雅思大作文之教育类话题 课件
2024雅思写作IELTSWriting课件
雅思写作是雅思考试中的一部分，主要评估考生的英语写作能力。
Task 1通常要求考生根据所给图表或数据写一篇报告，主要考察考生的数据分析和描述能力；Task 2则要求考生就某一话题发表自己的看法，主要考察考生的议论和表达能力。
雅思写作考试要求考生在限定时间内完成两篇作文，分别是Task 1和Task 2。
雅思写作考试简介0102雅思写作评分标准主要包…任务完成情况、语法和拼写、词汇使用、句子结构和连贯性。
任务完成情况评估考生是否按照题目要求完成了写作任务，是否清晰地回答了题目中的问题。
语法和拼写评估考生的语法和拼写是否正确、准确，是否影响了读者的理解。
词汇使用评估考生使用的词汇是否丰富、准确，是否能够恰当地表达自己的意思。
句子结构和连贯性评估考生的句子结构是否多样、复杂，是否使用了恰当的连接词和过渡语，使文章更加连贯和流畅。
030405雅思写作评分标准03要求考生根据所给的图表或数据写一篇报告，分析数据并得出结论。
常见的图表类型包括柱状图、折线图、饼图等。
图表作文要求考生就某一话题发表自己的看法，并给出理由和证据支持自己的观点。
常见的话题包括教育、环境、科技、社会等。
议论文要求考生在一篇文章中同时完成图表分析和议论两种任务，既需要描述数据又需要发表自己的观点。
这种题型对考生的综合能力要求较高。
混合类型作文雅思写作题型介绍审题与立意仔细阅读题目，理解题意在写作前，务必认真阅读题目，确保完全理解题目的要求和限制。
确定文章主题和观点根据题目要求，明确文章的主题和要表达的观点，确保立意明确、不跑题。
列出要点和论据在审题和立意的基础上，列出文章的主要要点和支持观点的论据，为写作做好准备。
03注意段落内部的逻辑关系在每个段落内部，要注意句子之间的逻辑关系，确保段落内部的连贯性和一致性。
01合理安排段落根据文章的主题和要点，合理安排段落，确保文章结构清晰、层次分明。
02使用合适的转折词和连接词在段落之间和句子之间使用合适的转折词和连接词，使文章更加连贯、流畅。
雅思大作文课件
举例子（exemplification）
• For example, for instance, to illustrate, … Eg. Most parents tend to overuse
punishment in their education of the kids.
For example, only because of the bad performance in primary school, the child of my neighbour was inflicted corporal punishment. In this case, it does nothing but harm to the child’s physical and mental development.
有很扎实的语言功底的考生，写作目标7分或 以上成绩
挑选各种题型的范文简单阅读即可。完 全没必要去研读范文，否则只会误导自己。
• 建议：注重同一话题不同角度的出题 方式，确保自己的展开角度紧扣题目指令。 可精读雅思阅读书籍及国外报刊的议论文， 多积累地道语言和英语国家的文化背景和 实例。考前可尝试实战模拟。
Computer technology：on-line, PC, laptop,broadband Working from home: Fashion designer; freelancer; translator;
journalist;writer; music composer, artists Studying from home on-line course, the disable who are difficult to move;
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雅思写作(二)教育类语料库及范文讲解
语料库一 Education
aptitude (for)/talent (for) n. 天资，禀赋 develop/cultivate/foster/nurture v. 培养 (nature先天 vs. nurture后天) promote the development of 促进……的发展 all-rounded/well-rounded/versatile adj. 全面的
语料库一 Education
aptitude (for)/talent (for) n. 天资，禀赋 develop/cultivate/foster/nurture v. 培养 (nature先天 vs. nurture后天) promote the development of 促进……的发展 all-rounded/well-rounded/versatile adj. 全面的 the awareness/sense of …… 的意识 a (or the) the sense of responsibility (or duty/ obligation) 责任感
课前回顾
二级重点话题：
• 职业发展与生活方式类话题 • 时尚与购物类话题 • 饮食与健康话题 • 艺术与体育类话题 • 抽象类话题
语料库一 Education
the approach/method/fashion of education 教育的方式 1. parenting/upbringing n. 家庭教育
语料库一 Education
aptitude (for)/talent (for) n. 天资，禀赋 develop/cultivate/foster/nurture v. 培养 (nature先天 vs. nurture后天) promote the development of 促进……的发展
雅思写作 教育类.ppt
专业选择类--分析思路
平等 分配
优点：各科均有涉猎（个人） 平衡行业（社会）
缺点：既非通才也非专才（个人） 不符合市场需求（社会）
专业选择类--分析思路
专长 学习
优点：精通知识（个人） 专才培养（社会）
缺点：知识面窄（个人） 行业不平衡（社会）
专业选择类—积累素材
Specialization:Biblioteka 专业选择类真题回顾
Some people think that all students should learn a foreign language . Others think students should not be required to learn a foreign language if they don’t have talent for it.
1.Specialization makes life easier: It allows you to focus on only one new skill rather than two. 2.Specialization can also help you build a reputation as an "expert" in a particular field. 3.Concentration on certain subjects allows students to gain specialized knowledge and skills more efficiently.
教育功能
Nation: 1.Inculcation of social responsibility 2.National integration 3.National development 4.Real education is an essential ingredient for all ages and stages of the life of an individual, society as well as the nation. 5. Education can be a real panacea for all social evils.
雅思写作讲座(新航道)lesson 4.ppt
claim/state champion/welcome
2不同意
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virtually misleading.
This argument is actually destructive.
In fact
harmful.
negative.
I tend to disagree / I am against this view / I am an opponent of the claim that…
Some employers focus on academic qualifications, paying less attention to life experiences and personal qualities. What are causes of this phenomenon? Is this development positive or negative?
Some people think that university students should specialize in one subject, while others think universities should encourage students to learn a range of subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
(2)2007.01.06（新题）
The world of work is changing rapidly, so people cannot always depend on their jobs. What are the reasons of such phenomenon and offer some measures to solve it.
雅思写作大作文话题及模板及范文 精品 PPT课件
simpler way of life will protect the environment, while
others believe that science and technology can solve
environmental problems. Discuss both views and give
也就是说，从平均值看，名校毕业生的 收入就 已经遥 遥领先 好几倍 ，更不 用说那 些高薪 行业的 实际收 入差距 了。 好的大学，不一定保证每一个人都会有 高收入 ，但他 的确能 够为你 提供通 向高收 入的第 一块敲 门砖。 2 开学季前几天，老家的一个远房表兄传 来消息 ，刚满 17岁的 表侄小 立不愿 意再继 续读高 三，准 备辍学 去打工 。 表兄很是着急，把家族里学历比较高的 我也搬 了出来 ，希望 我能劝 劝小立 。 “我虽然这些年到处打工也挣了一些钱 ，但这 样挣钱 太辛苦 了，我 不希望 他重走 我的老 路，” 堂兄苦 口婆心 ，一再 强调， “你一 定要好 好劝劝 他：不 上学以 后没有 出路。 ” 刚开始我和这位00后表侄在微信上聊的 时候， 非常话 不投机 。 我问他：不想读书是不是觉得功课太难 了？ 他答道：也没有多难，就是不想太累了 ，高考 复习很 无聊。 我劝他：再坚持几个月，苦一阵子熬一 熬就过 去了。 他回答得很干脆：太没劲！考上又能怎 么样？ 现在我 家邻居x x大学 毕业上 班了， 挣的还 没我爸 高呢！ 我再问他：你爸爸现在一身伤病常年要 吃药， 你不是 不知道 吧，还 有，你 爸爸为 了多挣 点钱， 一年到 头在外 面跑， 只有过 年才能 回家一 趟，这 些你也 很清楚 吧？ 他无话可说了。 最后，我实在忍不住，不得不扎他一句 ： “如果现在你连高考都比不过别人，凭 什么以 后你能 比别人 成功？ ” 微信那头
雅思大作文教育
In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in today's world?立场：比起全才，培养专业人才应该是大趋势学科数量多1. 有助于学生发现自己的潜力、潜在兴趣学科数量少1. 提高专注度，避免浪费时间在无关学科上In some countries, secondary schools provide a general education across a wide range of subjects. Other countries offer a much narrower range of subjects which are related to a particular career. I think the trends is most students would spend more time on fewer areas to increase the chances of having a successful career.With the more liberal approach in which students are exposed to a wide range of subjects, students often acquire other areas of interest than those they might have had originally. For example, a student who may have originally been interested to study to become a doctor might find that he is more interested in becoming a writer when he is exposed to those subjects in a secondary school that provides a general education. So, those who argue for schools to offer a wider range of subjects will maintain that young students should be exposed to a larger range of subjects before making life decisions regarding the pursuit of a career.On the other hand, the schools offering a narrower and more specific range of subjects will maintain that all of those non-related classes are non-essential, maybe even a waste of time. For example, if a person wants to study to be an accountant, there are fewer benefits of requiring him to take a biology course.Today's world is a specialized world and it is understandable why many secondary schools are now focusing on a narrower path of subjects in training students for future careers and professions. Although some students will benefit from a wider selection of subjects in determining a career path, most students will opt for the fastest and most direct path available.Some people say that art subjects such as painting or drawing should not be made compulsory for high school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?立场：不同意正方：艺术课程可能纯粹是浪费时间反方：1. 总是会有学生对艺术感兴趣2. 上艺术课程也会让学生接触到新领域的学习Some people say that compulsory subjects should not include the ones related to art such as painting or drawing for high school students. My opinion is that learning from art subjects willcertainly benefit students, so there is a need to make these subjects compulsory.Those people who say that art courses should not be compulsory contend that students should not be required to study a subject unless they have an interest in that subject. Those people often classify study of art as a waste of valuable time. They tend to question the benefit of studying a subject that a student never intends to use.The people who speak on behalf of requiring students to study art maintain that a student can benefit from being exposed to new subjects and new areas of study. All people have a practical side and a creative side. Even though a student intends to be an accountant, he might also find that he enjoys more creative activities such as painting, drawing, acting, singing, or dancing. So an effective way is that schools can introduce students to art activities that those students may enjoy, even if those activities are not related to their major course of study.Although some students may object to having to take art courses in which they are not interested, those courses will expose them to different areas of study. Even if the student continues to be less interested in the arts, perhaps they will acquire an appreciation for those who pursue those areas of study. It is important for young students to be well-rounded and well-versed, even if through a compulsory course.The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?立场：团队运动只是一种教授合作的重要性途径，还有其他活动可以起到同样的作用团队运动：1.让小孩认识到，团队的目标重于个人目标其他方式1. 应允许小孩根据自己的兴趣参与相关的活动2. 只要是涉及和别人合作的活动都能起到同等作用。
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❖ A museum is a good place where tourists can appreciate the local and better understand the local history.
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❖ Who is qualified to be the censor remains an issue of controversy.
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❖ 什么是分级制度 ❖ 分级制度指的是某一组织根据一定的原则把
片厂的产品按其内容划分成若干级，给每一 级规定好允许面对的群众群。它没有国家法 律支持，但在行业内部具有约束力。它只对 观众起提示的作用，而把选择权交给了观众， 由观众实行自我保护。
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❖ （三）连接代词who, whom, whose, what, which等wh-词既充当连接词，连接主句和从 句，又在从句中担当一定的语法成分，做主 语、宾语或者是补语。
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❖ 现阶段人们更加关心的是政府能否能够创造 更多的就业机会。
❖ 关心：be concerned with; care for;
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❖ 取得巨大成功的人，毫无例外，都是善于利 用零碎时间的人。
❖ 毫无例外：with no exception ❖ 利用：utilize ❖ 零碎时间：odd moments ❖ 善于：wisely; be good at; be wise in
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雅思大作文之教育类话题 PPT课件
Education is a progressive discovery of our ignorance.
Current education in China
The existing education system, focus on the results, suppress children’s creativity, learning is considered as a tool to cope with exams, marks are the major standard to evaluate students’ capacity
pass down both academic knowledge and practical experience
passionate love and the feeling of a true family Everything they sacrifice is derived from affection
童华老师：雅思大作文解析之教育类
童华老师：雅思大作文解析之教育类教育是每年雅思作文考试的高频考点，包括教育的内容、方法和方式，而且教育类题目本身也和广大考生的日常生活和学习息息相关。
今天，狄邦培训童华老师就教育类的一个题目“学生是否应该学习多个学科”进行思路解析。
题目：Some people believe that students should focus on studying one specialized subject. However, others believe that students should be encouraged to study a range of subjects in addition to studying their major. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.关键词：specialized subject , subjects in addition to studying their major问题方式：论述类题目。
“ 讨论双方观点并给出自己的看法”题型，必须两边讨论，也就是主题部分第一段要讨论“ 为什么只学习自己的专业课程”，第二段讲述“学习其他课程的重要性”，如果自己的观点不单独写一段,也一定要在结论段表明立场。
下面分两边立场我们来讨论一下可以成立的理由支持方：应该专攻一门专业1.It is easier for students to achieve more within a specific area.专攻一个领域，提高学生成功的可能性。
supporting sentence:Tasks are segmented among different divisions of a company, making it necessary for workers to develop in-depth knowledge in a particular area.E.G.For instance, an employee at a company may have a great number of abilities in various areas but not be as competent in a specific area as other workers. Although he possess diverse skills, what the corporation needs is someone with a professional capacity in a specific field.ConclusionIn this case, one should gain in-depth knowledge by centralizing in a particular area.2.Students are more likely to find mutual support among peers with similar interest in a specialized course.大家可以按照第1点的段落拓展方式来继续第2点的内容3. Studying different courses may be a waste of time.反对方：应该学习一系列的学科1.De veloping many skills is helpful in discovering one’s abilities and interesting.2.Knowledge from multiple subjects can prepare students for the rapid changing employment environment in the modern world.3.Various fields are interrelated with one anotherRelated words and useful expressions:保持一分待遇优厚的工作：secure a well-paid job竞争激烈的社会：dog-eat-dog society有前途的候选人：promising candidate各种学科广泛的知识：a wide range of knowledge in various subjects对世界有更广阔的视野：a broader view of the world帮助培养重要的技能：assist you in developing several essential skills名人名言：the more we study the more discover our ignorance——Percy Bysshe Shelley ( English romantic poet) learning never exhausts the mind.——Leonard da vinci【名师简介】童华（Suddenly Tong）：大学期间就兼职培训机构英语教师，大学期间赴美国圣地亚哥州立大学交换学习一年，期间参与大量中美交流活动并担任翻译，回国后在华尔街上海校区担任海外部高级教师，主要教授雅思托福考研英语等培训课程，深受学员喜爱，回成都后，相继担任某培训院校国际部高级教师，成都四中、九中、成外海外部教师。
雅思大作文概述ppt课件
大作文评分标准
结构是否有逻辑性（Structure） a)引言introduction 涵盖主题、写作任务和主题句 b)主体body 包括足够的论点、论据 c)结论conclusion 重申观点、提出建议或者展望未来
大作文评分标准
二、连贯与衔接（Coherence and Cohesion） 文章段与段，句与句之间的衔接 段落之间的“转”“承”“启”“合” a)表开始：first of all, in the first place, at the
very beginning, to begin with, currently, at present, for one thing等 b)表承接：besides, further more, in addition, moreover, what’s more, meanwhile, apart from, as well as, similarly, in the same way
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第二讲 主题、类型与段落结构
雅思大作文主题归类
1 科技发展主题 The development of science 2 政府的职能和职责 About government 常见考点：宏观政府职能？具体职能？ 3 环境污染和保护 The environmental protection 常见考点：狭义环保+广义环保（动物） 4 当代社会问题 People in modern society 常考考点：经济类，工作类，家庭类…
观点（同意 /不ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ意) 第二段：立论理由一（最大/最重要/最显著
的理由） 第三段：立论理由二 （次大的理由） 第四段：驳论段——反方观点+反驳理由 第五段：结论----重申论点+结语(可选)
雅思大作文语料-教育类最新版本
psychological world • 3. 掌握专业知识，可以给学生专业知识上的帮助 • master the knowledge of his profession • help student academically
教师的不足
• 1. 精力和时间有限：班里面学生较多，不能全部都照顾到 • limitted time and energy • 2. 受主观判断影响 • rely on subjective judgement • 3. 对自身教学中的问题缺乏意识 • unaware the problem of teaching
观点提炼练习
• 为何老师对于孩子们的智力开发和社交技能的培养影响深刻
• Granted, some convincing arguments could be easily explored to justify that teachers exert a noticeable effect on students in terms of social skills and intelligence development.
学生的特征
• 5. 心理素质多样 • psychological quality • 6. 容易受到外界的负面信息的诱惑，缺乏一定的分辨是非的能力 • be easily tempted by negative information • lack the ability of distinguishing between right and wrong • 7. 自身成长受到家庭，学校和社会环境的影响 • be influenced by family, school and social environment
雅思大作文题目类型及作文结构(课堂PPT)
Memorization of information by frequent repetition (rote learning) plays a role in most education systems. Do the advantages of this method of learning outweigh its disadvantages? (08.12.06)
opening：Education should be offered to everyone in the society. body: (1)Education could enhance the personality of people, not only the
level of knowlegde. (2)Offering education to young people could reduce the unstable factors of the society. (3)Admittedly, offering education to young people is costly. conclusion
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assignment : 1，复习以上几种文章结构 2，思考混合型题目文章结构
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辩论型题目文章结构分析(三)
Some people believe that a country benefits greatly with a high percentage of young people who go to university, while others argue that it only leads to graduate unemployment. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (08.12.13)
雅思大作文教育类话题解析讲课稿
雅思大作文教育类话题解析讲课稿雅思大作文教育类话题解析雅思大作文教育类话题解析朗阁海外考试研究中心雅思写作的话题重复度非常高，主要是在于写作话题总共也只有10大类，而对于任何一个类型的考题都是从其中的母题演变过来的，所以写作上面的思路基本上大同小异，没什么特别大的区别。
在这十大类的雅思写作考题之中，最常见的考题属于教育类话题，下文中就带领大家纵览教育类话题中的六大母题以及其演变过来的子题。
只要将本文中的话题练到，教育类话题一定攻无不克战无不胜，在真正的考场上正常发挥，拿到高分自然非常简单。
下面整理了关于教育的雅思写作话题的分类和相关延伸的话题，非常详细，也非常有实际的借鉴意义。
下面大家一起来看看详细内容吧。
一、教育应该包括哪些内容？母题：It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfill both these functions?翻译：教育对于个人的发展以及社会的完善非常重要。
教育应该包括什么内容去实现这两个目的。
提示：可以从教育所提供的科目来写，首先是专业学科（语言、数学等）——这可以培养学生的专业技能以及形成整套的专业理论知识；其次是道德法律教育——这可以教导学生辨明是非以及不做违反法律的行为，成为合格的公民；再次艺术以及体育等科目——可以提供学生放松、锻炼身体的机会；再次是选修科目——可以允许学生发展自己的兴趣爱好；最后是学校有很多的课后活动例如社团和比赛之类——可以培养竞争合作精神、交流表达能力甚至领导团队的能力。
所以围绕这个话题，可以将上文中出现的点分开，到底属于培养个人的还是健全社会的。
对于个人而言，学习可以培养学生的专业技能，有利于将来就业、可以允许学生发展自己的兴趣爱好。
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? certain values such as, obedience, discipline, perseverance, respect and punctuality. Schools also teach us conformity; it encourages us to be good and to be a law abiding citizen.
教育的功能 the functions of education
? Home education: what do parents teach us? ? School education: what do schools teach us?
Home education: what do parents teach us?
Report的结构
? 分四段。 ? 第一段：引出来题，只是report文章不需要有
什么观点存在，只要说明现象就可以。 ? 第二段，就要写引起这件事的reason. ? 第三段：effect了。就顺着题目的问法一段段
写。 ? 第四段：也就是how to solve it.
Argumentation 议论文的两种结构
of sth? 5.What are the benefits and drawbacks of sth? 6.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
一边倒
? 在一边倒结构中,建议分五段. 第一段:因为在题目中一定会有提出两方观点,所以在 第一段的时候也要亮出双方观点(万万不可抄写题目, 要把题目的意思换个句式说法) 同时亮出你是同意或 者不同意,或者是你的观点是怎样.通常第一段会有固 定的模式,这样看你自己的句套是怎样设计. 第二段:要讲你为什么支持你的这个观点.通常在这一 段中会有5句话.第1句就是你为什么同意你这个观点 的第一个理由(IDEA),第2句到第4句便是你这个IDEA 的说明句.第5句便为这一小段的小总结. 第三段:写你支持你这个观点的第二个IDEA,写法同第 二段. 第四段:写你支持你这个观点的第三个IDEA,写法同第 二段. 第五段:便是文章的结尾段.这一段中要再一次明确你 的观点.
? 一边倒结构PK对称结构 ? 辩论型题目的提问方式，一般有如下几种： 1.(To what extent) do you agree or disagree? 2.What is your opinion? 3.What do you think? 4.What are the advantages and disadvantages
? 提示：本题围绕教育的两大功能来展开（个人与社 会），准备好这篇文章，即可应付教育类话题中的最 大分支—教育的功能，做到以不变应万变。对于社会 角度，可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性(social mobility)、维护社会稳定这几个方面来展开，对于个 人，可以写改变思维模式、有利于就业和便利生活来 写。
教育应该包括哪些内容？
? 母题：It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfill both these functions? (050312)
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? 雅思的文章，它绝对不是简单的语言的堆砌。 文章，它承载的是思路，承载的是思想。所以 在写文章之前，不要一味的去堆砌语言，应该 考虑一下你的想法，你的中心思想，你的逻辑 思维。
? If you do not think clearly, you can not write clearly.
and the consciousness of responsibility. ? parents' love is an incentive for us to study, work
and overcome the troubles in life.
School education: what do schools teach us?
? pass down both academic knowledge and practical experience
? passionate love and the feeling of a true family ? Everything they sacrifice is derived from affection
怎么复习
? 1.要了解雅思考题都会有怎样的问法,熟练掌握 各ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้问法所使用的结构。
? 2.要自己想许多的IDEA。由上述段落写法时, 大家可见通常一篇文章中都需要三个IDEA。 所以没有IDEA怎么才能支持你自己的观点呢? 文章会没有说服力的。
? 3.是要练好基本功,基本功怎么练？
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对称式结构
? 第一段:用你的句套啦.但是记住,这里不用写观 点了.只是对题目分析就OK了. 第二段:可以写你支持作者观点的IDEA.写法同 上. 第三段:便为反对观点段. 第四段便是一个总结了.
? “对称式结构”双方都说，“一边倒结构”只 说一方。
? “对称式结构”比“一边倒结构”可说的内容 多，更容易写够字数。
雅思大作文之教育类话题
PPT 课件
Lecture 7
教育话题
雅思大作文之教育类话题
PPT 课件
Report
? It is said that people's life now is becoming more and more stressful. What are the causes and how to solve it? 或者遇到这样的 字样what is the reason, what is the affect ,what should our government do?