该扩充和延伸 中间几段必须是平行的、均匀的三.范文(p74) 共21个句子:第一段3句、二4、三5、四4、五2、六3 317个词,16个错误(不影响理解) 到第五段的old已经满250个词(3、5、5、3四段可满250句) p 22 version c : 263个词,14个句子:一4/5、二5、三4、四2 23个错误四.审题 p2 task 1: 正规语言、客观描述 p3 范文:第一段:交代三要素——研究时间段、研究具体类别、数据还是百分比 ——把命题的话细节性地拓宽一下 要有比较、运用图表中数据 不要有个人评价 p5 task 3: 雅思大作文五大类中的一类:问题+对策 考过三道:1.谈一谈你们国家的交通问题,分析原因,有什么好的建议,措施 2.现在家庭关系不如以前,什么原因,有什么好的建议 3.新生在上学第一天感到孤独,你怎么看待这一现象,假设你是校 长,你会采取什么措施 例:交通问题: 第一段:主题句,在我的文章中,将分析一下,造成这些交通事 故的几个因素 问题+对策,重心在原因分析 中间:司机忽视交通法规 交通阻塞,不平心静气地解决 行人对交通法规意识淡漠 其它原因…… 最后一段:拿方案(recommendation)first …… secondly…… (建议措 施可以代替结论) 不要每段列原因和对策,要集中,否则很难控制 p5 task 3 小孩看电视benefits——risks——recommendation (将负面和建议衔接) p5 task 4 五大题型之二利与弊 不要用more and more,用increasing(ly) (growing) large numbers ofclearly the benefits are perceived to outweigh the inevitable difficulties 四段:有利——不利——好的发扬,不好的除掉五.命题方式和基本的写作思路 分解动作:1。
胡敏写作
The benefits of computers to modem society far outweigh the disadvantages. Discuss.考生样卷:There have been two opposing views about using computers in modem times. One view states that using computers makes everyday life more easier and they must be wildly used; | Another view, in contrast to the first one, believes that computers has many disadvantages and therefore it should not be used at all. It is a matter of choice, to choose first issue or the second one.Those who support using computers in everyday life usually mention the benefits of computers on the job, or at home or maybe as consumers. For example, on the job, we usually do our work much more faster if we use a computer; at home we can contact library or many other resources area that we need to get information by using computer and also consumers can use computer in order to do their work faster. Therefore it is useful to use computer widely around the world.Another issue proclaims that using computer cause loss of jobs for many people and also losing the privacy of individuals. These machines can do multi-jobs at the same time without any need for people to help. Losing privacy is another main important disadvantage. Because any professional person in using computers may easily reach the personal information of the individuals due to lack of security system.In conclusion it is necessary to use computer and do something about it's disadvantages. I do believe that, as the time passes, the technology of computers can reach to a point toovercomes to it's deficiencies and solve those problems that mentioned so far.修正版There have been two opposing views about using computers in modem times. One view states that using computers makes everyday life much easier and they must be widely used. Another view, in contrast to the first one, believes that computers have many disadvantages and therefore they should not be used at all. It is a matter of choice, to choose the first issue or the second one.Those who support using computers in everyday life usually mention the benefits of computers on the job, or at home or maybe as consumers. For example, on the job, we usually do our work much faster if we use a computer; at home, we can contact libraries or many other resources areas for informationby using computers and also consumers can; use computers in order to do their work faster. Therefore, it is useful to use computers widely around the world.Another issue proclaims that using computers causes loss of jobs for many people and also losing the privacy of individuals. These machines can do multi-jobs at the same time without any need for people to help. Losing privacy is another main important disadvantage. For any professional person in using computers may easily reach the personal information of the individuals due to lack of security system.In conclusion, it is necessary to use computers and do something about their disadvantages. I do believe that, as time passes, the technology of computers can reach a point to overcome their deficiencies and solve those problems mentioned so far.范文解析:这篇文章共15句,263个词,考官评分为8分,其中共有22处语言错误,其中有部分错误重复出现。
IELTS雅思阅读基础班
IELTS雅思阅读基础班(胡敏、张建宇)UNIT ONE RegistrationLesson 1Skill analysisWhen doing the IELTS reading, a lot of examinees complain of the large reading load by citing the statistics that within 60 minutes, they have to read three passages and finish 40 questions attached after the three articles. They are in fact trapped by the designers of the test. It is most difficult for the average Chinese examinees to do intensive reading of the three articles within the given time. The way out is to employ a very important reading skills, which is called fast reading.In general, fast reading is comprised of two sub-reading skills, namely, skimming and scanning. In the following several lessons, we will discuss the proper ways to employ the scanning strategy in IELTS reading. As for the first step, scanning means “look, rather than read”, that is, in order for the examinees to improve their reading speed, they just need to look for the exact words or phrases, without any efforts to understand the meaning in the context. So in the first lesson, the students are trained to “spot out” the proper names appearing in the sentences or paragraphs. Skill training1. As is known to all, New York is one of the biggest financial centers, where you can see one of the three most important stock exchange centers.2. There is a most developed underground system in London, but the traffic there is still terrible.3. Paris is the capital of fashion and art, of which the name came from a prince of the ancient Greek mythology.4. When in Rome, do as the Rome do.5. There are many places of interest in Beijing, such as the Forbidden City, the Great Wall, and the Summer Palace and so on.6. Sparkhill University campus is small in comparison with mostuniversities in Britain. As you enter the main gate, you will see the Student Union Building on the right side. The building next to the Student Union is the Pentagon Canteen, named after its shape. Opposite the Student Union, there is a university bookshop, Boothby’s, where students can buy most of the textbooks used in their courses at discounted prices. If you prefer to borrow books, go to the Wellington Library, which is about 200 meters north of the bookshop. If you get lost, go to the entrance to the Melrose Sports Centre. The library is directly opposite it.7. The admission procedure at Sparkhill University involves two simple steps: application and enrollment. The application procedure is as follows. You must submit a completed Application for Admission together with a non-refundable application fee of 25 pounds to the Admission Officer. Check your Application for Admission carefully to ensure that there are no errors or omissions.The Admission Officer is Mrs. Jean Edwards, who has been dealing with admission affairs over 20 years now. Applications can be sent to her at the university address. Alternatively, you may deliver your application in person to Mrs. Edwards or the Assistant Admissions Officer, Mr. Richard Cox, during office hours,Monday to Friday (9:00 a.m. to12:00 a.m., 2:30 p.m. to 5:30 p.m. ). The Admission Office is located on the ground floor of the Keeling Building. The telephone number for the Admission Office is (0363) 63859367.Domestic students using the Computerized Admission System do not need to send evidence of their applications, but all other applicants must do so. Copies of transcripts, etc., may be sent separately from the Application for Admission, but please ensure that they are clearly marked with your name and address, so that they can be processed quickly. You can call the Admission Office during working hours to check that your documents have arrived.Enrollment takes place on the first day of term. Students who are unable to enroll on the first day of term must contact the Admission Office to make alternative arrangements. Students sign up for courses with the Admission Officer at the faculties where those courses are taught. So, for example, if you wish to sign up for French Literature, you mustgo to the Foreign Language Faculty to enroll. A full list of courses and details of where to enroll will be published on our website at least 10 days before the start of term. Each faculty organizes its own orientation sessions on the second day of term. You should attend the orientation session at the faculty where you are taking most of your courses.。
[名家论坛]“雅思之父”胡敏:用英语点亮人生
10月18日晚,“中国雅思之父”胡敏来到曾宪梓会堂,为大家带来“用英语点亮人生”的演讲。
胡敏是新航道国际教育集团的总裁兼校长,在演讲中他以一名英语老师、一个普通家长、一个管理工作者的身份,与同学们分享他生活中的精彩与感悟。
近三个小时的演讲中,热烈的掌声不时响起。
胡敏认为,成功之道在于三要素:目标、专注和坚持。
只有同时具有明确的目标,专注的精神,并且坚持不懈,才能够走向成功。
没有目标,就没有精彩的大学生活他曾是最年轻的副教授,他曾在国际关系学院“平步青云”,他曾是“新东方”第三大股东……别人眼中,胡敏的经历可谓曲折,而对于他自己,这只是实现不同时期的目标而已。
在上海师范大学工作期间,胡敏拿到了加拿大某大学的录取通知,却得知自己因工龄不够而无法成行。
下着大雨,满腹沮丧的他不小心摔倒,呆坐在泥水中,却明确了自己的下个目标:最快地晋升职称。
这个目标也鞭策着他成为了当时最年轻的副教授。
谈及往事,他笑说,我们遇到事情可以学着“发呆”,想明白该怎么办了,就站起来继续走。
对于一些不满意目前专业的同学,胡敏的建议是既来之,则安之。
在大学里,我们可以学到一些技能和处事方法。
更重要的是,我们要发现自己所热爱的事物,并为此付出努力。
有了目标,大学生活才不会荒废。
他用新航道三个阶段的目标例子告诫大学生,定下目标后不要急于求成,要分阶段完成目标,并学会自我激励。
专注,离成功更近“当你抓住一点时,你会拥有整个世界,因为你专注。
”胡敏如是说。
学习英语需要专注。
当你能将一篇英语文章阅读,模仿,背诵各50遍后,它将会留在你的血液里,无法忘掉。
学好英语的诀窍很简单,不过是重复、模仿、运用,困难的是如何完成这个过程。
“10000小时天才理论”是全球范围流行的成功理论,胡敏鼓励同学们要想掌握好诸如英语等技能,至少应花费2000个小时,要想成为某方面的顶级人物,应专注地投入10000个小时。
无论学英语还是寻求成功,胡敏都认为“专注”必不可少。
胡敏作文讲义完全版[1]
考研作文复习笔录(Charles整理)2001 年英语平均分52.79分。
作文平均11分作文在40-70分之间写作课的学习方法:八字方针:背诵五背原则——精彩词汇(文章中的);精彩句型;文章里精彩的句子;万能的框架;经典范文默写(reading makes a full man ,writing makes an exact man)可以查出一些细小的错误,而这是判卷老师最不可忍受的地方。
互译把精彩的文章翻成中文,过一段时间再复原成中文描红即是模仿,仿效。
通过这四个环节最终产生高分作文。
我们的原则是:坚持一种写法,一写到底,把复杂的问题简单化,一看到就不自觉的想这样写。
写作的三个阶段:牢记、效仿、持之以恒一、考生写作的困境及其对策1、滔滔不绝意识流中文的特点:情感分段;作者想到哪说的哪,观点由读者领会,听弦外之音,语言含蓄而隐晦英文的特点:逻辑分段;思维严谨,观点由作者交待,是什么就是什么,比较直接,直来直去要学会运用英文的思维。
“猴子原则”(只要香蕉):the monkey principle——提纲原则,提纲要你干么你就要干么,只写最需要的,注重命题的提纲还要量化:200个字,即12(最好状态)-15(基础不太好的人)句话。
2、无话可说真难受91-96年的情况:(标题+提纲),社会性的问题,联系生活实际情况,从身边的方方面面中找到话题。
3、真情流露没必要只需要“相关”,只要大方向相同就可以了,不要想的太远考作文不是考的人的思想,而是制造一个机会使你展示自己的书面表达英语的能力,应该把内容方面的构思时间降低到最低限度,而花时间在推敲每一个句子,每一个表达上。
4、英语表达憋得慌达到12分:安全第一:句子结构,语法简单原则:词汇,在点缀一些包装性的结构达到17分以上:(是有得20分的可能性的),要求词汇多变:多使用同义词、近义词,别重复用词;句子结构多变:一定要有复杂的句子结构得分太低的原因是树干出了问题:谓语部分、核心部分有刺眼的错误:1主谓一致2动词时态3定冠词和不定冠词4名词单复数5介词、副词的搭配;6拼写错误不高的原因是树枝的问题:状语从句、定语从句、非谓语从句等绿叶:各种修饰对每一个句子,从写作的角度,从这三个层次上用心体会每一个句子高分的特点:有树干,树干没有被虫咬过,即便是被虫咬,也只是个别地方有刺眼的错误,然后还有树枝,树枝还比较多,还有绿叶的衬托(比如动词和副词的修饰,搭配,effective measures等等),这样就比较精彩了。
新京报——胡敏教授:致全国雅思考生的一封信
新京报——胡敏教授:致全国雅思考生的一封信各位勤劳的“烤鸭”:新年好!去年年底收到不少考生的来信,询问有关2014雅思考试的备考情况,当时没能及时回信,现在给大家统一回复,期望能对你们有所帮助。
今天,我不想和大家去探讨雅思备考的具体方法,我想谈一谈我认为更重要的东西——“雅思精神”,理解这一点,相信你们一定能更有效地备考,不走弯路。
你们都喜欢叫我“胡雅思”,我也很喜欢这个名字,因为我一直认为“雅思”不仅是一个考试,更是一种精神。
很多考生都问过我:“胡老师,你研究雅思那么多年,你认为雅思究竟靠什么成功的?”我的回答是“后动优势,英文是late-mover advantage”。
大多数时候,考生听到这个词会露出不解的神色。
我就接着说:“后动优势就是面对先行者的优势和压力,汲取教训,坚韧不拔,勇于超越。
后动优势的实现需要有改变现状的勇气,科学严谨的规划和脚踏实地的付出,这也正是我理解的‘雅思精神’。
”你们可能不知道,雅思(IELTS)考试一直在不断提升自我、突破现状。
它的前身是ELTS(English Language Testing Service),是最早检测英语交际能力的考试之一。
1987年更名为IELTS(International English Language Testing System)。
1989年开始正式运作,进入中国。
而当时的出国考试被创立于1964年的托福所垄断,那时的雅思在托福面前就是个婴儿。
但是,雅思充分发挥了“后动优势”,不断观察托福的弱点,调整自己。
当时的老托福考试中口语和写作部分是不计入总分的,学生可以选择是否参加。
雅思瞄准这个方向,直接把口语和写作纳入总分评分中,全面测试学生的英语能力,一举赢得了广泛的认可。
此后,2001年7月,口语部分采用新题型。
2005年1月,写作部分推出新的评分标准。
2007年雅思考试引入写作、口语的半分制,更加精确和客观地反映考生英语水平……面对昔日的托福帝国,雅思一直在默默修炼自身,卧薪尝胆,改变现状。
【2019最新】胡敏故事背雅思单词4(advisory-ailment)-word范文模板 (1页)
【2019最新】胡敏故事背雅思单词4(advisory-ailment)-word范文模板本文部分内容来自网络整理,本司不为其真实性负责,如有异议或侵权请及时联系,本司将立即删除!== 本文为word格式,下载后可方便编辑和修改! ==胡敏故事背雅思单词4(advisory-ailment)The price of an affluent societyAn affluent society cannot afford advocates of its own destruction . A society that can destroy itself is an aggravated society suffering from an ailment that needs to be cured .These were the thoughts of the secret agent as he prepared to afflict harm on Hamilton Smith , the leader of a prominent government advisory committee . Mr . Smith was determined to affect the course of history by affirming a new order . He wanted to destroy all that was good and begin again with how he thought a country should run .This agenda was unacceptable to the top - secret agency that really ruled the country . And it was this agency that found an agreeable agent to sacrifice himself for his country by murdering Hamilton Smith in front of the world . The affluence of all would only continue thanks to this agent , even though there would never be any affection for his memory or any desire to be affiliated with his tainted name .As he hung from the bars of the ceiling of the conference hall , the agent was glad he was an aerobics teacher in his spare time . Without all of his physical training this task would have been pure agony . He smiled when he imagined the worlds reaction to his killing Hamilton Smith . There was a certain aesthetic that only a few would appreciate .As he looked down he could see that people were agglomerating around Hamilton Smith already as he was entering the room . This aggregation of people was a problem but there was nothing the agent couldnt deal with . It would make the event even more impressive . When he finally saw Hamiltons head he pulled his gun up to aim . It was show time !。
新东方IELTS_–_写作&口语评分准则 四级备考
I.新东方胡敏–写作评分准则1.任务的完成情况(Task Fulfillment)2.用论据证明论点的能力(Ability to develop an argument supported by evidence)——“任何一个论点都不能只用一个分支观点进行论证。
”——“从多个角度去论证问题,用更多的形式来展示自己的语言能力。
”_???__遗漏了问题的最重要的方面_______! 3.清楚地表达思想的能力(Ability to communicate ideas clearly)——“文章的结构、内容的连贯和衔接手段,结构是否清晰,层次是否分明。
”4.词汇与句子结构的使用范围和准确性(the range and accuracy of your English vocabulary and sentence structures)——“复杂的句子并不等于长句子,复杂句是指句子中采用了动词的非谓语形式,如动名词形式、不定式形式等等,或是句子中有从句。
”——“汉语是一种意合的语言,英语是一种形合的语言。
”“英语不是靠语言内在的意思组合在一起,而是通过一定的语言表现形式来完成组词、造句、成篇的过程,特别强调语法概念和语言形式。
”我们的标准:一,作文写得好不好,包括:1,观点内容的丰富、有力;2,结构逻辑的整齐、严谨二,英语好不好,即,语言表达的准确、多样性,应用自如(英语的LEVEL)II. 雅思考试口语Assessment Standard1, fluency and coherence 2, lexical resource 3, grammatical range and accuracy 4, pronunciatiion Why some people receive low scores on IELTS ORAL?1, not listening carefully 2, lack of smoothness 3, nervousness 4, lack of the right kind of vocabulary 5, inaccurate structures 6, pronunciation problems 7, over-memorised answers8, lack of complexity or depthWhy people score higher on the IELTS ORAL?1, the look and style of confidence 2, smoothness of speech 3, naturalness of the interview4, control(to direct the conversation into areas that are comfortable for you)5, divergent thinking(to use a variety of ways to say about something)请研究以下王长喜范文的不同方面的优点:College Students Owning Mobile Phones①It is true that in the past mobile phones were expensive status symbols of wealthy and important people.②Nowadays, mobile phones have evolved from an isolated luxury of the rich to the new necessity of the common people. ③What impresses us most is that cellular phones have become more and more popular among college students. ④Of course, mobile phones are not only a convenient communication tool but also a fashion symbol for those young students.⑤There is also a growing concern over the widespread use of mobile phones on campus. ⑥The main reason for this is that students’mobile phones frequently ring in classrooms, libraries, and reading-rooms and thus disturb the normal order of study. ⑦What is more, chatting through mobile phones takes up not only a lot of their time but also much money. ⑧As a result, this may in turn have a harmful effect on their study.⑨Considering all these reasons, personally, mobile telecommunications will bring great convenience to students’ life.⑩On the one hand, it provides the quickest way to contact their friends and families. (11) On the other hand, students can always use mobile phones to send and receive short messages and look for information on part-time jobs and employment after graduation (12) In a word, with proper use of mobile phones, students can enjoy a better and more convenient school life.建议四级前备战措施:2,阅读(精读、泛读、快读)、视听说教材绝对跟进;3,大量广泛阅读,加强听力素材量的突破,争取质的飞跃;4,小范围熟悉四级题型,注意备考方向;5,在听、说、读、写、译五项基本技能的提高方面列出自己的学期计划与四级备考计划;6,背诵四级词汇手册,严格遵照记忆规律,快记、强记、高频率记忆,切忌僵持在局部词汇上;7,试写,然后背诵范文20-50篇;研究写作评分标准,将自己的写作与范文进行严格比对,看结构、观点,与语言运用上自己的特点,及时做到取长补短;8,练习听写至少40篇;听写完并进行口语模拟;9,将大学英语精读真正读“精”,读到“透明”——要做到,所有语法、语言现象都能够自己找出来,并解释;做不到的,抓紧时间想办法。
精品演讲辞:以梦为马,坚持者赢(“雅思之父”胡敏)
精品演讲辞:以梦为马,坚持者赢(“雅思之父”胡敏)以梦为马,坚持者赢胡敏人生就是一次次突围,如果我们不能够突围,是因为我们看到了头顶上的天花板。
1983年7月,我从湖南湘潭大学英语专业本科毕业,随后留校当了一名大学英语助教,弹指一挥间我在教育,准确地说在英语教育这个领域,已经打拼了整整三十多年。
最近这些年,年轻的朋友们经常会问我一些问题,当然我在这里说年轻的朋友的时候,并不是说我已经老了,如果我要把额头遮住的话,看上去也就三十岁出头,而且我还跟大家披露一下,我上大学的时候,就是现在这样的时尚大背头发型,只是最近这几年却感觉有点特别,感觉到我的头发好像是在进行一场绝地的逆袭。
好吧,说说年轻朋友问我的一些问题吧。
大家问我说,“胡老师我发现你有一个特点,总是每次一到你的巅峰时刻,你就会毅然决然地选择从头再来,请问你为什么会有这种勇气、这种胆量、这种魄力重新开始?”“胡老师请问为什么您每一次重新出发,总是能够快速前行,绝地逆袭?”我要跟大家分享的是,人生就是一次次突围,如果我们不能够突围,是因为我们看到了头顶上的天花板,我们缺乏想象力,如果我们不能够突围;是因为我们看到了对岸的美丽的风景,但是我们害怕在游过去的路中迷失方向,失去自己。
如果我们不能够突围,很有可能就是因为我们往往生活在别人的眼中,我们不愿意去尝试轰轰烈烈地做自己!大家都知道,三十六岁,按中国的传统是个特别的本命年,老人也会特别嘱咐你注意健康,这一年千万不要轻举妄动,不要瞎折腾。
但是,在我的本命年这一年,也就是2000年,我做出了人生中最大的一个抉择,我决定从体制内走出去到体制外去闯荡。
当时我在国际关系学院当老师,我1994年从湖南湘潭大学调入北京著名外语学府国际关系学院,短短的几年时间里面,迅速地崭露头角脱颖而出,我的学生在国际关系学院最令人瞩目的英语大赛上获得特等奖,科研成果获得北京市哲学社会科学第五届优秀成果奖二等奖,被国家留学基金委公开选拔作为年轻的高级访问学者派往英国朴茨茅斯大学深造,在国际关系学院破格享受五十岁以下教授的待遇,住进了三室一厅,我的爱人在国际关系学院也晋升了英语副教授,对国际关系学院我始终心存感激。
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一.雅思考试介绍听力:听力教材、英语中级听力阅读:整理难句笔记本——摘抄分析写作:图表作文——柱状图、饼状图、曲线图、表格——上面有百分比、数据、固定 的时间段,善于从现象中发现规律,趋势,提炼,升华,得出结 论——科研能力口语:1.自信:不要太介意语音语调,语法,允许犯错误,关注内容,体态语言, 2.小心陷阱。
要时刻注意沟通,符合生活逻辑。
不要忘记提问卡上的问题逻辑 顺序。
3.争取主动。
4.有备而来。
在很大程度上可以预测。
二:写作总的指导5堂课:1.总的知道 2.写作流程,问题极其对策(审题)——重点第二篇 3.审题,指令,展开。
4.书信作文。
5.图表作文。
本身内容和语言。
最后总的串讲。
范文作用:吸取语言的营养,不能机械背诵。
三:写作总论1.用书面语言2.题目中有单词不认识:它可能是不重要的,或联系上下文可以知道意思,实在看不明白就抓住看得懂的部分做文章。
3.时间概念很重要。
重点在第二篇。
先写第二篇(写对位置)。
4.字数:第一篇至少140字(10到12句话)。
第二篇至少250字(15到18句话)。
5.四大原则:1.图表作文重点在描述,不要随意解释,根据文字可以复原图表。
2.要让考官觉得你的思路非常清晰,要有“路标行标”,承上启下的短语 结构词。
3.中心论点由几个分支论点支持。
并提供证据。
4.7分必须有复杂句子结构(并列句、复合句、非谓语动词形式);用词面 宽一点,尽量不要多次重复。
第一篇用3个复杂结构,第二篇用5—7, 个复杂结构。
四:作业21页task 5 version c (多少个字,多少句话,每一段由几句话组成,找语法错误, 评论结构布局) 74页 task 2 严格按照40分钟写。
2002年3月28日星期四一.针对十个问题的思考1.情感分段和逻辑分段首先晾出观点,罩住一个自然段,2.文章中心思想句是读者体会(中文)还是作者交代(英文)——第一段就说3.引言段(开头第一段)是开门见山(英文)还是层层剥开(中文)议论文不可以太长,第一段只能3——5句话4.段落主题句有(英文)没有(中文)不要把每个主题句分散在不同处,在第一句写5.线性段落(英文)还是螺旋性段落(中文)说出来——为什么这样说6.人证(中文)与法证(英文)强调事实、数据、普通人事件、该领域专家7.一般具体(英文)还是曲折前进(中文)8.段内连贯:过渡词语(英语)还是词义重复(中文)英语:形式语言 中文:意合语言for, obviously, turn out, as a result, and, in the end英语靠过渡词的衔接、词汇的纽带、语法的照应9.段落之间的连贯:形和义10.结尾部分是概括(英文)还是训导(中文)二.点评文章 第一段一定要有整片文章的中心思想句 不要让读者体会,要交代主题 交代的观点就要展开,否则就不要展开 结构上的错误是致命的 不能机械抄袭题目 命题中给的信息应该扩充和延伸 中间几段必须是平行的、均匀的三.范文(p74) 共21个句子:第一段3句、二4、三5、四4、五2、六3 317个词,16个错误(不影响理解) 到第五段的old已经满250个词(3、5、5、3四段可满250句) p 22 version c : 263个词,14个句子:一4/5、二5、三4、四2 23个错误四.审题 p2 task 1: 正规语言、客观描述 p3 范文:第一段:交代三要素——研究时间段、研究具体类别、数据还是百分比 ——把命题的话细节性地拓宽一下 要有比较、运用图表中数据 不要有个人评价 p5 task 3: 雅思大作文五大类中的一类:问题+对策 考过三道:1.谈一谈你们国家的交通问题,分析原因,有什么好的建议,措施 2.现在家庭关系不如以前,什么原因,有什么好的建议 3.新生在上学第一天感到孤独,你怎么看待这一现象,假设你是校 长,你会采取什么措施 例:交通问题: 第一段:主题句,在我的文章中,将分析一下,造成这些交通事 故的几个因素 问题+对策,重心在原因分析 中间:司机忽视交通法规 交通阻塞,不平心静气地解决 行人对交通法规意识淡漠 其它原因…… 最后一段:拿方案(recommendation)first …… secondly…… (建议措 施可以代替结论) 不要每段列原因和对策,要集中,否则很难控制 p5 task 3 小孩看电视benefits——risks——recommendation (将负面和建议衔接) p5 task 4 五大题型之二利与弊 不要用more and more,用increasing(ly) (growing) large numbers ofclearly the benefits are perceived to outweigh the inevitable difficulties 四段:有利——不利——好的发扬,不好的除掉五.命题方式和基本的写作思路 分解动作:1。
审题,问题是什么,理清思路。
缩小作文范围 2.读者是谁diagram——大学老师,正式,不能出现“i”,essay——受过 教育的人(在第一段和最后一段可以提到“我认为”,可以举自己的例 子) 3.图表作文写完后,要注意检查,看重要信息是否遗漏。
图表中,重要趋 势的地方标记号。
4. essay, 注意语言,其次是内容。
语言质量的提高,主谓一致、时态、 名词的单复数、(不)定冠词、搭配、拼写……p 8 题型在多大程度 变题目,在多大程度统计学是重要的,变成,统计学是重要的吗? 一些人认为必要……一些人认为没有必要……我自己认为(过去) 现在题型有发展:1。
是必要的 2.在多大程度你同意还是不同意 3.在写的时候,应该忽略多大程度 4.同意或不同意,单方面意见六.作业:(第6课最后)1.登月球,30多年历史,有人认为是浪费时间和金钱,就此进行讨论2.有人认为对待动物应该象对待宠物,另一些人认为动物是衣食来源,你的看法。
2002年4月11日星期四一.考官如何判卷1.看字数2.看第一段,寻找核心句。
语言质量要高。
3.看下面每段第一句话。
(中间段落2——3段,不要超过3段)4.是否有结尾。
5.随意扫描,感觉语言水平。
看是否有承上启下的连接手段。
二.评分标准 交接内容,分支观点和论证。
语法和词汇,句子结构(有复杂句:从句,并列句,非谓 语动词)。
句子结构的开端多样化。
三.第二篇文章每段如何写 第一段(p15):背景,写作意图,总结主要的分支观点(3句话)(p16例) 中间段落(p17):1。
开头是概括性的话 2.隶属的话,解释、例子(高度提炼)、理由、补充性细节(p71、72 例) 3.用自己的知识和经历,内容不需要有独创性,只要和话题相关。
4.内容的连贯性。
(p19词) 5.中间段落要均衡。
结论:一致性感觉(结合具体题型不同会有不同)四.问题加对策(problems + recommendations)(p105) 原因是主体(第一段核心句中体现),建议措施是辅助结果(提及,不要展开)五.讨论(discuss) 有两种写法:1.两面的,支持与反对,写四段。
结论同第三段(第三段反对则结论反 对,连贯性),有折中的可能性也可。
2.一边倒,虽然如何,但是如何,对对方是尊重的。
中间详细叙述自己观 点,结尾简短点。
例:登月球,30多年历史,有人认为宇宙探索是浪费时间和金钱,就此进行讨论 controversyhere, i shall explore the proves and cons of the question.六.同意不同意,在多大程度支持反对 一边倒,表明自己的观点在开头,分点论述,最后一段可以简短点 开头段落:可提及对方观点,做铺垫;写作意图,表明自己观点 中间:叙述三点,或两点(展开要多一点)七.你怎么认为 第一段必须表态,两种观点选择一种,同六一边倒 如果要求讨论并说明你的观点,讨论在前,则讨论后说名你的观点 如果讨论在后,则对两种观点进行讨论八.利与弊1.利与弊是什么(五五开,四段),最后一段讲积极的发挥,不好的去掉。
2.变体,是不是总是积极的呢?70——80%肯定展开,20——30%讲不足,不用展开。
p 87 p89 p91 p93 ——四段经典结构变体,是不是总是积极的呢——前面说积极,最后一段提到不足,但坚信积极多,且 随发展会更多。
九.第一篇文章评分标准 信息转换1.任务的完成状况,信息比语言重要2.内容的连贯和衔接3.词汇和语法(语言)——词汇的有效度(而非难度)2002年4月12日星期五一.图表作文(一). 研究样卷 p61(曲线图) p65(柱状图) ——柱状图最多,然后是曲线、饼状、表格 p66 : 5分,只有年代,无具体数据;长度勉强过关;比较成功地描述了总的趋势;缺 乏复杂句子结构 p67: 6分,描述了总的趋势和比较详细的数据;但信息不够完全;连接词太多,使用 不得体;语法的精确性好;描述总的趋势的语言处理得当;句子结构依然缺乏复 杂性和多样性; p62: 6分,开头比较成功;比较成功的提到数据;简单的对照对比趋势;容易阅读, 但有重复;句子较长但缺乏复杂性; 高分:任务充分完成,信息充分表达,选择显著特征(指趋势)进行拓展(用数据 说话), p63: 7分比较成功处理了单方面的趋势和整个的比较(粗略的);文章缺少开头的扩 展;比较成功地运用了各种衔接手段;句子结构比较复杂,用词面比较宽归纳总结:1.图表作文的内容结构开头,交代三要素(一句话):研究发生的时间段、研究类别、研究数据或百分 比(细化命题)中间,主体段,描述单方面趋势(分支观点),数据分析(论证),抓住主要观 点进行描述,相近的类别归为一类进行描述。
独特的类别要交代,以免 漏掉重要信息;不是每个数据都要写,重要数据一定要提到;不要在中 间段落来回对照对比;结论,简单的总体上的比较;不要涉及个人看法;2.衔接手段自然使用衔接词;3.词汇语法避免词汇重复,句子结构不能太简单,减少语言错误;二.范文 p 62 修正版:(字数大大超过),研究图表语言 p 64 修正版:研究结构和语言 p 66 修正版:提供语言表达(要用第一人称只能用“我们”) p 68 修正版:学习结构和语言 p 70:9分语言平淡,但思路清晰,三.图表语言(p110) 第一段现在时态 中间一般过去时态 时态问题:1。
全文使用一般现在时 2.图表表明用一般现在时,其他使用一般过去时 文章布局、写作技巧、读题时标出重要信息四.其他题型 问问题的题型——猴子原则,要什么给什么。