2016江苏高考英语读写类作文讲评-(讲稿)PPT课件
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(Consequence/Inspiration/Lesson)
2021
4
You may begin like these:
1.The passage/ story is mainly about (talks
about) + a story/ phenomenon
where/that +从句
2. The writer tells/shows/states us that …
3. As is shown in the passage, … 4. What the passage tells/shows/states us
is that … 故事性阅读材料，应该用最简练的语言来说明故
事讲述了什么，还可以讲述该故事给你的启示
(inspiration) 或其中的一个道理(principle)。
2021
5
▪ At least 36 people died in a fatal stampede during New Year celebrations in Shanghai on January 1st, 2015. The tragedy happened at a crowded square in Shபைடு நூலகம்nghai's gleaming Bund area at around 11:35 p.m.
▪ Most of the injured were young people in their twenties, a majority of them women. There were also college students and children. They were sent to several hospitals for treatment, including Changzheng Hospital, the Shanghai No.1 People’s Hospital, Ruijin Hospital and Huangpu District Central Hospital.
public places. And the author analyzed the
causes of the tragedy. （33字）(杨天一)
2021
7
▪ 参考3
▪ What the passage shows us is a stampede which happened in Shanghai’s Bund area several days ago, including the reasons why it happened and the measures authorities should take. (29字) (suggested answer)
2021
1
Learning aims:
▪ To learn how to sum up the main idea of a short passage;
▪ To learn how to polish up your own writings; ▪ To correct some mistakes from your own
control at the scene. (35)（马苏云）
▪ 参考2
▪ A tragedy in which at least 36 people died
during New Year celebrations in Shanghai
raised people’s awareness of the security of
2021
6
▪ 参考1
▪ At least 36 people died in a fatal stampede [stæ m'piːd] during New Year celebrations in Shanghai on January 1st, 2015, caused by lack of awareness over safety risk and loose
writings.
2021
2
写作要求分析
读写任务型写作分为两部分： 第一部分要求用约30个词概括所给短文的要点， 文体主要以议论文，记叙文或说明文为主。
第二部分以约120个词就短文某一主题谈论自己的
经历并发表看法。
此项旨在着重考查学生学习英语的综合能力，特别
是阅读写作以及思维的能力。第一部分要求学生能
▪ Lack of awareness over safety risk behind public gatherings and loose control at the scene contributed to the tragedy. The disorder at the scene also exposed the deficiency in emergency exercise and safety education. A profound lesson should be learned from the incident. For those areas with high safety risks, the authorities should have special emergency response plans and make sufficient analysis and assessment, including the arrangement of police, volunteers and supporting measures.
读懂文章，在读懂的基础上概括文章要点，所以阅
读能力和概括能力要求较高。
2021
3
Technique Guides
▪ 概括叙事性(narrative)文章主要内容一般应包括 四个方面的内容：
1. 什么人？(Who) 2. 发生什么事情？(What happened) 3.目的如何/原因是什么？(Why) 4.结果如何/什么启示或教训？
2021
8
Transitional sentences connecting your experience
2021
4
You may begin like these:
1.The passage/ story is mainly about (talks
about) + a story/ phenomenon
where/that +从句
2. The writer tells/shows/states us that …
3. As is shown in the passage, … 4. What the passage tells/shows/states us
is that … 故事性阅读材料，应该用最简练的语言来说明故
事讲述了什么，还可以讲述该故事给你的启示
(inspiration) 或其中的一个道理(principle)。
2021
5
▪ At least 36 people died in a fatal stampede during New Year celebrations in Shanghai on January 1st, 2015. The tragedy happened at a crowded square in Shபைடு நூலகம்nghai's gleaming Bund area at around 11:35 p.m.
▪ Most of the injured were young people in their twenties, a majority of them women. There were also college students and children. They were sent to several hospitals for treatment, including Changzheng Hospital, the Shanghai No.1 People’s Hospital, Ruijin Hospital and Huangpu District Central Hospital.
public places. And the author analyzed the
causes of the tragedy. （33字）(杨天一)
2021
7
▪ 参考3
▪ What the passage shows us is a stampede which happened in Shanghai’s Bund area several days ago, including the reasons why it happened and the measures authorities should take. (29字) (suggested answer)
2021
1
Learning aims:
▪ To learn how to sum up the main idea of a short passage;
▪ To learn how to polish up your own writings; ▪ To correct some mistakes from your own
control at the scene. (35)（马苏云）
▪ 参考2
▪ A tragedy in which at least 36 people died
during New Year celebrations in Shanghai
raised people’s awareness of the security of
2021
6
▪ 参考1
▪ At least 36 people died in a fatal stampede [stæ m'piːd] during New Year celebrations in Shanghai on January 1st, 2015, caused by lack of awareness over safety risk and loose
writings.
2021
2
写作要求分析
读写任务型写作分为两部分： 第一部分要求用约30个词概括所给短文的要点， 文体主要以议论文，记叙文或说明文为主。
第二部分以约120个词就短文某一主题谈论自己的
经历并发表看法。
此项旨在着重考查学生学习英语的综合能力，特别
是阅读写作以及思维的能力。第一部分要求学生能
▪ Lack of awareness over safety risk behind public gatherings and loose control at the scene contributed to the tragedy. The disorder at the scene also exposed the deficiency in emergency exercise and safety education. A profound lesson should be learned from the incident. For those areas with high safety risks, the authorities should have special emergency response plans and make sufficient analysis and assessment, including the arrangement of police, volunteers and supporting measures.
读懂文章，在读懂的基础上概括文章要点，所以阅
读能力和概括能力要求较高。
2021
3
Technique Guides
▪ 概括叙事性(narrative)文章主要内容一般应包括 四个方面的内容：
1. 什么人？(Who) 2. 发生什么事情？(What happened) 3.目的如何/原因是什么？(Why) 4.结果如何/什么启示或教训？
2021
8
Transitional sentences connecting your experience