高中英语作文写作指导-《如何介绍家乡》

写作指导

如何介绍你的家乡

【写作任务】

假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Johnson 来信希望了解你的家乡的情况。请你根据提示用英语给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：

1. 地理位置和历史文化；

2. 经济和交通状况；

3. 美食和名胜古迹。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【写作指导】

审题定调

本篇习作形式上要求写一封电子邮件介绍自己的家乡，邮件的正文属于说明文，时态应以一般现在时为主。

谋篇布局

电子邮件通常包括以下几个部分：信头、称呼、正文、结束语和签名。就本篇习作而言，正文可分为三部分：

第一部分：引出话题；第二部分：介绍家乡；第三部分：发出邀请。组织语言

1. 开头段：表达问候，说明写信目的。

2. 中间段：介绍地理位置、历史文化、经济和交通状况、美食及名胜古迹。

3.结尾段：邀请朋友前来做客。

◀普通范文▶

Dear Johnson,

How are you? I'm glad to know that you are interested in my hometown. Here, I'd like to tell you something about it.

My hometown, Luoyang City, lies in the west of Henan Province. It has a history of more than 4,000 years and is known as the origin of Chinese civilization. These years, it has made significant economic progress and the transportation is getting much more convenient.

As for snacks, my hometown is famous for its delicious noodles. It

also has many tourist attractions such as Baima Temple and Longmen grottoes.

Welcome to my hometown!

Yours,

Li Hua ◀高级范文▶

Dear Johnson,

How's everything going? Knowing that you want to learn something about my hometown, I'd be honored to introduce it to you.

Located in the west of Henan Province, my hometown, Luoyang City, is now enjoying a booming economy and industry. Modern transportation here allows us to go wherever we want. We have various tasty local snacks like stewed noodles and tofu jelly, which you must try when you come. As a place with a long history, it is famous for many cultural relics, such as Baima Temple and Longmen grottoes.

It would give me great pleasure if you could accept my invitation to visit my hometown.

Yours,

Li Hua